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Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - CANDY CANDY

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Seph
the video of this is jsut lol
D33d
Needs an easy diff. You have an insane and a "normal," which is arguably more like a hard diff. [Sweetie] has too much 1/2 and stuff in general to be the bottom of the mapset.

Hit me up if you want me to map the easy. Maybe see if you can simplify [Sweetie] and make a more busy diff in between it and [Candy]. I'd say that three diffs are enough here, although it'd be good to have more of this being mapped by you.

The diffs are they are seem okay, but you could try to make [Sweetie] more interesting by having more longer sliders and less constant 1/1 droning. It feels monotonous before long. [Candy] is nice and you two have styles which complement each other well--the switches don't feel jarring and that's a good thing.
CrestRising
Sorry if not many or even any of my mods are actually useful. I couldn't find anything significantly wrong with your map.
Oh, and I didn't mod the Taiko difficulty. Its just not my cup of tea.

[Sweetie:]
There are some circle additions which might be pretty useless so I'm just going to throw them out there:
00:31:436 00:34:206 00:35:138 00:38:821 00:41:590 00:43:436 00:53:590 01:45:283 01:48:975
I mostly did those circle addition mods based on already set patterns and not on the two slider thing for some of the verse sections.

00:57:513 (5) Just a suggestion, I might be wrong, but you could change this into a half beat slider which a circle on the second beat to make it match with 6 or maybe a slider like 6.
00:58:436 (6) Maybe it needs to be a repeat longer?
01:23:358 (5) I think this would sound better if it was broken up into two 1/2 beat sliders
01:28:456 (6) It could be broken up into two circle at the start and end point but it probably doesn't; it was just bugging me for some reason.
02:18:744 (5) I think it would look better if it was on the same x-axis as 1 so that it would look consistent with the pentagon-like pattern.
02:37:206 (5) Maybe break into a 1/2 beat slider with two repeats?
02:49:436 (4) The extra repeat seems a bit awkward to me since it doesn't match up with 3 but I think it might be fine.
03:17:821 (3, 4) Maybe mix these sliders into one long slider?
03:18:774 (5) If you did the previous suggestion, maybe making this into just a circle but I could be totally wrong.
03:39:975 (2, 3) Maybe this is a bit out there, but I think it might be better if there was spacing in between these two circles.

[Candy:]
00:13:206 to 00:29:590 I think you might have had too many parts where the circles would be at the same spot and overlap, especially with the triplets of 1/4 circles. I just thought it was a bit redundant and weird but its not terribly wrong.
00:42:167 (5,6) If your going to follow a pattern, you might as well put these under the endpoint of slider 4 for consistency.
00:43:667 (4) I think it might sound better if you made it a 1/2 beat slider like 5 is.
01:07:436 (2, 4) I think it might be a little too misleading if these are under the slider if its just a 1/2 beat interval from the endpoint to these circles but if its supposed to be an Insane difficulty, I guess it might be fine.
01:10:206 (5) If you followed the last suggestion, the same thing is here.
I personally think you just overlapped way too many beats over each other; it just seems a bit too confusing when it seems to have no sensible or reasonable pattern either.
yu_yu12354
hello~ I am a new Taiko modder
I just only modded for Taiko..I hope this may help you.. :cry:
SPOILER
[Taiko:]
Almost, the map is quite good, so there is little changes ahaha
First, please check that the audio(the samplest)→ soft. As it is too loud for the player when playing Taiko
I think it's better↓↓just what I think.You may ignore if you don't like it www


00:29:820 (1)Is it better change to finish? I think that the rhythm is stronger
00:37:206 (16) ^the same
01:43:657 (1) ^the same
01:28:783 (163)It is better for you to delete the note. As the player may not see it and miss it
02:42:629 (267) ^the same

Just my opinion, it's better to set a new combo→It's easier for the modder who would like to mod it (Although it is a Taiko mode) If you would like to add a new combo..then click it↓↓↓IF DON'T,JUST IGNORE IT..(quite rubbish haha)
SPOILER
At last, you should be better to set a new combo→It's easier for the modder who would like to mod it (Although it is a Taiko mode)
00:59:364 (95) New combo
01:06:744 (43) ^the same
01:28:898 (127) ^ same
02:13:206 (99) ^same
02:20:618 (141) ^same
02:27:975 (183) ^same
03:01:206 (99) ^same
03:03:052 (107) ^same
03:12:283 (151) ^same
03:27:052 (235) ^same


I hope you may get rank and this is a good song;D
Aurele
Here's the 50% of my diff owo!

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: CANDY CANDY.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59146
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:CANDY CANDY
TitleUnicode:CANDY CANDY
Artist:Kyary Pamyu Pamyu
ArtistUnicode:Kyary Pamyu Pamyu
Creator:Kenezz
Version:Chewing
Source:
Tags:vicho-kun vicho kenezzedward frozen child collab collaboration
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[Difficulty]
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YTYuyu
yo i apologize for the delay :(. mod requested in-game :D.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Curiousity.

