Hanatan - Kitsune no Yomeiri

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Topic Starter
Beren
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年8月5日 at 1:29:30

Artist: Hanatan
Title: Kitsune no Yomeiri
Tags: cmn_891127 Blove vivicat niconico vocaloid yurika OSTER Project sawashiro miyuki Bakahuang kiiwa
BPM: 175
Filesize: 7895kb
Play Time: 04:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Baka's Hard (3.72 stars, 482 notes)
  2. Beren & Blove's Insane (4.58 stars, 717 notes)
  3. cmn's Normal (2.19 stars, 280 notes)
  4. Easy (1.17 stars, 137 notes)
  5. Kiiwa's Insane (4.2 stars, 538 notes)


Download: Hanatan - Kitsune no Yomeiri
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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花たん - 狐ノ嫁入リ

2012 mapping style
LKs
first
Beren X _____
Sumisola
重叠不完全的nazi,new combo的nazi我就不讲了,迟早很多人会来找,hitsound我弱,不敢说。就只有剩下的建议了:

[BerenXBlove]

00:53:404 (3) - 跟这个stack好一点,00:52:375 (4)

00:54:432 (2) - 这个摆到前一个slider跟后一个circle的中间,不要让slider尾巴叠着,不然后面接5连会很不舒服

01:13:632 (4) - 其实我是觉得这个变成方向向上的slider是不错的,毕竟有vocal,不然别人很容易在这里打错节奏

01:17:403 (1,2,3) - 既然你前面的6个circle都是压歌词,为什么这里不压而去突然变成一个重音3连节奏?这样打起来很不舒服,我建议删掉 23,然后1用一个1/1长度的slider代替,最后是在到01:18:089 (1)之间的位置塞满1/4的circle

01:27:346 (1) - 删掉这个,打起来感觉好很多

01:36:089 (4,5,6,7) - 这个地方真心不适合放anti jump,因为整个音乐没有在这里要放缓的感觉

01:37:803 (1) - 摆远一点

02:06:773 (4,5) - ctrl+r

02:15:516 (5) - ^

02:16:031 (6) - ^

02:16:887 (6,1) - ^

02:23:231 (5,1) - 是anti jump还是spacing问题? 反正这里这么突然缩距离真不舒服,要不就重叠

03:18:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 建议用两个1/4的return slider代替

03:19:545 (2) - 删掉

03:21:602 (2) - 删掉

03:22:288 (5) - 删掉

04:04:031 (1,2) - 重叠之
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其实这图还有很多打着不顺的地方,可能要变变方向,如果你有意改的话QQ群找或者在线找:

01:01:975 (1) - 变成向右边滑

01:07:803 (1,2,3) - 弧度的方向要改变

01:09:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 上下方向要改变

01:09:860 (1) - 上面的连打改了这里也要改

01:10:203 (2) - ^

01:29:403 (1,2) - 调位置跟方向

01:30:775 (1,2,3,4) - 调位置跟方向

01:31:460 (1) - 上面的改了这里也要改

01:31:803 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 上面改的话,这里的形状不用变,可以要改方向

02:05:402 (1,2,3,4) - 调位置跟方向

02:07:802 (2,3) - 调位置跟方向

02:08:145 (4,5) - 调位置跟方向

02:20:316 (5) - 调位置跟方向

02:20:488 (6) - 调位置跟方向
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其他难度是在没时间看了orz
Topic Starter
Beren
@LKs 这是我的后宫(误

@Sumisola 谢谢mod =w=
kyuten
Hi~Request from Beren

[General]
两个难度都没有设置PreviewTime
23M好大....

