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Mizuki Nana - Uchi he Kaerou

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M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a

ikari_kyon wrote:

from timing help
no much problems here, just adjust some offsets:
Im lazy to write :o
SPOILER
Thanks for timing help :D~ Fixed all!

l1106188 wrote:

Request from my modding queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[Easy]

  1. 00:32:903 (2) - NC? Fixed


[Normal]

  1. 00:14:403 (1,2,1) - cover completely Already?o.o
  2. 00:31:069 (1) - The first point 2 grid left Fixed
  3. 00:33:903 (3,1) - (3) NC and remove (1) NC k~

[Hard]

  1. I think "SV 1.8" so fast I think so too o.o; I'll change it to 1.6 or 1.5

  2. 00:32:403 (4) - NC k~
  3. 00:31:069 (1) - The first point 2 grid left There's no slider oAo;
  4. 00:33:903 (3,1) - (3) NC and remove (1) NC nope
good song
and sorry to my poor English
Thanks for mod :D
Last edited by M a n a , edited 1 time in total.
Loneight
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1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
oh! sorry , I forget to remove the copy :? (I think I am so tired...)
this post no give KD~

[Hard]

  1. 00:18:390 (1) - The third point 2 grid left
  2. 00:25:056 (5) - ^ 2 grid right
  3. 00:28:389 (4) - ^ 2 grid down
  4. 00:41:395 (4) - ^ 2 grd right
  5. 01:10:328 (3) - ^ 1 grid left
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a

l1106188 wrote:

oh! sorry , I forget to remove the copy :? (I think I am so tired...)
this post no give KD~

[Hard]

  1. 00:18:390 (1) - The third point 2 grid left
  2. 00:25:056 (5) - ^ 2 grid right
  3. 00:28:389 (4) - ^ 2 grid down
  4. 00:41:395 (4) - ^ 2 grd right
  5. 01:10:328 (3) - ^ 1 grid left
Fixed all~
Thanks for mod :D
B2IN
B2IN
H i there 'v'

[General]
tag is empty
[Easy]
nothing
[Normal]
00:16:069 (2,1) - completely stack
00:26:402 (1,2) - how about this one ?http://puu.sh/nash
00:48:903 (1) - http://puu.sh/nasO
[Hard]
00:07:723 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/n1nr
00:14:403 (7) - how about this one ? http://puu.sh/n1rM
304,236,14403,2,0,B|323:133|428:124|496:152|532:256|483:333|404:364|328:308,1,450,2|2

good luck ~
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a

B2IN wrote:

H i there 'v'

[General]
tag is empty I don't know what should I put ;_;
[Easy]
nothing
[Normal]
00:16:069 (2,1) - completely stack
00:26:402 (1,2) - how about this one ?http://puu.sh/nash
00:48:903 (1) - http://puu.sh/nasO
[Hard]
00:07:723 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/n1nr
00:14:403 (7) - how about this one ? http://puu.sh/n1rM
304,236,14403,2,0,B|323:133|428:124|496:152|532:256|483:333|404:364|328:308,1,450,2|2

good luck ~
Nice placement!>w<
Fixed all~
Thanks for mod
Betsuto
395 posts
Joined August 2011
Betsuto
[General]
SPOILER
OMG ! Your beatmap is make sleepy !
(but It's good song. I like it ^^)

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:31:056 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:895 (1) - remove new combo

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:33:895 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:841 (1) - remove finish (head slide)

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:22:056 (6) - add new combo
00:22:390 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:895 (4 , 5 , 6) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nbnE

Good luck ˊ• ᵜ •ˋ) ~ ♪
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a

bestz2541 wrote:

[General]
SPOILER
OMG ! Your beatmap is make sleepy ! Sorry ;_; I'm noob mapper...
(but It's good song. I like it ^^)

[Easy] Fixed some
SPOILER
00:31:056 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:895 (1) - remove new combo

[Normal] Fixed some
SPOILER
00:33:895 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:841 (1) - remove finish (head slide)

[Hard] Fixed all~
SPOILER
00:22:056 (6) - add new combo
00:22:390 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:895 (4 , 5 , 6) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nbnE

Good luck ˊ• ᵜ •ˋ) ~ ♪
Thanks for mod :D~
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana
Mod Request from My Queue ✿

