1. Hard (4.76 stars, 508 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 747 notes)
3. Normal (3.05 stars, 297 notes)

1. You have no need to use the phrase "(Full ver.)". Remove them from the title and then do a full submission.
2. There are two .osb files. As it seems you're not using them, remove each and every .osb inside the song folder, and do a full submission (you have no need to submit fully twice; just do everything in one move).

1. 00:02:438 (1,2) - Only use Whistle at the beginning of the sliders?
2. 00:13:289 (2) - Remove Whistle?
3. 00:16:480 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:19:459 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:23:501 (3) - ^
6. 00:25:842 (5) - ^
7. 00:29:672 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:33:501 (2,3) - ^
9. 00:37:118 (3) - ^
10. 00:39:884 (1,2) - ^
11. 00:44:778 (2) - ^
12. 00:45:842 (3,4) - Add Whistle? (No, I'm not drunk here.)
13. 00:47:757 (2,3) - Remove Whistle?
14. 00:50:948 (2) - ^ (And 00:52:650 (2), which sounds pretty similar to this spot, doesn't have a Whistle.)
15. 00:55:523 - Add a circle at (376,184) and give a Finish?
16. 00:56:906 (2) - Add Whistle?
17. 00:57:331 - Add a circle at (160,192) and give it a Whistle?
18. 00:57:757 (4,5) - Remove Whistle?
19. 01:00:310 (1) - ^
20. 01:02:012 (3,4) - ^
21. 01:04:140 (2) - ^
22. 01:05:416 (4) - ^ (And by the way, this slider doesn't really play well.)
23. 01:12:650 (5) - ^
24. 01:13:927 (1,3) - ^
25. 01:19:459 - Add a note?
26. 01:19:884 (5) - Remove Whistle? (To make the long story short, don't use too much Whistle on this song. 00:18:608 (5) and 00:22:012 (4) are the examples of well-placed Whistles. I won't point out Whistles anymore from now on.)
27. 02:39:884 (2,3,4) - This 3/4 beat-spaced triplet doesn't really play well, IMO.
28. 02:41:587 (2,3,4) - ^
29. 03:26:693 - I think we have no need of a kiai flash here.
30. 04:35:629 - Give an inherited timing point to end the kiai time here?

1. 01:07:118 (1) - Drag the middle point to (288,216)?
2. 03:26:693 - Same as Normal.
3. 04:35:629 - Same as Normal.

1. 17 million points of maximum score? 1,086x maximum combo at the tick rate of 1? YAMI WO KIRISAKU OH DESIRE--- Wait.
2. 00:28:821 (1,2,3,4) - Uh... I don't really think these kick sliders work well.
3. 01:49:672 (1,2,3,4) - IMO, they shouldn't be silenced.
4. 01:50:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Now you can call me a bad player with a bad skill, but it's pretty hard to get a Geki (full 300 in a combo) here. But actually, forget Geki; I frequently get 50s.
5. 01:53:927 (1,2,3,4) - A jump this large is not needed here, IMO.
6. 01:57:331 (1,2,3,4) - ^
7. 02:00:735 (1,2,3,4) - ^
8. 02:03:927 (1,2,3) - Three 3/4 beats-long kick sliders with only 1/4 beat-spaces between them and with ~2.4x DS? What the...
9. 02:04:991 (1,2,3) - These don't really play well, IMO. Can't explain, just feel awkward.
10. 02:21:267 (6,7,8,1) - ^
11. 02:30:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is there EIGHT kick sliders, spaced at ~2.4x DS, in a row? And I can't see a particular pattern here. It looks so random. Plus, they're pretty hard to hit and get 300 on. I know this is Insane, but... this is just wrong.
12. 03:24:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ (Minus the pattern, since there is one. And it's easier to get 300s. But the second combo has ~3.2x DS, and it's pretty hard to hit 03:26:693 (1) after you get 300 at the last slider.)
13. 03:38:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (And let's hope it's just me... It's better though, since it's spaced at ~1.6x DS.)
14. 03:40:948 (3,4,5,6) - ^ (Except there are only four, but these sliders are... pretty hard to hit, to say the least.)
15. 03:56:587 (4,5,6) - ^ (Three; I can get a Geki here, but reaching 03:57:331 (1) is a bit hard after that.)
16. 04:16:055 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (Four; there's one kick slider formation before this, but they're not so hard to hit. This one, though, is tough [lol].)

Hinsvar wrote:

I'm here, modding your beatmap.

