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- GUIDELINES
- When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
- When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXI AM YOURS
SPOILER
- 00:15:277 (5) - How bout make this slider a blanket for the previous one?
- 00:38:019 (2) - Weird slider. Try cloning the other one instead.
- 01:02:455 (1) - I think it's better to clone the previous slider too. Oh and Remove new combo. Add new combo on the next note.
- 01:06:567 (7) - Unstack and make it like those little cute stacks you made.
- 02:11:890 (1,2) - About the SB. Try to make a lil arrow too for users who would use hard rock for this diff.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXYOU ARE MINE
SPOILER
- 00:08:745 (2) - Remove the red point at the 3rd point of this slider.
- 01:02:213 (1) - Remove new combo. Add new combo on the next note.
- END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~
- Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
- If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
- I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
Topic Starter
lol. art was so right from the start. the artist painted it in such a way.Philippines wrote:
Why is the BG upside-down?
also thanks for mod :3
Second Pomplamoose song I've modded today. What a coincidence! From my queue.
[General]
-- "3 New Songs Woot!" is the name of the album. Throw that into the tags.
-- The offset is off. I'm not good with timing, so find someone who is to help you.
-- Make the tick rate consistent on I am Yours.
[I Am Yours]
00:00:761 (1) - Remove the new combo here. It's silly.
01:11:164 (2) - Stack this on the end of the slider, not the beginning.
01:36:809 (4) - Instead of putting the slider-point at the beginning of the slider, put it towards the middle like this.
02:06:084 (3) - Use distance snap. Something like this is hard to read for players of intermediate experience.
02:11:890 (1,1) - Ugly overlap.
[You Are Mine]
00:57:132 (5) - Remove the whistle from the start of this slider.
01:42:374 (0) - Add a note here to keep the flow going.
Really nice map.
[General]
-- "3 New Songs Woot!" is the name of the album. Throw that into the tags.
-- The offset is off. I'm not good with timing, so find someone who is to help you.
-- Make the tick rate consistent on I am Yours.
[I Am Yours]
00:00:761 (1) - Remove the new combo here. It's silly.
01:11:164 (2) - Stack this on the end of the slider, not the beginning.
01:36:809 (4) - Instead of putting the slider-point at the beginning of the slider, put it towards the middle like this.
02:06:084 (3) - Use distance snap. Something like this is hard to read for players of intermediate experience.
02:11:890 (1,1) - Ugly overlap.
[You Are Mine]
00:57:132 (5) - Remove the whistle from the start of this slider.
01:42:374 (0) - Add a note here to keep the flow going.
Really nice map.
Hi ~ [Ryuu] ~ 
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
That's all ~
Good luck with rank ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[You Are Mine]
- 00:57:878 (6) - Try perfect stack.
- 02:08:765 (7) - ^
[I Am Yours]
- 00:28:604 (2,3) - This spaing confused play with beginner.
That's all ~
Good luck with rank ~
Ohey, saw this beatmap when I looked on your profile. (since you're [Ryuu] and Ryu & [Ryu] are friends of me. xD)
Anyway, thought I would mod this map, cool song~
[I Am Yours]
00:24:249 (1) - I think an arc would be nice here >w<
00:36:346 (3) - put this one on top of (4)'s start
00:39:854 (1,2) - make a nicer pattern with 2 sliders
00:59:814 (2) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider end
01:04:168 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:06:588 (7) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider start
01:19:894 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:21:588 (5) - make it overlap with (4)'s slider end
01:36:830 (4) - arc would be nice here http://puu.sh/s6bd
Couldn't find anything else here except for more notes that should be overlapped with slider end/start, but I didn't mention them all because then it would even fill the mod up with more "make it overlap" XD
[You Are Mine]
00:15:781 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:37:798 (3) - I think this slider could be better
Couldn't find anything else here.
Great beatmap \o/
erm,, is a guest diff still possbile? :c
Anyway, thought I would mod this map, cool song~
[I Am Yours]
00:24:249 (1) - I think an arc would be nice here >w<
00:36:346 (3) - put this one on top of (4)'s start
00:39:854 (1,2) - make a nicer pattern with 2 sliders
00:59:814 (2) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider end
01:04:168 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:06:588 (7) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider start
01:19:894 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:21:588 (5) - make it overlap with (4)'s slider end
01:36:830 (4) - arc would be nice here http://puu.sh/s6bd
Couldn't find anything else here except for more notes that should be overlapped with slider end/start, but I didn't mention them all because then it would even fill the mod up with more "make it overlap" XD
[You Are Mine]
00:15:781 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:37:798 (3) - I think this slider could be better
Couldn't find anything else here.
