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Horinaka Yuki - Hi, Gene! ~Ya! Oh! Yeah!~

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我是被勒令来帮忙找BG的




这动画只看过一集:<~尺寸没调整过:<先看看吧~

如果要第二张右下角的LOGO我可以帮你P掉

EDIT: 好,顺便来打个酱油


[General]

letterbox可以去掉,不过也无所谓
加上妮姆芙的前ID

[Easy]

00:34:860 (4) - 调整一下形状?红点可以往左两格,第四个白点向左一格,最后一个白点向上一点
00:42:888 (1) - del NC,后面的加NC?总之就是换一下,后面也是
02:21:339 (2) - 调整下形状?有点歪感觉
02:31:057 (1) - 放在前一个slider的正上方?去掉NC?
03:00:212 (4) - 有点叠了,稍微移动一下?
03:16:691 (3,4) - 尝试一下

感觉不必太在意中轴线

[Normal]

00:53:029 (1) - 开头加个fin啥的?
01:40:353 (1) - 开头加个fin
01:47:113 (1,2) - 加fin
01:50:494 (1,2) - 加fin
01:53:874 (1) - 首尾加fin
01:57:254 (1) - 开头fin
03:30:846 (4) - 考虑加个whistle?

[Hard]

00:15:212 (3) - 这个note的音效也和后面一个一样处理吧,有啪啪的感觉【丢
01:06:127 (7) - 离前面的稍微远一点?
02:05:494 (6) - NC?14C好长啊
02:49:649 (7) - ^
03:30:846 (6) - whistle?

没了,妮姆芙神麻婆

[Insane]

找不出啥:<王长喜鬼畜
就最后03:30:846 (6) - 来个whistle?
Nymph
fixed some patterns and changed some hitsounds, thanks modding!

Download: Horinaka Yuki - Hi, Gene! ~Yaa!Oh!Yeah!~ (wcx19911123) [Nymph's Hard].osu
No_Gu
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
updated
thanks your modding :3
Siesta-
Star ~ 0.0
x847606653
顶破
Shionji Yuuko
鬼畜图 支持~
NoHitter
From my mod queue.

[General]
The title should be Hi, Gene! ~Yaa! Oh! Yeah!~. Add spaces after the first two exclamation points.

[Gu's Easy]
02:58:522 (2,4) - (nazi) Make the tips of these two not overlap?
03:28:733 (1) - The start of this combo can throw off beginners since there's a strong beat at 03:28:522.

[Normal]
Fine

[Nymph's Hard]
00:04:226 (1) - IMO this NC is unneeded.
00:05:916 (1) - Same as above.

[Insane]
00:01:268 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This plays awkwardly. The music suggests that you should make them into two triples, (2,3,4) (5,6,7) instead of (2,3) (4,5,6,7).
00:04:860 () - Add a note here. It fits better with the music and plays awkwardly as is without the note.
00:05:705 () - Same as above.
00:08:029 () - Same as above. This time it has lyrics on it too.
00:42:043 (5,6) - The two sliders here play awkwardly as well. (5) should have less one repeat, and (6) should be moved backwards then have one repeat added.
00:43:311 (2) - Might be confusing as the spacing for a 1/2 spaced note in the timeline is basically the same. I've placed similar sliders in the spoilerbox.
00:46:691 (2) - Same as above.
00:50:071 (2) - Same as above.
01:19:649 (4) - Same as above.
01:21:339 (5) - Same as above.
01:47:536 (2) - Same as above.
01:50:916 (2) - Same as above.
02:24:719 (4) - Same as above.
02:55:142 (4) - Same as above.
01:46:268 (5,6) - Same as 00:42:043 (5,6).
Topic Starter
wcx19911123

NoHitter wrote:

From my mod queue.

[General]
The title should be Hi, Gene! ~Yaa! Oh! Yeah!~. Add spaces after the first two exclamation points.
fixed

[Nymph's Hard]
00:04:226 (1) - IMO this NC is unneeded.
fixed
00:05:916 (1) - Same as above.
fixed

