Hi there.

It might be a bit too late, but can I make an Insane diff?

Also, good luck with this mapset

>< Sorry D: Im not accepting any guest diffs but thanks for offering~ ^^

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

>< Sorry D: Im not accepting any guest diffs but thanks for offering~ ^^

Then I guess I have to make a mapset by myself for this Good luck (again), anyway

;o Good luck with thatt~ ;D
and thannkyhuuu ^^

I really love this song >< /me throws kudosu star xD
Good luck ^^

Aokooo!
Thannkyhuu~ >w<

General

Shy Heart
Slider Tick Rate 2
00:59:657 (3) - Move to x: 304, y: 144
01:11:657 - Add a slider to "reverse arrow" here: 01:11:957 (red tick) and the end here: 01:12:257 (white tick)
02:22:157 (1) - That ends in: 02:22:757
02:23:057 - Remove the slider and place a note here: 02:23:357
02:23:657 - The slider has "reverse arrow" and ends here: 02:24:857
Why end there the map? xD!

Kind Heart
00:37:757 (6) - The slider ends in: 00:38:057
00:38:657 - Add a note.
00:39:257 - New combo.
01:05:357 - Add a slider to end here: 01:05:657
01:05:957 - Remove the note.
01:06:557 - Add a note.
01:19:757 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - That part is very confusing for a beginner, try to make a change there.
01:45:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
In this part you could do something like ~
01:46:457 - The slider ends in: 01:47:057
01:47:357 - Add a slider to end in: 01:47:657
01:47:957 - Add a slider to end in: 01:48:257
01:48:857 - Add a slider to "reverse arrow" here: 01:49:457 (white tick) and the end here: 01:50:057
03:11:357 - The slider ends in: 03:11:657
03:12:257 - Add a note and New combo
03:12:857 - New combo.

Brave Heart
This difficulty has a long way ~ :c
HP Drain Rate + 1
Overall Difficulty + 1
You put many streams unnecessary making the wrong play.
03:51:257 - That part was the least rate is. ~

Thank you for your mod ^^

From modding Queue


Told I only want diff which are shorter than 3 mins :/ But because it's you I will mod 2 Diffs of them



Black = advice

blue = very recommend you to follow

red = unrankable



Shy Heart

00:57:757 (1) snap slider on same ticks (red, red/white, white)

01:36:857 (1) add finish at slider beginning?

01:45:980 (1) ^

01:56:366 (1) on slider end finish?

02:25:032 (1) remove NC and add finish?


Kind Heart


OD + 1

00:47:057 (1) Slider end whistle?

00:48:998 (3) ^

01:36:903 (1) Finish? IMO it fits great to emphasize the Kiai time

01:41:075 (1) ^

01:46:590 (2) finish at slider beginning

01:53:780 (1) ^

01:54:500 (2) ^

02:05:643 (1) ^

02:10:457 (3) ^


So, that's what I found

Very beautiful song - good luck to your map

I said you could skip some diffs if you wanted but thank you ! >w<

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

I said you could skip some diffs if you wanted but thank you ! >w<

doesn't change the rule

But no problem Good luck

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

I said you could skip some diffs if you wanted but thank you ! >w<

Double post - sry >.>

Hey!

General

1. Firstly, change offset to 29645 (it's not perfect, but it should be around this one D:)
   Don't forget to resnap all notes and move your sections too.
2. Also, default clap sounds very very bad. Try this one: link. For me it sounds more better.
3. 01:56:057 - end second kiai here.

Shy Heart

1. 00:29:657 (1) - remove clap from the beginning
2. 00:37:457 (2,3) - looks and plays bad (you used 1/2 in such a easy Easy D:). Make this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:657 (1,2) - I don't like how you missed downbeat (yes, there should be downbeat, change offset and you'll see it C:). So, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:57:557 (1) - finish to the end
5. 01:07:757 (1) - no-no-no, start it from 01:08:057 - and finish on 01:08:657 -
6. 01:09:257 (2) - missed clap in the end
7. 01:12:857 (1) - remove clap from beginning
8. 01:14:057 (2) - missed clap
9. 01:15:257 (1) - remove clap from beginning D:
10. 01:17:657 (4) - finish?
11. 01:18:257 - quite strange choice of break time. Map this part.
12. 01:30:257 - ^ as you have 2 notes and then one more break. Quite irrationally.
13. 01:34:757 (1,2,3) - this red tick are hard to read. Make a slider from 01:35:057 - to 01:36:257 -
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:36:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Use copypaste is bad >:O Try to make something unique! If not, make changes which I noticed earlier. Also,
    
