*random checking/playing a map*
First try~
I hope I'm not reviving something you want graved! (in that case, I'm sorry)
Anyways, found your signature and was quite curious about the map. First thing: Album should go on Tags, not Source; and your name and the artist don't have to go to tags since they're already in other areas.
I found the map quite interesting - You have a pretty nice style and it worked well for this song. Just some small things I noticed while playing:
You shouldn't spam new combos on some parts, like 01:26:453 (1,1,1,1) - here. New combos should stay for a "pattern" in the song, and using it in a single note is almost always unnecessary.
Also, could you maybe tone 01:35:276 (1,2,3) - down a bit? I mean, you can still keep the jumps, but just make them a bit smaller - surprised me a bit while playing and I didn't find it very flowing with the song.
You should consider adding some hitsounds to 02:14:453 (1) - this stream (and the others in similar parts), since it feels a bit empty right now - it's nice to play, however it doesn't feel as nice without any hitsounds.
04:40:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - About this, you should move 04:40:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - somewhere else, since the 300s from the other stream overlap this one and it's a bit awkward/surprising to play for the first time.
Also, you should consider using some hitsounds for the solo :V (I know the map is not finished, but just telling you it sounds not so good with the normal soundset)
Anyways, great map, found it quite fun, and you seem to have a nice future mapping. If I accidentally bumped something you were waiting for graveyard, I'm sorry D: But this map is very nice and I think you should work on it some more so you can get it ranked.
Call me when possible if you need some help!
First try~
I hope I'm not reviving something you want graved! (in that case, I'm sorry)
Anyways, found your signature and was quite curious about the map. First thing: Album should go on Tags, not Source; and your name and the artist don't have to go to tags since they're already in other areas.
I found the map quite interesting - You have a pretty nice style and it worked well for this song. Just some small things I noticed while playing:
You shouldn't spam new combos on some parts, like 01:26:453 (1,1,1,1) - here. New combos should stay for a "pattern" in the song, and using it in a single note is almost always unnecessary.
Also, could you maybe tone 01:35:276 (1,2,3) - down a bit? I mean, you can still keep the jumps, but just make them a bit smaller - surprised me a bit while playing and I didn't find it very flowing with the song.
You should consider adding some hitsounds to 02:14:453 (1) - this stream (and the others in similar parts), since it feels a bit empty right now - it's nice to play, however it doesn't feel as nice without any hitsounds.
04:40:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - About this, you should move 04:40:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - somewhere else, since the 300s from the other stream overlap this one and it's a bit awkward/surprising to play for the first time.
Also, you should consider using some hitsounds for the solo :V (I know the map is not finished, but just telling you it sounds not so good with the normal soundset)
Anyways, great map, found it quite fun, and you seem to have a nice future mapping. If I accidentally bumped something you were waiting for graveyard, I'm sorry D: But this map is very nice and I think you should work on it some more so you can get it ranked.
Call me when possible if you need some help!