Taka A.K.A Otokaze - Saigetsu (Short Ver.) · forum

LKs

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LKs 2012-03-30T08:56:54+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月4日 at 22:25:15

Artist: Taka A.K.A Otokaze
Title: Saigetsu (Short Ver.)
Tags: Jazz HipHop Pokie karenying spboxer3
BPM: 102
Filesize: 9673kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.48 stars, 217 notes)
Insane (4.9 stars, 355 notes)
Normal (2.82 stars, 141 notes)
Sp3's Taiko (4.83 stars, 500 notes)

Download: Taka A.K.A Otokaze - Saigetsu (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[彩る四季、风と音色]

[- Full Ver. -]

[Taiko by Spboxer3]

[Normal by Pokie]

[Hard by karenying]

[CtB skin by 2nnt]

[SB by TTTTTTTTTTTT]

[Unusual diff]

[Original Insane diff]

Last edited by LKs 2012-06-04T14:25:28+00:00, edited 64 times in total.

Pokie

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Pokie 2012-03-30T09:03:24+00:00

　
[Ye]

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-04-02T13:59:35+00:00

[前排]

Gasaiyuno-chan

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Gasaiyuno-chan 2012-04-03T05:24:10+00:00

hello.

Ibuki Suika

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Ibuki Suika 2012-04-03T18:26:05+00:00

umm......

Saigetsu_old

Saigetsu_old 2012-04-04T07:18:26+00:00

hi

Mikarunoel131_DELETED

Mikarunoel131_DELETED 2012-04-04T12:27:06+00:00

Hi here I am =D Thank you for helping and modding in advance ^^

Nice song and good Luck =D

Mik-ey

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Mik-ey 2012-04-04T13:43:07+00:00

Insane is kinda overmapped or I'm just not good enough lol.
I like the song

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Regou

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Regou 2012-04-04T15:48:18+00:00

啊不好 Flower Dance v2啊...(歌明明就很慢啊!圖卻2x速)
不過挺好玩的
[Insane]
HP drain+1, AR-1

Unusual diff的note很奇怪 O___o

pimp

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pimp 2012-04-05T17:00:41+00:00

nice map

Kotek-

Kotek- 2012-04-06T12:31:04+00:00

Wow~ Nice SB, song and hitsounds :3

I favourited this~

Good luck with rank :3

LKs

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LKs 2012-04-06T12:32:21+00:00

Kotek- wrote:
Wow~ Nice SB, song and hitsounds :3

I favourited this~

Good luck with rank :3

thank you

GamerX4life

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GamerX4life 2012-04-06T12:45:08+00:00

nice map!
I really like the triangles

SuperMIC

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SuperMIC 2012-04-06T16:31:15+00:00

A very nice map, but I'm finding the jumps and spacing in Unusual to be very unreadable. Can you properly space those please? :O The Normal diff looked fine, and the Insane diff was cool, but the triangles, although pretty neat, may be unreadable to some.

Anyway, nice map!

LKs

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LKs 2012-04-06T16:45:45+00:00

SuperMICrophone wrote:
A very nice map, but I'm finding the jumps and spacing in Unusual to be very unreadable. Can you properly space those please? :O The Normal diff looked fine, and the Insane diff was cool, but the triangles, although pretty neat, may be unreadable to some.

Anyway, nice map!

thanks for long comment. I'll find many ppl to testplay this once this is pending, if they all think so, sadly, Unusual might be pulled down.

But I still believe this kind of spacing is much easier than 1/4 streams

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2012-04-06T21:42:50+00:00

Have a star

Urlangce

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Urlangce 2012-04-09T06:57:46+00:00

歌很好听~~
SB做的很好~~
Hitsounds也很不错~~

可能是我技术不够的原因吗？我觉得Unusual我找不到节奏。。。

Insane 好快！！！这么缓和的曲子居然这么快，有点出乎意料，虽然目前还打不过，但是感觉很好啊~
个人觉得00:37:006(2)(3)这里2个删除在00:37:153加一个不是感觉更好点么？
01:17:153这里删掉后面的(4)加一个Slider怎么样？感觉要好点
01:21:858^
新手Mapper，可能间接错误勿怪~~

confeito14

confeito14 2012-04-09T10:36:16+00:00

hi~
Good map it heels my heart

[Normal]
more use curved sliders?
01:15:976 there slow part was difficult to play for me.=3=
reduce circles and use sliders? but i have no knowledge about Easy, Normal diff, so ignore pls
I'm not FL pro,It was my limit ;_;

SPOILER

HRDTFL

[Insane]
01:44:947 (3,5) - delete them?

