Kinzo wrote:
From my mod queue ~
Beginner modder here, i can be wrong
Twi's Normal :
00:43:037 (1,2) - I'm not sure, but i think it's too hard for normal diff, confusion beginner hmm,i'll keep it. lol
Suzumiya's Hard :
00:31:617 (3) - I think clap here sound better miss a clap here, thanks
Lunatic :
I can't find something
Nice one for me ~
Good luck ~
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Rizuna - Ichigeki Hissatsu Wo Ai Ni
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Topic Starter
Sorry for my delay.
From CLANNAD Modding Queue
Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.
[General]
Nothing~
[Lunatic]
00:13:975 - Please listen in 25%,a accent here,but you didn't add any objects here :/ Try to do this with a finish with the slider 's end and head.Or two notes with finishs.
00:15:168 (2) - I think here's missing a note too :/
00:16:105 (8) - For me,it's no trouble to read this,but I have to doubt this since it to near the pervious triplet slider,put it away,like this
00:22:412 (2,3) - Too far IMO,since (3) isn't a NC so I think it's not necessary to put (3) so far away from (2) even though it's readable.
00:24:884 (3) - Same as 00:13:975,try to put it in your consideration.
00:25:992 (1,2,3,4) - This part is a start of vocal,and it leave a hard sound(vocal),so I think you may change the time section on 00:25:906 to a normal samplset.And whistle all the slider heads.It sounds better for me.
00:58:889 (2) - The pervious note stack this slider cause players hard to ecpect if it has 2 reverses or 1 or 3 or etc.Unstack it or make changes to make this 2 reverses slider more readable and expectable.
01:35:793 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I am not asking you not to map slider/stream jumps but not fit here.Play really weird.
01:43:378 - I think here's should be a object too.
01:44:742 (3,5) - Hmm...To hidden~Put them like this?
01:52:924 (6) - Stack it better on the end of 01:51:901 (1) .(New coordinate:x231,y184) (NAZI)
02:10:992 (1,2,3) - 1/4 spacing > 1/2 spacing :/......You know?
02:13:889 (2,3,4) - Check this triplet in test mode,it's not exactly on the end of 02:13:378 (4).Put them on x292,y212).(NAZI)
[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
Useless Time sections:
37838
103293
02:14:400 (4) - Unsnap note,snap it by moving it.
Nothing found but I think you may make it better feel.There's no any jump in fast part like 00:47:810 (1,2,3,4) etc.
And the map is too linear :/
If you are still alive,try not to map so linear everytimes,such as this time,this song isn't fit linear style :/
[Twi's Normal]
Hmmm......Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.
Why no any finishs S:1 in the whole map?
Try to add some finishs S:1 ,such as
00:27:355 (1) - head and reverse
00:39:628 (3) - reverse
00:41:674 (5) - head and end
00:49:855 (2) - head
I am too lazy to point them ALL out,try to find them by yourself.
02:09:628 (3) - This slider 's end is ugly enough you know :/??
No any other complaint.
[thou's Easy]
Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.
AR-1
Useless Time sections:
109003
That's all I could find~
Good map for a newbie.
From CLANNAD Modding Queue
Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.
[General]
Nothing~
[Lunatic]
00:13:975 - Please listen in 25%,a accent here,but you didn't add any objects here :/ Try to do this with a finish with the slider 's end and head.Or two notes with finishs.
00:15:168 (2) - I think here's missing a note too :/
00:16:105 (8) - For me,it's no trouble to read this,but I have to doubt this since it to near the pervious triplet slider,put it away,like this
00:22:412 (2,3) - Too far IMO,since (3) isn't a NC so I think it's not necessary to put (3) so far away from (2) even though it's readable.
00:24:884 (3) - Same as 00:13:975,try to put it in your consideration.
00:25:992 (1,2,3,4) - This part is a start of vocal,and it leave a hard sound(vocal),so I think you may change the time section on 00:25:906 to a normal samplset.And whistle all the slider heads.It sounds better for me.
00:58:889 (2) - The pervious note stack this slider cause players hard to ecpect if it has 2 reverses or 1 or 3 or etc.Unstack it or make changes to make this 2 reverses slider more readable and expectable.
01:35:793 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I am not asking you not to map slider/stream jumps but not fit here.Play really weird.
01:43:378 - I think here's should be a object too.
01:44:742 (3,5) - Hmm...To hidden~Put them like this?
01:52:924 (6) - Stack it better on the end of 01:51:901 (1) .(New coordinate:x231,y184) (NAZI)
02:10:992 (1,2,3) - 1/4 spacing > 1/2 spacing :/......You know?
