I pretty much did all of them, exepct the 2 last parts, I guess.p3n wrote:
[Kinomi's Hard]
00:09:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - what exactly are you following here? The most dominant to me would be the piano yet you leave out the note @00:10:208. Maybe you can come up with something more fitting here? Seems a bit random to me
00:15:847 (3,1) - as you seem to follow the vocals and the baseline it is odd to not map it correctly here. The vocal follow would be [00:15:847 - 00:16:185 - 00:16:524] (white, blue, red -tick). So either start (1) 1/4 earlier or just use it as one slider from 00:15:847 - 00:16:524: http://puu.sh/kxqj
00:30:283 (3) - ugly blanket, fixed for you :> http://puu.sh/kxrO86,120,30283,2,0,B|38:138|38:235|89:249,1,160,2|800:48:328 (2,3) - I highly recommend following the vocals properly here: [00:48:328 - 00:48:666 - 00:49:005] (white, blue, red -tick): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/264467
00:52:163 (4,5) - this is really disturbing and completely breaking the flow. I guess the majority of players WILL hit (5) too early as it seems to follow the vocals. I suggest using a short 1/4 slider instead of (4,5) here. If you want to map the upbeat on the following white tick just add a repeat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/264469
00:53:967 (4,5) - ^same as above
00:55:321 (3,4) - a short 1/4 repeat slider would fir much better here but I guess it could pass the way it is now...so maybe try if you like following the vocals 1:1 here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/264472
00:57:802 (3) - the repeat is unnecessary here. There is nothing in the song to support it. Maybe try a plain 1/2 slider instead (flows much better imo): http://puu.sh/kxxA
01:08:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - beatplacement for this combo doesn't flow very nice with the song. The later combo (same part/melody/rhythm) at 01:21:486 (4,5,1,2,3,4) is much much better. I suggest using a short 1/4 repeat slider instead of 01:09:305 (3,4) to fill in the missed note @01:09:418. The other missed note for the vocal follow at 01:10:321 could be ignored as the slider pattern is a very playable substitute
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