dj TAKA - Hollywood Galaxy [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Megurine Luka

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2012-12-19T07:23:40+00:00

Steph De Chine wrote:
General
首先确认下artist真的是dj TAKA么？不应该写成DJ Taka的么？ dj TAKA无误
图真心不错，果然神麻婆就是和我们这种新麻婆不一样……所以后面的全都是建议，爱改不改随你便~

Basic
00:07:246 (4) - 这种折返的动作不是很好看……或许移到1那里，然后加点小弧度以衔接前面的移动轨迹？呜稍微改了下
00:09:827 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个的轨迹有些诡异啊……试着保持鼠标移动线路的转弯角度一致？
00:15:633 - 这里习惯性认为应该有一个circle，但是却没有…… fixed
00:20:794 - 这里也是 fixed
00:22:730 (3) - 这个中间concave up一下？让人家的鼠标轨迹好看些 fixed

Medium
到了Medium突然发现鼠标轨迹好看了很多……什么情况？暂时没发现问题……

Hard
00:45:311 (1) - 这个长度长了点吧？看起来你是想做Kick slider 或者Hold slider的，但Following circle在距某一端最远时只能覆盖那一端的一半不到，很容易100&断的。
把那里的Slider velocity调慢点或者缩短一半而加更多折返可以解决。
后面的00:47:246 (3) - 00:48:536 (1) 等等都有同样的问题。

我个人认为不是什么大问题w

Extreme
Uh……这个还有我说话的地么？

算了，就这样了。毕竟集popner, spboxer, Luka几大神|V| /-\ |º |º Σ Я的图我还是只能拜拜的……

Pokie

osu! Alumni

2,630 posts

Joined December 2009

Pokie 2012-12-24T03:20:10+00:00

忘記什麼時候扔過星的了…既然挖上來了支持一發=w=

Tanzureir

181 posts

Joined October 2009

Tanzureir 2013-03-11T14:55:23+00:00

M4M~不好意思我不会mod太鼓

[Basic]

00:11:762 (3) - 这个点移动到 (2) 的正下方更加对称一些感觉……
00:38:214 (2) - 这个和前一个间隔比较远，可以考虑New combo……

[Medium]
AiMod
00:41:600 (2) | 00:42:890 (2) | 00:58:858 (1) | 01:02:729 (1) - 这几个拉条尾没有Snap……

01:11:762 (1,2) - 这两个之间DS改1.2感觉更加对称一些……
感觉New combo稍微多了些……可以考虑换成两小节（就是两根长白线）一次NC……毕竟点并不很分散……

[Hard]
AiMod
用了超过三种不同的拉条速度……好像最多只能用三种吧……（不知道rank规则有没有改）

00:12:407 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这几个跳得有点突然……感觉和音乐不太配合……
00:35:956 ~ 00:43:536 - 这段或许不需要这么多New combo……
00:44:665 ~ 00:50:472 - ^，当然这两处不改也没啥问题……
00:53:375 (4) - 这个跳太远了感觉……
01:03:375 (1) | 01:03:698 (1) - 这两个NC可以去掉……
01:19:827 (1) - 这个NC感觉略不和谐……复制粘贴忘记去掉了？
01:20:633 (1) - 这个遮挡感觉太坑了……
01:21:762 (4) - 这个也有点突然……
01:31:278 (4) - 这里可以考虑加个NC……
01:42:730 (4) - ^

[Extreme]

00:52:730 (1) - 这个可以不用New combo……
01:09:182 - 这里一段节奏上可以考虑改成这样

感觉这个难度做得很赞啊……除了这两处也看不出啥问题了……

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-03-18T22:51:26+00:00

sorry for delay ><

[Basic]
Spacing:

00:44:665 (3,1) - look good spacing here
01:11:762 (1,2) - i'm not really sure about this spacing incostency
01:36:924 (1,2) - here too

Placement:

00:13:698 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - i think here are to many circles why don't you try to replace some with a slider?
00:22:730 (3) - reverse this slider since the music stop at 00:24:020 -
01:11:762 (1) - this slider look not so nice try to use the 3 point formula

Hitsounds:

01:25:956 - finish sound good here

[Medium]
Spacing:

