1. Easy (1,4 stars, 78 notes)
2. Hard (4,34 stars, 141 notes)
3. Hinsvar's Novice (0,5 stars, 54 notes)
4. Normal (2,46 stars, 110 notes)

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 1496
- [Hard] : 1500
- [Normal] : 1496

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:188, ends on 01:16:302
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:195, ends on 01:16:302 (Also Not On Downbeat)
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:188, ends on 01:16:302
I think this song doesn't need a Kiai. Save it

[Easy]

Nothing found.

[Normal]

01:24:821 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).

[Hard]

-1OD for the changing bpm
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at: 00:59:195
01:05:302 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:05:410 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:821 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
00:14:403 (5) - not so good as a round. any suggestion?;w;
00:16:380 (1) - put it just in center of 00:14:403 (5). you can disable grid snap to do this
00:50:903 (5) - put it at x292 y208 to make a square
01:19:302 (1,2,3) - make symmetry

That's all I can find. GL~

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[Hard]
too easy 1st timing... You right! oAo;

add object

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ex)
0.03.403
0.04.069
0.06.069
0.07.403
0.08.736
0.09.403
0.11.403
0.12.736
0.13.403
0.19.403
0.20.736
0.21.403
0.22.069
0.24.736

nice~

7seven wrote:

Title: Uchi he Kaerou

In Japanese, so うちえ帰ろう instead of うちへ帰ろう.

KDS does not need.

[Easy]

1. 00:32:903 (2) - NC?

[Normal]

1. 00:14:403 (1,2,1) - cover completely
2. 00:31:069 (1) - The first point 2 grid left
3. 00:33:903 (3,1) - (3) NC and remove (1) NC

[Hard]

1. I think "SV 1.8" so fast
   
   
2. 00:32:403 (4) - NC
3. 00:31:069 (1) - The first point 2 grid left
4. 00:33:903 (3,1) - (3) NC and remove (1) NC

ikari_kyon wrote:

from timing help
no much problems here, just adjust some offsets:
Im lazy to write

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l1106188 wrote:

Request from my modding queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[Easy]

1. 00:32:903 (2) - NC? Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:14:403 (1,2,1) - cover completely Already?o.o
2. 00:31:069 (1) - The first point 2 grid left Fixed
3. 00:33:903 (3,1) - (3) NC and remove (1) NC k~

[Hard]

1. I think "SV 1.8" so fast I think so too o.o; I'll change it to 1.6 or 1.5
   
   
2. 00:32:403 (4) - NC k~
3. 00:31:069 (1) - The first point 2 grid left There's no slider oAo;
   
4. 00:33:903 (3,1) - (3) NC and remove (1) NC nope

good song
and sorry to my poor English

[Hard]

1. 00:18:390 (1) - The third point 2 grid left
2. 00:25:056 (5) - ^ 2 grid right
3. 00:28:389 (4) - ^ 2 grid down
4. 00:41:395 (4) - ^ 2 grd right
5. 01:10:328 (3) - ^ 1 grid left

l1106188 wrote:

oh! sorry , I forget to remove the copy (I think I am so tired...)
this post no give KD~

[Hard]

1. 00:18:390 (1) - The third point 2 grid left
2. 00:25:056 (5) - ^ 2 grid right
3. 00:28:389 (4) - ^ 2 grid down
4. 00:41:395 (4) - ^ 2 grd right
5. 01:10:328 (3) - ^ 1 grid left

[General]
tag is empty

[Easy]
nothing

[Normal]
00:16:069 (2,1) - completely stack
00:26:402 (1,2) - how about this one ?http://puu.sh/nash
00:48:903 (1) - http://puu.sh/nasO

[Hard]
00:07:723 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/n1nr
00:14:403 (7) - how about this one ? http://puu.sh/n1rM

304,236,14403,2,0,B|323:133|428:124|496:152|532:256|483:333|404:364|328:308,1,450,2|2

B2IN wrote:

H i there 'v'

[General]
tag is empty I don't know what should I put ;_;

[Easy]
nothing

[Normal]
00:16:069 (2,1) - completely stack
00:26:402 (1,2) - how about this one ?http://puu.sh/nash
00:48:903 (1) - http://puu.sh/nasO

