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Rita - reach for the runway

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S o r d a
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S o r d a
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年3月2日 at 0:51:56

Artist: Rita
Title: reach for the runway
Source: Smile Cubic! -Suiheisen made Nan Mile? After & Another Stories-
Tags: abhar jojo nymph kitsuneko sorda yukinohara collab collaboration
BPM: 172
Filesize: 16073kb
Play Time: 04:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Blue Sky (3.07 stars, 257 notes)
  2. Runway (4.99 stars, 661 notes)
  3. White Wings (4.76 stars, 560 notes)
Download: Rita - reach for the runway
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#18
水平線まで何マイル？ Fan Disk OP
水平線まで何マイル？ OP here~
Blue Sky: by S o r d a
White Wings: by Kitsuneko
Runway: Collab with baka JoJo and moe Nymph
thanks awesome SB made by yukinohara
Last edited by S o r d a , edited 180 times in total.
SapphireGhost
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Alright, it seems you just needed to add some metronome resets / time signature fixes. Try these red sections and let me know if it works.

Download: Rita - reach for the runway (S o r d a) [red sections].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a
thanks for timing setup Sapphire
mjw5150
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mjw5150
☆~
fight~
S o r d a
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S o r d a
wow thanks mjw>A</
JoJo
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JoJo
Done~ \o/

*I have set 0.5x timing sections, so be careful when integrate the diff~

Download: Rita - reach for the runway (S o r d a) [满满的节操].osu
Nymph
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Nymph
=3=

Download: Rita - reach for the runway (S o r d a) [=3=].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a
thanks both mapper!
finished All diff>A</

Ready to mod~
but not yet done SB
still wip~ SB finished move to pending
Dont mind modder~
Melophobia
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Melophobia
[General]
AudioLeadIn: 2000

[Runway]
volume should be more intoned

00:53:540 (2) - sounds weird to me, it's perfectly off o.o
00:59:645 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:10:459 - it's a good place to put a stream~
01:13:598 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:16:389 (1) - ^
01:19:354 (1) - ^
01:20:575 (4) - finish
02:03:656 - add a note
02:24:411 (1) - add finish at the beginning
02:38:364 (1) - ^
02:41:678 (2,3,1) - pretty confusing pattern
spacing of (2,3) is too huge but (3,1) is a bit close
03:51:968 (7) - add a finish and newcombo here
03:52:142 (1) - remove newcombo
04:10:107 (4) - add finish at the beginning
04:19:177 (1,2,3) - it would be better to use same appearance i think
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301501
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
水平線まで何マイル？
/modreq via in-game