00:12:730 (2,3) - nazi but spacing
00:14:182 (2,1) - little issue
00:16:278 (1,2,1) - spacing
00:19:343 (2,1) - little issue
00:30:472 (1,2,1) - look here
00:33:859 (2,1) - spacing o3o
00:41:601 (2) - look here
00:42:891 (2) - spacing

Placement:

00:08:214 (4) - move it to x: 152 y: 168
01:11:762 (1,2) - this pattern can look better why don't you try something like:
SPOILER

[Hard]

00:24:020 - add a circle + finish here and remove it from the prev circle
Unsnapped inherited point : 00:38:785 - snap to 00:38:778

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2013-05-19T08:08:52+00:00

Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

You must update your diffs to v12 - just simply open them and then save directly.

[Extreme]

00:21:117 (6) - move to 294:88 for better flow?
00:34:907 (7) - move to 291:241?
00:46:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我认为把三连放在00:46:762 (4,5) - 这个位置而不是(1,2,3)的位置会更好听~后面同样
00:50:472 (7,8) - 各增加一次折返？
01:03:375 (7,8) - 交换位置感觉flow会更好
01:06:278 (7,8) - ^
01:11:762 (4) - 囧………………

[Hard]

00:08:536 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow?
00:20:149 (1,2,3,4) - 建议把三连放到红线上slider前
01:20:633 (1) - 做为hard这位置略坑，放到和前面(5) stack或者232:304？
01:23:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 同样……hard里放着长的串有些太凶残了吧……

[Medium]

00:07:246 (1,2,3,4) - 位置弄匀称一点会更好看吧比如这样：
SPOILER

[Basic]

00:25:311 (1) - 从这里开始感觉clap用过头了啊听着有点吓人
01:07:891 (2,3,4) - 我认为2/1的长度比3/2要合适
01:28:536 (1) - 如果停在红线上的话那么节奏上来说应该加个折返才好，或者是直接延长到白线上(2/1长度)
01:32:407 (1,2) - ^，类似

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-05-20T02:31:20+00:00

基本都改了除了

00:21:117 (6) - move to 294:88 for better flow? - 算是恶趣味ww 和后面也有对应

00:46:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我认为把三连放在00:46:762 (4,5) - 这个位置而不是(1,2,3)的位置会更好听~后面同样 - 跟着钢琴音摆了所以没动

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2013-05-20T10:54:57+00:00

code

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hollywood Galaxy.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45311
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Hollywood Galaxy
TitleUnicode:
Artist:dj TAKA
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:Megurine Luka
Version:Sp3's Taiko
Source:REFLEC BEAT
Tags:popner spboxer3 KONAMI BEMANI drum'n'bass DeeN
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256,192,87972,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88053,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88375,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88536,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,89343,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89504,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,89827,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,90795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,91117,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,91601,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,92085,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,92569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,92892,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,93134,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,93376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,93537,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,94988,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,95230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95472,5,12,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,97004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,98375,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,99020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,104988,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105311,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105472,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105794,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,107461,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107515,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107622,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107891,5,4,0:0:0:0:

改掉魚蛋的不規則排法

Megurine Luka

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Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-05-20T23:43:04+00:00

updated

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2013-05-21T12:02:44+00:00

irc rechecked with mapper, fixed several unrankable stuffs

Bubbled~~!!

tayko_old

tayko_old 2013-05-28T22:54:26+00:00

good song

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-06-01T06:12:36+00:00

lol hi

General
- Hard has no kiai time. You better put that in

Basic
00:22:730 (3) - Add reverse would sound nice because there's a scale going on in the bgm but the current slider suddenly stops

00:45:956 (1) - Default soft finish on head, would introduce this stanza nicely
01:11:762 (1) - hm doesn't hurt to remake this slider with the newer method xD http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787254
01:33:698 (2) - the sudden 90 degree looks kinda ugly imo, shape it like (3)
01:36:924 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note

Medium
hm do you feel the diff gap between this and Easy is a little much?

01:24:665 (1,2,1) - some symmetry won't hurt http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787266
01:25:956 (1,2) - Using Soft set sound appropriate here~
01:46:601 (1) - you could replace this with a spinner to lower the intensity?