[Hard]
00:07:723 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/n1nr
00:14:403 (7) - how about this one ? http://puu.sh/n1rM

304,236,14403,2,0,B|323:133|428:124|496:152|532:256|483:333|404:364|328:308,1,450,2|2

good luck ~

bestz2541 wrote:

[General]

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OMG ! Your beatmap is make sleepy ! Sorry ;_; I'm noob mapper...
(but It's good song. I like it ^^)

[Easy] Fixed some

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00:31:056 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:895 (1) - remove new combo

[Normal] Fixed some

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00:33:895 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:841 (1) - remove finish (head slide)

[Hard] Fixed all~

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00:22:056 (6) - add new combo
00:22:390 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:895 (4 , 5 , 6) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nbnE

Good luck ˊ• ᵜ •ˋ) ~ ♪

-Hard-

1. Maximum score of Easy diff have more than Normal diff. Make Normal diff is more difficult.
   

   Maximum score of Easy diff : 182,982
   Maximum score of Normal diff : 166,720

• 00:31:056 (1,2,3) - In (2,3) will change the rhythm. Which makes rhythm faster. People be surprised here. And too difficult for new players. I suggest to make http://puu.sh/nmx9 . Is solve the difficulty.

1. Star rating is 1.50. You should make it more difficult.

• 00:29:056 (3) - Move to x:244 y:184
  00:50:895 (3) - Move down 1 grid

• I don't find the problem.

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Modding~~

[General]
The Volume between 00:57:870 - 01:12:012 sounds a bit too noisy.
You may reduce to 5 ~ 10%.

[Easy]
00:31:036 (1) - Beginner will get extremly surprised when the Speed changes surprisingly. Like nich some post before said, you should take the Suggest. Or, completly remove this Slider because there's no voice anyway, and it won't be so bad if you remove it. Well,I'm forget to check nich's mod ;_; Fixed
00:32:870 (7) - NC. Fixed
00:43:370 (5) - I hate this Slider. :E Try this. http://puu.sh/nHIj Fixed
00:48:370 (4) - Set Whistle. will consider later
00:54:870 (3) - It can be irritating for beginners. For the normal or hard Diff, it would be ok.Fixed
00:57:870 (1) - I would delete it. Save it
00:59:155 (6) - NC. nope
01:26:841 (1) - This Slider is too close on the Spinner, since the Speed changes there too. Set on 01:27:341 and 01:27:841 Circles. Save it

[Normal]
00:03:036 (3) - NC. By the way, the Slider is really off from Rhythm. But I also have to say that the time between 00:03:036 and 00:05:703 is very awful to map. sorry ;_;
00:09:036 (3) - This is better: http://puu.sh/nMnW Fixed
00:44:370 (1) - Maybe like this?: http://puu.sh/nMkS Fixed
01:03:441 (4) - Try to move it away from the bottom. I suggest to change like this: http://puu.sh/nMmR Fixed
01:13:298 - You could decrease the Volume to 5%. Because the Hitsound at 01:15:012 doesn't fit well. will consider later

[Hard]
00:06:370 (1) - It's off from Rhythm. mmm... I change the SV and I didn't re-check that part,I'm lazy orz....
00:14:369 (7) - NC. Fixed
00:16:369 (1) - Remove NC. Fixed
00:32:370 (1) - ^ nope,Because fit the song,but If someone say it again,I'll change
00:54:370 (6,1) - I don't like the Spacing.

bestz2541 wrote:

OMG ! Your beatmap is make sleepy !

Because someone say that,I make a jump on some part. And I think it fits. mmm...But if someone recomended me to follow the DS,I'll change...
01:08:584 (4,5,6) - Unconfortable Spacing. Mmm... reduce the spacing
01:15:512 (2) - You could try this: http://puu.sh/nMth Fixed


Hum.. good Map. -w-

M a n a wrote:

00:54:370 (6,1) - I don't like the Spacing.

bestz2541 wrote:

OMG ! Your beatmap is make sleepy !

Because someone say that,I make a jump on some part. And I think it fits. mmm...But if someone recomended me to follow the DS,I'll change...

