[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi Vile Sorry for Delay >.<

General

1. ~

Easy

1. 00:28:418 (3) - Add a clap at the end of the slider, it keeps the consistency at hitsounds Done . Good call.
2. 00:32:255 (1) - Add clap in the reverse arrow, Same reason as above I split that slider into two parts that end on red ticks. This is no longer an option.
3. 00:35:395 (2) - Add a clap, ^ Done
4. 00:46:558 (x) - Move the break over there, i think it fits because the instrumental changes in that part I don't want to map that part.
5. 02:10:627 (2) - Add clap at the end, 02:11:325 (3) remove the clap and 02:11:674 (4) add clap, to keep the consistency at hitsounds and doesn't sounds uncoordinated Fixed.
6. 02:15:511 (1) - Add a finish at the begin, it follows the rhythm of the song Fixed
7. 02:52:139 (2) - Add clap to keep the consistency at hitsounds Fixed

Normal

• I Don't know why but i think that you have to keep some consistency at hitsounds whit the other difficults I do not.

1. 00:42:720 (6) - IMO Add a NC there to avoid this high combo 00:43:418 (8) in a normal difficult its too high It's not so high.
2. 00:46:558 (x) - Move the break over there, i think it fits because the instrumental changes in that part -
3. 01:08:534 (1) - Add a finish, it perfectly works whit the instrumental Oh derp how did I miss that.
4. 01:30:860 (1) - Add finish at the begin, same reason as above ^
5. 02:15:511 (1) - Add a finish, ^ ^
6. 02:40:976 (1) - IMO can confuse a little bit this spacing change, considering to fix itFixed
7. 02:42:371 (5) - ^ Reduced snap to 1.17. also changed combo to indicate spacing change.
8. 02:43:767 (1) - ^ ^
9. 02:51:092 (6) - Add a clap in the second reverse arrow to keep the consistency at hitsounds I'll pass.

Hard

1. 00:45:162 (2) - To be consistents add a clap at the begin, and remove it at the end (Also 00:45:685 (3) Add a clap in the reverse arrow) I'll pass. I like it the way it is now.
2. 00:46:558 (x) - Move the break over there, i think it fits because the instrumental changes in that part -
3. 01:03:302 (1) - Add clap at the begin to keep the consistency at hitsounds I guess so.
4. 01:27:023 (2) - Move this note to the center, to be more symmetric I can't. The angle doesn't work. The part after was slightly misaligned and that is fixed.
5. 01:34:697 (4) - 1 grid down, so 01:34:348 (2) will look like a mirror Done
6. 02:10:976 (3) - Add clap at the begin (or replace the whistle by a clap) to keep the consistency at hitsounds I don't want to keep it consistent here.
7. 02:15:511 (1) - Add finish at the begin, it follows the instrumental of the song I like soft whistle better. Done. Also made the hitsounds more consistent through here. It's all fixed.
8. 02:20:744 (1) - Consider removing that NC and adding it into 02:21:092 (2) because IMO follows better the vocals After some consideration, I fixed.
9. 02:47:604 (4) - Add a clap at the end and 02:48:651 (6) add a clap at the begin, to keep the consistency at hitsounds I'll pass. It sounds better without hitsounds.

Insane

1. 00:20:744 (2) - Add a clap at the begin to keep the consistency at hitsounds No. I want to keep my repeat slider largely hitsoundless.
2. 00:22:837 (3) - Add clap, Same reason as above I don't want hitsounds in this combo.
3. 00:23:534 (7) - Add clap, ^ ^
4. 00:46:558 (x) - Move the break over there, i think it fits because the instrumental changes in that part -
5. 00:57:371 (1) - Add a finish there and 00:57:546 (2) remove whistle, follows better the song Yes and no.
6. 01:32:255 (5) - Add a NC there, it feels good there If I did that, it would be inconsistent with all my other combos through here.
7. 01:35:220 (6) - Add a clap in the reverse arrow and 01:35:744 (7) remove clap at the begin, 01:36:092 (8) Add clap in the begin, to keep the consistency Done
8. 01:42:371 (1) - Add a clap at the begin, to keep the consistency at hitsounds Sounds better without one.
9. 01:44:116 (7) - A NC there will follow the vocals No.
10. 01:49:784 (8) - I think that this note doesn't really follow the Instrumental and the vocals so delete it Definitely a beat there , no change.
11. 01:50:395 (2) - Add a finish at the begin, it sounds good whit the instrumental No. I don't want a finish there. It would ruin forward momentum.
12. 02:15:511 (1) - ^ Sounds better without one.
13. 02:40:278 (5) - Add a clap to keep the consistency at hitsounds No. I don't think that will work.
14. 02:48:999 (1) - Add a finish at the begin to follow the instrumental Done

Harder

1. I have just one thing to say in this difficult, why this difficult appears After Insane ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404058 Good question. I have no idea.

Really nice overall, disliked some random claps in the song but its you're style

Good Luck ! And Star !

Lizbeth wrote:

Re-checking~

[Insane]
03:22:281 (3,4,1) - I dont know why the different spacing here I don't know where this part you're referring to is.
02:09:232 (5) - maybe a new combo here Done

[Hard]
00:27:546 (3,4,5,6,7) - Why the spacing is bigger here? It's less cluttered at a larger spacing and I felt it played well.
02:25:191 (4) - following the vocals here? was really awkward to play, I recommed to follow the music. I'd rather not. It feels natural to me, and there's a beat on both of those ticks.

