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Hi, from the mod queue.
[General]
Are you sure that the offset is right? I usually put it with a normal number instead of a negative one, explain that later.
The BPM's good.
Start a Kiai mode in 00:55:197 and end it in 01:01:971, same for 01:18:422 to 01:25:438 (I dunno if it's allowed to end a Kiai mode in a red tick), 01:33:906 to 01:46:003, 01:49:390 to 02:11:890 (probably). I hear a possible Kiai mode in thos parts... of course, that's only a suggestion.
[I Am Yours]
Slider tick in 2 maybe. Thins song sounds like it should be followed by constant beats.
There are 20 spacing issues, open the AImod from the file menu to find them... considering this to be Easy or normal.
00:43:826 Maybe, just maybe, this slider should end in 00:44:551
00:46:729 end it with a finisher maybe...
00:48:664 ^
01:25:438 ^
01:27:374 ^
02:08:503 I actually hear the vocal ending in 02:08:866 instead of 02:08:745.
[You Are Mine]
In the beggining you should add more hit sounds when I hear a finger snap, like a clap or a custom sound.
00:47:213 Finisher?
00:49:148 ^
00:53:503 I think that spinner should end with a normal sound instead of soft, there's a drum sound near it.
01:25:922 Finisher?
01:27:858 ^
01:32:213 Same reason as 00:53:503
I don't see anything else.
________________________
The thing about this is that I kinda suck at this
, bt anyway, I really hope that it was helpful.
[General]
Are you sure that the offset is right? I usually put it with a normal number instead of a negative one, explain that later.
The BPM's good.
Start a Kiai mode in 00:55:197 and end it in 01:01:971, same for 01:18:422 to 01:25:438 (I dunno if it's allowed to end a Kiai mode in a red tick), 01:33:906 to 01:46:003, 01:49:390 to 02:11:890 (probably). I hear a possible Kiai mode in thos parts... of course, that's only a suggestion.
[I Am Yours]
Slider tick in 2 maybe. Thins song sounds like it should be followed by constant beats.
There are 20 spacing issues, open the AImod from the file menu to find them... considering this to be Easy or normal.
00:43:826 Maybe, just maybe, this slider should end in 00:44:551
00:46:729 end it with a finisher maybe...
00:48:664 ^
01:25:438 ^
01:27:374 ^
02:08:503 I actually hear the vocal ending in 02:08:866 instead of 02:08:745.
[You Are Mine]
In the beggining you should add more hit sounds when I hear a finger snap, like a clap or a custom sound.
00:47:213 Finisher?
00:49:148 ^
00:53:503 I think that spinner should end with a normal sound instead of soft, there's a drum sound near it.
01:25:922 Finisher?
01:27:858 ^
01:32:213 Same reason as 00:53:503
I don't see anything else.
________________________
The thing about this is that I kinda suck at this
, bt anyway, I really hope that it was helpful.
Topic Starter
thanks, crok ~
about offset. i don't know how to correctly put it. so i trust the people who check it.
about offset. i don't know how to correctly put it. so i trust the people who check it.
It kinda seems that you ignored what I said about the Kiai mode. It's not allowed to start the Kiai mode on the places you putted, you can only start the Kiai mode on the big white ticks, meaning, in the place where I told you to put up the Kiai modes. Keep the last one... I like it . I know I said suggestion, but that meant if you wanted to add a Kiai mode or not...
Sorry if I'm being harsh, but that's what the rules say.
. I know I said suggestion, but that meant if you wanted to add a Kiai mode or not...Sorry if I'm being harsh, but that's what the rules say.
Hello~
Some suggestions:
[General]
No source?
Even the easiest diff has 3.33 stars. I'm afraid you have to add a easier diff if you're going to rank this one.
[I Am Yours]
By using AIMod you could find there're lots of spacing issues. You should fix them all.
00:00:761 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:567 (3) - Add claps to the reverse arrow and the end.
00:29:793 (4) - ^
00:41:648 (3,4) - ^
01:02:455 (1) - Add finish to the end.
01:16:124 - Useless timing point.
01:42:132 - Add clap.
