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Jenny
Still waiting for the day getting asked for collab ;w;
Sun Rainbow
自己做了SKIN你看看要不要(能力差)
http://puu.sh/l877
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Ulysses
GJ SR~
Sun Rainbow
THX~
ertyukjh010


我又來了 :)

Rianbow

先說一下,您的難度距離是一直變動
請務必開著"Disdance"功能來放東西,因為您的難度是Very EZ,所以距離上不應該一直變化
也善用右上角給您的座標距離,您的難度距離應該在1.00x上下,如果1.60x或者0.75x等等,相差很大的話就必須要改正

00:56:047 (1,2,3) - 重疊不是適合在新手玩家,試試放個等邊三角形 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267618
00:59:647 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏太快,不適合這個難度;縮短Slider的距離 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267620 (看節奏,位置我亂放)
01:28:447 (2,1,2) - 這個三個Note,按著Ctrl+>或者Ctrl+<,您會發現這4個對角點並不對稱,善用Ctrl+>或者Ctrl+<來重放
01:39:247 (4) - 這個Sllider的3點拉得有點大,那隻都銳角了=w= 接近135度會比較好看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267623
01:48:847 (3) - 不好看,指著中間的紅點按右鍵刪掉

ERT Elbarepus

十年難得一見的神作

Hyper

00:05:047 (1) - 要麼開1/6做4次折返(還是該算3次? 甚麼都好,您懂的);要麼1/4做1次折返但是白線結束(不跟音樂的做法)
00:15:247 (1) - 放得太近;因為您前面00:13:297做了Jump,這裡會混淆
00:17:047 (2) - ^ , 試試類似這樣:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267628
00:18:097 (2,3,4) - 我覺得這太遠= =因為沒有明顯的方向感
00:22:672 (1) - 不重疊比較好看;重疊會黏起來很嘔心
01:02:197 (1,2,3,4,5) - 節奏跟音樂差太遠.....模仿01:08:047吧
01:11:947 (4) - 這裡開始NC吧;不清楚是您的風格還是怎樣,您很多note都有這個情況,只是NC的原意是用來方便讀譜
01:17:647 (1,2,3,4) - 我聽不出是甚麼節奏.....

Another

00:12:397 (3) - 額~我是覺得放4個Slider比起現在第3個隔開,會好聽得多
00:13:597 (5) - ^
00:57:472 (1) - 距離錯誤;這個錯誤會影響準確度
00:58:747 (4) - 刪掉;因為您後面都是刪掉
01:02:047 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣音樂跟節奏差太遠了,模仿01:08:047吧
01:03:247 (1~8) - 別這樣放吧....會看不到次序....
01:26:122 (X) - add note? 我不太清楚,自己開25%聽一下
01:44:347 (1) - Slider延長到這裡如何?
01:51:247 (1) - 這樣如何?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267633

That all :)

還有我的ERT ↓

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [ERT Elbarepus].osu
Topic Starter
Ulysses
Fixed most
Sun Rainbow

ertyukjh010 wrote:



我又來了 :)

Rianbow

先說一下,您的難度距離是一直變動
請務必開著"Disdance"功能來放東西,因為您的難度是Very EZ,所以距離上不應該一直變化
也善用右上角給您的座標距離,您的難度距離應該在1.00x上下,如果1.60x或者0.75x等等,相差很大的話就必須要改正
ATTACH[Distance.png]

00:56:047 (1,2,3) - 重疊不是適合在新手玩家,試試放個等邊三角形 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267618 Fixed
00:59:647 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏太快,不適合這個難度;縮短Slider的距離 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267620 (看節奏,位置我亂放) NOLD说这还可以。。。不然难度太小了
01:28:447 (2,1,2) - 這個三個Note,按著Ctrl+>或者Ctrl+<,您會發現這4個對角點並不對稱,善用Ctrl+>或者Ctrl+<來重放 Fixed
01:39:247 (4) - 這個Sllider的3點拉得有點大,那隻都銳角了=w= 接近135度會比較好看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267623fixed
01:48:847 (3) - 不好看,指著中間的紅點按右鍵刪掉fixed

