1. Easy (1.91 stars, 91 notes)
2. Hard (4.96 stars, 232 notes)
3. Normal (4.13 stars, 146 notes)

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
I guess it's clear.

Easy:
hmm is there a reason why the beat snap is at 1/8? It's not a big problem actually (: - plus this song is 70 BPM, it's easier to edit with 1/8 snap~
00:13:872 (1) - Ctrl+J so that it can form a blanket around the previous slider. beginners might think that this is a 1/2 slider and not a 1/1 slider because the slider end of (3) is covering the middle of (1) It's fine imo, especially along the previous rhythms :3 - made this slider tidier anw
00:28:443 (2) - i guess that this is your mapping style so i won't bother with this.
00:34:872 (1) - ooh at this rate, you're gonna make beginners nervous because it's fully touching the Hp bar. suggest that you move it down a bit. It's fine imo~
00:43:872 (3) - hmm how about spacing this out? beginners might hit this too early. Not changed, but made sliders around here tidier
00:47:301 (5) - same as 00:13:872^
00:51:586 (1) - move this somewhere else. the hitburst is covering this note and beginners might not know where this slider is. I suggest that you move it here so that it can form a blanket around (4) Ah yes- fixed it my way though~

Normal:
same as easy about the beat snap.
00:29:086 (4) - delete this note. sounds like it's not following anything. Sure~
00:47:943 (6) - ^ I still think this note is needed, well, leaving as is for now though

Hard:
same as easy about the beat snap
other than that i don't see any problems

This is the best I can do. GL

Hinsvar wrote:

Another instrumental song? Okay... Let's just mod now.

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Everything looks fine on the block.

>Easy

1. You used 1/8 beat snap divisor, and yet you didn't place (time) anything on the yellow line... Huh? As stated previously, these 1/8 snap is for editing purpose only
2. 00:25:872 (3) - Isn't this object placed a bit too high?
3. 00:28:443 (2) - ^
4. 00:34:872 (1) - ^ It's fine, they're not unrankable, plus I don't feel like altering this part's flow :3

>Normal

1. This one's fine.

>Hard

1. 00:05:086 (2,3) - Is this kind of jump fine for a Hard diff?
2. 00:06:158 (5,6) - ^
3. 00:08:515 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:09:586 (5,6) - ^ (And I guess I'll stop pointing this out, since there's too much of them, and I think no one will complain about this anyway ) It's only 70 BPM ><
5. 01:25:658 (8) - Remove this? Don't know why, but this feels... a bit useless. Sure
6. 01:25:872 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too fast? I know, Auto (barely) got 3000 there, but... It's fine I suppose (:

Okay, maybe just that. Music was calming and nice.

Good luck on the way

1. Everything looks fine on the block.

1. You used 1/8 beat snap divisor, and yet you didn't place (time) anything on the yellow line... Huh?
2. 00:25:872 (3) - Isn't this object placed a bit too high?
3. 00:28:443 (2) - ^
4. 00:34:872 (1) - ^

1. This one's fine.

1. 00:05:086 (2,3) - Is this kind of jump fine for a Hard diff?
2. 00:06:158 (5,6) - ^
3. 00:08:515 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:09:586 (5,6) - ^ (And I guess I'll stop pointing this out, since there's too much of them, and I think no one will complain about this anyway )
5. 01:25:658 (8) - Remove this? Don't know why, but this feels... a bit useless.
6. 01:25:872 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too fast? I know, Auto (barely) got 3000 there, but...

1. Fine~

1. Circle Size -1
2. 00:29:301 (1) - Turn the volume up gradually? (00:29:729 55% 00:30:158 60% 00:30:586 65% and then Turn the volume to be 50% at 00:31:015)
3. 00:49:872 (4) - Move to x:244 y:124
4. 01:25:015 (1,2) - Like this? More curve~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265899
5. Remove whistle and change to finish is better to me (If you fix this, plz fix Normal & Hard too :>)

1. 00:25:015 (2) - 1 grid right
2. 00:29:301 (1) - Same as Easy
3. 00:33:586 (3,4) - Try to make it better!! Like this :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265921
4. 01:22:443 (1) - The third white point move to x:72 y:88 and the fourth white point move to x:132 y:80
   Then it will looks better with (2) ^^
5. 01:33:801 (2) - Move to x:400 y:200 to be a triangle?

