If a BAT comes to rank it, wait until 8th April

/runs

Message subject: Re: need to rebubble
From: Niva
Sent at: 19 seconds ago
To: etc

[Normal]

00:33:832 (2) - is this intentional? Move to ~x:302 y:81 at least o.o
02:18:913 (1) - End 1/4 earlier
03:12:102 (1) - Finish
03:12:264 (1) - End 1/2 earlier (same as Insane)


and remove that new combo from the last spinner on Insane (:

all fixed

I was modding this map yestereday, wait for my mod pls!! I'll finish it today, later

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

I was modding this map yestereday, wait for my mod pls!! I'll finish it today, later

why u mod my map when i was bubbled??????????????????????????

because I was bored, and wanted to mod a bubble map, simple

Umm... As etc mentioned above I'm planning to rebubble this as the mapper self-popped to change artist (AkiAkane -> Akiakane) and after we talked again via Forum PM to fix some inconsistencies...

Because mancuso wants to mod it I'll leave this as is for now ._.

Hi! Random bubble check :3 Wait, no.. xD

[General:]

• The video dimensions are higher than the recommended for 16:9 format. Actually is higher than 854x780, you must change that because it is unrankable stuff.

[Normal:]

• 00:22:156 (1,2,3) - Can you explain me why do you use inconsistent spacing between these Notes? It is really hard to read looking that this is the easiest diff in the mapset, try to keep a consistent spacing so the new players can have more time to react.
• 00:24:751 (3,4) - It is better if you don't stack Notes under Slider ends, this is Hard to read when the Normal diff. is not the easiest diff. in the mapset, so a stack here can cause big confusion in New Players, unstack these Notes please
• 00:29:940 (3,4) - (^)
• 00:31:561 (1) - In my opinion, a single combo is useless here, I think that you can add this note to the previous comboing removing the New Combo in this Slider
• 00:31:561 (1,1,2) - As I said you in my first suggestion in this difficulty, the incosistent spacing is not a good thing in the easiest diff. in the mapset. Make it consistent, so New Players can read the pattern properly
• 00:37:724 (1,2) - These kind of patterns are hard to read in these kind of difficulties. In general New/Average players going to click the slider end of (2), because it is closer comparing with the Slider start. So, to avoid that, try doing a pattern like this one: (In the code, I provided you the spacing fixed between (1,2,3) too.
• 00:43:237 (1,2) - The long vocal start exactly in 00:43:237 - so, the Note (1) provides a bad Rhythm. To follow properly the rhythm remove (3), and after that move the Slider start of (2) till there (and this Slider have to finish in 00:44:210. Basically, you have to do that:
• 00:49:399 (3,4) - This kind of stacks cause confusion in New/Average players, unstack these objects please.
• 01:12:102 (2,3) - These Sliders are not following properly the music, because the long vocal starts at the end of (2), and actually both sliders are not following anything closely in the music in my opinion. To follow better the music, replace the slider (2) in a Note instead in 01:12:102, after that move the beginning of (3) till 01:12:426 (and this Slider have to finish in 01:14:048), I mean that:
• 01:14:048 (T) - Reduce a bit the volume here, it sounds kinda high to me. I'd use 30% instead
• 01:14:210 - Add a break manually in this point, players will be more attent if you add it here, plus you have a break here in the other difficulties.
• 01:30:913 (2,3) - It is better if you unstack these notes, because you have a pervious 1/1 3-plet stacked, this stack looks like another 1/1 2-plet when it is not that, move (3) to x:44 y:288 and you will keep the spacing consistent.
• 01:33:507 (2,3,4) - And.. in this case would be better if you stack these Notes as you did in 01:28:318. Don't forget to fix the spacing after that, anyways you don't have to make a lot of changes to make the spacing consistent
• 01:45:183 (1,2,3) - This is inconsistent with 00:50:697 (1,2,3), it is not a good thing since the music goes in a similar way, I say that because you used soft hitsounds the first time and this time you used Normal Sampleset, try to use the same hitsounding in these parts pls.
• 02:06:588 (2,3) - Well, this is exactly the same thing that I suggested you to fix in 01:12:102 (2,3)
• 02:18:913 (1) - Am I wrong or this Slider have to finish over the White Tick (1/4 back)? Actually sounds bad and it is inconsistent with the rest of the map, definetly the Slider have to finish in 02:19:561.
• 02:21:832 (4) - Comparing with the rest of the map, this comboing is kinda long. Add a new combo in this Slider, will also help you to differenciate the Rhythm change.
• 02:41:616 (3) - *Nazi* Move this Note 1 grid down, to have a perfect spacing between (2,3,1).
• 03:04:967 (2,3) - Again, to follow properly the music, you should do the same as I suggested you in 01:12:102 (2,3)
• 03:07:561 (2,3) - (^)
• 03:10:156 (2,3) - (^)
• 03:12:264 (Spin) - This spinner must ends over the downbeat (in 03:17:291), where the kiai time ends, actually it sounds off-beat and comparing with the other difficulties, the Spinner end is inconsistent.