02:13:889 (2,3,4) - Check this triplet in test mode,it's not exactly on the end of 02:13:378 (4).Put them on x292,y212).(NAZI)
[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
Useless Time sections:
37838
103293
02:14:400 (4) - Unsnap note,snap it by moving it.
Nothing found but I think you may make it better feel.There's no any jump in fast part like 00:47:810 (1,2,3,4) etc.
And the map is too linear :/
If you are still alive,try not to map so linear everytimes,such as this time,this song isn't fit linear style :/
[Twi's Normal]
Hmmm......Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.
Why no any finishs S:1 in the whole map?
Try to add some finishs S:1 ,such as
00:27:355 (1) - head and reverse
00:39:628 (3) - reverse
00:41:674 (5) - head and end
00:49:855 (2) - head
I am too lazy to point them ALL out,try to find them by yourself.
02:09:628 (3) - This slider 's end is ugly enough you know :/??
No any other complaint.
[thou's Easy]
Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.
AR-1
Useless Time sections:
109003
That's all I could find~
Good map for a newbie.
Topic Starter
Thank you~~ =A=nold_1702 wrote:
Sorry for my delay.
From CLANNAD Modding Queue
Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.
[General]
Nothing~
[Lunatic]
00:13:975 - Please listen in 25%,a accent here,but you didn't add any objects here :/ Try to do this with a finish with the slider 's end and head.Or two notes with finishs. good XD
00:15:168 (2) - I think here's missing a note too :/ ^
00:16:105 (8) - For me,it's no trouble to read this,but I have to doubt this since it to near the pervious triplet slider,put it away,like this nice
00:22:412 (2,3) - Too far IMO,since (3) isn't a NC so I think it's not necessary to put (3) so far away from (2) even though it's readable. change to two notes
00:24:884 (3) - Same as 00:13:975,try to put it in your consideration. ditto
00:25:992 (1,2,3,4) - This part is a start of vocal,and it leave a hard sound(vocal),so I think you may change the time section on 00:25:906 to a normal samplset.And whistle all the slider heads.It sounds better for me. I think this map dosn't need normal hitsound... so you know
00:58:889 (2) - The pervious note stack this slider cause players hard to ecpect if it has 2 reverses or 1 or 3 or etc.Unstack it or make changes to make this 2 reverses slider more readable and expectable. you're right
01:35:793 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I am not asking you not to map slider/stream jumps but not fit here.Play really weird. reduce the spacing?
01:43:378 - I think here's should be a object too. But I can't find other way...
01:44:742 (3,5) - Hmm...To hidden~Put them like this? ok
01:52:924 (6) - Stack it better on the end of 01:51:901 (1) .(New coordinate:x231,y184) (NAZI) ^
02:10:992 (1,2,3) - 1/4 spacing > 1/2 spacing :/......You know? I know >_>
02:13:889 (2,3,4) - Check this triplet in test mode,it's not exactly on the end of 02:13:378 (4).Put them on x292,y212).(NAZI) ^
[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
Useless Time sections:
37838
103293
02:14:400 (4) - Unsnap note,snap it by moving it. fixed
Nothing found but I think you may make it better feel.There's no any jump in fast part like 00:47:810 (1,2,3,4) etc.
And the map is too linear :/
If you are still alive,try not to map so linear everytimes,such as this time,this song isn't fit linear style :/
[Twi's Normal]
Hmmm......Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.
Why no any finishs S:1 in the whole map?
Try to add some finishs S:1 ,such as
00:27:355 (1) - head and reverse
00:39:628 (3) - reverse
00:41:674 (5) - head and end
00:49:855 (2) - head
I am too lazy to point them ALL out,try to find them by yourself. ok...
02:09:628 (3) - This slider 's end is ugly enough you know :/?? changed >_>
No any other complaint.
[thou's Easy]
Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.
AR-1
Useless Time sections:
109003
That's all I could find~
Good map for a newbie.
lunatic
02:13:889 (2,3,4,5,6) - 和 02:10:650 (8,9,1) - 我建议这种相同的梗DS统一吧 前者1.4 后者1.6 打着别扭
比起以前难度又提升了QAQ
还有 01:35:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个是双刀的梗吗QAQ 打了十几遍都打不好
全程slider开头F好重口@@
02:13:889 (2,3,4,5,6) - 和 02:10:650 (8,9,1) - 我建议这种相同的梗DS统一吧 前者1.4 后者1.6 打着别扭
比起以前难度又提升了QAQ
还有 01:35:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个是双刀的梗吗QAQ 打了十几遍都打不好
全程slider开头F好重口@@
Topic Starter
/w\好像沒改的 kd不給了喵Chloe wrote:
lunatic
02:13:889 (2,3,4,5,6) - 和 02:10:650 (8,9,1) - 我建议这种相同的梗DS统一吧 前者1.4 后者1.6 打着别扭 我覺得還行...
