Suzully wrote:

Sadly can't download a normal diff

raririn wrote:

高三很辛苦的样子呢o.o潇子加油啦~

a3272509123 wrote:

潇子加油www

wmfchris wrote:

Since this is a single issue and popped then fixed by the mapper itself...rebubbled?

If I shouldn't be able rebub this one just tell me.

1. 01:59:658 (4) - This looks being hidden by (3). Try to avoid overlapping.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:21:984 (x) - It's better to add a note here too. Reading the timing of 00:22:333 (1) seems a bit difficult on normal diff.
2. 01:15:007 (x) - ^ Same here.
3. 01:15:356 (2) - Add a finish to the start.
4. 01:16:577 (5) - Add a clap to the end too.
5. 02:53:902 (1) - Add a new combo.
6. 03:29:309 (1) - Finish~
7. 03:29:833 (2,3,4) - Use the same clap pattern as 01:15:879 (3,4,5,6).

1. 01:41:868 (4) - Add a new combo.
2. 01:55:647 (6,7) - Speaking of the clap pattern, remove (6)'s one and add to (7)'s end. I feel it fits the music more.
3. 02:11:693 (T) - Why not use custom-soft hitsound here?
4. 02:16:228 (5,6,7,1) - These spacings are a bit too close. Seems not so good.
5. 03:04:716 (2,1) - At the return of slider, use default soft hitsound instead of custom one? Your custom soft-hitnormal.wav doesn't fit well imo. (if you change the hitsound, don't forget to remove claps)

1. 00:53:030 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to use anti-jump rather than perfect stacking? Just to me but imo the gameplay will become better.
2. 01:15:356 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^ Same here.
3. 02:34:891 (1,2,3,4) - I felt something wrong. Following the music is better than following 1/2-beat here.
   
4. 03:20:937 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make a bit wider jump and change (4)'s shape? The current pattern looks like crowded since the space between (1,2) is closer than (4,5).
   
   SPOILER

   

Suzully wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:21:984 (x) - It's better to add a note here too. Reading the timing of 00:22:333 (1) seems a bit difficult on normal diff. Change (1) into a slider
2. 01:15:007 (x) - ^ Same here. ^
3. 01:15:356 (2) - Add a finish to the start. Added, but kept clap
4. 03:29:309 (1) - Finish~ ^

[Collab Hard]

1. 02:11:693 (T) - Why not use custom-soft hitsound here? Change the timing line into S:C1, maybe?
2. 03:04:716 (2,1) - At the return of slider, use default soft hitsound instead of custom one? Your custom soft-hitnormal.wav doesn't fit well imo. (if you change the hitsound, don't forget to remove claps) Hmm, sorry no change here. I think soft-hitwhistle2.wav is good here~ and others the same.元の音楽と違うかも、でもその効果は良いと思います（多分、英語も日本語も私の気分を届けない。。（；＿；）

[Collab Insane]

1. 01:15:356 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^ Same here. Sorry, no change. Vocal doesn't fit that anti-jump well, I think. (For example, 1-2-3 go up, but 4 go down)
2. 02:34:891 (1,2,3,4) - I felt something wrong. Following the music is better than following 1/2-beat here.　 Well, this is a big change. I hope I did it well

Call me after fix. I'll get a bubble back.

1. According a new rule (you can find here: t/81828/start=0) Miku/Gumi/Rin and others can not be used as artist anymore now. Ginsaku should go as artist and "Kagamine Rin" has to be added in the diff's tags instead. Moreover you can use "Vocaloid" as source.
2. Add "Collab" and "Collaboration" to the tags

1. 00:53:030 (4) - New combo according the new vocal and rhythm
2. 01:15:356 (3) - ^
3. 01:40:472 (1) - Distance snap. This spacing could confuse novice players because it should be further from 01:38:379 (3)
4. 02:08:379 (5,1) - It'd be better to remove new combo from (5) adding it on (1) instead
5. 02:11:170 (2) - New combo, same of 00:53:030 (4)
6. 02:32:100 (3) - There shouldn't be a finish here. You didn't use it on 01:13:961 (2)
7. 02:34:891 (5) - New combo? Because you changed the hitsound settings
8. 02:55:821 (1) - Remove finish from the slider's end. It needs to be used just on the head
9. 03:20:937 (3) - I guess you forgot finish here
10. 03:26:519 (4,1) - You should remove new combo from (4) adding it on (1)
11. 03:29:309 (2) - You already know, new combo here too for the same reason I wrote above