ERT Elbarepus

十年難得一見的神作看到这个我有种想揍你的冲动
Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [Rianbow].osu
ertyukjh010

Sun Rainbow wrote:

00:59:647 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏太快,不適合這個難度;縮短Slider的距離 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267620 (看節奏,位置我亂放) NOLD说这还可以。。。不然难度太小了
這個圖案的難度,放在我的EZ也覺得有點overmap

更別說您的VeryEZ

難度不是這樣增加=口=

我敢說這個位置一定會被bat抓出來
eikkaleyd
:D Now your Normal diff here~!
因为看到ERT的难度名,所以我也改了下
Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [eikka Rehtona].osu

你们用了那么多组音效让我这个音效白痴情何以堪啊OTZ音效渣

那么祝好运,顺便给星~
nold神mapper
Topic Starter
Ulysses
Nice Map!eikk good job :D
Topic Starter
Ulysses

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Sun Rainbow wrote:

00:59:647 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏太快,不適合這個難度;縮短Slider的距離 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/267620 (看節奏,位置我亂放) NOLD说这还可以。。。不然难度太小了
這個圖案的難度,放在我的EZ也覺得有點overmap

更別說您的VeryEZ

難度不是這樣增加=口=

我敢說這個位置一定會被bat抓出來

一個半星的難度,最好FIX吧~
spboxer3
Rianbow 要求... no KD 等你Taiko來了我mod過在給吧...

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 少了Skin:
    reversearrow.png
    spinner-approachcircle.png
  2. PreviewTime不同
  3. Tags不同
  4. 紅線須一致
  5. 02:04:397 (1) - 為什麼這邊會有聲音阿!!!!!!!!!! 我整個被2到了 這是自己加的嗎looool

[Rianbow]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:48:847 (3,4) -
mapping
  1. 00:04:447 (1,2) - 堆疊~
  2. 00:17:647 (1,2) - 使用反轉的吧...看來2拉的比較好 建議用2反轉 如果你要的話...
  3. 00:59:647 (1,2,3,4,1) - 這個在最簡單的難度裡不是很好的排法 節奏太多了 (之前我被MAT說過 當然我沒改~形式上我提一下~看你要不要改摟:) )
  4. 01:05:647 (2,3) - Easy中不要擺這個... 太過覆蓋(相對於Easy來說)
  5. 01:45:247 (8) - 8個combo對Easy來說太長了...非常建議改掉
  6. 01:51:247 (4) - 形狀不是挺好~我覺得還可以改好些

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議
Sun Rainbow

spboxer3 wrote:

Rianbow 要求... no KD 等你Taiko來了我mod過在給吧...

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 少了Skin:
    reversearrow.png
    spinner-approachcircle.png
  2. PreviewTime不同
  3. Tags不同
  4. 紅線須一致
  5. 02:04:397 (1) - 為什麼這邊會有聲音阿!!!!!!!!!! 我整個被2到了 這是自己加的嗎looool

[Rianbow]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:48:847 (3,4) -
mapping
  1. 00:04:447 (1,2) - 堆疊~
  2. 00:17:647 (1,2) - 使用反轉的吧...看來2拉的比較好 建議用2反轉 如果你要的話...
  3. 00:59:647 (1,2,3,4,1) - 這個在最簡單的難度裡不是很好的排法 節奏太多了 (之前我被MAT說過 當然我沒改~形式上我提一下~看你要不要改摟:) )NO你懂的。。。
  4. 01:05:647 (2,3) - Easy中不要擺這個... 太過覆蓋(相對於Easy來說)
  5. 01:45:247 (8) - 8個combo對Easy來說太長了...非常建議改掉
  6. 01:51:247 (4) - 形狀不是挺好~我覺得還可以改好些。。。

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議
除了有留言的其他全部FIX
Sun Rainbow
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

没有Kiai吗?

