Revengexsoyah wrote:

~only suggestions~

-General

u need [Hard] for rank this map (this is the criteria ranked)
the name of artist its Senya with S S S XD not senya change
because so many tags ? delete all and add only "touhou"
in source add "Touhou 11"

okay i dont find nothing failure in diffies, but because so many low volumes in the map ? this ruins the song and map, try deletes somes timing sections with low volumes plz

well bye and good luck

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

find a high definition video?
btw maybe NSFW for this video Hold

[easy]
00:43:566 (1) - add NC:1 clap? fixed
01:10:566 (2) - 1/2 beats are too hard for easy players
01:33:441 - noisy fixed
why not use tick to keep 24clap in kiai time?

[normal]
00:42:066 (5) - move finish to the end?.much better
00:43:566 (1) - clap in the repeat fixed
01:07:566 (3) - finish sounds noisy fixed
01:23:316 (5) - clap in the end? fixed
[hard]
00:07:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change this like this?...your set looks odd http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274102
00:17:878 (5) - clap in the end fixed
btw enough good for first map

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ B2IN ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

1. 00:04:191 - Add a note to here,sound much better. 이부분 넣으라는분도 많고 지우라는 분도많아서 그냥 냅두려고 합니다. 죄송합니다 ;ㅅ;
   
2. 01:04:847 (3) - Change this slider like this.
   
3. 01:31:566 (4) - Using same spacing,confused with play.이것도 같은 5.5 x 에요

[Normal]

1. 01:02:316 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here. fixed !

That's all ~

Good luck ~

spboxer3 wrote:

Hi~I'm from #modreqs

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. none~

[Easy]

• 
  
  mapping
  

1. 00:06:066 (2,2) - Why don't you stack it? It's looks more creative.
2. 00:15:066 (2,3,1) - spacing? it look like a kinda over fixed
3. 00:34:566 (1,1) - Too far spacing for the center and too close rhythm in Easy diff. It's too hard for new player.
4. 01:15:066 (1) - make it balance? I think It's looks prettier?
5. 01:27:066 (1) - add finish at slider head? It's start for the paragraph. just make volume down.
6. 01:35:503 (1) - remove whistle at slider end.I think.fixed

[Normal]

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  

1. 00:26:691 (2,3,1) - sliderborder.fixed
2. 00:30:816 (5,1,2) - fixed

mapping

1. 00:00:816 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing. I think you can fix it.
2. 00:19:941 (2,1) - don't you stack it? I think stack it's prettier then now.
3. 00:49:566 (1) - regular it? It's looks a bit awkward.
4. 01:27:066 (1) - add finish at slider head?fixed
5. 01:35:503 (1) - same as easy. I suggest remove whistle at slider endfixed.

[Hard]

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  

1. 01:18:816 (3,5) - fixed

mapping

1. 00:08:128 (3,4) - hey. don't overlaps those when you not have coherent rhythm.fixed
2. 00:43:941 (3,4) - you can make it stack~ It's looks like a bit depart offfixed
3. 01:27:066 (1) - add finish at slider head?fixed
4. 01:35:503 (1) - same as easy. I suggest remove whistle at slider end.fixed

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

good luck

1. Your video contains audio, can you remove this audio?
2. About 10-12secs of the end of mp3 is empty silence. Can you cut it for saving space? Or it's for video?
3. Your offset stands at 2 white ticks later than it must. offset should be 66. Your notes/sections will be snapped after that.
4. In next time try to use all screen for mapping, not only center:
   
   

Aleks719 wrote:

General

1. Your video contains audio, can you remove this audio?
2. About 10-12secs of the end of mp3 is empty silence. Can you cut it for saving space? Or it's for video?
3. Your offset stands at 2 white ticks later than it must. offset should be 66. Your notes/sections will be snapped after that.
4. In next time try to use all screen for mapping, not only center: ok ~
   
   

Hard
00:30:628 (7,8) - make 1.1x spacing as before
01:35:128 (x) - add note

Normal
00:23:878 (3,1) - seems too close

Easy
Looks simple, but fine.