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00:05:036 (4) - 
00:27:703 (2) - 
00:34:370 (2,3) - 
00:48:870 (1) - 
00:51:870 (1) - blank better with 00:53:370 (2) - 
01:00:441 (3) - make this slider looking better

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00:56:870 (3) - 
01:06:012 (5) - 
01:16:262 (1,3) - 

S h i a wrote:

A bit late. /
mod request from my queue

[Overall]
Nice music.

[Easy]
pretty nice map set. fit music well.
I just noticed some sliders need to fix a bit.
for example
00:03:036 (2) - Original:

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suggestion:

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This little bit change will make your map looking better /
so here is a list for sliders should change a bit.

00:05:036 (4) - 
00:27:703 (2) - 
00:34:370 (2,3) - 
00:48:870 (1) - 
00:51:870 (1) - blank better with 00:53:370 (2) - 
01:00:441 (3) - make this slider looking better

yea that's all for easy

[Normal]
As in [Easy], same slider issues here.
and here is the list and example.
00:51:870 (1) - Original:

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Fixed:

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00:56:870 (3) - 
01:06:012 (5) - 
01:16:262 (1,3) - 

01:07:941 (2,3) - suggest move this 2 note some where? stack here is not good.

[Hard]
Approach Rate +1?
Overall Difficulty +1?
00:14:369 (1) - this is nice This slider was made by B2IN ouo
00:38:870 (1) - add a new combo here would be better for reading
01:05:584 (6) - Newcombo or move this slider somewhere

Well that's all for me. good luck and. yes. a star. /

1. Windows informed me that the .mp3's bitrate is 320kbps. Weird. I'm sure enough that it's far below that, and no one complains about this.
2. The BPM changes seem to be extremely sudden. This can make players confused while playing, especially the Hard players.

1. 01:22:262 (1,2,3) - ...This sounds a bit off.
2. 01:24:710 - Make another timing point with the same setting as the previous one, then put the spinner at the new timing point and end it at the next timing point?

1. 01:24:710 - Same as Easy.

1. OD+1?
2. 00:03:703 (3,4) - I tend to get 100s here. Might be just me, though.
3. 00:55:370 (2) - ^
4. 00:57:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - I never got a Geki (full 300) even after trying dozens of time. And I tend to hit (1) a bit too early and miss or 50'd (4) dan (5). Huh?
5. 01:24:710 - Same as Easy.

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Can I mod this beatmap now? ofc~x3

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Windows informed me that the .mp3's bitrate is 320kbps. Weird. I'm sure enough that it's far below that, and no one complains about this. Umm.. but -> oAo;
2. The BPM changes seem to be extremely sudden. This can make players confused while playing, especially the Hard players. I don't think so o.o you can check this map -> Swan Lake Orchestra - Hakuchou no Mizuumi .

>Easy

1. 01:22:262 (1,2,3) - ...This sounds a bit off. No for me
2. 01:24:710 - Make another timing point with the same setting as the previous one, then put the spinner at the new timing point and end it at the next timing point? it seems your timing is wrong. So no change

>Normal

1. 01:24:710 - Same as Easy. Same

>Hard

1. OD+1? k~
2. 00:03:703 (3,4) - I tend to get 100s here. Might be just me, though.
3. 00:55:370 (2) - ^
4. 00:57:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - I never got a Geki (full 300) even after trying dozens of time. And I tend to hit (1) a bit too early and miss or 50'd (4) dan (5). Huh? Umm,I got SS when I test this map >.>; Well maybe because I made the map -w-;
5. 01:24:710 - Same as Easy. Same

I was thinking of making a difficulty that's EASIER than Easy, but then I saw the BPM changes.

lol nope haha xD

Btw, good mapset and nice song.

Good luck on the way

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Blue : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
   　
   [ General ]
   　
4. 3Easy... ORZ
5. Mp3 size 320 kbps is unrankble , change it to 128~192 kbps
   　
   [ Hinsvar's Novice ]
   　
6. Nice~
   　
   [ Easy ]
   　
7. 01:19:762 (1) - Remove NC
   　
   [ Normal ]
   　
8. 00:32:870 (3) - NC here because BPM change
   　
   [ Hard ]
   　
9. 00:12:703 (4) - Spacing issue
10. 01:13:298 (4) - NC because slider speed change
    　
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