    01:36:857 (1) - there should be clap on the end, not on the beginning
15. 01:44:657 (2,3) - make slider, you remember. And don't forget about clap
16. 01:45:857 (1) - remove clap, and again, missed downbeat. Fix it
17. 01:53:657 (1) - clap to the end
18. 02:00:257 (5) - extend to 02:00:857 - . Kick sliders are no-no.
19. 02:05:657 (1) - clap should be on repeat, not on the beginning
20. 02:09:857 (2) - clap
21. 02:14:657 (2) - extend to 02:15:257 - (kick slider again)
22. 02:19:457 (1) - start it from 02:18:857 -
23. 02:20:657 - and then add a note here
24. 02:21:857 (3,1) - transform it to the slider:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Maybe map till 03:32:057 - ? As Normal.
    Also, you have sloooooooowwwwwww slider velocity and little spacing. That makes your map quite inaccurate. Try to use 1,0x spacing

Kind Heart

1. I must say that your claps are sometimes off. For example, 00:32:657 (4) - here should be clap, but it's here 00:33:257 (6) - and so on. Please, put claps on every second beat (as in music). I won't notice this again.
2. Again, wide your spacing to 1,0x?
3. 00:29:657 (1) - remove clap
4. 00:37:757 (6) - I don't like how 00:36:857 (5) - overlaps almost half of this slider. It bad for players and looks bad :<
5. 00:58:457 (1) - finish?
6. 01:02:957 (1) - maybe remove this note? Too many 1/2 objects D:
7. 01:07:607 - You prefer strange places for breaks. Map this break, please.
8. 01:17:357 (1,2,3,4) - nononono, use this rhythm:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:23:657 (5) - make 1/1 repeat slider. And remove 01:24:857 (1) -
10. 01:41:957 (3) - you see, it touches 01:41:057 (1) - and it looks ugly :<
11. 01:48:557 (5,6,7,8,9) - make this:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 02:00:857 (1) - end spinner on 02:02:657 -
13. 02:08:057 (1,3) - hey, make it symmetrical!
14. 02:14:057 (1) - remove finish
15. 02:19:457 (1) - remove this spinner D:
16. 02:22:457 (2,3) - nooooo make repeat slider:
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 02:35:057 - map this break.
18. 02:43:457 (1,2,3) - stack them all or unstack them
19. 02:54:557 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe make longer zigzag:
    
    SPOILER

    
    It will be more readable
20. 03:01:157 (1,2) - remove this notes. It will be good pause. Also, objects with the 1/2 distance after spinner in easy-normals are VERY bad.
21. 03:11:357 (7) - you remember? 00:37:757 (6) -
22. 03:20:057 (1,2,3) - this looks really bad, and (1) overlaps repeat arrow and makes it almost hidden. Rearrange them.
23. 03:23:057 (1,2,3) - stack them or unstack all
24. 03:24:257 (4,5,6) - and it's better to unstack it, as you have repeat slider
25. 03:27:257 (1,1) - look, make this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Spinner starts 03:30:257 - here.

Brave Heart

1. Again, remember my suggestion about hitsounds. Put claps on every 2nd beat, pleaseee.
2. 00:56:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:08:057 (2) - maybe rearrange it so that it would not overlap 01:06:857 (5) - ? As it quite hard to read
4. 01:15:857 (2,3,4) - move it some grids right so that they wouldn't be overlapped by 01:15:257 (1) - :\
5. 01:17:657 (1) - ^
6. 01:17:807 - whyyyy you have such strange breaks? D: Map it!
7. 01:29:657 - ^
8. 01:36:857 (1) - remove finish from the end
9. 01:45:257 (1) - finish to the end
10. 01:50:657 (1) - ^
11. 01:56:057 (1) - ^ to the beginning
12. 02:07:307 (1) - wait wait, this slider is hidden! >:O
13. 02:07:757 (2) - ^
14. 02:15:257 (6) - change clap to finish and then remove all claps from this part 02:15:257 ~ 02:21:257
15. 02:25:457 ~~~ - claps?
16. 02:48:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - reduce this jumps, they don't fit
17. 02:53:657 (1) - change clap to finish
18. 03:03:257 (1) - ^
19. 03:22:457 - end kiai here. And maaaap this break, huh?!
20. 04:02:057 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - naaah, separate them
21. 04:12:257 (1) - make normal speed. I don't feel speed up here
22. 04:46:457 (7) - new combo
23. 05:00:857 (4,5) - stack them as you have so tiny spacing D:
24. 05:07:757 (7) - remove finish

Not bad. But you should work more! Good luck!

Thank you !
I'll fix everything soon ><

Request From IRC >w< (or queue xD)

Crystal Crystal
[General]
well , some rhythm are bad ._. i don't want to point every and my bad Englishso i'll teach you
this is just basic , but it works on this map
[Shy]
00:48:845 (3) - add Finish at the end
00:59:645 (3) - remove clap at the beginning
01:07:445 (x) - add a note here because of the rhythm
01:09:245 (2) - spacing
01:34:445 (1,1) -
see ? (1) is behind 300 , please move it somewhere so the newbie player won't get confuse !
01:41:045 (2,3) - spacing
02:00:995 (1) - start on 02:01:145 -
02:14:045 (1,2) -

These 2 hit objects are behind "押忍" , please move it to some where .

