1. Sweetboxer (5 stars, 870 notes)

Frobe wrote:

lol

this map is very good!

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

fap fap fap
I gonna star it, if I have some KD ready for it.
Only because of hawt BG <3

Btw: 300th Post. yay \ /

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. I found this through #modreqs

General:
Since you have the video, disable the letterbox during breaks, and also disable the countdown. IMO the countdown doesn't fit with the song at all. Done

Sweetboxer:
00:03:264 (4) - maybe move this at the middle of (3) so that it'd form a blanket around the beginning of the slider sort of sorry~I like my original pattern
00:12:764 (3,4,5) - set the spacing to 0.8 to make it a bit easier? Because this song it's increasing higher~so I used far spacing then inconsistent part
00:37:264 (5) - adjust this slider and move it here. i don't like how it's overlapping (4), and not only it forms a blanket around the arc of (4), but also at the end of (4). oops~same as no...
00:38:764 (10) - make this a NC because of new lyrics and the singer is raising for voice in a high pitch. ok
00:43:514 (4) - how about moving this beside (3) to avoid the overlapping? ok
01:04:389 (4,6) - hmm move (6) so that (4,5,6) looks like a triangle, and if you want, move (7) so that it'd look like a diamond. sorry~I'm ignore this
02:19:236 (3) - same as 00:43:514 but move it so that it'd stack on (4). sorry~ no
02:49:980 (5) - make this a NC because the instrumental changes. ^
03:44:230 - is there a reason why a break is here? because I think It's need use break to detention it
04:46:980 (3) - make this a 1/2 repeat slider. it flows nicely to the vocals. oh~follow song it's really boring and 3/4 It's OK for me
04:47:730 - if you follow the suggestion above, then add 2 circles from the red tick to the blue tick to follow vocals. ^
04:48:730 - same as above but just add a circle. ^
Thanks your mod~ I was fix some issue~

This is the best I can do. GL

cmn_891127 wrote:

最近超级懒……所以mod也很懒

00:52:014 (1,2,3,4) - 如果只是想做一个风扇的话，这三个弧度太大了，不好看，如果要想把slider的开头/结尾包进去，感觉弧度又小了，34太近了 這不是風扇~只有兩片葉子 另外一片不是
01:13:139 (1,2,3,4) / 01:17:139 (5,6,7,8) - 巨丑 額..還好吧
01:52:861 (4) - 这个突然凸出来是什么情况 本來設計就是凸出來的 算了~我改掉吧
03:59:105 (3) - 不是应该在白线开始的么，或者是在白线加一个note（这样感觉也很诡异）no~跟歌曲~
04:49:980 (1) - 我感觉还是提前1/1比较好 OK

1. Nothing wrong here

• - 00:13:264 (6) - Bad overlap here,i don't like so try something like this
  - 00:38:014 (8) - Perhaps you should add a new combo here to follow the rythm of the song in my opinion
  - 02:49:980 (5) - New combo to follow your pattern
  - 03:31:980 (1) - Resnap this note onto the center please
  - 03:48:230 (x) - You should probably to add a break here

MoodyRPG wrote:

IN THE AIR........Sorry

General

1. Nothing wrong here

Sweetboxer

• - 00:13:264 (6) - Bad overlap here,i don't like so try something like this Umm... But I don't like to change it~I think It's ok~so no change it
  - 00:38:014 (8) - Perhaps you should add a new combo here to follow the rythm of the song in my opinion oops~because combo color issue~so I can't change it~sorry
  - 02:49:980 (5) - New combo to follow your pattern ^
  - 03:31:980 (1) - Resnap this note onto the center please ok
  - 03:48:230 (x) - You should probably to add a break here Done

Sweet map so good luck

LKs wrote:

General

fine

Sweetboxer

00:02:014 (1) - 00:04:014 (1) - 这种都能加whistle吧 改
00:09:514 (6) - 同样的这种地方 换成clap或者加上clap都不错 改
00:11:514 (4) - ^ 改
00:14:764 (3) - 结尾静音比较好
00:17:139 (3) - 00:21:139 (4) - 00:25:139 (4) - 开头结尾clap？ 改
00:19:139 (5) - 开头clap 改
00:54:014 (1,2,3,4) - 这让人很难不当成1/4 改
01:13:139 (1,3) - 01:17:139 (5,7) - clap 改
01:24:986 (1) - 前一个减速slider是灰色的 改
03:15:980 (1) - 神SB 但把雪花做成star2加kiai也行吧 另外我觉得确实可以加star2
03:27:480 (11,3) - 间距 改
04:23:980 (1) - shape 改

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from in-game pm.

Just suggestions: (根本就全是nazi)

[Sweetboxer]

01:16:514 (2,3,4) - 不等距 改
01:28:736 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
02:16:861 (3,4,5) - 把这三个往左移一格？ ^
02:39:980 (1) - 把这个做成和02:40:480 (2)对称的？no 我不想改成那樣
03:11:730 (1,2) - 我觉得往上移3格比较好 no~故意的
04:39:355 (4) - 位置比较。。精确的位置是346,228 恩...我自己改了
04:41:480 (5) - 有点不对称，相对于04:41:230 (4) >_>...暫時不改
04:43:605 (6,7,8) - 往上一格 恩

That's all I can find. GL~

Sun Rainbow wrote:

请别怪我，因为我不会MOD APP（根本就是懒嘛）

Sweetboxer
02:26:986 (1) - 这边的结尾可以减低到5%声音比较好
03:20:730 (5) - 不延长到这里03:20:980吗
04:19:980 - 这边再来个雪花用KARI TIME更好吧
04:49:980 (1) - 延长到04:51:980