-Hard-

Circle Size +1?
00:14:403 (7) - use the approach circle of 00:16:403 (1) to make this slider round

sweet song x33 haven't seen something like this mapped xD
good luck ^^
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki
Hi, M a n a

From my modding queue

[General]
  1. Maximum score of Easy diff have more than Normal diff. Make Normal diff is more difficult.
    Maximum score of Easy diff : 182,982
    Maximum score of Normal diff : 166,720
[Easy]
  • 00:31:056 (1,2,3) - In (2,3) will change the rhythm. Which makes rhythm faster. People be surprised here. And too difficult for new players. I suggest to make http://puu.sh/nmx9 . Is solve the difficulty.
[Normal]
  1. Star rating is 1.50. You should make it more difficult.
  • 00:29:056 (3) - Move to x:244 y:184
    00:50:895 (3) - Move down 1 grid
[Hard]
  • I don't find the problem.
That's all, that I can find them.

Good luck~
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod

:!:default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
Timing
  1. Offset=370
  2. 82302 - BPM here need recheck
Hard
  1. 00:18:369 (1) - finish at start
  2. 00:45:895 (1) - ^
  3. 00:47:895 (4,5) - not good use anti jump here
  4. 01:06:899 (1) - remove whistle on slider body
others seems fine,but timing should be recheck
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
Thanks for mod guys~ :D
EDIT: WRONG ACC -A-; orz...
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
Modding~~

[General]
The Volume between 00:57:870 - 01:12:012 sounds a bit too noisy.
You may reduce to 5 ~ 10%.

[Easy]
00:31:036 (1) - Beginner will get extremly surprised when the Speed changes surprisingly. Like nich some post before said, you should take the Suggest. Or, completly remove this Slider because there's no voice anyway, and it won't be so bad if you remove it.
00:32:870 (7) - NC.
00:43:370 (5) - I hate this Slider. :E Try this. http://puu.sh/nHIj
00:48:370 (4) - Set Whistle.
00:54:870 (3) - It can be irritating for beginners. For the normal or hard Diff, it would be ok.
00:57:870 (1) - I would delete it.
00:59:155 (6) - NC.
01:26:841 (1) - This Slider is too close on the Spinner, since the Speed changes there too. Set on 01:27:341 and 01:27:841 Circles.

[Normal]
00:03:036 (3) - NC. By the way, the Slider is really off from Rhythm. But I also have to say that the time between 00:03:036 and 00:05:703 is very awful to map.
00:09:036 (3) - This is better: http://puu.sh/nMnW
00:44:370 (1) - Maybe like this?: http://puu.sh/nMkS
01:03:441 (4) - Try to move it away from the bottom. I suggest to change like this: http://puu.sh/nMmR
01:13:298 - You could decrease the Volume to 5%. Because the Hitsound at 01:15:012 doesn't fit well.

[Hard]
00:06:370 (1) - It's off from Rhythm.
00:14:369 (7) - NC.
00:16:369 (1) - Remove NC.
00:32:370 (1) - ^
00:54:370 (6,1) - I don't like the Spacing.
01:08:584 (4,5,6) - Unconfortable Spacing.
01:15:512 (2) - You could try this: http://puu.sh/nMth


Hum.. good Map. -w-
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Modding~~

[General]
The Volume between 00:57:870 - 01:12:012 sounds a bit too noisy.
You may reduce to 5 ~ 10%.

[Easy]
00:31:036 (1) - Beginner will get extremly surprised when the Speed changes surprisingly. Like nich some post before said, you should take the Suggest. Or, completly remove this Slider because there's no voice anyway, and it won't be so bad if you remove it. Well,I'm forget to check nich's mod ;_; Fixed
00:32:870 (7) - NC. Fixed
00:43:370 (5) - I hate this Slider. :E Try this. http://puu.sh/nHIj Fixed
00:48:370 (4) - Set Whistle. will consider later
00:54:870 (3) - It can be irritating for beginners. For the normal or hard Diff, it would be ok.Fixed
00:57:870 (1) - I would delete it. Save it
00:59:155 (6) - NC. nope
01:26:841 (1) - This Slider is too close on the Spinner, since the Speed changes there too. Set on 01:27:341 and 01:27:841 Circles. Save it