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. You have no need to use the phrase "(Full ver.)". Remove them from the title and then do a full submission.
2. There are two .osb files. As it seems you're not using them, remove each and every .osb inside the song folder, and do a full submission (you have no need to submit fully twice; just do everything in one move).

>Normal

1. 00:02:438 (1,2) - Only use Whistle at the beginning of the sliders? whistle won't "sustain", but kept in slider end
2. 00:13:289 (2) - Remove Whistle? For all whistle matter, I reduce whistle sound during verses and pre-chorus, the whistle during chorus is kept.
3. 00:16:480 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:19:459 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:23:501 (3) - ^
6. 00:25:842 (5) - ^
7. 00:29:672 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:33:501 (2,3) - ^
9. 00:37:118 (3) - ^
10. 00:39:884 (1,2) - ^
11. 00:44:778 (2) - ^
12. 00:45:842 (3,4) - Add Whistle? (No, I'm not drunk here.)
13. 00:47:757 (2,3) - Remove Whistle?
14. 00:50:948 (2) - ^ (And 00:52:650 (2), which sounds pretty similar to this spot, doesn't have a Whistle.)
15. 00:55:523 - Add a circle at (376,184) and give a Finish?
16. 00:56:906 (2) - Add Whistle?
17. 00:57:331 - Add a circle at (160,192) and give it a Whistle?
18. 00:57:757 (4,5) - Remove Whistle?
19. 01:00:310 (1) - ^
20. 01:02:012 (3,4) - ^
21. 01:04:140 (2) - ^
22. 01:05:416 (4) - ^ (And by the way, this slider doesn't really play well.)
23. 01:12:650 (5) - ^
24. 01:13:927 (1,3) - ^
25. 01:19:459 - Add a note? added
26. 01:19:884 (5) - Remove Whistle? (To make the long story short, don't use too much Whistle on this song. 00:18:608 (5) and 00:22:012 (4) are the examples of well-placed Whistles. I won't point out Whistles anymore from now on.)
27. 02:39:884 (2,3,4) - This 3/4 beat-spaced triplet doesn't really play well, IMO. changed into slider
28. 02:41:587 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
29. 03:26:693 - I think we have no need of a kiai flash here.kiai removed
30. 04:35:629 - Give an inherited timing point to end the kiai time here? added

>Hard

1. 01:07:118 (1) - Drag the middle point to (288,216)? I use grid level 4 remapped this part
2. 03:26:693 - Same as Normal. kiai removed
3. 04:35:629 - Same as Normal. added

>Insane

1. 17 million points of maximum score? 1,086x maximum combo at the tick rate of 1? YAMI WO KIRISAKU OH DESIRE--- Wait.
2. 00:28:821 (1,2,3,4) - Uh... I don't really think these kick sliders work well. kept, pattern changed
3. 01:49:672 (1,2,3,4) - IMO, they shouldn't be silenced. volume increased to at least 40%
4. 01:50:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Now you can call me a bad player with a bad skill, but it's pretty hard to get a Geki (full 300 in a combo) here. But actually, forget Geki; I frequently get 50s. I don't find any problem here... it's a compress stream of 16th
5. 01:53:927 (1,2,3,4) - A jump this large is not needed here, IMO. I will wait for other comments before making changes to this... I will change it if a couple of players say that this is not good
6. 01:57:331 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
7. 02:00:735 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
8. 02:03:927 (1,2,3) - Three 3/4 beats-long kick sliders with only 1/4 beat-spaces between them and with ~2.4x DS? What the... color=#FF0000]lower DS to 1.8x[/color]
9. 02:04:991 (1,2,3) - These don't really play well, IMO. Can't explain, just feel awkward. same as
10. 01:53:927
11. 02:21:267 (6,7,8,1) - ^ I think it is alright
12. 02:30:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is there EIGHT kick sliders, spaced at ~2.4x DS, in a row? And I can't see a particular pattern here. It looks so random. Plus, they're pretty hard to hit and get 300 on. I know this is Insane, but... this is just wrong. I give it a pattern
13. 03:24:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ (Minus the pattern, since there is one. And it's easier to get 300s. But the second combo has ~3.2x DS, and it's pretty hard to hit 03:26:693 (1) after you get 300 at the last slider.)
14. 03:38:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (And let's hope it's just me... It's better though, since it's spaced at ~1.6x DS.) Pattern changed
    
15. 03:40:948 (3,4,5,6) - ^ (Except there are only four, but these sliders are... pretty hard to hit, to say the least.) pattern kept
16. 03:56:587 (4,5,6) - ^ (Three; I can get a Geki here, but reaching 03:57:331 (1) is a bit hard after that.) Pattern changed
17. 04:16:055 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (Four; there's one kick slider formation before this, but they're not so hard to hit. This one, though, is tough [lol].)It's okay I think...

