Byakugan249 wrote:

alright i'm here~. mod requested on mine and Elly-chan's queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
Consider adding "Flight of the bamboo cutter" because that's 1 half of the original theme.

[Normal]
when i played through the map, it felt like an easy more than a normal. there's no challenge when it comes to the timing, so i suggest that you increase the OD by 1 to give of a bit of a challenge for players since the BPM is slightly high and the patterns double the challenge.fixed~
00:05:711 (2) - how about a whistle at the beginning for emphasis in the piano?nice~
00:09:501 (3) - same as above, but at the end.ok
00:12:027 (1) - this part right here is calm. the finish is way too loud and it's too distracting for me and it might be for other players. add a timing point and decrease the volume of the finish so that it'd match this calm part. i highly suggest 30% since it matches the song's volume IMO.fixed~
00:17:080 (1) - ^^
00:33:501 (3) - how about a whistle at the beginning for a nice whistle pattern to the next slider?sounds nice~
00:44:869 (1,2,3,4) - re-arrange the pattern like this. that overlap might bother other players during gameplay. but personally, i'd consider that a bit messy, so i think doing this would look neater during gameplay.looks nice~
00:56:869 (2) - why is there a finish on the sliderbody? it sounds unfitting with this part of the song, and it might bother other players during gameplay. my best bet is that you should remove it to avoid this.fixed~
01:12:027 (1) - just because you added a finish , that doesn't mean it's a NC. remove the NC because the instrumental is connected from the previous note.fixed and add NC to the next note~
01:12:659 (3) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. this is where the instrumental changes in this part of the song.ok~
01:54:975 (4) - move this to the left so that (3,4,5) makes a triangle same reason as 00:44:869 about the overlap, and like this.fixed~
01:57:501 (1) - only remove the finish at the beginning. it bothered me the most because i feel that it doesn't belong there at all during gameplay.lok~deleted it
02:30:974 (2,4) - if you want to continue the whistle pattern, then add whistles here because it looks like you suddenly stopped for no reason here.
03:18:816 (4) - add a whistle pattern for a nice whistle pattern? i always feel that this note needs a whistle since (2) has a whistle to start the pattern.you're right~
not bad. the hitsounding can be better, but other than that, it's a fun diff.


[Lunatic]
00:11:395 (6) - add a whistle at the end for emphasis on the piano, also make this a NC because the piano changes here.ok~
00:13:290 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, remove the NC because the piano is connected from the previous note.fixed~
00:18:974 (4) - since (1,2) have whistles, add a whistle at the end of this slider for consistency and same reason as 00:11:395 about the emphasis.ok
00:47:869 (3) - replace this 1/1 slider for a circle and a 1/2 slider. i think that by doing this, it'll follow the instrumental a lot accurate during gameplay.ok
00:51:816 (1) - remove the NC for this note. the instrumental is still going from the stream.ok
00:52:448 (3) - make the NC if you follow the suggestion above. this is where the instrumental changes.ok
00:54:974 (4) - curve this slider properly. the curve on this slider breaks the flow in the whole map. make this slider symmetrical for the flow to continue during gameplay.ok~
02:04:132 (6,7) - consider stacking this note on (11) at the stream so that it'd look somewhat neater during gameplay.fixed~
02:04:448 (8) - same as 00:51:816, minus following the suggestion above.fixed~
02:05:080 (1) - same as 00:51:816.fixed~
02:05:711 (5) - same as above, but that's if you follow both suggestions.fixed~
02:14:553 (5,6) - make these 2 sliders look the same as the other, and the flow and transition plays oddly here during gameplay IMO.fixed~
02:29:553 (3,4,5) - i don't like these 1/1 sliders. they don't seem to fit with the music and thus breaking the flow in this part. replace it for a set of 1/2 slider and circles to make it fun and to make it flow smoother during gameplay.fixed~
this time it's the slider shapes and combos. some of the sliders can look nicer for flow, and some of the combos can be improved if you listen to the song carefully.fixed~

I guess that's it. for now focus on doing several self changes and if it's possible get modders for this mapset.. when you think it's ready, ask another MAT, and don't give up on this map. when i 1st heard this song i was excited. i don't wanna see this song in the grave because this is 1 of the songs that people will enjoy IMO. GL

Thanks for modding~

eikkaleyd wrote:

Byakugan249 wrote:

Deleted parts are all done, for it's easier for you to read my reply~

[eikka's Hard]
01:46:606 (5) - add claps at both ends? i think it'll give off a nice clap pattern from the previous note during gameplay. Hmm, I tried many kinds of ways to add claps, but they all seem to have problems... so still no change here. Also I think it's OK now~
01:54:185 (3) - same as 01:46:606. ^
01:56:711 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:22:764 (3) - add a clap here to continue the clap pattern from the previous clap. i always feel that something is missing here during gameplay, even if the drums are in this part of the song. Add claps on both beginning and end
same comment as normal.

