Thank you a lot, Niva *^*Niva wrote:
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- 00:00:504 (1,2) - Hmm, actually I prefer if the whistle is placed on (1), as it follows the piano more (but I'm also fond if the whistle is placed on (2), though) Oh, yes. Fixed
- 00:15:280 (2) - (optional) Add a slight curve to the left, so this slider's curve will direct to (3,4)? Noo D:
- 00:19:086 (2) - I think it will be much better if this slider is split into a 1/1 slider with a circle 1/2 after, so the rhythm on 00:19:533 is mapped as well. Judging from your mapping style, this would do: Oh, nice idea, fixed!
- 00:27:817 (3,5) - (optional) About the manual stacking here, I think it's better to stack (3) in the upper-right of (2), and (5) in the bottom-left of (4), so there will be a slight fan pattern here~ ^ >w<
- 00:40:578 (2) - Why curve this rightward? Curving this leftward will be much better imo :3 Fiiixed
- 01:08:787 (1) - I think it's too forced to place a slider 1/2 after your previous slider here, this fits the music/vocals better imo:
Don't look at how they're placed >< I got no idea how to keep up with your mapping style... Just look at the notes' timing placement :3Gaw gaww, fixed too :3- 01:19:309 (1) - Remove the whistle on slider's start here? (I know the whistle on 01:17:742 (4) is this "red line whistle" technique, so it will be much better to stop the whistling here on the downbeat) Nooo, the whistle on downbeat ends the whistle pattern :3
- 01:24:683 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same with [Easy] here about the gradual volume increase (: Aye aye, sir!
- 01:29:832 (7,1) - Why not manual-stack these two as well? Stacking ruins the distance spacing consistency, while manual stacking like this won't: Done!
- 01:44:384 (1) - (optional) For flow, curve this downward slightly? ^
- 01:58:265 (4) - Minor stuff, but move this one grid up to form a perfect square consisting of (1,2,3,4) But it's perfect! :O
- 02:11:250 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same as [Easy] here about the gradual volume increase. Also, (optional) I think it would be fancier if the three (1)s in the middle is placed more downward xD Done!
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