[General]
Tags are inconsistent. switch "Gabe" and "Collab" under chewing for consistency with the tags.
[Chewing Gabe o3o]
personally, i feel that the settings fit in such a flowy diff in the sliders like this. i think using these settings make the diff more interesting during gameplay IMO.
00:26:129 (1,2,3) - i think that this could be moved to the left for a smoother flow in this part of the song during gameplay.
00:35:360 (2,3) - i think that it'll flow a lot smoother if you can replace all this for a slider that looks like (1), but flipped. i think that doing this would be consistent in the phrase of the vocals/BGM during gameplay IMO. if you do this, you have to fix the spacing for the next (1), but flip it vertically so that it'd flow smoother in this part during gameplay IMO.
00:41:821 (2) - i think that if you move this up a bit like this, it'll look symmetrical as it technically blankets the red (2) in this part IMO.
00:54:283 (2) - i think that you should make a curved slider for this note so that it'd blanket the previous slider's end and it'd flow a lot smoother during gameplay IMO, similar to 00:47:360 (3,1) - .
00:55:667 (3) - you should make this note a NC because of the change in the lyrics. the previous slider's vocals stop and then it starts once this note is hit during gameplay.
01:00:283 (1) - i think that you can make this go the other way like this so that the path would be easier for beginners to follow in this part during gameplay IMO.
01:01:206 (2) - this slider breaks the flow in this part because it's not following the vocals that accurate during gameplay. i think replacing this for a 2 circles and a 1/1 slider would flow to the vocals a lot accurate and smoother during gameplay. it should look like this.
01:08:590 (3) - move this slider up because it'll be symmetrical to (1) and it'll be a perfect blanket pattern between these 3 notes during gameplay.
01:10:436 (1) - since this is the easiest diff, beginners would most likely mess up at the 2nd repeat during gameplay. for this once, get rid of all repeats, and add another 1/1 slider so that it'll look easier to follow during gameplay in this part of the song, or you can remove (1) repeat, but add a circle at the end. same reason.
01:23:360 (3) - same as above, but the suggestion is the same as 01:01:206.
01:47:360 (1) - *nazi* think you can move the end point up so that the slider looks symmetrical and neater during gameplay?
02:09:513 (1,2) - i think that you can replace these 2 circles for a 3/1 slider so that it'll look fun to follow for beginners during gameplay IMO. i recommended some slider art since you did a lot of nice sliders in this diff.
02:20:590 (1) - i suggest that you make the slider look like this. as you see, the blanket looks a lot nicer and it looks fun to follow for beginners during gameplay.
02:24:283 (1) - same as 01:10:436.
02:39:052 (1) - ^
02:44:590 (2) - i think that you should move this note under (1) like this because personally, i find that moving it here flows a lot smoother for beginners than under it. yes it makes a blanket, but the transition looks awkward to follow in this part during gameplay IMO.
03:03:052 (4) - replace the drum claps at every end for drum whistles instead. the drum claps sound too distracting and they don't fit with this part of the song. keep the finishes at the ends however.
03:14:129 (2) - same as 01:01:206.
03:23:360 (1) - same as 01:10:436.
03:35:359 (2) - the transition from the previous note and that's the slider feels awkward to follow because of the path it's taking. it goes straight, and then it feels as if a wall is behind this slider and that breaks it IMO. for this one, make the slider like this so that the flow in this part is smoother and easier to follow for beginners during gameplay IMO.
03:36:283 (3) - same as 01:10:436.

[Sweetie]
i think you can increase the OD and HP by 1 and the AR by 1 or 2 because right now, i feel that the settings are too low for a normal diff.
00:15:975 (2,3,4) - i think that if you do this instead, it'd be more easier to read and it'll feel comfortable for players to follow during gameplay IMO.
00:19:667 (2) - i feel that the transitioning from (1) would be hard to get to judging from the direction the player is taking IMO. how about doing this instead? same reason as above.
00:21:513 (4) - i can't hear any drums at the end of this slider, so either remove the clap, or replace the clap for a whistle to go along with the cymbals in this part. a finish wouldn't work since the next note has it and it'l sound too distracting.
00:22:436 (1) - perhaps you can flip it the other way like this instead? same reason as 00:15:975.
00:24:283 (5) - ^, but like this instead.
00:44:590 (1,2) - consider spacing out these slider because i feel that the overlap looks bad and it may interfere with the gameplay for players IMO. something like this should work in this part during gameplay IMO.
00:48:283 (1,2) - hmm idk if this is possible. try to do a similar pattern like i suggested above, but don't break the DS for this.
01:27:513 - i feel that a circle should be here to follow that sound of the bell in that part. it feels like something is missing here to compelte the transition in this part IMO.
02:26:360 (4) - for this one, i think that there are too many repeats for a normal diff like this. players may find this hard to read because they might not know when to let go. for this one, it'd be nice if you can do this because it's easier to read and it wouldn't cause a problem for players during gameplay.
02:41:360 - same as 01:27:513, but that's only it you applied it for consistency.
02:49:436 (4) - keep this slider to 1 repeat to be consistent with (3). adding another repeat on this would most likely surprise players during gameplay.
02:56:590 (6) - for this one, replace all this for a 1/2 slider followed by a 1/1 slider, or you can replace this for a 1/2 slider followed by a 1/2 repeat slider. again it'll be easier to read and since the hitburst is covering the repeat while on a stack(not saying that it's unrankable), it'll be heard to read for players like i said before.
03:15:052 (5) - move this a bit to the right so that the spacing would be consistent. i find it odd to follow that the spacing is different in this part for me.
03:25:206 (3) - same as 02:26:360, this time do this instead to changes things up.