Thank you for modding
http://puu.sh/15wim

Updated~

Hello

[General]
- Fine

[Rainbow's Easy]
- For the start of the song which is very calm the hitsounds are way too loud, I recommend using 40% volume
- 00:03:185 (3,1) ~ It would be better if this anti-jump wasn't here
- 00:08:237 ~ Add whistle?
- 00:09:501 ~ ^
- 00:12:027 (6,1) ~ Try to not use many anti-jumps
- 00:20:869 ~ Why is this section necessary?
- 00:39:816 ~ NC?
- 00:42:343 ~ Add NC then remove NC on the next object
- 00:42:659 ~ Add a note, this is song that is really fast and to keep the rhythm you have to keep the pace with the notes not leaving many spaces blank
- 00:46:132 (4,5) ~ Exchange their places (timeline)
- 00:49:922 (2,3,4) ~ Try to put them in a row (timeline)
- 00:52:764 ~ Add notes here and on the next white tick
- 00:55:290 ~ ^
- 01:03:501 ~ Add a note
- 01:07:922 ~ This blank space is not good
- The part after the first break is so much better compared to the part before it, try to do what you did in the part that is after, you used more sliders and that went pretty good
- 02:38:553 (1,2) ~ This anti-jump isn't nice
- 02:48:343 ~ Add NC then remove NC on the next object
- 02:53:711 (1,2) ~ The anti-jump
- 03:06:343 ~ NC
- 03:12:659 ~ Fill this space

[Normal]
- The whistles are too loud at the start of the song
- 02:48:027 ~ It has many repeats so I'm not so sure but I guess it's not a problem

[eikka's Hard]
- The whistles at the start of the song could be improved
- 01:39:027 (5,6) ~ Spacing
- 01:46:448 (4,5) ~ ^
- 01:49:132 (3,4) ~ ^
- 01:54:027 (2,3) ~ ^
- 01:56:553 (4,5) ~ ^
- 01:57:343 (6,7) ~ ^
- 02:02:080 (3,4) ~ ^
- 02:42:974 ~ Remove the whistle
- 02:49:922 (3,4,5) ~ Spacing
- 02:57:501 (3,4,5) ~ Spacing
- 03:05:080 (3,4,5) ~ ^
- 03:07:290 (2,3,4) ~ ^
- 03:10:132 (3,4,5) ~ ^

[Lunatic]
- The whistles are too loud at the start
- 01:01:882 ~ This spinner only gives 1000 bonus which makes it unrankable
- 01:42:659 ~ NC for slowdown?

[Scorpiour]
- 03:22:764 ~ Add finish

It could use some more mods

All Fix ThX>_<
http://puu.sh/1aUF3

lovhin456 wrote:

[Normal]
- The whistles are too loud at the start of the songmake the volume a bit low~
- 02:48:027 ~ It has many repeats so I'm not so sure but I guess it's not a problemi thought it's fine~

[Lunatic]
- The whistles are too loud at the startsame as normal
- 01:01:882 ~ This spinner only gives 1000 bonus which makes it unrankablei heard that 1000 is rankable nowdays?well I'll ask for more suggestions~
- 01:42:659 ~ NC for slowdown?yeah~fixed

Thanks a lot for modding~

Hi there

[Rainbow's Easy]
02:36:343 (2) - Little spacing error here
02:57:501 (3) - Can you move down a bit, so it doesn't overlapped by previous slider?


[eikka's Hard]
* Add "Flight of the bamboo cutter" in tags, for consistency through each diff

02:17:080 - Add note here?


[Lunatic]
01:02:869 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players, since it blend with spinner. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/548908
02:27:027 (3,4) - Not stack correctly with tail slider during gameplay (look at test mode)


Once you done, in-game PM me

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Rainbow's Easy]
02:36:343 (2) - Little spacing error herefixed
02:57:501 (3) - Can you move down a bit, so it doesn't overlapped by previous slider?fixed


[eikka's Hard]
* Add "Flight of the bamboo cutter" in tags, for consistency through each difffixed~

02:17:080 - Add note here?no,I think it's fine here since the mapper used similar rhythm~


[Lunatic]
01:02:869 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players, since it blend with spinner. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/548908fxed~
02:27:027 (3,4) - Not stack correctly with tail slider during gameplay (look at test mode)stacked again~


Once you done, in-game PM me

Thanks a lot for modding,Leorda ww
(To Sun Rainbow and eikkaleyd:There's just a few things that should be changed,so I may change them for you ww
If you have any thing to change,feel free to post here~

Can you grab me a bamboo?

Bubbled

Leorda wrote:

Can you grab me a bamboo?

Bubbled

/me gives leorda a bamboo :3

please change the artist to "Masayoshi Minoshima"
and the title to "竹取飛翔"
romanised title: "Flight of the Bamboo Cutter"

source: http://vgmdb.net/album/6903

Let me pop that for you happy30

Alstroemeria Records is not an artist

Looks like we forgot about this one.

[General]
Scorpiour is in the tags, but did not contribute to the difficulties themselves. Normally the storyboarder is not included in map tags.

[Rainbow's Easy]00:01:290 - Start the map with a slider? The map starts off with no audio, so the player can't use the music to hit the beat properly. A slider would make the beginning of the map much easier.
00:19:606 (1,1) - Change this so it's one long spinner. This is an easy difficulty, so the spinners could be longer. Also, a spinner after another is pretty unexpected for beginner players
02:42:974 (2) - Point this down so it's not touching the next slider.

[Normal]
00:01:289 (1,2) - Make this a slider? The map starts off with no audio, so the player can't use the music to hit the beat properly. A slider would make the beginning of the map much easier.

[eikka's Hard]
00:01:290 (1,2) - Make this a slider? The map starts off with no audio, so the player can't use the music to hit the beat properly. A slider would make the beginning of the map much easier.
00:36:659 (4) - Remove a repeat? The second repeat was pretty unexpected.
03:20:868 (5) - This slider end isn't snapped properly! It's only 2 ms off, but it's making AIMod upset so it probably should be fixed.

[Lunatic]
00:01:290 (1,2) - Make this a slider? The map starts off with no audio, so the player can't use the music to hit the beat properly. A slider would make the beginning of the map much easier.
02:01:290 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - This part was unexpectedly hard. This is the hardest part of the map, and it makes everything else look too easy. I recommend decreasing the spacing for this part by a lot, or changing it so it is easier.
03:03:185 (1) - Shorten this a repeat? It would make this part easier to play.

Hope I didn't miss anything.

Charles445 wrote:

Looks like we forgot about this one.

both sr and eikka are busy with school work,so their diffs will be handled by me~

[General]
Scorpiour is in the tags, but did not contribute to the difficulties themselves. Normally the storyboarder is not included in map tags.fixed

[Rainbow's Easy]00:01:290 - Start the map with a slider? The map starts off with no audio, so the player can't use the music to hit the beat properly. A slider would make the beginning of the map much easier.fixed
00:19:606 (1,1) - Change this so it's one long spinner. This is an easy difficulty, so the spinners could be longer. Also, a spinner after another is pretty unexpected for beginner playersfixed
02:42:974 (2) - Point this down so it's not touching the next slider.done~

[Normal]
00:01:289 (1,2) - Make this a slider? The map starts off with no audio, so the player can't use the music to hit the beat properly. A slider would make the beginning of the map much easier.

[eikka's Hard]
00:01:290 (1,2) - Make this a slider? The map starts off with no audio, so the player can't use the music to hit the beat properly. A slider would make the beginning of the map much easier.yeah
00:36:659 (4) - Remove a repeat? The second repeat was pretty unexpected.fixed
03:20:868 (5) - This slider end isn't snapped properly! It's only 2 ms off, but it's making AIMod upset so it probably should be fixed.fixed!

[Lunatic]
00:01:290 (1,2) - Make this a slider? The map starts off with no audio, so the player can't use the music to hit the beat properly. A slider would make the beginning of the map much easier.ok
02:01:290 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - This part was unexpectedly hard. This is the hardest part of the map, and it makes everything else look too easy. I recommend decreasing the spacing for this part by a lot, or changing it so it is easier.I changed them XD
03:03:185 (1) - Shorten this a repeat? It would make this part easier to play.ok

Hope I didn't miss anything.

Thanks a lot for checking this ww

Hi~ random mod~

[General]
啊♂？Lunatic难度简直恶俗 明明是pro mapper 怀疑是first map 建议remap don't forget kds

[Lunatic]
00:01:922 (3) - better shape plz
00:13:290 (2,4) - ^
00:27:659 (3) - ^
00:29:395 (9,10,1) - spacing inconsistency
00:47:237 (7) - 碰到血条了 建议考虑
00:47:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉这一段没flow 建议重摆
00:58:764 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 试一下改成soft 然后全加上whistle?
01:04:922 (1,2,3) - better shape
01:10:132 (4) - NC
01:54:343 (7) - ^
01:56:869 (10,11,1) - NC问题我就不说了
02:08:237 (3) - shape
02:19:606 (5,6,1) - nc问题
02:27:027 (3,4) - stack问题
02:27:659 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 莫名
02:58:685 (12) - 碰到血条

[eikka's Hard]
ok

[Normal]
至少检查下slider的恶俗程度
00:28:448 (2,3) - shape
01:39:974 - remove whistle
01:40:132 - whistle
03:06:343 (1) - 建议改成1/1折返滑条
03:18:974 (1,2) - shape

[Rainbow's Easy]
00:57:185 (2,3) - 不建议如此overlap
01:03:501 (1) - clap
02:12:343 (3) - 不建议这种莫名的折返滑条
02:17:080 (3) - shape
03:12:027 (2) - 稍微往下移一点
03:13:922 (1) - spacing

Flower wrote:

Hi~ random mod~

[General]
啊♂？Lunatic难度简直恶俗 明明是pro mapper 怀疑是first map 建议remap don't forget kds kd拿好 remap再见

[Lunatic]
00:58:764 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 试一下改成soft 然后全加上whistle?柑橘不太必要
02:27:027 (3,4) - stack问题故意的 不这样play的时候叠不起来
02:27:659 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 莫名 fine

[Normal]
至少检查下slider的恶俗程度懒
01:39:974 - remove whistle感觉不好
01:40:132 - whistle^
03:06:343 (1) - 建议改成1/1折返滑条不太必要


[Rainbow's Easy]
00:57:185 (2,3) - 不建议如此overlap还好

引用的是没改的 Thanks for modding~(花花真是恶俗不堪无法直视

[Normal]
02:15:184 (3) - Slider isn't snapped properly.
02:18:342 (1) - Slider isn't snapped properly.
02:19:605 (4) - Slider isn't snapped properly.

[Lunatic]
02:22:132 (1) - This slider has an extra repeat! Shorten this slider a repeat.
02:52:922 (9) - This slider is the wrong length! It should end on the next red tick.
02:58:685 (12) - Maybe remove this circle so it goes with the melody?

That should be all. Please don't update the Easy or Hard so I don't have to recheck them

Charles445 wrote:

[Normal]
02:15:184 (3) - Slider isn't snapped properly.
02:18:342 (1) - Slider isn't snapped properly.
02:19:605 (4) - Slider isn't snapped properly.

[Lunatic]
02:22:132 (1) - This slider has an extra repeat! Shorten this slider a repeat.
02:52:922 (9) - This slider is the wrong length! It should end on the next red tick.
02:58:685 (12) - Maybe remove this circle so it goes with the melody?

That should be all. Please don't update the Easy or Hard so I don't have to recheck them

All fixed here!Thanks a lot for this.(I'm not sure whether to give kd or not...orz

Sorry, what I meant by not snapped properly objects on Normal, I meant that they aren't on the timeline properly. Check AIMod for information

[Normal]
02:15:184 (3) - Slider is still snapped badly. Move the slider around on the timeline and try moving the endpoint of the slider a bit. Use AIMod to make sure it's snapped properly.
02:18:342 (1) - Slider is still snapped badly. Move the slider around on the timeline and try moving the endpoint of the slider a bit. Use AIMod to make sure it's snapped properly.
02:19:605 (4) - Slider is still snapped badly. Move the slider around on the timeline and try moving the endpoint of the slider a bit. Use AIMod to make sure it's snapped properly.

Charles445 wrote:

Sorry, what I meant by not snapped properly objects on Normal, I meant that they aren't on the timeline properly. Check AIMod for information

[Normal]
02:15:184 (3) - Slider is still snapped badly. Move the slider around on the timeline and try moving the endpoint of the slider a bit. Use AIMod to make sure it's snapped properly.
02:18:342 (1) - Slider is still snapped badly. Move the slider around on the timeline and try moving the endpoint of the slider a bit. Use AIMod to make sure it's snapped properly.
02:19:605 (4) - Slider is still snapped badly. Move the slider around on the timeline and try moving the endpoint of the slider a bit. Use AIMod to make sure it's snapped properly.

Yeah...Sorry for that >_< This time I have checked AIMod and made sure that they are snapped properly

hao

Charles445 wrote:

~Rebubbled!~

Thanks a lot > <

Ranked!

kanpakyin wrote:

Ranked!

Really surprised ww
Thanks a lot kpy~

Congratz!!

Finally!

Touhou <3

This map is love!!! Congratz!!

wow, my diff from soooooo long ago

hao

何等古老的坟。。。

._.

Thanks a lot ,every one~~> <