比起以前难度又提升了QAQ
还有 01:35:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个是双刀的梗吗QAQ 打了十几遍都打不好 快看shiirn那張almagest...
全程slider开头F好重口@@
nold_1702 wrote:
[thou's Easy]
Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.No change
AR-1Try but no change
Useless Time sections:
109003Fixed
修改后的在这里 http://puu.sh/QhO2Kinzo wrote:
Thou's Easy :
01:37:583 (6) - I think a slider is better http://puu.sh/PgnwFixed
Hi from queue, mod time~, sorry for long delay x,x
Nice song, loved, btw star, I'll only point some minor things thay could make it better, take only those you like.
[Easy]
Nothing, all it's ok~
[Normal]
00:41:333 (4,5) - What about putting this closer to previous slider, maybe in x:264 y:328
01:04:514 (2,3) - ^ in x:248 y:320, if you do, 01:05:537 (1) - in x:448 y:344
That's all of my part, I'm not good in harders x3, good luck~
Nice song, loved, btw star, I'll only point some minor things thay could make it better, take only those you like.
[Easy]
Nothing, all it's ok~
[Normal]
00:41:333 (4,5) - What about putting this closer to previous slider, maybe in x:264 y:328
01:04:514 (2,3) - ^ in x:248 y:320, if you do, 01:05:537 (1) - in x:448 y:344
That's all of my part, I'm not good in harders x3, good luck~
from my queue ~ hello amamiya yuko-san ~
[General]
[Easy]
D.S 0.8 - 1.0 please, the bpm is pretty fast and beginner will get confused .w.
slider shape, circle placement
Rhythms
[Normal]
Rhythms
[Hard]
Rhythms
[Lunatic]
Rhythms
nice mapset~ good luck ^w^
[General]
- than (Short Ver.) , I think its more fit to user (Cut Ver.) or don't use those cut/short ver word
D.S 0.8 - 1.0 please, the bpm is pretty fast and beginner will get confused .w.
slider shape, circle placement
- 01:58:037: how about move this 5 grid up ?
- 01:20:537: move the nc to 01:21:560?
Rhythms
- 00:43:037: remove the reverse? its too hard for normal player
- 01:21:560: remove note?
Rhythms
- 00:43:378: remove note?
- 02:18:662: add note ?
Rhythms
- 00:05:196: nc will cute ~
- 00:48:747: add note?
Topic Starter
DakeDekaane
Thanks for star :3DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi from queue, mod time~, sorry for long delay x,x
Nice song, loved, btw star, I'll only point some minor things thay could make it better, take only those you like.
[Easy]
Nothing, all it's ok~
[Normal]
00:41:333 (4,5) - What about putting this closer to previous slider, maybe in x:264 y:328 Good
01:04:514 (2,3) - ^ in x:248 y:320, if you do, 01:05:537 (1) - in x:448 y:344 ^
That's all of my part, I'm not good in harders x3, good luck~
- t e n n y a -
- t e n n y a - wrote:
from my queue ~ hello amamiya yuko-san ~
[General][Easy]
- than (Short Ver.) , I think its more fit to user (Cut Ver.) or don't use those cut/short ver word
D.S 0.8 - 1.0 please, the bpm is pretty fast and beginner will get confused .w.
slider shape, circle placementRhythms
- 01:58:037: how about move this 5 grid up ?
[Normal]
- 01:20:537: move the nc to 01:21:560?
Rhythms[Hard]
- 00:43:037: remove the reverse? its too hard for normal player I think it's ok...
- 01:21:560: remove note? ?? why?
Rhythms[Lunatic]
- 00:43:378: remove note? No...
- 02:18:662: add note ? ok
Rhythmsnice mapset~ good luck ^w^
- 00:05:196: nc will cute ~ Odd for me...
