[Ryuu] wrote:

hello ~
from our queue.

[Normal]

00:10:587 (5) - maybe this? Fixed
01:11:181 (5) - maybe a little lift?No

[Hard]

00:17:121 (8) - maybe this? Okay.I changed the shape of slider


another good map today ._.
i can't find anything else.
so star and good luck ~

Thanks for your mod and star

176,216,10587,2,0,B|88:252|92:256|8:292,2,180,8|2|8

hillaryzx wrote:

Yo, mod here >>>

General

Nothing, skip this~

Normal

00:52:171(2) - just extend this slider by 1 tick and make it a repeating slider. delete (3) because it overlap with new slider and add a circle at 53:359. Here the pic if its done:

Okay. changed.

Hard

00:10:587(3) - I change the shape of the slider... if you want change here the code. change it via notepad...

176,216,10587,2,0,B|88:252|92:256|8:292,2,180,8|2|8

No , but thanks for your suggestion


My mod short T.T
I don't if this be helpful....
and so, I'll take my leave...

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.

[General]
CLEAR!

[Normal]
00:19:498 (4) - Ctrl+J? i think the path is a lot easier for players if you flip this slider.OK
00:23:062 (2) - add a whistle with the finish at the beginning to keep the consistency. OK
00:27:220 (7) - why is there a clap at the sliderbody. if you have no reason, remove it because it doesn't do anything as it makes no sound. so keep the clap at the beginning, and same as above. add a whistle with the finiah to keep the consistency.Fixed
00:37:913 (1) - make a 4 or 5 point slider out of this curved slider. i think it looks a lot nicer and it flows nicely.
00:40:290 (3) - ^ Ok
00:45:191 (1) - i suggest that you space out this spinner because since this is the easiest diff, this might surprise players. I removed (3) and move the spinner to00:45:042
01:09:696 (3) - remove the clap because it sounds bad and it doesn't fit with this part. Fixed
01:09:993 (4) - if you follow the suggestion above, add a clap at the end with the finish to keep the consistency.
Fixed
[Hard]
00:19:498 (4) - this barely looks like a wave slider. space out the 2nd and 3rd point so that it'll show that it's a wave slider.
00:24:844 (2) - ^
do the same thing for the other sliders. Fixed some of them(Because I like wave slider :O)
00:48:606 (1,2,3) - hmm since DN has this same combo as this, replace this for a repeat slider to make it a bit easier for players. I think its ok. so no changed.

[D.N.Angel]
No problems here

I guess that's it. Star and GL

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

Megurine Luka wrote:

/Queue

我满眼都是最后罗森的广告233 lol

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

[General]

*BG感觉人物都变形了，换一张吧O_O上pixiv或者帖吧什么的地方看看，虽然是新番不过好图应该不少O_O 好 我可能找個時間把圖修一下
*虽然没什么差别，不过letterbox可以关掉 ok,關了

[Normal]

00:15:339 (3) - 这种类似有slidertick的地方可以考虑加上slidertick弥补clap OK
00:31:973 (5,6) - ↑ 1 grid nazi了不好意思 改了
00:37:022 (5) - +clap No
00:53:359 (2) - ^ No
01:13:557 (2) - 这个NC，前面那个去掉NC我是跟著歌詞走的,暫時不改

[Hard]

00:21:577 (2) - 离5稍微远一点，可以把整个后面的五角星选中顺时针旋转下 我覺得這形狀還ok
00:28:408 (1) - 头上考虑加个fin什么的 上個slider的尾已經上了finish了 我這就不加了
00:32:270 (7,8) - +clap No
00:37:022 (3) - 首尾+clap 只在尾上clap
01:18:903 (1) - 这里的fin感觉略伪和...考虑换成whistle？好~改了



嗯以上ovo~~

Megurine Luka wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

我怎么感觉最开始的时候clap的声音略响了点，考虑降降音量？
00:20:983 (2,3,4) - 不跟前面一样放在slider包围1的位置么O_O 是好主意，不過為了flow好點保持原樣就夠了 ~
00:32:270 (9) - 尾巴加whistle?
00:36:131 (5) - 头上加whistle
00:36:725 (7) - ^
00:54:250 (1) - 这里用whistle比较伪和O_O
其他fixed
kiai部分的whistle下的有点乱O_O不大建议采取连打时候用太鼓音，因为没有规律听上去很伪和~ OTZ

嗯以上ovo~~

BeatofIke wrote:

I swear. Someone could SS this map on Insane Difficulty with Double Time+Hidden+Flashlight if this map ever gets ranked.