[Easy]
01:59:290 (2) - move backward to prev white tick and extend by 1/2 beat. I think it sounds and plays better. It feels rushed there IMO. I decided to change the beat in a different and more identifiable way. It's a nice change of pace from the previous rhythm.

Nice, this have improve a lot, good job.

Lizbeth wrote:

re-checking

[Insane]
00:25:627 (5,6,7) - This was the part i was refering in Insane, sorry must have copy time wrong. The spacing is different, you might want to move 6 a bit down to make 5 and 7 equidistant to 6. I'm not sure I want to mess with this. I made the spacing like this, because equidistant played badly for me. Okay after testing each pattern multiple time, I think my current design is optimal. When the spacing is the same through here, I find it sort of lulls me into a certain pace. But when I have the jump into a 1.0 section. The slight slowdown requires you to speed up for the 1.2 part, and then that removes the lull of having too many 1.2 spaced notes before a jump. I just feel I can hit the jump better the way I have it, because the spacing kind of indicates the beat a little more. I don't know if others feel the same way as I do on this but my testing is indicating that my jump after that part is more intuitive when I change spacing mid combo.
01:20:278 (2,3) - This should be a bit closer together. I agree.

[Hard]
00:27:546 (3,4,5,6,7) - Answering to your the response of my mod, Why only in this part? Well that's the only part I map that way. In all the next parts that have that verse, I map with more notes and are a bit streamy. This is the only part where I map it jumpy. Anyways I made some slight tweaks to 6,7. but I think the spacing is perfect for the jumps.
missing a sound here:02:25:278 and here: 02:25:511 - I think you should remove the slider and add two sliders from 02:25:162 to 02:25:278 and from 02:25:511 to 02:25:627. Right now is awkward to play in my opinion. Fine. Done. It didn't really matter IMO.

KuronumaSawako wrote:

M4M request (sorry for delay, very busy these days)

[General]

1. Clear

[Easy]

1. 01:59:813 (3): End this in white tick sounds better for me

I wanted to end on the vocal here.

1. 02:42:720 (2): Move this to x:280 y:336

My way works just fine IMO.

Awesome *--*

[Normal]

1. 00:40:976 (1,2,3,4): Try this:
   
   SPOILER

   

I wanted to change the rhythm here.

1. 01:04:340 (4,5): I think this will confuse some normal players...try make a pattern more easier, something like this, it's up to you change or not:
   
   SPOILER

   

That would severely ruin the next pattern.

1. 02:28:069 (2): Move slider third point to x:256 y:24

I changed slightly. It has to lean a bit forward to maintain the blanket.

Other three diffs looks fine for me.

Good luck in ranking!

Leorda wrote:

Sorry for delay due to connection


[Easy]
01:27:720 (5) - Perhaps new combo here? Yes
02:38:185 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/426368 Fine, it's green now.
02:47:255 (1) - Add clap? You seems forgot, didn't ya? No. Clap sounds terrible there.
02:48:651 (3) - ^^
02:53:534 (1) - ^ I don't want to
02:54:232 (3) - ^ ^


[Normal]
00:20:395 (6) - Move to X:140 and Y:200 for better flow and pattern? Remapped this.
00:23:883 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/426368 Fine
01:04:348 (4,5) - Having (5) is stack at head slider, it makes me feels that this slider has a repeating slider on it. Perhaps, remove (5) and add 1 repeating slider for (4)? Tried what you said and I don't like it. It creates too much sliding going into the next too sliders. That extra click makes all the difference.
02:42:371 (1) - Spacing issue here... or it's intentional? Intentional
02:51:092 (6) - Add clap at 2nd repeating slider? Done


[Hard]
00:36:790 (2) - This distance to previous notes are different compare to 00:37:139 (3,4,5). You might want to make a jump pattern or fix the spacing 2,3,4,5 is a rhythm group, and one is just the start of the measure. So I could have easily have changed combo on 2, but I wanted to maintain the measure starts.
02:10:976 (3) - Why whistle at head slider? It suppose having a clap instead whistle.... No reason... to change things up? anyways changed.


[Insane]
00:25:976 (7) - This distance spacing should 1.4x to avoiding for surprising short spacing I don't want all 1.3 snap, because that doesn't give me any adjustment period to hit the jump after. It's not surprising at least to me it's not. It plays very naturally.


[Harder]
01:40:627 (4) - Add clap at tail slider
01:41:499 (7) - Add clap at repeating slider Fine ^^^


Good luck then

merara wrote:

Easy
00:32:255(1) ~ 00:33:651(2)
Too long, no way to fit them in the place I have to work with. Sorry

02:51:092(1) - bad sliderImproved the blanket, changed the note positions after it.

Normal

00:20:395(5) - Use the same slider as 00:18:999(2) Remapped with a much cleaner pattern.
00:31:209(3) - Use the same slider as 00:30:511(2) I can't maintain distance snap and symmetry if I did this.
00:38:883(3) - Use the same slider as 00:36:790(4) I don't really notice a difference.
02:33:302 - Add note No. It's to change up the beat and pattern.
02:36:092 - ^ Gap is to emphasize the next measure.
02:50:395 - ^ Are you trying to make my difficulty dull and boring? If I followed the beat without gaps, it would just be the same repetitive rhythm over and over.
02:53:185 - ^ Done for emphasis

Insane

02:05:744(4) - Use the same slider as 02:05:395(3) Angle is intentional. 3, curve is too flat for a perfect transition.