[Taiko]
00:34:898 (4,5,6) - this kkk 3-plet doesn't fit with the song because i don't see the resemblance in this. try a d kk pattern instead? the d follows the drums whereas the k's follow the cymbals.
00:44:590 (18) - there's a loud "thump" in the drums in this part, so make this a D to go along with it. it'll show emphasis on the drums.
00:59:360 (95) - K here. you can hear the cymbals and drums in this part and it plays a lot nicer with the kiai. if you find it awkward, then make this a D if you want.
01:12:283 (168) - same as above, but because of the cymbals, or you can do a k to make things easier.
01:14:129 (179) - same as 00:59:360, but because it'll be consistent.
01:28:898 (264) - make this note a k, but that's "if" you make 00:59:360 a k. if not then you can ignore this.
01:43:667 (1) - make this a D to emphasize the cymbals. i feel that the d isn't enough so the D would give more impact IMO.
02:13:206 (99) - same as 00:59:360.
02:26:129 (172) - do a D here instead for a smooth transition in the notes since the note before and after it are k's.
02:27:975 (183) - same as 01:14:129.
02:35:359 (225) - ^
02:57:513 (350) - same as 00:59:360.
03:12:283 (417) - make this a d because it'll be consistent with 00:59:360 since it follows the same phrase in the pitch and the drums.
03:25:206 (490) - same as 02:26:129.
03:27:052 (501) - D here. same reason as 01:14:129.
03:41:706 (585,586) - doing something like this is unrankable since the previous note is a d and the last one is a D so it'd be most likely impossible to hit. if you want to make this rankable, then you should make the last note a d or you can do a k to follow the "ding" in the BGM and the cymbals in this part.

[Candy]
00:57:513 (1) - perhaps you can make this a curved slider so that it'll be consistent and it'll look smoother to follow during gameplay?
01:21:975 (2) - it really bothers me to see this which is not aligned properly...how about moving this to the right a bit to make the transition smoother to follow during gameplay?
02:14:590 (4) - the repeat in this part of the song doesn't fit because there's a hold on the vocals and the repeat just breaks the flow in this part during gameplay. it'd be a lot easier if you can remove the repeat slider and you can add a circle at 02:15:052 so that the transition is smoother to follow during gameplay.
02:37:667 (2) - i think this should be a curved slider to increase the flow when one is following the vocals, not to mention that it'll be consistent with the previous slider.
03:21:975 (2) - ^
03:41:590 - perhaps you can add a circle to follow the drums, and to change things up a bit by following the drums, and not the vocals?

and it guess that's it. i don't have a problem with the Candy and Sweetie diff, but since you got Gabe's diff last month, then i would like you to get more mods for that diff...it'd be really nice to see hear opinions and ideas on how to make the diff better IMO, also the taiko diff if you can since you got 2 mods, and i don't think that's enough. anyways GL on this map and don't give up ;)
MILKY96
Really good map, needs to be ranked :D
Topic Starter
Kenezz

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo i apologize for the delay :(. mod requested in-game :D.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Curiousity.

[General]
Tags are inconsistent. switch "Gabe" and "Collab" under chewing for consistency with the tags.

[Sweetie]
i think you can increase the OD and HP by 1 and the AR by 1 or 2 because right now, i feel that the settings are too low for a normal diff. Okay
00:15:975 (2,3,4) - i think that if you do this instead, it'd be more easier to read and it'll feel comfortable for players to follow during gameplay IMO. kk~
00:19:667 (2) - i feel that the transitioning from (1) would be hard to get to judging from the direction the player is taking IMO. how about doing this instead? same reason as above. Hmm I'll leave like this.
00:21:513 (4) - i can't hear any drums at the end of this slider, so either remove the clap, or replace the clap for a whistle to go along with the cymbals in this part. a finish wouldn't work since the next note has it and it'l sound too distracting. Clap ba bye~
00:22:436 (1) - perhaps you can flip it the other way like this instead? same reason as 00:15:975. I like my way.
00:24:283 (5) - ^, but like this instead. Same
00:44:590 (1,2) - consider spacing out these slider because i feel that the overlap looks bad and it may interfere with the gameplay for players IMO. something like this should work in this part during gameplay IMO. Okay, fixed.
00:48:283 (1,2) - hmm idk if this is possible. try to do a similar pattern like i suggested above, but don't break the DS for this. Done
01:27:513 - i feel that a circle should be here to follow that sound of the bell in that part. it feels like something is missing here to compelte the transition in this part IMO. For me is fine, then no changes.
02:26:360 (4) - for this one, i think that there are too many repeats for a normal diff like this. players may find this hard to read because they might not know when to let go. for this one, it'd be nice if you can do this because it's easier to read and it wouldn't cause a problem for players during gameplay. Okay, two sliders with one repeat instead.
02:41:360 - same as 01:27:513, but that's only it you applied it for consistency.
02:49:436 (4) - keep this slider to 1 repeat to be consistent with (3). adding another repeat on this would most likely surprise players during gameplay. Fixed
02:56:590 (6) - for this one, replace all this for a 1/2 slider followed by a 1/1 slider, or you can replace this for a 1/2 slider followed by a 1/2 repeat slider. again it'll be easier to read and since the hitburst is covering the repeat while on a stack(not saying that it's unrankable), it'll be heard to read for players like i said before. 1/2 slider+ 1/1 slider here.
03:15:052 (5) - move this a bit to the right so that the spacing would be consistent. i find it odd to follow that the spacing is different in this part for me.
03:25:206 (3) - same as 02:26:360, this time do this instead to changes things up. kk.