缺少皮肤要素:
reversearrow.png
spinner-approachcircle.png

难度名设置有些复杂

[ERT Elbarepus]

01:29:647 (4,5) - 对于Easy来说这种overlap太难了
01:32:047 (6,7) - ^
01:39:247 (1,2) - 不平行

[eikka Rehtona]

00:00:847 (1) - 0:00:00的绿线移到这里吧
00:11:647 (1,2) - 后面相同地方都是三分音折返滑条,改这里,或者把00:16:447 (1)改成两个滑条
00:12:247 (2) - 让它的形状包围(3)
00:23:947 (2) - 前面有1/1stack,最好不要再用1/2stack了

[Hyper]

00:00:397 (1) - 0:00:00的绿线移到这里吧
00:03:697 (2) - 加note?
00:15:847 (5) - 改成到00:16:147 (5)的slider?
01:18:847 (1) - 我不赞成用陷阱的方式加难度
01:38:797 (3) - 弯的方向反一下
02:04:372 (1) - 最后这个我觉得没必要,和前面距离太远,为了它还要专门加根红线。并且这个红线和其他难度不统一。

That's all I can find. GL~
ertyukjh010

popner wrote:

[ERT Elbarepus]

01:29:647 (4,5) - 对于Easy来说这种overlap太难了 Done
01:32:047 (6,7) - ^ Done
01:39:247 (1,2) - 不平行 Done
Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [ERT Elbarepus].osu
AngelHoney
all

每個難度最後加一根紅線再加一個note 意義不明?
offset+10ms? (-343ms)

rianbow

00:05:647 (2) - 下移點?修正下間距
00:52:597 (1) - 開始點改在後面的白線上?對於easy 直接跟spinner貌似不好
01:12:247 - 這裡再加一組slider ?
01:36:247 (2,4) - 整個easy里 爲什麽就這兩個slider突然有clap o_o
01:46:447 (1,1) - 移除newcombo ?
01:53:047 (3,1) - 節奏改成這樣? http://puu.sh/lPBL

ert

00:11:647 (1) ~ 00:32:797 (5) - 用soft是不是太輕了 而且幾乎沒啥音效
00:52:447 (1) - 結尾處降音量?
01:48:247 (1) - 節奏該這樣? http://puu.sh/lPHT
01:52:447 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這段節奏感覺沒之前那幾段好0.0 (如果不想改的話 01:54:547 - 放個note ?

hyper

00:09:247 (1) - 結束在右邊的白線上?
01:18:547 (3,1) - 這間距有點誤導0_0 (雖然有newcombo
01:54:697 (1) - 結束在右邊的大白線上?
好眼熟0.0;

最高兩個難度都不錯 沒啥好mod的0.0

:) ~
ertyukjh010

AngelHoney wrote:

all

ert

00:11:647 (1) ~ 00:32:797 (5) - 用soft是不是太輕了 而且幾乎沒啥音效 不用
00:52:447 (1) - 結尾處降音量? Done
01:48:247 (1) - 節奏該這樣? http://puu.sh/lPHT 不用
01:52:447 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這段節奏感覺沒之前那幾段好0.0 (如果不想改的話 01:54:547 - 放個note ? 不用
Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [ERT Elbarepus].osu
Topic Starter
Ulysses
updated hyper,ert's~ deled offset at the end / notes in hyper,another,extra,ert


for GD mapper:SR and EI,
please del the last offset and note in your diffs :>
OnosakiHito
This ctb stole the taiko plaaaaaace*headdache*headdache*
Anyway, you forgot to delete my name.
If I should map it I can give you an external link.
(Or you keep my name, so people can find it as direct link when they type it in. lol)
Flask
我只是來找彩虹碴的 <?

Rianbow

確定是Rianbow不是Rainbow嗎 ?


00:45:247 - (2)總覺得跟(1)不一樣高啊 @@ 是故意的 ?

00:59:647 - (1,2,3,4) 排列希望能是這樣

01:12:247 - (5) 能在下來一點 ?