[Kind Heart]
00:32:645 (4,5,6) - spacing
00:37:745 (6) - ^
00:47:345 (2) - spacing
01:01:145 (4) - spacing
02:17:795 (x) - add a break
02:22:145 (1) - behind "押忍"
03:04:445 (4) - spacing
03:06:845 (7) - spacing

[Collab]
00:56:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - something weird , try this
01:06:545 (4) - put on 308,248
02:02:645 (3) - touch the life bar x_x
02:06:695 (6) - ugly x_x

(6) is too high when testing , and it's messy on this part (5,6,1,1,2)
02:18:845 (3) - spacing
02:26:645 (4) - a few part overlaps on (3)
04:02:045 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - don't do this , it will make players confuse
04:48:395 (2,3) - touch the life bar x_x


That's all good luck for PonPonCrystal
Star!

PonPonAy <3
Thank you ~

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~


[Shy Heart]
01:05:645 (1,2) - a little close....·~
01:08:045 (1,2) - ^
01:44:645 (2,3) - ^~
01:57:845 (3,4,5) - distance not uniform~
02:21:845 (2,1) - a little close~
02:23:045 (2,1) - alignment~

[Kind Heart]
00:35:645 (3,4,5) - distance not uniform~
01:41:645 - nc?
01:41:945 - remove nc?~
03:23:645 - nc?~
03:24:845 - nc?~

[]
00:30:845 - nc?~

00:34:745 - delete note?~
00:34:895 - add note?~
00:35:945 (6) - move to 00:36:095 - >?~just suggestion~
00:38:645 - remove nc?~
00:40:445 - to 00:42:095 - vocal a little strange~i have suggestion~maybe u can change like~~~~if u dont like ~just ignore it~xD
01:03:245 (2,3,4) - maybe u can keep to uniform distance~

02:20:045 - nc?~
02:21:245 - remove nc?~
02:22:445 - nc?~

02:39:545 (3,5) - hmm~~~just put more beautiful~like~

03:53:045 - tp 03:58:145 - vocal....is .........i feel no good....but idk how to change it......i think u can make like04:01:445 - to 04:05:645 - ......

04:41:345 - remove nc~
04:41:795 - nc~
04:46:445 - ^~

that's all~
nice song~
Star~☆♪~
Good Luck~xD

Thannnkyhuu A-tann ~ >w<

Hi, from my queue.
I will skip 1 diff to be correct with my queue's rules sorry

[General]
Offset: 845 is better

[Shy Heart]
00:37:445 (2) - Add whislte on the head and remove finish and whistle from the end. It fits better
00:38:645 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:245 (2) - Add NC and finish on the head
00:43:445 (1) - This slider: 00:46:445 (1) is too soon after the spinner for the easiest diff. To fix this you just have to reduce the spinner bye 1/1, and so: 00:45:245
00:48:245 (3) - This finish sounds too loud. Remove it and whistle is ok since it fits very good this part
01:34:445 (1) - Whistle on this slider's end
01:44:645 (2,3) - 1/2 slider with repeat would be easier:

01:45:845 (1) - You should reduce this slider so you can use a finish hitsound on the long white tick. Use this rhythm it's better:

01:50:645 (1) - This follows better since you should to use a circle on 01:50:645 to follow the voice:

01:56:645 (2) - Whiste on the tail for consistency
02:10:445 (1) - Reduce this spinner by 1/1 since the next circle is too soon from it
02:15:395 (1) - ^

[Kind Heart]
01:08:045 I'd add a circle with clap here
01:37:745 (1) - Remove NC
01:41:045 (1) - ^
01:46:445 (1) - ^
01:47:045 (1) - ^
02:03:545 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - Why so much new combos °-° Useless, remove some of them.
02:20:045 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for a Normal. Remove this circle plz
03:06:845 (7) - Distance snap
03:10:445 (6) - New combo

That's all, good luck ;3

Thannkyhuu ~ ^^

Hi

[Brave Heart]

00:28:900 Remove New Color
00:28:600 to 00:30:700 instead of all whistle put claps on red ticks has a better feel to it
02:00:400 New Color
02:04:600 ^

that's about it Nice Song
and good luck in the ranking

Thannkyouu ~

EDIT: Here comes the English Ver. Sorry for my bad english.
HI，M4M


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All in all
Nice song .Good speed for my bad play skill 　＞　＜

lets talk about EASY .
【shy heart】

00:35:200 this slider and next slider's overlap is hard for new player to read.and the slider1 turns back 3 times, it seams new player cant handle it too. Maybe you can map this part like this?(the slider turns back one time, the screenshot didnt show it.)


