Komiya Mao - Midnight Driving

posted
Total Posts
35
Topic Starter
IceBeam
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 мая 2012 г. at 23:30:12

Artist: Komiya Mao
Title: Midnight Driving
Tags: reiji-rj trance bms yassu
BPM: 134
Filesize: 3557kb
Play Time: 02:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,88 stars, 113 notes)
  2. Hard (4,94 stars, 455 notes)
  3. Normal (3,08 stars, 164 notes)


Download: Komiya Mao - Midnight Driving
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
10-th map

just a neat trance song and a simple mapset

thanks to Reiji-RJ for her awesome [Normal] and Alace for mp3/timimg and everyone who bothered to mod it
Reiji-RJ
rockleejkooo
<3 [2]
Aleks719
</3
Tony
what's I even don't this???
Natsume
Приятные комбо цвета, спокойная песня и мапсет. Нравится. Звездулька~ :D
Hitomi May
Омномном, как всегда классно :3
Я слоупок
Niva
Hi IceBeam~ Found this through your profile :3

[General]

-> Hmm, you already have 500ms delay to your first note, so I think lead-in time 1.5 seconds is enough...
-> In my Windows Explorer the .mp3 is still 224 kbps while the max. limit is 192 kbps, reduce it to 192?
-> Also, (optional) as you said in the thread, add "trance" to the tags (there are more than four pages of beatmaps ranked with "trance" in tags xD)

[Easy]

  1. 00:00:504 (1,2,1) - Hmm, add whistle on every slider's end would sound nice here xD - it's fine if you want to keep the silence here, though~
  2. 00:09:235 (2,3) - Not sure if this rhythm is beginner-friendly enough... Perhaps use a repeating 1/2 slider on 00:09:011? (soft-hitsample on the slider's beginning and use normal hitsample on the rest)
  3. 00:13:041 (3) - (optional) Not sure about this one... Maybe you can curve this encircle 00:14:832 (1) to make this part neater? It won't break the flow with your previous (2) imo...
  4. 00:17:071 (4) - Also with this one, curve this to the opposite direction (downward) instead? Flows better with your next (1) imo
  5. 00:32:742 (1) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid right to encircle the previous slider's end better (unless this is intentional, but I doubt it somehow xD)
  6. 00:38:115 (3,4) - (optional) I think it will flow better with your previous (2) if these two (and its following notes) are placed a bit more to the left like this:
  7. 01:00:056 (4) - Eh... Is it intentional to curve this slider like this? Using one waypoint will make this slider curve much more naturally imo... (even deleting your first and third waypoint without any further modification already gave a natural curve here)
  8. 01:14:384 (4) - (optional) Hmm... I personally feel the bass on 01:14:832 should be mapped also... Perhaps split this as a 1/1 slider + note 1/1 after?
  9. 01:23:339 (2) - Same as above...
  10. 01:30:504 (2) - The slidertick isn't in the center, is it intentional? (barely noticeable though)
  11. 01:56:921 (3,4,1) - (optional) You might want to create a gradual volume increase here for all the finish sounds, 40 -> 45 -> 50 -> 55 -> 60 should do fine (as long as the starting volume isn't too low)
  12. 02:05:877 (1) - Hmm, I don't quite get why the slider is curved like this... imo this could be improved by using a tilted slider wave (if you think it's too extreme to face this slider upward, face this to the left is fine as well)
  13. 02:09:459 (1,2,1) - Same suggestion about the gradual volume increase here (:


[Normal]

