1. Sweetboxer (5 stars, 870 notes)

Frobe wrote:

lol

this map is very good!

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

fap fap fap
I gonna star it, if I have some KD ready for it.
Only because of hawt BG <3

Btw: 300th Post. yay \ /

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. I found this through #modreqs

General:
Since you have the video, disable the letterbox during breaks, and also disable the countdown. IMO the countdown doesn't fit with the song at all. Done

Sweetboxer:
00:03:264 (4) - maybe move this at the middle of (3) so that it'd form a blanket around the beginning of the slider sort of sorry~I like my original pattern
00:12:764 (3,4,5) - set the spacing to 0.8 to make it a bit easier? Because this song it's increasing higher~so I used far spacing then inconsistent part
00:37:264 (5) - adjust this slider and move it here. i don't like how it's overlapping (4), and not only it forms a blanket around the arc of (4), but also at the end of (4). oops~same as no...
00:38:764 (10) - make this a NC because of new lyrics and the singer is raising for voice in a high pitch. ok
00:43:514 (4) - how about moving this beside (3) to avoid the overlapping? ok
01:04:389 (4,6) - hmm move (6) so that (4,5,6) looks like a triangle, and if you want, move (7) so that it'd look like a diamond. sorry~I'm ignore this
02:19:236 (3) - same as 00:43:514 but move it so that it'd stack on (4). sorry~ no
02:49:980 (5) - make this a NC because the instrumental changes. ^
03:44:230 - is there a reason why a break is here? because I think It's need use break to detention it
04:46:980 (3) - make this a 1/2 repeat slider. it flows nicely to the vocals. oh~follow song it's really boring and 3/4 It's OK for me
04:47:730 - if you follow the suggestion above, then add 2 circles from the red tick to the blue tick to follow vocals. ^
04:48:730 - same as above but just add a circle. ^
Thanks your mod~ I was fix some issue~

This is the best I can do. GL

cmn_891127 wrote:

最近超级懒……所以mod也很懒

00:52:014 (1,2,3,4) - 如果只是想做一个风扇的话，这三个弧度太大了，不好看，如果要想把slider的开头/结尾包进去，感觉弧度又小了，34太近了 這不是風扇~只有兩片葉子 另外一片不是
01:13:139 (1,2,3,4) / 01:17:139 (5,6,7,8) - 巨丑 額..還好吧
01:52:861 (4) - 这个突然凸出来是什么情况 本來設計就是凸出來的 算了~我改掉吧
03:59:105 (3) - 不是应该在白线开始的么，或者是在白线加一个note（这样感觉也很诡异）no~跟歌曲~
04:49:980 (1) - 我感觉还是提前1/1比较好 OK

1. Nothing wrong here

• - 00:13:264 (6) - Bad overlap here,i don't like so try something like this
  - 00:38:014 (8) - Perhaps you should add a new combo here to follow the rythm of the song in my opinion
  - 02:49:980 (5) - New combo to follow your pattern
  - 03:31:980 (1) - Resnap this note onto the center please
  - 03:48:230 (x) - You should probably to add a break here

MoodyRPG wrote:

IN THE AIR........Sorry

General

1. Nothing wrong here

Sweetboxer

• - 00:13:264 (6) - Bad overlap here,i don't like so try something like this Umm... But I don't like to change it~I think It's ok~so no change it
  - 00:38:014 (8) - Perhaps you should add a new combo here to follow the rythm of the song in my opinion oops~because combo color issue~so I can't change it~sorry
  - 02:49:980 (5) - New combo to follow your pattern ^
  - 03:31:980 (1) - Resnap this note onto the center please ok
  - 03:48:230 (x) - You should probably to add a break here Done

Sweet map so good luck

LKs wrote:

General

fine

Sweetboxer

00:02:014 (1) - 00:04:014 (1) - 这种都能加whistle吧 改
00:09:514 (6) - 同样的这种地方 换成clap或者加上clap都不错 改
00:11:514 (4) - ^ 改
00:14:764 (3) - 结尾静音比较好
00:17:139 (3) - 00:21:139 (4) - 00:25:139 (4) - 开头结尾clap？ 改
00:19:139 (5) - 开头clap 改
00:54:014 (1,2,3,4) - 这让人很难不当成1/4 改
01:13:139 (1,3) - 01:17:139 (5,7) - clap 改
01:24:986 (1) - 前一个减速slider是灰色的 改
03:15:980 (1) - 神SB 但把雪花做成star2加kiai也行吧 另外我觉得确实可以加star2
03:27:480 (11,3) - 间距 改
04:23:980 (1) - shape 改

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from in-game pm.