看到这渣MOD就想哭啊 啊啊啊 啊啊
沒改...因為那些地方都是我所設計過的節奏

[Sweetboxer]

1. 無用的綠線:
   00:31:014
   
   
2. 00:23:139 (x) - 加個東西 ?! (對後面節奏)
3. 00:24:514 (x) - ^
4. 00:38:014 (8) - NC?
5. 00:54:139 (x) - 在測試東西時不小心加了一個circle 發現可以?! lol
6. 00:54:764 (4) - 先往右一點然後往上兩格.
7. 01:17:514 (8) - NC?
8. 01:29:611 (9) - ^
9. 01:31:986 (7) - ^
10. 01:52:486 (x) - 加個東西吧?!
11. 02:24:986 (1) - NC?
12. 02:26:986 (1) - RNC?
13. 02:41:230 (4) - 總覺得這有點看不到
14. 02:51:480 (8) - NC
15. 03:14:980 (9) - ^
16. 03:30:980 (5) - ^
17. 03:58:980 (x) - 加個東西?!
18. 04:10:605 (x,x)- ^
19. 04:13:980 (7) - NC

l1106188 wrote:

Request from 哪裡 XD?
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[Sweetboxer]

1. 無用的綠線:
   00:31:014
   fixed
   
2. 00:23:139 (x) - 加個東西 ?! (對後面節奏)
3. 00:24:514 (x) - ^
4. 00:38:014 (8) - NC?
5. 00:54:139 (x) - 在測試東西時不小心加了一個circle 發現可以?! lol
6. 00:54:764 (4) - 先往右一點然後往上兩格. fixed
7. 01:17:514 (8) - NC?
8. 01:29:611 (9) - ^
9. 01:31:986 (7) - ^
10. 01:52:486 (x) - 加個東西吧?!
11. 02:24:986 (1) - NC?
12. 02:26:986 (1) - RNC?
13. 02:41:230 (4) - 總覺得這有點看不到
14. 02:51:480 (8) - NC
15. 03:14:980 (9) - ^
16. 03:30:980 (5) - ^
17. 03:58:980 (x) - 加個東西?!
18. 04:10:605 (x,x)- ^
19. 04:13:980 (7) - NC

歌曲好聽,節奏明顯,圖好打!!
神mapper 阿三醬 lol!!
來偷射Star

• 00:04:889 (3) - a curvy one overlapping with 2 would fit better here imo (1.0x would do fine here q.q)
  
  example

  
  00:06:014 (1,2) - these curves feel awkward, i suggest balancing them more
  00:11:514 (4,5,6,7) - too loud imo, maybe start with 50% and increase to 60?
  00:14:014 (1,2) - tbh, it's hard to see that as 1/4's, but somehow it looks nice though... just mentioning
  00:19:139 (5) - the edgy end comes a bit sudden, either move the red tick a bit earlier into the slider or reshape the slider a bit
  00:37:764 (6,7,8) - the straight line of circles feels meh here; i suggest moving 7 to X: 104, Y: 76
  00:43:514 (4,5) - kinda wide spacing and kinda unexpected to be 1/4, change this please
  00:47:014 (1,2) - spacing makes it hard to tell these are 1/2
  00:53:389 (4) - make the end (after red tick) go a bit down so it points a little to next 1
  01:13:139 (1,2,3) - that's a kinda harsh change of direction and arc you got there, i suggest building the combo more bowy
  02:19:736 (4,5,1) - similar to 00:37:764, i suggest moving 5 to X: 380, Y: 276

• 03:09:855 (9) - move to X: 300, Y: 240
  03:46:730 (1) - the curve feels too harsh, use 1 or 2 aditional sliderpoints to make it more fluent
  04:23:980 (1) - 1 grid right, 2-3 down

Jenny wrote:

Well, things that poked my eye; this map is naisu ;w;

• 00:04:889 (3) - a curvy one overlapping with 2 would fit better here imo (1.0x would do fine here q.q)
  
  example

  
  00:06:014 (1,2) - these curves feel awkward, i suggest balancing them more
  00:11:514 (4,5,6,7) - too loud imo, maybe start with 50% and increase to 60?
  00:14:014 (1,2) - tbh, it's hard to see that as 1/4's, but somehow it looks nice though... just mentioning
  00:19:139 (5) - the edgy end comes a bit sudden, either move the red tick a bit earlier into the slider or reshape the slider a bit
  00:37:764 (6,7,8) - the straight line of circles feels meh here; i suggest moving 7 to X: 104, Y: 76
  00:43:514 (4,5) - kinda wide spacing and kinda unexpected to be 1/4, change this please
  00:47:014 (1,2) - spacing makes it hard to tell these are 1/2
  00:53:389 (4) - make the end (after red tick) go a bit down so it points a little to next 1
  01:13:139 (1,2,3) - that's a kinda harsh change of direction and arc you got there, i suggest building the combo more bowy
  02:19:736 (4,5,1) - similar to 00:37:764, i suggest moving 5 to X: 380, Y: 276

- Volume in instrumental part (grey BG-one) is too high imo -
- Oh gawd Lily, why are you going all "lalalalalalalalalalalala" q.q -

• 03:09:855 (9) - move to X: 300, Y: 240
  03:46:730 (1) - the curve feels too harsh, use 1 or 2 aditional sliderpoints to make it more fluent
  04:23:980 (1) - 1 grid right, 2-3 down