Asgard wrote:

irc

SPOILER

10:14 <Asgard> : 맵
10:14 <Asgard> : 박자좀 많이 놓치신거같아요
10:15 <B2IN> : 어디요 ?
10:16 <Asgard> : 전체 적으로요..
10:16 <Asgard> : 예를들면
10:16 <Asgard> : 제일 처음
10:16 <Asgard> : 하드에서
10:16 <Asgard> : 00:00:816 (1,2,3,6) -
10:16 <Asgard> : 이건 좀 제가 지금 좀 수정한상태라 번호이상함.ㅋ
10:16 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mIRo
10:16 <Asgard> : 이런식으로 좀더 매꾸거나 해야할듯
10:16 <Asgard> : 나머지부분도 약간 뭐랄까
10:16 <Asgard> : 엇박?
10:16 <Asgard> : 00:04:566 (1,2,3) -
10:17 <Asgard> : 이런곳도 공허함이 좀 느껴짐.
10:17 <B2IN> : 음
10:17 <B2IN> : 글면 함 바꿔볼께요
10:19 <Asgard> : 00:26:691 (3,4) - 이런부분도
10:19 <Asgard> : 이상함
10:19 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mISO
10:19 <B2IN> : 모딩 해주세엽 ! 'v'
10:19 <Asgard> : 이런식으로
10:19 <Asgard> : 으음
10:19 <Asgard> : 그럼 우선 노멀부터 할께요
10:19 <Asgard> : 아니 이지.
10:22 <Asgard> : 00:08:316 (2) -
10:22 <Asgard> : 이거
10:22 <Asgard> : 슬라이드로 1박하는게 더 좋을꺼같은데
10:23 <B2IN> : 앞에껄로요 ?
10:23 <B2IN> : 아 슬라로 바꾸라고요 ?
10:23 <Asgard> : 잠시만요
10:23 <Asgard> : 네
10:23 <Asgard> : 00:08:691 - 여까지
10:26 <Asgard> : 00:28:191 (2) -
10:26 <Asgard> : 이거
10:26 <Asgard> : 슬라이드를 절반만
10:26 <Asgard> : 1/2박으로
10:26 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mIWp
10:27 <Asgard> : 음
10:27 <Asgard> : 아니다
10:27 <B2IN> : 2번요 ?
10:27 <Asgard> : 아
10:27 <Asgard> : bpm이 160이구나
10:27 <Asgard> : 130으로 봤네..ㄷㄷ;;
10:27 <Asgard> : 으음.. 그냥 저거 뭐냐
10:27 <Asgard> : 방금껀 무시
10:28 <B2IN> : 아까
10:28 <B2IN> : 00:06:816 - 여기근처부분
10:28 <B2IN> : http://puu.sh/mIXD
10:29 <B2IN> : 이것도 괜찮은거같아요
10:29 <Asgard> : 아 근데 월래 저부분은 빨간색부터 시작해서 하얀색까지 슬라로 가는게 박자는 제일 좋은데
10:29 <Asgard> : bpm이 160이라 그건 어려울꺼같음..
10:29 <Asgard> : 노멀정도면 그게 가능한데
10:29 <Asgard> : 난이도가 우선 이지다보니
10:31 <B2IN> : 아니면 http://puu.sh/mIYr 이렇게 ?
10:31 <B2IN> : 한개 빼서 ㅋ
10:31 <Asgard> : 아니 월래 저부분들 박자가
10:32 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mIYT
10:32 <Asgard> : 이런식으로 하는게 가장 어울린데
10:32 <Asgard> : 아 근데 이건 7초부분이고..
10:32 <Asgard> : 아니 지금 말하고있는데가 저부분 맞나?..
10:32 <Asgard> : 00:07:191 (1,2,3) - 이부분 맞죠?
10:33 <B2IN> : 네
10:33 <Asgard> : 그럼 저기 푸시링크 제일아래깨
10:33 <Asgard> : 가장 적합한 박자인데
10:33 <Asgard> : 그러면 이지에서 어려워서.ㅋ
10:33 <B2IN> : 이지라..
10:33 <Asgard> : 그냥 패스하는게 좋을듯
10:33 <Asgard> : 노멀이면 몰라도
10:33 <B2IN> : 글면 최종적으로 어떻게 해요 ?
10:33 <Asgard> : 걍
10:33 <Asgard> : 냅둬요..ㅋㅋ
10:33 <B2IN> : 엌
10:34 <Asgard> : 그게 가장 적합할듯 지금으로선
10:34 <Asgard> : 01:04:191 - 여기 노트추가
10:34 <Asgard> : 01:04:566 (3) - 이거를 01:05:128 여기까지 늘리고 한번 반복하시고 다음노트 제거해주세요
10:35 <Asgard> : 01:07:191 - 여기도 노트 추가
10:35 <Asgard> : 노트 안넣을 필요는 없음..
10:35 <Asgard> : 아 아니다
10:35 <Asgard> : 그냥 노트 넣으란것만 제외시키고
