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Strawberry

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Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2012-05-27T15:10:10+00:00

Hi~Real
From our Challenge Queue ;3

[Insane]
00:04:540 (3) - x264 y164 (keep the same spacing with ①&② xP
00:04:848 (4) - x324 y352 ^
00:05:770 (3,4) - Ctrl+R ? the spacing is suitable and it is more comfortable to play IMO.
00:07:154 (4,5,6) - how about overlaps 00:07:461 (6) - with 00:06:693 (2) - ? like this

Click me

00:10:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - from the suggestion above,notes are inclined :O straighten them out?
00:18:069 (5,6,7) - make them symmetry with 00:17:454 (1,2,3) - just for better looking? you can ctrl+h then ctrl+r to make it.

Click me

00:34:210 (1) - add new combo

[Hard]
00:35:287 (1) - (nazi)up 2 grid of the end point of the slider.
00:37:439 (3) - (nazi)it is overlap a bit with 00:36:824 (2) - .
01:06:649 (1) - remove the new combo plz. to same as 01:11:568 (3) - and 01:12:798 (3) -

[Normal]
move 00:01:466 (1) - to x132 y76 00:02:080 (2) - to x60 y240 00:02:695 (3) - to x180 y220 (make them have the same spacing.
00:39:899 (4) - i think this is hard to read for beginner.
00:44:818 (4) - ^

[Ryuu's Easy]
00:16:224 (1) - maybe this shape? (remember to fix the spacing

Click me

funny map><
deserves a star~

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2012-05-27T18:26:14+00:00

Fixed some of your suggestions, thanks !

MMzz

Elite Mapper

3,979 posts

Joined June 2009

MMzz 2012-05-27T21:53:37+00:00

Hi Real.

[Insane]
_______________________
00:01:466 (1) - This long repeat is kinda boreing, why not make it 2 sliders instead of 1, and do some fun placement with it. http://puu.sh/x9TD This works better, and is a little more interesting.

00:12:534 (7) - new combo

00:55:426 (3,4) - move these 2 notes farther apart, there is almost 0 movement to hit both of these, so someone farther apart would be more interesting.

01:03:574 (1) - I personally think you should end the spinner on the beat at 01:04:496, and then resume mapping at 1:03:574. That pause is really akward.

01:09:723 (5) - move this note right more so it's even with the start of 4 and the beginning of the next combo. And also the next combo should start here not on 01:09:877 (1) -.

01:12:798 (3,4,5) - instead of 3 notes stacked why don't you stack 5 ontop of 01:13:259 (6) - . This will fit/play better.

01:36:190 (2) - and 01:37:420 (4) - look really ugly and out of place, maybe try a different slider shape?

[Hard]
_______________________
00:01:466 (1) - Same issue with this slider like the Insane diff.

00:50:660 (1) - remove combo

00:51:275 (4) - add combo and remove ccombo from 00:51:429 (1) -

00:52:044 (1) - remove combo. Seriously that comboing is werid as hell.

01:03:574 (1) - Same issue with this slider as Insane.

01:05:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all this new combo spam is uneeded.

01:10:953 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

01:28:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

[31's Taiko]
_______________________

01:38:257 (223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230) - This is the only thing that bothers me in this diff, the music has triplets, yet you have the akward doubles. They really should be triplets.

Otherwise amazing as always 31.

Good mapset <3

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2012-05-28T04:18:37+00:00

i've no change.

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2012-05-28T15:51:28+00:00

GET DAT ~~YTP~~ NND ON.

Overall:
Claps on 2 and 4?
I'm not sure if the last 2 timing points are needed.

Insane:
00:01:466 (1) - You could probably just make this into 2 sliders
01:14:643 (1) - Add finish at beginning of slider
01:18:948 (3) - Add finish on end of slider

Hard:
00:01:466 (1) - Probably just make this into 2 sliders
00:23:603 (1) - ^

CtB:
kawaii

Nurmul:
00:17:454 (3) - Not the most moe of sliders
00:19:914 (3) - ^
00:35:902 (1) - ^
00:38:361 (3) - ^

Easy:
00:59:885 (3) - Probably make this into 2 sliders

kawaii~

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2012-05-28T16:37:58+00:00

i've no change again.