- 00:48:747: add note? ^
修改后的在这里 http://puu.sh/QnEZ- t e n n y a - wrote:
from my queue ~ hello amamiya yuko-san ~
[Easy]
D.S 0.8 - 1.0 please, the bpm is pretty fast and beginner will get confused .w.No change,I think 1.2 is not very hard for beginner
slider shape, circle placementRhythms
- 01:58:037: how about move this 5 grid up ?Fixed~
- 01:20:537: move the nc to 01:21:560?No change
EDIT: 翻页!~\液/
EDIT2: 二次是个讨厌鬼！
umm.. m4m? :p
[Lunatic]
00:15:253 (2,3) - = =要不要这么坑。。感觉这个切分音(3,4,5,6)有点牵强..改成五连怎么样. 或者是按现在的节奏，whistle应当下在00:15:679 (5) - 而不是(6)的开头，感觉好很多.总之现在听起来有点怪。。建议改改。
00:17:043 (3) - 这个丑 右下一格?
00:17:299 (5) - 个人感觉这里可以改成一个切分，可以更好的贴合鼓声，类似这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398901
00:19:855 (4,5) - 这个切分也有点。。>_> 和00:15:253一样..感觉本来蛮流畅的这里突然断掉了
00:39:969 (6) - (nazi)没叠上 右一格
00:40:310 (7,8) - ^
00:40:310 (7) - nc?
00:42:355 - 如果是我的话我会删掉00:42:185 (8) - ，然后00:42:355 - ~00:42:696 - 一个5连打，感觉更符合bgm而且好玩点呢。。
01:15:083 (1,2) - --> 01:15:764 (4,5) - ^ (实在有点丑
01:20:878 (2,3) - 这两个时间轴上调换位置然后(3,4)ctrl+R? 02:04:344 (2) - 感觉整个flow在这里停止了一样.. 听着voice明显应该是个四方跳啊。。
[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
`diff名改为Suzumiya's Hard?
00:05:196 (4) - whistle
00:05:878 (2) - ctrl+R 然后左移一格感觉更流畅
00:07:924 (6) - whistle
00:10:310 (3) - 尾巴+whistle
00:10:821 - 这个note。。可有可无吧>_>
00:12:696 (2,4) - whistle?
00:16:105 (4) - 开头+whistle
02:17:810 (5) - add a repeat?
02:20:538 (5) - ^ 如果上面改了的话..
02:23:264 (6,7,8) - ......>_> 有点奇怪
很乖的Hard..挑不出什么毛病..
[Twi's Normal]
`为什么不是Twice's Normal (无视吧>_>
00:04:855 (2) - 结尾加上clap或者默认S音效的finish?
00:25:139 (2) - 结尾+whistle然后去掉00:25:651 (3) - 的?
00:38:264 (1) - 结尾去掉whistle..然后加00:39:287 (2) - 上?
01:27:014 (2) - +默认s的finish?
01:32:128 (2) - 尾巴+默认s的finish?
感觉whistle用的有点过..整体还不错
[thou's Easy]
`不推荐在Easy这种难度用1/2的slider..因为看上去像是2个连着的circle所以容易让新手造成误读. 都改成单个note就好了 比如00:32:128 - 也不太影响节奏 下面就不提了
恩。。后面懒了大致的看了一下也没什么问题
进步很多 感觉还需要一些mod吧。。加油囖~
EDIT2: 二次是个讨厌鬼！
umm.. m4m? :p
[Lunatic]
00:15:253 (2,3) - = =要不要这么坑。。感觉这个切分音(3,4,5,6)有点牵强..改成五连怎么样. 或者是按现在的节奏，whistle应当下在00:15:679 (5) - 而不是(6)的开头，感觉好很多.总之现在听起来有点怪。。建议改改。
00:17:043 (3) - 这个丑 右下一格?
00:17:299 (5) - 个人感觉这里可以改成一个切分，可以更好的贴合鼓声，类似这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398901
00:19:855 (4,5) - 这个切分也有点。。>_> 和00:15:253一样..感觉本来蛮流畅的这里突然断掉了
00:39:969 (6) - (nazi)没叠上 右一格
00:40:310 (7,8) - ^
00:40:310 (7) - nc?
00:42:355 - 如果是我的话我会删掉00:42:185 (8) - ，然后00:42:355 - ~00:42:696 - 一个5连打，感觉更符合bgm而且好玩点呢。。
01:15:083 (1,2) - --> 01:15:764 (4,5) - ^ (实在有点丑
01:20:878 (2,3) - 这两个时间轴上调换位置然后(3,4)ctrl+R? 02:04:344 (2) - 感觉整个flow在这里停止了一样.. 听着voice明显应该是个四方跳啊。。
[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
`diff名改为Suzumiya's Hard?