10:35 <Asgard> : (3) 이것만 적용해요
10:35 <B2IN> : 네
10:35 <Asgard> : 지금 제가 제정신이 아님 ㅠ
10:36 <Asgard> : 맷이 내맵만 모딩큐에 올린거 거절해서 ㅠㅠ
10:36 <B2IN> : ㅋㅋ
10:37 <Asgard> : 제데로 정신을 가다듬고
10:37 <Asgard> : 다시 첨부터 제데로감
10:37 <Asgard> : 00:04:566 (1) - 이거
10:37 <Asgard> : 진행방향이
10:37 <Asgard> : 좀 안좋음
10:37 <Asgard> : 저기로 놓는거보단
10:37 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mJ1N
10:37 <B2IN> : 반대로 ?
10:37 <Asgard> : ㄴㄴ
10:38 <Asgard> : 이런식으로
10:38 <Asgard> : 마우스 좀더 움직이기 쉽게
10:39 <Asgard> : 00:07:191 (1) - 이거
10:39 <Asgard> : 슬라이드말고 노트1개로 대체시키세요
10:40 <Asgard> : 2,3버은
10:40 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mJ2C
10:40 <Asgard> : 이런식으로
10:40 <Asgard> : 물흐르듯이
10:40 <Asgard> : 3번은 반복 한번해주시구요
10:40 <B2IN> : 네
10:40 <Asgard> : 4번은 http://puu.sh/mJ2W
10:40 <Asgard> : 이런식으로 왼쪽아래로
10:40 <Asgard> : 어려우시면 그냥 코드 드릴까요?
10:41 <B2IN> : 그게 더편할지도 모르겟네요 ㅋㅋ
10:42 <Asgard> : 코드 쓰시는 법은 아세요?
10:42 <B2IN> : 알죠
10:42 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mJ3N
10:42 <Asgard> : 사운드는 사라진것도 있으니까
10:42 <Asgard> : 알아서 고치셔요.ㅋ
10:42 <B2IN> : 네
10:43 <Asgard> : 00:16:566 (1) - 이거 슬라이드 중앙에 있는 포인트
10:43 <Asgard> : 왼쪽으로 2칸 옮겨주세요'
10:43 <Asgard> : 아니다 1칸..
10:44 <B2IN> : 근데 코드 주면 바로 한번에 찾아가는건 안되요 ?
10:44 <Asgard> : ???
10:44 <B2IN> : 코드하면 노트추가되서
10:44 <Asgard> : 아아
10:44 <Asgard> : 그
10:44 <Asgard> : 00:10:566
10:44 <Asgard> : 10566이라고 적힌전까지
10:44 <Asgard> : 히트오브젝트 지우시고나서
10:44 <Asgard> : 추가하시는게
10:45 <B2IN> : 넹
10:46 <Asgard> : 00:21:066 (2,3) - 이거두개
10:47 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mJ5I 이런식으로
10:47 <Asgard> : 모양 잡아주세요
10:47 <Asgard> : 00:25:566 (1) - 이건 y축에 맞추시는게 좋을듯
10:47 <Asgard> : 가운데 슬라이드포인트가 y축에 오도록 위치를 왼쪽으로
10:48 <Asgard> : 포인트만 옮기는게 아니라 슬라이더 전체를
10:49 <Asgard> : 00:31:191 (1) - 여기도 첫부분
10:49 <Asgard> : 노트로 대체
10:49 <B2IN> : 노트 한개만요 ?
10:49 <Asgard> : ㅇ
10:49 <Asgard> : 잠시만
10:49 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mJ6M
10:49 <Asgard> : 이런식을ㅗ
10:49 <Asgard> : 나머지 슬라이더들
10:50 <Asgard> : 굳이 저렇게 해야되는게아니라 비슷하게 해주면 좋죠
10:50 <Asgard> : 5번은 알아서 해주셈..ㅋㅋ
10:50 <Asgard> : 3번슬라이더 끝에 스택은 시키지 마세요.ㅋ
10:51 <B2IN> : 네
10:51 <B2IN> : 00:31:191 (1) -
10:51 <B2IN> : 이거
10:51 <B2IN> : 00:31:566 (1) -
10:51 <B2IN> : 여기로 놓는건 ?
10:52 <Asgard> : 박자가 비어요 그러면..
10:52 <B2IN> : 앞에도 채우고
10:52 <B2IN> : 음...
10:55 <Asgard> : 잠시만 전화좀.ㅋ
10:55 <B2IN> : 네
10:57 <Asgard> : 01:07:566 (2,3) -
10:57 <Asgard> : 이거 노트
10:57 <Asgard> : 오른쪽으로 흘러가게
10:58 <Asgard> : 예를들면 http://puu.sh/mJaA
10:58 <Asgard> : 이런식으로
10:58 <Asgard> : 만약 고치신다면 01:10:566 (2,3) - 이거 디스탠스 수정하셔야되요
10:58 <B2IN> : 네
