1. 2 osb, remove them all or the wrong one.
2. btw the name of mp3 is not changed lol
3. combo color is a bit confusing for me, maybe only for me
4. the length you mapped is less than 80%, and I suggest full map it
5. +6ms to all the sections after the 2nd red section.
6. preview time to 62550? it's not on a proper line for now.
7. use a blank sliderslide for the piano intro?

1. 00:12:538 ~ 00:21:131 - claps only for this part makes these note uncomfortable for play. I cannot really feel that I have got the beat. I'd say more hitsounds maybe slidertick-whistle.
2. 01:25:362 (1) - is a bit covered by former hitburst. especially after a fast spinner, that's not easy to read.

1. 00:27:069 (5) - sounds really bad here, move this to 00:26:913
2. 00:40:663 (1) - too much for a normal diff.
3. 01:38:175 (1) - ^

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Easy:
01:11:612 (7) - add a repetition? It would follow the vocals pretty well :>
sounds and looks weird so i tried making an alternative. this is not my part by the way

01:31:612 (10) - ^ similiar vocal pattern
same reply as above since i need to change more to complete the vocal

- Normal:
00:27:069 (5) - kinda nazi stuff, but i didn't really appreciate the spacing here: the slider is quite long and it doesn't help to guess it doesn't start at 00:27:225 like the spacing suggests at first glance. Move it up a bit?
next time when suggesting, try to help what to do with the next circle. i changed the pattern of the next few combos because i changed that one slider you mentioned. good job.

- Hard:
I think HP Drain 8 may put a bit too much of painful stress to less skilled players.
agree with the drain rate because i cant pass hard LOL thats how bad i play now so i did what yousaid

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]
combo color is a bit confusing for me, maybe only for me
yep its only you since other people can see it properly and there is also bg dim feature now. i may change it if you suggest a color combination better than mine

the length you mapped is less than 80%, and I suggest full map it
if you noticed i almost always followed the drums, if you understand that, you will understand that there is no need to map the end. since i will most likely use a pattern that follows drums as well, which makes the map too repetitive. please think what goes with the map first before suggesting something. thank you very much. if you feel like adding the end part, feel free to do so and ill gladly add it for you if i like what you did. also, i can cut the end but im strongly against it because i strongly dislike maps with songs ending with a fadeout

preview time to 62550? it's not on a proper line for now.
if you listen to the songselect screen, you should clearly hear everything instead ( or just a very short fade int ) having a fade in which is the purpose why i did it like that


[Hard]
00:12:538 ~ 00:21:131 - claps only for this part makes these note uncomfortable for play. I cannot really feel that I have got the beat. I'd say more hitsounds maybe slidertick-whistle.
huh? what are you talking about? youre suggesting the wrong thing. im not even making my own sound in that part. sorry!

[Normal]
00:27:069 (5) - sounds really bad here, move this to 00:26:913
your suggestion sounds worse. you clearly saw that i did the same thing at the other two difficulties and i am following the hi-hat, not the vocals. try to check everything first before making a suggestion. thank you very much.

00:40:663 (1) - too much for a normal diff.
what a crazy suggestion, i wont change it unless you can clarify. its clear that anyone can make at least a 300 on that due to very low OD of the difficulty
01:38:175 (1) - ^
^

1. did you forgot to put 164 in the tags at [Hard] diff? Do it now because it,s unrankable :V
2. disable countdown? sounds unfitting with Miku's voice
3. ~30% of the song isn't mapped. cut mp3 maybe? or finish mapping here 02:03:806 -it's reasonable, too.
4. Try following colour instead of gray one. Gray colour can confuse some players in multi - if you fail map in multi - you get almost the same colour
   

   Combo2 : 175,240,248

1. AR4 is a bit too high. Since Normal has AR 5 this AR change is unbalanced. Try AR 3 instead
2. 01:25:681 (1) - overlapped with spinner hitburst and may confuse some beginners. It'll be great if you move it somewhere else to avoid overlap :V

1. Same OD as [Easy]? o3o Feels awkward try OD: 3 or 4?

1. 01:41:149 (1) - and some similar sliders - since (1) is much faster than 01:42:556 (5) - I'd suggest you to put new combo here. It will help us to read SV changes.

mintong89 wrote:

it not accept taiko diff? ;w; i very like this song.

You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped. If you only plan to map a portion of your song, then including the full mp3 is a waste of file space. Many mp3 editing tools like this exist which make fading and cutting a song simple. However, if you have a legitimate reason for keeping your full mp3 (e.g. a storyboard after the map ends), then that is fine.

93,281,72868,2,0,B|189:313|269:265,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

423,280,75368,2,0,B|327:312|248:252,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

LKs wrote:

hi hello

yuca sent me pm reminding me this is ungraved i ungraved it myself

[general]

sadly the outra part seems way long already cropped the mp3 since majority of the modders mentioned it, thanks

Source: Vocaloid? okay

colour 3 and 4 are hard to distinguish. hmm could you vary them? changed color 4

[hard]

most of things i wanna say are just trivia so i do the fix job for you(if you don't mind)

00:11:281 (4,5,6,7) - slight changes
00:40:656 (4) - stack
00:15:343 (2) - refined slider shape
00:18:624 (4,5) - enlarged spacing between the two to make it more easily to read
00:24:406 (7) - 1 grid left
00:26:906 (7,8) - made it looks like a wave(high-low-high-low) and adjusted spacing
00:46:124 (4) - 1 grid right
00:50:343 (2) - slight slider adjustment
00:55:031 (2) - ^
01:01:906 (7) - ^
01:34:743 (1,3) - ^
01:14:587 (6) - stack
01:25:368 (1,2,3,4) - made it a square

http://puu.sh/1xlT7 no, useless and stupid mod. everyone please stop modding like this!

[normal]

i found slient sliderslide in the folder use S1 plz i forgot about that, thanks
00:27:062 (5) - stuff like this sounds bad no it doesnt since im following the background, if it sounds bad, go complain to the person arranged the song
00:33:468 (3,4,5,6) - no better ways to place them? with such an low AR it(stack) looks/plays weird no idea, looks fine to me. gimme a suggestion
01:05:993 (1,2,3) - sry i can't say this is nice. long slider strangly stretches and spacing. doesnt matter, not counted as a mod, but kind of an insult. so im keeping it.
01:35:368 (2) - maybe move a big right moved. dont blame me for the spacing of 2 and 3 becaue it will ruin the pattern, so its your fault if the spacing is too long.

[Easy]

01:12:868 (2) - no, yuca said

93,281,72868,2,0,B|189:313|269:265,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:15:368 (2) - no, yuca said

423,280,75368,2,0,B|327:312|248:252,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:25:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too long for one colour O_o it goes accross 6 music bars changed

1. 01:11:818 (7) - Add a finish at slider end sounds nice imo, or maybe you can use both finish to head and end like you did in Normal diff
2. 01:32:287 (3) - Slider end, you are missing a clap here?

1. 00:40:700 (1) - I won't suggest use such a short spinner in normal diff. But there's nothing wrong with it, it's just, a little hard as a "Normal" diff.
2. 01:22:600 (1,4) - No finish for them?
3. 01:38:225 (1) - I don't think a spinner really fit here, if you want to use spinner, 01:36:506 - 01:37:756 is the place more proper. Or maybe you want to fit background sound, just put three 1/1 beats note instead of this spinner

1. 00:21:168 (4) - No finish?
2. 01:36:350 (4) - Slider end, add finish?