[Normal]
00:03:036 (3) - NC. By the way, the Slider is really off from Rhythm. But I also have to say that the time between 00:03:036 and 00:05:703 is very awful to map. sorry ;_;
00:09:036 (3) - This is better: http://puu.sh/nMnW Fixed
00:44:370 (1) - Maybe like this?: http://puu.sh/nMkS Fixed
01:03:441 (4) - Try to move it away from the bottom. I suggest to change like this: http://puu.sh/nMmR Fixed
01:13:298 - You could decrease the Volume to 5%. Because the Hitsound at 01:15:012 doesn't fit well. will consider later

[Hard]
00:06:370 (1) - It's off from Rhythm. mmm... I change the SV and I didn't re-check that part,I'm lazy orz....
00:14:369 (7) - NC. Fixed
00:16:369 (1) - Remove NC. Fixed
00:32:370 (1) - ^ nope,Because fit the song,but If someone say it again,I'll change
00:54:370 (6,1) - I don't like the Spacing.

bestz2541 wrote:

OMG ! Your beatmap is make sleepy !
Because someone say that,I make a jump on some part. And I think it fits. mmm...But if someone recomended me to follow the DS,I'll change...
01:08:584 (4,5,6) - Unconfortable Spacing. Mmm... reduce the spacing
01:15:512 (2) - You could try this: http://puu.sh/nMth Fixed


Hum.. good Map. -w-
Thanks for mod :D
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan

M a n a wrote:

00:54:370 (6,1) - I don't like the Spacing.

bestz2541 wrote:

OMG ! Your beatmap is make sleepy !
Because someone say that,I make a jump on some part. And I think it fits. mmm...But if someone recomended me to follow the DS,I'll change...
I think the noob of me wrote this, so it's just my Opinion. :)
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a
Ahaha xD
It's okay~
S h i a
397 posts
Joined December 2009
S h i a
A bit late. :D/
mod request from my queue :D

[Overall]
Nice music.

[Easy]
pretty nice map set. fit music well. :P
I just noticed some sliders need to fix a bit.
for example
00:03:036 (2) - Original:
SPOILER
suggestion:
SPOILER
This little bit change will make your map looking better :D/
so here is a list for sliders should change a bit.
00:05:036 (4) - 
00:27:703 (2) - 
00:34:370 (2,3) - 
00:48:870 (1) - 
00:51:870 (1) - blank better with 00:53:370 (2) - 
01:00:441 (3) - make this slider looking better
yea that's all for easy

[Normal]
As in [Easy], same slider issues here.
and here is the list and example.
00:51:870 (1) - Original:
SPOILER
Fixed:
SPOILER
00:56:870 (3) - 
01:06:012 (5) - 
01:16:262 (1,3) -
01:07:941 (2,3) - suggest move this 2 note some where? stack here is not good.

[Hard]
Approach Rate +1?
Overall Difficulty +1?
00:14:369 (1) - this is nice :D
00:38:870 (1) - add a new combo here would be better for reading
01:05:584 (6) - Newcombo or move this slider somewhere

Well that's all for me. good luck and. yes. a star. :D/
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a

S h i a wrote:

A bit late. :D/
mod request from my queue :D

[Overall]
Nice music.

[Easy]
pretty nice map set. fit music well. :P
I just noticed some sliders need to fix a bit.
for example
00:03:036 (2) - Original:
SPOILER
suggestion:
SPOILER
This little bit change will make your map looking better :D/
so here is a list for sliders should change a bit.
00:05:036 (4) - 
00:27:703 (2) - 
00:34:370 (2,3) - 
00:48:870 (1) - 
00:51:870 (1) - blank better with 00:53:370 (2) - 
01:00:441 (3) - make this slider looking better
yea that's all for easy

[Normal]
As in [Easy], same slider issues here.
and here is the list and example.
00:51:870 (1) - Original:
SPOILER
Fixed:
SPOILER
00:56:870 (3) - 
01:06:012 (5) - 
01:16:262 (1,3) -
01:07:941 (2,3) - suggest move this 2 note some where? stack here is not good.