Snowy Dream

2,195 posts

Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2012-05-29T11:59:39+00:00

Mod request from Challenge Queue
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[General]
:< so nice filename, but I think ppl who open the folder will still delete it and give you 1 vote at once

[Moody's Normal]
00:04:233 (4) - NC
00:06:385 (1) - finish?
00:13:149 (3) - spacing
00:26:062 (4) - NC
00:57:425 (4) - ^
01:02:344 (4) - ^
01:12:798 (4) - ^
01:26:327 (3) - spacing
01:31:578 (6) - add a note here
01:30:655 (5,6,7) - you should keep the rhythm the same as the previous since the music
01:38:027 (3) - NC plz

[Hard]
00:30:367 (1) - should start on the right
00:34:057 (5,6,7,8,9) - should be like this

00:43:896 (5,1,2,3) - ^
01:08:494 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
00:51:583 (2) - why not use 1/4?
01:03:113 (2) - delete finish
01:03:420 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:14:994 (1) - separate from 00:14:687 (5,6)
00:27:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why reduce the spacing :<?
01:31:578 (10) - so large spacing ...
01:39:871 (1) - ok I cant find it when the first time I see
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Wonderful Mapset

Good Luck

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2012-05-29T14:07:29+00:00

Fixed some of your suggestions on Hard and Insane, thanks guys !

Snowy Dream: 00:27:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing is reduced because it looks better imo. It's not like people would miss it with the spacing I've had before.

raririn

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

raririn 2012-06-01T09:38:50+00:00

Hi real

mod from wcx's eggpain queue
i'm a new modder >////<
all suggestions,feel free to ignore them,and forgive my poor english plz~

[General]
GREAT FILE NAMES!!!
00:25:448 - i wonder why there is a red line...orz...it seemed you didn't change BPM,sound samples or volume...

1466,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
25448,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
30368,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
49739,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
64805,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
83253,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
88196,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
98027,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0

and i didn't see any difference here.if they are really useless,delete them plz...however if you don't think so,plz tell me the reason~thx
01:08:196 - ^
01:38:027 - ^
oh why you use 80% vol all the time...

[Ryuu's Easy]
00:21:144 (1) - consider removing the last tick?

ok i didn't see anything else~

[Moody's Normal]
*don't you think the SV is a little fast for normal diff?? i think it's difficult for beginners...
*OD-1?
00:22:374 (3) - the begining tick and the ending tick isn't on the same height...set Grid Level4 and you can see it clearly

SPOILER

00:46:663 - add note?
00:47:893 - ^
btw i think clap is more suitable than whistle

[Hard]
00:45:126 (1) - make the begining of the slider the same location as 00:43:896 (5)

[Insane]
*OD-1?
00:27:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why not change to 1/2 sliders...too hard to read D:
00:36:824 (2) - Ctrl+R?
01:02:037 (3) - NC?
01:02:652 (3) - ^
01:03:267 (3) - ^
01:28:196 - from here,this part is too hard...considering use 1.0x DS?

Oh that's all I can find~Great mapset~
Here's my star~!Good luck with rank and the challenge!

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2012-06-02T11:02:23+00:00

Didn't apply any of them, sorry ! Thanks for modding though.

About the timing sections, if they weren't here, the notes would sound too early. (Around 40ms early iirc)

Bobo_old

492 posts

Joined February 2011

Bobo_old 2012-06-03T01:02:48+00:00

Hey there Real, really sorry about the huge delay.
I'll be honest, I haven't been busy or anything. I'm just lazy as f**k

Okay first of all, your map has improved greatly since I last looked at it, glad to see that ;3

[General]

.. Seems fine \:D/

[Insane]

00:01:466 (1) - This looks a little odd in this position, I don't reccomend using these sorts of slider shapes unless you have hit objects to compliment. Perhaps you could just place this somewhere else. Perhaps you could do something like this?