Great beatmap \o/
erm,, is a guest diff still possbile? :c
Topic Starter
lol.Ayu wrote:
Ohey, saw this beatmap when I looked on your profile. (since you're [Ryuu] and Ryu & [Ryu] are friends of me. xD)
sorry. but this beatmap for rock. and he make GD.Ayu wrote:
erm,, is a guest diff still possbile? :c
as you can see, the name of the difficulties has special meaning.
so no. no more GD.
aaaaaaaaaaand thanks for mod, ayu :3
Привет, [Ryuu].
М4М.
[General]
Ничего~
[I Am Yours]
00:00:298 (1,2) - Может, сделать эти два слайдера чуть тише?
00:06:588 (3) - клап на реверс?
00:14:330 (4) - клап на конец?
00:43:846 - не уверен насчет этого брейка. Я говорил до этого с Бимом, и он сказал мне, что лучше не делать брейки на 1-2 секунды. Хотя, может тут это оправдано.
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на начало слайдера?
00:59:814 (2) - ^ на реверс?
01:01:507 (5) - И тут свисток? Вместе с клапом.
[You Are Mine]
Много джампов по всей карте. Стиль такой, думаю, но в моментах, как 00:11:427 (9,1) - кажется немного не подходящим. Просто мысли вслух, ничего, выглядит вполне ок.
Проблемы с нк, как мне кажется, вот например 01:14:088 (3,4,5,1) -
00:00:298 (1,2) - Опять, чуть тише?
Может либо это 00:46:749 (1,2,3) - чуть прижать, либо это 00:48:685 (1,2,3) - чуть растянуть по спейсингу, чтобы они отличались друг от друга? А, я, кажется, понял идею, так что не надо.
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на конец?
01:00:539 (3) - ^ (но тут сомневаюсь)
01:01:507 (6) - ^ на начало?
01:11:185 (4) - Свисток?
01:13:120 (10) - ^
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Тут
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Может, продолжишь дальше? Как пример: http://puu.sh/s7pH
Замечательная карта. Даю звезду.
М4М.
[General]
Ничего~
[I Am Yours]
00:00:298 (1,2) - Может, сделать эти два слайдера чуть тише?
00:06:588 (3) - клап на реверс?
00:14:330 (4) - клап на конец?
00:43:846 - не уверен насчет этого брейка. Я говорил до этого с Бимом, и он сказал мне, что лучше не делать брейки на 1-2 секунды. Хотя, может тут это оправдано.
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на начало слайдера?
00:59:814 (2) - ^ на реверс?
01:01:507 (5) - И тут свисток? Вместе с клапом.
[You Are Mine]
Много джампов по всей карте. Стиль такой, думаю, но в моментах, как 00:11:427 (9,1) - кажется немного не подходящим. Просто мысли вслух, ничего, выглядит вполне ок.
Проблемы с нк, как мне кажется, вот например 01:14:088 (3,4,5,1) -
00:00:298 (1,2) - Опять, чуть тише?
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на конец?
01:00:539 (3) - ^ (но тут сомневаюсь)
01:01:507 (6) - ^ на начало?
01:11:185 (4) - Свисток?
01:13:120 (10) - ^
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Тут
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Может, продолжишь дальше? Как пример: http://puu.sh/s7pH
Замечательная карта. Даю звезду.
Yup. Your SB modder is here.
I checked your SB, but it was so good quality, so I decided to do a standard mod instead.
*This isn't nazi, but a suggestion. Of course you can just ignore all things.
[I am yours]
00:38:523 (3) - move 2nd point to (204,72)
00:44:572 - I will place another slider (like number 5) if I was you
01:31:265 (3) - move last point to (448,232)
01:36:830 (4) - move 2nd point to (208,16)
01:59:814 (2) - How about this: 356,124,119814,2,0,B|308:144|264:120|256:76,2,120,0|8|0
02:01:023 (3) - move to (364,136) if you did ^
[You are mine]
00:01:507 (2) - move 2nd point to (184,296)
00:34:894 (1) - move 2nd point to (160,308) / 3rd point to (144,232)
01:52:314 (5) - move 3rd point to (124,176)
That's all! Good luck
ps. I loved the heart sliders ><
I checked your SB, but it was so good quality, so I decided to do a standard mod instead.