[Hard]
Approach Rate +1?
Overall Difficulty +1?
00:14:369 (1) - this is nice :D This slider was made by B2IN ouo
00:38:870 (1) - add a new combo here would be better for reading
01:05:584 (6) - Newcombo or move this slider somewhere

Well that's all for me. good luck and. yes. a star. :D/
Fixed all~
Thanks for mod & star ;)
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,787 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi there. Can I mod this beatmap now? 8-)

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Windows informed me that the .mp3's bitrate is 320kbps. Weird. I'm sure enough that it's far below that, and no one complains about this.
  2. The BPM changes seem to be extremely sudden. This can make players confused while playing, especially the Hard players.
>Easy
  1. 01:22:262 (1,2,3) - ...This sounds a bit off.
  2. 01:24:710 - Make another timing point with the same setting as the previous one, then put the spinner at the new timing point and end it at the next timing point?
>Normal
  1. 01:24:710 - Same as Easy.
>Hard
  1. OD+1?
  2. 00:03:703 (3,4) - I tend to get 100s here. Might be just me, though.
  3. 00:55:370 (2) - ^
  4. 00:57:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - I never got a Geki (full 300) even after trying dozens of time. And I tend to hit (1) a bit too early and miss or 50'd (4) dan (5). Huh?
  5. 01:24:710 - Same as Easy.
I was thinking of making a difficulty that's EASIER than Easy, but then I saw the BPM changes.

lol nope

Btw, good mapset and nice song.

Good luck on the way 8-)
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Can I mod this beatmap now? 8-) ofc~x3

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Windows informed me that the .mp3's bitrate is 320kbps. Weird. I'm sure enough that it's far below that, and no one complains about this. Umm.. but -> oAo;
  2. The BPM changes seem to be extremely sudden. This can make players confused while playing, especially the Hard players. I don't think so o.o you can check this map -> Swan Lake Orchestra - Hakuchou no Mizuumi .
>Easy
  1. 01:22:262 (1,2,3) - ...This sounds a bit off. No for me
  2. 01:24:710 - Make another timing point with the same setting as the previous one, then put the spinner at the new timing point and end it at the next timing point? it seems your timing is wrong. So no change
>Normal
  1. 01:24:710 - Same as Easy. Same
>Hard
  1. OD+1? k~
  2. 00:03:703 (3,4) - I tend to get 100s here. Might be just me, though.
  3. 00:55:370 (2) - ^
  4. 00:57:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - I never got a Geki (full 300) even after trying dozens of time. And I tend to hit (1) a bit too early and miss or 50'd (4) dan (5). Huh? Umm,I got SS when I test this map >.>; Well maybe because I made the map -w-;
  5. 01:24:710 - Same as Easy. Same
I was thinking of making a difficulty that's EASIER than Easy, but then I saw the BPM changes.

lol nope haha xD

Btw, good mapset and nice song.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Thanks for mod :D
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,787 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
I knew it. The .mp3 can't be possibly 320 kbps.

And anyway, I actually made a difficulty that's (supposed to be) easier than Easy, named Novice. If you want to insert it to your mapset, insert it. It's okay if you don't, btw. And if you actually insert it, name it as you like.

Oh, and star.

Download: Mizuki Nana - Uchi he Kaerou (M a n a) [Hinsvar's Novice].osu
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a
Add your diff~

and thanks for star ;)
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~
    　
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
    　
    [ General ]
    　
  4. 3Easy... ORZ
  5. Mp3 size 320 kbps is unrankble , change it to 128~192 kbps
    　
    [ Hinsvar's Novice ]
    　
  6. Nice~
    　
    [ Easy ]
    　
  7. 01:19:762 (1) - Remove NC
    　
    [ Normal ]
    　
  8. 00:32:870 (3) - NC here because BPM change
    　
    [ Hard ]
    　
  9. 00:12:703 (4) - Spacing issue
  10. 01:13:298 (4) - NC because slider speed change
    　
    　　--------------------------------------------------------
Very soft song xDD , nice map~
Good Luck :3
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a

bossandy wrote:

  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~
    　
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
    　
    [ General ]
    　
  4. 3Easy... ORZ
  5. Mp3 size 320 kbps is unrankble , change it to 128~192 kbps

    M a n a wrote:

    ;_;
    　
    [ Hinsvar's Novice ]
    　
  6. Nice~
    　
    [ Easy ]
    　
  7. 01:19:762 (1) - Remove NC
    　
    [ Normal ]
    　
  8. 00:32:870 (3) - NC here because BPM change
    　
    [ Hard ]
    　
  9. 00:12:703 (4) - Spacing issue
  10. 01:13:298 (4) - NC because slider speed change
    　
    　　--------------------------------------------------------
Very soft song xDD , nice map~
Good Luck :3
Fixed all~
Thanks for mod~
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[hard&normal]

Spinner New Combo 01:22:874 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.