BeatofIke wrote:

Ah i see. Nvm then. I'm modding your map now.

EDIT: Finished! (As requested from my modding queue). Didn't really find anything tbh.

[General]
-None

[Normal]
-HP Drain (-1) for better difficulty spread.Okay.

[Hard]
-None

[D.N.Angel]
-FLAWLESS!

Very good map overall. Definitely should call a MAT for a bubble. Thanks:)
STAR~

ertyukjh010 wrote:

我下載下來只有D.N.Angel難度，Normal和Hard我都需要從論壇下載....檢查一下是不是出了甚麼錯

怎麼感覺是DNA您害人重下一次

ts8zs wrote:

ertyukjh010 wrote:

我下載下來只有D.N.Angel難度，Normal和Hard我都需要從論壇下載....檢查一下是不是出了甚麼錯

怎麼感覺是DNA您害人重下一次

这是因为后来没有fullsumbit吧……其实用edit 另存成难度名再更新也可以哦

TorNis wrote:

Hi, this is TorNis's Live Stream Queue

Your map is being modding live right now: http://www.twitch.tv/tornis
I will be editing in real time this post until mod is finished.

[Normal]
01:11:775 (6) - currently reverse making your cursor to go down, which is opposite of the next object. For Easy/Normal players it could be a little be too tricky. Okay. Fixed
01:24:993 (6) - overlaying, suggestion: move circle to the left. Fixed

[Hard]
01:01:082 (6) - suggestion: replace it with 2 circles and put on 01:01:379 NC Ok. I changed the Rhythm to follow the lyrics
Nicely polished, couldn't find any flaws.:D

Mod is completed.

TorNis wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

00:59:299 (3,4) - unfitting whistles(especially because of your custom ones), remove it or replace with clap, if you done that on purpose and like it, then ignore this line. Note that in Hard diff you aren't using triple whistle like here.
01:01:379 (1,2) - ^
01:15:933 (2,3) - ^
01:13:260 (1,2,3) - ^, especially this one

h k s wrote:

from my queue

Normal

00:24:547 (3,4,5,6) - suggestion http://puu.sh/sPHm x.
00:32:567 (7) - add clap? Ok
00:52:171 (1) - remove clap x
01:12:963 (1) - finish?why?Fixed, I remove finish and add a clap
01:15:933 (7) - remove clap x
01:22:765 (4) - removeFixed

Hard

00:24:844 (2) - remove 2nd and 3rd slider pointFixed
00:37:022 (3) - spacingFixed
01:23:953 (9,1,2,3,4) - ^Its 2.0x jump, so no changed.

I like this song.
and I highly respect D.N.Angel....star~!

1. Fine

1. 00:37:913 (2) - beginning finish better to me

1. 00:13:557 (1) - beginning soft-custom whistle
2. 00:18:012 (9) - end ^
3. 00:18:903 (2) - clap

1. 01:21:874 (3) - end 01:22:468 fits music?

S o r d a wrote:

request from queue

[overall]:

1. Fine

[Hard]:

1. 00:13:557 (1) - beginning soft-custom whistle Fixed
2. 00:18:012 (9) - end ^Fixed
3. 00:18:903 (2) - clap

[Normal]:

1. 01:21:874 (3) - end 01:22:468 fits music? Okay. And I changed the shape of the slider.

Overall nice map!
Good Luck Ranked soon!Thanks

S o r d a wrote:

[D.N.Angel]:

1. 00:37:913 (2) - beginning finish better to me fixed

h k s wrote:

D.N.Angel

00:24:398 (4) - remove no,it follows the music
00:31:824 (6) - ^ [/color]
01:26:626 (4) - spinner I'll consider that,but I still keep my mind