01:02:800 (2) note2's distance is a little bit far from Prev.

01:21:700 (3) remove this note

01:22:000 (4) I dont like to say it,but maybe too hard for new player? my suggestion is that change the slider into notes
seems looks good like this

01:54:700 a note after spinner is hard for new player too. but it matches the song,just wait till other points it out.Maybe it is oK for easy.

02:15:400 (1,3) 和 02:16:000 (1,2,3) too many overlaps is hard for newplayer（I hate to say itT T）

02:42:700 (2,4) FOR EASY it is too hard. Is this a normal diff ?（if it is not, how about change it to a normal diff?）

04:39:400 (1,3) ^

04:40:300 Add finish instead of whistle,seems better for me.


Just ignore my "new player blah blah blah" i know its annoying


Let talk about HARD
【Brave heart】


00:07:000 (2,3) suggest to remove NOTE3 ,and change note2 to a slider ends at red line(00:07:300)

00:10:300 (5) remove Slider 5 then directly put a note on 00:10:600

02:10:900 (1) change the slider into notes feels better?

03:38:650 (1,2) 和 03:39:550 (3,4) how about add a note between two sliders?

03:47:350 (6) remove this note

04:20:650 (1,2) feel a little strange here,the rhythm starts from 04:20:800. suggest to remove SLIDER1 and make SLIDER2 start from 04:20:800

04:40:300 remove the NOTE,let the slider turns back one more time , add finish instead whistle


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All in all again ,HARD is fun to play， good luck!~ hope it can be RANKed soon

BAD MOD，and bad english， all for suggestions. if u dont like just ignore

:3
M4M
中文mod
[General]
first kiai is so fast,use short kiai is butter
[shy hrart]
Feel straight, some idea for looking.
00:10:300 (6,7) - 00:11:200 (7) - NC? and direction 6→7is bad for looking,6→7→1 is hard find the direction
00:31:000 (1) - end at 00:32:200 is butter
00:50:500 (2) - straight feel bad,00:50:500 (2,3,4,1) ,Crowding in the lower left corner
00:52:300 (1) - like my do in img,change rhythm is butter
01:10:300 (3,4,5) - all get a little up
01:14:200 (2,3,4) -^ a little down
01:28:300 (1) - remove NC
01:54:700 (1) - remove 1，rule say not fast start note after in easily diff
02:05:800 (4) - ctrl+h and ctrl+g
02:49:600 (6) - NC
02:57:400 (1) - on the right is better,on the left is too crowded
03:58:000 - 03:59:200 this 2 4white line use clap vol of tick sound:roll:
[Brave Heart]
00:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - too crowded
00:13:000 (3) - remove one of white Point
00:15:400 (5,6) - like my do in img,5 end in blue line seem butter
00:28:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so bad.not follow music, like me do in img
00:45:100 (1) - not good foe look,move the red point
00:50:200 (1) - no need back,lower right corner is too crowded
01:20:200 (1,2,3) - you do it hardly read 3, I think 3start→1end→2start get a line is butter
01:39:400 (1) - remove NC
01:46:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - anti-clockwise is butter
01:55:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - ??，no follow music
02:30:700 (2,3,4) - two side of red point ,on one arc
02:40:600 (1,2) - short slider not good use covered,a little far of 1 start→1end
02:41:800 (4,5) - ^
03:23:800~03:52:300 - don't know how too mod
04:01:600 (1) - middle tick have clap vol
04:03:400 (3) - ^
end - in my img,follow music
last kiai? soft song not need so straight

good luck and star

Thankyou! >w<

haii~~(?

[General]

all looks fine

[Brave Heart]

01:02:800 - i think this break is unnecessary...maybe you can fill it

01:10:900 (2,3,4,5) - this fixs the vocal better~

01:17:200 (2) - i prefer this

01:20:650 - add note?

02:10:150 (2,3,4) - feels uncomfortable.. try 4 notes?

02:29:200 (4,5,6,7) - why not like 02:28:000 (1,2,3) - ?

02:31:900 (5,6) - this..a little strange. try just

02:37:900 (3) - move

03:05:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - xD

03:36:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try make it more good-looking

03:49:150 (3,4,5,6) - ^

03:59:050 - add note?

04:01:600 (1,3) - oh...it's lazy

04:20:200 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this may be better?

04:20:800 (1) - nc

04:25:600 (1) - this

[Shy Heart]

oh...because this is 2☆ so you'd better follow the DS....open AImod to adjust spacing

i don't know how to mod easy diff ;w;

00:35:800 (1) - please no stack

there are some silders which are too long..such as
01:40:600 (1) -
02:04:000 (2,4) -
02:21:400 (4) -
03:57:400 (2) -
04:07:000 (3) -

02:27:100 (1,1) - why nc?