Here

240,136,13767,2,0,B|340:88|428:156,1,200,8|0

That's all, good luck!

giO- wrote:

Hello, M4M~

Easy

00:22:488 (1) - delete the repeat and make it finish on the white tick, http://puu.sh/16acL adding another slider here: 00:23:185 - http://puu.sh/16ad8 , it sound better I'll keep my pattern.
00:32:255 (1,2) - finish both of them on white tick, sound weird on the red tick http://puu.sh/16agt Sounds alright to me. I would like to keep, because reducing would interfere with my pattern.
02:03:651 (2) - move this on x:504 y:336 Okay ._.
02:48:651 (3) - add clap here I'll pass
02:54:232 (3) - ^ ^

Normal

00:13:767 (2) - fix the slider shape, use this code and overwrite the 2nd line on the [HitObject]

Here

240,136,13767,2,0,B|340:88|428:156,1,200,8|0

Alright
00:15:162 (4) - clap Fine
00:40:976 (1) - this one don't fit properly with the music It's the same sounds that the other similar looking sliders are mapped to.
00:41:499 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - consider to change something here, in particular those 2 beats seems a bit off 00:41:499 (2,3) - ,try to delete them adding beat here: 00:41:674 - , result: http://puu.sh/16atx , just make longer previous slider 00:40:976 (1) - No.
00:58:767 (4,5) - try to unstack them? No good reason to change this. Plus it complements the edge of this http://puu.sh/16boc
01:05:046 (5) - maybe unstacked No.
01:07:313 (3) - delete? sound weird Meh I want to keep.
01:54:058 (3) - ^ No

Hard

00:27:546 (3,4,5) - fix the spacing like previous beats, use Distance Snap 1x I'll pass. I want it at a larger spacing.
00:28:941 (6,7) - ^ ^
01:06:790 - add beat and clap here No. i'm following a more interesting beat here. Actually my current beat is easier to play than the one you're trying to make me follow.
01:07:139 (5) - delete clap here, sound better It's part of the hitsound pattern I have here 01:07:139 (5,6,7,8) - . Instead of having claps on all four notes, I just had claps on 3 to avoid spam. I'm not changing it as it is a proper hitsounding for this part of the song.
01:33:302 (10) - remove 2 repeats and add beat here 01:33:651 - I feel there is no need. I'd rather keep my slider.
02:15:511 (1) - delete one point from this slider and make it better http://puu.sh/16aEE and move on x:304 y:328 Done. i'm going to fix the curve of the next slider too
02:47:255 - add beat and clap here Yes. I agree.
02:59:639 (4) - delete repeat and beat on 03:00:162 - I think a double repeat more accurately follows the beat.

Insane

00:17:953 (7,1,2) - remove this overlap, looks bad There is no overlap here.
00:38:709 (6,7,8,9) - this is not symmetrical, move: The main reason I have it like that is because the steepness of the other end is awkward to hit. I fixed the steepness on the right end to make it symmetrical and it looks better.

00:38:883 (7) - on x:320 y:80
00:39:057 (8) - on x:192 y:80
00:39:232 (9) - on x:160 y:192

00:40:627 (4,1) - almost overlapped It's fine.
00:40:976 (1) - some grid up?I don't understand how that would fix anything.
00:46:209 (11) - delete this, unneeded note Sorry, want to start the break after the measure start.
00:56:674 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - make something cool, stacked stream is a bit ugly Streams are overrated. I'll have streams later on in the song.
02:36:703 (2) - delete? Eww why?
02:40:278 (5) - clap? No. It would be distracting and unfitting.

Harder

AR +1? Surprisingly this plays a lot better.

00:38:185 (1) - add clap
00:38:360 (2) - delete this clap No. I'll keep what i have.
00:38:360 (2,3) - do them better http://puu.sh/16aRO Eh i'm kind of attached to my imperfect ones. i'll keep for now.
00:40:976 (1) - add clap
00:41:151 (2) - delete this clap No.
02:59:639 (4,5,6,7) - unstack? No. It looks bad unstacked.

finish to map this diff from 03:00:337 - to 03:22:488 - like other diffs insane is only mapped longer. I want to keep the other difficulties the same length.



That's all, good luck!

DarkDunskin wrote:

Here's your M4M~

I see the Star Rating is a bit off as it was actual intended.
So let's see if we can reduce it so it is a bit more fitting in Easy, Normal and Hard.

[General]

1. One Suggestion for nicer Hitsounds: Ask Onosakihito if you can use his snipping-sound from this Map.
   They would fit great here.
2. Why is Insane longer than the other Difficultys? Consider shortening it. If you do, also cut the Audiofile.
3. Why has Harder a higher Star Rating than Insane? Probably rename it to Insanest or Lunatic?

