lovhin456 wrote:

[Saten]
- 00:33:134 ~ Maybe use 1/8 here too like you did on 00:30:009 ? will give it a try

Miya wrote:

Saten

1. 00:16:051 (1) - This 1/8 kick slider will be surprising much people. If they encounter it in the first time, many people will think this as a 1/4 kick slider. Then they play it, and they surprised because it's 1/8 slider, then people will mess and got a lot of 100 in the next stream 00:16:572 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - because you suddenly change the ryhtim into 1/4. My suggestion is to make the next stream into slider. So people won't have a problem with the rythmic change so suddenly. Or just delete this sldier, and change into 1/4 kick slider. I had complaints about using 1/8 & 1/4 kick-sliders right after each-other, so I'm sticking with this for now.
2. 00:33:551 (1) - Please change this whistle at the start into finish. Not consistant with finish sound at 00:46:676 (6) - end. I can't hear any finish sound in the music here
3. 01:02:718- Because the drum sound start here, it will be good if you add a normal hitsound timing point with 60% volume here so it will be cover up the drum sound. If the whistle at the stream become awkward, then it's a good idea to delete the whistle. done
4. 01:23:551 (1) - At least makes this finish sound into normal one. It's not consistant with your finish sound at the kiai. done

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [Saten].osu

ok updated :3

For all maps, make the hitsounds audible when the note is clicked. Doesn't need to be too loud but it provides helpful feedback to the players and its rather disorienting without them.

Also 00:06:884 - kiai?

[Easy]
Map is very correct and vaguely interesting, some hitsounds would be nice to make it more interesting

[Normal]
*-* boooooooobs

[Hard]
00:47:926 (2) - reverse selection
01:16:259 (3,4) - doesn't feel like it follows the music

[Taiko Oni]
First time modding a taiko map, so bear with me
00:00:218 (1,2) - too early in the mp3, the players have no context to hit these
00:14:488 (4) - clap feels awkward here, maybe put it on 3 instead
00:21:988 (29) - this seems like a weird place for a clap
00:29:176 (32,33) - maybe repeat this pair of claps on 00:29:593 (36,37)?
00:55:634 (42) - clap feels out of place
01:07:822 (25) - ^, maybe put claps on 24 and 26 instead?
01:09:488 (35) - ^

[D.N.Angel]
00:01:051 (6) - not so soon on the jumps please, build up expectations for them first
00:47:926 (3) - the placement of this bothers me and I can't figure out why
00:50:842 (2) - why not just move 2 farther away from 1 to make the next spacing more obvious?
01:21:259 (5) - you are EVIL. EVIL i say.

[Saten]
First of if you are trying to reference Satan the enemy of God and all that, you spelled it wrong
00:05:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if you could use inheriting timing sections to make the notes gradually louder on this stream that would be EPIC
00:16:676 (1,2,3,4,1) - not entirely sure the purpose of this deathstream
00:33:551 (1) - try a finish instead of a whistle on the start
01:26:468 (5) - partially hidden by combobursts. Why not just continue the curvy pattern you had going? It was pretty :<

Overall, as I said, the higher difficulties are well-done but the lower ones tend to feel uninteresting despite their cleanliness and coherence.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:01:051 (6) - not so soon on the jumps please, build up expectations for them first //hmm...I feel the jump should be here,I want to keep this pattern
00:47:926 (3) - the placement of this bothers me and I can't figure out why //no change because I like this part lol
00:50:842 (2) - why not just move 2 farther away from 1 to make the next spacing more obvious? //It is to be consistent
01:21:259 (5) - you are EVIL. EVIL i say. //T.T,I like this kind of overlap

thank for modding ~

Hi ~ -Sekai- chan ~

Let me Re mod this map ~ I like this song soo much :3



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions






That's all ~ Cool mapset and Nice song !!!

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Changes from Saturos & Rika

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

First of if you are trying to reference Satan the enemy of God and all that, you spelled it wrong

lol..

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [Saten].osu

fixed everything in Rika's mod and updated Saten's Diff, just waiting for DNA's Fixes :3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[D.N Angel]

1. 00:33:551 - Remove clap,sound bette to me.
2. 00:36:884 - ^
3. 00:46:884 - ^
4. 00:50:218 - ^
5. 01:14:592 (7) - Add new combo.

all fixed
thank for modding ~
NC那個主意真好啊lol

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [D.N.Angel].osu

ok updated :3

[Easy]

AR -1 would be much better.

[Normal]

HP Drain +1 would be much better.

Just these 2 small fixes and I can rank ^^

EDIT: Ranked~

Gratz~ Sekai~ ><

Thanks Andrea and Rika >w</

Ome~

Gratz!! Sekai~

baka sekai =w=
grats ~

Sekai moe gratz :3

thanks everyone >A</

omedeto~~ moe Sekai=w=/

gratz~

gratz! sekai chan!

congratz!

Congratulations moe Sekai \>w \<

Congrats~>3<//

Gratz~

cratz Sekai-nyan

Wow, another ranked map by moe Sekai <3
Congratz~

Miya wrote:

Wow, another ranked map by moe Sekai <3
Congratz~

NOT MOE.

That was fast.


but still congrats,not-moe but loli sekai

lol thanks Heat and Miya and everyone for supporting me >A<////

weeeeeeee~

Yaaaaaay!

Gratz Sekaii! ♥

Congratz~

congrats!