[General]

fine

[Hinsvar's Novice]

01:09:441 (1,2) - shape suggestion http://puu.sh/oQe0
01:13:298 (1) - NC, cause SV change
like your rhythm

[Easy]

00:05:036 (4) - this obviously sounds late, so may be need to do some ajdustment on the first uninherited section

[Normal]

00:14:370 (1) - http://puu.sh/oQfJ

[Hard]

this song can help me sleep z_z

GL
Hinsvar
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Joined December 2011
Hinsvar

LKs wrote:

[Hinsvar's Novice]

01:09:441 (1,2) - shape suggestion http://puu.sh/oQe0 Made it better, although not exactly following yours.
01:13:298 (1) - NC, cause SV change Done.
like your rhythm lol thx
this song can help me sleep z_z ikr
Thanks for the mod 8-) Also, a new note.

Download: Mizuki Nana - Uchi he Kaerou (M a n a) [Hinsvar's Novice].osu
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a
Thanks for mod LKs~ :D
Updated
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
This is a M4M from your queue. I'm not good with modding, but I'll do what I can.

[General]
The tags are short. Put at least the name of the characters, two of them at least.
00:57:870: Since it's General, it means in all diffs. Put the preview point there. The preview points usually goes near or in the Kiai mode.

[Hard]
00:01:036: Make it have the normal soft sound, I mean since it goes with the notes of the songs: 1 is a high note, 2 is a little lower note and 3 is the same as 1.
00:03:370 to 00:03:703: I think a slider could go well.
00:04:036: delete that one, it sounds good without that one.
00:20:703: Just a suggestion... maybe that one doesn't need to be there
01:05:262: Those triple hits usually go on Insane diffs... maybe delete it, maybe not, but in my preference, do it.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

And that's everything I'm able to do. I told you I wasn't good at it -_-. I could shoot a kudosu, I really like the song... but I ran out of them, sorry.
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a
Thanks for mod :D
I'll mod your map tonight (+7GMT) :3
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
No problem. Since I got 2 Kudosus, I shot one in this map ^^. I'm glad if the mod helped.
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
M a n a

Crok425 wrote:

This is a M4M from your queue. I'm not good with modding, but I'll do what I can.

[General]
The tags are short. Put at least the name of the characters, two of them at least.
00:57:870: Since it's General, it means in all diffs. Put the preview point there. The preview points usually goes near or in the Kiai mode.

[Hard]
00:01:036: Make it have the normal soft sound, I mean since it goes with the notes of the songs: 1 is a high note, 2 is a little lower note and 3 is the same as 1. Sounds good~
00:03:370 to 00:03:703: I think a slider could go well. K~
00:04:036: delete that one, it sounds good without that one. If someone say it again I'll change
00:20:703: Just a suggestion... maybe that one doesn't need to be there ^
01:05:262: Those triple hits usually go on Insane diffs... maybe delete it, maybe not, but in my preference, do it. Many hard diff use 1/4 streams
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

And that's everything I'm able to do. I told you I wasn't good at it -_-. I could shoot a kudosu, I really like the song... but I ran out of them, sorry. Me too ;w; I'm not good with modding and I don't have any kudosu left...haha ;_:
Thanks for mod~ :3

@Hinsvar : I didn't realize that you give 3 stars oAo; Thanks! and sorry. I can't search some mod for awhile. I'm busy now... Sorry!!!><
Kuria
1,390 posts
Joined May 2011
Kuria
Coming here from t/81512

btw it is just me but i'm only see one difficulty on this mapset? o.o better full submit the mapset again later.
i'll just downloaded the others diff from the thread instead XD

General:
Nothing to say here, just full submit the beatmap.