Just suggestions: (根本就全是nazi)

[Sweetboxer]

01:16:514 (2,3,4) - 不等距 改
01:28:736 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
02:16:861 (3,4,5) - 把这三个往左移一格？ ^
02:39:980 (1) - 把这个做成和02:40:480 (2)对称的？no 我不想改成那樣
03:11:730 (1,2) - 我觉得往上移3格比较好 no~故意的
04:39:355 (4) - 位置比较。。精确的位置是346,228 恩...我自己改了
04:41:480 (5) - 有点不对称，相对于04:41:230 (4) >_>...暫時不改
04:43:605 (6,7,8) - 往上一格 恩

That's all I can find. GL~

Sun Rainbow wrote:

请别怪我，因为我不会MOD APP（根本就是懒嘛）

Sweetboxer
02:26:986 (1) - 这边的结尾可以减低到5%声音比较好
03:20:730 (5) - 不延长到这里03:20:980吗
04:19:980 - 这边再来个雪花用KARI TIME更好吧
04:49:980 (1) - 延长到04:51:980

看到这渣MOD就想哭啊 啊啊啊 啊啊
沒改...因為那些地方都是我所設計過的節奏

[Sweetboxer]

1. 無用的綠線:
   00:31:014
   
   
2. 00:23:139 (x) - 加個東西 ?! (對後面節奏)
3. 00:24:514 (x) - ^
4. 00:38:014 (8) - NC?
5. 00:54:139 (x) - 在測試東西時不小心加了一個circle 發現可以?! lol
6. 00:54:764 (4) - 先往右一點然後往上兩格.
7. 01:17:514 (8) - NC?
8. 01:29:611 (9) - ^
9. 01:31:986 (7) - ^
10. 01:52:486 (x) - 加個東西吧?!
11. 02:24:986 (1) - NC?
12. 02:26:986 (1) - RNC?
13. 02:41:230 (4) - 總覺得這有點看不到
14. 02:51:480 (8) - NC
15. 03:14:980 (9) - ^
16. 03:30:980 (5) - ^
17. 03:58:980 (x) - 加個東西?!
18. 04:10:605 (x,x)- ^
19. 04:13:980 (7) - NC

l1106188 wrote:

Request from 哪裡 XD?
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[Sweetboxer]

1. 無用的綠線:
   00:31:014
   fixed
   
2. 00:23:139 (x) - 加個東西 ?! (對後面節奏)
3. 00:24:514 (x) - ^
4. 00:38:014 (8) - NC?
5. 00:54:139 (x) - 在測試東西時不小心加了一個circle 發現可以?! lol
6. 00:54:764 (4) - 先往右一點然後往上兩格. fixed
7. 01:17:514 (8) - NC?
8. 01:29:611 (9) - ^
9. 01:31:986 (7) - ^
10. 01:52:486 (x) - 加個東西吧?!
11. 02:24:986 (1) - NC?
12. 02:26:986 (1) - RNC?
13. 02:41:230 (4) - 總覺得這有點看不到
14. 02:51:480 (8) - NC
15. 03:14:980 (9) - ^
16. 03:30:980 (5) - ^
17. 03:58:980 (x) - 加個東西?!
18. 04:10:605 (x,x)- ^
19. 04:13:980 (7) - NC

歌曲好聽,節奏明顯,圖好打!!
神mapper 阿三醬 lol!!
來偷射Star

• 00:04:889 (3) - a curvy one overlapping with 2 would fit better here imo (1.0x would do fine here q.q)
  
  example

  
  00:06:014 (1,2) - these curves feel awkward, i suggest balancing them more
  00:11:514 (4,5,6,7) - too loud imo, maybe start with 50% and increase to 60?
  00:14:014 (1,2) - tbh, it's hard to see that as 1/4's, but somehow it looks nice though... just mentioning
  00:19:139 (5) - the edgy end comes a bit sudden, either move the red tick a bit earlier into the slider or reshape the slider a bit
  00:37:764 (6,7,8) - the straight line of circles feels meh here; i suggest moving 7 to X: 104, Y: 76
  00:43:514 (4,5) - kinda wide spacing and kinda unexpected to be 1/4, change this please
  00:47:014 (1,2) - spacing makes it hard to tell these are 1/2
  00:53:389 (4) - make the end (after red tick) go a bit down so it points a little to next 1
  01:13:139 (1,2,3) - that's a kinda harsh change of direction and arc you got there, i suggest building the combo more bowy
  02:19:736 (4,5,1) - similar to 00:37:764, i suggest moving 5 to X: 380, Y: 276

