1. Good, nothing to mention~

1. First, i want you to add break between 2nd kiai time and 3rd kiai time. There's almost no pause between theme, and reaching the end of 2nd kiai time almost takes 1.30 minute. This can be tiring to newbie and it can lead to not play the last part of the song nicely. So i suggest you to delete all note between 03:08:818- - 03:20:864-. I have tested it, and the break work nicely.
2. 00:34:727 (3) - You forgot a clap add the repeat?
3. 02:24:727 (2) - Hmm, this one is not blanketed properly with 02:26:545 (1) - so it looks awkward. How about try to move it to x:364 y:248
4. 02:30:182 (1,3) - Sorry nazi, but can you move it 1 grid down so it symetrical with 02:28:364 (3) - start?
5. 03:29:272 (1,3) - Why clap in this slider end missing? It's not consistant with your clap rythim. Please add a clap at the end at both of that slider.

1. Well, i suggest the same thing like easy too in this diff. I suggest you to add a break too between 03:08:818- - 03:20:864- so player can rest and play the end part nicely.
2. 00:24:273 (5,6) - Because you change the polarity so suddenly from white tick to red, i suggest change this note into slider. Player can be surprised to this one and will likely not get 300.
3. 01:35:636- You lower the volume very drasticaly here 65% to just 5% but it's not fit with the music. I suggest you move this timing point to 01:37:455- because it will not disrupt the spinner sound, or you can lower the volume of this spinner gradually.
4. 01:57:000 (5,6) - Hmm, same here, i would like suggest you to change these note into slider. But now it's up to you since player has already hear the first part so player can guest your rythim now.
5. I guess this difficulty new combo pattern still need more work since you like to follow the vocal to put new combo. This can lead to combo inconsistencies which is not good thing. Try to put new combo every 2 stanza etc.

1. Reduce the AR to 7 please, this is not Insane diff, and the BPM of this slong is also low.
2. 01:27:909 (3) - Instead of finish, how about clap sound at the start? I think the finish sound at the start is overused and not good to hear.
3. 01:31:545 (3) - For your finish consistencies, i suggest you add a finish here at the slider end.
4. 02:00:068- I think you should add a note here, since your previous rythim 01:57:909 (1,2) - consist of 1/4 rythim.
5. 02:26:205- & 02:26:432- To follow the drum sound at the back, how about you add note into this time to create a stream?
6. 02:44:727 (1) - I think you miss a clap here at the slider end.
7. 03:22:000 (1) - Hmm, i don't think this slider is good to see because it's not symetrical. How about a slider like this > http://puu.sh/wl07 ?
   

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8. 03:30:636 (4) - I think the clap sound at the slider end is not in the good place and break you clap rythim. It's good to remove it.

Miya wrote:

Easy

1. First, i want you to add break between 2nd kiai time and 3rd kiai time. There's almost no pause between theme, and reaching the end of 2nd kiai time almost takes 1.30 minute. This can be tiring to newbie and it can lead to not play the last part of the song nicely. So i suggest you to delete all note between 03:08:818- - 03:20:864-. I have tested it, and the break work nicely.　I agree your suggestion. Delete all note between 03:08:818-03:20:864
2. 00:34:727 (3) - You forgot a clap add the repeat? oh,Fixed :33
3. 02:24:727 (2) - Hmm, this one is not blanketed properly with 02:26:545 (1) - so it looks awkward. How about try to move it to x:364 y:248　I keep my design.
4. 02:30:182 (1,3) - Sorry nazi, but can you move it 1 grid down so it symetrical with 02:28:364 (3) - start? ohh,,I'm stupid LOL. Fixed~~
5. 03:29:272 (1,3) - Why clap in this slider end missing? It's not consistant with your clap rythim. Please add a clap at the end at both of that slider.　Fixed~~

Hard

1. Reduce the AR to 7 please, this is not Insane diff, and the BPM of this slong is also low.　Let me think about it.Fixed
2. 01:27:909 (3) - Instead of finish, how about clap sound at the start? I think the finish sound at the start is overused and not good to hear. ok,fixed
3. 01:31:545 (3) - For your finish consistencies, i suggest you add a finish here at the slider end.　I changed some hitsound.
4. 02:00:068- I think you should add a note here, since your previous rythim 01:57:909 (1,2) - consist of 1/4 rythim.　kepp design
5. 02:26:205- & 02:26:432- To follow the drum sound at the back, how about you add note into this time to create a stream?　add note 02:26:205 :3
6. 02:44:727 (1) - I think you miss a clap here at the slider end. fixed~~
7. 03:22:000 (1) - Hmm, i don't think this slider is good to see because it's not symetrical. How about a slider like this > http://puu.sh/wl07 ?
   

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   　I feel that it is not necessary this is symmetrical.　so, keep my design.
8. 03:30:636 (4) - I think the clap sound at the slider end is not in the good place and break you clap rythim. It's good to remove it.
   ohh,Fixed~~

Thank you for really useful mod~~~~~~~

Miya wrote:

Jupiter's Normal

1. Well, i suggest the same thing like easy too in this diff. I suggest you to add a break too between 03:08:818- - 03:20:864- so player can rest and play the end part nicely. not,fix.
2. I guess this difficulty new combo pattern still need more work since you like to follow the vocal to put new combo. This can lead to combo inconsistencies which is not good thing. Try to put new combo every 2 stanza etc. It is about.