03:38:800 (4) - plz no stack

star and good luck x3

Thannnkyouu sunshyy ~ <3 >w<

M4M~

[Brave Heart]

00:07:450 (3) - move to 00:07:300
00:29:650 (4,5) - maybe move to a diffrent place?
00:59:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is so alone q.q maby map the next Break?
01:25:900 (1) - RNC
01:26:500 (2) - NC
01:43:000 (1,4) - remove whistle
01:50:200 (3) - Maybe remove finish or just make it a bit lower
01:56:200 (3,4) - make a symmetrical square
03:26:200 (1) - RNC

[Shy Heart]

00:40:900 Nooo don't make a break here
02:07:150 - ^
02:39:400 (7) - remove finish or make it lower?
02:50:200 (1) - clap

Good luck :3

m4m from your queue
General[/color
The placement is NICE already!


01:22:000 (3) clap at the beginning
Maybe add three notes between the two spinners? at01:50:800 , 01:51:400 and01:52:000
03:01:900 (3) end at03:02:200 and make 03:02:800 (1) start at03:02:500
04:19:000 (6) clap at hte end, instead of finish and, add finish at 04:20:800 (1) 's end

Brave Heart
00:29:650 the notes here is kind of……hmm, confusing. Maybe make it fit the song better, it's up to you
Maybe move the finish sound from01:21:400 (3) 's end to01:23:200 (1) 's end
02:33:400 (1) remove the finish sound at its end
Maybe the KIAI should end at02:54:401 ?
04:25:600 change the placement like this may fit the vocal better http://puu.sh/1nPeb

And good luck~as newbie mappers ^_^ I love this song.

Thankyou ~

~ Mod again!

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

1. There's no Title/Artist Unicode in both diff (check the notepad). Added it.
2. Inconsistency in kiai times: It's not really need to fix since it's different on collab diff, but if you change it would be great :3
   
   AIBat

   Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   - [Brave Heart] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:200, ends on 00:21:400
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:400, ends on 01:28:600
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:35:800, ends on 02:55:000
   Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:600, ends on 04:11:650
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:11:800, ends on 04:31:000
   - [Shy Heart] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:200, ends on 00:21:400
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:400, ends on 01:28:600
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:35:800, ends on 03:04:000 (I think 02:55:000 - would be great imo :\)
   Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:600, ends on 04:11:650
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:11:800, ends on 04:31:000

[Shy Heart]

1. Check this!
   
   AIBat again

   Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   04:25:670 - snap to 04:25:600
   04:28:670 - snap to 04:28:600
2. 00:10:300 (6) - (end) Finish is really weird here. Remove it and add whistle since I don't here any finish sounds in the music.
3. 01:13:000 (3) - ^
4. 01:17:800 (3) - ^
5. 01:21:400 (2) - ^
6. 02:39:400 (7) - ^
7. 02:43:000 (5) - (begin) ^
8. 04:04:000 (5) - (end) ^
9. 04:19:000 (6) - (end) ^
10. 00:30:100 (1) - Remove this? Not a very good start after this break. (Or you can make a reserve slider with 00:30:400 (2) - would be great, too :3)
11. 00:31:000 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is a bit weird imo, I can't explain why ;; so try mine?
    
12. 00:35:800 (1) - (reserve) Where's clap ;;?
13. 01:26:200 (1) - (end) ^
14. 03:08:800 (2) - (end) ^
15. 03:38:800 (4) - (begin) ^
16. 03:40:000 (5) - ^
17. 00:37:600 (2) - (begin) clap. And I'd suggest you to make it straight ._.
18. 00:40:600 (6) - Finish please!
19. 04:20:800 (1) - (end) ^
20. 00:51:700 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm weird again ;_; Try this
    
21. 00:56:200 (7,1) - Delete (1) and 1/4 longer to (7) is better than now. Reserve on the blue tick is really strange!
22. 01:16:000 (1) - Remove NC?
23. 01:22:000 (3) - That 1/4 slider is a bit hard to the newbies since your SV is low, and this is the easiest diff in your map ._. so 1/4 longer and remove (4) would be best :3
24. 01:23:200 (1) - Ehh, add a note here and move this spinner to 01:23:800 - (end at the same time). Because you do this at 00:16:000 (1,1) - something ;n;
25. 01:52:600 (1) - I'd suggest you to remove this and put a break here. 2 spinners here seems a bit empty ._.
26. 02:01:000 (1) - Unfit spinner. Changed like this would be better imo D:
    
27. 02:04:000 (2,4) - These slider is a bit ugly. Remake it by using the slider after osu! update?
28. 02:07:150 - Well just a suggest: map something here? It's mappable and shouldn't break here._.
29. 02:27:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These NCes is a bit messy to newbies. Suggest remove nc at 02:27:700 (1) -
30. 02:55:600 (1,2,1) - Remove nc at (1) first, then if you want to make overlaps part, just overlap these notes. Or you can place them to a straight line.
31. 02:56:800 (2,3,1) - ^
32. 03:02:500 (1) - Should begin at 03:02:800 - since the vocal appear on that time, not on the red tick.
33. 04:03:700 (4) - Remove this? Seems that 1/1 works on this parttern, not 1/2.
    This diff is rankable now o-o!! But needs some more nazi/suggest on your slider and placement though.