• 03:09:855 (9) - move to X: 300, Y: 240
  03:46:730 (1) - the curve feels too harsh, use 1 or 2 aditional sliderpoints to make it more fluent
  04:23:980 (1) - 1 grid right, 2-3 down

Jenny wrote:

Well, things that poked my eye; this map is naisu ;w;

• 00:04:889 (3) - a curvy one overlapping with 2 would fit better here imo (1.0x would do fine here q.q)
  
  example

  
  00:06:014 (1,2) - these curves feel awkward, i suggest balancing them more
  00:11:514 (4,5,6,7) - too loud imo, maybe start with 50% and increase to 60?
  00:14:014 (1,2) - tbh, it's hard to see that as 1/4's, but somehow it looks nice though... just mentioning
  00:19:139 (5) - the edgy end comes a bit sudden, either move the red tick a bit earlier into the slider or reshape the slider a bit
  00:37:764 (6,7,8) - the straight line of circles feels meh here; i suggest moving 7 to X: 104, Y: 76
  00:43:514 (4,5) - kinda wide spacing and kinda unexpected to be 1/4, change this please
  00:47:014 (1,2) - spacing makes it hard to tell these are 1/2
  00:53:389 (4) - make the end (after red tick) go a bit down so it points a little to next 1
  01:13:139 (1,2,3) - that's a kinda harsh change of direction and arc you got there, i suggest building the combo more bowy
  02:19:736 (4,5,1) - similar to 00:37:764, i suggest moving 5 to X: 380, Y: 276

- Volume in instrumental part (grey BG-one) is too high imo -
- Oh gawd Lily, why are you going all "lalalalalalalalalalalala" q.q -

• 03:09:855 (9) - move to X: 300, Y: 240
  03:46:730 (1) - the curve feels too harsh, use 1 or 2 aditional sliderpoints to make it more fluent
  04:23:980 (1) - 1 grid right, 2-3 down

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from spboxer3 in-game PM

[General]
Fine =w=/~

[Storyboard]
只是想知道那个雪花从两边喷出的效果要怎样做啊...手动的话要做好久的感觉QAQ有快捷方法toka....? 這可能要去問菲姐了 那是她做的

[Sweetboxer]
-Timing-
00:08:889 - 无用绿线 Done
-Beatmap-
00:14:014 (1,2,3) - 总觉得这三个之间的间距和其他比起来很猎奇啊...缩小一点？ 這是故意的 為了分出這段比前一小段更激情 所以...
00:47:014 (1,2) - 和1/4一样的间距..2PC都没读出 這個我覺得還好~ 畢竟這是我故意排成這樣的
01:03:639 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 只作为参考... 我改了令一種看起來比較好些的排法

SPOILER

01:33:986 (1) - 之前两个变的地方都还好，这里的话还是不要用吧...flow也不好.. 我覺得還OK阿...
04:06:230 (2) - 去掉一个repeat 這是1/3拍...