[Insane]
00:01:268 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This plays awkwardly. The music suggests that you should make them into two triples, (2,3,4) (5,6,7) instead of (2,3) (4,5,6,7).
in fact, this is following the music, not drums or lyric. this rhyme is easy to read/play imo
00:04:860 () - Add a note here. It fits better with the music and plays awkwardly as is without the note.
I follow drums here, not lyric. not hard to play, too
00:05:705 () - Same as above. same as ^
00:08:029 () - Same as above. This time it has lyrics on it too. same as ^
00:42:043 (5,6) - The two sliders here play awkwardly as well. (5) should have less one repeat, and (6) should be moved backwards then have one repeat added.
I follow music here, not downbeat. it's not hard to read or play imo
00:43:311 (2) - Might be confusing as the spacing for a 1/2 spaced note in the timeline is basically the same. I've placed similar sliders in the spoilerbox.
in fact this kind of patterns is very easy to read and play at all. and the sliders look pretty beautiful, so I'd like to keep this kind of patterns
00:46:691 (2) - Same as above.
00:50:071 (2) - Same as above.
01:19:649 (4) - Same as above.
01:21:339 (5) - Same as above.
01:47:536 (2) - Same as above.
01:50:916 (2) - Same as above.
02:24:719 (4) - Same as above.
02:55:142 (4) - Same as above.
01:46:268 (5,6) - Same as 00:42:043 (5,6).
same as before
updated
thanks for modding >3<
No_Gu

NoHitter wrote:

From my mod queue.

[General]
The title should be Hi, Gene! ~Yaa! Oh! Yeah!~. Add spaces after the first two exclamation points.
download this album.here is booklet.I think no space for these..what's more..when i see these lyrics...may be ya not yaa?...
[Gu's Easy]
02:58:522 (2,4) - (nazi) Make the tips of these two not overlap? OK
03:28:733 (1) - The start of this combo can throw off beginners since there's a strong beat at 03:28:522.don't know how to change this.and the sound of downbeat is odd and they are 1/2 notes so I think no problem
Download: Horinaka Yuki - Hi, Gene! ~Yaa! Oh! Yeah!~ (wcx19911123) [Gu's Easy].osu
kioukiou
Map沒什麼可以挑剔的,但timing對我來說有點太早。
建議+10ms.
如果覺得這timing不適合就請無視這篇吧。
climbb65588
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

(I agree with QQ姐 offset + 10 o.o)

[Taiko]
- Remove letterbox in breaks

00:02:335 - feel like a d work well here (as a response the the d K before, and it's odd to put 2-beats separated k all over there.
00:28:109 - k
01:16:701 - vocal sounds high in both white ticks but nothing in the middle, kdddk/kkddk might be better
01:39:940 - as an echo k sounds better here

整體不錯 就差了點節操
Snowy Dream
;)
Mod request from Snowy Dream's 薯片
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[妮姆芙's Hard]
01:01:480 (6) - newcombo
01:15:001 (7) - newcombo
01:22:818 (1,2,3) - 这三角略感突兀 影响全图审美
02:13:522 (1,2,3) - 总感觉这也是呢.. 反正不要用这种三角比较好0.0 用那些比较钝的三角更好些
02:16:691 (3) - .-.总感觉这里不这样好 算了无视这个


[Insane]
00:06:444 (3) - 动起来....
00:35:282 (5) - newcombo
00:37:078 (5) - 这里三连不好听
00:42:043 (5) - 你这里跳的下个太蛋疼了=-= nuke
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好 神图
Wonderful Mapset
climbb65588

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

(I agree with QQ姐 offset + 10 o.o)

[Taiko]
- Remove letterbox in breaks

00:02:335 - feel like a d work well here (as a response the the d K before, and it's odd to put 2-beats separated k all over there.
Fixed.
00:28:109 - k
Fixed.
01:16:701 - vocal sounds high in both white ticks but nothing in the middle, kdddk/kkddk might be better
I'm following the drums so dkkkd may better (?
01:39:940 - as an echo k sounds better here
Fixed.

整體不錯 就差了點節操
Fixed Ver. Here.

Download: Horinaka Yuki - Hi, Gene! ~Ya! Oh! Yeah!~ (wcx19911123) [Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
I think my offset is better, and all diffs updated
Miya
Hi wcx :3

General
  1. Nothing i guess.


