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Peter Hajba - Bejeweled 3 - Lightning

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ZeroEightOne
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, May 25, 2012 at 5:31:22 PM

Artist: Peter Hajba
Title: Bejeweled 3 - Lightning
Source: PopCap Games
BPM: 115.08
Filesize: 8057kb
Play Time: 05:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Survival (4.98 stars, 1199 notes)
Download: Peter Hajba - Bejeweled 3 - Lightning
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FOR APPROVAL..
This song is from Bejeweled 3 Lightning mode.

"Ready for mod"
Taiko Diff is later...

Short Version of this song is here : http://skaven252.bandcamp.com/album/bejeweled-3

>>History
04/25 | Completed (BMP. and storyboard)
04/27 | 1. First mod
2. Shorten the MP3
05/01 | -Bakari-'s mod
05/02 | Resize all pictures
05/25 | Second Mod

BG from deviantart (search from google)
P.S. I've place some death jumps. Near end have a long stream.
chaotic_iak
Well, the Survival difficulty is pretty interesting. Note that I haven't beaten it, and I see that I wouldn't be able to in a foreseeable future :( And also this is my first mod, so please understand if I have some mistakes. Let's go through it...

General
Cut the length of the map? Or otherwise if you only aim for Approved, then it's okay.

Survival
00:00:000 - 00:31:913 > Don't make the intro that long
02:06:222 - 02:07:145 > Larger-than-usual gaps?
02:13:606 - 02:14:529 > ^
02:35:862 - 02:38:217 > ^
03:41:877 - 03:42:277 > Gap too large; should be fixed
04:13:929 - 04:22:928 > Break instead? The gap from last break to the finish is too large and you have streams that can tire a player easily
04:46:176 - 04:46:926 > The only use of 1/8 beat snap divisor, and under harsh streams? I prefer normal stream here.
05:16:924 - 05:46:958 > Cut to a few seconds only

Also, make some easier maps. :P

I hope I do a good job in my first mod. If only I have some star(, I would give this a star)...
Topic Starter
ZeroEightOne

chaotic_iak wrote:

Well, the Survival difficulty is pretty interesting. Note that I haven't beaten it, and I see that I wouldn't be able to in a foreseeable future :( And also this is my first mod, so please understand if I have some mistakes. Let's go through it...

General
Cut the length of the map? Or otherwise if you only aim for Approved, then it's okay.

Survival
00:00:000 - 00:31:913 > Don't make the intro that long
02:06:222 - 02:07:145 > Larger-than-usual gaps? FIXED
02:13:606 - 02:14:529 > ^ FIXED
02:35:862 - 02:38:217 > ^ FIXED
03:41:877 - 03:42:277 > Gap too large; should be fixed FIXED, by making smaller gap
04:13:929 - 04:22:928 > Break instead? The gap from last break to the finish is too large and you have streams that can tire a player easily FIXED
04:46:176 - 04:46:926 > The only use of 1/8 beat snap divisor, and under harsh streams? I prefer normal stream here. FIXED, change that stream to slider
05:16:924 - 05:46:958 > Cut to a few seconds only

Also, make some easier maps. :P

I hope I do a good job in my first mod. If only I have some star(, I would give this a star)...
chaotic_iak
Actually, assuming Survival means a long Insane, the suggestions called "larger-than-usual gaps?" aren't really required, although the one in 03:41:877 is necessary (it's just evil).

And I mean the spinner in 04:13:929 is also removed for the break; you'll need more than just 3-4 seconds to recover and prepare for the incoming insane 1-minute-ish stream. Up to you though, only that without removing the spinner, it becomes much more evil for non-pause-able games (multiplayer etc) :P
riffy
hi~

as you requested in your signature

[General]



[Soryboard]


[Survival]
ticrate4? for score? - maybe 2?
Boring nazi stuff: i see a loooot of stack problems. if you stack notes please make sure that distance between notes in the edior 0.00 NOT 0.01 >< 00:36:647 (5,6) - for example here
grid level 4 helps with better shapes!
00:31:901 (1,5) - put (5)'s end n (1) (stack them)
00:36:897 (6,1) - looks messy >< just don't touch slider with slider
00:39:644 (2,2) - not stacked! no need here to unstak them. in play mode they will be unstacked properly automatically >,<
00:46:389 (5) - hold shift and move it
01:34:148 (1) - a bit ugly shape ><
01:54:685 (5,6) - lol what? place somewhere else ><
04:01:177 (3,4,5,6) - hard to read
04:09:277 (5,1,2,1) - what's wrong with new combos here?
05:09:893 (10,11,12,13,1) - look closer! a high chance to miss here because of double note
05:12:049 (12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wtf jumps?