[Candy]
00:57:513 (1) - perhaps you can make this a curved slider so that it'll be consistent and it'll look smoother to follow during gameplay? Fixed
01:21:975 (2) - it really bothers me to see this which is not aligned properly...how about moving this to the right a bit to make the transition smoother to follow during gameplay? Ok
02:14:590 (4) - the repeat in this part of the song doesn't fit because there's a hold on the vocals and the repeat just breaks the flow in this part during gameplay. it'd be a lot easier if you can remove the repeat slider and you can add a circle at 02:15:052 so that the transition is smoother to follow during gameplay. Fixed
02:37:667 (2) - i think this should be a curved slider to increase the flow when one is following the vocals, not to mention that it'll be consistent with the previous slider.
03:21:975 (2) - ^ 2kk
03:41:590 - perhaps you can add a circle to follow the drums, and to change things up a bit by following the drums, and not the vocals? Yup sounds good.

and it guess that's it. i don't have a problem with the Candy and Sweetie diff, but since you got Gabe's diff last month, then i would like you to get more mods for that diff...it'd be really nice to see hear opinions and ideas on how to make the diff better IMO, also the taiko diff if you can since you got 2 mods, and i don't think that's enough. anyways GL on this map and don't give up ;)
Thank you Bya <3~
DakeDekaane
Summoned here via in-game, modding all in English so all can understand :3

Maybe it would be a tiny mod, but there's no big issues and all is pretty well-done and very neat.

Here I go.

[General]
:!: Inconsistency in tags. Add "Gabe" to tags (before "collab" tag) in Taiko difficulty.
Add Unicode for Artist: きゃりーぱみゅぱみゅ

[Chewing]
01:01:206 (2) - I didn't like how this slider sounded, as everything in this part has emphasis in white ticks, it could sound better if you make this a 1/1 slider with a single repeat and adding a circle in 01:02:590 matching very nice with the vocals.
01:10:436 (1) - Maybe split this in two 1/1 sliders, it may be a bit hard to handle for very newbies, but not a death matter, so feel free to skip this.
01:18:744 - You can add a circle here, it's ok to give players a little breath but something here would fit very nice, also http://puu.sh/2uLa3
01:23:360 (3) - Same double repeating slider, but this fits very nice with vocals and make it somehow predictable, so you can keep this.
01:27:052 (1) - Don't use spinners as fillers :I (at least I feel it like one, sorry if that wasn't your intention), you can put circles and sliders in this part to make this part more fitting, I suggest something like this:

01:49:206 (2) - This is touching HP bar, this looks quite weird and it's noticeable while playing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692086
02:21:513 - Why you no put something when the song says "Chewing" in Chewing diff :c add something here.
02:24:283 (1) - Look at 01:10:436 (1), same thing.
02:33:513 (3) - This slightly touches the HP bar, fix :c
02:36:283 - As in 02:21:513, add something here, it may harm your next objects, but there's no much between this and the next spinner, so please do :c
02:40:898 (1) - You can ignore the above one if you take this, basically, the same I said before about using spinners as fillers, put something else here :c
03:14:129 (2) - As in 01:01:206 (2).
03:23:360 (1) - As in 01:10:436 (1).

Nazi stuff below, feel free to ignore if my thoughts are wrong :v
01:54:744 (1) - Blanket with 01:54:283 (4)? Move the red node to x:296 y:156 and the 2nd to x:288 y:76.
02:04:898 (4) - Move the last node 2-3 grid to the left (level 4), making the embracing with the previous slider look better, and maybe adjust the spacing for 02:06:744 (1) if needed.

There may be similar parts like in Byakugan's mod, noticed after writing all stuff here :c, you can choose what you consider better or like more :3

[Sweetie]
:!: This diff lacks of spinner, it's always recommendable to put at least one, you can put one in 03:09:513 - 03:11:821, matching with the increasing background sound.
00:21:513 (4) - Remove 1 repeat, it still will sound nice and it's easier to play, making the gap between Chewing and this diff, a bit tinier.
00:25:898 (8) - Maybe remove this to give a little break before the next combo.
00:28:898 (6) - Same, remove 1 repeat, but this matches more than previous, so you can keep it.

Somehow nazi stuff below, feel free to follow or not.
01:43:667 (1) - Maybe make a blanket here, it could look better, but if you don't like, feel free to ignore.
01:47:360 (1) - Same as above.
02:07:667 (3) - You can soften a bit the curve of this slider to make it more matching with the previous slider by movin the last node 1 grid (level 4) to the right.
03:21:513 (3) - Maybe make a blanket for this.

[Candy Candy, Candy Candy Candy (8)]
:!: Same issue with the spinner, same time as I suggested in Sweetie diff, 03:09:513 - 03:11:821
I know nothing of storyboarding but I think it'll look better if the fade-in for the appearing names is a bit faster or begins later.
00:59:129 (7) - Delete this, there's no noticeable sound here and it "breaks the break" before the chorus, this part will play better if this is removed.

[Taiko]
With the increasing variety for Taiko maps/difficulties, it would be nice to have this named "Taiko Oni".
03:41:821 - Keep the increasing in SV (1.20x) for this timing point, as there's only one circle and it looks odd by being the only one slowed.

I think that's all from my part, nice mapset overall, good luck o/
Topic Starter
Kenezz

DakeDekaane wrote:

Summoned here via in-game, modding all in English so all can understand :3

Maybe it would be a tiny mod, but there's no big issues and all is pretty well-done and very neat.

Here I go.

[General]
:!: Inconsistency in tags. Add "Gabe" to tags (before "collab" tag) in Taiko difficulty. Ops
Add Unicode for Artist: きゃりーぱみゅぱみゅ

[Sweetie]
:!: This diff lacks of spinner, it's always recommendable to put at least one, you can put one in 03:09:513 - 03:11:821, matching with the increasing background sound. Okay, added.
00:21:513 (4) - Remove 1 repeat, it still will sound nice and it's easier to play, making the gap between Chewing and this diff, a bit tinier. Hmm for me is fine, then no changes.
00:25:898 (8) - Maybe remove this to give a little break before the next combo. Same as above.
00:28:898 (6) - Same, remove 1 repeat, but this matches more than previous, so you can keep it. I'll keep it.