Gu's Easy
  1. 00:15:846 (1) - I don't recommend placing a circle on center of spinner like this since it will be stacked with the spinner hitburst. It can quite confusing for beginer.
  2. 00:44:367 (2) - Switching into red tick like this is bad, since in previous note you always place note on white tick. Me too surprise when passing this section since i thought the slider will be on 00:44:156-. I suggest you make the rythim like this since it's easier to play and more readable > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331776 ( Don't follow the pattern, i didn't fix the pattern and the spacing)
  3. 00:47:747 (2) - ^
  4. 00:51:127 (2) - ^
  5. 00:54:508 (1,1) - I recommend make these spinner into 1 spinner. Since 00:58:099 (1) - is quite short for beginner. This will cause beginner to surprise and miss the spinner. And it's way too close to next note. Follow normal spinner example for better gameplay
  6. 01:48:592 (2) - Just like 00:44:367 (2) -
  7. 01:51:973 (2) - ^
  8. 01:55:353 (2) - ^
  9. 01:58:733 (1,1) - Same as 00:54:508 (1,1) -
  10. 02:04:015 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner again.
  11. 02:31:057 (1) - Make this symetrical with 02:30:212 (4) - for better flow?
  12. 02:42:677 (1,1) - Same case as 00:54:508 (1,1) -
  13. 02:47:958 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner.
  14. 03:28:522 (1) - I recommend you to move this slider 1/2 backward but make it end on 03:29:156- . Just like case above it's easier to play and more readable to beginner.


Normal
  1. I can't find any mistake in this diff. You play the polarity very well, easy to read, and enjoyable. Good :3


Nymph's Hard
  1. 00:15:212 (3) - I would love to put new combo on here to make the combo consistant with previous combo.


Insane
  1. 01:51:339 (3,4) - Orz, i almost miss at this note because i thoght it was 1/2 like your previous stacked note. I recommend you to add a note here 01:51:550- to make it more easier to read.


That's all. Very nice map wcx :oops:
Call me for recheck, i love the song :3
Don't forget mine >.<
No_Gu

Miya wrote:

Gu's Easy
  1. 00:15:846 (1) - I don't recommend placing a circle on center of spinner like this since it will be stacked with the spinner hitburst. It can quite confusing for beginer.ehhh.I don't know what to say.some people can say : this note is hidden by the spinner hitburst.if I move it.some people will say:this note is too far from the spinner. then.
  2. 00:44:367 (2) - Switching into red tick like this is bad, since in previous note you always place note on white tick. Me too surprise when passing this section since i thought the slider will be on 00:44:156-. I suggest you make the rythim like this since it's easier to play and more readable > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331776 ( Don't follow the pattern, i didn't fix the pattern and the spacing)low AR with suitable distance.fine for me
  3. 00:47:747 (2) - ^
  4. 00:51:127 (2) - ^same
  5. 00:54:508 (1,1) - I recommend make these spinner into 1 spinner. Since 00:58:099 (1) - is quite short for beginner. This will cause beginner to surprise and miss the spinner. And it's way too close to next note. Follow normal spinner example for better gameplaytwo spinners follow diffrent things.1st follows vocal and 2nd follows instrument.and both are long enough,so.
  6. 01:48:592 (2) - Just like 00:44:367 (2) - same
  7. 01:51:973 (2) - ^
  8. 01:55:353 (2) - ^
  9. 01:58:733 (1,1) - Same as 00:54:508 (1,1) -same
  10. 02:04:015 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner again.again
  11. 02:31:057 (1) - Make this symetrical with 02:30:212 (4) - for better flow?not a big problem
  12. 02:42:677 (1,1) - Same case as 00:54:508 (1,1) -same
  13. 02:47:958 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner.same
  14. 03:28:522 (1) - I recommend you to move this slider 1/2 backward but make it end on 03:29:156- . Just like case above it's easier to play and more readable to beginner.I think 1/2 is more diffcult
no change..since wcx thinks my diff is good enough and I also don't want to change anything...
Miya
:|

Stacking is really bad in easiest diff. And putting note in the middle of spinner is same with stacking.

For that switch to red tick suggestion, i higly suggest it, since it can be more readable. This is easy diff, don't put unnecesary challange to the player. It maybe boring to you, but not for the beginner that learning to play this game.

Oh yes, about that spinner. I think you really should follow normal example. The distance with next note is really close. Just 1/1, and normal have larger distance.
And that short spinner is too quick for beginner.

If you leave it just like that, sorry i can't approve the easiest diff then. ;_;
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
since Nymph is kinda busy this weekend, so I'll look at the modding on this diff instead

Miya wrote:

Nymph's Hard
  1. 00:15:212 (3) - I would love to put new combo on here to make the combo consistant with previous combo.
    umm, I think this is fine, the newcombo alway start at white long line(like 00:19:226 - and 00:22:606 - )


Insane
  1. 01:51:339 (3,4) - Orz, i almost miss at this note because i thoght it was 1/2 like your previous stacked note. I recommend you to add a note here 01:51:550- to make it more easier to read.
    oh, I think this is fine, I'm following vocal here. besides this, you can read the approach circles and know there're only 2 notes easily
thanks for modding, and I'll discuss with no_gu what to do with the Easy diff
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