01:38:047 - (3) nc

01:41:047 - (5) ^

01:46:447 - (1) 和前面的 (1) 平行點

01:53:047 - (3) 移到白線 (較長的那個) 並且長度長點 尾吧對齊白線 頭和尾都+Finish

如果有改掉這一點 轉盤請往後 Timing 那些的也需要調整 >___>

02:04:397 - (1) 我想這個應該是不用了 =...= 刪掉




我就不Mod其他了 畢竟我只是來找碴
Sun Rainbow

AngelHoney wrote:

all

每個難度最後加一根紅線再加一個note 意義不明?
offset+10ms? (-343ms)

rianbow

00:05:647 (2) - 下移點?修正下間距 Fixed
00:52:597 (1) - 開始點改在後面的白線上?對於easy 直接跟spinner貌似不好 Fixed
01:12:247 - 這裡再加一組slider ? Fixed
01:36:247 (2,4) - 整個easy里 爲什麽就這兩個slider突然有clap o_o 后面的没有加改了
01:46:447 (1,1) - 移除newcombo ? Fixed
01:53:047 (3,1) - 節奏改成這樣? http://puu.sh/lPBL Fixed

ay6859 wrote:

我只是來找彩虹碴的 <?

Rianbow

確定是Rianbow不是Rainbow嗎 ?


00:45:247 - (2)總覺得跟(1)不一樣高啊 @@ 是故意的 ?

00:59:647 - (1,2,3,4) 排列希望能是這樣

01:12:247 - (5) 能在下來一點 ?

01:38:047 - (3) nc

01:41:047 - (5) ^

01:46:447 - (1) 和前面的 (1) 平行點

01:53:047 - (3) 移到白線 (較長的那個) 並且長度長點 尾吧對齊白線 頭和尾都+Finish

如果有改掉這一點 轉盤請往後 Timing 那些的也需要調整 >___>

02:04:397 - (1) 我想這個應該是不用了 =...= 刪掉



全部Fixed
我就不Mod其他了 畢竟我只是來找碴
懒啊
冰峰>.<你是我的全部>.<
EDIT:我怎么又忘记带文件了……

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [Rianbow].osu
Flask

Sun Rainbow wrote:

懒啊
冰峰>.<你是我的全部>.<
=w=
你也是我的全部 >____>
eikkaleyd

popner wrote:

[eikka Rehtona]

00:00:847 (1) - 0:00:00的绿线移到这里吧 :arrow: done
00:11:647 (1,2) - 后面相同地方都是三分音折返滑条,改这里,或者把00:16:447 (1)改成两个滑条:arrow: 改了16秒那个
00:12:247 (2) - 让它的形状包围(3):arrow: done
00:23:947 (2) - 前面有1/1stack,最好不要再用1/2stack了 :arrow: 不stack我觉得怎样都不好看,毕竟AR不高,即使是NM也是看得出的,所以暂时不改

nold_1702 wrote:

for GD mapper:SR and EI,
please del the last offset and note in your diffs :> 搞定啦
Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [eikka Rehtona].osu
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

  1. Missing Skin Files reversearrow.png spinner-approachcircle.png
  2. 在osu文档里加一句SliderBorder: 255,255,255
  3. tags还应该写jubeat copious 还是append 总之我忘了是哪里的
  4. creator's words页面崩了
  5. hitcircle做成去色,否则和你目前的colours混合起来难看 另外circle整个大了一圈 比起slider边界 要改
  6. spinner-circle这不应该这么做 这个图像应该用作background,半透明的 最好让人专门来看看skin
  7. offest感觉有点问题? -347试试
Rianbow

00:01:757 (2) - 这个whistle移到尾部
00:04:457 (1,2,3) - 这为什么不加whistle
00:02:657 (3) - 个人建议这里NC 00:04:457 (2) - 这里不NC 00:05:657 (1) - 这里NC
00:14:657 (1) - NC
00:14:657 (1,2) - 这两个可以复制粘贴的
00:17:657 (1,2,3) - 继续莫名其妙消失的音效
00:52:757 (1) - 结束在白线
01:09:857 (1) - NC
01:45:257 (1,2,3) - 间距