01:43:100 - ^
01:59:793 (2) - Add clap to the end.
02:05:358 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:503 (1) - ^
02:11:890 (1,1) - No sure about these 2 sliders. They sound weird, timing off, and have same colors in different combos.
Probably unrankable. I highly suggest you should ask some MATs/BATs about them.
[You Are Mine]
00:41:406 (1,2,3,4) - Weird spacing. You don't have to turn the spacing down when you turn down the slider velocity.
01:05:842 (1,2,3) - ^
01:36:809 (1,2,3) - ^
01:51:084 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:06:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:11:890 (1,1) - Same as the former diff, you know what I'm going to say.
02:11:890 - 2 timing points here. Delete 1 of them.
That's all. Good luck~
Some suggestions:
[General]
No source?
Even the easiest diff has 3.33 stars. I'm afraid you have to add a easier diff if you're going to rank this one.
[I Am Yours]
By using AIMod you could find there're lots of spacing issues. You should fix them all.
00:00:761 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:567 (3) - Add claps to the reverse arrow and the end.
00:29:793 (4) - ^
00:41:648 (3,4) - ^
01:02:455 (1) - Add finish to the end.
01:16:124 - Useless timing point.
01:42:132 - Add clap.
01:43:100 - ^
01:59:793 (2) - Add clap to the end.
02:05:358 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:503 (1) - ^
02:11:890 (1,1) - No sure about these 2 sliders. They sound weird, timing off, and have same colors in different combos.
Probably unrankable. I highly suggest you should ask some MATs/BATs about them.
[You Are Mine]
00:41:406 (1,2,3,4) - Weird spacing. You don't have to turn the spacing down when you turn down the slider velocity.
01:05:842 (1,2,3) - ^
01:36:809 (1,2,3) - ^
01:51:084 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:06:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:11:890 (1,1) - Same as the former diff, you know what I'm going to say.
02:11:890 - 2 timing points here. Delete 1 of them.
That's all. Good luck~
kawaii_uguu
mod 4 mod4mod queue inc 
General:
You really sure about not getting another easier difficulty? I think there are some guidelines(not rules) which say that a map should have a difficulty below 3.0 and one above. Let us hold to those guidelines?
I Am Yours:
00:00:761 (1) - Remove NC. Two (1) following are not allowed. (Well, that's what I've been told by a MAT once)
00:40:680 (2) - Ad a clap at the end.
00:42:616 (4) - Clat at the beginning.
00:50:600 (1,2) - Add a finish on each of its endings.
01:29:309 (1,2) - ^
02:06:084 (3) - That's too hard. Even for a Normal imo. No beginner will hit it.
You Are Mine:
00:52:535 (1,2,3) - Do not agree with anti-jump there. The prev formation [00:51:568 (1,2,3) - ] was already spreading the spacing a bit from the first formation [00:50:600 (1,2,3) - ]. So making it into jumps would be more fun to play.
01:31:245 (1,2,3) - Pretty much the same with the things said above. Don't throw anti jumps like that into the map.
Cute map, nice message ^.^
If I had a star I'd shoot it.
General:
You really sure about not getting another easier difficulty? I think there are some guidelines(not rules) which say that a map should have a difficulty below 3.0 and one above. Let us hold to those guidelines?
I Am Yours:
00:00:761 (1) - Remove NC. Two (1) following are not allowed. (Well, that's what I've been told by a MAT once)
00:40:680 (2) - Ad a clap at the end.
00:42:616 (4) - Clat at the beginning.
00:50:600 (1,2) - Add a finish on each of its endings.
01:29:309 (1,2) - ^
02:06:084 (3) - That's too hard. Even for a Normal imo. No beginner will hit it.
You Are Mine:
00:52:535 (1,2,3) - Do not agree with anti-jump there. The prev formation [00:51:568 (1,2,3) - ] was already spreading the spacing a bit from the first formation [00:50:600 (1,2,3) - ]. So making it into jumps would be more fun to play.
01:31:245 (1,2,3) - Pretty much the same with the things said above. Don't throw anti jumps like that into the map.