[General]
  1. soft-slidertick2.wav -> 今はsildertickの無音はいずれにせよunrankableだったような…
    MAT/BATらの意見が一人ひとり違うみたいだけど
  2. 処々ちょっとwhistleが小さくて聞こえにくいような…
    これを入れて試してみてください～　ちょっと音量上げました
[Blue sky]
  1. んー ARが少し早いような… AR -1で良いと思います
  2. 00:11:332 (1) - ちょっとリズムがつかみにくいと感じたので下のようにするとどうでしょうか
    また、後方にclapをつけても良いと思います
  3. 00:12:552 (3) - 前方にclap
  4. 00:19:704 (4) - 後方にwhistle?
  5. 00:21:797 (6) - ^
  6. 00:33:657 (1) - 前方にwhistle?
  7. 00:36:448 (3) - add whistle?
  8. 00:53:540 (4) - 00:54:063まで伸ばした方が初心者にとってもリズム取りやすいかと
  9. 01:11:854 (3,4) - スペーシング少し狭い
  10. 01:25:982 (5,6) - うーむ…下のように変えるとどうでしょうか
  11. 01:31:563 - ふむむ、素直にここからspinnerが良いと思うんですが…
  12. 01:43:773 (3) - 後方にwhistle?
  13. 00:47:611~00:52:494 - この辺りの音つけが02:12:377~02:17:260と統一してないんですがこれはわざと？
  14. 02:18:306 (2) - 後方にfinish
  15. 02:21:097 (6) - ^
  16. 02:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - うむむ、一番下のdiffで初心者優先するならこれはちょっと難しいかなあ
    spinnerに変えたり、02:22:492 (2,3)と02:23:364 (5,6)をスライダーに変えるのも手だと思います
  17. 02:50:748 (6) - 01:25:982 (5,6)と同じような意見です
  18. 03:25:109 (4) - 後方にclap?
  19. 03:42:375 (1) - ^
  20. 03:43:072 (2) - (3)消して03:43:595まで伸ばした方がいいかと、あと前方にclap
  21. 04:04:177 (6,7) - スペーシング少し狭い
[White Wings]
本当に素晴らしいHard? diffだと思います！指摘すべき点が見つかりません！
以下はただの個人的意見なのでそう思わないならズバッと無視してください(´・ω・`)
  1. 01:31:738 (4) - ここは上に上がる方が好きです
    SPOILER
  2. 02:56:504 (4) - ここもこうした方が流れ的にいいと私は思います
    SPOILER
  3. 03:21:795 (1) - x:62 y:327 に移動した方が03:21:271 (2,3,1)の流れがより直線的になると思うんですがどうでしょう
  4. 03:27:899 (3) - スピードテェンジに気づかせやすくする為にnew combo入れたほうがいいかもです
[Runway]
  1. 00:11:856 (2) - add clap on the silder begining?
  2. 00:13:251 (6) - add clap on the silder ending?
  3. 00:13:949 (1) - add whistle on the silder begining?
  4. 00:44:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - use this? I made more clear star shape
    SPOILER
    [HitObjects]
    256,277,44471,5,0
    293,304,44645,1,0
    279,348,44820,1,0
    231,348,44994,1,0
    217,304,45169,1,0
  5. 01:07:843 - add a note?
  6. 01:29:645 (7) - new combo due to speed change?
  7. 01:44:122 (1) - add whistle on the silder ending
  8. 02:35:050 (1) - remove new combo?
  9. 02:38:364 (1) - add finish on the silder begining?
  10. 02:44:818 (4) - remove and adding a note(stacking on (3)) in 02:44:992 would be better I think. (like this↓)
    SPOILER
  11. 03:06:446 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, looking ugly... Can you make symmentry like this↓?
    SPOILER
  12. 03:38:189 (6,7,8,9,10) - Hmm, I prefer to copy&paste 03:37:143 (1,2,3,4,5) and Ctrl+H
    And 03:38:189 (1) - new combo? (like this↓)
    SPOILER
  13. 04:17:781 (4,1) - Umm, the spacing is close.
  14. 04:21:095 - add a note
コラボの方は自信ないので下手な英語で書きましたw
わからなかったら画像見ればわかると思うけど…orz
ふぁいんてぃんヾ(●´▽｀●)ﾉ彡

EDIT
[Runway]
00:38:890 (2) - Unfortunately, this silder shape is not acceptable anymore. = unrankable (Garven said)
You should change the shape... orz
S o r d a
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S o r d a
ほとんど直しました！ノート追加系はスコアが超えちゃうので少しだけ追加しましたっ
ありがとう☆ ばんびさんめろちゃん！
Nymph
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=3=thanks! fixed stuff here~

Download: Rita - reach for the runway (S o r d a) [Runway].osu
JoJo
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JoJo
Fixed some thanks minna!

banvi wrote:

EDIT
[Runway]
00:38:890 (2) - Unfortunately, this silder shape is not acceptable anymore. = unrankable (Garven said)
You should change the shape... orz
Hmm, about this I think it's much more better than a slowdown timing section since it's clear and visible. So I'd keep this for now. @_@

Download: Rita - reach for the runway (S o r d a) [Runway].osu
Patchouli
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Patchouli
なつかしい曲だ
Kitsuneko
709 posts
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Kitsuneko

banvi wrote:

[White Wings]
本当に素晴らしいHard? diffだと思います！指摘すべき点が見つかりません！
以下はただの個人的意見なのでそう思わないならズバッと無視してください(´・ω・`)
  1. 01:31:738 (4) - ここは上に上がる方が好きです k
    SPOILER
  2. 02:56:504 (4) - ここもこうした方が流れ的にいいと私は思います k
    SPOILER
  3. 03:21:795 (1) - x:62 y:327 に移動した方が03:21:271 (2,3,1)の流れがより直線的になると思うんですがどうでしょう k
  4. 03:27:899 (3) - スピードテェンジに気づかせやすくする為にnew combo入れたほうがいいかもです NC多くなるのであわせて調整いれました
全部採用しました！
ばんびさんありがとう～

Download: Rita - reach for the runway (S o r d a) [White Wings].osu
Sure
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Sure
Sorry for late >_<


[General]
There are many unsanpped green lines. At least you have to resnap kiai times.


[Runway]
I suggest AR 8. Because BPM and SV are not so high.
00:34:007 (2) - unexpected overlapping. Maybe symmetry is better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301765
02:40:283 (1) - Remove NC
02:42:202 (1) - ^
03:42:375 (7) - NC
03:43:072 (1) - Remove NC
03:44:119 (2) - NC
03:51:968 (7,1) - They don't fit music. Because there is no beat on long white tick. http://puu.sh/rKp2
03:54:758 (4,5,1) - ^


[White Wings]
Flawless 8-)


[Blue Sky]
HP -1?
00:00:170 - Add offset : BPM 172
00:44:471 (4,5) - How about this shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301797
00:52:843 (1,2,3) - Bind them to a slider?
01:31:563 (1) - Start from 01:31:738 / End at 01:34:005
01:46:912 (6) - I suggest unstacking. Stacking a note under slider's end is not recommended in easiest diff.
03:42:026 (6) - ^
03:48:654 (1) - Start from 03:49:177

You have inconsist rhythm in chorus parts. They seem not vocal nor instrument.
Some examples,
01:02:610 (4) - Start point of the slider
01:05:401 (1) - ^
01:13:773 (1) - ^
01:16:563 (1) - ^
01:20:749 (5) - ^
Starting on white tick isn't always fit music.
If you keep this way by reason of easiest diff, you're probably wrong.
Try to remap kiai parts.


Star anyway, and good luck ;)
JoJo
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Joined July 2010
JoJo

ykcarrot wrote:

[Runway]
00:34:007 (2) - unexpected overlapping. Maybe symmetry is better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301765 //Hmmm...Sorry I prefer my arrangement.
03:51:968 (7,1) - They don't fit music. Because there is no beat on long white tick. http://puu.sh/rKp2 //Fixed.
03:54:758 (4,5,1) - ^ //Not an issue here I guess...It's fine because there is an accent
Thanks! > <

Download: Rita - reach for the runway (S o r d a) [Runway].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a

banvi wrote:

EDIT
[Runway]
00:38:890 (2) - Unfortunately, this silder shape is not acceptable anymore. = unrankable (Garven said)
You should change the shape... orz
17:34 <SapphireGhost> : Hm, Garven's pretty reliable
17:35 <SapphireGhost> : Well, I think it's okay, though
I think no problem slider~
keep it now
also thanks star and mod yk!

>>もやし
うむうむ！良い曲ー
Kitsuneko
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Kitsuneko
resnapped green lines

Download: Rita - reach for the runway (S o r d a) [White Wings].osu
SakiK
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SakiK
時間かかり過ぎそうなので1diffのみで・・・遅くなって申し訳ないです

modしたのがちょっと前なので、一応確認しましたがかぶってるとこあったらすみません！



[Blue Sky]

fix SliderMultiplier at 1.00
00:07:146 (3) - looks good there
SPOILER
00:06:797 (2) - x207y106
00:07:146 (3) - x95y205

00:12:378 (2) - clap
00:47:611 (1) - x:128 y:44
00:50:750 (4) - a little overlap?
00:59:122 (6) - clap
01:05:401 (1) - clap at slider ends
02:41:329 (1) - Anti clockwise10°
03:43:072 (2) - more fix it (but its 1/4beat snap...)
SPOILER
04:17:258 (1,2,3) - try this
SPOILER

すっごいいい譜面&曲！fight~!
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