  1. 00:00:504 (1,2) - Hmm, actually I prefer if the whistle is placed on (1), as it follows the piano more (but I'm also fond if the whistle is placed on (2), though)
  2. 00:15:280 (2) - (optional) Add a slight curve to the left, so this slider's curve will direct to (3,4)?
  3. 00:19:086 (2) - I think it will be much better if this slider is split into a 1/1 slider with a circle 1/2 after, so the rhythm on 00:19:533 is mapped as well. Judging from your mapping style, this would do:
  4. 00:27:817 (3,5) - (optional) About the manual stacking here, I think it's better to stack (3) in the upper-right of (2), and (5) in the bottom-left of (4), so there will be a slight fan pattern here~
  5. 00:40:578 (2) - Why curve this rightward? Curving this leftward will be much better imo :3
  6. 01:08:787 (1) - I think it's too forced to place a slider 1/2 after your previous slider here, this fits the music/vocals better imo: Don't look at how they're placed >< I got no idea how to keep up with your mapping style... Just look at the notes' timing placement :3
  7. 01:19:309 (1) - Remove the whistle on slider's start here? (I know the whistle on 01:17:742 (4) is this "red line whistle" technique, so it will be much better to stop the whistling here on the downbeat)
  8. 01:24:683 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same with [Easy] here about the gradual volume increase (:
  9. 01:29:832 (7,1) - Why not manual-stack these two as well? Stacking ruins the distance spacing consistency, while manual stacking like this won't:
  10. 01:44:384 (1) - (optional) For flow, curve this downward slightly?
  11. 01:58:265 (4) - Minor stuff, but move this one grid up to form a perfect square consisting of (1,2,3,4)
  12. 02:11:250 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same as [Easy] here about the gradual volume increase. Also, (optional) I think it would be fancier if the three (1)s in the middle is placed more downward xD


[Hard]

  1. 00:00:504 (1,6,8) - Pretty much same as [Easy] here, few whistles here could spice up the opening instead of being plain unhitsounded (:
  2. 00:06:772 (6) - (optional) I don't think it's the time to go too hectic yet here. Probably delete this note to form doubles? Would give more variation to the rhythm imo as well (:
  3. 00:17:406 (9) - Remove this clap? I think it's quite out of place, plus removing this clap could emphasize your next two claps xD
  4. 00:23:675 (6,7) - I think it would flow better if (6) is curved downward like this, and (7) is dragged rightward a bit:
  5. 00:29:608 (3) - Hmm, I feel it's quite weird to use a slider tick to follow the synth here. Break this apart as a 1/2 slider followed by circle 1/4 after?
  6. 00:32:966 (2,4) - (optional) You can curve (2) downward a bit and (4) upward a bit, so they will look antagonistic. Looks fancy imo~
  7. 00:39:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - idk... I don't think this part should be too streamy like this, as the song haven't got crazy with 1/4s yet here. Removing (2) follows the synth better imo
  8. 01:02:742 (3,4) - Move (4) 1/4 later and a circle in between? (there's a note to follow on 01:03:190 as well)
  9. 01:16:399 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (optional) Would look better if symmetrical imo:
  10. 01:31:847 (1,2,3) - (optional) You can add a slight curve (preferably to counterclockwise direction) for all, to beautify this pattern ^^
  11. 01:40:130 (4) - Add clap here? You've done the same hitsound pattern on 01:36:772 (4), I think it's better to continue that pattern here as well
  12. 01:42:593 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as [Easy] about the gradual volume increase
  13. 02:05:877 (1) - Remove whistle here? I think it will be overused if a whistle is used here as well...
  14. 02:11:250 (1,1,1,1,1) - Gradual volume increase~


Great map, mostly are just suggestions ^^
I think some modders will complain about the manual-stacking on Reiji's Normal, but actually they plays great for me~

Good luck, IceBeam (:
Reiji-RJ

Niva wrote:

[Normal]