Somehow nazi stuff below, feel free to follow or not. Nazi nazi nazi~ Sorry no changes in this part.
01:43:667 (1) - Maybe make a blanket here, it could look better, but if you don't like, feel free to ignore.
01:47:360 (1) - Same as above.
02:07:667 (3) - You can soften a bit the curve of this slider to make it more matching with the previous slider by movin the last node 1 grid (level 4) to the right.
03:21:513 (3) - Maybe make a blanket for this.

[Candy Candy, Candy Candy Candy (8)]
:!: Same issue with the spinner, same time as I suggested in Sweetie diff, 03:09:513 - 03:11:821 Same as Sweetie
I know nothing of storyboarding but I think it'll look better if the fade-in for the appearing names is a bit faster or begins later. Naah it's okay
00:59:129 (7) - Delete this, there's no noticeable sound here and it "breaks the break" before the chorus, this part will play better if this is removed. Okay~

[Taiko]
With the increasing variety for Taiko maps/difficulties, it would be nice to have this named "Taiko Oni". But if this one is the unique taiko? I don't see the problem.
03:41:821 - Keep the increasing in SV (1.20x) for this timing point, as there's only one circle and it looks odd by being the only one slowed.

I think that's all from my part, nice mapset overall, good luck o/
Frozen Child
FIXED

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Aurele

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo i apologize for the delay :(. mod requested in-game :D.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Curiousity.

[General]
Tags are inconsistent. switch "Gabe" and "Collab" under chewing for consistency with the tags.
[Chewing Gabe o3o]
personally, i feel that the settings fit in such a flowy diff in the sliders like this. i think using these settings make the diff more interesting during gameplay IMO. Done
00:26:129 (1,2,3) - i think that this could be moved to the left for a smoother flow in this part of the song during gameplay. Done
00:35:360 (2,3) - i think that it'll flow a lot smoother if you can replace all this for a slider that looks like (1), but flipped. i think that doing this would be consistent in the phrase of the vocals/BGM during gameplay IMO. if you do this, you have to fix the spacing for the next (1), but flip it vertically so that it'd flow smoother in this part during gameplay IMO. Made another slider form
00:41:821 (2) - i think that if you move this up a bit like this, it'll look symmetrical as it technically blankets the red (2) in this part IMO. Moved it somewhere, similar to the picture.
00:54:283 (2) - i think that you should make a curved slider for this note so that it'd blanket the previous slider's end and it'd flow a lot smoother during gameplay IMO, similar to 00:47:360 (3,1) - . Done!
00:55:667 (3) - you should make this note a NC because of the change in the lyrics. the previous slider's vocals stop and then it starts once this note is hit during gameplay. Done!
01:00:283 (1) - i think that you can make this go the other way like this so that the path would be easier for beginners to follow in this part during gameplay IMO. i guess it's done
01:01:206 (2) - this slider breaks the flow in this part because it's not following the vocals that accurate during gameplay. i think replacing this for a 2 circles and a 1/1 slider would flow to the vocals a lot accurate and smoother during gameplay. it should look like this. D-Done!
01:08:590 (3) - move this slider up because it'll be symmetrical to (1) and it'll be a perfect blanket pattern between these 3 notes during gameplay. Made a blanket with the previous and the next object
01:10:436 (1) - since this is the easiest diff, beginners would most likely mess up at the 2nd repeat during gameplay. for this once, get rid of all repeats, and add another 1/1 slider so that it'll look easier to follow during gameplay in this part of the song, or you can remove (1) repeat, but add a circle at the end. same reason.
01:23:360 (3) - same as above, but the suggestion is the same as 01:01:206.
01:47:360 (1) - *nazi* think you can move the end point up so that the slider looks symmetrical and neater during gameplay?
02:09:513 (1,2) - i think that you can replace these 2 circles for a 3/1 slider so that it'll look fun to follow for beginners during gameplay IMO. i recommended some slider art since you did a lot of nice sliders in this diff. I will keep it like that.
02:20:590 (1) - i suggest that you make the slider look like this. as you see, the blanket looks a lot nicer and it looks fun to follow for beginners during gameplay.
02:24:283 (1) - same as 01:10:436.
02:39:052 (1) - ^
02:44:590 (2) - i think that you should move this note under (1) like this because personally, i find that moving it here flows a lot smoother for beginners than under it. yes it makes a blanket, but the transition looks awkward to follow in this part during gameplay IMO. I can't see the puush.
03:03:052 (4) - replace the drum claps at every end for drum whistles instead. the drum claps sound too distracting and they don't fit with this part of the song. keep the finishes at the ends however.
03:14:129 (2) - same as 01:01:206.
03:23:360 (1) - same as 01:10:436.
03:35:359 (2) - the transition from the previous note and that's the slider feels awkward to follow because of the path it's taking. it goes straight, and then it feels as if a wall is behind this slider and that breaks it IMO. for this one, make the slider like this so that the flow in this part is smoother and easier to follow for beginners during gameplay IMO.
03:36:283 (3) - same as 01:10:436.
I was so lazy to answer to everything. Basically, I rejected two points, I've made many changes with the other points.
Thank you very much, Byakugan♥

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360,36,111975,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,219975,12,4,221821,0:0:0:0:

@DakeDekaane: Many things were fixed with Byakugan's mod but I've considered most of your mod too.
Thank you for your mod and time!
mancuso_JM_
Hola Kenezz :D! Hora de modear esto!

