Denkare - Mizu no Miyako no Patisserie (Short Ver.) · forum

Miya

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Miya 2012-06-01T07:20:17+00:00

Recheck >.<

Easy

00:45:480 (1,2) - Can you make 1 and 2 symetrical? (Use grid level 4 to make it symetrical)
01:05:934 (1,2) - ^

Hard

00:50:252 (3) - I think you should move the clap from this slider end to slider start. It's not consistant with your clap rythim. For the whistle at this slider start, i think it's best to move this to 00:49:570 (1) - end instead,

Just it, no kd for this.

Edit : Recheck, recheck, and recheck, and i think it's fine now so Bubbled :3

Hinacle

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Topic Starter

Hinacle 2012-06-01T08:08:49+00:00

Miya wrote:
Recheck >.<

Easy
00:45:480 (1,2) - Can you make 1 and 2 symetrical? (Use grid level 4 to make it symetrical)
01:05:934 (1,2) - ^
Hard
00:50:252 (3) - I think you should move the clap from this slider end to slider start. It's not consistant with your clap rythim. For the whistle at this slider start, i think it's best to move this to 00:49:570 (1) - end instead,
Just it, no kd for this.

Edit : Recheck, recheck, and recheck, and i think it's fine now so Bubbled :3

Thank you mod and bubbled~><//

Low

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Low 2012-07-01T04:12:31+00:00

Hey! According to the new rule, you must remove "Short Ver" from the song title. Thank you! Don't give me kudosu for this.

Miya

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Joined June 2011

Miya 2012-07-01T06:13:52+00:00

Sorry, since there's no short version from the original album, you have to delete short ver. according to the new rule. You can call me back to bubble this map after you have 12+ sp since this is sudden issue.

Kurai

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Kurai 2012-07-14T00:03:05+00:00

Please remove the (Short Ver.) from the title, and ask Miya for a rebubble.

merchat7

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merchat7 2012-07-14T00:15:24+00:00

Full version here http://puu.sh/Iliy (file will be delete later)

Full version length 3min16sec, this map length 1min13sec so it's fine to keep short ver if the mapper wants to according to this post p/1644912

Kurai

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Kurai 2012-07-14T09:58:22+00:00

Okay, nevermind my previous post then. >.< (actually I find it better with (Short Ver.)).

Also you need to change the [Insane]'s background because it doesn't fit osu! criteria about mature content (I mean the panty shot). This needs to be changed because osu! should be open to all public.
Maybe add the tag "Denkishiki" before the tag "Karen" because "Denkishiki Karen" is the full artist name.

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2012-07-20T08:50:43+00:00

Kurai wrote:
Okay, nevermind my previous post then. >.< (actually I find it better with (Short Ver.)).

Also you need to change the [Insane]'s background because it doesn't fit osu! criteria about mature content (I mean the panty shot). This needs to be changed because osu! should be open to all public.
Maybe add the tag "Denkishiki" before the tag "Karen" because "Denkishiki Karen" is the full artist name.

All fixed!!

Thank you mod~!!

Kurai

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Kurai 2012-07-20T11:50:51+00:00

Okay, rechecked and Ranked ~!

MiLu

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MiLu 2012-07-20T11:52:44+00:00

おめ！