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eikkaleyd
I love this song and really nice map <333 star~
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ hoLysoup ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. 加个AudioLeadIn : 500,有点短现在.

[Insane]


  1. 01:32:851 (2) - 把这个转过来会好看.

[Hard]


  1. AR+1吧,6实在太慢了.
  2. 00:06:764 - 没用的绿线,删.
  3. 00:07:417 - ^
  4. 00:15:460 - ^
    除了I难度其他都删.

That's all ~ 大哥哥的图真没什么好挑的 ~ 送星 ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~
y u c a
osokunatta gomen TA T

Easy

01:29:156~Break - tabun clap need here
02:01:764 (1) - remove finish?

Normal

00:15:678 (1) - finish wasureta?

Hard

00:13:069 (3) - use normal hitsound
00:13:938 (4) - ^
00:40:895 (x) - add note
00:42:951 (x) - add note?

insane

00:12:851 (5~) - kore?
SPOILER
00:13:069 (6),00:13:038 (8) use normal sound
01:31:982 (1) - kore?
01:59:156 (4) - try kore? if you like

見るとこないよヾ(*`Д´*)ノがんばれー!!
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
>Rika, yuca
<3
Thank you for modding :>

eikkaleyd wrote:

I love this song and really nice map <333 star~
Thanks for star!
Hinsvar
Oh hi.

Let's mod now ;)

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Everything looks fine on the block.
  2. Place the preview time at 02:06:982?
>Easy
  1. 00:07:417 - I don't think that this inherited timing section is used. If I'm correct, remove please.
  2. 00:15:460 - ^
  3. 00:28:069 - ^
>Normal
  1. 00:07:417 - Same as Easy.
  2. 00:15:460 - ^
  3. 00:28:069 - ^
  4. 01:19:156 (6) - What about if you follow the vocal here and lengthen the slider to 01:19:808?
>Hard
  1. 01:38:286 (2) - Make this a 1/8 slider?
  2. The Whistles at the kiai time sound strange. Tone down them?
>Insane
  1. Same as Hard about the Whistles in kiai time.
Okay, just that. Hope that helps.

Good luck on the way 8-)
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

  1. tiny offest suggestion: 1767 maybe better
[*]01:07:201 - I don't like this point, Idk if it's deliberate design or a mixing error. this distortion really really doesn't fit the song.

Easy

00:05:241 (1) - NC, since this is the beginning of a new bar

Normal

sliderslide doesn't sound good
00:29:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - If i were you, I may use more curved sliders
02:31:332 (1,2,3,4) - yes, these right angles, I just to remind you non-straight slider will play better under this song's atmosphere

Hard


00:12:199 (2) - umm, SV changes so suddenly, may use NC
01:04:373 (5) - delete this note or move it to 01:04:264 (5) -
use more N-whistles, and enlarge the volume

Insane

00:06:982 (4) - http://puu.sh/ls2Z
02:06:982 (1) - yes, you may begin to use N-whistle here

diff spread

I was expecting a harder Insane but it's actually not that hard.
as a result the difficulty gap between your 4 diffs seems kinda obscure
anyways this map is good

goodluck
Topic Starter
hoLysoup

LKs wrote:

General

  1. tiny offest suggestion: 1767 maybe better
恩.. 其實我覺得沒差多少.. 所以先不改
[*]01:07:201 - I don't like this point, Idk if it's deliberate design or a mixing error. this distortion really really doesn't fit the song.
恩.. 是歌的一部分 我並沒有動. 其實聽多了會習慣的 剛開始很奇怪沒錯
Easy

00:05:241 (1) - NC, since this is the beginning of a new bar ok

Normal

sliderslide doesn't sound good 是指哪一個? normal sliderslide?
00:29:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - If i were you, I may use more curved sliders 恩 我選擇用直的是因為比較簡單
02:31:332 (1,2,3,4) - yes, these right angles, I just to remind you non-straight slider will play better under this song's atmosphere
同上.. 可是我還是改了一點
Hard

00:12:199 (2) - umm, SV changes so suddenly, may use NC 修好了
01:04:373 (5) - delete this note or move it to 01:04:264 (5) - 不要.. 現在這樣比較簡單
use more N-whistles, and enlarge the volume