[Beren X grasscarp]

视频文件名错了..这个难度里看不到视频...应该是sm17094726~1.flv
[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"sm17094726.flv"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
-Difficulty-
提高一些diffculty做成hard难度吧...这样的节奏和排列的话...
-Beatmap-
03:32:145 (1,2,3) - 比较倾向于这种...(无视playfield..
03:40:716 (3) - 用和03:41:402 (4) - 一样的1/2拍试试看?
03:53:916 - 在slider的结尾add a note


[Beren X Blove]
-Timing-
02:20:059 - 无用绿线
-Beatmap-
02:23:574 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然edit里面没问题.不过玩的时候由于stack的原因看起来怪怪的..
02:36:259 (1) - 位置不好啊...按照flow的话在左上一些比较好
Others are all fine for me :)


[Overall]
缺一个太鼓难度(逃....
想吐槽一下音效的30%和50%...音乐声音很大所以总觉得听不出来啊Orz...

Nice map~
Good luck and star~☆
Megurine Luka
/IRC

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font
[General]

少了几个spinner元素,
*spinner-osu.png
*spinner-spin.png
*spinner-clear.png
拖default的进去即可


Stack Leniency不一致,虽然不强求不过最好一致



[B×g]

01:07:802 (3) - 尾巴上的clap改到头上?,或者直接头上加个clap
01:10:202 (2) - overlap了,最好不要O_O
01:34:545 (3) - ^

其实感觉很多地方S2的clap音很合啊为啥不用呢O_O 阿啦当然如果是我的话会把它直接用作hitnormal

[kiiwa]

01:09:859 (1) - shorten the slider to 01:10:202 and add a circle on 01:10:373
02:22:716 (2) - stack
02:25:973 (3) - this might confuse players that disable the snake slider. Otherwise I suggest NC here.
03:16:031 (3) - kinda killing when first play ... maybe add a NC? I'm not really sure if it is rankable...It might be a little bit dangerous imo..
03:39:688 (1) - stack

Why not finish this!? I really like this diff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY!!!!!!!!!! God damn really!!!!!!!!!! Damn you kiiwa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


[H×G]

没啥O_O 其实是偷懒了

[B×B]

好像也没啥好说的O_O 我才没有又偷懒呢

嘛嘛下这歌以前我以为你会一直做温柔调子的歌~
Milkshake
all of the things here are just suggestions, so it's up to the mapper.
and it's my first mod so fail \o/

General
MUST GET RANKED

Beren X grasscarp

great.:3

Kiiwa (moe ;D)
01:22:459 (4,5)- try to move them? it's little bit confusing. (something like this: http://puu.sh/snPF or w/e)
01:27:345- (1) - remove it
01:37:802 (X) - add note :V?
01:37:973 (X) - ^
02:45:002 (X) - ^
02:45:173 (X) - ^

still fabulous as hell. lovely style is lovely

Huang X Gu
01:38:659 (X)- add note
03:20:659 (X)- add note?
01:20:316 (X)- ^
01:20:402 (X) - ^
01:23:145 (5) - remove, follows the rhythm better in my ears~
02:31:288 (X) - add note? ;-;
02:40:031 (1, 2, 3)- why don't try to make a slider here, or something different? looks like it repeats itself, so it's kinda boring.:V
03:19:802 (1)- remove nc
03:43:116 (1)- i think it would be better to turn this slider into 2 circles, it sounds better, but it's not that serious.
03:50:145 (X)- add a note to the start of slider (6), for some reason it turns out quite nice.
03:54:008 (9)- maybe make it shorter to the blue line? not sure how much it fits, but..well.
Beren X Blove
F A B U L O U S
i wish i had enough kudosu to star it, urgh (´Д`。)

STAR.
\o/
Mystica
花炭
phonic
Hanatan <3
Kiiwa
~
PEPOTTI
M4M from #modreqs

[General]
All dif have beautiful notes and timings. very good.
So, just all suggestion ;)



[Beren & grasscarp ]
01:09:859 (1) - move note for not pile slider end?? It's difficult to beat for beginners.
01:19:116 (3) - ^
01:34:202 (2) - ^
02:22:202 (2) - ^
02:25:631 (2) - ^
02:27:688 (5) - ^
02:31:802 (2) - ^
03:37:631 (3) - ^

02:23:573 (1) - remove?
03:39:002 (1) - ^

03:53:916 (3) - remove



[Huang & Gu]
01:02:316 (2) - move note as follows: (for remove hard to see or hard to beat)