[Brave Heart]

1. Crystal's Part
2. 00:05:800 (3) - Same thing at Shy heart. So remove finish.
3. 00:10:300 (5) - (end) ^
4. 00:07:450 (3,4) - It's better if you overlap these 2, it would be more like stream here.
5. 00:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place like this since it's stream here. What you've done is like 1/2 imo ._.
   
   
6. 00:29:050 (2,3,4) - This parttern is extremely confused due to the notes at blue tick, a bit unreadable since we're talking about Hard diff. Use a 1/2 reserve slider to instead these notes please.
   
7. 00:32:800 (3) - (begin,end) Missing clap!
8. 00:34:300 (4) - Remove clap since there's no clap sound.
9. 00:37:900 (1) - ^
10. 01:59:200 (4) - (end) ^
11. 00:50:200 (1) - Place on somewhere else? I hate overlaps ;; but it's up2u owo
12. 01:02:350 - You should map here, break is unfit imo owo
13. 02:10:900 (1,3) - Make their shape same please
14. 03:08:200 (1) - Remove a reserve? It's better imo D:
15. 03:19:000 - Break start at here please
16. 04:01:600 (1) - Just suggestion. It's a bit empty at the downbeat if you make an 2/1 slider here o3o, so maybe change to 2 1/1 sliders? Don't forget to add finish on the downbeat if you except this~
17. 04:06:400 (1) - Again, a 1/2 slider at 04:06:400 - then move spinner to 04:07:000 -
18. 04:37:900 (1,2) - Swap NC?
    
19. Sun Rainbow's Part
20. 01:17:800 (3) - (end) Remove clap please. Clap is unfit here!
21. 01:37:000 (3) - ^
22. 01:46:600 (2) - ^
23. 02:31:450 (3) - ^
24. 02:31:900 (5,6) - (reserves) ^
25. 02:31:600 (4) - Missing clap.
26. 02:35:200 (3) - ^
27. 01:21:400 (3) - Remove finish. There's no finish sound here.
28. 01:44:800 (4) - Clap at begin&end, then whistle at reserve (if you want)
29. 02:46:900 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest you to add note at 02:46:900 - then move (1,2,3) 1/2 later (Remove (3)'s one reserve). Fits the vocal o3o
    
30. Reed R Gale's Part
    
    Huge Hitsound mod!!