SPOILER

00:16:224 (1,2) - These two look nice if you couple them together like this. Gives a nice overlap whilst having symmetry with the y axis.

SPOILER

00:33:596 (2,4) - You haven't added claps onto these two hitcircles, it breaks consistancy with the hitsound pattern. Is this done on purpose?
00:40:821 (1) - From this point onwards, you've placed clap hitsounds on every white tick, where's in the patterns before you've placed claps on the red ticks. I suggest choosing either red ticks or white ticks to use throughout the whole chorus to keep consistancy. In my opinion, the white ticks sound the best.
00:50:968 (7,8,9,10,11) - You could use this stream to make a blanket around (1). Like this

SPOILER

00:53:120 (3,4) - I suggest moving these a couple grids down so that they aren't so close to (2)'s startpoint. It'll make a nice triangle formation with (2)'s startpoint and (3)'s endpoint.
00:53:504 (6,7,8,9) - Use this to make a blanket like formation around (2) like I showed you earlier.
01:05:419 (1) - You've stopped using the clap pattern altogether from this point, why not add it?

01:09:877 (1) - This slider seems to start too late to me. I suggest making it one 1/2 longer and then making it start at (5). (Therefore replacing (5) to make the slider begin earlier.)
01:23:252 (1,2,3,4) - The (2) in the previous pattern heads towards the (1) slider after these antijumps, how about stacking these 4 notes on that (1) slider so it flows better?
01:27:403 (4,5,6,7) - This square doesn't seem evenlly spaced, I suggest tweaking it a little.

Very nice diff sir ~

[Hard]

00:01:466 (1) - As I pointed out earlier in [Insane], these sorts of sliders look odd without other hitobjects to compliment. How about placing it here to fix that? (Startpoint is on the bottom.)

SPOILER

00:46:356 (1) - I suggest reversing this slider so that the map flows better. The map seems to flow in this one direction, and all of a sudden this (1) comes along and makes you turn the other way.
01:38:180 (2,3,4,5) - How about repositioning these sliders so that they surround (1)?
01:39:871 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could make a triangle pattern like in [Insane], except easier.

I like this diff alot, the patterns flow nicely.

[Normal]

01:39:871 (1,2,3) - I'd put a NC here, and erase the NC at 01:39:256 (1) -
01:39:871 (2) - And then put a NC here.

Very clean diff here, can't really find anything major.

[Easy]

00:59:885 (3) - A lot of newer players tend to let go after the first repeat, how about replacing that last repeat with a hitcircle?

Also a very clean diff, nice use of shape formations.

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Well there you go, again I'm really sorry for the delay.
Good luck getting ranked.

You gave kuds to my previous mod, do not give kuds to this one please.

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2012-06-03T11:32:11+00:00

thank u, bobo.
http://puu.sh/yx8m

MoodyRPG

2,754 posts

Joined August 2010

MoodyRPG 2012-06-09T16:03:56+00:00

CAN CAN

http://puu.sh/zNkx

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-06-12T16:23:59+00:00

Bonjour

[Ryuu's Easy]
00:27:908 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying

[Moody's Normal]
* AR +1?

00:17:454 (3) - Make a slider like this to make better symetric slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340422
01:12:798 (4) - New combo for following stanza?

[Hard]
00:07:307 (4) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar
00:11:920 (4) - ^
00:37:593 (4) - Spacing error

[Insane]
00:39:899 (1,2) - If you do this, some players confusing about which is the head slider and tail slider
01:03:574 (1) - Snap at 01:04:496 for following *pop* sound?