一直在实验室累死了Orz迟到了的渣mod/~☆

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

( ˘ ³˘)♥Aoi's Love Mod

default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General

1. SP3都不找我做视频，哭了T_T 还有你能解释一下那乱七八糟的黑边是什么情况么！！

SB/Skin

1. 有好几个雪花都跑到屏幕外边去了>.>

Bakaboxer

1. 00:00:514 (2) - 第二个锚点放在(244,12) 我拉到那邊去看過 但是感覺slider變畸形了 所以沒有改
2. 00:12:764 (3,4,5) - 你前面都是小间距的，一下子切成这么大的间距不太合适吧 配合後面背景唱歌的激昂程度作出間距變化的說
3. 00:13:264 (6) - 拉成这样既能和下一个(2)相对又能突出reverse arrow
4. 00:20:014 (1) - finish ok
5. 00:39:514 (12) - NC? 恩...這地方確實該考慮下...如果還有人說我再來考慮要不要改...因為目前來說這地方加NC是前面剛好 後面太短的感覺...
6. 01:02:014 (1) - 制造个人工SL? 我覺得其實沒必要的 本意就是為了要完全覆蓋才擺這樣的.
7. 01:51:486 (6) - 虽然没超出屏幕边界但也超出网格范围了。。。 開始的中心沒有超出格子所以沒關係
8. 02:24:986 (1) - 不需要NC吧 因為減速. 所以我認為視需要的
9. 02:43:980 (1) - 从视频来看这个combocolor应该还是黑白的 額...但是因為這段黑白實在太常了些 所以我就...
10. 03:39:980 (1) - 这个color应该是蓝色系的啦 這邊我看是黑白的阿lol 你再看一次...
11. 感觉后面对颜色的执着完全没了呢 嘛...有嗎?
    >>Overall:
    1. 看出来了，滑条都没好好拉>.>
    2. 既然用了颜色的梗那就好好根据视频做啊！
    3. 你真的确定黑白部分的Combo color可以rank

我不爱你了，所以只给你一颗星 不!!! 為什麼不愛我了!! Q口Q!?

nold_1702 wrote:

Here's my approve.

mod:

SPOILER

00:43 <NOLD_1702> : 00:09:764 (8) - 我認為變為2個notes更好打
00:43 <spboxer3> : 排起來不好看. 所以我並沒有用note
00:44 <NOLD_1702> : 00:11:514 (4,5,6,7,1) - 直線接著一個cruve slider不好,做為這樣子?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284475
00:45 <spboxer3> : 我喜歡直線的stream lol 所以我通常不排彎曲的stream
00:45 <NOLD_1702> : 00:21:014 (3,4) - (跟上一節的1/4 spacing 不一
00:45 <NOLD_1702> : 00:26:514 (3) - add note
00:45 <NOLD_1702> : 00:28:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這是直線的stream
00:46 <NOLD_1702> : 00:30:014 (1,2) - 因為之前這是1/4的spacing 所以排遠點?
00:47 <NOLD_1702> : 00:43:514 (4,5) - 太大的誤導spacing 這樣子放?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284476
00:47 <NOLD_1702> : um...在嗎= =
00:47 <spboxer3> : 在
00:48 <spboxer3> : 00:28:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - 你沒有說原因.
00:48 <NOLD_1702> : 00:58:764 (3) - 加一個repeat?
00:48 <NOLD_1702> : 這個可以無視
00:48 <spboxer3> : no
00:48 <NOLD_1702> : 我只是玩著的xp
00:48 <spboxer3> : 我要2,4拍
00:49 <NOLD_1702> : 忘了說,我mod的只會是style mod, 如果有大問題我會指明是大問題
00:49 <spboxer3> : 我懂.
00:49 <NOLD_1702> : 哇..
00:49 <NOLD_1702> : kiai time epic
00:50 <NOLD_1702> : 之前還有一點mod你沒說接受/不接受
00:50 <spboxer3> : 哪個.
00:50 <NOLD_1702> : 00:30:014 00:43:514
00:50 <NOLD_1702> : 往上看
00:50 <spboxer3> : 都接
00:50 <NOLD_1702> : 接受?
00:51 <spboxer3> : 反正那地方都爛梗 所以改了沒差
00:52 <NOLD_1702> : 01:51:986 (1) -
00:52 <NOLD_1702> : 這樣的rhythm?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284481
00:53 <spboxer3> : 沒有改
00:53 <NOLD_1702> : 說reason
00:53 <spboxer3> : 因為那地方本來節奏我就是設計這樣的.
00:54 <NOLD_1702> : 02:41:230 (4) - 在test 看看,比較像一個note而不是一個slider
00:54 <spboxer3> : 圖形.
00:54 <NOLD_1702> : 我知道,但是真的..看不清
00:55 <spboxer3> : >_>
00:55 <NOLD_1702> : 02:52:730 (3,4,5) - 這樣放?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284483
00:55 <NOLD_1702> : 還有煙花啊..?
00:56 <spboxer3> : no~
00:56 <NOLD_1702> : 03:21:480 (9,10) - 放遠點
00:57 <spboxer3> : 我的排法會讓短slider的start當作spacing的基準點
00:57 <spboxer3> : 這OK
00:57 <NOLD_1702> : 03:31:730 (8,1) - 如果依你的說法,這可糟糕了
00:57 <spboxer3> : ?
00:57 <spboxer3> : 大跳有問題?
00:57 <NOLD_1702> : 沒問
00:58 <NOLD_1702> : 沒問題
00:58 <NOLD_1702> : 只是如果依你的說法,這是太大
00:58 <NOLD_1702> : 如果不依你的說法,這是okay的
00:58 <NOLD_1702> : ._. 明白我說什麼嗎= =
00:58 <spboxer3> : 不懂._.
00:58 <NOLD_1702> : 沒什麼了
00:59 <spboxer3> : 你少看到了"這OK"?
01:00 <NOLD_1702> : 04:31:230 (3,4,5) - 這stream跟 04:31:730 (6,7,1) - 這stream 間距理應一致
01:00 <NOLD_1702> : 04:49:980 (1) - end at04:51:980 因為音樂是這裡停的
01:01 <NOLD_1702> : done的話去puush一次
01:01 <spboxer3> : 你注意聽後面會有沙沙聲
01:01 <NOLD_1702> : 恩
01:02 <spboxer3> : 我停的位置是那沙沙聲開始減小聲的地方
01:02 <NOLD_1702> : 04:40:480 (2) - 放在x488 y108?
01:02 <spboxer3> : 給原因
01:02 <NOLD_1702> : 好看點
01:03 <spboxer3> : 這不構成原因lol
01:03 <spboxer3> : 個人看法有所不同阿
01:03 <NOLD_1702> : style mod就是這樣,我是給一個suggestion你 給你看看你會不會都認為這更好看
01:04 <spboxer3> : 恩~
01:04 <NOLD_1702> : 恩?接/不
01:04 <spboxer3> : mod大部分都需要說出原因的.
01:04 <spboxer3> : 不
01:04 <NOLD_1702> : puush 一次
01:04 <NOLD_1702> : save後puush一次
01:04 <spboxer3> : 直接上傳就好阿
01:04 <NOLD_1702> : 我還會recheck
01:05 <NOLD_1702> : 我要讓自己接受你的style
01:05 <spboxer3> : 去updata
01:11 <NOLD_1702> : get my approve
01:12 <NOLD_1702> : go ahead

