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kyuten

Joined August 2008

kyuten 2012-03-19T02:40:12+00:00

Hi~Request from Beren

[General]
两个难度都没有设置PreviewTime
23M好大....

[Beren X grasscarp]

视频文件名错了..这个难度里看不到视频...应该是sm17094726~1.flv

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"sm17094726.flv"
0,0,"BG.jpg"

-Difficulty-
提高一些diffculty做成hard难度吧...这样的节奏和排列的话...
-Beatmap-
03:32:145 (1,2,3) - 比较倾向于这种...（无视playfield..

SPOILER

03:40:716 (3) - 用和03:41:402 (4) - 一样的1/2拍试试看？
03:53:916 - 在slider的结尾add a note

[Beren X Blove]
-Timing-
02:20:059 - 无用绿线
-Beatmap-
02:23:574 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然edit里面没问题.不过玩的时候由于stack的原因看起来怪怪的..
02:36:259 (1) - 位置不好啊...按照flow的话在左上一些比较好
Others are all fine for me

[Overall]
缺一个太鼓难度（逃....
想吐槽一下音效的30%和50%...音乐声音很大所以总觉得听不出来啊Orz...

Nice map~
Good luck and star~☆

Megurine Luka

2,579 posts

Joined November 2010

Megurine Luka 2012-04-15T10:23:44+00:00

/IRC

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

[General]

少了几个spinner元素，
*spinner-osu.png
*spinner-spin.png
*spinner-clear.png
拖default的进去即可

Stack Leniency不一致，虽然不强求不过最好一致

[B×g]

01:07:802 (3) - 尾巴上的clap改到头上？，或者直接头上加个clap
01:10:202 (2) - overlap了，最好不要O_O
01:34:545 (3) - ^

其实感觉很多地方S2的clap音很合啊为啥不用呢O_O ~~阿啦当然如果是我的话会把它直接用作hitnormal~~

[kiiwa]

01:09:859 (1) - shorten the slider to 01:10:202 and add a circle on 01:10:373
02:22:716 (2) - stack
02:25:973 (3) - this might confuse players that disable the snake slider. Otherwise I suggest NC here.
03:16:031 (3) - kinda killing when first play ... maybe add a NC? I'm not really sure if it is rankable...It might be a little bit dangerous imo..
03:39:688 (1) - stack

Why not finish this!? I really like this diff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY!!!!!!!!!! God damn really!!!!!!!!!! Damn you kiiwa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[H×G]

没啥O_O ~~其实是偷懒了~~

[B×B]

好像也没啥好说的O_O ~~我才没有又偷懒呢~~

嘛嘛下这歌以前我以为你会一直做温柔调子的歌~

Last edited by Megurine Luka 2012-05-03T13:38:09+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Milkshake

532 posts

Joined August 2011

Milkshake 2012-05-02T15:06:59+00:00

all of the things here are just suggestions, so it's up to the mapper.
~~and it's my first mod so fail \o/~~

General
MUST GET RANKED

Beren X grasscarp
great.:3

Kiiwa ~~(moe ;D)~~

01:22:459 (4,5)- try to move them? it's little bit confusing. (something like this: http://puu.sh/snPF or w/e)
01:27:345- (1) - remove it
01:37:802 (X) - add note :V?
01:37:973 (X) - ^
02:45:002 (X) - ^
02:45:173 (X) - ^

still fabulous as hell. lovely style is lovely

Huang X Gu

01:38:659 (X)- add note
03:20:659 (X)- add note?
01:20:316 (X)- ^
01:20:402 (X) - ^
01:23:145 (5) - remove, follows the rhythm better in my ears~
02:31:288 (X) - add note? ;-;
02:40:031 (1, 2, 3)- why don't try to make a slider here, or something different? looks like it repeats itself, so it's kinda boring.:V
03:19:802 (1)- remove nc
03:43:116 (1)- i think it would be better to turn this slider into 2 circles, it sounds better, but it's not that serious.
03:50:145 (X)- add a note to the start of slider (6), for some reason it turns out quite nice.
03:54:008 (9)- maybe make it shorter to the blue line? not sure how much it fits, but..well.

