BD and I are going through this to find anything that could be better. I'll mark his suggestions with (BD) and mine with (Charles)
00:21:558 (7,8) - Perhaps shorten the 7 and have the 8 start on the white tick and add a repeat to the 8? Like this
http://puu.sh/nYAg . My reasoning is you get to hit each object on the white tick. Also, you did it at 00:52:376 (Charles) (BD agrees)
01:11:876 (8,1) - Consider moving these two closer together or removing a repeat on the 8. (BD)
02:56:467 (9,10,11,1,2,3) - This is so confusing. During the stream you let the kicksliders only start on white ticks. This one randomly starts on the red, and then makes the next combo even more confusing considering it starts on the red. Keep it consistent through this to avoid unnecessary confusion. (Charles)
03:00:558 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You sure you want to stop the momentum here? (Charles) (BD says "for the love of god NO the stacking makes it HORRIBLE to play")
04:00:830 (9) - New combo. (Charles)
04:01:376 (5) - New combo. (Charles)