DarknessAngel wrote:

Done ~ 結果在明天前完成摟 ~
[attachment=0:66a3d]EGOIST - The Everlasting Guilty Crown (TV Size) (-HaRuNa-) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu[/attachment:66a3d]
對了，幫我把我的Insane的最後一個轉盤對照我的Hard的綠線設定一下
http://puu.sh/o2BC

No_Gu wrote:

request from in-game PM


这sliderball真心不好。。
[Easy]
00:14:409 (1,2) - 1的折返和2的开头whistle
00:26:269 (5,1,2,1) - 前面都蛮简单的突然都是1/1感觉不太好
00:33:944 (1,2) - 不清楚这形状的用意。。我觉得这里音乐没太起伏
00:36:735 (1,2,3) - 弄弯好点，别overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284733

[Normal]
00:14:235 (1) - 结尾whistle
00:06:037 - 00:28:362应该是没clap音的
00:32:200 (6) - ...
00:54:874 (4) - 前面也是3repeat，这里可以加一个折返，不影响间距
01:06:037 (4) - ^而且这个如果不改的话间距是不对的
总体来说感觉这有待改进..降点音量。。听完好吵

[Insane]
00:49:293 (1,2) - 好歹弄个音量渐变吧。。
01:21:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 排的不好看，而且不好打

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
不想TV还略俩难度，想不想看随你。你要是不看的话以后就略你GD好了
开头我觉得whistle应该是按吉他(还是贝斯。。)走，你现在这个感觉有点乱
01:18:595 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉突然降下来不太好
这whistle感觉还是略吵

[D.N.Angel]
00:31:153 (1,2) - 前面都很跳这里突然慢下来虽然加了spacing但是感觉不是那么好，何况后面跟3的spacing也不小
01:18:246 (4) - NC下吧。。完全读不出来是1/1
01:19:293 (5,6,1,2) - 音乐应该是没降的啊。。
AR9感觉还是不太适合。。毕竟这难度并不是太难
orzN的默认音效感觉还是不合曲

这图整体略乱.音效排列之类的。。

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

• 
  Settings
  [list:36429]有hitcircleoverlay.png需要加個sliderborder:255,255,255
  approachcircle.png需要調成128*128.
  01:24:176 (1) - spinner結束在01:27:316 - 吧 結尾不該在1/2上

[Easy]

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 01:20:688 (2,3) -

mapping

1. 00:06:037 (1,2) - 對稱放好 上下有些差距
2. 00:56:269 (4,1) - 已經接近於overlaps了 建議排遠些

[Normal]

• 
  
  mapping
  

1. 00:23:130 (4,1) - 用ctrl+H得方式 不要用ctri+>這樣的轉法
2. 00:26:793 (1,2) - 節奏怪異

這難度基本上沒什麼問題 但是non-stop 1/2節奏我受不了...

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

• 
  
  Hitsound
  

1. 聲音太過吵雜了... 尤其是kiai後面的whistle聲~ 那個真的蠻吵的

你這音效是在下太鼓嗎lol

mapping

1. 00:45:456 (3,6) - 這兩個slider下的節奏位置有點奇怪. 打起來很彆扭

排的算不錯 但是音效太吵了些

[Insane]

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 00:37:781 (4,6) -

Hitsound

mapping

1. 00:14:583 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 阿哈哈哈~無語了 這個排法看起來沒設計阿~ 多想點設計吧.
2. 00:37:781 (4,5) - 不對稱嗎?
3. 00:44:932 - 這邊用note 讓slider在00:45:107 - 開始
4. 00:46:328 (8) - ^
5. 01:21:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - 這個..間距縮小些... 這樣太難打了.

同樣是1/2 non-stop 附帶1/4拍 lol

[D.N.Angel]

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  
  Hitsound
  

1. 聲音太過吵雜了... 尤其是kiai後面的whistle聲~ 那個真的蠻吵的
2. 00:08:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這段為什麼沒有whistle?
3. 00:33:246 (1) - slider尾加個whistle? 個人感覺加了比較好

mapping

1. none

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

~

Cirno wrote:

老板给不给kd再说您看下行吗no change也好别没反应啊D:

Cirno wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]

感觉没啥问题...

[Normal]

00:11:618 (1,2,3) - 这里感觉沿用后面(4,5)节奏更好
00:26:793 (1) - 延后1/2然后00:26:793 - 加circle吧 现在这个无论节奏还是音响都很突兀
01:06:037 (4) - 多1repeat更好吧..


[Insane]

00:14:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - .....这 梗荒?
00:39:874 (3,5) - 按照你的flow惯性的话，应该时间轴换位 现在这样也能打不过略有不顺
01:21:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 提一句这串貌似难度超过最高难度那串了...

[D.N.Angel]

无处不在啊...
00:13:711 (3,4) - 这里或许ctrl+r过来更顺
00:28:362 (2,3) - 这好丑...不用那个旋转不好吗
00:34:467 (4,5,1) - 这里很明显转120要好得多
00:50:688 - (好吧从这里开始的节奏完全不知道你在干什么 感觉是乱堆3连...
01:18:246 (4) - 还以为是1/2
01:23:828 (5) - 这里不妨多一个repeat然后晚开始spinner 1/4

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

最好还是AR8 这个密度7真心看不清
00:49:293 (1) - 这梗也弄去I里不好吗..
00:50:688 - 节奏还是感觉略乱..
01:23:479 (1) - 这里不妨多一个repeat然后晚开始spinner 1/4

祝你好运>_>

Cirno wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

无处不在啊...
00:13:711 (3,4) - 这里或许ctrl+r过来更顺 我賭你是說後面那個長條>_>，改了
00:28:362 (2,3) - 这好丑...不用那个旋转不好吗 好啊
00:34:467 (4,5,1) - 这里很明显转120要好得多 很明顯這個好的多
00:50:688 - (好吧从这里开始的节奏完全不知道你在干什么 感觉是乱堆3连... 如果有哪裡不適合的請指出來我會很感謝你，儘管只有一個也好
01:18:246 (4) - 还以为是1/2 加了NC
01:23:828 (5) - 这里不妨多一个repeat然后晚开始spinner 1/4 保留

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

最好还是AR8 这个密度7真心看不清 我個人覺得還好，先保留著
00:49:293 (1) - 这梗也弄去I里不好吗.. 所以說你叫我改Ins的那個麼？這MOD感覺真新穎。Ins那個之所以在Ins裡就是因為它比較難，不好嗎？
00:50:688 - 节奏还是感觉略乱.. 噢
01:23:479 (1) - 这里不妨多一个repeat然后晚开始spinner 1/4 同Hard

祝你好运>_> 噢>_>

No_Gu wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
不想TV还略俩难度，想不想看随你。你要是不看的话以后就略你GD好了 額...沒理由不想看的吧
开头我觉得whistle应该是按吉他(还是贝斯。。)走，你现在这个感觉有点乱 我是覺得還能接受:O
01:18:595 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉突然降下来不太好 我是為了強調音樂中的叮叮聲才這樣放的
这whistle感觉还是略吵

[D.N.Angel]
00:31:153 (1,2) - 前面都很跳这里突然慢下来虽然加了spacing但是感觉不是那么好，何况后面跟3的spacing也不小 這是為了跟vocal啊，它慢我也跟著慢 ~
01:18:246 (4) - NC下吧。。完全读不出来是1/1 fixed
01:19:293 (5,6,1,2) - 音乐应该是没降的啊。。 恩...應該沒關係吧:O我只是想做點變化而已<3
AR9感觉还是不太适合。。毕竟这难度并不是太难 我考慮下，我個人覺得AR9不會不好
orzN的默认音效感觉还是不合曲 嘛，我習慣在副歌中下N呢，真不好的話我下次換吧

这图整体略乱.音效排列之类的。。 我做的時候完全沒發現呢

DarknessAngel wrote:

Cirno wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

无处不在啊...
00:13:711 (3,4) - 这里或许ctrl+r过来更顺 我賭你是說後面那個長條>_>，改了
00:28:362 (2,3) - 这好丑...不用那个旋转不好吗 好啊
00:34:467 (4,5,1) - 这里很明显转120要好得多 很明顯這個好的多
00:50:688 - (好吧从这里开始的节奏完全不知道你在干什么 感觉是乱堆3连... 如果有哪裡不適合的請指出來我會很感謝你，儘管只有一個也好
01:18:246 (4) - 还以为是1/2 加了NC
01:23:828 (5) - 这里不妨多一个repeat然后晚开始spinner 1/4 保留

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

最好还是AR8 这个密度7真心看不清 我個人覺得還好，先保留著
00:49:293 (1) - 这梗也弄去I里不好吗.. 所以說你叫我改Ins的那個麼？這MOD感覺真新穎。Ins那個之所以在Ins裡就是因為它比較難，不好嗎？
00:50:688 - 节奏还是感觉略乱.. 噢
01:23:479 (1) - 这里不妨多一个repeat然后晚开始spinner 1/4 同Hard

祝你好运>_> 噢>_>

No_Gu wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
不想TV还略俩难度，想不想看随你。你要是不看的话以后就略你GD好了 額...沒理由不想看的吧
开头我觉得whistle应该是按吉他(还是贝斯。。)走，你现在这个感觉有点乱 我是覺得還能接受:O
01:18:595 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉突然降下来不太好 我是為了強調音樂中的叮叮聲才這樣放的
这whistle感觉还是略吵

[D.N.Angel]
00:31:153 (1,2) - 前面都很跳这里突然慢下来虽然加了spacing但是感觉不是那么好，何况后面跟3的spacing也不小 這是為了跟vocal啊，它慢我也跟著慢 ~
01:18:246 (4) - NC下吧。。完全读不出来是1/1 fixed
01:19:293 (5,6,1,2) - 音乐应该是没降的啊。。 恩...應該沒關係吧:O我只是想做點變化而已<3
AR9感觉还是不太适合。。毕竟这难度并不是太难 我考慮下，我個人覺得AR9不會不好
orzN的默认音效感觉还是不合曲 嘛，我習慣在副歌中下N呢，真不好的話我下次換吧

这图整体略乱.音效排列之类的。。 我做的時候完全沒發現呢

謝謝MOD ~

DarknessAngel wrote:

我才發現SP3的MOD沒看到
不好意思我明天改
HaRuNa繼續找MOD沒關係 ~

spboxer3 wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

• 
  
  Hitsound
  

1. 聲音太過吵雜了... 尤其是kiai後面的whistle聲~ 那個真的蠻吵的

你這音效是在下太鼓嗎lol

mapping

1. 00:45:456 (3,6) - 這兩個slider下的節奏位置有點奇怪. 打起來很彆扭 這看起來彆扭但玩起來還好 ~

排的算不錯 但是音效太吵了些 大家都這麼說-0-

[D.N.Angel]

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  
  Hitsound
  

1. 聲音太過吵雜了... 尤其是kiai後面的whistle聲~ 那個真的蠻吵的 你們一直吐槽真的會給我壓力orz，好了我刪了一半
2. 00:08:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這段為什麼沒有whistle? 賣萌用 我對照後面的
3. 00:33:246 (1) - slider尾加個whistle? 個人感覺加了比較好 added ~

mapping

1. none

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

~

DarknessAngel wrote:

spboxer3 wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

• 
  
  Hitsound
  

1. 聲音太過吵雜了... 尤其是kiai後面的whistle聲~ 那個真的蠻吵的

你這音效是在下太鼓嗎lol

mapping

1. 00:45:456 (3,6) - 這兩個slider下的節奏位置有點奇怪. 打起來很彆扭 這看起來彆扭但玩起來還好 ~

排的算不錯 但是音效太吵了些 大家都這麼說-0-

[D.N.Angel]

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  
  Hitsound
  

1. 聲音太過吵雜了... 尤其是kiai後面的whistle聲~ 那個真的蠻吵的 你們一直吐槽真的會給我壓力orz，好了我刪了一半
2. 00:08:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這段為什麼沒有whistle? 賣萌用 我對照後面的
3. 00:33:246 (1) - slider尾加個whistle? 個人感覺加了比較好 added ~

mapping

1. none

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

~

謝MOD ~

bossandy wrote:

Yaya!!~~ finish~

Here is the Taiko BG, download and names this BG "Taiko BG"~

add "bossandy" to tags~

Go go!!~~

• [General]

1. It feels like there's something wrong with the offset, you should find someone who's good at checking offsets IMO.
   
   [Easy]
2. 00:38:828 - Add notes here like this? If you do, fix the spacing of the following slider.
3. 01:04:642 (3,4) - Fix Spacing.
   
   [Normal]
4. 00:27:490 (3) - Turn this slider into something like this. It sounds better imo to follow the vocals.
5. 00:58:886 (1) - Move this slider to 00:58:711 and add a hitcircle on 00:59:758 above 00:59:932 (3) 's start.
   
   [D.N.Angel's Hard]
6. 01:22:083 (1,1,1) - Remove the NC's?
   
   [D.N.Angel's]
7. 00:49:293 (1,2) - Turn these sliders into 1 spinner
8. 01:20:688 (2) - Remove "clap" on start.

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~ Here's my mod and sorry for being late >< (a request from my queue)

[list][General]
[*]It feels like there's something wrong with the offset, you should find someone who's good at checking offsets IMO.

[Easy]
[*]00:38:828 - Add notes here like this? If you do, fix the spacing of the following slider. No Fixed 0.0
[*]01:04:642 (3,4) - Fix Spacing. Fixed

[Normal]
[*]00:27:490 (3) - Turn this slider into something like this. It sounds better imo to follow the vocals. OK~
[*]00:58:886 (1) - Move this slider to 00:58:711 and add a hitcircle on 00:59:758 above 00:59:932 (3) 's start. OK~

That's all, I hope it helps!~
Awesome Song and map!~ I like it! >w<
here, take a star!~ ^w^ good luck~

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

• [D.N.Angel's Hard]

1. 01:22:083 (1,1,1) - Remove the NC's? no fixed
   
   [D.N.Angel's]
2. 00:49:293 (1,2) - Turn these sliders into 1 spinner good idea ~ changed
3. 01:20:688 (2) - Remove "clap" on start. removed ~

1. 00:01:851 (4) - finsh刪掉吧 其他diff都沒加呢:3
2. 00:04:641 (4) - ^
3. 00:19:293 (3,4) - 這兩個slider形狀用一樣吧~
4. 00:22:083 (1,2) - 後面弧度不好看>_> 拉好一點唄:3
5. 00:26:269 (5) - 這個圈和00:27:665 (2)疊到了 不是很好看呢... 把(2)往下移一些??
6. 00:28:362 - 這邊我覺得很適合做噴泉效果~~(先加條線kial打勾 再在下條線把kial打叉) 會用嘛..?? 不會用在叫我唄~~@w@
7. 00:39:176 - 加個圈?
8. 00:49:293 - 加條30%的綠線? (跟DNA君一樣:>)
9. 00:52:432 (3) - 往下4格? 我不是很喜歡直線..@_@
10. 01:12:316 - 加個圈~ (或折返..) 轉盤移到01:13:014在開始
11. 01:22:083 (4,5) - 可以試著做成微彎?? 好看些呢>w< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288811

1. 00:06:386 (2,3) - 形狀用一樣吧~
2. 00:25:572 (2) - 這種扭曲slider盡量別再E & N出現好些.. 新手會誤讀>_>
3. 00:28:362 - 同E~
4. 00:49:293 - 同E~ 30%的綠線
5. 01:12:316 - 加個圈
6. 01:12:665 - ^
7. 01:13:014 - 轉盤在這開始才對啦><
8. 01:19:293 (4) & 01:20:688 (6) - 做個微彎好看很多的:p (這個真心推薦@@") http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288825
9. 01:22:083 (2) & 01:23:479 (4) - 各往上移3格~ 看起來比較不會那麼直:3

1. 00:11:967 (2,3) - 先位置對調 然後在頭尾對調?? 打起來挺順的:P
2. 00:16:851 (1) - 頭尾對調?
3. 00:28:362 - 噴泉噴泉~
4. 00:35:165 (1) - 往上一格?

1. 00:14:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 這好坑阿..
2. 00:17:549 (1,2,3) - 這連打打起來很違和>_> 往後延半拍好些~~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288837
3. 00:25:397 (4,5,6,7) - 可以排成這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288844
4. 00:28:362 - 噴泉^w^
5. 00:39:874 (3) - 和(5)的位置對調?? (5)和(4)位置再對調?? 額..這樣~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288847
6. 00:59:932 (6) - 改成疊在01:00:107 (7)上面打起來好些~~
7. 01:07:258 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這邊絕對可以做些變化的>< 別都排一樣阿>_>..
   (我把第2次改了一下~ 你看看好不好@w@) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288850 密碼給你唄:> (不會用密碼叫我吧~~)
   

   344,212,68653,5,0
   312,336,68827,2,0,B|236:340|169:297,1,140,0|8
   164,176,69351,1,0
   200,56,69525,2,0,B|275:51|342:94,1,140,0|8

8. 01:12:316 - 再加個4折返的slider...? 轉盤01:13:014這邊開始~~
9. 01:22:781 (17) - 這個圈就該是折返了~ 不然打起來感覺多一個圈!? 像這樣~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288853

1. 00:07:956 (2) - 往上3格再往右1格? 對稱些:3
2. 00:21:211 (4) - 這樣排?? (Ctrl + H 再 Ctrl + J 再 Ctrl + R) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288860
3. 00:28:362 - 噴吧~
4. 00:47:200 (1,2,3) - 和之前3個的組合不一樣呢>< 應該這樣排~~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288864

12BARRY21 wrote:

Yo~~

[Easy]

1. 00:01:851 (4) - finsh刪掉吧 其他diff都沒加呢:3
2. 00:04:641 (4) - ^
3. 00:19:293 (3,4) - 這兩個slider形狀用一樣吧~
4. 00:22:083 (1,2) - 後面弧度不好看>_> 拉好一點唄:3
5. 00:26:269 (5) - 這個圈和00:27:665 (2)疊到了 不是很好看呢... 把(2)往下移一些??
6. 00:28:362 - 這邊我覺得很適合做噴泉效果~~(先加條線kial打勾 再在下條線把kial打叉) 會用嘛..?? 不會用在叫我唄~~@w@
7. 00:39:176 - 加個圈?
8. 00:49:293 - 加條30%的綠線? (跟DNA君一樣:>)
9. 00:52:432 (3) - 往下4格? 我不是很喜歡直線..@_@
10. 01:12:316 - 加個圈~ (或折返..) 轉盤移到01:13:014在開始
11. 01:22:083 (4,5) - 可以試著做成微彎?? 好看些呢>w< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288811

[Normal]

1. 00:06:386 (2,3) - 形狀用一樣吧~
2. 00:25:572 (2) - 這種扭曲slider盡量別再E & N出現好些.. 新手會誤讀>_>
3. 00:28:362 - 同E~
4. 00:49:293 - 同E~ 30%的綠線
5. 01:12:316 - 加個圈
6. 01:12:665 - ^
7. 01:13:014 - 轉盤在這開始才對啦><
8. 01:19:293 (4) & 01:20:688 (6) - 做個微彎好看很多的:p (這個真心推薦@@") http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288825
9. 01:22:083 (2) & 01:23:479 (4) - 各往上移3格~ 看起來比較不會那麼直:3

[Insane]

1. 00:14:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 這好坑阿.. 不懂 0.0
2. 00:17:549 (1,2,3) - 這連打打起來很違和>_> 往後延半拍好些~~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288837
3. 00:25:397 (4,5,6,7) - 可以排成這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288844
4. 00:28:362 - 噴泉^w^
5. 00:39:874 (3) - 和(5)的位置對調?? (5)和(4)位置再對調?? 額..這樣~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288847
6. 00:59:932 (6) - 改成疊在01:00:107 (7)上面打起來好些~~
7. 01:07:258 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這邊絕對可以做些變化的>< 別都排一樣阿>_>..
   (我把第2次改了一下~ 你看看好不好@w@) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288850 密碼給你唄:> (不會用密碼叫我吧~~)
   

   344,212,68653,5,0
   312,336,68827,2,0,B|236:340|169:297,1,140,0|8
   164,176,69351,1,0
   200,56,69525,2,0,B|275:51|342:94,1,140,0|8

8. 01:12:316 - 再加個4折返的slider...? 轉盤01:13:014這邊開始~~
9. 01:22:781 (17) - 這個圈就該是折返了~ 不然打起來感覺多一個圈!? 像這樣~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288853

就這樣唄~~ 歌好聽送顆星:>
加油啦~~~~~~~~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

[D.N Angel's Hard]

1. 00:11:967 (2,3) - 先位置對調 然後在頭尾對調?? 打起來挺順的:P
2. 00:16:851 (1) - 頭尾對調?
3. 00:28:362 - 噴泉噴泉~
4. 00:35:165 (1) - 往上一格?
   all fixed ~

[D.N.Angel]

1. 00:07:956 (2) - 往上3格再往右1格? 對稱些:3 唔，我這是為了讓整個prat美觀點才放這的
2. 00:21:211 (4) - 這樣排?? (Ctrl + H 再 Ctrl + J 再 Ctrl + R) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288860 哦好 ~
3. 00:28:362 - 噴吧~ 噴了 ~ (?
4. 00:47:200 (1,2,3) - 和之前3個的組合不一樣呢>< 應該這樣排~~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288864 故意的啦，虧你能注意到xD

就這樣唄~~ 歌好聽送顆星:>
加油啦~~~~~~~~~

B2IN wrote:

i'm sorry.. i'm late

[General]
fine
[Easy]
00:26:618 (1,2) - it's my suggestion


00:54:874 (2,3,4) - hm.. this pattern seems to stiff..
[Normal]
01:17:897 (1) - remove NC
01:18:072 (4) - NC
[D.N.Angel's Hard]
fine
[Insane]
I think you need more long slider, imo :q
00:40:223 (4) - remove clap
00:40:572 (5) - clap
00:40:572 (5) - NC for jump pattern

good luck

ykcarrot wrote:

Hello
Overall, it's fine enough for me.
So here are my some suggestions.


[General]
That approachcircle.png is hard to see due to it isn't contrasty.
01:24:176 (1) - (Spinner) End at 01:27:229 [blue bar]



[D.N.Angel]
OK


[Insane]
00:40:572 (1) - Remove NC


[D.N.Angel's Hard]
Nothing to point out...
However it's too hard for Hard diff IMO. :p


[Normal]
00:46:502 (4,5) - Ctrl+H ?
00:56:269 (2) - Unstacking is more easy to read


[Easy]
01:10:223 (4) - It touches HP bar


Good luck ;D

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General
approach建议用清晰点的……这skin配上BG 我最后一个难度打起来有困难TAT


[Easy]
Hitsound
00:50:688 (2) - 开头finish？其他难度同


[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:52:083 (3) - 这后面的空拍不太舒服 我个人还是推荐更连贯的节奏 尤其是在KIAI部分 后面同
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Hitsound
00:32:200 (6) - 开头结尾加上clap比较好吧 感觉更连贯
00:54:874 (4) - 我个人觉得第二个转折还是加上clap比较好 理由同上 后面一样的节奏同


[Insane]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:26:967 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这节奏有点太生硬了相比变化的vocal……考虑一下别的节奏？
感觉节奏和排列有点生硬 以后的map里可以考虑丰富一下



大概先这些OAO 加油吧

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello~

[Easy]

AR+1 如何，感覺有點慢 OK~

[Normal]

感覺有點難0.0 可能是2連點、折返Slider很多
整體上還好


[Insane]

OD-1 Fixed
00:14:583 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 我打了幾場都miss，只有1次全中；這已經接近空氣人app了Orz；換掉吧 我想留著 0.0 這是防DT裝置 xD


就這樣吧，Good luck~

those wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
Looks like a weaker Insane. The spacing and stacking suggests this is harder than a Hard difficulty. Suggesting things to fix this would cause a remap, so I'm going to refrain from doing so.

The Hard diff in this beatmap is Harder than mine,so I think it is ok



[D.N.Angel]
AR8 is definitely fast enough for this map.

I'll consider that

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Background picture says "Guiltly" as opposed to "Guilty".I changed BG
spinner-osu.png spells "Osu!" and the "o" should not be capitalized.
Fix these and full upload.

[Easy]
01:16:502 (1,3) - Remove Finish. You have 5 Finishes in a row and the song continues, and you don't have other Finishes after that. Space these Finishes out.NO~

[Normal] changed some~
00:20:339 (5) - NC
00:21:735 (1) - RNC
00:23:130 (4) - NC
00:24:525 (1) - RNC
00:30:281 (1) - RNC
00:30:979 (3) - NC
00:35:862 (1) - RNC
00:36:735 (3) - NC
01:16:502 (1,3) - Remove Finish.same as easy
01:18:595 (2) - Add Finish to head.
01:19:990 (4) - Add Finish to head.


[Insane]changed some~
00:14:235 (1) - RNC
00:14:409 (3) - NC
00:15:107 (1) - RNC
00:15:804 (5) - NC
00:28:188 (1) - RNC
00:28:362 (2) - NC
00:32:549 (9) - Is not very fitting. You can easy fit another slider and note in place of this to make gameplay much smoother.I think it's ok 0.0
00:45:107 (6,9) - Same goes for these. Just because the vocals are stretched out for over a measure, it doesn't mean you can't map to whatever else is happening in the music.^
01:22:083 (9) - NC
01:22:781 (17) - NC


Good luck :3

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