Hard
- Consider naming this "Advanced" to match the rest of the diff names

00:38:536 (1) - unsnapped green line right after this slider
01:23:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think you can make this stream neater http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787272 i guess more straighter or something
01:25:956 (1) - Finish, hear bg music
01:34:988 (1,2) - Ctrl + H http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787274 , i feel like the transition between 01:34:827 (9,1) - is too extreme atm

Extreme
00:54:343 (9) - NC? shortens combo and fits the scale in the bgm going back up imo
01:04:665 (9) - ^
01:47:327 (1,2,3,4) - hm I'd lower the volume or use Soft set to match the softer piano tone

Really unique hitsounds xD!

Megurine Luka

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Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-06-01T09:05:45+00:00

Fixed all except the name of Hard

I followed RB naming pattern since it is a game on RB. ~

Thanks -3-

Noobita

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Joined June 2009

Noobita 2013-06-12T17:29:10+00:00

go ;w;

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-06-18T03:21:32+00:00

irc recheck
no kds

SPOILER

21:16 LunarSakuya: general
21:16 Megurine Luka: =v=
21:19 LunarSakuya: do you know about how many taiko mods there are
21:20 Megurine Luka: I forget :<
21:20 LunarSakuya: lol ok
21:21 LunarSakuya: the folder looks fine~
21:22 Megurine Luka: ouo
21:22 LunarSakuya: Basic, if you check AImod for distance snap, there's 3 things you can check
21:22 LunarSakuya: seems like they're only like a grid off lol
21:24 LunarSakuya: 01:00:149 (3) - move 2 grids down to make a diamond shape with 00:58:214 (3,1,2,3) - , would be nicehttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818893
21:25 Megurine Luka: fixed~
21:25 LunarSakuya: 01:25:956 (1) - Finish
21:26 LunarSakuya: 01:32:407 (1) - Clap on tail for hitsound consistency?
21:27 LunarSakuya: if so, also 01:34:988 (3) - clap on head
21:27 LunarSakuya: and 01:36:278 (4) - clap
21:27 Megurine Luka: added~
21:27 LunarSakuya: 01:42:085 (2) -
21:28 LunarSakuya: thats it for basic =v=
21:28 Megurine Luka: ok ovo
21:30 LunarSakuya: Medium, HP+1 but feel like it's already kinda hard...
21:30 Megurine Luka: yes 0.0
21:32 LunarSakuya: 00:46:440 (2) - i feel like the claps on these sliders emphasize the wrong part of the bgm
21:33 Megurine Luka: you mean in the middle?
21:33 LunarSakuya: yeah the reverse
21:33 LunarSakuya: or maybe even the rhythm itself
21:34 Megurine Luka: 0.0 already have clap I think?
21:34 LunarSakuya: i meant they sound wierd
21:34 LunarSakuya: it's too loud
21:34 Megurine Luka: oh
21:34 LunarSakuya: for the piano
21:35 Megurine Luka: del ed~
21:35 LunarSakuya: xD alright
21:35 LunarSakuya: 01:01:439 (1) - Finish on head? i hear cymbals in the bgm~
21:35 Megurine Luka: ok~
21:35 LunarSakuya: 01:02:730 (1) -
21:36 Megurine Luka: added ovo
21:36 LunarSakuya: 01:04:020 (1,2) -
21:36 LunarSakuya: 01:05:310 (1) -
21:36 LunarSakuya: lol sorry
21:37 Megurine Luka: that's fine I understand your meaning ~
21:38 Megurine Luka: all added ovo
21:38 LunarSakuya: kk
21:39 LunarSakuya: 01:06:601 (1) - delete the 4th slider point? it's going in the opposite direction which i found kinda funny http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818907
21:39 LunarSakuya: if you do, same for (2)
21:40 Megurine Luka: that would be fine for me but I think that's popner's style?
21:41 LunarSakuya: oh lol i guess we can leave it for now
21:41 Megurine Luka: ouo
21:41 LunarSakuya: unless you wanna talk to him before i bubble
21:42 Megurine Luka: he might still sleeping so ~
21:44 LunarSakuya: xD yeah i could always wait another day