[Easy]

1. 00:32:255 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart. I guess so.
2. 00:32:255 (1,2) - Let them end on the white Tick. 1/1 is easier for new Players. For Aestetics purposes and really when dealing with gaps not 3/4th, that are greater than 1/1 are just as easy as 1/1.
3. 00:37:488 (6) - Replace with single Note on Sliderstart instead. That Splits everything a bit up and makes it indeed easier to get. I want to preserve the beat throughout my difficulties.
4. 00:43:069 (5) - ^ Same here. ^
5. 00:56:674 (2) - Remove the Repeat from this Slider. The Slider is too short for a Repeat in Easy, new Players won't get it this fast. Probably add claps on this one too. I agree, changing it required some considerable tweaks to this whole section though.
6. 01:35:744 (3) - Like mentioned above, better remove repeat from this one.Not changing
7. 01:59:813 (3) - I rly don't know where you always come up with this 1/3 rythm but if you want to keep this here, do a repeat on this Slider, that makes it easier. What 1/3rd rhythm?
8. 02:45:511 (5) - Remove Repeat, add a Note instead behind the Slider. I'll pass for right now. That would be harder.

A bit too hard for Easy, get rid of some Notes! It's hard to reduce notes without ruining how the song sounds. I can only do so much and some of it plays well enough to count as a fluid map and i'm not going to make things less fluid in the case of simplicity.

[Normal]

1. 00:23:883 (1) - Delete Note, Space between Spinner and Note seems a bit too short.I don't agree it was too short, it does play better with it removed.
2. 00:24:930 (3) - Better add a Repeat on this one and delete the following Slider. I want to avoid repeating on a red tick.
3. 00:40:976 (1,2,3,4) - This seems unfitting for a Normal. Probably the usual 1/2 Sliders would do better here? It's fine.
4. 00:56:674 (1) - One-Repeat slider would do it too here. Either Way, add some Claps here~ I don't think I need to do either.
5. 00:58:767 (4,5) - That Pattern is a bit confusing on Normal diffs. Move Slider (5) over Slider (4) to make the path easier. I'd rather not.
6. 01:13:767 (5) - Delete Note. Splitting everything a bit up for short breaks is good. I suggest to follow the Lyrics here. I have no plans of splitting up the beat here. so I must refuse.
7. 01:16:558 (4) - ^ Integrated part of my pattern- not removing.
8. 01:24:581 (5) - Replace with Single Note to follow the Lyric better. Don't want to.
9. 01:36:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This Rythm-Pattern may sound cool, but is no-go on Normal. Would fit better on Hard with higer SV and stuff. I thought about it and I've decided to change this, because it doesn't play like the rest of the difficulty.
10. 02:20:744 (5) - Delete Note. No
11. 02:23:534 (4) - ^ ^
12. 02:29:116 (4) - ^ / avoids stacking~ okay. I wanted stacks?
13. 02:33:302 - Add a Single Note here for consitency. At least fix spacing between (2) and (3). All of this is intentional. These in particular is to make a hitsound transition and add a build up into the next section. It's more apparent when playing with the video.
14. 02:36:092 - ^

Fix the Spacing, where I mentioned it. Rest is cool.

[Hard]

1. I'd prefer a higher Circle Size here, compared to Insane and Harder.I don't understand. They all use the same circle size.
2. 00:15:511 (1) - Replace with Single-Note at Sliderend to follow the Lyrics better. No? I don't see any reason to ruin the stream I have here. I following the beat... I don't care about the vocals.
3. 00:15:511 (1) - Either delete these to follow the Lyrics or add on Note at 01:13:999. You're not making any sense at all. ._.
4. 02:20:744 (7) - ^ I'm mapping it a little differently. What's your issue?
5. 02:23:534 (1) - Replace with Note at Sliderend. No.
6. 02:31:906 (10) - Delete Note. You're not giving me any reason why I should be doing these things.

That's all, actually liked the Hard~

[Insane]

1. 00:38:709 (6,7,8,9) - Nazi: These are not completely symmetrical. Copy & Paste and crtl+h (6,7) with grid Snap disabled to fix. I had to change it slightly due to the slider changing from inward to outward. Not worth fixing and pretty sure intentionally done to transition into 10 better.
2. 01:28:069 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing between this Notes is inconsistent here. Fix it with Distance Snap 1,8~1,9. 1.8 was only to gice enough space to make the pattern. I did not want to use 1.8 for the whole thing and would go beyond the pace for most of the song.
3. 01:56:325 (1) - Slider crosses Score-bar a bit, move it down. Doesn't bother me really.

Fine, fine.

[Harder]

1. 00:26:325 (8) - Slider crosses Life-bar, move it down somehow. It's not that noticeable. Don't really want to fix.

Okay all in all I'd suggest mapping closer to the Lyrics at the kiai's, especially in the easier Difficultys. ......
Fix the few Spacing issues and everything will be fine.
Good luck and have fun mapping!

Parachute wrote:

Hi, here the mod :3

Easy
01:59:813 (3) - This slider should end at the next white tick.. fits much better in my opinion Maybe. I rather like the size of that slider
02:57:023 (4) - Add finish and maybe delete the clap I'm not sure about the clap but the finish makes sense

Normal
Adjusted beat and removed annoying hitsounds during second kiai. Should sound a lot better

00:21:092 (1) - Add finish Nah
00:32:255 (1) - ^ ^
00:40:976 (1) - Add clap at beginning of the slider Sounds bad
00:42:023 (4) - Add clap ( or something else at this combo because it fits better with claps here) I'll pass
02:34:697 (5) - Remove clap Lowered volume instead
02:59:813 (5) - Add clap at the middle of the slider Added to start instead.

