1. Kiai times are inconsistent throughout the standard difficulties. It's recommended to make them the same. http://puu.sh/yzqU

1. There are a lot of spinners in the beginning of the song. I'm sure you could replace some of them with something more interesting.
2. 01:18:410 (1) - Add a finish to the start of this slider. It's in the music.
3. 01:19:865 (3) - Finish.
4. 02:39:865 (1) - Finish to the start of this slider.
5. 02:41:319 (3) - Finish.
6. 02:48:774 (1) - Constructing this slider to be symmetrical on both sides would be better looking and more appealing. http://puu.sh/yzwG

1. Rename this to Snowy's Normal to fit the difficulty scheme.
2. 00:11:319 (3) - Add a whistle to this note to follow your hitsound pattern.
3. 02:12:410 (1,2,3,4,1) - This entire pattern seems cluttered up at the top right of the screen.
4. 02:26:956 (1) - The clap on this slider should be at the end of it, not the beginning.
5. 02:43:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very sloppy and un-intuitive beat placement.

1. 00:10:774 (1) - Pretty short spinner for a Hard difficulty.
2. 01:32:228 (3) - It's difficult to tell when this slider will end, so could you perhaps make some of it a stream?
3. 03:04:956 (1) - Really short spinner.

1. +1 HP drain. 6 is too easy.
2. 00:05:501 (4) - Reverse this. It plays out way better. The way you currently have it has choppy flow.
3. 00:43:501 (1) - This type of slider is now unrankable.
4. 00:55:137 (1) - ^
5. 01:08:228 (1) - ^
6. 01:46:592 (1,3) - What? The slowdown on these sliders makes no sense.
7. 02:04:956 (1) - Unrankable slider.

Jacob wrote:

Mod request from my queue.

General

1. Kiai times are inconsistent throughout the standard difficulties. It's recommended to make them the same. http://puu.sh/yzqU snapped Snowy diff as same as regenz :3 , hard and insane are fine because there have some special part after 1 kiai :p

Hard

1. 00:10:774 (1) - Pretty short spinner for a Hard difficulty. emm , fixed by using linear slider instead~
2. 01:32:228 (3) - It's difficult to tell when this slider will end, so could you perhaps make some of it a stream? I didn't know that's difficult though , changed to triplet stream and remove 01:32:501 (6) - , also remove 01:33:319 (9) - for the better rest from this stream too
3. 03:04:956 (1) - Really short spinner. player will move the cursor intuitively from kiai part then this spinner wouldn't be short imo.
   but fixed a bit by moving 03:06:228 (1) - from the center (I think it will look hard from under hitburst)

Good job!

Lunatic

1. +1 HP drain. 6 is too easy. It's fine , I'm not cruel :p ,(will be good for trying hardrock for this song )
2. 00:05:501 (4) - Reverse this. It plays out way better. The way you currently have it has choppy flow. reduced distance between (3) and (4) a bit (added 4 at 00:04:592 (1) - 's position) because I think ctrl+R at (4) doesn't flow well from (3) imo (a bit wrong way while jumping)
3. 00:43:501 (1) - This type of slider is now unrankable.
4. 00:55:137 (1) - ^
5. 01:08:228 (1) - ^
6. 01:46:592 (1,3) - What? The slowdown on these sliders makes no sense. It's exciting, right ? like these 00:47:501 (1) - 00:50:410 (1) -
7. 02:04:956 (1) - Unrankable slider.

About Unrankable slider : I asked Blue Dragon about this and he said it's ok

SPOILER

02:33 <Frostmourne> : okok , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/332125 from this
02:33 <Frostmourne> : is it acceptable ?
02:34 <Frostmourne> : the rule said " "too" tightly" I'm not sure this is too tightly or not
02:34 <Frostmourne> : this is from one of my bubble map , I don't want to get unrank ;w; , at least I wanna help myself out
02:34 <Frostmourne> : from being unrankable
02:35 <Blue Dragon> : I wouldn't allow that
02:35 <Blue Dragon> : let me see with other BATs
02:35 <Frostmourne> : emm , if you don't allow , I think other BATs won't allow too. - -
02:36 <Blue Dragon> : maybe
02:36 <Blue Dragon> : we have different opinions
02:36 <Frostmourne> : em, ok then , Thanks for the opinion so much ~
02:38 <Blue Dragon> : okay, should be fine
02:38 <Blue Dragon> : you can see the wiggles on your slider
02:38 <Blue Dragon> : so it should be ok

also http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38345 in Insane diff at 00:45:695 (6) - (ranked yesterday) it has a pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/333110
then I think it should be fine now
Good luck!

Jacob wrote:

Mod request from my queue.

General

1. Kiai times are inconsistent throughout the standard difficulties. It's recommended to make them the same. http://puu.sh/yzqU

well guestdiff kiai time can be different if they don't agree with uploader

regenz's Easy

1. There are a lot of spinners in the beginning of the song. I'm sure you could replace some of them with something more interesting. < most are stream include so i avoid it by place spinner to reduce star.
2. 01:18:410 (1) - Add a finish to the start of this slider. It's in the music. emphatize it with whistle hitsound is better Imo and same case as below
3. 01:19:865 (3) - Finish.
4. 02:39:865 (1) - Finish to the start of this slider.
5. 02:41:319 (3) - Finish.
6. 02:48:774 (1) - Constructing this slider to be symmetrical on both sides would be better looking and more appealing. http://puu.sh/yzwG < I'll leave Frost to fix this thank.

Pretty nicely done. Sliders could look better, but I guess it's just your way of making them.
thanks

DJPop wrote:

~Hard~
00:32:047 (1) - start at 00:31:956 I think they're fine both , but at white tick make better feeling (for me) then , it's fine = =''
01:00:956 (4) - remove clap at middle fixed
02:07:865 (1) - remove this note
02:08:047 (2) - move to 02:07:865, change to 1/1 slider, add new combo from above, a note without finish is quite empty , it's fine :3
02:26:956 (1) - remove clap at middle fixed

~Lunatic~
- OD should be 8 if AR is 9 some 1/8 slider is irritated when played with OD8 , (to be honest , OD7 is maximum for me , I prefer OD6 to OD7 though.
00:32:047 (1) - start at 00:31:956 same as Hard