Rants about Whistles and kick sliders. It might be just me that dislike the former, and suck at the latter. But hey, that's my opinion.

Good luck on the way

Oh, and stars.

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Mio_chan

From Net & Nich's Modding Queue

General

1. Remove .osb file (upload by full submission) removed
2. I suggest that AudioLeadIn is 2000 (Fix in notepad (.osu file)fixed

Normal

1. 00:33:501 (2) - Move up 3 grid fixed
2. 00:39:033 (x) - Add a note?added
3. 00:55:204 (3,4,5) - Change 3 circle is 1 repeat slider, would make it easier. made
4. 01:19:884 (5,6) - (6) is hidden in (4), maybe players are surprise it. Make to this, would can solve this problem. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:04:410 (x) - Add a note? added
6. 02:20:310 (5,6) - Make to this made
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:44:140 (1) - Shouldn't be used repeat slider several times. pattern changed
8. 03:52:650 (3) - Move to x:192 y:296 moved
9. 03:53:501 (5) - Move to x:320 y:296 moved
10. 04:19:884 (4,5) - Make to this? made
    
    SPOILER

    

Hard

1. HP +1 (I think that too easy.) changed
2. 00:26:267 (1) - Add finish in slider begin added
3. 00:39:884 (1) - ^ ^
4. 03:33:501 (1) - Move down 1 grid moved
5. 03:35:204 (1) - ^ ^
6. 03:48:395 (3,1) - Make to this (Put in notepad (.osu file)) made
   

   392,200,228395,2,0,B|376:256|328:272,1,101.249998491257,8|0
   240,272,228821,6,0,B|192:256|176:200,2,101.249998491257,0|0|10

7. 03:53:076 (1) - Ctrl+R? fixed
8. 04:10:097 (x) - Add a note? added

Insane

1. HP +1 changed
   OD -2 OD - 1 instead
2. 03:49:246 (3) - Move up 1 grid moved
3. 03:50:097 (1) - Move down 1 grid moved
4. 03:54:353 (3) - Move to x:296 y:136 moved
5. 04:10:097 (x) - Add a note? added

That's all, that I can find them.
nice map and song, give a star

Good luck~

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~

[Normal]
02:22:012 (1,2,3) - hmm.......滑调的结尾和3对齐把~然后滑调和2的距离近一点~保持一样~ fixed

[Hard]
01:10:948 (2,3) - 3一开点把~不要完全隐藏。。。。有个蠢rule说除了insane以上的难度都不能完全影藏note在slider后面- -。 只是stack啦
02:24:459 - add note？fixed
02:34:565 - ^ fixed
04:00:736 (1) - 不好看。。。orz fixed

[Insane]
01:02:863 (3) - 移动到01:02:757 - ~节奏没对上~至于摆放~自己想想办法把xD~我懒。。 fixed
01:04:565 (5) - 一样~移动到01:04:459 - ~ fixed
01:54:140 (2,3) - 。。。。。。这里的。。。距离。。。。也不是说不行。。。太突然了。。。。也没有什么提示。。。。。4.3x的距离- -。。稍微近点把- -。 fixed
02:22:863 (3) - 移动到02:22:757 - ~ fixed
02:26:267 (3) - 移动到02:26:161 - ~ fixed
02:28:821 (1,2,3) - 间距有点突然~最好一致。。。。 這是旋轉得來的，而且insane應該可以...
02:32:863 (3) - hmmm~建议往后移一拍~移到02:32:970 - ~~~然后在02:32:863 - add note~ fixed
03:44:565 (3) - 移动到03:44:459 - ~ fixed
04:00:736 (2,3,4) - 距离最好一致~ 同02:28:821 (1,2,3)
04:04:778 (4) - 删掉~ 整個拍子都被改掉了lol

Nice Mapset~
Star~☆♪~
Good Luck~

iroseka wrote:

iroseka's mod from tha queue

Good day~


[Normal]
Awesome sounds...
01:06:693 (5) - DS. Move a bit further fixed
01:20:736 (1) - Suggest a finish here fixed
01:39:459 (2) - Awkward slider. Move Half a beat earlier and make it length to 1.5 beats fixed
01:43:501 (4) - ^. length: 1 beat no change since I follow the keyboard
02:16:055 (2) - Maybe a finish? no change
02:45:097 (2) - A bit hard for beginners to read.. well that's ok fixed