Cute map, nice message ^.^
If I had a star I'd shoot it.
Their my own suggestions
[You Are mine]
00:28:826 (2) - Spacing?
00:45:761 (4) - ^
02:06:326 (1) - ^
Thank you and good luck.
[You Are mine]
00:28:826 (2) - Spacing?
00:45:761 (4) - ^
02:06:326 (1) - ^
Thank you and good luck.
Hello, I'm busting through windows and whatnot, modding all sorts of maps.
Thank ya for requestin'. \:D/
[General]
00:20:116 (3) - (Suggestion) Move center anchor to x: 328, y: 249? (Or something closer to make it symmetrical.)
00:29:793 (4) - Adjust this slider?
00:55:197 (1) - ^
[You Are Mine]
00:53:503 (1) - (Suggestion) I think a note would be able to replace this spinner, as well as a brief break.
02:11:890 (1,1) - I love these sliders, but the fact that the slider start and end nearly overlap each other makes things look very iffy.
Hope this mod becomes of some use to you. Good luck!
Thank ya for requestin'. \:D/
[General]
- Cute song. x3
- soft-slidertick.wav is 0 bytes. Use blank.wav, since it's at least 44 bytes.
00:20:116 (3) - (Suggestion) Move center anchor to x: 328, y: 249? (Or something closer to make it symmetrical.)
00:29:793 (4) - Adjust this slider?
00:55:197 (1) - ^
What I fixed up:
(I'm sure you'll get the jist of all of my other slider fixes after the three screenshots. xp
01:18:422 (1) - ^[You Are Mine]
00:53:503 (1) - (Suggestion) I think a note would be able to replace this spinner, as well as a brief break.
02:11:890 (1,1) - I love these sliders, but the fact that the slider start and end nearly overlap each other makes things look very iffy.
Hope this mod becomes of some use to you. Good luck!
I Am Yours
00:13:584 - fix the spacing here
00:53:019~00:53:624 - reduce volume to 30%
01:31:729~01:32:455 - ^
You Are Mine
00:27:253 - this timing is useless so you need to del it
00:50:600~00:51:084 (1,2,3) - use 1.3x distance spacing (suggestions)
01:10:922 (3) - x:328 y:280
01:18:422 (4) - add whistle at the beginning
01:19:390 (7) - ^
01:44:551 (1,2,3,4) - you don't have to turn the spacing down
good luck~
00:13:584 - fix the spacing here
00:53:019~00:53:624 - reduce volume to 30%
01:31:729~01:32:455 - ^
You Are Mine
00:27:253 - this timing is useless so you need to del it
00:50:600~00:51:084 (1,2,3) - use 1.3x distance spacing (suggestions)
01:10:922 (3) - x:328 y:280
01:18:422 (4) - add whistle at the beginning
01:19:390 (7) - ^
01:44:551 (1,2,3,4) - you don't have to turn the spacing down
good luck~
- GUIDELINES
- When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
- When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXI AM YOURS
SPOILER
- 00:15:277 (5) - How bout make this slider a blanket for the previous one?
- 00:38:019 (2) - Weird slider. Try cloning the other one instead.
- 01:02:455 (1) - I think it's better to clone the previous slider too. Oh and Remove new combo. Add new combo on the next note.
- 01:06:567 (7) - Unstack and make it like those little cute stacks you made.
- 02:11:890 (1,2) - About the SB. Try to make a lil arrow too for users who would use hard rock for this diff.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXYOU ARE MINE
SPOILER
- 00:08:745 (2) - Remove the red point at the 3rd point of this slider.
- 01:02:213 (1) - Remove new combo. Add new combo on the next note.
- END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~
- Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
- If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
- I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
Topic Starter
lol. art was so right from the start. the artist painted it in such a way.Philippines wrote:
Why is the BG upside-down?
also thanks for mod :3
Second Pomplamoose song I've modded today. What a coincidence! From my queue.
[General]
-- "3 New Songs Woot!" is the name of the album. Throw that into the tags.
-- The offset is off. I'm not good with timing, so find someone who is to help you.
-- Make the tick rate consistent on I am Yours.