[Easy]

Hi Gabe o3o

  1. 00:15:052 - 00:27:975 - I would use more Whistles in this section because they will match the instrumental much better. Try adding some whistle in some downbeats for example.
  2. 00:27:975 (3) - Clap at the Slider end instead of whistle to match better the drums (?
  3. 00:33:513 (4,5) - I was looking this pattern really much, I didn't want to point out because looks fine but rhythmically I think you should make some tweak. I think (4) should end 1/1 back (since you're following the vocals), and then you could add a note in 00:34:898 -. I tried something with the placement, try to check that by yourself
  4. 00:57:052 (x) - Add a Note (with clap) here to cover better drums and vocals.
  5. 01:02:129 (4) - Hmm.. I think you're missing a Whistle here following your hitsounding.
  6. 01:04:898 (3) - I tried to make this Slider a bit more ''correct'' aesthetically talking, using some of symetry and curving a bit that.
    Screenshoot + Code
    364,248,64898,2,0,B|344:327|256:364|256:364|168:327|148:248,1,330,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 02:17:821 (x) - Add a note or a 1/1 Slider here please. This feel pretty empty and the music never stopped, so this pause looks just weird.
  8. 02:18:744 (3) - *Really nazi* Move the red slider point 1 grid to the right, to make this blanket perfect :P
  9. 02:21:513 (x) - Yey.. same as before. You should add a note or a 1/1 Slider here (I won't repeat this anymore, if you change that, do it in similar places please).
  10. 02:25:206 (2) - What about Ctrl+G here in this Slider? I dunno, but I think it flows a bit better :P
  11. 02:39:975 (2) - (^)
  12. 02:57:513 - 03:08:129 - This is weird I've to say, this section have been mapped in the easiest diff. but not in the others, I know this is a guest difficulty but even though you should change that. In addition, a break will be a good thing for new players, they need some rest time sometimes.
- 11 Spinners D:.. I didn't like that, you can maybe map some of them but is up to you baka :P. The rest looks correct in all aspects, nice diff. in general I've to say

[Normal]

  1. 00:48:283 (1,2) - Cosa pequeña, pero que te parece esto? (Para cambiar un poco nada mas xD)
    Foto + Codigo

    324,36,48283,6,0,B|304:80|248:80|248:80|210:80,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    56,60,49206,2,0,B|76:16|132:16|132:16|168:16,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 01:45:975 (6) - Con el nuevo (no tan nuevo) algoritmo de los slider se pueden hacer cosas mas lindas como estas.. Quizas puedas arreglar algun Slider y blanket con esto. Tengo que decirte que los blankets son unas de las pocas cosas que no me gustan aca xD.
  3. 01:49:206 (4) - Creo que un Ctrl+J y ubicando este Slider en x:304 y:212 va a hacer fluir mejor este patron.
  4. 02:42:283 - Soy yo o falta un clap ahi?
- No mucho para decir aca. La ubicacion de las notas se siente random a veces y hace el flow medio raro (quizas soy yo nada mas xD). Como te dije, intenta arreglar un poco las blankets tambien hehe, el resto esta bien.

[Candy]

Nombre:
  1. Por que no llamarla ''Hard'' nada mas? Digo, por consistencia, no? xD
Kenezz:
  1. 00:51:052 (3) - Que tal esto? (Perdon por molestarte haha, todo sea por el bien del mapa xD) y no te olvide de arreglar el spacing con (4).
    Foto + Codigo

    316,212,51052,2,0,B|308:164|256:140|204:164|196:212,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 01:20:129 (2) - Yo creo que algo asi fluye mejor (te lo deje con simetria, despues vos lo arreglas como queres :P)
  3. 01:21:975 (2) - Mientras que aca, haria algo mas asi
  4. 01:26:129 (3) - Siento que este Slider esta fuera de sitio, debido a que la voz ''larga'' empieza en 01:26:590 -. Quizas es mejor agregar un par de notas en 01:26:129 - y 01:26:360 - para que siga mejor la musica (btw, me gusto el blanket que hiciste, asi que si arreglas este punto, intenta no mover esos sliders xD)
  5. 02:27:513 (6,7,1) - Siento que el stack entre estos 3 objetos juega raro. Me parece mejor que evites este stack, al menos uno de esos.. Podrias mantener el stack entre (7,1), creo que seria lo mejor.
  6. 03:24:975 (4,1) - Quizas puedas agregar un pequeño jump entre estas notas por consistencia con las otras secciones de kiai
Vicho:

  1. 00:58:898 (6) - Que te parece un finish aca? Siento que le falta algo.
  2. 01:06:744 (1,2,3,4) - Podrias evitar los stack entre (1,2) y (3,4)? La verdad al principio pense que estaba en 3/4 debido a los que agregaste anteriormente y al bajo AR, por eso siento que seria mejor evitar estos stacks.
  3. 02:25:206 (3) - Ctrl+G en este Slider pls! Fluye mejor sin dudas.
- Lindo Collab, me gusto en general :)

Bueno, eso es todo lo que tengo.
Buen mapa en general, como siempre :D
Espero que te ayude y Buena Suerte!
Topic Starter
Kenezz
Gracias mancu, arreglado todo excepto lo de este slider en el collab 01:26:129 (3).

Edit: Mod applied in Gabe's diff too.
Gero
Hello Kenezz ♥ mod per request ~

General

  1. El preview time no esta colocando correctamente, te recomiendo ponerlo aquí 00:59:129 - no se que opinas tu?
  2. Considera agregar Kiriko Takemura (竹村 桐子) a los tags ya que es el nombre real de Kyary.

Easy

  1. 00:15:052 (1,1) - Nazi* these sliders are a little strange to me since they don't form a good blanket about this slider 00:16:898 (2) - can you try something different for example this.
  2. 01:24:283 (4,1) - ^
  3. 00:27:052 - I would to use one whistle here to emphasize with the song and have some consistency in your previous patterns of hitsounds.
  4. 00:31:667 (2) - Same as above.
  5. 00:35:360 (2) - ^
  6. 00:47:360 (3,1) - What about to use Ctrl+G in this slider to improve the flow? btw if you wanna do this, you should have to redoing the next patterns, btw if you want do this you have to move the next notes in respective place.
  7. 01:01:206 (2) - missing a whistle here.
  8. 01:15:975 (2,1,2) - this rhythm is a bit weird for me since is the first time that you use a pattern like this, to solve this issue consider to add a circle here with a whistle.
  9. 03:31:667 - ^
  10. 02:18:744 (3) - Alright I know this fits with the song but is a bit random since looks like a unsnapped slider so consider extending this by one tick (for example like this one 02:22:436 (3) - )
  11. 02:36:283 - Add a note here with whistle to follow vocals and to be consistent with 01:22:436 - maybe in X:100 Y:280.


Normal

  1. 00:43:667 (5,6) - Que opinas sobre usar finishes tipo drum aquí? Creo que sonarían muy bien con el fondo de la instrumental.
  2. 00:58:436 (6,1) - Una cosa insignificante pero podrías mover ambos para abajo ya que la diferencia de espacio respecto a 6 es bastante notable.
  3. 01:17:821 (1,2,3,4) - OMG Tengo que decir que esto me confundió la primera vez que lo vi, realmente te recomiendo intentar algo diferente con esto para evitar este tipo de confusiones y mas cuando se tratan de dificultades bastante básicas.
  4. 01:21:513 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Misma sugerencia.
  5. 02:36:744 (4,6) - Nazi* Tal vez sea yo pero creo que esto no esta bien apilado.
  6. 03:08:590 (1,1) - No crees que el slider esta un poco lejos del centro? podrías colocarlo un par de grids mas arriba para que no sea tan complicado de darle a la nota después de un spinner.
Candy

Kenezz

  1. 01:26:129 (3) - Solo una pequeña observación pero siento que este slider es un poco inconsistente respecto a las otras partes que son similares a esta ya que estas ignorando completamente un beat importante el cual es 01:26:590 - quizás podrías reconsiderar rehacer esto.
  2. 02:38:590 (4,1) - Creo que el flujo entre ambos se ve un poco forzado para ser honesto, que opinas sobre hacer algo como esto así no tienes que cambiar casi nada, si haces esto no olvides aplicar el circulo siguiente con el slider numero 4.
Vicho

  1. 00:43:667 (4,5) - Es bastante curioso que en la normal se haya marcado el ritmo en tick rojo y en cambio aquí, en la hard lo hayan ignorado completamente, para solucionar esto podrías colocar un slider 1/2 a partir de aquí 00:43:667 - y por supuesto agregando una nota 00:44:013 - también considera lo antes mencionado acerca de los finishes tipo drum.
  2. 01:50:360 (6,7) - ^ lo mismo acerca de usar los finishes drums, hay varias partes que suenan algo similar así considerarlo.
  3. 01:12:283 (5,1) - En mi opinión el NC debería de ir en 5 en lugar de 1.
  4. 02:25:206 (3) - Usa CTR + G sin lugar a dudas fluye mejor ya que no va a la misma dirección del anterior slider.
  5. 02:42:744 - Considera usar whistles a partir de esta sección en adelante como se hizo en la normal ya que encajan muy bien en esta parte.
  6. 03:35:821 (6) - Para ser consistente seria mejor si reduces el final del slider al anterior tick (Azul) y agregues una nota en 03:36:283 - con NC.
Awesome as always, pure love ~
Topic Starter
Kenezz

Gero wrote:

Hello Kenezz ♥ mod per request ~

General

  1. El preview time no esta colocando correctamente, te recomiendo ponerlo aquí 00:59:129 - no se que opinas tu? Oh, listo.
  2. Considera agregar Kiriko Takemura (竹村 桐子) a los tags ya que es el nombre real de Kyary. Creo que nadie buscaría eso, no lo veo necesario XD
Normal

  1. 00:43:667 (5,6) - Que opinas sobre usar finishes tipo drum aquí? Creo que sonarían muy bien con el fondo de la instrumental. Vale
  2. 00:58:436 (6,1) - Una cosa insignificante pero podrías mover ambos para abajo ya que la diferencia de espacio respecto a 6 es bastante notable. Cuando pasó esto? Arreglado XD
  3. 01:17:821 (1,2,3,4) - OMG Tengo que decir que esto me confundió la primera vez que lo vi, realmente te recomiendo intentar algo diferente con esto para evitar este tipo de confusiones y mas cuando se tratan de dificultades bastante básicas.
  4. 01:21:513 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Misma sugerencia. Tendré que decir no en ambos casos porque no veo el problema, ambos patrones respetan el espacio y el ritmo, quizás es cuestión de leer apropiadamente el AR.
  5. 02:36:744 (4,6) - Nazi* Tal vez sea yo pero creo que esto no esta bien apilado. Naah, sí esta bien apilado.
  6. 03:08:590 (1,1) - No crees que el slider esta un poco lejos del centro? podrías colocarlo un par de grids mas arriba para que no sea tan complicado de darle a la nota después de un spinner. Tampoco veo el problema o3o
Candy