ERT Elbarepus

问题在于你把1/2和1/1和更长的slider分的太清了 导致你1/2部分全是1/2 长slider的地方全是长的 造成不平衡

eikka Rehtona

00:02:047 (3) - 结尾不要whistle
00:06:847 (4) - ^
00:05:047 (1) - 开头不要
00:38:047 (1) - 这位置不好 弧形到这里断了 把他往下一点
00:42:547 (4,1,2,3) - 间距
01:12:847 (3,4,5,6) - 这形状猎奇了 你可以考虑和2结尾组成五边形

Hyper

00:07:447 (2) - 不要whistle
00:12:997 (1,2,3,4) - 这图形还不够完美
00:15:847 (5,1) - 这之间空的有点多了
01:04:897 (2) - 这没必要NC

Another



Superable

00:15:247 (1) - 这个只留尾部whistle
00:21:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,xxxxxxxxxxxx) - 这里需要NC
01:45:247 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里NC又太频繁了

太长了

8diff还有人会接mod么 我在怀疑
ertyukjh010

LKs wrote:

ERT Elbarepus

问题在于你把1/2和1/1和更长的slider分的太清了 导致你1/2部分全是1/2 长slider的地方全是长的 造成不平衡
哈哈~哈哈~(傻笑
eikkaleyd

LKs wrote:

eikka Rehtona

00:02:047 (3) - 结尾不要whistle :arrow:
00:06:847 (4) - ^ :arrow: ^
00:05:047 (1) - 开头不要 :arrow: ^
00:38:047 (1) - 这位置不好 弧形到这里断了 把他往下一点 :arrow: done
00:42:547 (4,1,2,3) - 间距 :arrow:
01:12:847 (3,4,5,6) - 这形状猎奇了 你可以考虑和2结尾组成五边形 :arrow: 好o o
我的回帖好愚蠢

8diff还有人会接mod么 我在怀疑 我也觉得
Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [eikka Rehtona].osu
Topic Starter
Ulysses
Updated
Dino99
IRC MOD :>

SPOILER
22:30 <nold_1702> : HI
22:30 <12BARRY21> : 恩
22:30 <nold_1702> : HI orz
22:31 <12BARRY21> : hey! @w@
22:31 <nold_1702> : 幫忙MOD orz
22:31 <12BARRY21> : >_>
22:31 <12BARRY21> : 欠好幾個債了啦>_<
22:32 <nold_1702> : - -
22:32 <12BARRY21> : 撲..你幫我MOD 我沒幫你MOD 我該死>_>
22:32 <12BARRY21> : 你發PM吧
22:32 <12BARRY21> : 我有空絕對幫你看~
22:36 <nold_1702> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/46239 ... >_>
22:37 <12BARRY21> : 恩 這圖阿..
22:38 <nold_1702> : ..
22:40 <12BARRY21> : 不介意的話我現在可以IRC Mod..
22:40 <nold_1702> : 好吧...只mod 3個難度可以了
22:40 <12BARRY21> : 恩
22:41 <12BARRY21> : 就你的diff吧
22:41 <nold_1702> : rainbow (thread mod) hyper (irc) another or superable(irc
22:41 <nold_1702> : rainbow 難度比較需要mod
22:41 <12BARRY21> : 恩
22:41 <nold_1702> : 我的自己選2個便好了
22:41 <12BARRY21> : 沒問題
22:41 <nold_1702> : 先mod hyper?
22:41 <12BARRY21> : 恩
22:43 <12BARRY21> : 00:01:297 - 加個圈?
22:43 <nold_1702> : no :...
22:43 <12BARRY21> : 00:09:247 - 到 00:11:647 - 來個音量漸增?
22:44 <nold_1702> : okay
22:44 <12BARRY21> : 00:12:997 (1,2,3,4) - 這3個 ...等等我做個圖給你o.o
22:46 <nold_1702> : ...
22:47 <12BARRY21> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273603
22:47 <12BARRY21> : 會用嗎?
22:47 <nold_1702> : okay
22:48 <12BARRY21> : 00:22:672 (1) - 這個圈移到前面的紅線吧
22:49 <12BARRY21> : 不要的話.. 00:23:047 (3,4) - 這兩個silder移到藍線看看
22:49 <nold_1702> : done'
22:49 <12BARRY21> : 恩
22:50 <12BARRY21> : 00:34:897 (2) - 這裡-15度看看? 這樣感覺弧度有點淺._.
22:50 <nold_1702> : done
22:51 <12BARRY21> : 00:48:547 (4) - 右移1格
22:51 <12BARRY21> : 等等 是兩格>_<
22:52 <nold_1702> : done
22:53 <12BARRY21> : 01:05:647 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273610
22:53 <12BARRY21> : 挖哩..這樣打得開嘛..?
22:53 <12BARRY21> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273610
22:53 <12BARRY21> : 我覺得這節奏好些
22:54 <12BARRY21> : 這裡改了後面記得也要改~
22:57 <12BARRY21> : 01:52:147 (3) - & 01:52:747 (2) - 各上移3格
22:58 <12BARRY21> : 01:52:447 (1,2,3) - 這樣這邊看起來好些:3
22:58 <12BARRY21> : 01:52:147 (3) - 我發現這邊高了紅圈(2)一格 往下一格~
22:59 <12BARRY21> : 我先到下個diff了~ 你再慢慢改吧
22:59 <nold_1702> : okay
23:00 <12BARRY21> : [Superable] 這個吧 @w@
23:00 <nold_1702> : orz
23:02 <12BARRY21> : 00:09:247 (1) ~ 00:11:647 (1) - 一樣音量漸增
23:04 <12BARRY21> : 00:47:647 (1) -
23:04 <12BARRY21> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273616
23:05 <12BARRY21> : 看看要不要移到這邊
23:06 <12BARRY21> : 01:30:397 (7,8,9,1,2) - 這邊有點醜:o...
23:07 <12BARRY21> : 01:30:847 (1,2) - 移到這邊看看?
23:07 <12BARRY21> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273619
23:07 <nold_1702> : done
23:07 <12BARRY21> : 恩
23:08 <12BARRY21> : 01:45:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ..
23:08 <12BARRY21> : 這也太坑爹了吧>_<
23:09 <nold_1702> : 我把他一個音分開的便組成一個連打
23:09 <nold_1702> : 所以便是2個2個的組合
23:09 <12BARRY21> : 恩o.o 是蠻好看的..
23:09 <12BARRY21> : 好吧
23:09 <12BARRY21> : 我怕MAT/BAT會挑=3=
23:10 <nold_1702> : 我會跟他們說...如果一定要我fix,我才fix orz
23:10 <12BARRY21> : 嗯嗯
23:10 <12BARRY21> : 沒了..
23:10 <nold_1702> : okay
23:10 <nold_1702> : 謝謝
23:10 <nold_1702> : savelog吧
23:10 <12BARRY21> : 恩~
23:10 <12BARRY21> : Rainbow等等附上
23:11 <nold_1702> : 恩恩