  1. 00:00:504 (1,2) - Hmm, actually I prefer if the whistle is placed on (1), as it follows the piano more (but I'm also fond if the whistle is placed on (2), though) Oh, yes. Fixed
  2. 00:15:280 (2) - (optional) Add a slight curve to the left, so this slider's curve will direct to (3,4)? Noo D:
  3. 00:19:086 (2) - I think it will be much better if this slider is split into a 1/1 slider with a circle 1/2 after, so the rhythm on 00:19:533 is mapped as well. Judging from your mapping style, this would do: Oh, nice idea, fixed!
  4. 00:27:817 (3,5) - (optional) About the manual stacking here, I think it's better to stack (3) in the upper-right of (2), and (5) in the bottom-left of (4), so there will be a slight fan pattern here~ ^ >w<
  5. 00:40:578 (2) - Why curve this rightward? Curving this leftward will be much better imo :3 Fiiixed
  6. 01:08:787 (1) - I think it's too forced to place a slider 1/2 after your previous slider here, this fits the music/vocals better imo: Don't look at how they're placed >< I got no idea how to keep up with your mapping style... Just look at the notes' timing placement :3 Gaw gaww, fixed too :3
  7. 01:19:309 (1) - Remove the whistle on slider's start here? (I know the whistle on 01:17:742 (4) is this "red line whistle" technique, so it will be much better to stop the whistling here on the downbeat) Nooo, the whistle on downbeat ends the whistle pattern :3
  8. 01:24:683 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same with [Easy] here about the gradual volume increase (: Aye aye, sir!
  9. 01:29:832 (7,1) - Why not manual-stack these two as well? Stacking ruins the distance spacing consistency, while manual stacking like this won't: Done!
  10. 01:44:384 (1) - (optional) For flow, curve this downward slightly? ^
  11. 01:58:265 (4) - Minor stuff, but move this one grid up to form a perfect square consisting of (1,2,3,4) But it's perfect! :O
  12. 02:11:250 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same as [Easy] here about the gradual volume increase. Also, (optional) I think it would be fancier if the three (1)s in the middle is placed more downward xD Done!
Thank you a lot, Niva *^*

Download: Komiya Mao - Midnight Driving (IceBeam) [Normal].osu
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Niva wrote:

Hi IceBeam~ Found this through your profile :3 hi :3

[General]

-> Hmm, you already have 500ms delay to your first note, so I think lead-in time 1.5 seconds is enough... sure
-> In my Windows Explorer the .mp3 is still 224 kbps while the max. limit is 192 kbps, reduce it to 192? true .-. I'll handle this a bit later
-> Also, (optional) as you said in the thread, add "trance" to the tags (there are more than four pages of beatmaps ranked with "trance" in tags xD) why not :P

[Easy]

  1. 00:00:504 (1,2,1) - Hmm, add whistle on every slider's end would sound nice here xD - it's fine if you want to keep the silence here, though~ yep,tried them before and now with lower volume but still I think they don't make these notes sound better,thus I didn't add them
  2. 00:09:235 (2,3) - Not sure if this rhythm is beginner-friendly enough... Perhaps use a repeating 1/2 slider on 00:09:011? (soft-hitsample on the slider's beginning and use normal hitsample on the rest) yeah,that's a problem..I'll think of your suggestion
  3. 00:13:041 (3) - (optional) Not sure about this one... Maybe you can curve this encircle 00:14:832 (1) to make this part neater? It won't break the flow with your previous (2) imo... curved 00:13:041 (3) in a better way
  4. 00:17:071 (4) - Also with this one, curve this to the opposite direction (downward) instead? Flows better with your next (1) imo it might sound weird but I don't want to curve both 00:20:205 (2) and 00:22:444 (2) in one derection xD otherwise it'd work,yeah
  5. 00:32:742 (1) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid right to encircle the previous slider's end better (unless this is intentional, but I doubt it somehow xD) I think I moved though not sure if you even notice the changes :D
  6. 00:38:115 (3,4) - (optional) I think it will flow better with your previous (2) if these two (and its following notes) are placed a bit more to the left like this:
    left mine
  7. 01:00:056 (4) - Eh... Is it intentional to curve this slider like this? Using one waypoint will make this slider curve much more naturally imo... (even deleting your first and third waypoint without any further modification already gave a natural curve here) again I tried but could make a one-waypoint slider that would overlap in a good way :(
  8. 01:14:384 (4) - (optional) Hmm... I personally feel the bass on 01:14:832 should be mapped also... Perhaps split this as a 1/1 slider + note 1/1 after? leaving it as it is because I like how pattern looks :3
  9. 01:23:339 (2) - Same as above... ^ + don't really want to make a straight 1/1 rhytm
  10. 01:30:504 (2) - The slidertick isn't in the center, is it intentional? (barely noticeable though) fixed
  11. 01:56:921 (3,4,1) - (optional) You might want to create a gradual volume increase here for all the finish sounds, 40 -> 45 -> 50 -> 55 -> 60 should do fine (as long as the starting volume isn't too low) done
  12. 02:05:877 (1) - Hmm, I don't quite get why the slider is curved like this... imo this could be improved by using a tilted slider wave (if you think it's too extreme to face this slider upward, face this to the left is fine as well)
    again I try not to make more than 2 sliders in the same direction
  13. 02:09:459 (1,2,1) - Same suggestion about the gradual volume increase here (: yup!