[I Am Yours]
00:00:761 (1) - Remove the new combo here. It's silly.
01:11:164 (2) - Stack this on the end of the slider, not the beginning.
01:36:809 (4) - Instead of putting the slider-point at the beginning of the slider, put it towards the middle like this.
02:06:084 (3) - Use distance snap. Something like this is hard to read for players of intermediate experience.
02:11:890 (1,1) - Ugly overlap.
[You Are Mine]
00:57:132 (5) - Remove the whistle from the start of this slider.
01:42:374 (0) - Add a note here to keep the flow going.
Really nice map.
[General]
-- "3 New Songs Woot!" is the name of the album. Throw that into the tags.
-- The offset is off. I'm not good with timing, so find someone who is to help you.
-- Make the tick rate consistent on I am Yours.
[I Am Yours]
00:00:761 (1) - Remove the new combo here. It's silly.
01:11:164 (2) - Stack this on the end of the slider, not the beginning.
01:36:809 (4) - Instead of putting the slider-point at the beginning of the slider, put it towards the middle like this.
02:06:084 (3) - Use distance snap. Something like this is hard to read for players of intermediate experience.
02:11:890 (1,1) - Ugly overlap.
[You Are Mine]
00:57:132 (5) - Remove the whistle from the start of this slider.
01:42:374 (0) - Add a note here to keep the flow going.
Really nice map.
Hi ~ [Ryuu] ~ 
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
That's all ~
Good luck with rank ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[You Are Mine]
- 00:57:878 (6) - Try perfect stack.
- 02:08:765 (7) - ^
[I Am Yours]
- 00:28:604 (2,3) - This spaing confused play with beginner.
That's all ~
Good luck with rank ~
Ohey, saw this beatmap when I looked on your profile. (since you're [Ryuu] and Ryu & [Ryu] are friends of me. xD)
Anyway, thought I would mod this map, cool song~
[I Am Yours]
00:24:249 (1) - I think an arc would be nice here >w<
00:36:346 (3) - put this one on top of (4)'s start
00:39:854 (1,2) - make a nicer pattern with 2 sliders
00:59:814 (2) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider end
01:04:168 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:06:588 (7) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider start
01:19:894 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:21:588 (5) - make it overlap with (4)'s slider end
01:36:830 (4) - arc would be nice here http://puu.sh/s6bd
Couldn't find anything else here except for more notes that should be overlapped with slider end/start, but I didn't mention them all because then it would even fill the mod up with more "make it overlap" XD
[You Are Mine]
00:15:781 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:37:798 (3) - I think this slider could be better
Couldn't find anything else here.
Great beatmap \o/
erm,, is a guest diff still possbile? :c
Anyway, thought I would mod this map, cool song~
[I Am Yours]
00:24:249 (1) - I think an arc would be nice here >w<
00:36:346 (3) - put this one on top of (4)'s start
00:39:854 (1,2) - make a nicer pattern with 2 sliders
00:59:814 (2) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider end
01:04:168 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:06:588 (7) - make it overlap with (1)'s slider start
01:19:894 (3) - make it overlap with (2)'s slider end
01:21:588 (5) - make it overlap with (4)'s slider end
01:36:830 (4) - arc would be nice here http://puu.sh/s6bd
Couldn't find anything else here except for more notes that should be overlapped with slider end/start, but I didn't mention them all because then it would even fill the mod up with more "make it overlap" XD
[You Are Mine]
00:15:781 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:37:798 (3) - I think this slider could be better
Couldn't find anything else here.
Great beatmap \o/
erm,, is a guest diff still possbile? :c
Topic Starter
lol.Ayu wrote:
Ohey, saw this beatmap when I looked on your profile. (since you're [Ryuu] and Ryu & [Ryu] are friends of me. xD)
sorry. but this beatmap for rock. and he make GD.Ayu wrote:
erm,, is a guest diff still possbile? :c
as you can see, the name of the difficulties has special meaning.
so no. no more GD.
aaaaaaaaaaand thanks for mod, ayu :3
Привет, [Ryuu].
М4М.