Insane

00:06:982 (4) - http://puu.sh/ls2Z 恩.. 其實還好
02:06:982 (1) - yes, you may begin to use N-whistle here 我覺得N-whistle加在結尾的kiai更好所以這樣做的

diff spread

I was expecting a harder Insane but it's actually not that hard.
as a result the difficulty gap between your 4 diffs seems kinda obscure
anyways this map is good
對啊.. 其實這是比較簡單的insane. 因為我的hard裡面沒有連打, 所以insane裡面才有更大的跳+連打. 我覺得夠難了.. 沒有必要做到可怕的難
goodluck
LKs thank you :>
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

看了Hard和Insane, note有些集中在中间,这样感觉比较纠结

[Hard]

00:31:764 (5) - 和00:30:460 (2)的尾重叠怎么样
01:22:199 (5,6,7) - 每个单独ctrl r一下
02:13:069 (5) - body whistle不好听
02:18:286 (1) - ^
02:19:156 (4) - ^
02:32:199 (3) - ^
02:33:938 (3) - ^

[Insane]

00:32:851 (7,8) - 因为被前面遮住了,所以感觉用三连好一些
00:42:308 (3) - 感觉应该往前移1/4拍
01:01:330 (3) - 三分音体现一下吧: http://puu.sh/lQLH
02:33:938 (4) - body whistle删掉

That's all I can find. GL~
those
From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Add "Saigyouji" to tags, after "Yuyuko".
As for all Touhou maps, I'd suggest "ZUN", and the game name in the tags as well. I believe it's "Perfect Cherry Blossom".

[Easy]
01:34:808 (2,3,4) - Try x:184 y:136 to make (1,2,3) look better

[Normal]
-

[Hard]
01:15:243 (2) - Offgrid this to stack better?

[Insane]
00:43:830 (2,3) - Offgrid these to stack better?
02:19:156 (3,4,5) - Spacing didn't feel right. Start the stream a little closer to 4 to match the spacing of (3,4)

Good luck :3
Melophobia
Hi!

[General]
it would be better to add a muted sliderslide2 i think
Maybe enable display epilepsy warning

00:19:156 ~ 00:28:286 - why not use normal hitsound in Easy, Hard, Insane like used in Normal diff ?

[Easy]
00:01:765 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:12:199 (2) - newcombo
01:06:112 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:21:764 (2) - ^
01:38:286 (4) - i dont think this clap is neccesary since the back music suddenly disappear
02:05:243 (3) - newcombo?

[Normal]
00:01:765 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:12:199 (3) - newcombo
00:19:156 (3) - ^
00:43:504 (3,1) - switch newcombos because of a downbeat
01:24:373 - lower volume here?
01:38:286 (2) - same as Easy
02:20:460 (1,3) - switch newcombos
02:33:069 (3) - make symmetrical

[Hard]
00:01:765 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:10:243 (3) - something like this to follow the music?
http://puu.sh/mA6L
01:21:764 (4) - newcombo?
01:24:373 - same as Normal
00:56:982 (5) - maybe 1/6 is better here
02:12:199 (3) - newcombo
02:17:417 (5,1) - switch newcombos like 02:31:330 (1) -
02:19:156 (4) - same reason as above, maybe add a newcombo here

[Insane]
00:12:851 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/mAgh ? :3
00:43:504 (1,2,3) - re-stack
01:18:721 (10) - newcombo for a slow down slider?
01:24:373 (3) - lower volume here?
01:38:286 (10) - maybe 1/6 ?
02:17:417 (8,1) - switch newcombos

nice map!!
Topic Starter
hoLysoup

Melophobia wrote:

mod~
melophobiA! :D
All fixed!! except:
[Hard]
00:10:243 (3) - something like this to follow the music?
http://puu.sh/mA6L
because I want to keep the beginning very simple. only sliders~

thank you めろ<3
:>
Mitsuneko
Here's my mod

Easy

00:12:199(1) Remove NC
00:35:243(1) ^
00:36:982(2) NC
00:50:025(1) Remove NC
00:52:634(2) NC
01:23:069(3) Move this slider to 01:23:504 and take out that repeat. I think it sounds better.
01:38:286(3) (Nazi) Align with 3, like this- 02:03:504(1) Spacing

Normal

AR 4
00:15:243(x) Add note?
00:17:417(2) Spacing
00:19:156(3) ^
00:20:895(4) ^
00:22:634(1) ^
00:24:373(2) ^
You know what, to avoid a bunch of spacing mod, there's a lot of spacing that's off,but I guess it ends at 00:28:721

I guess Hard and Insane are ok. GL~
[Luxord]
Hello! Mod request from My Queue

Insane
00:55:569 - Go the slider to the next line and put a 2nd circle between
01:37:743 - use 1/8 and put circle to blue, yellow, white line after the slider[01:37:199 (7)](suggestion)

Hard
Perfect!