I like this song.
and I highly respect D.N.Angel....star~! thanks ~ ><

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
说实在的我想知道为啥这么慢的歌放了俩H还不放E
我本來是想說一個Normal一個Hard
然後請DNA幫我做一個Insane GD 但是他說這首做不了太難 於是就有了兩個Hard lol
删soft-hitclap1.wav Okay
[Normal]
00:10:290 (4) - clap
00:12:072 (6) - 尾clap.我觉得这种背景音乐很强的鼓声直接加clap就行了。没必要条规矩的下13，反而不舒服

[Hard]
00:32:567 (8) - 至少加个clap
00:38:062 (3) - 头默认finsih ↑我全加上了



[D.N.A]
其实前面那段是大鼓和军鼓啊。。虽然拍上没问题但是感觉着音效还是不算太合
00:24:547 (5) - 这里这note感觉不太好
00:46:824 (2,3,4) - clap其实在前两个note上。。
00:47:418 (5) - 来个默认的finish
00:51:577 (1) - 这clap略突然而且感觉比较不适合
00:54:547 (3) - 这个同上，要是用13的话就13都加上。这样听着不舒服
01:26:626 (4) - 音乐里没太明显的尾部whistle。。静音吧
音效想法不错，但是有点杂。。hitclap声音吵，需要降音量


你的音效我没咋具体说。。因为感觉和我想的差了不少，具体形式可以参照DNA的，不过用法上稍微可以加强点。

後面有一些我也改了 感謝Mod

No_Gu wrote:

[D.N.A]
其实前面那段是大鼓和军鼓啊。。虽然拍上没问题但是感觉着音效还是不算太合 orz...
00:24:547 (5) - 这里这note感觉不太好 其實我覺得(4)刪掉就沒問題了
00:46:824 (2,3,4) - clap其实在前两个note上。。 fixed
00:47:418 (5) - 来个默认的finish added
00:51:577 (1) - 这clap略突然而且感觉比较不适合 fixed
00:54:547 (3) - 这个同上，要是用13的话就13都加上。这样听着不舒服 fixed
01:26:626 (4) - 音乐里没太明显的尾部whistle。。静音吧 到這裡音樂還沒完全消失呢，嘛，現在降到30%
音效想法不错，但是有点杂。。hitclap声音吵，需要降音量 這堆綠線太坑爹我不幹orz


你的音效我没咋具体说。。因为感觉和我想的差了不少，具体形式可以参照DNA的，不过用法上稍微可以加强点。

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Normal]
00:23:062 (2) - Remove finish and add whistle for head and tail slider


[Hard]
00:20:686 (1) - Remove finish and add whistle for start slider
00:42:072 (6) - ^


That's all I got

All Fixed

Thank you <3

1. I think you need to change the .mp3 file, because it seems you cut a part at the beginning, infact I heard this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OkPwRCEREs4 and I'm right. Your .mp3 file hasn't got some seconds o:
2. Offset 2.270 with your mp3 file

1. 00:41:775 (4) - Mh.. Remove this circle, because you did an 1/1 here 00:37:913 (1,2) and since this is the easiest diff of your song it's very hard to read for beginners.. Don't forget to fix the spacing, you could select 00:42:072 (1,2,3,4) and move them to x420 y220
2. 00:42:072 (1) - Start it with clap, because you used clap at 00:39:696 (2), so for consistency..
3. I really like this map, you did a good job here!

1. 00:32:864 (9) - Since you overlapped the previous 2 circles, this circle seems so far from them, and it's hard to read with this low ar.. You should approach it to them or you should move the 00:32:567 (8) creating a triangle or something
2. 01:24:844 (3) - x256 y72 for symmetry

1. AR +1

Chewin wrote:

Hai, from my queue ~

General

1. I think you need to change the .mp3 file, because it seems you cut a part at the beginning, infact I heard this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OkPwRCEREs4 and I'm right. Your .mp3 file hasn't got some seconds o:
2. Offset 2.270 with your mp3 file

The song you posted is full version, not TV Size. They are different at the beginning.
TV Size Version:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eqwOxBCQLdo

Normal

1. 00:41:775 (4) - Mh.. Remove this circle, because you did an 1/1 here 00:37:913 (1,2) and since this is the easiest diff of your song it's very hard to read for beginners.. Don't forget to fix the spacing, you could select 00:42:072 (1,2,3,4) and move them to x420 y220 Okay. Fixed
2. 00:42:072 (1) - Start it with clap, because you used clap at 00:39:696 (2), so for consistency.. Fixed
3. I really like this map, you did a good job here!:D