[General]
Ничего~
[I Am Yours]
00:00:298 (1,2) - Может, сделать эти два слайдера чуть тише?
00:06:588 (3) - клап на реверс?
00:14:330 (4) - клап на конец?
00:43:846 - не уверен насчет этого брейка. Я говорил до этого с Бимом, и он сказал мне, что лучше не делать брейки на 1-2 секунды. Хотя, может тут это оправдано.
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на начало слайдера?
00:59:814 (2) - ^ на реверс?
01:01:507 (5) - И тут свисток? Вместе с клапом.
[You Are Mine]
Много джампов по всей карте. Стиль такой, думаю, но в моментах, как 00:11:427 (9,1) - кажется немного не подходящим. Просто мысли вслух, ничего, выглядит вполне ок.
Проблемы с нк, как мне кажется, вот например 01:14:088 (3,4,5,1) -
00:00:298 (1,2) - Опять, чуть тише?
Может либо это 00:46:749 (1,2,3) - чуть прижать, либо это 00:48:685 (1,2,3) - чуть растянуть по спейсингу, чтобы они отличались друг от друга? А, я, кажется, понял идею, так что не надо.
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на конец?
01:00:539 (3) - ^ (но тут сомневаюсь)
01:01:507 (6) - ^ на начало?
01:11:185 (4) - Свисток?
01:13:120 (10) - ^
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Тут
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Может, продолжишь дальше? Как пример: http://puu.sh/s7pH
Замечательная карта. Даю звезду.
М4М.
[General]
Ничего~
[I Am Yours]
00:00:298 (1,2) - Может, сделать эти два слайдера чуть тише?
00:06:588 (3) - клап на реверс?
00:14:330 (4) - клап на конец?
00:43:846 - не уверен насчет этого брейка. Я говорил до этого с Бимом, и он сказал мне, что лучше не делать брейки на 1-2 секунды. Хотя, может тут это оправдано.
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на начало слайдера?
00:59:814 (2) - ^ на реверс?
01:01:507 (5) - И тут свисток? Вместе с клапом.
[You Are Mine]
Много джампов по всей карте. Стиль такой, думаю, но в моментах, как 00:11:427 (9,1) - кажется немного не подходящим. Просто мысли вслух, ничего, выглядит вполне ок.
Проблемы с нк, как мне кажется, вот например 01:14:088 (3,4,5,1) -
00:00:298 (1,2) - Опять, чуть тише?
00:59:088 (1) - свисток на конец?
01:00:539 (3) - ^ (но тут сомневаюсь)
01:01:507 (6) - ^ на начало?
01:11:185 (4) - Свисток?
01:13:120 (10) - ^
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Тут
01:31:265 (1,2,3) - Может, продолжишь дальше? Как пример: http://puu.sh/s7pH
Замечательная карта. Даю звезду.
Yup. Your SB modder is here.
I checked your SB, but it was so good quality, so I decided to do a standard mod instead.
*This isn't nazi, but a suggestion. Of course you can just ignore all things.
[I am yours]
00:38:523 (3) - move 2nd point to (204,72)
00:44:572 - I will place another slider (like number 5) if I was you
01:31:265 (3) - move last point to (448,232)
01:36:830 (4) - move 2nd point to (208,16)
01:59:814 (2) - How about this: 356,124,119814,2,0,B|308:144|264:120|256:76,2,120,0|8|0
02:01:023 (3) - move to (364,136) if you did ^
[You are mine]
00:01:507 (2) - move 2nd point to (184,296)
00:34:894 (1) - move 2nd point to (160,308) / 3rd point to (144,232)
01:52:314 (5) - move 3rd point to (124,176)
That's all! Good luck
ps. I loved the heart sliders ><
I checked your SB, but it was so good quality, so I decided to do a standard mod instead.
*This isn't nazi, but a suggestion. Of course you can just ignore all things.