Normal
01:19:156 (6) - Extend this slider by 1 line in 1/2
02:34:373 - Move this slider to [02:34:156] and add a circle at [02:34:808]

Easy
Perfect!

Good luck with your map! Deserves rank in my opinion :3 Im also gonna shoot a star :3
Leorda
Holy Soup it's ENS!!!

[General]
* Add "kirin" into tags, because he is arrange of this song


[Easy]
01:23:069 (3) - Clap for this slider?


[Normal]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems bit slow

00:15:243 - Add note here? It feels empty for me
01:19:156 (6) - Add 1 repeating slider? You seems forgot it
02:21:764 (2) - The head slider is almost touch HP Bar (just a warning)


[Hard]
00:17:417 (2) - Make a same slider as 00:15:678 (1) for better rhythm
01:19:156 (1) - Extend this slider to red tick for following vocal
01:25:243 (1) - Whistle are useless here


[Insane]
00:34:699 (5,6) - Remove (5) and move (6) to blue tick?


Bye now
Frostmourne
Hi , from my queue

Easy
00:41:764 (2) - tiny grid is always good for me though , I think moving to x:124 y:208 is better. It makes more balancing the distance between (1) and (1) (the current is (2) touched (1) looks not clear)
01:06:112 (1) - spacing from last note , I'm not sure it's fine or not. 0.68?
02:24:373 (1) - move tail 1 grid left (tiny), the reason is still same , more balancing and good looking , I compare with 02:25:243 (2,3) -

Normal
00:29:156 (4) - 1 grid right (small) , current spacing is not good

Hard
01:11:330 (1) - finish at the start, I think you forgot cuz you add at 01:21:764 (1) - , for consistency..

Insane
Why don't be "Lunatic :<"
01:18:721 (1) - personally , end this note with volume 30% makes it better (I didn't mention in other diff , fix other diff if you choose to fix in this diff)
01:21:764 (4) - new combo ? looks good to new combo for me
02:17:851 (2) - add whistle at the end
02:18:504 (3) - add whistle at the start and remove clap (or not) these 2 whistle combine very well imo , like this 02:26:112 (1,2) -

Nice mapset ! as always , need to shoot star :D

Good luck for ranking !
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
>Frostmourne
Thanks! all done~
Wreath


sorry for late
cuz i has overseas travel :?

hi, hoLysoup :oops:
thx for request

[General]
  1. not same Kiai Time

    Lunatic
    Starts on 02:06:982 ends on 02:20:460

    Other diffs

    Starts on 02:06:982 ends on 02:20:786
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:39:156 (1,2,3) - distance is not so good, many ppl cant first play this. i hope fix this
[Hard]
  1. 02:18:069 - add note
  2. 02:31:982 - ^
[Normal]
  1. Fine
[Easy]
  1. Nothing to say
really good map :)
star~☆
good luck :oops:
Lizbeth
Hi~

02:06:547 - SB load goes over 5 here, you have to lighten it to avoid that.

[Lunatic]
00:39:156 (1,2,3) - This threw me off while playing, I think you should make it more readable, maybe swapping these two 00:39:482 (2,3) -

[Hard]
02:17:851 (2) - I think you should unstack from slider end, was confusing to play, but this is just a suggestion. Same for the others like this.

[Easy]
I think you should use more single notes.

That's all for now, lovely mapset.
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ hoLysoup ~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]


  1. 00:26:764 (5) - End to 00:27:199 and Add a circle on 00:27:417.
  2. 02:20:786 - Change kiai time end point to here,same as other diff.

[Hard]


  1. AR+1 much better with play.

That's all ~ Pretty nice map and song ~ good job ~!