00:05:196 (4) - whistle
00:05:878 (2) - ctrl+R 然后左移一格感觉更流畅
00:07:924 (6) - whistle
00:10:310 (3) - 尾巴+whistle
00:10:821 - 这个note。。可有可无吧>_>
00:12:696 (2,4) - whistle?
00:16:105 (4) - 开头+whistle
02:17:810 (5) - add a repeat?
02:20:538 (5) - ^ 如果上面改了的话..
02:23:264 (6,7,8) - ......>_> 有点奇怪
很乖的Hard..挑不出什么毛病..
[Twi's Normal]
`为什么不是Twice's Normal (无视吧>_>
00:04:855 (2) - 结尾加上clap或者默认S音效的finish?
00:25:139 (2) - 结尾+whistle然后去掉00:25:651 (3) - 的?
00:38:264 (1) - 结尾去掉whistle..然后加00:39:287 (2) - 上?
01:27:014 (2) - +默认s的finish?
01:32:128 (2) - 尾巴+默认s的finish?
感觉whistle用的有点过..整体还不错
[thou's Easy]
`不推荐在Easy这种难度用1/2的slider..因为看上去像是2个连着的circle所以容易让新手造成误读. 都改成单个note就好了 比如00:32:128 - 也不太影响节奏 下面就不提了
恩。。后面懒了大致的看了一下也没什么问题
进步很多 感觉还需要一些mod吧。。加油囖~
Topic Starter
Strawberry wrote:
EDIT: 翻页!~\液/
EDIT2: 二次是个讨厌鬼！
umm.. m4m? :p
[Lunatic]
00:15:253 (2,3) - = =要不要这么坑。。感觉这个切分音(3,4,5,6)有点牵强..改成五连怎么样. 或者是按现在的节奏，whistle应当下在00:15:679 (5) - 而不是(6)的开头，感觉好很多.总之现在听起来有点怪。。建议改改。 whistle下錯了 已改
00:17:043 (3) - 这个丑 右下一格? 換了個方向
00:17:299 (5) - 个人感觉这里可以改成一个切分，可以更好的贴合鼓声，类似这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398901 跟的音軌不同...
00:19:855 (4,5) - 这个切分也有点。。>_> 和00:15:253一样..感觉本来蛮流畅的这里突然断掉了 改了
00:39:969 (6) - (nazi)没叠上 右一格 =A=
00:40:310 (7,8) - ^[/color] ^
00:40:310 (7) - nc? 不了<__<
00:42:355 - 如果是我的话我会删掉00:42:185 (8) - ，然后00:42:355 - ~00:42:696 - 一个5连打，感觉更符合bgm而且好玩点呢。。理由同上 跟的音軌不同
01:15:083 (1,2) - --> 別這樣...
01:15:764 (4,5) - ^ (实在有点丑 ^...
01:20:878 (2,3) - 这两个时间轴上调换位置然后(3,4)ctrl+R? 後面同樣的地方也一樣 都是四個反向的slider啦lol 02:04:344 (2) - 感觉整个flow在这里停止了一样.. 听着voice明显应该是个四方跳啊。。這個梗就不打算改了...從第一個版本就一直用到現在<_<
[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
`diff名改为Suzumiya's Hard?
00:05:196 (4) - whistle 聽著略奇怪
00:05:878 (2) - ctrl+R 然后左移一格感觉更流畅 好像不錯
00:07:924 (6) - whistle 既然整張圖都幾乎沒用whistle 這裡單獨加一個明顯不科學
00:10:310 (3) - 尾巴+whistle ^ 如果之後再被人挑了我再重新下<_<
00:10:821 - 这个note。。可有可无吧>_> 你開25%聽 明顯有個音>_>
00:12:696 (2,4) - whistle? 同前
00:16:105 (4) - 开头+whistle ^
02:17:810 (5) - add a repeat? 為了強調後面那個節奏這裡就留空一下吧=A=
02:20:538 (5) - ^ 如果上面改了的话.. ^
02:23:264 (6,7,8) - ......>_> 有点奇怪 >_>我一直覺得涼宮姥爺這裡下得好好誒...只有我一個人覺得嗎QAQ
很乖的Hard..挑不出什么毛病..
[Twi's Normal]
`为什么不是Twice's Normal (无视吧>_>
00:04:855 (2) - 结尾加上clap或者默认S音效的finish? 好像可以
00:25:139 (2) - 结尾+whistle然后去掉00:25:651 (3) - 的? 聽著比較奇怪:3
00:38:264 (1) - 结尾去掉whistle..然后加00:39:287 (2) - 上? 同上 不過現在也挺奇怪的 去掉算了:3
01:27:014 (2) - +默认s的finish? 改了下
01:32:128 (2) - 尾巴+默认s的finish? 好像可以×2
感觉whistle用的有点过..整体还不错
[thou's Easy]
`不推荐在Easy这种难度用1/2的slider..因为看上去像是2个连着的circle所以容易让新手造成误读. 都改成单个note就好了 比如00:32:128 - 也不太影响节奏 下面就不提了
恩。。后面懒了大致的看了一下也没什么问题
进步很多 感觉还需要一些mod吧。。加油囖~
Hi~From PM request~(膜拜星神
[General]
被吐槽这么多了应该没了吧
[Easy]
[Normal]
Fine
[Hard]
[Insane]
就这么多...mod不出什么东西啊..Good luck~
[General]
被吐槽这么多了应该没了吧
[Easy]
- 00:43:037 (3,1) - 这里hitsound好违和...吓着我了
- 00:45:594 (1) - 建议00:45:424开始 这个略难读
- 00:39:628 (2) - 这个Ctrl+r一下比较好?
[Normal]
Fine
[Hard]
- HP+1
- 00:09:628 - 没看出这里加速的理由...
- 00:53:264 (1) - 感觉可以改成1个slider加1个往返slider...往返这么多次好不舒服
- 00:56:333 (6) - 顺时针转180°?
[Insane]
- 卧槽 好难
- 00:10:992 (1) - 拉的不好看
- 00:45:083 (8) - add NC
- 01:35:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 卧槽这是啥
- 00:35:537 - 这里空拍巨不自然 加点东西?
就这么多...mod不出什么东西啊..Good luck~
Topic Starter
a3272509123 wrote:
Hi~From PM request~(膜拜星神
[General]
被吐槽这么多了应该没了吧
[Easy]总体还好 就是1/2Slider有的地方略违和..
- 00:43:037 (3,1) - 这里hitsound好违和...吓着我了
- 00:45:594 (1) - 建议00:45:424开始 这个略难读
- 00:39:628 (2) - 这个Ctrl+r一下比较好?
[Normal]
Fine
[Hard]
- HP+1
- 00:09:628 - 没看出这里加速的理由... 又吐這裡...話說這裡是減速不是加速 baka
- 00:53:264 (1) - 感觉可以改成1个slider加1个往返slider...往返这么多次好不舒服 改了
- 00:56:333 (6) - 顺时针转180°? 沒看懂...?
[Insane]
- 卧槽 好难
- 00:10:992 (1) - 拉的不好看 怎麼不好看...重新拉了下 差不多啊
- 00:45:083 (8) - add NC 不科學啊...
- 01:35:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 卧槽这是啥 臥槽/w\
- 00:35:537 - 这里空拍巨不自然 加点东西? 不知道加啥...
就这么多...mod不出什么东西啊..Good luck~
Strawberry wrote:
[thou's Easy]
`不推荐在Easy这种难度用1/2的slider..因为看上去像是2个连着的circle所以容易让新手造成误读. 都改成单个note就好了 比如00:32:128 - 也不太影响节奏 下面就不提了BPM略高,改成单个note会加大难度
恩。。后面懒了大致的看了一下也没什么问题
这是修改后的 http://puu.sh/Rby2a3272509123 wrote:
[Easy]总体还好 就是1/2Slider有的地方略违和..
- 00:43:037 (3,1) - 这里hitsound好违和...吓着我了修改了一点
- 00:45:594 (1) - 建议00:45:424开始 这个略难读没有修改
- 00:39:628 (2) - 这个Ctrl+r一下比较好?没有修改
Hi there
[Storyboarding]
* Some lyric SB are blend the BG while they appear. When you using a photoshop or GIMP, I suggest you to use a stroke with a light color. Like the lyric SB at kiai time
* All lyric SB are having an unecessary transparent space. You might want to trim it as possible. Otherwise, this map is might be lag for ancient PC
[thou's Easy]
00:54:628 (1) - Are you want to make this slider curve or linear?
01:09:628 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern
01:49:003 (1) - End the slider to 01:49:514 for following cymbal sound?
[Twi's Normal]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems bit slow for me
00:43:549 (2) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners
01:51:560 (3) - Add whistle?
[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
00:29:912 (4,1) - Swap new combo for follows the pattern?
02:08:946 (3,4,5) - Perhaps replace this pattern into a slider, like 02:11:674 (3)? So players are having a good flow?
[Lunatic]
00:35:708 - Add note here for following instruments at music?
01:34:685 (9,10,11) - If you do this, players are unable to tell which is head slider or tail slider. I suggest you to unstack them, so players able to tell
Meiling <3
[Storyboarding]
* Some lyric SB are blend the BG while they appear. When you using a photoshop or GIMP, I suggest you to use a stroke with a light color. Like the lyric SB at kiai time
* All lyric SB are having an unecessary transparent space. You might want to trim it as possible. Otherwise, this map is might be lag for ancient PC
[thou's Easy]
00:54:628 (1) - Are you want to make this slider curve or linear?
01:09:628 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern
01:49:003 (1) - End the slider to 01:49:514 for following cymbal sound?
[Twi's Normal]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems bit slow for me
00:43:549 (2) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners
01:51:560 (3) - Add whistle?
[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
00:29:912 (4,1) - Swap new combo for follows the pattern?
02:08:946 (3,4,5) - Perhaps replace this pattern into a slider, like 02:11:674 (3)? So players are having a good flow?
[Lunatic]
00:35:708 - Add note here for following instruments at music?
01:34:685 (9,10,11) - If you do this, players are unable to tell which is head slider or tail slider. I suggest you to unstack them, so players able to tell
Meiling <3
http://puu.sh/VtjlLeorda wrote:
[thou's Easy]All fixed~
00:54:628 (1) - Are you want to make this slider curve or linear?
01:09:628 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern
01:49:003 (1) - End the slider to 01:49:514 for following cymbal sound?
Topic Starter
Really helpful! Thank you Leo :3Leorda wrote:
Hi there
[Storyboarding]
* Some lyric SB are blend the BG while they appear. When you using a photoshop or GIMP, I suggest you to use a stroke with a light color. Like the lyric SB at kiai time I want to give the lyric SB in kiai time to prominence, so I have dimmed the SB in other part.
* All lyric SB are having an unecessary transparent space. You might want to trim it as possible. Otherwise, this map is might be lag for ancient PC Fixed. Thank you!
[thou's Easy]
00:54:628 (1) - Are you want to make this slider curve or linear?
01:09:628 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern
01:49:003 (1) - End the slider to 01:49:514 for following cymbal sound?
[Twi's Normal]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems bit slow for me
00:43:549 (2) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners
01:51:560 (3) - Add whistle?
All fixed
[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
00:29:912 (4,1) - Swap new combo for follows the pattern?
02:08:946 (3,4,5) - Perhaps replace this pattern into a slider, like 02:11:674 (3)? So players are having a good flow?
All fixed
[Lunatic]
00:35:708 - Add note here for following instruments at music? ok
01:34:685 (9,10,11) - If you do this, players are unable to tell which is head slider or tail slider. I suggest you to unstack them, so players able to tell Fixed!
Meiling <3
- the lyrics SB has similar colour with the BG with makes them very hard to read
[Lunatic]
00:15:083 - As the jumping varies so much I can't tell what's the time separation between (4) and (5) which could be avoided
02:10:650 (8) - quite unexpected, how about shortening by 1/4?
sounds good, though some big jumps are not very expected =d
[Hard]
01:56:674 (3,4,5,6) - they could be placed to look better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405415
02:18:833 (7) - imo no need to place a jump here just to make it symmetrical, a normal spacing would be fine
[Easy]
Why the beginning is not mapped?
That's all, when you're ready just find me again.
[Lunatic]
00:15:083 - As the jumping varies so much I can't tell what's the time separation between (4) and (5) which could be avoided
02:10:650 (8) - quite unexpected, how about shortening by 1/4?
sounds good, though some big jumps are not very expected =d
[Hard]
01:56:674 (3,4,5,6) - they could be placed to look better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405415
02:18:833 (7) - imo no need to place a jump here just to make it symmetrical, a normal spacing would be fine
[Easy]
Why the beginning is not mapped?
That's all, when you're ready just find me again.
星神>w<
Topic Starter
wmfchris wrote:
- the lyrics SB has similar colour with the BG with makes them very hard to read Remade the SB orz
[Lunatic]
00:15:083 - As the jumping varies so much I can't tell what's the time separation between (4) and (5) which could be avoided Reduce the spacing /w\
02:10:650 (8) - quite unexpected, how about shortening by 1/4? ok...
sounds good, though some big jumps are not very expected =d
[Hard]
01:56:674 (3,4,5,6) - they could be placed to look better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405415
02:18:833 (7) - imo no need to place a jump here just to make it symmetrical, a normal spacing would be fine
All fixed
[Easy]
Why the beginning is not mapped?
That's all, when you're ready just find me again.
http://puu.sh/WLS5wmfchris wrote:
[Easy]
Why the beginning is not mapped?Fixed~
- Fixed the song title
Looks fine now.
Looks fine now.
哇恭喜泡> < 快rank~~！！！
Topic Starter
wmfchris wrote:
- Fixed the song title
Looks fine now.
跪謝了
哇可算泡了～～～
[General]
- There are 2 osb file in your folder, please delete "Rizuna - Ichigeki Hissatsu Wo Ai Ni (Short Ver.) (AmamiyaYuko).osb"
- 00:22:838 (2) - 3/4 beat space is a little hard to read in a normal diff. I strongly recommend you make 3/4 rhythm in a reverse slider
- 01:19:174 (1) - This one sounds a bit weird, you can try this rhythm
- 02:09:628 (3) - Try this code, it made your slider looked more pretty
Here's the comparison:368,272,129628,2,0,B|312:264|312:264|296:288|261:296|231:277|224:240|248:208,1,200,6|6
- 00:53:264 (1) - Remove NC, add NC to current 00:54:117 (3), add NC to 00:54:458 (5), and remove NC of 00:54:628 (1). Because 00:54:117 (3) is a sudden jump and from 00:54:458 (5) it's a new bar start
Topic Starter
;_;Breeze wrote:
[General][Twi's Normal]
- There are 2 osb file in your folder, please delete "Rizuna - Ichigeki Hissatsu Wo Ai Ni (Short Ver.) (AmamiyaYuko).osb"
Deleted
All fixed
- 00:22:838 (2) - 3/4 beat space is a little hard to read in a normal diff. I strongly recommend you make 3/4 rhythm in a reverse slider
- 01:19:174 (1) - This one sounds a bit weird, you can try this rhythm
- 02:09:628 (3) - Try this code, it made your slider looked more pretty
Here's the comparison:368,272,129628,2,0,B|312:264|312:264|296:288|261:296|231:277|224:240|248:208,1,200,6|6
[Suzumiyasama's Hard]
- 00:53:264 (1) - Remove NC, add NC to current 00:54:117 (3), add NC to 00:54:458 (5), and remove NC of 00:54:628 (1). Because 00:54:117 (3) is a sudden jump and from 00:54:458 (5) it's a new bar start
Great job on you 1st map
and congratulations to your 1st RANK
and congratulations to your 1st RANK
Topic Starter
哇first rank!
/>、!!!!!恭喜=w=。。。。
queue里的mod其实还没orz。。。。
queue里的mod其实还没orz。。。。
grats! ^w^
性液我爱你！说真的，这图刚发布UNRANK的时候我觉得做得很好，很好玩，难度也不错
结果今天看到RANK很高兴，就跑去玩了，结果泥马，改得渣得1B，还改短了，结果就坑了，泥马要是以前的样子坑我也愿意，改成这渣样打起来让人恶心
不知道作者想的是什么，为了RANK一张图，随便那些人修改，把原来的感觉全改没了，改成那么恶心的样子
这个评分看起来有9分，很大的原因不就是BGM，但是改成这样，把歌毁了
如果是UNRANK的版本，我肯定给10分，改成这样，很抱歉，我只能给1分，作者你太让人失望了
结果今天看到RANK很高兴，就跑去玩了，结果泥马，改得渣得1B，还改短了，结果就坑了，泥马要是以前的样子坑我也愿意，改成这渣样打起来让人恶心
不知道作者想的是什么，为了RANK一张图，随便那些人修改，把原来的感觉全改没了，改成那么恶心的样子
这个评分看起来有9分，很大的原因不就是BGM，但是改成这样，把歌毁了
如果是UNRANK的版本，我肯定给10分，改成这样，很抱歉，我只能给1分，作者你太让人失望了
萝卜白菜的问题 改不改都会有1分 伤不起pgjhehe wrote:
说真的，这图刚发布UNRANK的时候我觉得做得很好，很好玩，难度也不错
结果今天看到RANK很高兴，就跑去玩了，结果泥马，改得渣得1B，还改短了，结果就坑了，泥马要是以前的样子坑我也愿意，改成这渣样打起来让人恶心
不知道作者想的是什么，为了RANK一张图，随便那些人修改，把原来的感觉全改没了，改成那么恶心的样子
这个评分看起来有9分，很大的原因不就是BGM，但是改成这样，把歌毁了
如果是UNRANK的版本，我肯定给10分，改成这样，很抱歉，我只能给1分，作者你太让人失望了