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bossandy

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bossandy 2012-05-06T11:59:59+00:00

Hi hi~ request from my queue~

Red : I think you must to fix.
Blue : Need to discuss.
Black : Just suggest or nazi.
　
[General]
　
I think you can use this BG , because people who in the BG is upside down
BG
　
[I Am Yours]
　
00:41:668 (3) - Add a NC here because this parttern is a bit long xDD
00:52:556 (3,4) - Stack notes isn't a good idea on the easiest diff >_<
00:59:814 (2) - Spacing?
　
[You Are Mine]
　
00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Put to other place plz , this is too ugly >_<
00:52:556 (1,2) - Ctrl+R to make the spacing the same
00:55:217 (1) - Add a finish start
　
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I love this kinds of the song xDD and your map looks great on me
Good Luck :3

ryuu

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ryuu 2012-05-06T13:13:58+00:00

thanks, bossandy ~

Ayu

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Ayu 2012-05-07T14:57:08+00:00

May only be me, but ok. Had it after updating.

rockleejkooo

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rockleejkooo 2012-05-07T15:08:56+00:00

redownload it, Ayu :3

Leorda

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Leorda 2012-05-12T13:32:43+00:00

Helllo

[I Am Yours]
00:44:572 (2,1) - Add an object between this object, it feels empty if you keep this
01:25:217 - Add note for following bass?
02:07:798 (2) - Extend it to red tick? Like others?

[You Are Mine]
00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'm pretty not sure if this overlapped by hitbursts and it makes unreadable for players who play this. You should test it yourself
01:11:910 (6) - New combo for your combo pattern?
01:34:410 (3,4) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, so it's hard to read for players during gameplay

Auto stars? lol

ryuu

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ryuu 2012-05-12T15:05:21+00:00

thank u, leorda.
all fixed.

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-05-17T09:57:02+00:00

[Hard(?)]
00:19:773 (4) - a bit misleading for me, the apparent spacing multiple is smaller because the next slider is slowered. You can consider placing it around (136,296).
00:51:104 (3,3,3) - finishes match the song's momentum somehow
00:20:136 (5) - suggested to NC here to notify the slider speed change.
00:29:088 (3,5) - stack properly
01:29:814 (3,3,3) - same as 0:51

[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better

Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.

rockleejkooo

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rockleejkooo 2012-05-17T14:24:36+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
- i tried it with default skin and assured that hitburst disappears before approach circle touches the slider so i left it how it is
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
done... i suppose :о
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better
okay

thank you, wmf~
waiting for ryuu

ryuu

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ryuu 2012-05-17T16:04:05+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.

easy diff would be extra.
two people - two diffs.
for the third just don't have names.

all fixed.
thank u.

SapphireGhost

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SapphireGhost 2012-05-19T03:07:04+00:00

Here we go.

[Storyboard]
- Change "shows it's face" to "shows its face". Remember that "it's" means "it is".
- Change "too much too drink" to "too much to drink".

[You Are Mine]
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart sliders are great, first of all. However, I think you can do these without having the start and end overlap. It could be confusing, especially with HR or DT mods. This could be helpful, I make hearts in this way so they're more readable. You can use Rotate (ctrl+shift+r) to set the angle you want afterwards. Lastly, the second heart slider doesn't seem to match up with the vocals perfectly.

[I Am Yours]
- Consider raising the Approach Rate slightly? There are many objects at once and it's a bit messy currently.
01:11:185 (2,3,4) - It'd be great if you could move this pattern so there's no chance of the hitburst from (2) blocking the repeat arrow of (4). I know wmf already said this, but I agree with him and it doesn't hurt to be safe.
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart slider stuff applies here too.

About adding an Easy difficulty... I don't know. I think it'd be good for the mapset if you could somehow make the difficulty names work. Lastly, I'd still rather rank this than bubble this, seeing how you have two MAT mods, aah. Just PM me after fixes.