*I think that Niva already mentioned some things, that I pointed out in my mod as well, because I started with it yesterday*

[Luka's Hard:]

• Settings:
--> I'd increase the Overall Difficulty by 1 Tick, works better in this difficulty (OD+1)

• 00:11:453 (1,2) - Would be better if you unstack these Note, is much more easier to read in my opinion
• 00:32:534 (1,2) - This antijump flows pretty bad, especially when you have a 1/2 pattern with the same spacing between the objects. Increase the spacing between these Notes please
• 00:33:832 (1,2) - (^)
• 00:35:129 (1,2) - (^)
• 00:36:426 (1,2,3) - (^)
• 00:39:021 (1,2) - (^)
*It is much better if you fix this points, are really confusing during the gameplay, it doesn't provide a good transition the antijumps in 1/1 and the normal spacing between the 1/2 Sliders*
• 00:45:507 (3,4,5) - Why this huge jumps? It doesn't match the music well, If I were you, I'd reduce the spacing a bit between these objects
• 00:46:967 (x) - This Stack in 1/1 between (5,6) plays weird in my opinion, after to these 1/2 jumps. I think that if you add a Note here, you can fix the mistake
• 00:48:102 (3) - Hmm.. This a bit unpredictable and can cause confusion in players, but anyways I think that you can fix that adding a New combo in this Note simply
• 00:57:345 (5) - Kinda nazi, but provides a better transition if you make this Slider curvy
• 01:03:670 (1,2,3) - This overlap looks really bad, forced and non-fluent. You should change that to make the pattern more enjoyable, ask me for a suggestion if you want, now, I'll leave it to you to fix it in your own accord
• 01:14:048 (T) - 5% in this green line is way too much, the music doesn't stop completely. Increase a bit the Volume here, I'd suggest you to use around 25/30%
• 01:19:724 (3,4) - When I played the map, I thought that this stack represented a 1/2 pattern because I compared this with the pattern in 01:17:778 5,6) so i'd unstack this.
• 01:31:724 (1) - This lonely combo looks weird to me, it is the 1st and only time that you use it in the map. So, Remove this New Combo pls.
• 02:45:345 (1) - In my personal point of view, works better if you decompress this Slider in 2. I mean add 2 Sliders instead of a lot of repetitions. In the first slider add just a repetition in the second one (that should start in 02:45:832), you don't need to add any repetition, plays better because in the whole of the map you didn't use more than a repetition in 1/2 Sliders

- Some stacked objects bother me at the hour to play the map, but anyways it is ok in general

[Insane:]

• Settings:
--> The HP Drain Rate feels a bit loud to me, I'd reduce it in 1 Tick (HD-1)

