1. Nothing i guess.

1. 00:15:846 (1) - I don't recommend placing a circle on center of spinner like this since it will be stacked with the spinner hitburst. It can quite confusing for beginer.
2. 00:44:367 (2) - Switching into red tick like this is bad, since in previous note you always place note on white tick. Me too surprise when passing this section since i thought the slider will be on 00:44:156-. I suggest you make the rythim like this since it's easier to play and more readable > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331776 ( Don't follow the pattern, i didn't fix the pattern and the spacing)
3. 00:47:747 (2) - ^
4. 00:51:127 (2) - ^
5. 00:54:508 (1,1) - I recommend make these spinner into 1 spinner. Since 00:58:099 (1) - is quite short for beginner. This will cause beginner to surprise and miss the spinner. And it's way too close to next note. Follow normal spinner example for better gameplay
6. 01:48:592 (2) - Just like 00:44:367 (2) -
7. 01:51:973 (2) - ^
8. 01:55:353 (2) - ^
9. 01:58:733 (1,1) - Same as 00:54:508 (1,1) -
10. 02:04:015 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner again.
11. 02:31:057 (1) - Make this symetrical with 02:30:212 (4) - for better flow?
12. 02:42:677 (1,1) - Same case as 00:54:508 (1,1) -
13. 02:47:958 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner.
14. 03:28:522 (1) - I recommend you to move this slider 1/2 backward but make it end on 03:29:156- . Just like case above it's easier to play and more readable to beginner.

1. I can't find any mistake in this diff. You play the polarity very well, easy to read, and enjoyable. Good :3

1. 00:15:212 (3) - I would love to put new combo on here to make the combo consistant with previous combo.

1. 01:51:339 (3,4) - Orz, i almost miss at this note because i thoght it was 1/2 like your previous stacked note. I recommend you to add a note here 01:51:550- to make it more easier to read.

Miya wrote:

Gu's Easy

1. 00:15:846 (1) - I don't recommend placing a circle on center of spinner like this since it will be stacked with the spinner hitburst. It can quite confusing for beginer.ehhh.I don't know what to say.some people can say : this note is hidden by the spinner hitburst.if I move it.some people will say:this note is too far from the spinner. then.
2. 00:44:367 (2) - Switching into red tick like this is bad, since in previous note you always place note on white tick. Me too surprise when passing this section since i thought the slider will be on 00:44:156-. I suggest you make the rythim like this since it's easier to play and more readable > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331776 ( Don't follow the pattern, i didn't fix the pattern and the spacing)low AR with suitable distance.fine for me
3. 00:47:747 (2) - ^
4. 00:51:127 (2) - ^same
5. 00:54:508 (1,1) - I recommend make these spinner into 1 spinner. Since 00:58:099 (1) - is quite short for beginner. This will cause beginner to surprise and miss the spinner. And it's way too close to next note. Follow normal spinner example for better gameplaytwo spinners follow diffrent things.1st follows vocal and 2nd follows instrument.and both are long enough,so.
6. 01:48:592 (2) - Just like 00:44:367 (2) - same
7. 01:51:973 (2) - ^
8. 01:55:353 (2) - ^
9. 01:58:733 (1,1) - Same as 00:54:508 (1,1) -same
10. 02:04:015 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner again.again
11. 02:31:057 (1) - Make this symetrical with 02:30:212 (4) - for better flow?not a big problem
12. 02:42:677 (1,1) - Same case as 00:54:508 (1,1) -same
13. 02:47:958 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner.same
14. 03:28:522 (1) - I recommend you to move this slider 1/2 backward but make it end on 03:29:156- . Just like case above it's easier to play and more readable to beginner.I think 1/2 is more diffcult

wcx19911123 wrote:

1. 01:51:339 (3,4) - Orz, i almost miss at this note because i thoght it was 1/2 like your previous stacked note. I recommend you to add a note here 01:51:550- to make it more easier to read.
   oh, I think this is fine, I'm following vocal here. besides this, you can read the approach circles and know there're only 2 notes easily

1. After recheck i realized that offset 645 is more better. I can get better accuracy with this offset.

1. 01:00:212 (2) - I think this slider can be better. Here's the code :
   

   188,124,60212,2,8,B|200:52|312:52|328:124,2,192,10|10|10