Jacob wrote:

move to pending, yo

dragonxcz wrote:

Nice map! Go for approved ^_^

Lissette wrote:

Hi~ sorry for the delay

Sweetboxer
00:26:764 (3) - move farther, looks like 1/2 space and confuses yep~ it's fixed
01:03:639 (2) - new combo, to let the prev slow down in a single combo, like you did here 01:02:014 (1) - and here 01:05:014 (1) - ok fixed
01:53:986 - 02:09:861 - i didn't like the hitsounding in this part, would sound better if you use soft as a base, and adding some normal hit when is needed, also you could follow the finish pattern of the song with soft finishes too fixed
02:52:980 (4) - delete and place a single note where the slider ends sorry~I don't want change this part. keep it
02:56:605 (3) - move to next red tick, you could also add a note here 02:56:355 - sorry~I don't want change this part. keep it
04:16:980 (4,5,6) - this spacing is just wrong I don't think It's very confuse for player. and It's for approved mapset. I think It's fine.
04:43:980 - 04:51:480 - same about hitsounds, soft fits better sorry~I will keep it~

Lissette wrote:

Re-check~

[Sweetboxer]
OD +1 plays why better k
01:53:986 - I think you didn't get what I meant, but since you wont change 04:43:980 - this one, you should leave them the same. u.u k
03:11:980 (3) - stack under 03:11:480 (6) - sorry~I want keep it. because (3) stack under (6) it's too confuse pattern I think.
03:29:355 - sounds like is missing a note here, add one k
03:57:980 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing k
04:16:980 (4,5,6) - I still don't agree with this spacing, for 2 reasons, 1. Confuses because the prevs notes of this combo are at 1/4 too, and are spaced nearer to each other, 2. It doesn't matter that this is going for approval, the beatmap is a Hard, not an Insane or a Impossible, so this is out of place, imo. fixed

Jacob wrote:

wot