[Hard]
00:22:012 (6,7) - This combination is a bit strange in this "round shaped" map. I suggest put them a bit further? fixed
00:35:629 (6,7) - Same. Also does not fit the 00:36:480 (1) - in the shape. fixed
00:48:182 (4,6) - ^ fixed
01:19:884 (2,3,4) - Strange rhythm... fixed
04:27:970 (1,2,3,4) - look a bit too compact fixed

[Insane]
Err... I tried to change OD to 8, and why it became easier... maybe OD->8? no change because I think it makes it harder~_~
01:09:672 (3,4) - Maybe change to a 1/4 stream? fixed
01:39:246 (1,2) - Exchange and rearrange sounds fixed
02:21:267 (6,7,8,1) - This combination is too hard to read. Suggest some amend. fixed

DarkSkyKnight wrote:

All my mods are suggestions really, remember to rate my mod and mod my mod haha lol.
不錯的mod...我會給7/10啦...詳細內容我明天pm給你吧~_~

General Comments

Normal:
Occasional awkward overlapping, little hitsounds. Concentrated on right-angled flow.
(Right-angled flow is not bad, but it is not as exciting as a curvy flow or a zig-zag line flow etc.)
understood

Hard:
I would like it if Circle-size is increased but that's up to you. no~
Good hitsounds because of rapid rhythm. Occasionally the distance spacing seems too short on first glance (it is correct though).
HP+1 5 is fine I think?

Insane:
HP+1 7 is already quite high... I don't want to make a map that miss a note and fail lol

[Normal]

Normal Mods

00:14:140 (4,5,6) - imo this arrangement seems constrained and doesn't have a nice flow to it. And perhaps it could have more varied rhythm, like this:

However I couldn't really rearrange the new slider well, it's up to you. The repeating slider is in 1/3 time.
changed, but note that it is not 1/3, but 3 tick in 1/4

00:18:608 (5) - Rearrange like this maybe:
fixed

00:22:012 (4) - Overlaps with 00:23:501 (3) not very nicely. fixed

00:25:842 (5) - Suggest to change the rhythm. Positioning is awkward just for reference.
fixed
00:39:459 (6) - ^similar to above. fixed

00:26:267 (1,2) - fixed

00:44:778 (2) - awkward positioning in relative to Slider 1. fixed

00:45:629 (3) - Move original circle 3 to here. no change

00:50:097 (1) - I suggest rearranging as follows:

fixed

00:57:544 (4) - Suggest moving original slider 4 to this time position. Thus add a note here: 00:58:182 and 00:58:608. no because too hard

01:02:012 (3) - Overlaps not nicely with slider 1. fixed

01:03:714 (1) - Suggest maintaining the same rhythm as 00:56:480 (1) combo. Play around with the positions of the sliders. no change due to change in vocal

01:19:033 (3,4,5,6) - Arrangement constrained and lacks flow. Something like this?
nice^^

01:22:438 (3) - Arrange like this perhaps?
great =]






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02:01:587 (1) - For this combo, you might consider moving the slider 02:02:438 (2) to 02:02:225. Then add a note here: 02:02:863 ? moved, but no notes added

02:06:055 - Add note? no

02:08:395 (1) -
hmm...this rhythm looks complicated and rather a bit too deviated from the main rhythmic structure, up to you. I think it's ok...

02:15:204 (1) - Don't use a straight line, adopt a more "curvy" structure perhaps? Or, alternatively, change the sliders to a curvy one.
fixed

02:22:012 (1) - I will suggest using the same rhythm as this part: 02:18:608 (2) partly changed

02:29:672 (2) - Overlaps with previous slider 6 not nicely. fixed

02:44:140 (1) - This combo has a nice rhythmic effect that you should consider using more often. Can't use this often because this is not common in this song




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03:08:821 (3,4) - These two notes look awkward in placement in relative to 1 and 2. fixed

03:13:076 (3) - Try to let this be positioned in the center through means of moving previous notes. fixed
04:35:629 (5) - ^ on y-axis instead




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03:43:714 (1) - Do not let the 2 overlap with previous slider, instead, align so that it "surrounds" the slider. fixed


You would have the move the notes after it as a result.

03:57:757 (2) - Overlaps with previous slider. fixed

04:00:736 (1) - Flip Slider 1 vertically so that it looks like this, thus not overlapping with 2. fixed


04:06:693 (2) - ...Try not letting this overlap with 04:05:416 (4) fixed

04:11:799 (2) - Place it directly under circle 4. No one will notice the different distance spacing Changed but DS is the same

04:17:757 (1) - This combo has a nice flow. thanks =]

Hmm...Sorry for near-nazi mod...or maybe it is nazi mod anyways.