[Rianbow]
  1. 難度名稱是Rianbow?? 打錯的話改成Rainbow吧~~
  2. OD至少用1吧~
  3. 00:14:657 (3,4) - 這兩個slider形狀用一樣好些:3
  4. 00:17:657 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:20:657 (3) - 這slider先刪掉 00:20:657 - 加個圈或前面slider加個折返
    因為00:21:857 (1) - 這個轉盤應該是在00:21:257開始 你在那邊才開始有點怪.... 改改吧:>
  6. 00:40:457 (2,3) - 這樣排不好看>_< 試試看這樣~~ OwO http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273645
    52,196,39257,6,0,B|20:136|56:72,1,120
    168,112,40457,2,0,B|170:44|233:6,1,120,4|0
    324,76,41657,2,0,B|359:18|433:17,1,120
  7. 00:52:757 (1) - 這轉盤多了半拍... 在00:54:857 就該結束了~
  8. 01:05:657 (1) - 間距不同啊:O 你移一下就會知道了...疊到01:03:257 (3)
  9. 01:11:057 (4,5,6) - 這邊我有個排法想法:3 你看看要不要這樣排~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273661
    我是覺得好看些呢~~@w@ (看得清楚嘛...?)
    360,152,71057,2,0,B|304:176,2,60
    240,144,72257,2,0,B|288:180,2,60
    296,248,73457,2,0,B|303:187,2,60
  10. 01:38:057 (1,2) - 形狀用一致好些
  11. 01:45:257 (1,2) - 這邊排成這樣 打起來會比較順:> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273663
  12. 01:51:257 (2,3) - 排得有點醜醜的:< 這樣吧 我覺得好些~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273668
    128,108,111257,2,4,B|190:144|190:144|223:102|260:76|340:96,1,240
    300,208,113057,2,0,B|360:236|428:228|480:180|488:116,1,240
Rainbow的排版要再加油~~
祝~~~~早日Ranked!!!
B2IN
[General]
Hyper,Another,Superable There are too many slider sv. reduce.
[eikka Rehtona]
00:08:047 (5) - try this




00:09:247 (1) - end the spinner till 00:11:047
01:04:447 (1) - how about this one ?

[Hyper]
01:28:597 (2) - remove finish
01:33:397 (2) - ^
[Another]
00:35:197 (1,3) - how about this one?


240,104,35197,6,0,B|192:100|128:120,1,98.9999970495702,0|8
124,48,35647,2,0,B|228:16|360:48,1,197.99999409914,8|0
01:53:347 (3) - move down a bit
[Superable]
Default finish seems to need a little more.
00:10:297 (1) - remove nc
00:10:522 (1) - nc
01:22:447 (1) - i think it sounds better



01:46:972 (8) - left 1grid , up 2 grid
01:57:147 (3) - it's not symmetry
00:32:347 (2) - how about this one?



468,64,32347,2,0,B|412:48|368:108,1,90,2|0
good luck ~ = v =
Sun Rainbow
上面LKs和12BARRY12MOD我大部分改完。。。

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [Rianbow].osu
ertyukjh010
話說怎麼當初會擔心我的難度超過3星XD

現在可是越改越低ww
eikkaleyd

B2IN wrote:

[eikka Rehtona]
00:08:047 (5) - try this :arrow: Done
00:09:247 (1) - end the spinner till 00:11:047 :arrow: No, I don't think that make sense
01:04:447 (1) - how about this one ? :arrow: OK, although I cannot understand this, but I do a little change ^ ^
Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [eikka Rehtona].osu
Betsuto
I'm new modder.
I don't know it's good for you
sorry for bad english languege ^^u

[Rainbow]
SPOILER
00:02:663 (1) - remove new combo
00:18:863 (2) - add clap (head slide)
00:21:263 (3) - add clap
00:46:463 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:063 (4) - add new combo
01:05:663 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:663 (3) - add clap
01:39:263 (4) - remove clap
01:41:663 (1) - add clap
01:42:263 (2) - remove clap
01:44:663 (3) - add clap
01:47:663 (3) - remove finish
01:50:063 (1) - remove finish
01:52:463 (2) - remove finish
01:53:663 (3) - add finish

[ERT Elbarepus]
SPOILER
00:16:453 (1) - add finish
00:21:253 (1) - add finish
00:23:653 (1) - add finish
00:24:853 (1) - remove new combo
00:27:253 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:253 (1) - add finish
00:38:053 (1) - add finish
00:42:853 (1) - remove clap and add finish
00:47:653 (1) - add finish
00:56:053 (1) - remove new combo
00:57:253 (1) - add finish
00:58:453 (1) - remove new combo
00:59:653 (1) - add finish
01:00:853 (1) - remove new combo
01:02:053 (1) - add finish
01:30:853 (5) - add new combo
01:36:853 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:253 (1) - remove new combo