Beren X Blove
F A B U L O U S
~~i wish i had enough kudosu to star it, urgh (´Д｀。)~~

STAR.
\o/

Mystica

798 posts

Joined January 2010

Mystica 2012-05-07T13:37:13+00:00

花炭

phonic

1,068 posts

Joined October 2010

phonic 2012-05-14T13:19:47+00:00

Hanatan <3

Kiiwa

928 posts

Joined January 2010

Kiiwa 2012-05-26T07:58:31+00:00

~

PEPOTTI

195 posts

Joined May 2010

PEPOTTI 2014-07-12T04:25:26+00:00

M4M from #modreqs

[General]
All dif have beautiful notes and timings. very good.
So, just all suggestion

[Beren & grasscarp ]
01:09:859 (1) - move note for not pile slider end?? It's difficult to beat for beginners.
01:19:116 (3) - ^
01:34:202 (2) - ^
02:22:202 (2) - ^
02:25:631 (2) - ^
02:27:688 (5) - ^
02:31:802 (2) - ^
03:37:631 (3) - ^

02:23:573 (1) - remove?
03:39:002 (1) - ^

03:53:916 (3) - remove

[Huang & Gu]
01:02:316 (2) - move note as follows: (for remove hard to see or hard to beat)

01:03:688 (4) - move note for not pile slider end?
01:25:288 (2) - decrease the number of the turn to 1
01:26:316 (3) - add note
02:31:459 (1) - too near? difficult to beat proper timing??
03:18:088 (4,5) - move notes for not pile slider end?
03:20:831 (4,5,6,7) - move notes and add note as follows:

top: 4,7
lower left: 2,3,6
lower right: 5,1(new combo,slider)
03:33:859 (1,2,3) - move notes as follows? I think 03:34:802 (2,3) are little difficult to beat

[Kiiwa]
You should make map more to same as other difs (until 4:32)
01:30:773 (1) - too far
01:31:459 (1) - ^

[Beren & Blove]
00:58:632 (4) - remove?
01:00:946 (9) - reverse selection
03:46:716 (2) - move note as follows:

Good luck!!

Beren

961 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Beren 2014-07-12T11:05:40+00:00

PEPOTTI wrote:
M4M from #modreqs

[General]
All dif have beautiful notes and timings. very good.
So, just all suggestion

[Beren & grasscarp ]
01:09:859 (1) - move note for not pile slider end?? It's difficult to beat for beginners.
01:19:116 (3) - ^
01:34:202 (2) - ^
02:22:202 (2) - ^
02:25:631 (2) - ^
02:27:688 (5) - ^
02:31:802 (2) - ^
03:37:631 (3) - ^

02:23:573 (1) - remove?
03:39:002 (1) - ^

03:53:916 (3) - remove

[Beren & Blove]
00:58:632 (4) - remove?
01:00:946 (9) - reverse selection
03:46:716 (2) - move note as follows:

Good luck!!

fixed~ thank you

Kiiwa

928 posts

Joined January 2010

Kiiwa 2014-07-18T04:26:09+00:00

thanks pep ;D

Megurine Luka

2,579 posts

Joined November 2010

Megurine Luka 2014-07-26T11:57:32+00:00

我居然mod过

Beren姐这是要复出的节奏呀

Beren

961 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Beren 2014-07-26T12:45:59+00:00

Megurine Luka wrote:
:x 我居然mod过

Beren姐这是要复出的节奏呀

把坑填了再考虑~

royathrun

18 posts

Joined June 2009

royathrun 2014-08-03T13:46:37+00:00

ww~

vivicat

618 posts

Joined February 2010

vivicat 2014-08-03T13:48:38+00:00

GOGOGOGO~~

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2014-08-03T15:44:33+00:00

irc modded with mapper, fixed the timing issues and some patterns, also adjusted diff spread to make it more smooth.

Bubbled~~!!

modlog, some were missed due to disconnection

02:14 Scorpiour: irc mod
02:14 Beren: 来
02:14 Scorpiour: 从Insane开始
02:14 Beren: 嗯
02:14 Scorpiour: 打开editor
02:15 Scorpiour: 按下ctrl+shift+A
02:15 Beren: .
02:15 Beren: editor是什么
02:15 Scorpiour: 编辑器
02:15 Beren: 哦哦好的
02:16 Scorpiour: 然后这堆unsnap自己去修吧o_o
02:16 Beren: 修好了
02:17 Beren: 一键修复
02:17 Beren: 那个break黑边我也修复了
02:18 Scorpiour: 01:36:089 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的anti-stream其实不舒服的说
02:18 Scorpiour: 很建议换掉哇
02:19 Beren: ds吗
02:19 Scorpiour: 打起来很别扭
02:19 Beren: 1.2x?
02:19 Scorpiour: 01:35:918 (3,1,2,3,4) - 其实这5个你可以整合成一个slider加一个折返slider
02:20 Beren: 折返不太喜欢，我修改吧
02:20 Beren: 你继续
02:21 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/aD20y/86b14231af.jpg
02:21 Scorpiour: 只是个建议
02:21 Scorpiour: 01:59:575 (2,3,4) - 这里距离稍微拉开一点不要有遮挡
02:22 Beren: fixed
02:22 Scorpiour: 02:10:545 (5) - 然后这个重叠手感也很差，建议拉开到正常距离
02:22 Scorpiour: 后面折返的形状可以调整下
02:23 Scorpiour: 02:18:773 (5) - 这里也是个手感很差的重叠
02:23 Scorpiour: 02:34:545 (3) - 这里也是，建议把这个做成朝上面弯
02:23 Beren: 我觉得这个手感不错
02:23 Beren: 能不改吗
02:24 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/aD29I/f8ffa78c87.jpg
02:24 Scorpiour: 刚才打的时候感觉好难受的地方
02:24 Scorpiour: 这图的1/2跳做的不错，但是这几个重叠严重破坏flow
02:25 Scorpiour: 03:43:459 (1) - 这个也挪开一点不要遮挡
02:26 Beren: ok
02:26 Scorpiour: Insane就这些
02:26 Scorpiour: 我看看Hard
02:27 Scorpiour: 01:04:031 (1,2,3) - Kiiwa的，这里建议叠在一起
02:27 Scorpiour: 而且五角没有放正
02:27 Scorpiour: 01:13:973 (1) - ctrl+g建议
02:30 Scorpiour: 说真的。。kiiwa这个
02:30 Scorpiour: 掉线了？
02:30 Scorpiour: 03:23:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Beren