*This isn't nazi, but a suggestion. Of course you can just ignore all things.
[I am yours]
00:38:523 (3) - move 2nd point to (204,72)
00:44:572 - I will place another slider (like number 5) if I was you
01:31:265 (3) - move last point to (448,232)
01:36:830 (4) - move 2nd point to (208,16)
01:59:814 (2) - How about this: 356,124,119814,2,0,B|308:144|264:120|256:76,2,120,0|8|0
02:01:023 (3) - move to (364,136) if you did ^
[You are mine]
00:01:507 (2) - move 2nd point to (184,296)
00:34:894 (1) - move 2nd point to (160,308) / 3rd point to (144,232)
01:52:314 (5) - move 3rd point to (124,176)
That's all! Good luck
ps. I loved the heart sliders ><
Topic Starter
nyan ~Shino wrote:
ps. I loved the heart sliders ><
thanks, shino :3
- Hi hi~ request from my queue~
- Red : I think you must to fix.
- Blue : Need to discuss.
- Black : Just suggest or nazi.
[General]
- I think you can use this BG , because people who in the BG is upside down
[I Am Yours]
- 00:41:668 (3) - Add a NC here because this parttern is a bit long xDD
- 00:52:556 (3,4) - Stack notes isn't a good idea on the easiest diff >_<
- 00:59:814 (2) - Spacing?
[You Are Mine]
- 00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Put to other place plz , this is too ugly >_<
- 00:52:556 (1,2) - Ctrl+R to make the spacing the same
- 00:55:217 (1) - Add a finish start
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Good Luck :3
May only be me, but ok. Had it after updating.
redownload it, Ayu :3
Helllo
[I Am Yours]
00:44:572 (2,1) - Add an object between this object, it feels empty if you keep this
01:25:217 - Add note for following bass?
02:07:798 (2) - Extend it to red tick? Like others?
[You Are Mine]
00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'm pretty not sure if this overlapped by hitbursts and it makes unreadable for players who play this. You should test it yourself
01:11:910 (6) - New combo for your combo pattern?
01:34:410 (3,4) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, so it's hard to read for players during gameplay
Auto stars? lol
[I Am Yours]
00:44:572 (2,1) - Add an object between this object, it feels empty if you keep this
01:25:217 - Add note for following bass?
02:07:798 (2) - Extend it to red tick? Like others?
[You Are Mine]
00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'm pretty not sure if this overlapped by hitbursts and it makes unreadable for players who play this. You should test it yourself
01:11:910 (6) - New combo for your combo pattern?
01:34:410 (3,4) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, so it's hard to read for players during gameplay
Auto stars? lol
[Hard(?)]
00:19:773 (4) - a bit misleading for me, the apparent spacing multiple is smaller because the next slider is slowered. You can consider placing it around (136,296).
00:51:104 (3,3,3) - finishes match the song's momentum somehow
00:20:136 (5) - suggested to NC here to notify the slider speed change.
00:29:088 (3,5) - stack properly
01:29:814 (3,3,3) - same as 0:51
[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better
Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.
00:19:773 (4) - a bit misleading for me, the apparent spacing multiple is smaller because the next slider is slowered. You can consider placing it around (136,296).
00:51:104 (3,3,3) - finishes match the song's momentum somehow
00:20:136 (5) - suggested to NC here to notify the slider speed change.
00:29:088 (3,5) - stack properly
01:29:814 (3,3,3) - same as 0:51
[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better
Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.
thank you, wmf~wmfchris wrote:
[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
- i tried it with default skin and assured that hitburst disappears before approach circle touches the slider so i left it how it is
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
done... i suppose :о
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better
okay
waiting for ryuu
Topic Starter
easy diff would be extra.wmfchris wrote:
Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.
two people - two diffs.
for the third just don't have names.
all fixed.
thank u.
Here we go.
[Storyboard]
- Change "shows it's face" to "shows its face". Remember that "it's" means "it is".
- Change "too much too drink" to "too much to drink".