    1. Fix these b4 fix anything in this part.
    2. 03:23:800 (1) - (end) Remove clap.
    3. 03:24:400 (1) - (begin) clap.
    4. 03:24:850 (2) - (begin) Remove clap.
    5. 03:26:650 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    6. 03:27:550 (3) - (end) Remove clap
    7. 03:28:000 (4) - clap
    8. 03:28:450 (6,1) - Remove clap
    9. 03:29:200 (3) - (begin) clap
    10. 03:29:200 (3) - (end) remove clap
    11. 03:30:100 (5) - (end) remove clap
    12. 03:31:000 (1) - (end) Soft-sound here, no Normal-sound.
    13. 03:33:100 (1) - ^
    14. 03:33:100 (1) - (begin) Remove finish.
    15. 03:33:100 (1) - (end) Remove clap, add finish.
    16. 03:34:600 (3,6) - Remove clap
    17. 03:35:500 (7) - (end)Soft-sound, remove finish.
    18. 03:36:400 (3) - Soft-sound, clap
    19. 03:37:150 (8) - Soft sound.
    20. 03:37:450 (10) - (begin) Remove finish
    21. 03:38:350 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    22. 03:39:250 (3) - (end) Remove clap
    23. 03:39:700 (4) - (end) Remove finish
    24. 03:40:150 (1) - (begin) Remove finish
    25. 03:40:600 (2) - (body) Remove whistle
    26. 03:40:600 (2) - (begin) Remove finish
    27. 03:41:200 (3) - Soft-sound, clap
    28. 03:41:650 (2) - remove clap
    29. 03:43:000 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    30. 03:43:450 (2) - (reserve) clap
    31. 03:43:450 (2) - (end) Remove clap
    32. 03:43:900 (3) - (end) Soft-sound
    33. 03:44:650 (5) - Remove finish.
    34. 03:44:800 (1) - (end)Soft-sound, Remove finish
    35. 03:45:400 (1) - (begin) Soft-sound
    36. 03:45:850 (2) - (reserve) clap
    37. 03:46:300 (3) - (end) Soft-sound
    38. 03:46:750 (4) - (begin) Soft-sound
    39. 03:47:200 (5) - Clap
    40. 03:49:300 (4) - Remove clap
    41. 03:49:450 (5) - Soft-sound
    42. 03:49:600 (6) - Remove finish
    43. 04:11:800 (1) - Finish, remove whistle
    44. 04:12:100 (3) - Soft-sound
    45. 04:12:700 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    46. 04:13:150 (2) - (begin) Remove clap
    47. 04:13:600 (3) - Remove finish, add clap.
    48. 04:13:900 (4) - (end) Soft-sound
    49. 04:14:800 (2) - (begin) clap
    50. 04:14:800 (2) - (reserve) Normal-sound
    51. 04:15:850 (1) - (end) soft-sound, clap
    52. 04:16:600 (3) - (reserve) Remove clap
    53. 04:17:050 (4) - (end) Soft-sound
    54. 04:17:800 (1) - Soft-sound
    55. 04:18:250 (4) - Remove clap
    56. 04:18:550 (5) - (begin) Remove clap
    57. 04:19:000 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    58. 04:19:900 (5) - Soft-sound
    59. 04:20:200 (6) - Remove finish
    60. 04:20:650 (1) - (end) soft-sound, clap
    61. 04:21:400 (3) - (begin) soft-sound, finish
    62. 04:22:150 (5) - (end) remove clap
    63. 04:22:600 (6) - (begin,end) Remove clap
    64. 04:23:500 (8) - soft-sound
    65. 04:24:100 (3) - (begin) soft-sound
    66. 04:24:100 (3) - (end) clap
    67. 04:24:700 (5) - Remove finish
    68. 04:25:000 (6) - Soft-sound, remove finish
    69. 04:25:600 (1) - (begin) soft-sound, remove finish
    70. 04:28:600 (1) - (begin) soft-sound
31. 03:24:400 (1) - Remove NC, this nc is not really need imo
32. 03:31:900 (3) - 2 reserves is boring, remove 2 reserves and add a 1/2 slider at 03:32:500 - maybe?
33. 03:36:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream's placement is very un-flow. Try this or something else.
    
    
34. 03:44:650 (5,1) - Spacing...
35. 03:44:800 (1) - Please Remove this sv change here. Realllllly Reallllllly unfit.
36. 03:49:900 (1) - Maybe a jump to confirm the rhythm (1/2)? Hard to read without it ;;
37. 04:14:800 (2) - Change to a 1/2 slider?
38. 04:15:850 (1) - Remove this and add a note at 04:16:000 - since there's no sound at blue tick.
39. 04:20:650 (1) - ^ (add note at downbeat)
40. 04:16:600 (3) - Pretty messy part, so maybe rotate 90° this
41. 04:20:950 (2) - This slider is really ugly than others.
42. 04:25:600 (1) - end at downbeat to fit with vocal
43. Really needs work in this collab part. Really needs.

Good luck Crystal! You don't need to reply this but I wish you could change the hole things I mentioned .w.
*Notice: check this modpost when you have enough time. I put so many hitsound mods at Reed R Gale's part, and I think you fix the hole diff by yourself -w-
~

[General]

1. Mp3 is bad quality, consider changing a better one, and you cut this song in a odd place :/ Here is the full ver. mp3, and better quality, if you use this mp3, set offset to 375

My mod is based on your mp3

[Sky Heart]

1. 03:11:200 (5) - Missing a clap here?
2. 04:25:600 (5) - ^

Call me back for a full mod when you changed mp3

Do not kudos this post since I have already got 1

[General]

1. Set preview point to 00:29:175?
2. Maybe you should map the very beginning part, it's a little weird start at 00:29:175

[Shy Heart]

1. 02:49:575 (7) - NC this spinner
2. 01:05:775 (4) - Missing clap here?
3. 01:33:375 (2) - ^
4. 01:33:975 (1) - Finish here sounds bad, you can try use normal hitsound here, 60%-80% volume
5. 01:40:575 (1) - Clap?
6. 02:00:375 (1) - Clap instead of whistle
7. 02:54:975 (2) - Clap?
8. 02:57:975 (1) - End with normal hitsound would be better, also, 60%-80% volume
9. 03:27:975 (2) - Slider head, add finish, 03:28:875 (3) slider end, add finish, so that fit 03:21:975, 03:23:175, 03:24:375
10. 05:05:175 (2,4) - I don't think finish sound fit here very well, music here is quiet, using whistle or just leave them empty would be better

[Brave Heart]