961 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Beren 2014-08-03T16:00:16+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
irc modded with mapper, fixed the timing issues and some patterns, also adjusted diff spread to make it more smooth.

Bubbled~~!!

modlog, some were missed due to disconnection
02:14 Scorpiour: irc mod
02:14 Beren: 来
02:14 Scorpiour: 从Insane开始
02:14 Beren: 嗯
02:14 Scorpiour: 打开editor
02:15 Scorpiour: 按下ctrl+shift+A
02:15 Beren: .
02:15 Beren: editor是什么
02:15 Scorpiour: 编辑器
02:15 Beren: 哦哦好的
02:16 Scorpiour: 然后这堆unsnap自己去修吧o_o
02:16 Beren: 修好了
02:17 Beren: 一键修复
02:17 Beren: 那个break黑边我也修复了
02:18 Scorpiour: 01:36:089 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的anti-stream其实不舒服的说
02:18 Scorpiour: 很建议换掉哇
02:19 Beren: ds吗
02:19 Scorpiour: 打起来很别扭
02:19 Beren: 1.2x?
02:19 Scorpiour: 01:35:918 (3,1,2,3,4) - 其实这5个你可以整合成一个slider加一个折返slider
02:20 Beren: 折返不太喜欢，我修改吧
02:20 Beren: 你继续
02:21 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/aD20y/86b14231af.jpg
02:21 Scorpiour: 只是个建议
02:21 Scorpiour: 01:59:575 (2,3,4) - 这里距离稍微拉开一点不要有遮挡
02:22 Beren: fixed
02:22 Scorpiour: 02:10:545 (5) - 然后这个重叠手感也很差，建议拉开到正常距离
02:22 Scorpiour: 后面折返的形状可以调整下
02:23 Scorpiour: 02:18:773 (5) - 这里也是个手感很差的重叠
02:23 Scorpiour: 02:34:545 (3) - 这里也是，建议把这个做成朝上面弯
02:23 Beren: 我觉得这个手感不错
02:23 Beren: 能不改吗
02:24 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/aD29I/f8ffa78c87.jpg
02:24 Scorpiour: 刚才打的时候感觉好难受的地方
02:24 Scorpiour: 这图的1/2跳做的不错，但是这几个重叠严重破坏flow
02:25 Scorpiour: 03:43:459 (1) - 这个也挪开一点不要遮挡
02:26 Beren: ok
02:26 Scorpiour: Insane就这些
02:26 Scorpiour: 我看看Hard
02:27 Scorpiour: 01:04:031 (1,2,3) - Kiiwa的，这里建议叠在一起
02:27 Scorpiour: 而且五角没有放正
02:27 Scorpiour: 01:13:973 (1) - ctrl+g建议
02:30 Scorpiour: 说真的。。kiiwa这个
02:30 Scorpiour: 掉线了？
02:30 Scorpiour: 03:23:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

萌萌哒 _(:з」∠)_

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2014-08-03T17:31:43+00:00

Hi there. :3

Randomly seen this and just wanted to say

Ranking Criteria wrote:
A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to an username

which I think applies to your Beren & Blove diff.
I don't know if this rule got changed recently, but maybe you wanna check with some BAT.

Beren

961 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Beren 2014-08-04T16:43:19+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
Hi there. :3

Randomly seen this and just wanted to say
Ranking Criteria wrote:
A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to an username
which I think applies to your Beren & Blove diff.
I don't know if this rule got changed recently, but maybe you wanna check with some BAT.

fixed, thank u!