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k~ that's all for now

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take my star!
-Bakari- is a nazi modder, sorry
Topic Starter
ZeroEightOne

-Bakari- wrote:

hi~

as you requested in your signature

[General]
Fixed, new size is 1024x600 (Original 1920x1200) Fixed

[Soryboard]
Fixed

[Survival]
ticrate4? for score? - maybe 2? Fixed, tickrate is now "2"
Boring nazi stuff: i see a loooot of stack problems. if you stack notes please make sure that distance between notes in the edior 0.00 NOT 0.01 >< 00:36:647 (5,6) - for example here
grid level 4 helps with better shapes!
00:31:901 (1,5) - put (5)'s end n (1) (stack them)
00:36:897 (6,1) - looks messy >< just don't touch slider with slider
00:39:644 (2,2) - not stacked! no need here to unstak them. in play mode they will be unstacked properly automatically >,<
00:46:389 (5) - hold shift and move it
01:34:148 (1) - a bit ugly shape ><
01:54:685 (5,6) - lol what? place somewhere else ><
04:01:177 (3,4,5,6) - hard to read
04:09:277 (5,1,2,1) - what's wrong with new combos here?
05:09:893 (10,11,12,13,1) - look closer! a high chance to miss here because of double note
05:12:049 (12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wtf jumps?
Fixed all

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k~ that's all for now

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

take my star!
-Bakari- is a nazi modder, sorry
Aurele
Gonna mod it later,
If I'm not lazy as fck.

So, every picture(1 to 7) MUST be 640 x 480
The Background MUST be 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768.
Because at the moment, it's unrankable.
Topic Starter
ZeroEightOne

Gabex3 wrote:

Gonna mod it later,
If I'm not lazy as fck.

So, every picture(1 to 7) MUST be 640 x 480
The Background MUST be 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768.
Because at the moment, it's unrankable.
OK, every picture's size will be 640 x 400 (All pictures are 8:5)
BG's size will be 1024 x 640
Mapper 31
Holy shit I love bejeweled 3 and I didn't think that bejeweled 3 song is available on osu
I don't have modding skills, but I can shoot a star to you
And then.. When you need taiko map for this song, can you call me? : D I really love this song
Aurele

Mapper 31 wrote:

Holy shit I love bejeweled 3 and I didn't think that bejeweled 3 song is available on osu
I don't have modding skills, but I can shoot a star to you
And then.. When you need taiko map for this song, can you call me? : D I really love this song
Can we do Taiko-Collab? :o
Topic Starter
ZeroEightOne

Gabex3 wrote:

Mapper 31 wrote:

Holy shit I love bejeweled 3 and I didn't think that bejeweled 3 song is available on osu
I don't have modding skills, but I can shoot a star to you
And then.. When you need taiko map for this song, can you call me? : D I really love this song
Can we do Taiko-Collab? :o
Great, find one more taiko mapper (because this map length is 5 minutes, too long for one mapper)
chaotic_iak
Well you have two mappers for Taiko-Collab actually (Mapper 31 and Gabex3, probably plus you too). No I'm not good in Taiko at all.

I'm curious whether I can make a ranked version of this (obviously it must then use just a part of the song). Although don't expect me too much; I'm pretty busy lately.

Time to make things more interesting (read: making the map to be of elevating difficulty).
01:26:533 - Why the flash? It's not consistent with other parts. If you instead decide to make those "other parts" flash too, add seizure warning.
02:18:221 - A really long jump now? What if 02:17:991 moved closer to this note then?
02:24:940 - Yay for jump. This one I agree because 02:24:726 is slider end (and hence missing it only make the combo one less, not breaking it) and also this is pretty far in the song already.
02:36:718 - I told you to change this jump right? Since apparently you only changed this one and not the 1-2 too and also because I want elevated difficulty, I think this one is okay to go up.
02:37:146 - If above is changed, then change this to go up too, making the jumps pretty consistent (there is a jump between each consecutive sliders).
04:13:929 - Slider shape is pretty weird, but it's okay. Why I'm reminded of a car's door -_-
04:16:929 - Maybe the previous slider should end here? Just feel it's better for some reason.
04:46:176 - Similar comment for this slider, only now I'm reminded of spoon. You want to make some real-world items to osu! ? :P
05:05:487 - Intentionally wider spacing? Same comment applies to the 7.
05:16:830 - Becomes invisible with the other circles around? Same comment applies to the 16.
05:16:924 - Actually you can add more for the next ~30 seconds? Up to you though. If you want to add something, idea: add hellish jumps according to the fore melody!