Hard
Fixed a loud hitsound volume

00:39:232 (1) - Would be better if this fits to the later spacing of this combo No. Intentional
00:42:023 (1) - ^ ^
00:45:685 (3) - Add clap at middle and end of the slider I'd rather not.
02:45:337 (6) - Remove clap No
02:46:209 (1) - ^ No
02:48:127 (6) - Add clap at the middle of that slider No
02:48:999 (1) - Add clap No

Insane

Overhauled 2nd kiai, and a particular obnoxious final stream. Greatly improved flow to both sections.

00:57:284 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Would be much better if you would change the whistles to claps on these notes Not changing. I like the whistles
01:04:697 (2,4) - ^ ^
01:21:441 (6) - Remove the clap at the end of this slider Nah i'll keep.
01:29:813 (5) - Add clap I am not adding a clap in the middle of a stream
02:36:790 (3) - ^ Nah
02:40:278 (5) - ^ No. it wouldn't work
02:45:860 (4) - ^ Soft part wouldn't work
02:59:290 (6) - ^ At the beginning of the slider No
02:59:988 (3) - ^ No

Harder
AR -1 Since it gives much less points then insane and insane is on AR 8 too Flow > points
01:03:302 (2) - Add clap Added
02:09:232 (7) - ^ Doesn't fit
02:31:790 (6) - hmm this slider is a bit weird in spacing maybe change it? I'll keep for now.


Nice map :3 Thanks

Saten wrote:

Hi M4M back

[General]
The BG is really small. Yeah I know the source isn't that big either (I looked at the creator's gallery on pixiv)
though this looks like a screencap I don't know the actual source. CardN'force got this better quality bg I have.

[Insane]
00:18:302 (1) - finish Done
00:32:255 (10) - ^ Doesn't sound like one to me
00:34:174 (7) - clap on start feels kinda weird Removed
00:39:930 (2) - normal clap fits better here imo, but changing it to normal also changes the whistle to normal though I have no plans for changing this
01:08:534 (1) - Finish, new stanza and the cymbal sound is in the background Done
01:29:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is clearly 1/3 You're absolutely right. Fixed
01:42:371 (1) - clap on start Done
01:50:395 (2) - finish on start I guess
01:52:837 (2) - clap instead of finish fits better imo Done
01:53:185 (4,2) - can you stack these properly, not really needed, but yeah Done
01:58:069 (2) - doesn't feel like this clap should be here replaced with whistle
01:58:069 (2,4,4,6) - nothing important either but these are not stacked properly Fixed
02:15:511 (1) - finish on start Done
02:36:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/3 Fixed.
02:40:017 (3) - this shouldn't be here, I hear nothing in the background. Also it's hard to go 1/4 after 1/2 slider and then if follows up with a stream. Removed. I had it there, because it didn't seem to play right. but I don't think it matters any more.
02:43:418 (1) - finish Fine
02:51:092 (3) - this should be a 1/4 either but easier than the previous thing Used to rebound the flow.
02:57:371 (9) - finish on start I guess
02:58:767 (5) - clap on end Done
02:59:813 (2) - clap Done
03:10:976 (5) - finish on end Done
03:17:953 (3,4) - clap on (4) instead That doesn't follow 2,4 rule

[Harder]
00:15:162 (8) - clap on start Added
00:32:255 (1) - finish on start Nah
00:36:790 (6) - normal clap fits better Done
00:37:488 (9) - ^ ^
00:38:185 (1,2) - clap on (1) instead No
00:39:581 (4) - normal clap Okay
00:40:976 (1,2) - clap on (1) instead No
00:42:895 (6) - normal clap instead Okay
00:43:767 (1) - clap on start Done
00:44:464 (3) - ^ Done
01:36:790 (2) - ^ I'd rather not.
01:42:023 (1) - finish on start Added
01:42:023 (1,2) - a clap does fit better on (1)'s end instead of (2)'s start imo Done
01:44:116 (7,8) - move the clap to the other slider instead Done
01:44:813 (1,2) - same as 01:42:023 (1,2) - Done
01:50:395 (1) - finish on start I guess so.
02:10:627 (3) - clap fits better on the end instead imo I guess
02:15:511 (1) - finish on start Done
02:31:790 (6) - this slider feels odd. Do something similar what you did on the previous part 01:24:581 - No. I'll keep it.
02:48:476 (4) - clap on end There is one- yes
02:51:092 (7) - add clap on 2nd repeat Added

[Hard]
00:18:302 (1) - finish on start Done
00:29:116 (7) - finish on end Done
00:35:744 (3,1,2,3) - is this spacing difference on purpose?
00:38:883 (4,1,2,3) - ^
00:41:674 (4,1,2,3) - ^ uh yeah, it seems like that lol Yes
01:06:790 - it actually feels weird that you're skipping this beat. Actually, this plays better imo http://puu.sh/1uMoZ I prefer it my way. It's following a particular beat and I didn't want to bring in beats that were not related to the one I was following.
02:05:395 - same here, it plays weird. Double, Double, Single is better than Double, Single, Double. No it isn't
02:20:046 (4,5,6) - for some reason, I thought this was 1/3 as well. The beat actually goes like this http://puu.sh/1uMil I'm aware of the beat, the way I have it is better.
02:54:930 (1) - clap Done
02:58:767 (1,2,3,4) - this is really confusing imo. Stacking like this after a spinner is not very friendly It's perfectly readable for me. I don't see a problem.

[Normal]
You should use AR 5. Plays smoother imo and less confusing stuff such as http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506067 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506068 I agree even though now it's 1 higher than I wanted. Oh well, I guess I chose the pace, so it's my fault it's 1 higher than I intended.
01:05:046 (5) - why hiding it under the previous slider? Because I want it under the slider :/ There are some parts I don't mind compromising on, but this area I'm declaring mapping style as a reason. I don't want to change.
02:13:069 (1,1) - this is pretty close actually I agree, but it sounds so much better like this. I guess I will change it if highly advised I do it for a bubble.
02:46:558 (1,1) - ^ ^

[Easy]
00:30:860 (3) - a slider like this looks better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506076 Touched it up.
00:32:255 (1,2) - odd, but I guess it's fine Any other possibility would be harder.
01:31:209 (2) - something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506077 Made it better
02:11:325 (3,4,5) - I think such patterns are messy because of the Approach Rate AR +1 although the easy players now have less of a window to hit it. I'll let the BATs decide whether they would rather have less reaction time or more overlapped approach circles.
02:47:604 (2) - do it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506078 Made it better
02:48:999 (1,2) - I personally wouldn't stack these if the there are more notes ahead I like this stack


That's most likely everything I have to say
Good luck

Combo1 : 249,149,49 
Combo2 : 250,227,67 
Combo3 : 83,247,222 
Combo4 : 249,113,160

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi.

[Song's Info]
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: Remove 'vocaloid', add 'vocaloid2' Vocaloid is not a source. I'll add both to tags I guess. some other mappers do that.

[General]
- I know that probably everybody has told you this but...cut the mp3 (even more, yes)?They have not....
- The placement for the kiai is really weird and kinda wrong imo, where you place it sounds more like a pre-chorus part of the song, you know, where the song goes slow and then the chorus comes which is the 'okotowari shimasu' part. I highly suggest you to change it. I know this will mess up a LOT of things ): I will fix.
- Two osb OMG! Delete one or all of them, quickly! Fine. there was only one .osb in my folder.
- Pretty colors, just a suggestion

Combo1 : 249,149,49 
Combo2 : 250,227,67 
Combo3 : 83,247,222 
Combo4 : 249,113,160

[Easy]
- The HP Drain is very low even for an Easy, +1 or +2 Done
- 01:33:999 This slider looks so lonely, better to delete the note after it and just add a repeat to it. Changed this part a bit. I filled the gap a different way.
- 01:36:092 Missing a clap? Note no longer exists
- 01:41:674 A whistle here would be lovely. I don't like it.
- 01:59:813 Switching from red to white ticks is a little tricky, why not just add a repeat to this slider? Extended the slider instead.
- 02:01:558 Why not do this? Including the combos, notes added, etc. http://puu.sh/1MBTw Not changing
- 02:37:488 Imo you should remove the clap. I don't agree. It sounds perfect there.

[Normal]
- 00:40:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Fun to play, but kinda long and lots of notes and...this is a Normal. I suggest to put a 1/1 slider on 00:40:976 then add a 1/2 slider with a repeat on 00:41:674. Not changing, I like the flow here.
- 00:45:337 I just thought maybe a slider that starts here to 00:45:860 will fit more. Happy with this, not changing.
- 01:05:395 (6,1) Spacing? Intentional spacing increase, but lowered it to 1.2 snap.
- 01:19:348 (5,1) ^ Fixed
- 01:57:023 I think it's better to keep the clap pattern here. I agree.
- 01:57:371 Remove the whistle here, keep a consistency with the whistle on 02:00:860 so you will only have whistles there and on 01:58:069, very consistent that way, uh. I'm keeping the rest of my whistles.
- 02:03:302 You should emphisize this part more, remove a repeat from this slider and move it to the next white tick then add a note on this spot with new combo. Done
- 02:08:534 (2,3) Exhange their places in the timeline? I don't really want to change my blanket here. Not changing.
- 02:17:953 Remove clap? Yes
- 02:18:999 If you're going to add claps like this it's better to make a pattern with them not just add them because well yes. Sometimes, sometimes. I had a pattern like that and I removed it. Now I removed the last remnants of it.
- 02:48:999 Some may say this is close to the spinner, too close. Change it if you want since it fits. I didn't give anymore room here, but I feel it flows better and makes more sense if the spinner ends on the long white tick instead, and the combos after start on the vocal, so I have it mapped like that now.
- 02:51:092 Some may say hard but it fits nicely, change if you want, I'm just poiting it out. I've been denying those people for a long time and I do not have any plans of giving in.