I don't mind if it makes the map play better lol

[Hard]

Hard Mods

00:07:331 (4) - x: 128 y: 192

00:07:544 (1) - Positioning like this:

so that it does not overlap with previous sliders. fixed

00:08:182 (3) -
Position like a square? fixed

00:09:884 (2) - Do not overlap circle 2 with slider 1, it makes it confusing a bit. fixed

00:14:353 (1,2) - Move these two slightly further apart by 1 grid or so, to make it visually have a correct distance spacing. fixed

00:22:863 (1) - Not so close to previous slider 7. fixed

00:26:267 (1,2) - Either let them slightly overlap, or let them not overlap at all, don't let them touch edges. fixed

00:42:012 (1,2,3) - NICE!

00:46:267 (6,1) - This is confusing on first try, put circle 1 away from slider 2. fixed

00:53:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - NICE combination once again!

00:59:033 (2) - Change the shape so that it does not come too close to the circle. fixed

01:07:118 (1) - x: 340 y: 120 somewhere near here. fixed

01:13:927 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest not doing this but rather following the rhythm. Up to you. changed

01:17:331 (1) - Too near to slider 3. y: 124 perhaps? fixed





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01:39:246 (1) - Somewhere here instead:


02:04:991 (1) - Overlap with circle 2. fixed

02:18:608 (2) - middle dot to x:296 y:160 changed to other stuff instead

02:29:672 (3,5) - Looks awkward when paired together. no changed

02:36:480 (3) - Put at x: 376 y: 96 perhaps. Changed other stuff instead





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03:12:650 (2) - x: 256 y: 192? fixed






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03:32:225 (1,2,3) - To me it's not confusing, but i'm not sure whether it's acceptable. It's complete fine

03:58:608 (3) - Don't repeat, and a note on the blue tick straight away after 3. fixed

04:08:608 (3) - Don't use right angles, put somewhere to the right. fixed

04:21:374 (1,1) - Might be TOO quick for Hard Mode players. no changed

04:22:650 (1,2,3,4) - Don't put on the same straight line. fixed

Nice Map! Thanks =]

[Insane]

Insane Mods

00:37:331 (4) - Move the circle 4 to this timing. no... I follow the vocal

00:42:863 (3) - Hmm...the 3 is really tricky to find on first try for me. I will see if anyone points this out

01:03:714 (1) - This combo has a really random pattern to me. It has windmill pattern, though the position are switched







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02:29:459 (2,3) - Awkward distance spacing. I suggest moving 2 down to y:140 fixed

02:42:438 (1,2,3,4) - Very awkward distance spacing imo = = I think it's fine

02:44:459 (2) - Move out to x: 96 perhaps? fixed








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02:58:821 (2) - x: 156 y: 56 would be visually more....correct. fixed








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03:50:097 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - confusing. fixed

04:05:204 (6,7) - are you that merciless....? Actually I don't know how to improve that point= =

omg, I was fcing all along after that point TAT.

Awesome map. Thanks

DONE XD
Good luck with map, work on Normal a bit more.
ok thanks for modding and staring

Konei wrote:

Hello~

I will mod the Normal now if it's ok~


Normal


+1 on HP Drain fixed

00:51:799 (1) this slider looks a little wry move the slider point a bit fixed

02:45:097 (2) I wouldn't use this blue tick on Normal I think this is fine

03:00:629 (2) ^ fixed

03:34:672 (2) this one sounds strange because it ends on blue tick I follow the vocal for this


that's all I can do

Sorry if I was useless

-[NYAN]- wrote:

Hi, Mio_chan.

个人比较喜欢这个歌曲，就过来看看了

加上皮肤感觉会更好些

General
注意拉滑条，最好是把尾巴拉到滑条结尾的圈的中间 像这样: http://puu.sh/E2z1

Insane


00:12:650 (1) - 这里最好让滑条弯曲， 像这样 http://puu.sh/E2AM fixed
00:37:118 (4,5) - 建议改成滑条 沒改，因為感覺上現在較好 (只是個人喜好啦~)
00:44:778 (4) - ^ 已經是滑條了
00:44:778 (4,6) - ^ 已經是滑條了
01:09:672 (1) - 01:10:416 - 这里建议改成连打 改為slider stream
02:30:523 - 02:32:118 这段改成连打比较好 沒改color]
03:24:991 - 03:26:587 - 感觉这样排列稍显难，建议修改下
03:51:799 (3,4) - 这个距离可以缩短一点 縮短了的spacing沒那麼好看...我再看看其他人的意見
04:10:310 - 04:21:161 - 这里也略显偏难，建议修改下 沒改了