Yay. Time to go to the non-objects parts...

HP: 9. Okay, Survival it is.
Circle: 4. Okay, hellish jumps allowed.
AR: 8. No problem.
OD: 6. No problem.
Timing: Seems to be no problem.
Everything else: No problem.

Yay, no problem.
...oh wait. You don't have kiai time? I find 02:18:221 - 02:45:712 and 03:51:877 - 04:16:554 to be acceptable places for kiai.

EDIT: Note 01:26:533 is also a problem.
Topic Starter
ZeroEightOne

chaotic_iak wrote:

Well you have two mappers for Taiko-Collab actually (Mapper 31 and Gabex3, probably plus you too). No I'm not good in Taiko at all.

I'm curious whether I can make a ranked version of this (obviously it must then use just a part of the song). Although don't expect me too much; I'm pretty busy lately.

Time to make things more interesting (read: making the map to be of elevating difficulty).
01:26:533 - Why the flash? It's not consistent with other parts. If you instead decide to make those "other parts" flash too, add seizure warning.
02:18:221 - A really long jump now? What if 02:17:991 moved closer to this note then?
02:24:940 - Yay for jump. This one I agree because 02:24:726 is slider end (and hence missing it only make the combo one less, not breaking it) and also this is pretty far in the song already.
02:36:718 - I told you to change this jump right? Since apparently you only changed this one and not the 1-2 too and also because I want elevated difficulty, I think this one is okay to go up.
02:37:146 - If above is changed, then change this to go up too, making the jumps pretty consistent (there is a jump between each consecutive sliders).
04:13:929 - Slider shape is pretty weird, but it's okay. Why I'm reminded of a car's door -_-
04:16:929 - Maybe the previous slider should end here? Just feel it's better for some reason.
04:46:176 - Similar comment for this slider, only now I'm reminded of spoon. You want to make some real-world items to osu! ? :P
05:05:487 - Intentionally wider spacing? Same comment applies to the 7.
05:16:830 - Becomes invisible with the other circles around? Same comment applies to the 16.
05:16:924 - Actually you can add more for the next ~30 seconds? Up to you though. If you want to add something, idea: add hellish jumps according to the fore melody!

Yay. Time to go to the non-objects parts...

HP: 9. Okay, Survival it is.
Circle: 4. Okay, hellish jumps allowed.
AR: 8. No problem.
OD: 6. No problem.
Timing: Seems to be no problem.
Everything else: No problem.

Yay, no problem.
...oh wait. You don't have kiai time? I find 02:18:221 - 02:45:712 and 03:51:877 - 04:16:554 to be acceptable places for kiai.

EDIT: Note 01:26:533 is also a problem.
All fixed.
05:16:924 - Actually you can add more for the next ~30 seconds? Up to you though. If you want to add something, idea: add hellish jumps according to the fore melody!
I can't do this because 5 minutes is enough.
chaotic_iak
01:26:533 - Still flash?
02:36:718 (3) - If you say fixed, I expect this to go upward instead of downward :P Your choice though, I'm fine either way.
03:48:677 - Inconsistent flash?
03:58:277 - ^
04:13:929 (6) - Nuuu why changed. Well I don't mind either way (the funny "car door" shape or this one).
04:46:176 (8) - ^
05:07:924 - Inconsistent flash?
05:13:924 - Inconsistent fla- Oh wait this and above makes it not inconsistent.

Note the there are three (those that don't complain about the flash) that are my opinions only; you may choose.

Why "5 minutes is enough"? Since the maximum score already shot through the roof (60m+) and this map obviously goes to Approved, and I don't think Approved has a song-length limit, you may as well map them. Otherwise, 8.7% of song goes to waste :( Up to you though. I just wonder where "5 minutes is enough" comes from.
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