[Hard]
- I...am sorry but you need to change the slider speed of this difficulty, or I highly suggest this. This song is kinda fast so I was expecting a really happy and kinda fast difficulty here but while I tested it just felt really odd to have this speed.
- I went back to check the slider speed of Easy and Normal, only a very little tiny difference, BUT it's kinda different since both difficulties felt good while playing, maybe just MAYBE it would be better to change normal's sv to something like 1.10 or 1.20, just a normal suggestions. Both difficulties felt good while testing so that's good!
- 00:12:720 Imo a note here and a 1/1 slider on 00:13:069 then add a note on 00:13:592 and nice!
- 00:18:999 (2) Move it here.
- 00:30:860 A 1/1 slider here and another one on 00:31:558.
- 00:36:441 Try this http://puu.sh/1MCCX
- 00:38:135 Try this http://puu.sh/1MCFS
- 00:40:976 Try http://puu.sh/1MCII
- 00:43:766 Try http://puu.sh/1MCLC
- 00:57:720 (1,2) I have noticed that usually where you use these is where you can do so much more, according to my suggestions.
- 01:06:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) This just feels so weird while playing.
- 01:08:534 That's a lot of 1/1 action there.
- 01:14:115 Same as above.
- 01:33:301 Fits but...you only use it here? Odd.
- 01:52:836 Remove a repeat and add a note on the next blue and white ticks.
- 01:54:231 1/1 again? Do something more fun.
- 02:03:301 Like I said, such a cool part needs emphasis!
- 02:03:824 Perfect place for streams, or a repeat slider more likely.
- 02:04:696 You seem to like this a lot don't you?
- 02:05:569 (3,4) A LOT. Not that it's bad or anything but it's almost all the map imo sometimes...
- 02:59:987 How about a 1/4 repeat slider here to finish?

[Harder]
- WHY?! why would you make me mod that ^ if you had this perfect Hard here...uh?! I'm serious...delete that ^ and replace it with this one. I don't really feel like fixing the slider velocity, so fine.
- 00:57:720 New combo Done
- 01:03:127 Just a note here would be better imo. Not changing, it plays fine the way I have it.
- 02:03:302 Such a cool part, such a cool part...
- 02:59:988 Streams! Okay?
- Very nice difficulty! Clean and fun.

[Insane]
- 01:04:348 The pattern of claps and whistles you used here it's better than the whistle only pattern you used on 00:57:371. There are no claps in either pattern. I don't understand what you want.
- 02:59:988 Streams!
- Just like Harder, this difficulty is very good.

TheVileOne wrote:

I don't really want to add more difficulties. It's already a pain to get it modded.

kushu wrote:

hi! m4m from #modreqs
just a few of suggestions

Easy

01:58:767 i think is better a triple slider (http://puu.sh/2x9LT) ... to dont lose the sound on 01:59:116 I think it's alright to skip. It feels better.
02:01:906 maybe add a note here (?)... but using slider here 02:00:860 (http://puu.sh/2x9Q0) I'm not quite sure I understand your reasoning. I'm content with how it is now.
02:52:488 unstack this... is hard to new players read this properly It fits. I am not changing.

Normal

maybe add a spiner from 00:07:139 to 00:11:325 or more (?) I don't need a spinner there.
01:04:348 (4,5) - this maybe is hard to read for a new player, try to remake this part whit same bits but easier ^^ Reluctantly changed. the new hitburst behavior allows me to have an overlap pattern that doesn't look terrible.

insane

01:50:046 (1) - delete NC(?) Moved it to next tick
01:51:267 (4) - nc(?) That doesn't make sense.
02:58:592 (4,2) - stack it perfectly (?) Okay

well, i think in my noob modding head, insane diff is ok ^^

Hard

01:44:464 (8) - what happened with the triplets here? I'm keeping the patterns fresh.
02:36:616 - try to start a triplets stream here That doesn't make sense to me (it's 1/3rd)
02:40:278 - and with triplet here? I don't recall mapping triplets. I do not know why you keep wanting me to add them.

I hope I have been helpful

sorry for bad english

good job mapping, nice song ^^

good luck

my map for mod: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/81632 thx

LunarSakuya wrote:

General
I highly suggest all the diffs should end at the same time as Insane. Ending during the chorus just feels really imcomplete and there's no reason to not map the end. Not willing to make any more extreme changes to my mapset. I might consider removing the extra bit on Insane, but that's as far as I'll go. I wanted to end my difficulties earlier because I thought it ended better there. I had came to this conclusion after I mapped Insane. I have no desire to map another chorus.

Easy
00:32:255 (1,2) - Extend these to the white ticks. Catching the downbeat seems more natural and consistent for beginning players imo I've been stubborn for too long. Fixed
01:08:534 (1) - Clap on tail, hitsound consistency Fixed
01:36:790 (1) - this spinner didn't really sound right, I suggest you map this part out. If you want the spinner, I'd start it at 01:39:232 and end at 01:40:627 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/724215 Done but I was more happy with the long spinner, I might change it back.
02:25:278 (2,1) - Too far, stick with distance snap I disagree. The beginners have plenty of time to transition.
02:34:697 (1) - i suggest you start this on the downbeat on 02:35:046 No. I don't like having a gap in the beat there and I'm not breaking my consistent pattern to fill it with a note.
02:51:092 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note to indicate the new stanza; also finish on tail? I don't want to change the combo, because it will break the 4,4,4,4 consistency I was keeping. I don't want a 5,7,4 combo pattern. Added the finish though.
02:53:534 (1,3) - why not put claps on these Because I like the hitsound pattern the way I have it now, and don't want to change it.
02:54:930 (1,3) - ^ on the heads of these ^

Normal
I think you should put claps every downbeat, not every 2 downbeats in the beginning Filled in more of the beat.