[SB]
Very good
one point, I thought ... It is Racing cloud

Song tittle is "Saigetsu". "Time and tide wait for no man" It's true, but I hope that this is lazy white clouds.

nice map, Good Luck~

LKs

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LKs 2012-04-10T04:52:54+00:00

confeito14 wrote:
hi~
Good map it heels my heart

[Normal]
more use curved sliders?
01:15:976 there slow part was difficult to play for me.=3= you're so pro=.=
reduce circles and use sliders? but i have no knowledge about Easy, Normal diff, so ignore pls
I'm not FL pro,It was my limit ;_;
SPOILER
HRDTFL
[Insane]
01:44:947 (3,5) - delete them?

[SB]
Very good
one point, I thought ... It is Racing cloud
Song tittle is "Saigetsu". "Time and tide wait for no man" It's true, but I hope that this is lazy white clouds. may changing in some degree

nice map, Good Luck~

thanks you two

Flower

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Flower 2012-04-10T09:36:00+00:00

Um I think the cursor here is great but I don't like it cause I am near-sighted【滚
so....
unusual:
00:19:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I cannot catch it all ~ try only use 3 1/3 notes at a time. (i am just noob so don't beat me)
00:56:564 (1,2,3,4) - do you agree it's hard here? or just awkward

Insane:
00:57:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) and many sections after - I would rather it divided into several colors. or you can choose keep.
00:57:006 (2,3) and 01:53:476 (2,3) - add a note between each pair?

etc

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etc 2012-04-10T16:19:41+00:00

很好听的歌
insane
总体版面排列感觉有点不够紧凑,有点太远了感觉.
00:53:917 (2) - 方向和1保持一致比较好点?
00:57:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 之类,个人不太喜欢这种排列 4次一样的这种排列打完以后脑袋会晕掉OAQ
01:47:741 (1,2) - 重叠在一起会比较好看?

01:47:741 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 和第一次的排列完全一样会不会单调 >_>

非常好听的一首歌图也很好加油>_>

Dino99

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Dino99 2012-04-11T02:06:46+00:00

Yo~ 稍微看了下~

[Normal]

00:50:094 (1,2) - 我覺得這樣比較好:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288372
00:56:270 (3) - 沒對稱.. 往右一格再往上一格 (Grid Level 4) (3)跟(2)好像不同形狀?...
01:36:123 - 無用綠線
01:40:829 - ^

[Unusual]

00:56:270 (5,6) - 位置對調? 我覺得打起來比較順~
01:42:888 - 加個圈?
01:52:300 - ^

[Insane]

00:47:741 (1) - 弧度條一下使其變成一個六角形吧~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288412
01:51:270 (1,2,3) - 做個anti-jump??

star~

LKs

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Topic Starter

LKs 2012-04-11T02:40:38+00:00

thanks all

Shino

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Shino 2012-04-11T10:33:24+00:00

FREE Storyboard suggestion time. (sometimes it needs to do)
I just checked storyboard code in notepad, not in osu!, so maybe I can do a wrong suggestion.
If it causes, just ignore it! As I said, this is not a mod, but a suggestion.

*I'll recheck this SB in May 5th. (and you don't need to give kds in that time)

[General]
Red line = Remove it please.
Blue line = Change it please.