[You Are Mine]
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart sliders are great, first of all. However, I think you can do these without having the start and end overlap. It could be confusing, especially with HR or DT mods. This could be helpful, I make hearts in this way so they're more readable. You can use Rotate (ctrl+shift+r) to set the angle you want afterwards. Lastly, the second heart slider doesn't seem to match up with the vocals perfectly.
[I Am Yours]
- Consider raising the Approach Rate slightly? There are many objects at once and it's a bit messy currently.
01:11:185 (2,3,4) - It'd be great if you could move this pattern so there's no chance of the hitburst from (2) blocking the repeat arrow of (4). I know wmf already said this, but I agree with him and it doesn't hurt to be safe.
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart slider stuff applies here too.
About adding an Easy difficulty... I don't know. I think it'd be good for the mapset if you could somehow make the difficulty names work. Lastly, I'd still rather rank this than bubble this, seeing how you have two MAT mods, aah. Just PM me after fixes.
[Storyboard]
- Change "shows it's face" to "shows its face". Remember that "it's" means "it is".
- Change "too much too drink" to "too much to drink".
[You Are Mine]
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart sliders are great, first of all. However, I think you can do these without having the start and end overlap. It could be confusing, especially with HR or DT mods. This could be helpful, I make hearts in this way so they're more readable. You can use Rotate (ctrl+shift+r) to set the angle you want afterwards. Lastly, the second heart slider doesn't seem to match up with the vocals perfectly.
[I Am Yours]
- Consider raising the Approach Rate slightly? There are many objects at once and it's a bit messy currently.
01:11:185 (2,3,4) - It'd be great if you could move this pattern so there's no chance of the hitburst from (2) blocking the repeat arrow of (4). I know wmf already said this, but I agree with him and it doesn't hurt to be safe.
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart slider stuff applies here too.
About adding an Easy difficulty... I don't know. I think it'd be good for the mapset if you could somehow make the difficulty names work. Lastly, I'd still rather rank this than bubble this, seeing how you have two MAT mods, aah. Just PM me after fixes.
[I Am Yours]
Other looked pretty nice
EDIT: After discussing with other members, we think this map need a "real easy", those stack notes and overlaps can be hard to newbie :/
00:13:362 (2,3) - Why not perfectly stack them?Well I saw you use this kind of stack many times, looked fine- 00:19:168 (2) - I feel only one reverse here sounds better, idk why though, just feeling so, here is hard to follow lyric
Other looked pretty nice
EDIT: After discussing with other members, we think this map need a "real easy", those stack notes and overlaps can be hard to newbie :/
Topic Starter
thanks, sapphire and breeze.
i understand and partially agree with you about easy difficulty, but i ask to consider as a special case, because it was a birthday map for rock ,and only two difficulties may match with the lyrics in the chorus. i recently saw some ranked maps with 2-diffs mapset, so I wish mine was ranked too. i'm agree to make the normal easier, please point out the things that disturb you the most - i'll try to fix them. what's about hearts - i tried to remake them in a better way, but it didn't make them actually more readable..so if you have any thoughts - please help me out :3
i understand and partially agree with you about easy difficulty, but i ask to consider as a special case, because it was a birthday map for rock ,and only two difficulties may match with the lyrics in the chorus. i recently saw some ranked maps with 2-diffs mapset, so I wish mine was ranked too. i'm agree to make the normal easier, please point out the things that disturb you the most - i'll try to fix them. what's about hearts - i tried to remake them in a better way, but it didn't make them actually more readable..so if you have any thoughts - please help me out :3
Those anti-jump stack notes, must be hard to newbie to understand, Although it's fun for me :/
If you want to make your normal easier, try delete some notes that are 1/2 beat after another notes or slider, that would be help
If you want to make your normal easier, try delete some notes that are 1/2 beat after another notes or slider, that would be help