00:40:976 (1,2,3,4) - Found this rhythm kinda out of place with the rest, i suggest you redo this; two 1/1 sliders would even be good ^^ No. I like this pattern and I'm not changing it.
00:56:674 (1) - nowadays you should probably avoid these multiple repeats in easier diffs I don't care. I do what fits not what's expected. It's easy enough to follow.
01:15:511 (3) - minor but you can try to blanket (1) by moving this up a bit~ I'll pass. I value the blanket here 01:15:511 (3,1) - more than the blanket there.
01:33:651 (1) - Finish on head, you had it in the other kiais Done
01:36:441 (1) - ^ ^
01:37:837 (4) - i think you could rotate this another way or something, doesnt look that neat with (1) imo Changed orientation- it looks better.
02:34:697 (5) - Delete clap Done
02:32:953 (2,3) - Spacing issue, move (2) towards the left to keep the symmetry of (1,3) It's a spacing flaw, but definitely not an issue. I don't understand your solution. Screenshots would help when you want me to radically redesign an intentional pattern structure.
02:35:744 (2,3) - Spacing ^^^ I have jumps here, because the speed that you follow the sliders with your cursor is more than enough speed to make it across the gap. I have to try to not make the gap. anyone who sees the approach circles can make it across with a reasonable margin of error.
02:42:371 (1) - Delete NC, refer to other kiais Done
02:51:092 (5) - Remap this note, not really feelin the repeats here and I don't really see this anywhere else I agree. Changed.
02:52:837 (3,4) - ^ 02:50:046 (3,4) - Ummm I wouldn't have fixed this, but the process of fixing the previous note required me to adjust 3 and so it's fixed.

Hard
00:32:255 (1) - Finish on head Done
00:38:360 (2) - Delete clap on head, put it on the previous note instead I've told idk how many modders that I prefer it the way I have it and I'm NOT changing this.
00:41:151 (2) - ^ ^
00:44:813 (1) - Map this part out please, i didn't hear this spinner following anything No. I like my spinner.
01:02:953 (1) - Finish on head? Done
01:36:790 (2) - Clap on head Fixed clap pattern here
01:46:209 (4) - drag this back to the red tick at 01:46:034 and then add something after it, the vocals dominant this part imo I want to map the beat. I blame the song for the vocal weirdness here and have no intentions on mapping the vocals here.
01:47:953 (1) - Clap Changed the clap pattern here, but it's not a complete pattern.
02:10:627 (3,4,5,6) - Equalize this spacing please, you could go for a diamond thing Diamond require a transition that is too steep into 4. It flows better and I like it better the way I have it now. It's not intended to be a symmetry pattern and the spacing doesn't need to be equal, and it is not noticeable that it isn't equal.
02:27:371 (3) - i think this could be placed neater so it's not awkwardly under (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/724322 or something Fixed.
02:54:930 (1) - again i think this spinner should start at 02:57:371 No.

Insane
ik the star rating system isn't perfect, but I find it strange that this star rating is significantly lower than Hard's, maybe play around with the difficulty settings I do not cater to the star rating system. peppy should fix the system. more notes, higher difficulty ratings, longer difficulty should equate to harder rating. It's not my fault that it doesn't.

00:12:720 (1) - Finish I don't know how I missed that. o.o
00:17:953 (7,1) - Spread these out, it's almost like an antijump which is unecessary Fixed.
00:22:837 (3,7) - Claps on these? No. Claps sound bad in streams and triples. I reluctantly added them to Hard. they sound bad in that difficulty as well.
00:25:627 (5,6,7) - Equalize this spacing please Oh fine, I'll do it.
00:32:255 (10) - Finish Done
01:07:488 (4,5) - Claps?Don't want claps.
01:21:441 (6) - Delete clap on tail Done- Cleaned up the clap patterns throughout this section.
01:36:092 (8) - Delete Finish on tail Done
01:39:406 (1) - maybe ending this on 01:40:627 would fit the song more? It might fit the song more, but I prefer ending it later instead of mapping after the spinner, before the next phrase starts.
01:44:464 (9) - Clap No.
02:09:058 - i think you should add something here, such as extending 02:08:883 (4) - into a 1/2 slider perhaps...unless you're following the instruments then ignore this i guess I was following the instruments, and I've looked into this, and there is no way that satisfies me to have a note here. It would interrupt the symmetry and doesn't follow the main beat.
02:36:441 (1) - Why not split these into 2 notes like the other 1/3 stream Done
02:40:278 (4) - Clap Done
02:42:023 (1) - Ctrl + G, provides more challenge and looks like a great place to put it Done
02:45:337 (2) - try this for better cursor flow? Did something similar.
02:47:604 (3,6) - Claps Only adding to 3.
02:51:790 (1) - Finish on head Done
02:57:371 (9) - NC, delete NC on next note It's actually more consistent with how I set my combos to keep it the way it is. But i'll fix the rest of my combos so I can fix this.
03:00:162 (4) - you can definitely map out this break imo; again, i think "ending" during the chorus is kinda off Fine. Mapped
03:08:534 (12) - Finish i think Sure.
03:08:883 (1) - Clap on here instead of (2), hear bg music Sounds bad.
03:09:930 (1) - Clap on tail Done and fixed clap pattern.
03:14:116 (2) - Finish on head? Done
03:15:511 (6,1) - Space these apart if you're following the instruments (the extension in the vocals might make players go immediately to 03:15:860 (1) - but not it's too bad lol) Changed to 1.3 snap.
03:16:558 (4) - Clap on head Added
03:17:255 (1) - Clap ^

Cute & nice map!!
I would just double-check every diff for hitsound consistency~ I don't know how consistent they actually are, but they are more consistent than they were.