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
Wreath

Wreath wrote:



sorry for late
cuz i has overseas travel :?
:D! US no hou ga ii?? :>!
hi, hoLysoup :oops:
thx for request

[General]
  1. not same Kiai Time

    Lunatic
    Starts on 02:06:982 ends on 02:20:460

    Other diffs

    Starts on 02:06:982 ends on 02:20:786
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:39:156 (1,2,3) - distance is not so good, many ppl cant first play this. i hope fix this
[Hard]
  1. 02:18:069 - add note
  2. 02:31:982 - ^
[Normal]
  1. Fine
[Easy]
  1. Nothing to say
really good map :)
star~☆
good luck :oops:
fixed some~
Thanks Wreath!!
Lizbeth

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi~

02:06:547 - SB load goes over 5 here, you have to lighten it to avoid that. removed SB HEHEH!

[Lunatic]
00:39:156 (1,2,3) - This threw me off while playing, I think you should make it more readable, maybe swapping these two 00:39:482 (2,3) -
I think this is actually pretty fine
[Hard]
02:17:851 (2) - I think you should unstack from slider end, was confusing to play, but this is just a suggestion. Same for the others like this.
this one too!
[Easy]
I think you should use more single notes.
meh.. don't really feel the difference here
That's all for now, lovely mapset.
Thanks!!
Rika<3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ hoLysoup ~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]


  1. 00:26:764 (5) - End to 00:27:199 and Add a circle on 00:27:417.
  2. 02:20:786 - Change kiai time end point to here,same as other diff.

[Hard]


  1. AR+1 much better with play.

That's all ~ Pretty nice map and song ~ good job ~!

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
All fixed! :>
Roddie
General
  1. I believe the song's title is incorrect. It should be Oueisaien, not Quei Saien. Here'e proof.
Easy
  1. 01:32:199-Consider adding a new combo here. The way I see it, a new combo here seems fitting enough. If you do that, remove new combo from the next slider.
  2. 01:36:112-Add a new combo here perhaps?
  3. 01:53:069 (1)-Forgot to add a finish?
  4. 02:04:373 (2)-On Easy difficulties, it's not a good idea to have this note be stacked. It would be best to move this object to a different spot.
  5. 02:13:938 (1)-Forgot to add a finish?
Normal
  1. 01:10:895 (3)-Forgot to add a finish on the end, huh?
  2. 01:22:199-It doesn't hurt to add a new combo here, right? :D
  3. 01:53:069 (1)-It seems that you forgot to add a finish here too, correct?
  4. 02:13:938 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning?
  5. 02:27:851 (1)-^?
Hard
  1. 01:21:330-Too soon to have a new combo here, don't you think? It would be best to remove it.
Lunatic

Seems fine enough with me.

Catch me in-game. We'll discuss more about your map.
Topic Starter
hoLysoup

Roddie wrote:

General
  1. I believe the song's title is incorrect. It should be Oueisaien, not Quei Saien. Here'e proof.
fixed~
Easy
all fixed~
Normal
all fixed~

Hard
  1. 01:21:330-Too soon to have a new combo here, don't you think? It would be best to remove it.
This I didn't do because I want the NC to distinguish between the kick slider

Seems fine enough with me.

Catch me in-game. We'll discuss more about your map.
Thanks! :>!
Roddie
During in-game chat, one small change is made over Lunatic, epilepsy warning removed, and the combo colors were rearranged due to one of them blending in with kiai time

And that's it. Overall, your map looks good to me. So... bubbled!
Kawayi Rika
Recheck for old request ~ Nice job ~

Enjoy your moe chata <3


alacat
congratsoup :D
Rare
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Kairi
yay! grats :)
NewRulerNA
gratz~ :3
merchat7
grats holysoup!
wring
gratzz ;)
Mythol
gratz~
Yocake
GJ~
meiikyuu
c:
Pokie
omedetou ^^
y u c a
ome bakasoup >3 <
Quilt
omesoup <3
Scorpiour
Yuyuko~~~

ps: fix genre to video game as other touhou songs~
E14
grats dude... i watched this original video on youtube.......
i mean where's the link of that vid anyway? thanks.. :)
S o r d a
yey
Frostmourne
congratz soup :D
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