[CTB Collab]
* The 2nd red timing section should snap at 00:25:448 for consistent on each diff

Good luck~

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2012-06-12T16:33:02+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: ELSE I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU IF YOU DELETE THEM.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 30368
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Skype x Can Can
Artist:Ara Potato
Creator:Real
Version:Ryuu's Easy
Source:Nico Nico Douga
Tags:MoodyRPG Mapper 31 Mapper_31 samiljul Serval Deif CTB Catch the Beat Collab Collaboration Mutsuhiko Izumi Tengoku to Jigoku jubeat [Ryuu]

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"So you are looking at my map's folder.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1466,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
25448,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
30368,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
49739,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
64805,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
83253,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
88196,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
98027,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0

[Colours]
Combo1 : 89,255,94
Combo2 : 155,205,255
Combo3 : 233,233,243
Combo4 : 253,228,55
Combo5 : 255,94,94

[HitObjects]
88,288,1466,1,2
120,168,2080,1,0
208,256,2695,1,2
240,136,3310,1,0
312,40,3925,6,0,B|368:80|364:160,1,120,2|0
464,208,5155,2,0,B|424:268|340:260,1,120,2|2
256,200,6385,5,4
152,256,7000,1,0
40,224,7615,2,0,B|64:160|128:144,1,120,2|0
192,48,8845,5,2
240,160,9460,1,0
296,264,10075,2,0,B|321:314|393:326,1,120,2|0
400,208,11305,6,0,B|444:148|408:84,1,120,4|0
304,136,12534,2,0,B|268:196|300:260,1,120,2|0
192,312,13764,6,0,B|132:308|72:264,2,120,2|0|2
256,208,15609,1,0
136,196,16224,6,4,B|160:88|252:40,1,180,4|2
292,68,17454,1,0
288,188,18069,1,2
216,284,18684,6,0,B|108:304|28:244,1,180,4|2
48,196,19914,1,0
152,136,20529,1,2
164,256,21144,6,0,B|214:226|255:255|296:283|349:244|349:244,1,180,4|2
364,196,22374,1,0
412,88,22989,1,2
292,84,23603,6,0,B|192:72|120:136,1,180,4|2
116,192,24833,1,0
188,288,25448,5,2
256,192,26063,1,2
324,288,26678,1,2
396,192,27293,1,2
456,88,27908,6,0,B|396:56|332:92,2,120,2|2|2
396,192,29753,1,2
312,280,30368,6,0,B|264:316|188:312,1,120,4|0
80,288,31598,1,2
72,168,32213,2,0,B|128:128|136:40,1,120,0|2
248,44,33443,5,0
244,164,34057,2,0,B|216:220|228:292,2,120,2|0|6
304,60,35902,6,0,B|364:100|364:176,1,120,0|2
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216,216,38362,1,0
132,300,38977,1,2
100,184,39592,1,0
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420,100,41437,2,0,B|400:168|344:208,1,120,2|0
392,312,42667,2,0,B|324:332|272:284,1,120,2|0
160,304,43897,2,2,B|112:256|112:120|172:64,1,240,2|4
232,172,45741,6,0,B|284:128|276:52,1,120,0|2
388,112,46971,1,0
420,228,47586,1,2
340,316,48201,2,0,B|288:340|221:332,2,120,0|2|0
312,200,50046,6,0,B|384:180|444:252,1,120,4|2
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228,96,52506,5,0
108,92,53121,1,2
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168,280,54351,1,2
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168,280,56810,1,2
80,200,57425,6,0,B|56:136|80:84,1,120,4|0
188,140,58655,2,0,B|199:72|246:39,1,120,4|0
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416,196,61729,1,4
256,192,62344,12,4,64804
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IceBeam

osu! Alumni

1,957 posts

Joined December 2009

IceBeam 2012-06-27T21:40:30+00:00

hi!