希望这个图能早早rank~~ thx =]

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Helloww ~
I was wondering if anyone was ever gonna map the full ver. of this ~ >w<


[General]
- Remove (Full ver.) out of the tittle. I will fixed right after this replay
- You can remove bookmarks ~ fixed
- Combo colors and can better? >< I suggest, using the color of their hair.
Try this? owo ~ Not exactly like their hair but close. cool~ I make some fine tune of it
Combo1 : 255,174,255
Combo2 : 255,60,255
Combo3 : 63,154,245
Combo4 : 230,235,118
Combo5 : 228,129,80



[Normal]
00:06:267 - Add a circle. fixed
00:38:395 (4) - Reverse ? no
01:00:097 - Add a circle. no
01:16:906 - ^ fixed
02:05:842 (3) - Instead of this, start and slider and end it at 02:06:055 fixed
02:08:182 - Add a circle. no
03:35:629 - ^ fixed

I concern about the difficulty of a normal so I won't add too many notes


[Hard]
02:18:608 (2) - Make the end of the slider meet with 02:17:225 (2) fixed
04:11:161 (3) - New combo? fixed
04:35:629 (5) - owo.. Sort of awkard to just place the note in the corner fixed


[Insane]
- HP Drain Rate +1 fixed
00:37:970 (6) - New combo. why NC all of a sudden?
02:31:374 (5) - ^ fixed
03:27:331 (3,4) - Stack with 03:25:842 (1) and 03:26:480 (4) fixed
04:13:501 (5) - New combo. no
04:15:204 (6) - ^ no


Well mapped ~
2 stars and good luck! >w< Thanks

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* The last kiai is doesn't fit to the song, remove the last kiai? fixed


[Normal]
00:07:544 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying sound fixed
00:14:353 (5) - ^ fixed
00:44:353 - Add note here for following vocal? fixed
00:59:884 (6) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners fixed
01:18:182 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying sound fixed
01:49:672 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern fixed
03:05:842 (5) - Add whistle? fixed
03:13:076 (3) - New combo for emphasis? fixed
04:21:374 (1) - Why spinner? Any reason? I follow the guitar sound for this
04:23:714 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, may hidden for beginners (sometimes beginners are slowly to read) fixed


[Hard]
00:27:757 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying sound fixed
00:28:821 (1) - Add whistle at start slider fixed
00:29:246 (2) - ^ fixed
00:41:374 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying sound fixed
01:02:012 (1) - Add whistle at start slider fixed
01:04:353 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying sound fixed
01:58:182 (1) - Spacing error here fixed
03:05:842 (4) - Add whistle? fixed
04:20:310 (3) - Add whistle at start slider fixed
04:21:374 (1) - Why spinner? Any reason? Same as normal


[Insane]
01:07:118 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying soundfixed
01:07:970 (3) - ^fixed
02:04:459 (6) - Move 2 grid up for fix the curve pattern (Nazi)fixed
03:31:799 (1) - Why spinner? Any reason?I follow the vocal part
03:33:076 (1) - New combo, since this note is after spinner. You seems forgot it fixed

Good luck Thanks for modding

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ Mio_chan ~

Random mod for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening,loli' in tags. fixed
2. Source should be : RO-KYU-BU! fixed
3. Pls change same combo colours,check your osu file.fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:37:757 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm like this,following with vocal. fixed
   
2. 02:29:672 (3) - This slider should be ctrl+r,more flow here.fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:37:757 (1) - The repeat point should on blue tick(01:38:289). fixed
2. 02:15:204 - Why no stuff here? fixed
3. 02:37:970 (6) - Remove this circle sound better to me. fixed
4. 02:45:842 - Remove clap and Add finish.fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:00:736 (1,2) - Just change spinner same as other diff. no change because this is the easiest diff in this map set. the spinner would be around 1.2 sec long and the next note is around 400ms away and I think it is a bit too short
2. 01:37:757 (1) - Same as Hard diff.fixed

That's all ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~

Foreverends wrote:

MioMio~
說好的mod gogogo~~~

Normal

SPOILER

00:29:672 (1) - 個slider扭得吾太好 fixed
00:36:055 - 加個circle with whistle fixed
00:42:863 - 呢度重音加個circle啦(放喺大約x:256 y:216 fixed
00:56:906 (1) - NC maybe? 無加因為唔想太多NC