1. For the first verse, you did nothing except 1/2 spam all the way until the triple at 00:53:591 (5) - . In the second verse and chorus, you integrate 1/4 rhythms as well, and as such I don't see a reason why you decided not to in the first verse.
2. 01:31:545 (3) - This doesn't follow (1) as closely as (2) does; shift the anchor and last node a little to the left to match the spacing a little bit more.
3. 01:50:182 (1,2) - I wouldn't stack these - it creates a bad flow. However, if you choose to keep this one and 01:51:773 (5,1) - stacked, then 01:53:364 (5,1) - should be stacked, as well as 01:57:000 (7,1) - and 01:59:045 (4,1) - and 02:01:091 (5,1) - , which wouldn't make such a nice play, would it.
4. 03:00:636 (3,4) - Similarly, I wouldn't stack these either.

1. 03:54:727 (1) - Spinner doesn't end at the same time as other diffs; is this intentional?

those wrote:

Eh....
[Hard]

1. For the first verse, you did nothing except 1/2 spam all the way until the triple at 00:53:591 (5) - . In the second verse and chorus, you integrate 1/4 rhythms as well, and as such I don't see a reason why you decided not to in the first verse.
   2nd verse made by guest. It doesn't need to be unified. Since this is a simple map enough, people should be able to enjoy the various rhythms.
   Hard ---- 01:50:182~03:06:545 -- made by apricot
2. 01:31:545 (3) - This doesn't follow (1) as closely as (2) does; shift the anchor and last node a little to the left to match the spacing a little bit more.
   I use x0.94 distance snap to make my almost part, so this is intentional.
3. 01:50:182 (1,2) - I wouldn't stack these - it creates a bad flow. However, if you choose to keep this one and 01:51:773 (5,1) - stacked, then 01:53:364 (5,1) - should be stacked, as well as 01:57:000 (7,1) - and 01:59:045 (4,1) - and 02:01:091 (5,1) - , which wouldn't make such a nice play, would it.
   I think, this stack is no problem. I don't feel need to unify stacked or don't stacked.
4. 03:00:636 (3,4) - Similarly, I wouldn't stack these either.
   hum, this pattern is good for me.sorry no changed~~

[Easy]

1. 03:54:727 (1) - Spinner doesn't end at the same time as other diffs; is this intentional?
   oh,,my stupid. Fixed~~~

those wrote:

You mean to say that the fact that the blanketing distance is different is intentional?
Yes, I understand the blanketing distance is different. It is intentional.
In addition, (3) and (1) aren't even parallel to begin with.
ok, fixed

LKs wrote:

hi there.

No the least SP amount of bubbling a map has been increased to 12, so I can't really rebubble the map.
oh,,I didn't know need SP12. thank you~~

here are some suggestions:

[Hard]

00:19:955 (2) - http://puu.sh/CKnT slider like the pic shows you has better flow and better spacing　Fixed

[General]

03:22:000 (1) - why is there a redline, which doesn't lead to a offest change?　　Because of changes in downbeat.

the map is comforting :3 reminds me 2009 maps
Yeah, I love this style in a simple diff

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
offset need to +7 imo, use 17462 and 202007

[Easy]
00:40:182 (2) - try to move it down a bit, it touched the HP bar
04:02:000 - better to use about 50% volume here, or the finish is really too quiet

[Hard]
01:15:636 - I suggest remove clap here, or it sound kinda odd with the finish
04:02:000 - same as Easy

My diff all fixed, including offset.
Thank you for mod

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
offset need to +7 imo, use 17462 and 202007

[Jupiter's Normal]
02:02:909 (2) - vocal off here, it should be a slider from 02:02:909 - to 02:03:364 - and a circle at 02:03:591 -
04:02:000 - same as Easy

call me back after this

wcx19911123 wrote:

recheck

all green timing sections in Normal diff need to +7,too (the 2 red timing sections are fine)
others all fine now

call me back then

Garven wrote:

Yo

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
Honestly, I don't like the tick rate 2 on this song. For me, it feels strange ticksound.


[Easy]
01:21:098 (1) - I don't recommend having such a short slider with more than one repeat on it in an Easy difficulty since it can be hard to ok, changed
01:29:052 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an Easy.
In my opinion, this is fair enough. BPM132 and AR3 is very easy. They should be able to stay within the timing of the beat while relaxed on a song like this.　so no changed.
03:01:780 (1) - ^
^
03:49:961 (1) - ^
^

[Normal]
03:08:825 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal. Try to aim for 2 beats at least.
Almost the same opinion as Easy. This rhythm is simple enough, I think it is fair enough.

[Hard]
01:00:871 (6,7) - These feel extra considering the drum part
01:08:143 (6,7) - ^
01:11:780 (8,9) - ^
01:13:939 (2,3) - ^
01:15:530 (10) - ^
01:22:575 (5,7) - ^
Anyway, the rest of this will be to the similar parts in the later chorus' so I think you'll get the idea.
These are good for me. Since I made ​​this map to make a design of these, these changes is same thing sent to graveyard for me