01:03:688 (4) - move note for not pile slider end?
01:25:288 (2) - decrease the number of the turn to 1
01:26:316 (3) - add note
02:31:459 (1) - too near? difficult to beat proper timing??
03:18:088 (4,5) - move notes for not pile slider end?
03:20:831 (4,5,6,7) - move notes and add note as follows:

top: 4,7
lower left: 2,3,6
lower right: 5,1(new combo,slider)
03:33:859 (1,2,3) - move notes as follows? I think 03:34:802 (2,3) are little difficult to beat




[Kiiwa]
You should make map more to same as other difs (until 4:32)
01:30:773 (1) - too far
01:31:459 (1) - ^



[Beren & Blove]
00:58:632 (4) - remove?
01:00:946 (9) - reverse selection
03:46:716 (2) - move note as follows:




Good luck!!
Topic Starter
Beren

PEPOTTI wrote:

M4M from #modreqs

[General]
All dif have beautiful notes and timings. very good.
So, just all suggestion ;)

[Beren & grasscarp ]
01:09:859 (1) - move note for not pile slider end?? It's difficult to beat for beginners.
01:19:116 (3) - ^
01:34:202 (2) - ^
02:22:202 (2) - ^
02:25:631 (2) - ^
02:27:688 (5) - ^
02:31:802 (2) - ^
03:37:631 (3) - ^

02:23:573 (1) - remove?
03:39:002 (1) - ^

03:53:916 (3) - remove

[Beren & Blove]
00:58:632 (4) - remove?
01:00:946 (9) - reverse selection
03:46:716 (2) - move note as follows:



Good luck!!
fixed~ thank you :D
Kiiwa
thanks pep ;D
Megurine Luka
:x 我居然mod过

Beren姐这是要复出的节奏呀
Topic Starter
Beren

Megurine Luka wrote:

:x 我居然mod过

Beren姐这是要复出的节奏呀
:D 把坑填了再考虑~
royathrun
ww~
vivicat
GOGOGOGO~~ :arrow::arrow:
Scorpiour
irc modded with mapper, fixed the timing issues and some patterns, also adjusted diff spread to make it more smooth.

Bubbled~~!!


02:14 Scorpiour: irc mod
02:14 Beren: 来
02:14 Scorpiour: 从Insane开始
02:14 Beren: 嗯
02:14 Scorpiour: 打开editor
02:15 Scorpiour: 按下ctrl+shift+A
02:15 Beren: .
02:15 Beren: editor是什么
02:15 Scorpiour: 编辑器
02:15 Beren: 哦哦 好的
02:16 Scorpiour: 然后这堆unsnap自己去修吧o_o
02:16 Beren: 修好了
02:17 Beren: 一键修复
02:17 Beren: 那个break黑边我也修复了
02:18 Scorpiour: 01:36:089 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的anti-stream其实不舒服的说
02:18 Scorpiour: 很建议换掉哇
02:19 Beren: ds吗
02:19 Scorpiour: 打起来很别扭
02:19 Beren: 1.2x?
02:19 Scorpiour: 01:35:918 (3,1,2,3,4) - 其实这5个你可以整合成一个slider加一个折返slider
02:20 Beren: 折返不太喜欢,我修改吧
02:20 Beren: 你继续
02:21 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/aD20y/86b14231af.jpg
02:21 Scorpiour: 只是个建议
02:21 Scorpiour: 01:59:575 (2,3,4) - 这里距离稍微拉开一点不要有遮挡
02:22 Beren: fixed
02:22 Scorpiour: 02:10:545 (5) - 然后这个重叠手感也很差,建议拉开到正常距离
02:22 Scorpiour: 后面折返的形状可以调整下
02:23 Scorpiour: 02:18:773 (5) - 这里也是个手感很差的重叠
02:23 Scorpiour: 02:34:545 (3) - 这里也是,建议把这个做成朝上面弯
02:23 Beren: 我觉得这个手感不错
02:23 Beren: 能不改吗
02:24 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/aD29I/f8ffa78c87.jpg
02:24 Scorpiour: 刚才打的时候感觉好难受的地方
02:24 Scorpiour: 这图的1/2跳做的不错,但是这几个重叠严重破坏flow
02:25 Scorpiour: 03:43:459 (1) - 这个也挪开一点不要遮挡
02:26 Beren: ok
02:26 Scorpiour: Insane就这些
02:26 Scorpiour: 我看看Hard
02:27 Scorpiour: 01:04:031 (1,2,3) - Kiiwa的,这里建议叠在一起
02:27 Scorpiour: 而且五角没有放正
02:27 Scorpiour: 01:13:973 (1) - ctrl+g建议
02:30 Scorpiour: 说真的。。kiiwa这个
02:30 Scorpiour: 掉线了?
02:30 Scorpiour: 03:23:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Topic Starter
Beren