Hard

SPOILER

00:09:884 (2) - NC 我覺得呢度無NC嘅必要...
00:10:736 (4) - ^ ^
00:10:948 (1) - del NC 我4拍4拍咁斬D NC
00:11:587 (2) - NC ^
00:42:438 (2,3) - 變成-> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/427376 想有d jump嘅效果
00:55:523 (2) - NC 我覺得依家個combo都好型@@
00:55:842 (3) - ^ ^
00:56:693 (2) - ^ ^
00:56:906 (3) - ^ ^
00:57:331 (1) - ^ ^
00:58:608 (4) - del circle加slider like this -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/427379 我唔係咁鐘意呢個拍子~_~
00:59:884 (1) - NC 我覺得呢度無NC嘅必要...
01:00:310 (3) - del NC ^
01:20:310 (3) - ctrl r 順手點 fixed

mio神mapper
gogogo for rank

dete_lynn wrote:

新手摸触手，讲错请谅解

easy

00:19:459 - 这个条的长度稍微有点费解。。要不改下 人聲
00:22:012 - 少了一个回？不是
00:39:884 - 也是长度问题么 不是...我是不想太難...但已經想不到其他更好的
00:46:693 - 断的不是很好感觉 改了
01:04:140 - 这两个改成一拍的长度如何 改了
02:04:140 - NC 不...
02:24:140 - 这里是不是有东西的 改了
02:24:991 - 断的不太好 改了
02:44:778 - 做一个和前个相同的就好了 不...
02:59:246 - 这里是少了个吗 不...再多會太難
03:28:395 - 1.5拍的条？。。。不
03:47:544 - 同01:04:140改一拍如何 不
03:55:629 - 又是1.5略诡异 不
04:21:374 - 这个不是EASY转的完的吧 1.5秒應該夠

normal
00:43:289 - 少个？ 不，人聲
01:54:353 - 反过来 改了
02:37:225 - 挪下 為什麼...?
03:43:289 - NC，或前个音NC 改了
03:53:076 - 这两个把下一个盖住了 改了
04:04:140 - 这段看不清，拉大一点距离 看看有沒有其他人有同樣看法...
04:22:650 - 圆盘后接这个不太好吧 這個不難
04:27:970 - 颜色太相近的问题出来了 我不覺得，不過我會再讓並他人試玩一下
04:34:459 - 这个位置略诡异 改了

insane
00:15:204 - 连打好点？不
00:22:012 - NC？不，太多NC了
00:25:416 - 同上不
00:35:416 - 这个跳不爱 我覺得不錯
00:37:544 - 节拍问题不该放这位置吧 人聲
00:39:033 - 这个和下个滑条是不是改下形状和之前有区别，不是扣歌词的 改了
00:45:629 - 和00:44:353 - 的一样会不好点 改了
00:48:395 - 这里缺东西要么就是00:48:608 - NC，不然不熟歌的在这里基本都挂 不
01:09:672 - 这四个太吓人了放近点或者不跳了 改了
01:12:438 - 缺东西 人聲
01:22:331 - 这个可以不要 其他難度都有
01:37:757 - 滑条会不好点 不
01:44:565 - 这5个都很费解建议不跟背景音效 改了
02:08:395 - 这里是全曲我最爱的段落啊啊啊为嘛是个异形的条。。。求大大这两句弄对称美观点
然后的一部分还不错啦 我覺得挺漂亮0.0
03:04:353 - 这个梗出的有点多。。。鼓
03:24:991 - 同样惊悚。。。不...其實不難
04:12:650 - 看到上面一排的圆表示心脏承受不能= =...
04:17:757 - 这些哪可能看的到啊。。。有玩開stream map的就會看到...
后面那段，大大是不是累了，可以歇一会再做的 我是想過才作的= =

顺带互撸娃等摸 過兩天會給你的@@
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/67987

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue~

Normal
02:58:608 (1,2,3) - changing to 1/2 slider with 1 repeat? changed
04:04:140 (1) - delete clap No, cuz the snare drum

Hard
00:39:884 (1) - add clap on end fixed
00:41:161 (3) - clap fixed
02:06:906 (4) - clap on repeat fixed
02:22:012 (1) - delete NC fixed
03:01:161 (1) - delete whistle on second repeat ok
03:12:650 (2) - how about soft volume here? nice =D
03:47:757 (2) - delete slider's whistle ( just add start and end ) fixed
04:10:310 (3,4,5,6,7) - this timing pattern is great

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/1LMoy

great 0.0 changed

Insane
00:05:416 (4) - suddenly big DS? well.. i think this isn't good reduce DS little? fixed
00:51:161 (2,3) - this is better i think http://puu.sh/1Lzpd no because I think the one now suits the song more
01:41:587 (4,5) - add whistle on start added
02:30:523 (1) - add finish on start no because there is no crash in the music
02:32:225 (1) - ^ ^
02:59:246 (4) - use 1.7x DS is better imo used 2.1x instead
04:19:884 (3) - this looks better