Kenezz

  1. 01:26:129 (3) - Solo una pequeña observación pero siento que este slider es un poco inconsistente respecto a las otras partes que son similares a esta ya que estas ignorando completamente un beat importante el cual es 01:26:590 - quizás podrías reconsiderar rehacer esto. Si te das cuenta lo que hago es seguir la voz (en la mayor parte de lo que realicé), este y el anterior slider siguen apropiadamente la voz, no veo el problema de seguir un "beat importante" para romper mi secuencia.
  2. 02:38:590 (4,1) - Creo que el flujo entre ambos se ve un poco forzado para ser honesto, que opinas sobre hacer algo como esto así no tienes que cambiar casi nada, si haces esto no olvides aplicar el circulo siguiente con el slider numero 4. Hecho.
Vicho

  1. 00:43:667 (4,5) - Es bastante curioso que en la normal se haya marcado el ritmo en tick rojo y en cambio aquí, en la hard lo hayan ignorado completamente, para solucionar esto podrías colocar un slider 1/2 a partir de aquí 00:43:667 - y por supuesto agregando una nota 00:44:013 - también considera lo antes mencionado acerca de los finishes tipo drum. Creo que se debe a que somos diferentes mappers y el normal fue realizado después, personalmente no veo el problema, pero habrá que preguntarle a Vicho.
  2. 01:50:360 (6,7) - ^ lo mismo acerca de usar los finishes drums, hay varias partes que suenan algo similar así considerarlo.
  3. 01:12:283 (5,1) - En mi opinión el NC debería de ir en 5 en lugar de 1. Hmm yo creo que los combos siguen los cambios de voz y por lo tanto este está bien
  4. 02:25:206 (3) - Usa CTR + G sin lugar a dudas fluye mejor ya que no va a la misma dirección del anterior slider. Hecho
  5. 02:42:744 - Considera usar whistles a partir de esta sección en adelante como se hizo en la normal ya que encajan muy bien en esta parte.
  6. 03:35:821 (6) - Para ser consistente seria mejor si reduces el final del slider al anterior tick (Azul) y agregues una nota en 03:36:283 - con NC.
Awesome as always, pure love ~
Gracias por el mod.
Mod applied to Easy too.
Aurele
ohi, going to apply this soon
Nymph
gj nothing to complain :3
Krisom
Hello o/

Rank Log:

General
Folder: Ok
Skin: Ok
Background: Ok
SB: Ok
AiMod: Ok
Metadata: Ok
Timing: Ok
Song Setup: Ok

Spread: Ok

Candy
02:27:052 (4,5,6,7,1) - Consider unstacking (7,1) for consistency with the pattern and better flow please (I kinda derped reading this, since none of the others is stacked).
02:44:129 (5,1,2,3) - I'd move the stack a tad down and right due to the weird distance that happens in-game because of the stacking. Or do a manual stack or something.
02:55:206 (7,1,2) - This NC-ing makes no sense. The NC should be either at (2), at (7) or even at the next (3). Having it where it is (on the blue tick) makes no sense for either pattern comboing (new pattern starts at (3)) nor music based comboing (music changes on (2).

Normal
Nothing

Easy
01:25:206 (1) -You can improve this slidershape.
428,348,85206,6,0,B|484:312|488:256|480:212|444:176|444:176|420:40,1,330,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:18:744 (3) - Perfect blanket if you move the red point 2 grids up.
03:17:821 (3) - You can improve this slidershape.
468,80,197821,6,0,P|516:176|352:252,1,330,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:38:129 (1,2,3) - I believe that this would look cleaner if you made clear that (2) is not trying to be (1)'s blanket. It would also add more variety adding another slidershape just at the end, like a pattern to remember. Here's an idea.
03:40:898 - I undertsant that you would want to keep the ending pattern, but I'm terribly sad that this rhythm was not used.
Most blankets can be improved, but I just pointed the few most important.

That'd be all imo
Topic Starter
Kenezz

Krisom wrote:

Hello o/

Candy
02:44:129 (5,1,2,3) - I'd move the stack a tad down and right due to the weird distance that happens in-game because of the stacking. For me this triplet is okay o3o Or do a manual stack or something.

Easy
03:38:129 (1,2,3) - I believe that this would look cleaner if you made clear that (2) is not trying to be (1)'s blanket. It would also add more variety adding another slidershape just at the end, like a pattern to remember. Here's an idea.
03:40:898 - I undertsant that you would want to keep the ending pattern, but I'm terribly sad that this rhythm was not used.
Most blankets can be improved, but I just pointed the few most important.

That'd be all imo
Fixed other things, thank you <3
Krisom
Nuked due to obscene imagery, foul language, drug abuse and suggestive themes. Also, you totally ripped this whole set from this user.

Here you go /o/

(mancuso 4 BAT) *runs*
Topic Starter
Kenezz
Omg, finally! ty <33

(mancuso 4 BAT)
XinCrin
OMG. Finally you get it ranked
Congrats Kenezz :)
(#mancuso 4 BAT)
mancuso_JM_
wtf :o !

Grats Kenzy!
sheela
Congrats Kenezz!
Gero
Finally, Grats Kennez!

(#mancuso4BAT)
MoodyRPG

Krisom wrote:

Nuked due to obscene imagery, foul language, drug abuse and suggestive themes. Also, you totally ripped this whole set from this user.

Here you go /o/

(mancuso 4 BAT) *runs*
Shame on you Kenezz, jk <3

Gratz bro :)

(mancuso 4 BAT)
YTYuyu
LOL i never thought this map could get ranked :P

congratz :D
Arcubin
taiko couldn't be found ._. i want play that taiko
Kiiwa
great Kenezz!~ :P
Topic Starter
Kenezz
Thanks everybody <3
StarlightDust_old
Im so glad this song is on here!This is my childhood! :lol: :)
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