Hard

1. 00:32:864 (9) - Since you overlapped the previous 2 circles, this circle seems so far from them, and it's hard to read with this low ar.. You should approach it to them or you should move the 00:32:567 (8) creating a triangle or something hmm.. I think it is fine now.(not too far)
2. 01:24:844 (3) - x256 y72 for symmetry

Fixed



This is all, good luck :3

Chewin wrote:

D.N.Angel

1. AR +1

-Gamu- wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

●00:31:676 (5) - Move (x:288 y:216). fixed

-Gamu- wrote:

hi >w<

sorry for the huge delay..

[General]

●Song Setup > Advanced > Stack Leniency: 5 ⇒ 7 change please. Revert to the default. Fixed

[Normal]

●AR-1 ?
●00:53:359 (2,3,4) - Slider change. http://puu.sh/upstFixed
●01:20:686 (4) - Move (x:268 y:200). To form a diamond shape.Fixed

[Hard]

●00:49:498 (3) - Move (x:368 y:68). Will be cleanFixed

very song and mapset!!

that's all \></

DarknessAngel wrote:

-Gamu- wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

●00:31:676 (5) - Move (x:288 y:216). fixed

Thanks MOD ~


To Em :
我把clap的音量降了一些
把原本的取代掉後full upload吧 ~

話說General不知是啥(懶的研究..)，如果要改就連我的順便

Sync wrote:

[Hard]
01:25:438 (1) - Instead of ending it with a boring spinner, why don't you end it like D.N.Angel? No~

[Normal]
00:22:171 (7) - Since you're following the vocal-line, add a hit circle here. It feels empty. Yeah, you definitely need to add a hit circle here. :< Ok.

00:23:062 (2) - This slider does not follow the music at all. Shorten it by 50% like the slider at 00:24:844 (4) so that it stresses some of the beats. Ok. and I re-mapped this part.


Looks like that is it! Pretty solid. Not much more to be done. Good luck with getting it ranked .Hope I helped.

Sync wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:30:191 (1) - Seeing as combos are based off the music, it'd make more sense to remove the combo here and add a new one at 00:30:785 (8) as it is on a downbeat; a transition in the music; and a new stanza. //k

00:34:943 (1) - Same thing as above. Remove the combo here and add it at 00:35:537 (8). //k

00:52:765 (2) - Seeing as this is a hard difficulty, I was a bit disappointed you didn't follow the vocal line here -- it would have made for great fun. If you do decide you want to do this, remove this slide; add a 3/4ths slider at 00:52:616 (2); and add a hit circle at 00:53:359 (3). If you're having trouble understanding, click here for a timeline reference. This is a suggestion, not an error. Do as you wish. //well,I want to keep this pattern

01:11:181 (2,3) - Since you've done it twice before now, It'd be nice to see this follow the vocal line precisely once again. Move (3) back one-tick and extend it's length by one-tick. I feel that by doing this it's giving the player a more intuitive map to play. Click here for a timeline reference. //hmm...I think mine is better

Ch1ka wrote:

Hi! Sorry for delay.

[General]
Seems fine.

[Normal]
00:28:408 (1) - Before that slider whistle was on upbeat-notes, but after that - on downbeats. Why? Because of Melody is changing
01:07:616 (1) - Why NC? If you leave it here, add NC 01:15:933 (7) - ? Okay.Fixed!
Actually good Normal.

[Hard]
00:28:408 (1) - Again, before that slider whistle was (blah-blah-blah)
00:36:131 (1) - Why NC? Okay.I changed NC to 00:36:428


That's all, good map and good song.

Makar8000 wrote:

Hello, from my queue

[General]

1. How about a 500ms Audio Lead-in? I know you don't have the start mapped, but it sounds very weird for the song to start the second you select the map from the song selection menu.

Okay. 500ms Audio Lead-in is better. Fixed.

[Normal]

1. Nice Normal~

:D

[Hard]

1. 00:36:131 (7,1) - How about fixing this spacing? Because of the NC it really seems like this is a 1/1 break here, but it isn't.

I remove NC.



I really like this mapset, so nothing to point out really. No kudosu please, and have a star~
I changed something so I think I should give you kudosu .
It doesn't matter:P