Already Bubbled? I see..
00:00:441 (1) - this slider look weird to me..um,well because it's weird to start a map with a red tick in the first place xD at least in easy
and the lyrics end at 00:00:778 but you extend the slider to the next downbeat. could you just have a circle at 00:00:947 (1)? I tried,and it looks more intuitive too me.
I think the rhyme is fine, if changed to 1 slider and 1 circle, it seems too hard to play as an Easy diff..
00:20:666 (2,3) - hm,maybe you can use this rhytm instead? because I hear an obvious note at 00:21:003,I think it's better to follow it
nice idea, fixed
01:19:149 (2) - I'm sorry,but you have to change this kick-slider to a single circle at 01:19:149..should be fine enough
this is not hard to read/play imo, and it fit the song very well, so I want to keep this
01:23:194 (1) - ^ ^
01:26:902 (2) - ^ probably better to leave a note at the red tick ^
01:20:497 - add a note here because kiai should start/end with some note
I think this is fine, kiai should start/end at downbeat imo, but it'll be too hard to play as a Normal diff if add a note here..