• 00:11:453 (1,2) - As I said in Hard, would be better if you unstack these Notes.
• 00:37:399 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that the 5-plet in 1/4 is usless here, in my opinion is just overmapping a good part of the song, if I were you I'd remove (2,4) from this pattern
• 00:44:697 (1,2,3) - Same as above, remove (2) pls.
• 00:52:561 (2) - I can't hear any sound in this point, could you remove this note pls?
• 00:56:372 (5,6) - This looks like as a 1/4 pattern when it is a 1/2, this can cause big confusion in players, especially if you look the velocity of the map, to avoid that, increase the spacing between these objects.
• 01:12:588 (Spin) - Move this spinner 1/4 back, will match the vocal better. Plus, I'd remove the Finish from this spinner and then I'd reduce the volume on it till 30%, actually sound pretty noisy
• 01:21:021 (x) - A beat is really necessary here, the instrumental sounds on a high pitch. Add a note here
• 01:47:048 (2) - Remove this note to avoid the overmap.
• 01:49:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern plays bad to me due to the big inconsistent spacing between the notes, try to make the notes more consistent (talking about the spacing)
• 02:01:886 (1) - I find this new combo unnecessary and inconsistent with your comboing, try removing it from here
• 02:07:075 (Spin) - Same suggestion as 01:12:588
• 02:35:940 (9) - I'd add a New Combo to remark this antijump
• 03:12:264 (Spin) - Move this Spinner 1/4 back as I mentioned before (remember, the Spinner must finish at the same point as you have already)

- I didn't mention some overmap mistakes, maybe you can check them out by yourself.

And, that's all.. I'll talk with Niva to see what we are going to do with this map.
Till then, Good Luck

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! Random bubble check :3 Wait, no.. xD

[General:]

• The video dimensions are higher than the recommended for 16:9 format. Actually is higher than 854x780, you must change that because it is unrankable stuff.

[Normal:]

• 00:22:156 (1,2,3) - Can you explain me why do you use inconsistent spacing between these Notes? It is really hard to read looking that this is the easiest diff in the mapset, try to keep a consistent spacing so the new players can have more time to react.
• 00:24:751 (3,4) - It is better if you don't stack Notes under Slider ends, this is Hard to read when the Normal diff. is not the easiest diff. in the mapset, so a stack here can cause big confusion in New Players, unstack these Notes please
• 00:29:940 (3,4) - (^)
• 00:31:561 (1) - In my opinion, a single combo is useless here, I think that you can add this note to the previous comboing removing the New Combo in this Slider
• 00:31:561 (1,1,2) - As I said you in my first suggestion in this difficulty, the incosistent spacing is not a good thing in the easiest diff. in the mapset. Make it consistent, so New Players can read the pattern properly
• 00:37:724 (1,2) - These kind of patterns are hard to read in these kind of difficulties. In general New/Average players going to click the slider end of (2), because it is closer comparing with the Slider start. So, to avoid that, try doing a pattern like this one: (In the code, I provided you the spacing fixed between (1,2,3) too.

Screenshoot + Code

108,164,37724,6,2,B|248:192,1,140,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,100,39021,2,2,B|388:176|332:236,1,140
212,328,40318,2,2,B|176:252|232:192,1,140

• 00:43:237 (1,2) - The long vocal start exactly in 00:43:237 - so, the Note (1) provides a bad Rhythm. To follow properly the rhythm remove (3), and after that move the Slider start of (2) till there (and this Slider have to finish in 00:44:210. Basically, you have to do that:

SPOILER

• 00:49:399 (3,4) - This kind of stacks cause confusion in New/Average players, unstack these objects please.
• 01:12:102 (2,3) - These Sliders are not following properly the music, because the long vocal starts at the end of (2), and actually both sliders are not following anything closely in the music in my opinion. To follow better the music, replace the slider (2) in a Note instead in 01:12:102, after that move the beginning of (3) till 01:12:426 (and this Slider have to finish in 01:14:048), I mean that:

SPOILER

• 01:14:048 (T) - Reduce a bit the volume here, it sounds kinda high to me. I'd use 30% instead
• 01:14:210 - Add a break manually in this point, players will be more attent if you add it here, plus you have a break here in the other difficulties.
• 01:30:913 (2,3) - It is better if you unstack these notes, because you have a pervious 1/1 3-plet stacked, this stack looks like another 1/1 2-plet when it is not that, move (3) to x:44 y:288 and you will keep the spacing consistent.
• 01:33:507 (2,3,4) - And.. in this case would be better if you stack these Notes as you did in 01:28:318. Don't forget to fix the spacing after that, anyways you don't have to make a lot of changes to make the spacing consistent
• 01:45:183 (1,2,3) - This is inconsistent with 00:50:697 (1,2,3), it is not a good thing since the music goes in a similar way, I say that because you used soft hitsounds the first time and this time you used Normal Sampleset, try to use the same hitsounding in these parts pls.
• 02:06:588 (2,3) - Well, this is exactly the same thing that I suggested you to fix in 01:12:102 (2,3)
• 02:18:913 (1) - Am I wrong or this Slider have to finish over the White Tick (1/4 back)? Actually sounds bad and it is inconsistent with the rest of the map, definetly the Slider have to finish in 02:19:561.
• 02:21:832 (4) - Comparing with the rest of the map, this comboing is kinda long. Add a new combo in this Slider, will also help you to differenciate the Rhythm change.
• 02:41:616 (3) - *Nazi* Move this Note 1 grid down, to have a perfect spacing between (2,3,1).
• 03:04:967 (2,3) - Again, to follow properly the music, you should do the same as I suggested you in 01:12:102 (2,3)
• 03:07:561 (2,3) - (^)
• 03:10:156 (2,3) - (^)
• 03:12:264 (Spin) - This spinner must ends over the downbeat (in 03:17:291), where the kiai time ends, actually it sounds off-beat and comparing with the other difficulties, the Spinner end is inconsistent.

*I think that Niva already mentioned some things, that I pointed out in my mod as well, because I started with it yesterday*

[Luka's Hard:]

• Settings:
--> I'd increase the Overall Difficulty by 1 Tick, works better in this difficulty (OD+1)

• 00:11:453 (1,2) - Would be better if you unstack these Note, is much more easier to read in my opinion
• 00:32:534 (1,2) - This antijump flows pretty bad, especially when you have a 1/2 pattern with the same spacing between the objects. Increase the spacing between these Notes please
• 00:33:832 (1,2) - (^)
• 00:35:129 (1,2) - (^)
• 00:36:426 (1,2,3) - (^)
• 00:39:021 (1,2) - (^)
*It is much better if you fix this points, are really confusing during the gameplay, it doesn't provide a good transition the antijumps in 1/1 and the normal spacing between the 1/2 Sliders*
• 00:45:507 (3,4,5) - Why this huge jumps? It doesn't match the music well, If I were you, I'd reduce the spacing a bit between these objects
• 00:46:967 (x) - This Stack in 1/1 between (5,6) plays weird in my opinion, after to these 1/2 jumps. I think that if you add a Note here, you can fix the mistake
• 00:48:102 (3) - Hmm.. This a bit unpredictable and can cause confusion in players, but anyways I think that you can fix that adding a New combo in this Note simply
• 00:57:345 (5) - Kinda nazi, but provides a better transition if you make this Slider curvy
• 01:03:670 (1,2,3) - This overlap looks really bad, forced and non-fluent. You should change that to make the pattern more enjoyable, ask me for a suggestion if you want, now, I'll leave it to you to fix it in your own accord
• 01:14:048 (T) - 5% in this green line is way too much, the music doesn't stop completely. Increase a bit the Volume here, I'd suggest you to use around 25/30%
• 01:19:724 (3,4) - When I played the map, I thought that this stack represented a 1/2 pattern because I compared this with the pattern in 01:17:778 5,6) so i'd unstack this.
• 01:31:724 (1) - This lonely combo looks weird to me, it is the 1st and only time that you use it in the map. So, Remove this New Combo pls.
• 02:45:345 (1) - In my personal point of view, works better if you decompress this Slider in 2. I mean add 2 Sliders instead of a lot of repetitions. In the first slider add just a repetition in the second one (that should start in 02:45:832), you don't need to add any repetition, plays better because in the whole of the map you didn't use more than a repetition in 1/2 Sliders

- Some stacked objects bother me at the hour to play the map, but anyways it is ok in general

[Insane:]

• Settings:
--> The HP Drain Rate feels a bit loud to me, I'd reduce it in 1 Tick (HD-1)