I've found inconsistency in kiai,but seems like both kiai sections are unsnapped by 1 ms (late) in all diffs - it's not a big deal,but you could fix that

[Ryuu's Easy]
00:25:448 (1,2,3,4) - вообще,в музыке тарелки отчетливо слышны. я бы добавил финишы,но на твое усмотрение :р
00:49:738 - вот тут проблемка - нужна нота.потому,что киаи заканчивается. вообще в игре это не так уж заметно,как фонтан,например,так что если тебе совсем не захочется делать как на картинке - ну,видимо,опустим эту проблемку

SPOILER

00:54:966 (1) - финиш пропустила?
01:41:716 (1) - коротковат,конечно. лучше бы слайдер - ну,на твое усмотрение

[Moody's Normal]
00:11:305 (1) - add a finish to follow cymbals?
00:25:448 and 00:26:062 (1,2,3) - the same as above

can't find anything wrong with it,great job

[31's Taiko]
01:14:336 (62,63) - shouldn't there be some finishes or one,cause you placed finishes in similar places before (00:39:899 (218))

great taiko

[CTB Collab]
oh guys,I can't pass it,but I hope it's okay.the only thing I could suggest is to work with finishes better,at least in kiai
why finishes accidently dissapear from 01:17:103 (1,2) and till the end of a chorus?

and you could add more to 01:04:804 - 01:09:723 - 01:14:643 - 01:19:562 - and 01:23:252 whole part sounds much better with finishes
well,and the same for the first kiai,you could add finishes to the start of each repeating loop

[Hard]
00:53:120 (3,4) - this is too complicated for hard,I think. you could make it easier and more readable:

SPOILER

00:54:350 (4,5) - ^ same
01:01:729 (1,2,3) - would be more rhythmically logical if you removed this finishes from these,so it would flow into 1/1 finishes and then into 1/2 part

very stylish

[Insane]
01:01:729 (1,2,3) - as in Hard
01:17:103 (3) - why double finishes dissappear from this point?

01:20:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it could flow more naturally..maybe do something like this or work out something new?

SPOILER

01:26:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - err..not sure if they supposed to be squares,but I wish they looked like it

again a really decent map,I like your stlye

so,um
the map is really good,call me back again if you fixed anything,but before that - please make sure your timing is right (better to call some timing expert)
first offset was a little out when I tested the mapset and the rest of red lines make me even more uncertain about it

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2012-06-28T15:16:02+00:00

IceBeam wrote:
01:17:103 (3) - why double finishes dissappear from this point?

Music changes here so I don't get why I should keep the double finishes :<

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Deif 2012-06-30T01:04:10+00:00

Oh man... I accidentally got this thread unsuscribed ;__;

I'll try to apply everything asap, so expect a difficulty reduction of the Collab.

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Realazy 2012-06-30T08:11:44+00:00

That's totally okay o/

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Deif 2012-06-30T20:43:58+00:00

@IceBeam: All the Finish suggestions were added, thank you!

Once again, sorry for the huge delay: http://puu.sh/ERwI

I don't think it's necessary to keep "ctb catch the beat" on tags, as there'll be a future input in the web to look for non-standard diffs.

I had the permission of Serval to modify his own parts to make it easier to play (although it's still a challenging diff), as you can see in the 1st play I did, after applying all the changes:

SPOILER

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IceBeam 2012-07-04T14:20:03+00:00

01:28:166 (1) - seems like you moved this slider by the accident. itis wrong,extend it to the downbeat (in Easy)

otherwise looks fine to me,fix and I'll bubble
and don't kd this post ofc

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Realazy 2012-07-04T14:46:44+00:00

Totally fixed

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IceBeam 2012-07-04T15:08:52+00:00

okay then,totally bubbled!

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Reiji-RJ 2012-07-04T20:43:53+00:00

Totally awesome

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Realazy 2012-07-05T12:16:50+00:00

Totally typing totally everywhere

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Yuzeyun 2012-07-05T13:22:15+00:00

Totally leading to nowhere that discussion starting by totally.
supdidz

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Kurai 2012-07-07T12:16:56+00:00

Totally modding it.