1. Circle Size -1
2. 00:20:301 (6) - Like this? I think It looks better than before :> (Ctrl +H Ctrl +J) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265912
3. 00:29:301 (5) - Same as Easy too @@"
4. 00:47:301 (4) - 1 grid up
5. 01:31:872 (7) - Reverse~
6. 01:33:158 (1,2) - Change to anti-jump?? (DS 0.1x) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265923

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi!!~~ Niva :>

General

1. Fine~

[Easy]

1. Circle Size -1 That's intentional~
2. 00:29:301 (1) - Turn the volume up gradually? (00:29:729 55% 00:30:158 60% 00:30:586 65% and then Turn the volume to be 50% at 00:31:015) Brilliant suggestion, fixed!
3. 00:49:872 (4) - Move to x:244 y:124 Done ^^
4. 01:25:015 (1,2) - Like this? More curve~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265899 Ah, wanna keep symmetry there
5. Remove whistle and change to finish is better to me (If you fix this, plz fix Normal & Hard too :>) Decided to keep my finish here (:

[Normal]

1. 00:25:015 (2) - 1 grid right Ah yes, fixed
2. 00:29:301 (1) - Same as Easy Done~
3. 00:33:586 (3,4) - Try to make it better!! Like this :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265921Fixed, I hope it's tidier now~
4. 01:22:443 (1) - The third white point move to x:72 y:88 and the fourth white point move to x:132 y:80
   Then it will looks better with (2) ^^ Redid this slider
5. 01:33:801 (2) - Move to x:400 y:200 to be a triangle? Ah, wanna keep it like this~

[Hard]

1. Circle Size -1 It's my intention to use normal circle size here >_<
2. 00:20:301 (6) - Like this? I think It looks better than before :> (Ctrl +H Ctrl +J) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265912 I want to stack (6,2) ><
3. 00:29:301 (5) - Same as Easy too @@" Done~
4. 00:47:301 (4) - 1 grid up Nice catch :3 - done xD
5. 01:31:872 (7) - Reverse~ Eh... Not changed for this one
6. 01:33:158 (1,2) - Change to anti-jump?? (DS 0.1x) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265923 Want to keep it as is...

Awesome map!!~~
Sorry for my Bad mod >_<
But that is all from me~
Good luck!! Double star!!~~

1. wait... why when I downloaded this, the folder and .osz file is like this? <--I mean "%231"
2. Add "water" in the Tags? I think 'Aqua' is mean water

1. Difficulty Setting: Why not use large Circle Size? that more easier to read by newbie players since the spacing is a bit huge in this difficulty o:
2. 00:24:158 (1) - why whistle in slider's beginning? add finish more better instead the whistle, since you add in 00:17:301 (1)
3. 00:43:872 (3) - don't stack this with (2)'s tail, more easier to read if use normal spacing in here imo

1. 00:24:158 (1) - same think as in Easy difficulty

1. 01:11:301 (9) - add new combo?
2. 01:28:443 (4) - change the clap with whistle? more better imo
3. 01:30:158 (3) - same as above, but in slider's beginning

1. fine

1. 00:54:158 (6) - end 1/4 earlier, and add slider at 00:54:801?
2. 01:33:801 (2) - use slider here?

1. 00:10:443 (1,2) - use slider plz..
2. 01:00:801 (6,7,8) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot275-0.jpg this is better I think
3. 01:28:658 (5) - maybe stack with the prevoius note here? jumping doesn't fit here, I think
4. 01:33:801 (2) - change this to 35% volume
5. 01:34:015 (3) - add a note here with 25% volume
6. 01:34:229 (4) - add a note here with 15% volume um

Loli Cjj wrote:

Aku tak layak ngemod beatmap seepik ini ;w; tapi mari kita lakukan demi persahabatan ;w;

=General=
Nope.

=Easy=
1. 00:43:872 (3) - Karena not sebelumnya udah diberi delay, imo stack kurang kusetujui. Oh, ini, gw justru ngerasa stack disini malah bagus :3 intinya sih... gw nggak ada ide lagi mau ditaruh di mana orz

=Normal=
Nope.

=Hard=
Nope.

=SB=
Nope.

Terlalu banyak nope sehingga sepertinya tak layak untuk kudosu.
Semuanya bagus ;3; Thanks~ Gpp kok, yang penting kan udah dicek (:

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

~mod4mod request~

[General]
add silence soft-sliderslide? It's so loud
It's fine (:

[Easy]
00:43:872 (3) - move out of stack? Uh... Can't get a good pattern to use if unstacked >_<
01:03:158 (2) - maybe, off screen? It's not (: - Moved upward a bit, though
01:33:801 (2) - stack like other diff? I don't think a stack with 3/2 delay is good for beginners...


[Normal]
00:41:301 (1) - maybe, off-screen? Not off-screen on play mode as well ^^
nice


[Hard]
00:44:301 (4) - add whistle tail? sound better Yes :3
00:51:372 (5) - Oh, nc here and remove nc 00:51:586 (1) - Uh, I prefer a NC on downbeat >_<
01:32:301 (8) - copy from (7) and Ctrl + H ? Oh, my bad, fixed
01:33:158 (1) - error spacing? Anti-jump ^^


great map Star xD
GL~ :3