• 00:11:453 (1,2) - As I said in Hard, would be better if you unstack these Notes.
• 00:37:399 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that the 5-plet in 1/4 is usless here, in my opinion is just overmapping a good part of the song, if I were you I'd remove (2,4) from this pattern
• 00:44:697 (1,2,3) - Same as above, remove (2) pls.
• 00:52:561 (2) - I can't hear any sound in this point, could you remove this note pls?
• 00:56:372 (5,6) - This looks like as a 1/4 pattern when it is a 1/2, this can cause big confusion in players, especially if you look the velocity of the map, to avoid that, increase the spacing between these objects.
• 01:12:588 (Spin) - Move this spinner 1/4 back, will match the vocal better. Plus, I'd remove the Finish from this spinner and then I'd reduce the volume on it till 30%, actually sound pretty noisy
• 01:21:021 (x) - A beat is really necessary here, the instrumental sounds on a high pitch. Add a note here
• 01:47:048 (2) - Remove this note to avoid the overmap.
• 01:49:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern plays bad to me due to the big inconsistent spacing between the notes, try to make the notes more consistent (talking about the spacing)
• 02:01:886 (1) - I find this new combo unnecessary and inconsistent with your comboing, try removing it from here
• 02:07:075 (Spin) - Same suggestion as 01:12:588
• 02:35:940 (9) - I'd add a New Combo to remark this antijump
• 03:12:264 (Spin) - Move this Spinner 1/4 back as I mentioned before (remember, the Spinner must finish at the same point as you have already)

- I didn't mention some overmap mistakes, maybe you can check them out by yourself.

And, that's all.. I'll talk with Niva to see what we are going to do with this map.
Till then, Good Luck

all done.

Sorry for the delay

In Normal and Insane: 03:12:426 (Spin) - Move this spinner to 03:12:183 since the long vocal starts where you placed (1), so will fit much better if you move this Spinner till this point.

Other than that, everything looks in order. Call me back then please

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EDIT: Kiai sections in Normal looks kinda repetitive, but looks ok anyways to me.
Rechecked everything, and this should be ready to go.
Rebubbled!

maybe it is FlashBack instead of Flashback ?

http://puu.sh/2Hxzo.png

not sure though xD

I was just wandering around browsing some maps and I found some stuff that needs to be polished/changed before ranking this, I'll point only the major issues I could find.

[General]
As Irreversible said, the correct title of the song is FlashBack, with the letter B capitalized, as it's stated in the video of this song, see image below in spoilerbox. You must change this.


[Normal]
I find AR 3 too slow for this song, I know this is the lowest diff, but having too slow AR makes many objects appear in the screen and a beginner would likely scream in despair and click as fast as possible (not really, but something similar), increase it at least by 1. Also HP Drain and OD 2, this is not an Easy right? increase both by 1, if you're afraid about star rating, it will just increase to 3.07, which is still accepted imo.
By that you will make a better spread in your difficulties, HP goes 3>5>8 and OD goes 3>5>7
03:12:183 (1) - Not necessary but maybe put NC in this spinner?

[Insane]
I find this pretty overmapped in some streams, I'll just point those who bothered me while playing, don't want to bee too picky, and other some suggestions here.
00:37:399 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete the circles in blue ticks, it's a bit jarring hitting this as there's nothing in the music that makes it intuitive in my opinion
00:42:507 - A circle could fit here very nice with the drums, you really should add it.
00:52:480 - This definitely will sound and play better here, try it, it's a bit weird as you have now as the stream goes before the one that should be in drums.

00:57:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - As I said in the first suggestion for this, delete the objects in blue ticks.
01:52:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part could be very fun to play if following vocals, so delete objects in blue ticks.
02:02:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same reason as above, but in this case just delete (2,4,6)
02:34:156 (1,2,3) - You should know what I'm going to say for this.
02:36:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same for here.
02:44:859 (1) - I find the hitsound for this slider a bit annoying, but I think nobody else mentioned this, so I'll leave this to you to consider.
02:50:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - As I said in 02:02:697, just delete (2,4,6)
03:01:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete overmapped objects.
03:06:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same here.
03:08:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And here.
03:12:183 (1) - Not necessary but maybe put NC in this spinner?
I passed some triples here, but you should know that many of them are overmapped too, but I'll leave it to you, as it's not a big issue in comparison with all I mentioned above.
If you decide to change something from my suggestions, remember ask mancuso to repair the bubble

That's all from my part, my random appearance ended, good luck o/

DakeDekaane wrote:

I was just wandering around browsing some maps and I found some stuff that needs to be polished/changed before ranking this, I'll point only the major issues I could find.

