• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:49:506 (1) - x:144 y:84 ?
2. 01:10:316 (3) - 第2個點 x:172 y:76 ?~
3. 01:16:558 (1,3) - 交換NC ?~ 若有改的話 01:19:333 (1,3) - 也交換NC
4. 01:35:980 (1,3) - 交換NC~
5. 02:48:813 (1,2) - 拉好看一點>w<?
6. 03:26:963 (1,2) - 交換NC ~

[Normal]

1. 00:57:483 (1,2) - 交換NC
2. 01:19:333 (1,3) - ^
3. 02:15:171 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:28:697 (1,2) - ^
5. 03:13:784 (3) - NC
6. 03:16:559 (3) - ^
7. 03:38:755 (3) - ^

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. Slider Tick Rate use "2" ?
   
   
2. 00:38:235 (3,4) - I feel confused there ;w; , how about let (4) on x:276 y:56
3. 02:13:784 (3) - last point on x:252 y:220
4. 02:47:425 (3) - re whistle change to finish ?~
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6) - there are confused for me , i think not stack them

[Insane]

1. 00:39:449 (5) - ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順

l1106188 wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. Slider Tick Rate use "2" ? Okay.
2. 00:38:235 (3,4) - I feel confused there ;w; , how about let (4) on x:276 y:56 It's still readable, so I decided to not change that.
3. 02:13:784 (3) - last point on x:252 y:220 k, the blanket actually looks better...
4. 02:47:425 (3) - re whistle change to finish ?~ Okay...
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6) - there are confused for me , i think not stack them This one's readable and playable for me, just like 00:38:235 (3,4). I'll think of that again later, though...

l1106188 wrote:

Hi~
Request from Hinsvar.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:49:506 (1) - x:144 y:84 ? 改了
2. 01:10:316 (3) - 第2個點 x:172 y:76 ?~ 改了
3. 01:16:558 (1,3) - 交換NC ?~ 若有改的話 01:19:333 (1,3) - 也交換NC 没改
4. 01:35:980 (1,3) - 交換NC~ 没改
5. 02:48:813 (1,2) - 拉好看一點>w<? 稍微拉了下 不知道变好看没有lol
6. 03:26:963 (1,2) - 交換NC ~

没改

[Normal]

1. 00:57:483 (1,2) - 交換NC
2. 01:19:333 (1,3) - ^ 没改
3. 02:15:171 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:28:697 (1,2) - ^ 没改
5. 03:13:784 (3) - NC
6. 03:16:559 (3) - ^
7. 03:38:755 (3) - ^

其他都改了

[Insane]

1. 00:39:449 (5) - ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順

唔 还是觉得原来的好 没改~

就這些了~
good song & good luck~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ mjw5150 ~

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:59:217 (3) - Try change angle,-5 is better.
2. 03:35:980 - Add finish.
3. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. AR-1 much better with play.
2. Reduce volume to 60% pls,since your use many finish hitsound.
3. 03:02:685 - Remove whistle.
4. 03:24:015 - Add finish and remove 03:24:188 (6).
5. 04:05:113 (1) - Remove finish,really no fit here.

[Normal]

1. 02:03:032 (1) - Remove short new combo.
2. 03:44:998 (1) - ^
3. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

[Easy]

1. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

That's all i can find ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

1. 00:35:634 (2,3) - They have wider spacing than others.
2. 01:21:414 (x) - Uhm...a triple is really needed here imo...can you try?

1. 01:05:114 (3) - I felt something weird here. Consider to change a pattern to follow the music.
   
2. 01:30:258 (4) - Add a finish here? It fits the music.
3. 01:37:888 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm...I don't think this pattern is great...they look crowded and the flow isn't that good.
4. 02:29:564 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad, but please look them in testplay mode. The stack is broken, not beautiful. Can you rearrange them?
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,1) - It's really confusing pattern. Two-repeats-slider shouldn't be used in such a way, or at least avoid stacking 02:51:240 (5,6) with it.
6. 04:00:951 (1) - Remove a clap from the end. It doesn't fit.
7. 04:01:645 (2,3,4) - ^

1. 02:05:113 (3,1,2) - (nazi)The stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (1,2) right&below by 1grid?
2. 02:54:622 (2) - Listen the music carefully. The stream sound isn't here so just remove this note?
3. 02:55:749 (12) - Add a new combo to adjust it to the downbeat.(also remove from 02:56:096 (1))
4. 02:58:524 (9) - ^
5. 03:36:674 (2) - Where are 8 and 6!? (joke this slider looked like 7)

Suzully wrote:

876PRO! owo

[Normal]

1. 00:35:634 (2,3) - They have wider spacing than others. fixed
2. 01:21:414 (x) - Uhm...a triple is really needed here imo...can you try? ok,add it here and 02:30:778

[Insane]

1. 02:05:113 (3,1,2) - (nazi)The stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (1,2) right&below by 1grid? fixed
2. 02:54:622 (2) - Listen the music carefully. The stream sound isn't here so just remove this note? sorry,no changed here,i think it's fine
3. 02:55:749 (12) - Add a new combo to adjust it to the downbeat.(also remove from 02:56:096 (1)) fixed
4. 02:58:524 (9) - ^ fixed
5. 03:36:674 (2) - Where are 8 and 6!? (joke this slider looked like 7) XD

Suzully wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 01:05:114 (3) - I felt something weird here. Consider to change a pattern to follow the music. Done.
2. 01:30:258 (4) - Add a finish here? It fits the music. ^
3. 01:37:888 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm...I don't think this pattern is great...they look crowded and the flow isn't that good. Uh... I personally think that they look and play good, though.
4. 02:29:564 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad, but please look them in testplay mode. The stack is broken, not beautiful. Can you rearrange them? ^. Also, I'm sure enough the stack isn't broken.
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,1) - It's really confusing pattern. Two-repeats-slider shouldn't be used in such a way, or at least avoid stacking 02:51:240 (5,6) with it. ^
6. 04:00:951 (1) - Remove a clap from the end. It doesn't fit. A 1/1 clap pattern fits at the end of the song, IMO, so nope.
7. 04:01:645 (2,3,4) - ^^

makkura wrote:

is it just me or I can't download this map properly... osu says it doesn't know how to deal with this kind of file, doesn't even appear in .osz

Haya wrote:

If you click on the download button, you can only download the MP3 file >.<

Alduric wrote:

Omg another unpleasant shit... God, when we will have some great mappers? I still pray about it. :C