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-08-04T16:43:31+00:00

irc

18:18 Beren: irre
18:21 Irreversible: ?
18:22 Beren: Q_Q
18:22 Beren: http://puu.sh/aEsR2/2605716514.png
18:22 Beren: i should change my diff name?
18:24 Irreversible: yes, sorry
18:24 Irreversible: i can rebubble if you want to do it now
18:27 Beren: (;*´Д`)ﾉ ok...i'll change it
18:27 Beren: thank you
18:27 Beren: ;w;
18:27 Irreversible: wait
18:27 Beren: nani?
18:27 *Irreversible is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/145583 Hanatan - Kitsune no Yomeiri]
18:27 Irreversible: Easy: Increase HP + OD by 1
18:28 Beren: OK
18:28 Beren: ok*
18:30 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/153631 Hanatan - Kitsune no Yomeiri [Beren & Blove]]
18:31 Irreversible: 02:19:116 (1) - remove nc
18:31 Irreversible: 02:32:831 (1) - increase spacing a bit
18:31 Beren: fixed
18:32 Irreversible: 03:08:488 (1) - remove nc because 03:11:231 (4) - you don't have one here to
18:32 Irreversible: too*
18:32 Irreversible: 03:14:488 (5,6) - downbeat slider, can you fix this? it should not end on white tick
18:33 Irreversible: 03:56:488 (1) - remove nc
18:34 Beren: fixed
18:35 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/153632 Hanatan - Kitsune no Yomeiri [Kiiwa's Insane]]
18:35 Irreversible: 02:37:288 (1,2,1,2) -
18:35 Irreversible: can you fix this for kiiwa
18:35 Irreversible: i don't think she wanted that
18:36 Beren: um..ok o.ob
18:39 Irreversible: update
18:39 Irreversible: rename to beren & blove's Extra or insane, i don't mind
18:41 Beren: all fixed
18:41 Beren: <3

cool mapset, pretty old fashioned

ranked!

Beren

961 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Beren 2014-08-04T16:48:11+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
irc
18:18 Beren: irre
18:21 Irreversible: ?
18:22 Beren: Q_Q
18:22 Beren: http://puu.sh/aEsR2/2605716514.png
18:22 Beren: i should change my diff name?
18:24 Irreversible: yes, sorry
18:24 Irreversible: i can rebubble if you want to do it now
18:27 Beren: (;*´Д`)ﾉ ok...i'll change it
18:27 Beren: thank you
18:27 Beren: ;w;
18:27 Irreversible: wait
18:27 Beren: nani?
18:27 *Irreversible is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/145583 Hanatan - Kitsune no Yomeiri]
18:27 Irreversible: Easy: Increase HP + OD by 1
18:28 Beren: OK
18:28 Beren: ok*
18:30 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/153631 Hanatan - Kitsune no Yomeiri [Beren & Blove]]
18:31 Irreversible: 02:19:116 (1) - remove nc
18:31 Irreversible: 02:32:831 (1) - increase spacing a bit
18:31 Beren: fixed
18:32 Irreversible: 03:08:488 (1) - remove nc because 03:11:231 (4) - you don't have one here to
18:32 Irreversible: too*
18:32 Irreversible: 03:14:488 (5,6) - downbeat slider, can you fix this? it should not end on white tick
18:33 Irreversible: 03:56:488 (1) - remove nc
18:34 Beren: fixed
18:35 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/153632 Hanatan - Kitsune no Yomeiri [Kiiwa's Insane]]
18:35 Irreversible: 02:37:288 (1,2,1,2) -
18:35 Irreversible: can you fix this for kiiwa
18:35 Irreversible: i don't think she wanted that
18:36 Beren: um..ok o.ob
18:39 Irreversible: update
18:39 Irreversible: rename to beren & blove's Extra or insane, i don't mind
18:41 Beren: all fixed
18:41 Beren: <3

cool mapset, pretty old fashioned

ranked!

Irre hen hao! <3

Pappy

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Pappy 2014-08-04T17:06:57+00:00

Gratz <3

But

Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.

Nico Nico Douga doesn't fit but ok <3

I love Hanatan <3

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2014-08-04T17:18:11+00:00

gratz!

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2014-08-04T17:21:40+00:00

just kidding

fix the source please :3

Gyuunyu

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Joined April 2011

Gyuunyu 2014-08-04T17:28:10+00:00

scored just when map got un-qualified ;;
Great map tho~

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2014-08-04T17:33:01+00:00

and we're back!

sorry for inconvenience

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2014-08-04T17:34:55+00:00

Casting some doubt if 01:38:659 (6) - is a safe slider, and if 04:04:031 (7) - is also safe since the path is nearly hidden with the streams. of collab diff.

Really great 2012 map.

alacat

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alacat 2014-08-04T17:46:45+00:00

viviBeren

Gratz

Pappy

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Pappy 2014-08-04T18:07:40+00:00

Gratz on re-rank <3