21:45 LunarSakuya: 01:42:730 (1) - Finish on head for cymbals
21:45 Megurine Luka: oh I actually fixed the sliders XD
21:45 LunarSakuya: xDD okay
21:46 LunarSakuya: 01:46:601 (1) - Finish
21:46 Megurine Luka: added
21:46 LunarSakuya: 01:25:956 (1) - finish on head xD
21:46 LunarSakuya: yea theres random cymbal spots around
21:46 LunarSakuya: pattern's ok though ^^
21:46 Megurine Luka: lol
21:47 Megurine Luka: ouo
21:47 LunarSakuya: 01:01:439 (1) - and finishes in this section, similar to basic
21:47 LunarSakuya: and thats it for medium
21:51 LunarSakuya: lol how2modtaiko
21:52 Megurine Luka: I don't know too ~
21:53 LunarSakuya: well no unrankable issues at least
21:53 Megurine Luka: lol
21:54 LunarSakuya: so i guess Hard now~
21:55 LunarSakuya: 00:08:375 (4) - Delete Finish, don't hear it following anything
21:56 LunarSakuya: 00:18:053 (4,1) - i feel this jump is a bit too big for a hard compared to the rest of the map
21:57 LunarSakuya: you could Ctrl + G (1,2) to fix this?
21:57 Megurine Luka: I actually exchange 2 and 3
21:57 LunarSakuya: okay
21:57 Megurine Luka: that would be easier
21:57 Megurine Luka: ouo
21:57 LunarSakuya: sure

21:59 LunarSakuya: 00:52:730 (2,3,4,1) - yeah too extreme imo
21:59 LunarSakuya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818919 perhaps move (4) down here or something
22:00 Megurine Luka: fixed~
22:00 Megurine Luka: I moved 2 and 4 a bit down
22:01 LunarSakuya: kk
22:01 Megurine Luka: http://puu.sh/3idbH.jpg
22:01 LunarSakuya: pretty skin xD
22:02 LunarSakuya: yeah looks nice
22:02 Megurine Luka: ouo
22:04 LunarSakuya: 01:01:117 (7,8,9,10,11) - a pattern more for insane, a reverse slider would do just fine imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818923
22:05 Megurine Luka: fixed~
22:06 LunarSakuya: 01:21:117 (6,1,2,3,4) - this kinda came off as random, perhaps something simpler like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818925
22:06 LunarSakuya: spacing-wise
22:07 Megurine Luka: fixed~
22:09 LunarSakuya: 01:24:504 (1) - Change this to 1/8 and start on the white tick, if you slow down the music it's still in 1/8
22:10 Megurine Luka: you mean start from 01:24:665 ?
22:11 LunarSakuya: yeah
22:11 Megurine Luka: fixed
22:12 LunarSakuya: k
22:12 LunarSakuya: 01:25:956 (1) - Finish sounds cool
22:14 LunarSakuya: 01:47:327 (1,2) - Make these touch?
22:14 LunarSakuya: and thats it, i'm just worried about the large spacing a bit
22:15 Megurine Luka: stacked ovo
22:22 Megurine Luka: I lost connect for a minute. did you say anything about ext yet?
22:23 LunarSakuya: not yet~
22:23 Megurine Luka: oh ok ovo
22:25 LunarSakuya: 00:50:472 (7,8) - Bring these closer, the spacing is very similar to 00:50:311 (6,7) -
22:27 Megurine Luka: fixed
22:28 LunarSakuya: 01:03:536 (8,9,10) - looks a bit random again, equalize the spacing between these
22:28 LunarSakuya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818943 a nicer diamond or something =v=
22:28 Megurine Luka: fixed
22:28 Megurine Luka: yep ovo
22:31 LunarSakuya: 01:11:762 (4) - hmm NC?
22:32 Megurine Luka: OK~
22:32 LunarSakuya: 01:26:359 (6) - delete note, hear the bgm closely
22:33 Megurine Luka: But I like this stream TUT
22:34 LunarSakuya: xD well alright i guess
22:34 LunarSakuya: move (7) up a grid too, it juts out a little
22:34 Megurine Luka: fixed~
22:37 LunarSakuya: im kinda skeptical about the last several notes lol
22:37 LunarSakuya: trying to follow the piano seems almost impossible? xD
22:38 LunarSakuya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818950 i think 1/8 is alright =v=
22:39 Megurine Luka: lost connect again T.T did you say anything after 01:26:440 (7) - ?
22:39 LunarSakuya: im kinda skeptical about the last several notes lol
22:39 LunarSakuya: trying to follow the piano seems a bit impossible
22:39 Megurine Luka: lol
22:39 Megurine Luka: yep
22:39 LunarSakuya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818950 i think 1/8 is alright
22:40 Megurine Luka: 0.0 But I like the current one 0.0
22:43 LunarSakuya: oops i meant 1/4*
22:43 LunarSakuya: er the current one?
22:43 Megurine Luka: yep 0.0 1/8
22:44 LunarSakuya: uhh
22:44 LunarSakuya: i guess its playable
22:45 Megurine Luka: yes 0,0
22:47 LunarSakuya: im gonna try to ask another bat
22:47 LunarSakuya: i really dont know lol