1. 00:43:575 (1) - Finish here sounds bad, remove it would be better
2. 00:56:025 (1) - Why NC here?
3. 01:44:175 (2) - A reverse slider here feel kinda odd, a no reverse slider seems better and fit music more
4. 02:14:775 - 02:24:075 - Finish sound doesn't fit in this quiet part imo, considering use whistle or leave them empty
5. 02:34:575 (1) - Missing a clap?
6. 02:59:775 - Add a note here with clap so that fit the music
7. 03:00:375 (1) - Try normal hitsound to slider head?
8. 03:51:375 (1) - Why NC?
9. 04:06:675 (4) - (nazi) End point 1 grid up so that it's parallel to other 3 sliders before it
10. 04:11:775 (1) - Unreasonable jump :/
11. 04:59:475 - 05:07:275 - Well, I'm still feel finish sound doesn't fit in this part, just personal feeling

Thannkyou ~
Changed everything except normal hitsounds

Hi Crystal~
random F2 of this song ww

Nishino Kana<3

[overall]
I think it's a litte too many rest time in this...:<

[Shy Heart]

03:41:175 (1)- so looooooong spin OAO"3
04:15:975 (4,1)- maybe so far :/

[Brave Heart]

00:35:475 (6)- maybe change to: 00:35:625- add a note and slider 00:35:775- to 00:36:075- (like 00:34:425 (3,4)- )
00:36:525 (2)- dele this?
00:42:375 (4)- no slider here change to note?
00:57:075 (5)- end in 00:57:375-
01:05:025 (2)- maybe not so straight line (with 1.3)
01:12:075 (1)- add a note in 01:12:075- silder start in 01:12:375- ?(long white line~)
01:17:175 (1)- hide here isn't good when open hidden mod ;3...
01:40:275 (2,3,4)- not so straight ..?
01:44:775 (3)- not repeat here, isn't fit >_<
02:03:825 (2)- no this maybe o.o
02:34:575 (1)- not repeat too..?
02:47:475- note here~ empty
02:59:775- ^
03:02:775 (1)- change slider ?
03:22:275- to 03:32:175- not rest in your kiai time >_<
03:34:875- has vocal here~
03:50:775- to last :your slider stack half so many o_oa? i think it's no good that way :/

good luck >w< ganbatte~!

Hey M4M

Shy Heart

00:38:175 (7,1,2,3) - Place it right next to the preview sliderstart at the left side, it fits much better and easier to see
00:42:975 (1) - , 03:16:575 (1) - , 03:23:175 (1) - , 03:24:375 (1) - Combo really needed?
02:54:675 (1) - , 02:55:275 (1) - Remove new combo and add a new combo here 02:55:575 (2) -
04:10:275 (5,1) - These are hard to see, place them a bit up?

Brave Heart

00:31:575 (1) - , 03:20:775 (1,1) - , 03:36:375 (1) - , 04:11:775 (1) - ,04:17:475 (1) - , 04:33:375 (1) - , 04:41:325 (1) - , 04:57:375 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:575 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + H them? it looks better imo and plays better
00:37:125 - This end of the slider doesnt fit together with the vocal
00:56:325 (3,4,5,6) - I got REALLY confused at this part when playing, try to make it more easier to read
01:17:175 (1) - You cant see this circle good when playing, place it besides?
01:48:375 (4) - This slider is also hard to see at the beginning, try to move it abit more up
01:54:975 (1) - New combo really needed?
02:06:075 (5) - New combo remove next
02:18:075 (1) - Remove combo and add one at the next slider
02:57:675 (2) - I cant get good with this slider, you map with the vocal, and this slider doesnt fit the vocal
03:50:775 (1,2) - You follow the rythm and then suddenly at (3) you change to something else, this part is abit confusing, especially 03:52:725 (4) - , try change it into something what fits the rythm,same at 03:53:625 (1,2,3) - , 03:55:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
04:03:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - You cant here one bit of a sliderbeat in the BG music, why stream? , it breaks the whole mappingstyle and song so far and absolutely doesnt fit at all // this one 04:20:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - fits but not the other one
04:26:925 (1,2,3,4) - , 04:38:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream also doesnt fit, it breaks the song
04:52:575 (1) - The vocal ends at 04:53:175 - not 04:53:475 - here

Overall its almost rankable, try to change what i said at least, i tolarated a bit more than usual

From my queue~
sorry for late ;(


Nice song lol good luck for rank! xD

GET MOD SLOT!~ lol

hi
mod request from forum-PM

[Brave Heart]
* 01:53:475 (1,2,3,4,5) -
* 03:12:675 (4) - new combo
* 03:23:917 - it's not a good choice to put a break in kiai time
* 03:57:525 (7,8) - use 1/3 here e.g.
* 03:50:775 - imo the hitobjects in the rap part are off-beat e.g. 03:52:725 (4) - (a missing beat) plz fix them!
* 04:16:875 (7) - use 1/6. start at 04:16:875 - , end at 04:17:075 -
* ^btw SV changes here, so add a newcombo

good luck