Sadly the Normal difficulty still shows a 3.5 star, but ranking rules said each mapset need at least one difficulty is 2.5~3 star, I'm afraid you had to add another easy diff, if you don't want to add an easy, then you had to make your normal more easier, sorry but I can't make this exception for you
After another discussion with other members, yup this normal is played "normal" enough
So let's give this a shot
So let's give this a shot
thank you very much, breezy :3
offset 38~
реснапить все и вся о/
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edit : offset and some another stuff were fixed, rebubbled~
реснапить все и вся о/
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edit : offset and some another stuff were fixed, rebubbled~
не хотел особо придираться,но все же буду 
[I Am Yours]
00:16:973 (2,3,1,2) - мне не очень этот паттерн нравится,я бы переделал:
во-первых убрал бы этот слайдер,и добавил бы 1 репит к 00:16:973 (2) - как раз будет заканчиваться и фраза и слайдер на 00:17:941,а потом бы с 00:18:425 сделал бы реверс-слайдеры с синими тикам,тем более так было тут - 00:41:650 (3,4)
00:45:037 - почему здесь пустота? намапить надо бы что-нибудь с ритмом вроде этого:
00:46:731 (1,2,1,2,1) - и так на сложность жаловались,может убрать эти "прыжки"? раз уж изи нету
00:56:167 (2,3) - не знаю почему никто это не выделил,но мне еще в первый раз бросилось в глаза - мне кажется это гораздо сложнее для новичков,чем всякие там 1/2 ритмы. слишком уж короткие слайдертреки - могу предложить только заменить на один реверс-слайдер с двумя репитами,ну или как дальше,с сирклом и реверс-слайдером
01:25:441 (1,2,1,2,1) - опять же спейсинг,и я бы подвинул как-то 01:28:344 (2,1) - наверное,так и задумано,но мне показалось неаккуратным D:
01:56:408 (1,2,3,4) - а вот тут мне кажется можно было облегчить ритм,перегружен 1/2 :/ тем более следующая подобная часть совсем иначе намаплена
[You Are Mine]
01:45:279 (2,3,4) - тут все объекты тоже в 0,75 - думаю,так не должно было быть
02:06:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - и тут
ну а если было так задумано - тем более исправь
и еще - все сердца на обоих диффах понравились,кроме 02:11:892 (1) - не знаю даже почему..наверное,хотелось чтобы конец с началом больше расходился,как во всех остальных
[I Am Yours]
00:16:973 (2,3,1,2) - мне не очень этот паттерн нравится,я бы переделал:
во-первых убрал бы этот слайдер,и добавил бы 1 репит к 00:16:973 (2) - как раз будет заканчиваться и фраза и слайдер на 00:17:941,а потом бы с 00:18:425 сделал бы реверс-слайдеры с синими тикам,тем более так было тут - 00:41:650 (3,4)
00:45:037 - почему здесь пустота? намапить надо бы что-нибудь с ритмом вроде этого:
00:46:731 (1,2,1,2,1) - и так на сложность жаловались,может убрать эти "прыжки"? раз уж изи нету
00:56:167 (2,3) - не знаю почему никто это не выделил,но мне еще в первый раз бросилось в глаза - мне кажется это гораздо сложнее для новичков,чем всякие там 1/2 ритмы. слишком уж короткие слайдертреки - могу предложить только заменить на один реверс-слайдер с двумя репитами,ну или как дальше,с сирклом и реверс-слайдером
01:25:441 (1,2,1,2,1) - опять же спейсинг,и я бы подвинул как-то 01:28:344 (2,1) - наверное,так и задумано,но мне показалось неаккуратным D:
01:56:408 (1,2,3,4) - а вот тут мне кажется можно было облегчить ритм,перегружен 1/2 :/ тем более следующая подобная часть совсем иначе намаплена
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01:45:279 (2,3,4) - тут все объекты тоже в 0,75 - думаю,так не должно было быть
02:06:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - и тут
ну а если было так задумано - тем более исправь
и еще - все сердца на обоих диффах понравились,кроме 02:11:892 (1) - не знаю даже почему..наверное,хотелось чтобы конец с началом больше расходился,как во всех остальных
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у себя всё исправила.
рок проснётся, придёт, глянет.
спасибо.
заебалась с этим сердцем. успела пореветь. в конце концов оно мне не нравится. хуйня какая-то.
рок проснётся, придёт, глянет.
спасибо.
заебалась с этим сердцем. успела пореветь. в конце концов оно мне не нравится. хуйня какая-то.
все пофиксил, да.
спасибо, бим
спасибо, бим
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поздравляю рюшеньку с первой мапой :3
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поздравляю рюшеньку с первой мапой :3
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wow~ Grats ryuu! :>