Scorpiour wrote:

irc modded with mapper, fixed the timing issues and some patterns, also adjusted diff spread to make it more smooth.

Bubbled~~!!


02:14 Scorpiour: irc mod
02:14 Beren: 来
02:14 Scorpiour: 从Insane开始
02:14 Beren: 嗯
02:14 Scorpiour: 打开editor
02:15 Scorpiour: 按下ctrl+shift+A
02:15 Beren: .
02:15 Beren: editor是什么
02:15 Scorpiour: 编辑器
02:15 Beren: 哦哦 好的
02:16 Scorpiour: 然后这堆unsnap自己去修吧o_o
02:16 Beren: 修好了
02:17 Beren: 一键修复
02:17 Beren: 那个break黑边我也修复了
02:18 Scorpiour: 01:36:089 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的anti-stream其实不舒服的说
02:18 Scorpiour: 很建议换掉哇
02:19 Beren: ds吗
02:19 Scorpiour: 打起来很别扭
02:19 Beren: 1.2x?
02:19 Scorpiour: 01:35:918 (3,1,2,3,4) - 其实这5个你可以整合成一个slider加一个折返slider
02:20 Beren: 折返不太喜欢,我修改吧
02:20 Beren: 你继续
02:21 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/aD20y/86b14231af.jpg
02:21 Scorpiour: 只是个建议
02:21 Scorpiour: 01:59:575 (2,3,4) - 这里距离稍微拉开一点不要有遮挡
02:22 Beren: fixed
02:22 Scorpiour: 02:10:545 (5) - 然后这个重叠手感也很差,建议拉开到正常距离
02:22 Scorpiour: 后面折返的形状可以调整下
02:23 Scorpiour: 02:18:773 (5) - 这里也是个手感很差的重叠
02:23 Scorpiour: 02:34:545 (3) - 这里也是,建议把这个做成朝上面弯
02:23 Beren: 我觉得这个手感不错
02:23 Beren: 能不改吗
02:24 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/aD29I/f8ffa78c87.jpg
02:24 Scorpiour: 刚才打的时候感觉好难受的地方
02:24 Scorpiour: 这图的1/2跳做的不错,但是这几个重叠严重破坏flow
02:25 Scorpiour: 03:43:459 (1) - 这个也挪开一点不要遮挡
02:26 Beren: ok
02:26 Scorpiour: Insane就这些
02:26 Scorpiour: 我看看Hard
02:27 Scorpiour: 01:04:031 (1,2,3) - Kiiwa的,这里建议叠在一起
02:27 Scorpiour: 而且五角没有放正
02:27 Scorpiour: 01:13:973 (1) - ctrl+g建议
02:30 Scorpiour: 说真的。。kiiwa这个
02:30 Scorpiour: 掉线了?
02:30 Scorpiour: 03:23:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
萌萌哒 _(:з」∠)_
Squichu
Hi there. :3

Randomly seen this and just wanted to say

Ranking Criteria wrote:

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to an username
which I think applies to your Beren & Blove diff.
I don't know if this rule got changed recently, but maybe you wanna check with some BAT.
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