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/1LMea

changed

• 
  00:09:246 (1) - offbeat
  00:15:629 - add a note
  00:46:693 (1) - make the spacing here as the same as those in other parts
  00:57:757 (4) - can be better
  01:37:757 (1) - offbeat
  02:08:395 (1) - Ctrl+G?
  02:15:204 (1) - offbeat
  02:19:033 (3) - Ctrl+J and move
  02:20:736 (6) - ^
  02:29:672 (2) - one grid up
  02:36:480 (2) - add a note
  02:41:587 (2) - offbeat
  02:45:097 (2) - hard to read
  03:27:118 - miss a note
  03:28:395 (3) - why do you use this all the time
  03:33:927 - miss a note
  03:34:353 (2,3) - change to slider+circle like 02:27:544 (5,6)
  04:13:501 - add a note

• 
  00:07:544 (1,2) - don't look good
  00:10:097 (3) - Ctrl+J and move
  00:21:799 - add a note
  00:27:544 - add a note
  00:39:459 (7) - Ctrl+G
  00:42:012 (1,2,3) - should be better
  01:09:459 - add a note
  01:15:523 - miss a note
  01:37:757 (1) - offbeat
  01:50:523 (1) - don't slowdown
  02:34:884 - add a note
  02:39:672 - add a note
  02:42:650 - 02:43:076 - why not put notes
  03:02:863 (1) - Ctrl+J,Ctrl+H,Ctrl+G and move
  03:32:012 - add a note
  03:33:289 - add a note
  03:38:501 - miss a note
  03:51:161 - 03:52:012 - miss notes
  03:55:842 - add a note
  04:00:523 - add a note
  04:10:310 - miss a note
  04:13:076 (3,4,5) - ugly
  04:13:927 (5,1) - don't flow
  04:23:289 (2,4) - strange

buhei wrote:

from my queue

[General]
Kiai should start at 03:26:693 no because I want to emphasize the key change of chorus
the whistles are noisy.. lowered the volume

[Normal]

• 
  00:09:246 (1) - offbeat fixed
  00:15:629 - add a note no
  00:46:693 (1) - make the spacing here as the same as those in other parts fixed
  00:57:757 (4) - can be better fixed
  01:37:757 (1) - offbeat fixed
  02:08:395 (1) - Ctrl+G? no since I think now is better
  02:15:204 (1) - offbeat It's ok I think
  02:19:033 (3) - Ctrl+J and move fixed
  02:20:736 (6) - ^ no
  02:29:672 (2) - one grid up fixed
  02:36:480 (2) - add a note used slider instead
  02:41:587 (2) - offbeat used to obtain a symmetric pattern
  02:45:097 (2) - hard to read the pattern is rhythmic
  03:27:118 - miss a note used slider instead
  03:28:395 (3) - why do you use this all the time fixed
  03:33:927 - miss a note used slider instead
  03:34:353 (2,3) - change to slider+circle like 02:27:544 (5,6) fixed
  04:13:501 - add a note fixed

[Hard]

• 
  00:07:544 (1,2) - don't look good This is the best I can do...
  00:10:097 (3) - Ctrl+J and move no
  00:21:799 - add a note no due to vocal
  00:27:544 - add a note no due to vocal
  00:39:459 (7) - Ctrl+G fixed
  00:42:012 (1,2,3) - should be better fixed
  01:09:459 - add a note fixed
  01:15:523 - miss a note It's intentional
  01:37:757 (1) - offbeat fixed
  01:50:523 (1) - don't slowdown no since it reads better
  02:34:884 - add a note delete a note instead
  02:39:672 - add a note It's intentional
  02:42:650 - 02:43:076 - why not put notes because I want to use the sliders flow
  03:02:863 (1) - Ctrl+J,Ctrl+H,Ctrl+G and move fixed
  03:32:012 - add a note why...?
  03:33:289 - add a note It's intentional
  03:38:501 - miss a note fixed
  03:51:161 - 03:52:012 - miss notes Actually I want to have the feel of which sliders are becoming shorter and shorter
  03:55:842 - add a note fixed
  04:00:523 - add a note It's intentional
  04:10:310 - miss a note It's intentional
  04:13:076 (3,4,5) - ugly fixed
  04:13:927 (5,1) - don't flow should be better now
  04:23:289 (2,4) - strange hmm...I don't think they are strange

GL