.osb file

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\B01.jpg",320,240
F,0,94947,,0
F,0,94947,95388,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\B2.png",320,240
M,0,43035,,320,240

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white ball.png",320,240
F,0,38329,,0.45
M,0,76564,,320,240 I don't understand why this line exists.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\black.jpg",320,240
M,0,90,,320,240

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\whitedo.png",320,240
M,0,24211,,320,240

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2012-04-11T16:16:09+00:00

Rururu~

Small mod4mod Mod X3

First of all: EPIC SB
Second: Euh, One diff is normal, other is insane, and one is unusual? O_O?
Third: Relaxing song~~

Normal
00:15:973 (1,2) - I'm almost sure the Distance spacing is too small
00:18:914 (2,3,1) - Distance Spacing isn't the same, fix it C:
01:17:447 (2,3,1) - ^
01:19:800 (2,3,1) - DS too small :3
01:22:153 (2,3,1) - ^
01:51:858 (2,3,4,5) - Make maybe a square figure of it? :3

Unusual
00:04:208 (1,2,1) - DS isn't the same :c
00:04:796 (1) - NC?
00:09:502 (1) - ^
00:27:888 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This part is totally unpredictable :c Change it :c

Insane is making me dizzy because of the high AR @_@
+ star :3

Kuria

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Kuria 2012-04-12T00:02:44+00:00

very nice map with the beautiful SB

star'ed

ertyukjh010

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ertyukjh010 2012-04-12T10:27:20+00:00

M4M~ ~~(Mod for money)~~
話說試聽第一下，有種Flower Dance的感覺

[Normal]

00:22:741 (2,3) - 00:20:388(2,3)這個節奏比較好，而且Normal也不適合太難的節奏~
00:15:976 (1) - N不適合減速囉lol 老實說我第一眼也看不出是連點還是甚麼；又例如01:24:064，我誤讀成速度改回來= =

[Insane]

00:40:388 (3) - 這個位置有1個挺重要的音0.0 看看要不要縮短Slider或者其他方法；不過看著您後面都是這樣，應該是故意的就算了吧
00:57:741 (1~12,~1,~10,1~5) - 這段真的太超過，這規律也不容易看得清楚orz 感覺這是玩弄玩家而不是給玩家玩= =
01:07:153 (&%@&$%&) - ^ 這裡的話，換著我會做這種 → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289331

嗯嗯，有點像FlowerDance那種突然加速移動的感覺
這張圖也讓我想起Nold的Luv Letter lol
加油吧~

Aurele

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Aurele 2012-04-12T15:42:26+00:00

That's an awesome storyboard. o_o

CSY the corrupt

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CSY the corrupt 2012-04-12T15:43:05+00:00

[Insane]

没什么问题.中间那两串挺有趣但读图不好的话会晕在那.

[Unusual]

没上音效?
00:21:711 (6,1) - 感觉不换一个比较清晰明了的间距的话会比较坑爹,毕竟这节奏是挺独特
00:23:917 (6,7,1) - ^
00:28:329 (6,7,8,1) - ^

[Normal]

01:24:064 (2) - 这个2虽然是按照一致的间距来摆可是差别太小,第一次打的话有可能会读不懂尤其是新手

新手mod貌似mod不出个啥...

LKs

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Topic Starter

LKs 2012-04-13T07:13:23+00:00

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[Insane]

00:57:741 (1~12,~1,~10,1~5) - 這段真的太超過，這規律也不容易看得清楚orz 感覺這是玩弄玩家而不是給玩家玩= = 我自己做出这段的时候也觉得太难了但以我的水平打了两三次后也能A 虽然那部分还是miss了5~6个但不觉得这很难

Mikarunoel131_DELETED

Mikarunoel131_DELETED 2012-04-13T20:15:25+00:00

And hi again to a new comment xD
Thanks for modding last time x3
And hope you will get this beatmaps ranked someday =D

Have a good day and much fun ^-^

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-04-14T01:55:03+00:00

HI~ I just have a suggestion for you .
you can ignore this

00:39:506 (4) - move the slide on this time
00:39:947 (5,6) - add the note

song is beautiful

good luck~

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2012-04-16T11:28:19+00:00

wocao hedeng danteng ._. sb henmei