Hinsvar's Novice:
nicely done.
I think AR-1 are better here, since it comes after you clicking the notes
Since this one is easy mode i think this is not really necessary to do it, but i suggest that you make the slider in here more variety, like curved slider, S slider, etc, since i think it was a bit monotone if you just place the symmetrical slider here and there XD

Easy:
HP/OD/AR-1
00:00:370 (1) - i think it was better if you make this a curved slider that rounding to the next notes like the 00:03:036 (2) slider, the S lider are seems a bit weird to place on there o.o
00:13:036 (3) - same here, not really well shaped S slider, make move the upper and end pinpoint would be better imo, something like this:
SPOILER
00:16:370 (1,2,3) - make it symmetrical triangle with moving a bit down the (3)
00:35:370 (3) - right a bit so it will stacked well with the 00:33:870 (1)
01:01:727 (1,2,3) - same as above, fix the triangle patter into more symmetrical

Normal:
Why the difficulty setting here are much easier than easy diff? o.o
HP/OD+1, AR+2
00:44:370 (1) - not well shaped slider i think, move the end pinpoint up a bit would be better

Hard:
HP/OD-1, Circle Size 4
maybe it is just me but why i think the red timing here 01:22:262 are a bit off with the notes after it? o.o
otherwise, all good in here^^

well, i think that's it, good luck^^
Hinsvar
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Envi wrote:

Hinsvar's Novice:
nicely done. ikr
I think AR-1 are better here, since it comes after you clicking the notes Okay.
Since this one is easy mode i think this is not really necessary to do it, but i suggest that you make the slider in here more variety, like curved slider, S slider, etc, since i think it was a bit monotone if you just place the symmetrical slider here and there XD I hate artistic sliders. Never had'em. Never will. But I guess I can give a second thought for it.
Thanks for coming 8-)

Also, OD-1 too. If you guys think OD1 is too easy, though, I might return it to OD2 or even make it OD3.

Download: Mizuki Nana - Uchi he Kaerou (M a n a) [Hinsvar's Novice].osu
ertyukjh010
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Hello, :)

[General]

I don't know why but I can download a "Easy" diff only in the web. I must download other diff in the forums. Check it pls.

[Hinsvar's Novice]

AR-1
00:54:870 (1) - decrease speed suddenly for new player. It's not suitable.
01:02:155 (3) - Stack is not a good idea, a lot of the new players can not adapt, so please try to avoid the use of overlapping
01:13:298 (1) - ^

[Easy]

AR-1 OD-1
Fine. And I do not suggest to change the Slider speed, because the new players do not know when acceleration or deceleration, a sudden change would allow him to be wrong.

[Normal]

Why "Easy" higher than "Normal" of HP、AR、OD?
I still do not suggest to change the Slider speed.

[Hard]

00:14:370 (1) - You can look it's not neatly surround.
Try it? 
320,260,14369,6,0,B|368:316|436:308|484:268|504:180|452:116|372:112|328:148|314:190,1,400,2|2
384,216,16370,1,0
00:32:870 (2,3) - acceleration suddenly? Slider instead
00:57:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

that all
Hinsvar
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ertyukjh010 wrote:

[Hinsvar's Novice]

AR-1 Accepted.
00:54:870 (1) - decrease speed suddenly for new player. It's not suitable. Fixed.
01:02:155 (3) - Stack is not a good idea, a lot of the new players can not adapt, so please try to avoid the use of overlapping Fixed.
01:13:298 (1) - ^ Fixed too.
Thanks for coming 8-) Also, made a stack that should be readable by new players 8-)

*Ignore the previous version of my diff.

Download: Mizuki Nana - Uchi he Kaerou (M a n a) [Hinsvar's Novice].osu
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@Envi: Fixed all
@ertyukjh010: about changing BPM, I don't want to change it. But if a lot of people complaint about it,I'll change it
@Hinsvar: can't update beatmap right now. My modem was broken ;_;

Thanks for mod ;w;
Hinsvar
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...So I uploaded the wrong .osu file all along :lol: (Got two osu! folders, one in the internal HDD, and another in my flashdisk)

This is the correct one, with mods applied and some pattern changes.

Download: Mizuki Nana - Uchi he Kaerou (M a n a) [Hinsvar's Novice].osu
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Updated ;w;
Sorry to wait for a long time ><;
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