[I am yours]
00:38:523 (3) - move 2nd point to (204,72)
00:44:572 - I will place another slider (like number 5) if I was you
01:31:265 (3) - move last point to (448,232)
01:36:830 (4) - move 2nd point to (208,16)
01:59:814 (2) - How about this: 356,124,119814,2,0,B|308:144|264:120|256:76,2,120,0|8|0
02:01:023 (3) - move to (364,136) if you did ^
[You are mine]
00:01:507 (2) - move 2nd point to (184,296)
00:34:894 (1) - move 2nd point to (160,308) / 3rd point to (144,232)
01:52:314 (5) - move 3rd point to (124,176)
That's all! Good luck
ps. I loved the heart sliders ><
Topic Starter
nyan ~Shino wrote:
ps. I loved the heart sliders ><
thanks, shino :3
- Hi hi~ request from my queue~
- Red : I think you must to fix.
- Blue : Need to discuss.
- Black : Just suggest or nazi.
[General]
- I think you can use this BG , because people who in the BG is upside down
[I Am Yours]
- 00:41:668 (3) - Add a NC here because this parttern is a bit long xDD
- 00:52:556 (3,4) - Stack notes isn't a good idea on the easiest diff >_<
- 00:59:814 (2) - Spacing?
[You Are Mine]
- 00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Put to other place plz , this is too ugly >_<
- 00:52:556 (1,2) - Ctrl+R to make the spacing the same
- 00:55:217 (1) - Add a finish start
--------------------------------------------------------
Good Luck :3
May only be me, but ok. Had it after updating.
redownload it, Ayu :3
Helllo
[I Am Yours]
00:44:572 (2,1) - Add an object between this object, it feels empty if you keep this
01:25:217 - Add note for following bass?
02:07:798 (2) - Extend it to red tick? Like others?
[You Are Mine]
00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'm pretty not sure if this overlapped by hitbursts and it makes unreadable for players who play this. You should test it yourself
01:11:910 (6) - New combo for your combo pattern?
01:34:410 (3,4) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, so it's hard to read for players during gameplay
Auto stars? lol
[I Am Yours]
00:44:572 (2,1) - Add an object between this object, it feels empty if you keep this
01:25:217 - Add note for following bass?
02:07:798 (2) - Extend it to red tick? Like others?
[You Are Mine]
00:06:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'm pretty not sure if this overlapped by hitbursts and it makes unreadable for players who play this. You should test it yourself
01:11:910 (6) - New combo for your combo pattern?
01:34:410 (3,4) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, so it's hard to read for players during gameplay
Auto stars? lol
[Hard(?)]
00:19:773 (4) - a bit misleading for me, the apparent spacing multiple is smaller because the next slider is slowered. You can consider placing it around (136,296).
00:51:104 (3,3,3) - finishes match the song's momentum somehow
00:20:136 (5) - suggested to NC here to notify the slider speed change.
00:29:088 (3,5) - stack properly
01:29:814 (3,3,3) - same as 0:51
[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better
Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.
00:19:773 (4) - a bit misleading for me, the apparent spacing multiple is smaller because the next slider is slowered. You can consider placing it around (136,296).
00:51:104 (3,3,3) - finishes match the song's momentum somehow
00:20:136 (5) - suggested to NC here to notify the slider speed change.
00:29:088 (3,5) - stack properly
01:29:814 (3,3,3) - same as 0:51
[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better
Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.
thank you, wmf~wmfchris wrote:
[Normal(?)]
01:12:394 (4) - it's suggested to move it somewhere else because the 300 signs from (2) may cover the repeat arrow of (4)
- i tried it with default skin and assured that hitburst disappears before approach circle touches the slider so i left it how it is
01:59:088 (4,1,2) - they are covered each other a bit and separating them will be nice.
done... i suppose :о
02:15:298 (1) - ^, even the arrow is covered... place it somewhere like (344,188) would be better
okay
waiting for ryuu
Topic Starter
easy diff would be extra.wmfchris wrote:
Considering you have quite a lot of 1/2 beats in normal and this song is not really long, you may consider adding an easier diff, but the current one is fine too.
two people - two diffs.
for the third just don't have names.
all fixed.
thank u.
Here we go.
[Storyboard]
- Change "shows it's face" to "shows its face". Remember that "it's" means "it is".
- Change "too much too drink" to "too much to drink".