Breeze

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Breeze 2012-05-19T03:08:38+00:00

[I Am Yours]

~~00:13:362 (2,3) - Why not perfectly stack them?~~ Well I saw you use this kind of stack many times, looked fine
00:19:168 (2) - I feel only one reverse here sounds better, idk why though, just feeling so, here is hard to follow lyric

I'm only worry about the 3.5 star normal, it is required one map should have a easiest diff that around ~2.5/3 star, I'll ask other to see if this is fine
Other looked pretty nice

EDIT: After discussing with other members, we think this map need a "real easy", those stack notes and overlaps can be hard to newbie :/

ryuu

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ryuu 2012-05-19T12:54:10+00:00

thanks, sapphire and breeze.
i understand and partially agree with you about easy difficulty, but i ask to consider as a special case, because it was a birthday map for rock ,and only two difficulties may match with the lyrics in the chorus. i recently saw some ranked maps with 2-diffs mapset, so I wish mine was ranked too. i'm agree to make the normal easier, please point out the things that disturb you the most - i'll try to fix them. what's about hearts - i tried to remake them in a better way, but it didn't make them actually more readable..so if you have any thoughts - please help me out :3

Breeze

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Breeze 2012-05-20T06:57:37+00:00

Those anti-jump stack notes, must be hard to newbie to understand, Although it's fun for me :/
If you want to make your normal easier, try delete some notes that are 1/2 beat after another notes or slider, that would be help

ryuu

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ryuu 2012-05-20T10:29:09+00:00

updated.

Breeze

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Breeze 2012-05-20T12:49:19+00:00

Sadly the Normal difficulty still shows a 3.5 star, but ranking rules said each mapset need at least one difficulty is 2.5~3 star, I'm afraid you had to add another easy diff, if you don't want to add an easy, then you had to make your normal more easier, sorry but I can't make this exception for you

ryuu

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ryuu 2012-05-20T13:08:02+00:00

then why someone made an exception for this or this?

and one more thing. let's all modders will say "make map better", "make normal more easier", "make map more readable".
so i ask that you pointed me to certain objects.
how would you make this normal more easier if it were yours.

Breeze

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Breeze 2012-05-20T14:40:01+00:00

After another discussion with other members, yup this normal is played "normal" enough
So let's give this a shot

ryuu

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ryuu 2012-05-20T14:42:52+00:00

thank u Q_______Q

rockleejkooo

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rockleejkooo 2012-05-20T16:45:20+00:00

thank you very much, breezy :3

Aleks719

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Aleks719 2012-05-20T21:00:08+00:00

offset 38~

реснапить все и вся о/

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edit : offset and some another stuff were fixed, rebubbled~

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2012-05-21T22:36:05+00:00

не хотел особо придираться,но все же буду

[I Am Yours]

00:16:973 (2,3,1,2) - мне не очень этот паттерн нравится,я бы переделал:
во-первых убрал бы этот слайдер,и добавил бы 1 репит к 00:16:973 (2) - как раз будет заканчиваться и фраза и слайдер на 00:17:941,а потом бы с 00:18:425 сделал бы реверс-слайдеры с синими тикам,тем более так было тут - 00:41:650 (3,4)

SPOILER

00:45:037 - почему здесь пустота? намапить надо бы что-нибудь с ритмом вроде этого:

SPOILER

00:46:731 (1,2,1,2,1) - и так на сложность жаловались,может убрать эти "прыжки"? раз уж изи нету
00:56:167 (2,3) - не знаю почему никто это не выделил,но мне еще в первый раз бросилось в глаза - мне кажется это гораздо сложнее для новичков,чем всякие там 1/2 ритмы. слишком уж короткие слайдертреки - могу предложить только заменить на один реверс-слайдер с двумя репитами,ну или как дальше,с сирклом и реверс-слайдером
01:25:441 (1,2,1,2,1) - опять же спейсинг,и я бы подвинул как-то 01:28:344 (2,1) - наверное,так и задумано,но мне показалось неаккуратным D:
01:56:408 (1,2,3,4) - а вот тут мне кажется можно было облегчить ритм,перегружен 1/2 :/ тем более следующая подобная часть совсем иначе намаплена

[You Are Mine]

01:45:279 (2,3,4) - тут все объекты тоже в 0,75 - думаю,так не должно было быть
02:06:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - и тут

ну а если было так задумано - тем более исправь

и еще - все сердца на обоих диффах понравились,кроме 02:11:892 (1) - не знаю даже почему..наверное,хотелось чтобы конец с началом больше расходился,как во всех остальных

ryuu

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ryuu 2012-05-21T23:26:27+00:00

у себя всё исправила.
рок проснётся, придёт, глянет.
спасибо.

заебалась с этим сердцем. успела пореветь. в конце концов оно мне не нравится. хуйня какая-то.

rockleejkooo

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rockleejkooo 2012-05-22T07:02:25+00:00

все пофиксил, да.
спасибо, бим

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2012-05-22T14:14:15+00:00

ranked!

Beige