[CTB Collab]

Use the same AR and OD, that is use OD9.
Serval's sections :
1. 00:07:916 (3,4,5) - Buuuh, ce pattern est bizarre, Je verrais plus un grand spacing entre 00:07:916 (3,4) et un plus petit entre 00:08:070 (4,5), pour mieux être en accord avec la musique. (et en option faire un plus gros spacing entre 00:08:378 (6,7), ça passe beaucoup mieux imo).
2. 00:10:684 (7,8,9) - Pourquoi avoir un hyperdash ici ? Ça rend le pattern plus simple que 00:10:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6), essaye plutôt de faire un jump sans dash ?
3. 00:59:879 (1) - Au niveau de ce finish et de tout ceux qui suivent, pourquoi ne fais-tu pas un jump pour l'accentuer, comme ce qu'a fait Deif à 00:26:057 ?
4. 01:15:868 (5) - Peareil qu'au dessus.
Deif's sections :
1. 00:25:289 (4,1) - Make a jump between those two notes to emphasize the finish ?
2. 01:07:258 (1) - Same here and for all the following finishes.
3. 01:35:546 (1) - Jump for the same reason as above.

[Moody's Normal]

00:04:227 (4) - New combo (even if it should technically be on 00:03:919).
00:54:959 (4,1) - Interchange the new combos (NC should be on downbeat).
01:14:637 (7,1) - ^
01:19:557 (6,1) - ^
01:23:246 (4,1) - ^
01:25:706 (2) - New combo ?

[Hard]

01:20:787 (1) - Met un finish au début, ça sonne beucoup mieux comme ça vu que tu as mis des finish sur quasi tout les downbeats.
01:22:016 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:14:988 (1) - Perso je ne stackerais pas ce slider avec les deux cercles car ça met pas assez l'accent sur la musique. Donc ne le stack pas et ça deviendra plus agréable à jouer et plus intuitif imo.
01:14:637 (1) - Finish au début.
01:17:097 (3) - Finish au début et sur le reverse.
01:18:942 (3) - Finish à la fin.
01:20:787 (1,3) - Finish.
01:39:850 (1,2,3) - Ne les met pas aussi près du bord, car de un c'est pas très agréable à jouer et de deux (1) est en partie caché par le combocount en bas à droite.

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MoodyRPG 2012-07-07T14:55:56+00:00

derpp

http://puu.sh/GzYb

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Deif 2012-07-07T15:32:39+00:00

Kurai wrote:
Totally modding it.

[CTB Collab]
Use the same AR and OD, that is use OD9. (Yep)
Serval's sections :
00:07:916 (3,4,5) - Buuuh, ce pattern est bizarre, Je verrais plus un grand spacing entre 00:07:916 (3,4) et un plus petit entre 00:08:070 (4,5), pour mieux être en accord avec la musique. (et en option faire un plus gros spacing entre 00:08:378 (6,7), ça passe beaucoup mieux imo). (J'ai placé ces notes dans des groupes de 3-2-2, ce qui suit mieux la musique)
00:10:684 (7,8,9) - Pourquoi avoir un hyperdash ici ? Ça rend le pattern plus simple que 00:10:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6), essaye plutôt de faire un jump sans dash ? (D'accord!)
00:59:879 (1) - Au niveau de ce finish et de tout ceux qui suivent, pourquoi ne fais-tu pas un jump pour l'accentuer, comme ce qu'a fait Deif à 00:26:057 ? (Bien sûr)
01:15:868 (5) - Peareil qu'au dessus. (J'espère que ce n'est pas trop difficile atm...)
Deif's sections :
00:25:289 (4,1) - Make a jump between those two notes to emphasize the finish ? (Done)
01:07:258 (1) - Same here and for all the following finishes. (It's better to keep it as it is... If I had to add a jump for every single Finish of that section, there'd be a HDash spam)
01:35:546 (1) - Jump for the same reason as above. (Done)