[You Are Mine]
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart sliders are great, first of all. However, I think you can do these without having the start and end overlap. It could be confusing, especially with HR or DT mods. This could be helpful, I make hearts in this way so they're more readable. You can use Rotate (ctrl+shift+r) to set the angle you want afterwards. Lastly, the second heart slider doesn't seem to match up with the vocals perfectly.
[I Am Yours]
- Consider raising the Approach Rate slightly? There are many objects at once and it's a bit messy currently.
01:11:185 (2,3,4) - It'd be great if you could move this pattern so there's no chance of the hitburst from (2) blocking the repeat arrow of (4). I know wmf already said this, but I agree with him and it doesn't hurt to be safe.
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart slider stuff applies here too.
About adding an Easy difficulty... I don't know. I think it'd be good for the mapset if you could somehow make the difficulty names work. Lastly, I'd still rather rank this than bubble this, seeing how you have two MAT mods, aah. Just PM me after fixes.
[Storyboard]
- Change "shows it's face" to "shows its face". Remember that "it's" means "it is".
- Change "too much too drink" to "too much to drink".
[You Are Mine]
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart sliders are great, first of all. However, I think you can do these without having the start and end overlap. It could be confusing, especially with HR or DT mods. This could be helpful, I make hearts in this way so they're more readable. You can use Rotate (ctrl+shift+r) to set the angle you want afterwards. Lastly, the second heart slider doesn't seem to match up with the vocals perfectly.
[I Am Yours]
- Consider raising the Approach Rate slightly? There are many objects at once and it's a bit messy currently.
01:11:185 (2,3,4) - It'd be great if you could move this pattern so there's no chance of the hitburst from (2) blocking the repeat arrow of (4). I know wmf already said this, but I agree with him and it doesn't hurt to be safe.
02:11:910 (1,1) - Heart slider stuff applies here too.
About adding an Easy difficulty... I don't know. I think it'd be good for the mapset if you could somehow make the difficulty names work. Lastly, I'd still rather rank this than bubble this, seeing how you have two MAT mods, aah. Just PM me after fixes.
[I Am Yours]
Other looked pretty nice
EDIT: After discussing with other members, we think this map need a "real easy", those stack notes and overlaps can be hard to newbie :/
00:13:362 (2,3) - Why not perfectly stack them?Well I saw you use this kind of stack many times, looked fine- 00:19:168 (2) - I feel only one reverse here sounds better, idk why though, just feeling so, here is hard to follow lyric
Other looked pretty nice
EDIT: After discussing with other members, we think this map need a "real easy", those stack notes and overlaps can be hard to newbie :/
Topic Starter
thanks, sapphire and breeze.
i understand and partially agree with you about easy difficulty, but i ask to consider as a special case, because it was a birthday map for rock ,and only two difficulties may match with the lyrics in the chorus. i recently saw some ranked maps with 2-diffs mapset, so I wish mine was ranked too. i'm agree to make the normal easier, please point out the things that disturb you the most - i'll try to fix them. what's about hearts - i tried to remake them in a better way, but it didn't make them actually more readable..so if you have any thoughts - please help me out :3
i understand and partially agree with you about easy difficulty, but i ask to consider as a special case, because it was a birthday map for rock ,and only two difficulties may match with the lyrics in the chorus. i recently saw some ranked maps with 2-diffs mapset, so I wish mine was ranked too. i'm agree to make the normal easier, please point out the things that disturb you the most - i'll try to fix them. what's about hearts - i tried to remake them in a better way, but it didn't make them actually more readable..so if you have any thoughts - please help me out :3
Those anti-jump stack notes, must be hard to newbie to understand, Although it's fun for me :/
If you want to make your normal easier, try delete some notes that are 1/2 beat after another notes or slider, that would be help
If you want to make your normal easier, try delete some notes that are 1/2 beat after another notes or slider, that would be help
Sadly the Normal difficulty still shows a 3.5 star, but ranking rules said each mapset need at least one difficulty is 2.5~3 star, I'm afraid you had to add another easy diff, if you don't want to add an easy, then you had to make your normal more easier, sorry but I can't make this exception for you