[General]
As Irreversible said, the correct title of the song is FlashBack, with the letter B capitalized, as it's stated in the video of this song, see image below in spoilerbox. You must change this.

SPOILER

[Normal]
I find AR 3 too slow for this song, I know this is the lowest diff, but having too slow AR makes many objects appear in the screen and a beginner would likely scream in despair and click as fast as possible (not really, but something similar), increase it at least by 1. Also HP Drain and OD 2, this is not an Easy right? increase both by 1, if you're afraid about star rating, it will just increase to 3.07, which is still accepted imo.
By that you will make a better spread in your difficulties, HP goes 3>5>8 and OD goes 3>5>7
03:12:183 (1) - Not necessary but maybe put NC in this spinner?

[Insane]
I find this pretty overmapped in some streams, I'll just point those who bothered me while playing, don't want to bee too picky, and other some suggestions here.
00:37:399 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete the circles in blue ticks, it's a bit jarring hitting this as there's nothing in the music that makes it intuitive in my opinion
00:42:507 - A circle could fit here very nice with the drums, you really should add it.
00:52:480 - This definitely will sound and play better here, try it, it's a bit weird as you have now as the stream goes before the one that should be in drums.

00:57:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - As I said in the first suggestion for this, delete the objects in blue ticks.
01:52:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part could be very fun to play if following vocals, so delete objects in blue ticks.
02:02:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same reason as above, but in this case just delete (2,4,6)
02:34:156 (1,2,3) - You should know what I'm going to say for this.
02:36:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same for here.
02:44:859 (1) - I find the hitsound for this slider a bit annoying, but I think nobody else mentioned this, so I'll leave this to you to consider.
02:50:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - As I said in 02:02:697, just delete (2,4,6)
03:01:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete overmapped objects.
03:06:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same here.
03:08:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And here.
03:12:183 (1) - Not necessary but maybe put NC in this spinner?

You should delete this circles too, as the rhythm will be more fun imo, but it's up to you

01:37:156 (3) -
02:39:426 (2) -

I passed some triples here, but you should know that many of them are overmapped too, but I'll leave it to you, as it's not a big issue in comparison with all I mentioned above.
If you decide to change something from my suggestions, remember ask mancuso to repair the bubble

That's all from my part, my random appearance ended, good luck o/

name changed ,thx

Rebubbled!
After to make some changes in Insane diff. and fix the title Name

Rechecked (mapper self-pop + we went on IRC mod after mancuso restored the bubble), log below:


I'm about to rank this but that sliderslid2.wav... orz ._.

(I'm fine with the streams that etc used though, good luck with this map (again)) :3

Rebubbled ~

[quote="DakeDekaane"]

[General]
As Irreversible said, the correct title of the song is FlashBack, with the letter B capitalized, as it's stated in the video of this song, see image below in spoilerbox. You must change this.

/quote]

DAT
STOLEN
KUDOSUS
OMG DAKE pls

edit: yes i'm proud of fail quoting

just kidding XD

oh~

yeeeeeeeeeeee

Grats on your first mapset

Finally ranked ♥ Congratz etc :3

Congratz

oh, i remember this one~
gratz~

Wow, this is really impressive for a first map.

Great job to the mapper!

Congrats, finally!! xD

Nice map, I really enjoy it. Though, are you aware that the background used is related to a totally different song?

where is Spinboxer 0.0

Lan wings wrote:

where is Spinboxer 0.0

他說做的不好讓我刪掉了 QQ

etc wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

where is Spinboxer 0.0

他說做的不好讓我刪掉了 QQ

简直坠毁