10:59 <Asgard> : 01:22:566 (2,3) - 가능하면 이것도 아까같은 방식을ㅗ
10:59 <Asgard> : 방식으로 고쳐주세요
10:59 <Asgard> : 너무 모양이 딱딱함
11:00 <Asgard> : 이지는 끝
11:01 <B2IN> : 아까전에
11:01 <B2IN> : 스택시키지말라고 하던곳 위치가 어디에요 ?
11:01 <Asgard> : 그뭐냐
11:02 <Asgard> : 00:34:191 (5) -
11:02 <Asgard> : 아ㅣ거
11:02 <Asgard> : 이거를 슬라이드 끝에 스택시켜서 숨기지 말란 의미
11:02 <Asgard> : 초보자들 노트아래 가려진거 못봄..
11:02 <B2IN> : 아여기말씀하시는거였구나
11:02 <Asgard> : ㅇㅇ
11:02 <Asgard> : 이지 끝나심?
11:03 <B2IN> : 잠시
11:05 <B2IN> : 아
11:05 <B2IN> : 왜 노트추가가 안되 -_-
11:06 <B2IN> : ㅇㅋ 이지끝낫어요
11:06 <Asgard> : 근데 노멀 퀄리티가 너무..ㅎㄷ
11:06 <Asgard> : 00:00:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
11:06 <Asgard> : 이런건
11:06 <Asgard> : 진짜 좋은데
11:06 <Asgard> : 자연스럽게 흘러가듯이
11:06 <Asgard> : 그런데 그뒤로는 그게 아니더라도 뭔가
11:06 <Asgard> : 너무 뭐랄까...음
11:07 <B2IN> : 흠 글면 싹다 고쳐볼꼐요
11:07 <Asgard> : 잠시만요
11:07 <Asgard> : 우선 지적해드릴테니
11:07 <Asgard> : 00:22:566 (1) - 이거는
11:07 <Asgard> : (2)랑 똑같이 가지말고
11:07 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mJf4
11:07 <Asgard> : 이런식으로
11:07 <Asgard> : 그리고 2는 반복한번 하시고 다음에 스피너 추가하세요
11:07 <Asgard> : - 00:25:56600:22:566 (1) -
11:08 <Asgard> : 00:24:066 - 00:25:566
11:08 <Asgard> : 이렇게 스피너
11:08 <Asgard> : 00:26:315 (1) - 정 가운데 배치
11:08 <Asgard> : 노트를
11:09 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mJfN 이런식을ㅗ
11:09 <B2IN> : 반복한번이라는게
11:09 <Asgard> : 반복이 리피터애로우
11:09 <B2IN> : 한개 더뺴라고요 ?
11:09 <Asgard> : 아아
11:09 <B2IN> : 지금 한개바께없는데
11:10 <Asgard> : 00:23:503 여까지
11:10 <Asgard> : 길이 짧게 만드시구요
11:10 <Asgard> : 기본 길이를
11:10 <Asgard> : 1/2박으로만
11:10 <Asgard> : 그리고 반복한번
11:10 <Asgard> : ?
11:10 <Asgard> : 이해하셨어요?
11:10 <B2IN> : 잠시 스피너
11:11 <Asgard> : 아 그리고 그이전꺼에관한건데
11:11 <Asgard> : 00:20:691 (3) - 144,264로 이동
11:11 <Asgard> : 00:21:066 (4) - 200,344로 이동
11:11 <Asgard> : 00:21:816 (5) - 360,264로 이동하고
11:11 <Asgard> : 하고 <- 잘못말함.ㅋ
11:16 <Asgard> : 00:26:315 (1,2,3) -
11:16 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/mJjf
11:16 <Asgard> : 이런 형식?
11:17 <Asgard> : 01:21:441 (2) - 화살표 가려졌어요..언랭요소
11:17 <Asgard> : 이것들 이외엔 그래도 노멀도 괜찮을듯...
11:18 <Asgard> : 굳이 전부다 고치실 필요는없어요
11:18 <B2IN> : 화살표 가리기전에 사라지지안나요 ?
11:18 <Asgard> : 으음
11:19 <Asgard> : 좀 애매한데
11:19 <Asgard> : 근데 저것도 못보는사람 좀있다는.ㅋ
11:19 <B2IN> : 바꿔서 나쁠건 없으니 그러면 바꿀께요
11:20 <Asgard> : 하드는 박자 못잡으신게 좀 많다고 밖에 말 못하겠음..
11:20 <B2IN> : ㅋ
11:20 <B2IN> : 다시 수정할께요
11:20 <Asgard> : 그래도 실력 늘리시고 싶으면
11:20 <Asgard> : 지금 이거랑 똑같은노래
11:20 <Asgard> : 이미 랭크됬잖아요?
11:20 <B2IN> : 네
11:20 <Asgard> : 그거 안보시는게 좋음
11:20 <Asgard> : 한번 봐버리면 그거랑 맵이 똑같이 만들어져서 랭크도 뭣도 안댐 ㅋㅋ
11:21 <Asgard> : 그래서 오스에 이미 있는 노래는 안만드는게 좋음.ㅋ
11:21 <B2IN> : ㅎㅎ

