Fall Out Boy - The Take Over, The Break's Over · forum

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2008-12-22T11:44:50+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zaterdag 14 februari 2009 at 19:34:58

Artist: Fall Out Boy
Title: The Take Over, The Break's Over
Source: Fall Out Boy
Tags: fall out boy take over the break rock
BPM: 149,94
Filesize: 6157kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4,69 stars, 359 notes)
Insane (4,94 stars, 454 notes)
Normal (3,95 stars, 271 notes)

Download: Fall Out Boy - The Take Over, The Break's Over
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi everybody,
Nice song from Fall Out Boy. My first completed beatmap.
Enjoy

update: fixed the minor spacing issues. (Didn't realize there were so much).

+bump

Last edited by Lesjuh 2009-02-14T18:36:15+00:00, edited 25 times in total.

Al-Azif

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Al-Azif 2008-12-24T08:42:18+00:00

Timing 13068

Easy:
The last spinner start at 3:30.1 (red tick) and end at 3:31.3 (red tick)
similar to normal and hard

Normal: distance snap 0.7x, level 3 Grid
2:24.120 (5,6), move right 1

2:31.522 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,3,4,5,6,7,8,9), select them in timeline, then use left arrow key go back to 2:31.522,
move the (2) right 2, up 1, whole group will be moved

2:37.125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10), select them in timeline, then use left arrow key go back to 2:37.125,
move the (1) right 1, up 1, whole group will be moved

3:17.141 (2,3) move these circle one by one, distance snap 0.7x, level 3 Grid, move right 1

Hard: distance snap 0.8x, level 3 Grid
there are many small spacing error, I will try to find out where is it.

00:14.868 (8,9,10,11) group them and move right 1
00:18.068 (8,9,10) group them and move right 1
00:18.670 (11) right 1
00:22.871 (3,4,5) move them one by one, left 1
01:00.086 (3,4) move them one by one, down 1
01:00.486 (1) move left 1

01:02.287 (5,6,7) fix by using DS 0.8x
01:08.089 (5,6,1) space farther from (4), fix by using DS 0.8x

02:55.332 (2) ~ 02:57.933 (6) why the DS suddenly change there

fix them by using using DS 0.8x with level 3 Grid

02:58.933 (3,4,5,6,7,8) group them and move right 1, down 1

Other than that, this is AMAZING for a first map, good job

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2008-12-24T10:07:37+00:00

Al-Azif wrote:
Timing 13068

Easy:
The last spinner start at 3:30.1 (red tick) and end at 3:31.3 (red tick)
similar to normal and hard

Normal: distance snap 0.7x, level 3 Grid
2:24.120 (5,6), move right 1

2:31.522 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,3,4,5,6,7,8,9), select them in timeline, then use left arrow key go back to 2:31.522,
move the (2) right 2, up 1, whole group will be moved

2:37.125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10), select them in timeline, then use left arrow key go back to 2:37.125,
move the (1) right 1, up 1, whole group will be moved

3:17.141 (2,3) move these circle one by one, distance snap 0.7x, level 3 Grid, move right 1

Hard: distance snap 0.8x, level 3 Grid
there are many small spacing error, I will try to find out where is it.

00:14.868 (8,9,10,11) group them and move right 1
00:18.068 (8,9,10) group them and move right 1
00:18.670 (11) right 1
00:22.871 (3,4,5) move them one by one, left 1
01:00.086 (3,4) move them one by one, down 1
01:00.486 (1) move left 1

01:02.287 (5,6,7) fix by using DS 0.8x
01:08.089 (5,6,1) space farther from (4), fix by using DS 0.8x

02:55.332 (2) ~ 02:57.933 (6) why the DS suddenly change there
fix them by using using DS 0.8x with level 3 Grid

02:58.933 (3,4,5,6,7,8) group them and move right 1, down 1

Other than that, this is AMAZING for a first map, good job

Thanks man

I fixed all of this and everything should be fine now.

Al-Azif

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Al-Azif 2008-12-24T11:36:17+00:00

few things I left.. oops
Easy: all good

Normal:
00:42.679 (3,4,5,6,7) I think you're going to make them symmetrical?

- first group (3,4) move left 1, up 1
- (5) left 1
- (6) down 1
- (7) left 2

00:44.680 (1) move left 2, down 1
but there have a 'jump' between the next slider (1) at 00:45.080, that may have problem.
I suggests to move down the slider (1) as the pic showing below,
after that, fix the circle (2)

00:46.281 (3) - change new combo colour
01:37.901 (4,1,2,3,4) group them and move down 1

last spinner start at 03:30.146 (red tick) end at 03:31.347 (red tick)

Hard:
03:12.939 (5) up 1
03:15.540 (2) left 1

Last edited by Al-Azif 2009-01-08T17:04:10+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2008-12-24T13:03:36+00:00

fixed

Al-Azif

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Al-Azif 2008-12-24T13:33:41+00:00

Hard : 03:15.540 (2) left 1 , using level 3 grid

All good to give BAT to check

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2008-12-25T18:24:43+00:00

wow, i really have to look it over. thanks for your help

WyndII

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WyndII 2009-01-06T15:52:07+00:00

whoa this is awesome lesjuh =D

kingcobra52

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kingcobra52 2009-01-06T20:35:55+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2009-01-06T20:39:03+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Al-Azif

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Al-Azif 2009-01-08T18:06:17+00:00

"03:18:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Very confusing part"

the notes on the blue tick is very very hard to catch it.
if you to keep that, maybe change to slider? that's help

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2009-01-08T18:07:24+00:00

fixed
It's something similiar to normal now

CheeseWarlock

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CheeseWarlock 2009-01-14T21:55:48+00:00

[Normal]
02:16:31 (5,6,7) - Make this spacing consistent with:
02:22:71 (3,4,5,6) - This.

[Insane]
This entire map has minor issues with spacing. It's playable, but just messy. I'd recommend going through the whole map with Distance snap set to a constant value. This part here:
01:57:50 (5,6,7,1) - Is the only error that really stands out.

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2009-01-14T21:56:57+00:00

yay, cheesewarlock's errors fixed

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happy30

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happy30 2009-02-11T18:19:46+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

vytalibus

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vytalibus 2009-02-12T15:11:04+00:00

Normal:
00:23:27 (2) - Weirdly-placed hitcircle. Move it forward by one 1/2 tick.

Hard:
03:17:14 (1,2,3) - A bit awkward. I know the beats go with the guitar instead of the drums, but you might want to consider putting hitsounds here.

Insane:
00:50:68 (8,9,10,11,12) - Spacing looks horrible and obvious in here.
01:28:09 (6,7,8) - Spacing could be improved here. Just position the three mentioned hitcircles so that the pattern looks nicer.
01:28:89 (1,2) - Rehaul this part. It might be better if you reference the "ohohohoh" part here so that it doesn't look like a blank space.
01:43:50 (3) - Start is hidden.

03:05:93 (5) - Overlapping slider.

03:21:14 (12) - Space this out correctly.

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2009-02-12T15:11:39+00:00

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DawnII

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DawnII 2009-02-14T18:36:15+00:00

[Normal]
03:30:14 (1) - Take out the whistle.
Same with other difficulties.

[Insane]
03:03:13 (9,1) - (9) and (1) start at the same time.

Edit: I grant you bubble foam. Make your own bubbles.

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2009-02-14T18:37:35+00:00

Everything should be okay right now, i think...
Thanks for all the support guys

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Here since the beginning

Mogsy 2009-02-14T19:08:59+00:00