wcx19911123 wrote:

ok

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IceBeam wrote:

hey!

well,your mapset is fine and general is clear,so I will just give you few suggestions,though you're free to skip them

[Easy]
it plays like easy,yeah,but I found few patterns that could be improved to make them even easier

00:33:892 (3) - you could just continue this slider up to 00:34:569 - it would be much easier to play
or even make a reverse-slider like this:

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and if you want to keep a note at 00:34:343,then probably you could change that circle at 00:34:569 into slider up to 00:35:245
^ I guess I kinda want to keep the pattern as it is
00:42:915 (1) - remove this nc? it feels out of place - Yeah, sure
00:55:997 (5) - you could remove this note at all and make a reverse-slider:

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01:01:862 (1,2) - you could make it easier:

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01:15:396 (5,1,2) - ^ well,again you could make it easier in that way,but you have to remove a repeat from 01:15:396 (5) so you could start a slider from 01:17:200
^ I like the patterns I have already, mostly since I liked how they where a tad bit harder, so yeah, I'd like to keep them as they are if possible~~
01:27:012 (1) - end at 01:28:704? sounds better to me,I don't think you have to follow those 2 beats after,it sounds enough fine + it's required to have a note when kiai starts/finishes - Huh, really? Sure, changed xD

[Normal]
01:29:155 (1) - again as in Easy,I don't think you have to follow these notes :\ and such an object after the last spinner annoys me - B-B-But I like it ;w;

[Insane]
00:29:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - make an equal spacing in this pentagon by switching (2) with (3)? - I don't know why, but I feel it plays better like this than as a star-pattern xD

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cute one

well,that's it I think
oh and..why not to use STR 2 in Hard and Insane as well? - Well, I initially thought it sounded weird, btu i tried again, and it's fine, so changed~

No_Gu wrote:

love this song very much >3<