ax_pokl wrote:

[From ax_pokl's modding queue]
以下纯属建议。
[General]
非常好的图~。
[Normal]
approach rate =>5?
00:42:066 (5,1) - 其实这个改成2回转问题也不大。
00:58:566 (1) - 好怪的形状。。
01:02:316 (1) - 可以不NC。
01:31:566 (3) - 没拉好。fixed
[Hard]
00:07:941 (2,3) - 这个时间不好判断，建议和前面连起来做成一个slider。 fixed
01:08:691 (1,2) - 这个。。
01:26:691 (4,1) - 分开来吧。。fixed
[Easy]
00:40:566 (1,2,1) - 这个不一样的会很尴尬。
[其它]
图太好了，实在找不出什么问题，去找BAT吧。
[From ax_pokl's modding queue]

Philippines wrote:

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SPOILER

1. Eh, too many errors. x.x Where ?You deserve a star, but i ran out. D:

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SPOILER

1. 00:42:066 (2) - Add one more reverse for this slider.no change
   
   
2. 01:10:191 - Add a note.fixed

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SPOILER

1. Very fine. :3

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SPOILER

1. 00:10:659 (1) - I believe this should start at 00:10:753. But it's fine.no change

Aeonnen wrote:

Request from my modding queue ^^

Easy:
00:58:566 (1) - remove nc
01:35:503 (1) - ^

Normal:
01:35:503 (1) - remove nc

Hard:
01:35:503 (1) - remove nc


All suggestions~ Great map, by the way.

General

1. Your video contains audio, can you remove this noiseless audio?
   
2. Your offset stands at 2 white ticks later than it must. offset should be 66. Your notes/sections will be snapped after that.

Aleks719 wrote:

General

1. Your video contains audio, can you remove this noiseless audio?
   
2. Your offset stands at 2 white ticks later than it must. offset should be 66. Your notes/sections will be snapped after that.

^ still hasn't been fixed. no kd.

James2250 wrote:

[General]
-Your offset sounds slightly early to me right now, try using 72? (+6)

[Easy]
01:15:066 (1,2,3) - fix spacing

[Normal]
01:20:691 (1,3) - might as well stack these

[Hard]
00:10:003 (7) - change this so 1 of the repeats doesn't get hidden if possible

Everything else looks good, call me back and I will rebubble

EDIT:

Rebubbled~
(Just to be on the safe side with timing)

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"pv.avi"
0,0,"bg.jpg"

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg"
Video,66,"pv.avi"

confeito14 wrote:

hi

Re-Bubbled but...

Easy Normal

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"pv.avi"
0,0,"bg.jpg"

Hard

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg"
Video,66,"pv.avi"

maybe... you should fix Video offset

Jacob wrote:

[General]

• Consider adding the tags from the ranked version of this map. consider
• Tick rate 2 is really recommended, but it's up to you. fixed

[Easy]

00:16:197 (3,1) - Turn off grid snap and move these notes to an arrangement as so for a better looking beat blanket.fixed
00:31:197 (2) - I'm sorry, but this slider is awfully odd and not very good looking. I like your creativity, however. How about something simple like this?fixed
00:38:697 (2,3) - Try shaping up how the slider blankets the note.
00:43:197 - Add a note here. A gap feels odd and empty.fixed

[Normal]

00:21:822 (5) - Move this away from the previous slider so that they aren't touching.fixed
00:43:197 - Add a note.fixed

[Hard]

00:26:509 (2) - Please don't break the spacing just to make beat blankets. This confused me. Take this in mind for the other difficulties also.fixed

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello,

[Easy]

SliderTickRate -1

[Normal]

SliderTickRate -1?

[Hard]

00:21:822 (6,7,8,9,1) - Pentagon flat lol
01:05:322 () - Add note fixed
01:20:134 (6) - Start at 01:20:322. Add note here and 01:20:228

Strengthen the layout and shape of slider

That all ~