So yeah the last notes in Extreme, i feel uncomfortable doing anything now orz
leaving this open for now..ok ok sorry lol
Edit: rebubble

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2013-06-18T04:00:40+00:00

It's fine. T.T Still thanks =3=

Nymph

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Nymph 2013-06-18T04:32:03+00:00

I think those sliders are fine because it is pretty easy to read and play, and it did fit the music :3

popner

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popner 2013-06-18T04:44:23+00:00

The last kick sliders fit the music and play fine(easily 300 them all with the first trial). But I will suggest them to be symmetric.

小圈好难打啊，HR党会疯

Here is some suggestions for Extreme, feel free to ignore.
00:52:246 (1,2,3) - the spacing is inconsistent here
00:54:746 (6) - I would like to delete this note to make the rhythm consistent with 00:52:246 (1,2,3), but it is up to you.
01:00:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part. 00:56:278 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:57:569 (1,2,3,4,5) are symmetric in direction, so I think this part is better to be a symmety of 00:58:859 (1,2,3,4,5). Random example:

SPOILER

eveless

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Joined April 2009

eveless 2013-06-18T12:44:44+00:00

Checked the last kick sliders as Megurine Luka's request, I think they're readable/playable/rankable.

CSY the corrupt

431 posts

Joined March 2010

CSY the corrupt 2013-06-18T12:47:07+00:00

[EXT]

01:47:327 (1,2,3,4) - OF COURSE READABLE.

Megurine Luka

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Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-06-19T04:17:15+00:00

popner wrote:
The last kick sliders fit the music and play fine(easily 300 them all with the first trial). But I will suggest them to be symmetric.

小圈好难打啊，HR党会疯

fixed to symmetric

0.0 大圈总觉得太简单了一些，毕竟都是常用梗

CrissCross

32 posts

Joined August 2010

CrissCross 2013-06-19T04:17:58+00:00

and here is rep:http://puu.sh/3j2WB.osr

The sliders are readable and playable

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-06-19T13:29:13+00:00

small changes made by mapper~ rebubble =v=

Megurine Luka

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Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-06-19T16:01:22+00:00

Thanks sakuya =3=

Megurine Luka

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Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-06-20T10:54:25+00:00

OMG What happened?

Nymph

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Nymph 2013-06-20T10:59:07+00:00

SPOILER

18:42 Megurine Luka: OK
18:43 Nymph: 好开始了
18:43 *Nymph is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/150116 dj TAKA - Hollywood Galaxy [Extreme]]
18:43 Megurine Luka: =V=
18:44 Nymph: 00:18:859 (1,2,3) - ok maybe make this pattern more straight?
18:44 Nymph: 00:20:149 (1,2,3) - and same stuff here
18:44 Megurine Luka: 0.0~
18:45 Megurine Luka: I like curved sliders =3= and Nymph
18:45 Nymph: ok then
18:46 Nymph: 01:34:343 (5,6,7,8) - maybe try CTRL+H?
18:46 Nymph: 01:47:327 (1,2,3,4) - and maybe this one could be more :symmetry ?
18:46 Nymph: oh this is already fixed, my bad :3
18:47 Megurine Luka: OK -v-
18:47 Megurine Luka: -3-
18:48 Nymph: nothing found in hard diff :3 good job here
18:50 Megurine Luka: Thank you 3
18:56 Nymph: well seems that is all