1. Maybe it's just me but I think AR-1 would fit better, 5 is too high IMO
2. 01:15:356 (3) - New combo
3. 01:57:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This could confuse players being a Normal diff. Instead to use circle-1/2 slider just use an 1/2 slider with repeat, like you did for the other parts
4. 02:07:681 (3) - Finish on the slider's tail?
5. 02:32:101 (3) - New combo, same of 01:15:356 (3)

1. 00:12:391 (3) - This slider is so ugly. Why don't you make something like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   344,288,12391,2,0,B|252:328|168:280,1,160

2. 00:19:542 (3) - The reverse arrow is covered by 00:18:495 (4)'s hitburst. It's unrankable and you must fix it
3. 00:21:635 (3) - This circle flows better during gameplay if moved to x:352 y:144
4. 00:29:833 (7) - Considering the spacing you are using here this slider should be moved further from 00:29:309 (6)
5. 00:31:926 (5) - Use 20% volume. 5% is unrankable.
6. 00:46:751 (3) - This reverse arrow is readable but to avoid any kind of problem I suggest you to don't overlap it with (1)'s hitburst for the same reason I said for 00:19:542 (3)
7. 00:49:542 (3) - ^

1. 03:01:054 (6,7) - Why custom hitsounds? It confuses the players

1. 02:02:798 - What about to add a kat? In addition to this I'd suggest you to make a stream from 02:01:402 to 02:02:449 instead to use a slider so that you don't have problem to add kat on 02:02:798
2. 02:06:286 (9) - kat and add a don on 02:06:635 to fit the vocal

Chewin wrote:

Hi eikkaleyd, random mod.

[General]

1. According a new rule (you can find here: t/81828/start=0) Miku/Gumi/Rin and others can not be used as artist anymore now. Ginsaku should go as artist and "Kagamine Rin" has to be added in the diff's tags instead. Moreover you can use "Vocaloid" as source.
2. Add "Collab" and "Collaboration" to the tags

All done

[Easy]

1. 01:40:472 (1) - Distance snap. This spacing could confuse novice players because it should be further from 01:38:379 (3)
   Since they're 2 seconds far, I think it won't confuse novice players. they will look at approach circle instead of looking at the distance between these two
   
2. 02:32:100 (3) - There shouldn't be a finish here. You didn't use it on 01:13:961 (2)
   Because the music is different here, I hear a finish here but not 01:13:961

[Normal]

1. 01:57:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This could confuse players being a Normal diff. Instead to use circle-1/2 slider just use an 1/2 slider with repeat, like you did for the other parts
   Changed into repeats

[Collab Hard]

1. 00:19:542 (3) - The reverse arrow is covered by 00:18:495 (4)'s hitburst. It's unrankable and you must fix it
   Fixed, not so sure about the way I used
2. 00:21:635 (3) - This circle flows better during gameplay if moved to x:352 y:144
   Sorry I think it's fine now, if moved to 352,144, I think the flow is nearly same, but the distance is larger
3. 00:29:833 (7) - Considering the spacing you are using here this slider should be moved further from 00:29:309 (6)
   If OK I decided to use a repeat instead

[Collab Insane]

1. 03:01:054 (6,7) - Why custom hitsounds? It confuses the players
   Removed the timing lines

[Taiko]

1. 02:02:798 - What about to add a kat? In addition to this I'd suggest you to make a stream from 02:01:402 to 02:02:449 instead to use a slider so that you don't have problem to add kat on 02:02:798
   Tried

Popped due to unrankable issues.

Chewin wrote:

[Normal]

01:50:065 (4) - Silenced slider. Use 20% volume here

[Collab Insane]

01:50:065 (5) - Same