[eikka Rehtona]
SPOILER
00:28:453 (1) - add finish
00:30:853 (2) - add finish
00:35:653 (1) - add finish
00:40:453 (1) - add finish
00:47:653 (1) - add finish

[Hyper]
SPOILER
00:11:653 (1) - add finish
00:15:253 (1) - remove new combo
00:23:653 (1) - add finish
00:28:453 (1) - add finish
00:33:253 (1) - add finish
00:38:053 (1) - add finish
00:42:853 (1) - remove clap and add finish
00:54:853 (1) - add finish
00:59:653 (1) - add finish
01:24:853 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:503 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:453 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:903 (1) - remove new combo
01:29:653 (2) - add new combo
01:30:853 (1) - remove new combo
01:31:153 (1) - remove new combo
01:33:703 (1) - remove new combo
01:48:853 (1) - remove new combo

[Another]
SPOILER
00:01:453 (1) - remove new combo
00:10:453 (1) - remove new combo
00:21:853 (1) - remove new combo
00:23:053 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:053 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:203 (2) - add new combo
01:30:403 (1) - remove new combo
01:36:403 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:603 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:803 (1) - remove new combo
01:40:003 (1) - remove new combo
01:41:203 (1) - remove new combo
01:42:403 (1) - remove new combo

[Superable]
SPOILER
00:01:453 (1) - remove new combo
00:03:853 (1) - remove new combo
00:06:253 (1) - remove new combo
00:10:528 (1) - remove new combo
01:55:078 (3) - add new combo
01:55:153 (1) - remove new combo
01:55:378 (3) - add new combo
01:55:453 (1) - remove new combo
01:55:678 (3) - add new combo
01:55:753 (1) - remove new combo
01:55:978 (3) - add new combo
01:56:128 (1) - remove new combo
01:56:278 (3) - add new combo
01:56:353 (1) - remove new combo
01:56:653 (1) - remove new combo

Good luck ^^~ ♪
I hope your map is going to ranked
Topic Starter
Ulysses
Most fixed in my own 3 diffs~!GJ
ertyukjh010
Jenny
...I will so smash my head against a wall if this gets bubbled before mine...
Sun Rainbow

bestz2541 wrote:

I'm new modder.
I don't know it's good for you
sorry for bad english languege ^^u

[Rainbow]
SPOILER
00:02:663 (1) - remove new combo
00:18:863 (2) - add clap (head slide)
00:21:263 (3) - add clap
00:46:463 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:063 (4) - add new combo
01:05:663 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:663 (3) - add clap
01:39:263 (4) - remove clap
01:41:663 (1) - add clap
01:42:263 (2) - remove clap
01:44:663 (3) - add clap
01:47:663 (3) - remove finish
01:50:063 (1) - remove finish
01:52:463 (2) - remove finish
01:53:663 (3) - add finish
All Fixed~

Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Red Goose (nold_1702) [Rianbow].osu
Topic Starter
Ulysses
updated~
Kert
[General]
Your BG is 1024x764 :D It's not critical, but the image will be slightly cropped in game (or scaled) which looks not professional~

[Rianbow]
Offset is different
00:23:663 - I think you could map this break
00:42:863 - Add a note
01:04:463 - Add a note too, but you also have to remap the next part a little to fix spacing
01:43:463 - ^
01:53:063 (3) - A few grids to the right, not to overlap the previous slider

[Hyper]
AIBat Warnings
These warnings were generated by AIBat.

[Difficulty: Hyper]
Snapping:
01:04:453 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:05:053 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:05:353 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:05:653 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:06:253 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:06:853 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:08:053 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:08:353 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:08:653 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:08:953 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:09:253 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:10:453 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:11:053 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:11:353 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:11:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:12:553 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:13:003 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:13:303 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:13:603 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

[Another]
01:48:853 (1) - Spinner here is kinda strange. Doesn't really fit I think

Well, that's all
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