[Hard]

  1. 00:00:504 (1,6,8) - Pretty much same as [Easy] here, few whistles here could spice up the opening instead of being plain unhitsounded (: same reply~
  2. 00:06:772 (6) - (optional) I don't think it's the time to go too hectic yet here. Probably delete this note to form doubles? Would give more variation to the rhythm imo as well (: I doubt that hitting doubles is any easier xD I left it,though a really nice suggestion
  3. 00:17:406 (9) - Remove this clap? I think it's quite out of place, plus removing this clap could emphasize your next two claps xD hm..I kept it so far
  4. 00:23:675 (6,7) - I think it would flow better if (6) is curved downward like this, and (7) is dragged rightward a bit:
    looks nice,though I've tried to keep outdated style in this map xD
  5. 00:29:608 (3) - Hmm, I feel it's quite weird to use a slider tick to follow the synth here. Break this apart as a 1/2 slider followed by circle 1/4 after? true a little weird,though I like it T_T leaving it just because of comfortable spacing
  6. 00:32:966 (2,4) - (optional) You can curve (2) downward a bit and (4) upward a bit, so they will look antagonistic. Looks fancy imo~ again just for outdated style needs :3
  7. 00:39:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - idk... I don't think this part should be too streamy like this, as the song haven't got crazy with 1/4s yet here. Removing (2) follows the synth better imo but then my stream-rhytm would be broken for a bit :/
  8. 01:02:742 (3,4) - Move (4) 1/4 later and a circle in between? (there's a note to follow on 01:03:190 as well) not a big fan of missing downbeats,yeah,but made this to folllow previous pattern's rhytm + vocals
  9. 01:16:399 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (optional) Would look better if symmetrical imo:
    okay,tried to imrpove it :D
  10. 01:31:847 (1,2,3) - (optional) You can add a slight curve (preferably to counterclockwise direction) for all, to beautify this pattern ^^ for sure! though again trying to match with the overall "style"
  11. 01:40:130 (4) - Add clap here? You've done the same hitsound pattern on 01:36:772 (4), I think it's better to continue that pattern here as well I'm mixing the clap's position every loop :3 so I followed 01:33:190 (4,5) rhytm
  12. 01:42:593 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as [Easy] about the gradual volume increase done
  13. 02:05:877 (1) - Remove whistle here? I think it will be overused if a whistle is used here as well... it sounds a bit out of place,I agree,but I kept the rhytm of 01:50:205 (8,9,10,11,12,13,1) -
  14. 02:11:250 (1,1,1,1,1) - Gradual volume increase~ yay


Great map, mostly are just suggestions ^^
I think some modders will complain about the manual-stacking on Reiji's Normal, but actually they plays great for me~

Good luck, IceBeam (:
omg thanks for a mod,it was great <3
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply