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Megpoid GUMI - Nisemono no Uta

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raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

12BARRY21 wrote:

As your request :>
  1. BPM: 142.00
  1. Offset: -38
thx~
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
觉得快了好多…………
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
改完了音觉得就不准了
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
我来了w
先节日快乐~ (捂脸

很厉害的第一张图~先指出些基础问题好了~w

  1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. Tags里加上megpoid
  2. 忘记删taikobg..
  3. BG分辨率unrankable，需要是4:3才行(1024*768，800*600，etc.)，resize下吧/.\ （好像会影响到SB效果，和御用sber讨论下吧..
  4. Timing的话我更倾向于现在的-17，没啥问题，不过BPM需要手动改一下，软件测出来当前Hard和Normal+难度设置的BPM是141.999917295872(这个虽然基本不影响谱面但是绝对unrankable)，直接F6输142不加小数点。然后记得"Timing=>Resnap all notes"
  5. (nazi)AudioLead-in统一成1000。。。
  6. 每次改了timing记得重新snap KIAI section，以及重要的音效线或者变速线。
  7. 因为SB有闪屏的关系，给所以难度加个"癫痫警告".
[Easy]
  1. 没有设置PreviewTime.
  2. SV需要手动修正，这个可以直接记事本改，"SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046"
  3. 个人不是很推荐这种0.6x的DS。。。读图超级不爽的>_>
  4. 01:05:898 (5) - 不仅是难看的问题了。。。影响到新手读图了/.\
  5. 01:07:694 (6) - 喂喂...!从这个note开始所有都没snap到时间线上。。。全部晚了1/4拍的说！
  6. 这里开始的MOD时间点是resnap过的.
  7. 01:36:321 (x) - 把break拉到这里开始，同样的我建议KIAI在这里再结束....(或者你直接在这里加个finish音效的note也好啊...
    拉后的效果
    ATTACH[Z7796VMAZ[{)_{Q0G86(6M2.jpg]
  8. 01:49:841 (1,2,3) - Easy难度不建议加速...而且是2倍的话就更不能接受了...
  9. 02:22:799 (4,5) - 手动调整下spacing...太近！顺便给5加个new combo.
  10. 02:52:377 (3,1) - 交换new combo.
  11. 02:55:757 (4) - New combo.
  12. 03:05:898 (3,1) - 交换new combo.
  13. 03:07:588 (1) - 求别减速..T_T 然后正常spacing就好.
[Normal+]
  1. 难度里有"+"一般都会被吐槽很多次，normal就是normal，hard就是hard。。。很多MAT都会挑这个甚至因为这个不给泡╮(╯_╰)╭ 实在觉得偏难的话还是改简单是王道。
  2. Slider tick rate -1
  3. 00:27:025 (7) - 再加个折返.
  4. 00:51:954 (5,1) - spacing手动调整..
  5. 01:18:152 (2) - ..跟着这音乐走的话，完全想不到会有2个折返.
  6. 01:36:321 (x) - 同Easy.
  7. 02:28:715 (2) - 加个折返?
  8. 02:30:405 (x) - Break拉到这里.
  9. 03:02:623 (7) - 从这里开始又乱了/.\
偷懒了/w\ hard和hitsound先不看了...w

[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]

JoJo wrote:

我来了w
先节日快乐~ (捂脸

很厉害的第一张图~先指出些基础问题好了~w

  1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. Tags里加上megpoid
  2. 忘记删taikobg..
  3. BG分辨率unrankable，需要是4:3才行(1024*768，800*600，etc.)，resize下吧/.\ （好像会影响到SB效果，和御用sber讨论下吧..
    == 我刚改 不过sb里不是800x600行吗? :P
  4. Timing的话我更倾向于现在的-17，没啥问题，不过BPM需要手动改一下，软件测出来当前Hard和Normal+难度设置的BPM是141.999917295872(这个虽然基本不影响谱面但是绝对unrankable)，直接F6输142不加小数点。然后记得"Timing=>Resnap all notes"
  5. (nazi)AudioLead-in统一成1000。。。
  6. 每次改了timing记得重新snap KIAI section，以及重要的音效线或者变速线。
  7. 因为SB有闪屏的关系，给所以难度加个"癫痫警告".

sb加上闪屏才有味道嘛

[Easy]
  1. 没有设置PreviewTime.
  2. SV需要手动修正，这个可以直接记事本改，"SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046"
  3. 个人不是很推荐这种0.6x的DS。。。读图超级不爽的>_>
  4. 01:05:898 (5) - 不仅是难看的问题了。。。影响到新手读图了/.\
  5. 01:07:694 (6) - 喂喂...!从这个note开始所有都没snap到时间线上。。。全部晚了1/4拍的说！
  6. 这里开始的MOD时间点是resnap过的.
  7. 01:36:321 (x) - 把break拉到这里开始，同样的我建议KIAI在这里再结束....(或者你直接在这里加个finish音效的note也好啊...
    拉后的效果
    [attachment=0:a616c]Z7796VMAZ[{)_{Q0G86(6M2.jpg[/attachment:a616c]
  8. 01:49:841 (1,2,3) - Easy难度不建议加速...而且是2倍的话就更不能接受了...
  9. 02:22:799 (4,5) - 手动调整下spacing...太近！顺便给5加个new combo.
  10. 02:52:377 (3,1) - 交换new combo.
  11. 02:55:757 (4) - New combo.
  12. 03:05:898 (3,1) - 交换new combo.
  13. 03:07:588 (1) - 求别减速..T_T 然后正常spacing就好.
[Normal+]
  1. 难度里有"+"一般都会被吐槽很多次，normal就是normal，hard就是hard。。。很多MAT都会挑这个甚至因为这个不给泡╮(╯_╰)╭ 实在觉得偏难的话还是改简单是王道。
  2. Slider tick rate -1
  3. 00:27:025 (7) - 再加个折返.
  4. 00:51:954 (5,1) - spacing手动调整..
  5. 01:18:152 (2) - ..跟着这音乐走的话，完全想不到会有2个折返.
  6. 01:36:321 (x) - 同Easy.
  7. 02:28:715 (2) - 加个折返?
  8. 02:30:405 (x) - Break拉到这里.
  9. 03:02:623 (7) - 从这里开始又乱了/.\
偷懒了/w\ hard和hitsound先不看了...w
== 我还要改 sb什么的 offset-437 根本改不了 ==
求帮忙啊~~~ :cry:
Last edited by [Mahua] , edited 1 time in total.
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

JoJo wrote:

我来了w
先节日快乐~ (捂脸 节日快乐XD

很厉害的第一张图~先指出些基础问题好了~w

  1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. Tags里加上megpoid Done!
  2. 忘记删taikobg.. 再纠结下……
  3. BG分辨率unrankable，需要是4:3才行(1024*768，800*600，etc.)，resize下吧/.\ （好像会影响到SB效果，和御用sber讨论下吧..
  4. Timing的话我更倾向于现在的-17，没啥问题，不过BPM需要手动改一下，软件测出来当前Hard和Normal+难度设置的BPM是141.999917295872(这个虽然基本不影响谱面但是绝对unrankable)，直接F6输142不加小数点。然后记得"Timing=>Resnap all notes" 手动测的时候估计差了一点orz Done
  5. (nazi)AudioLead-in统一成1000。。。为啥会全是1004呢明明对的是1/.\
  6. 每次改了timing记得重新snap KIAI section，以及重要的音效线或者变速线。
  7. 因为SB有闪屏的关系，给所以难度加个"癫痫警告".
改了/.\

[Easy]
  1. 没有设置PreviewTime. Done!
  2. SV需要手动修正，这个可以直接记事本改，"SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046" 改了 但是为啥会这样呢
  3. 个人不是很推荐这种0.6x的DS。。。读图超级不爽的>_> 难道改成0.5？0..0
  4. 01:05:898 (5) - 不仅是难看的问题了。。。影响到新手读图了/.\ fixed
  5. 01:07:694 (6) - 喂喂...!从这个note开始所有都没snap到时间线上。。。全部晚了1/4拍的说！ Q口Q offset改完全乱了
  6. 这里开始的MOD时间点是resnap过的.
  7. 01:36:321 (x) - 把break拉到这里开始，同样的我建议KIAI在这里再结束....(或者你直接在这里加个finish音效的note也好啊... Done!
    拉后的效果
    [attachment=0:f1668]Z7796VMAZ[{)_{Q0G86(6M2.jpg[/attachment:f1668]
  8. 01:49:841 (1,2,3) - Easy难度不建议加速...而且是2倍的话就更不能接受了... 1.0好了...
  9. 02:22:799 (4,5) - 手动调整下spacing...太近！顺便给5加个new combo.
  10. 02:52:377 (3,1) - 交换new combo.
  11. 02:55:757 (4) - New combo.
  12. 03:05:898 (3,1) - 交换new combo.
  13. 03:07:588 (1) - 求别减速..T_T 然后正常spacing就好.
都弄好啦w

[Normal+]
  1. 难度里有"+"一般都会被吐槽很多次，normal就是normal，hard就是hard。。。很多MAT都会挑这个甚至因为这个不给泡╮(╯_╰)╭ 实在觉得偏难的话还是改简单是王道。 就Normal吧（掰手指
  2. Slider tick rate -1 哇分少了好多...
  3. 00:27:025 (7) - 再加个折返. Done!
  4. 00:51:954 (5,1) - spacing手动调整.. Done!
  5. 01:18:152 (2) - ..跟着这音乐走的话，完全想不到会有2个折返. fixed
  6. 01:36:321 (x) - 同Easy.Done!
  7. 02:28:715 (2) - 加个折返?Done!
  8. 02:30:405 (x) - Break拉到这里.Done!
  9. 03:02:623 (7) - 从这里开始又乱了/.\
Done!

偷懒了/w\ hard和hitsound先不看了...w
没有req的mod真的没想到啊www
我爱你啊XD
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
taiko 的那张需要调一下 不是offset-437吗
你把note前移一下吧
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
太鼓的sb我做好了

Download: GUMI - Nisemono no Uta (raririn) [Ts8zs' Taiko].osu
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
RL_Tibbar
放假，闲得无聊，随便MODMOD

[hard]
到02:36:321为止都是我做的吧，可以的话改为collab hard，随便你了
00:03:997 (6,7) - 把7的尾巴弄到6上
00:17:306 (2) - clap end of slider
00:19:313 (3) - remove clap
00:20:687 (2) - clap top of slider
00:21:109 (3,4,5,6,1) - 放条N音效的绿线在(3)的尾上，一条S音效的绿线在(1)的头上 ，然后把clap都去掉
00:24:067 (2) - clap end of slider
00:45:616 (1) - NC
00:55:757 (3,4,9) - clap end of slider
00:58:715 (10) - clap top of slider
00:59:137 (1) - clap end of slider
00:59:983 (2) - clap reverse of slider
01:01:250 (4) - clap top&end of slider
01:02:518 (1,3,10,11) - finsh top of slider
01:04:208 (6) - finsh end of slider
01:04:736 (8) - finish
01:05:898 (1) - finsh top of slider
01:07:799 (5) - NC
01:07:588 放条N音效绿线(滑条速度1.5x
01:09:278 (2) - kiai从这开始
01:36:321 (5) - kiai到这结束
01:09:701 (3) - 从这开始，每两条白线放个clap，例如下一个clap在01:10:546 (7)
01:10:123 (5) - 从这开始，每两条白线放个whistle，例如下一个whistle01:10:968 (1)
虽然有更好的下音效方法，但我是懒逼

------
先到这，等有时间再mod
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

OSUtoto wrote:

放假，闲得无聊，随便MODMOD 骗kd来的吧/_\

[hard]
到02:36:321为止都是我做的吧，可以的话改为collab hard，随便你了 推倒对着map的
00:03:997 (6,7) - 把7的尾巴弄到6上
00:17:306 (2) - clap end of slider
00:19:313 (3) - remove clap
00:20:687 (2) - clap top of slider
00:21:109 (3,4,5,6,1) - 放条N音效的绿线在(3)的尾上，一条S音效的绿线在(1)的头上 ，然后把clap都去掉
00:24:067 (2) - clap end of slider
00:45:616 (1) - NC
00:55:757 (3,4,9) - clap end of slider
00:58:715 (10) - clap top of slider
00:59:137 (1) - clap end of slider
00:59:983 (2) - clap reverse of slider
01:01:250 (4) - clap top&end of slider
01:02:518 (1,3,10,11) - finsh top of slider
01:04:208 (6) - finsh end of slider
01:04:736 (8) - finish
01:05:898 (1) - finsh top of slider
01:07:799 (5) - NC
01:07:588 放条N音效绿线(滑条速度1.5x
01:09:278 (2) - kiai从这开始
01:36:321 (5) - kiai到这结束
01:09:701 (3) - 从这开始，每两条白线放个clap，例如下一个clap在01:10:546 (7)
01:10:123 (5) - 从这开始，每两条白线放个whistle，例如下一个whistle01:10:968 (1)
虽然有更好的下音效方法，但我是懒逼

------
先到这，等有时间再mod
Midasmens
507 posts
Joined June 2011
Midasmens
你好哦~~
瓦來幫乃看看吧！>3<

General
新圖做的還行哦~~可惜有一些小缺點
有許多Slider不好看~~~ :|
排列也有幾處問題（小問題） :P

Easy
00:06:743 (2) - 結尾不需要紅點+也不需要這麼多點
SPOILER
這樣如何？ :oops:
00:16:884 (3) - slider不好看 :(
SPOILER
00:25:335 (1) - ^
SPOILER
00:28:715 (1) - ^
00:33:785 (1) - ^
00:55:757 (1) - ^
01:07:588 (6) - ^
SPOILER
01:12:659 (1) - ^
01:16:039 (1) - ^
01:22:799 (1) - ^
01:29:560 (5) - ^
01:31:250 (6) - ^
SPOILER
01:50:053 (X) - Break Time
01:54:067 (X) - ^
01:57:447 (X) - ^
02:05:053 (3) - Slider :o
02:08:433 (3) - Slider做好對稱
SPOILER
02:11:813 (3) - 不好看
02:13:504 (4) - ^
02:23:644 (5) - 結尾處有問題~~調到 02:24:490
02:48:997 (1) - 這個真的不好看 :cry:
02:57:447 (2) - 對稱好了
Easy就這些吧~~~

Normal
00:05:053 (1,2) - clap有點吵+Slider
00:07:588 (5) - 音量有點高~略吵哦~~
00:11:813 (1,2) - ^
00:28:715 (1) - 知道瓦想說什麼了吧 :roll:
00:38:856 (3) - ^
00:42:236 (1) - ^
00:44:771 (5) - ^
00:47:306 (6) - 拉到如圖的位置感覺還行
SPOILER
00:52:377 (1) - 5點可以做好這個slider哦~~自己去試試吶
01:00:828 (3) - 這個slider是想做直線還是曲綫呢?
01:02:518 (1) - 也是5點哦~~
01:04:208 (3) - 丑
01:05:898 (1) - ^
01:07:588 (3) - :|
01:16:039 (5) - ^
01:18:997 (3,5) - ^
01:22:799 (5) - :x
01:54:490 (X) - Break Time
01:57:236 (1) - 對稱
01:57:870 (X) - Break Time
02:03:363 (1) - >:(
02:06:934 (1) - ^
02:13:504 (1,2,3) - ^
02:28:715 (2) - 結尾在02:28:926如何?
02:28:926 (X) - 這個Break Time的結尾不用拉
02:52:377 (1,2,5,6) - 5,6到底是直線還是曲綫呢?
03:01:250 (5) - 複製4
03:09:278 (4,5) - 不解釋了吶~~~

Ts8zs' Taiko
對不起www~~不會Mod :)

Hard
01:22:377 (8) - 改成兩個Note做個4連打
02:44:983 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如圖
SPOILER
並且刪除5，把1拖到02:45:194
02:47:306 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如圖
SPOILER
02:53:644 (6,7,8,9) - 刪掉7,9
還有slider沒看~~~瓦有點累了吶~~~

就這樣吧~~~能力極限了
加油！！！
Betsuto
395 posts
Joined August 2011
Betsuto
[General]
oh my ... your BG and SD is so cute ! <3
I like it >.< !

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:15:828 (1 , 2 , 3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nxWf
00:43:504 (1 , 2 , 3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nxWU
00:44:771 (2 , 3 , 4) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nxXj
02:24:490 (5 , 6) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nxXW
02:28:081 (7 , 8) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nxYa
02:55:757 (7) - add new combo
02:56:602 (1) - remove new combo
03:08:856 (2 , 3 , 4) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nxYS
03:12:659 (6) - add new combo

[Normal]
SPOILER
This beatmap is too hard for beginner
00:35:264 (4) - add new combo
00:37:799 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:644 (2) - add new combo
01:29:137 (4) - add new combo
01:32:518 (4) - add new combo
03:05:898 (4) - add new combo

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:21:109 - 00:27:870 - have problem with slide resnap all slide please http://puu.sh/nyeB
00:38:644 (5) - add new combo
00:38:856 (1) - remove new combo
01:16:039 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:109 (5) - add new combo
01:22:377 (8) - add new combo
01:36:321 (5) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nyh3
02:21:109 (6) - add new combo
02:27:025 (5) - add new combo

ˊ • ᵜ •ˋ ) ~ ♪
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


Easy

  1. 似乎有些地方spacing有点奇怪.. = =ll
  2. artist应该是Megpoid GUMI 改artist看这里http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/323796
Normal

  1. 00:05:053 (1,2) - 去掉clap
  2. 00:07:588 (5) - ^
  3. 00:11:813 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:10:968 (7) - spacing
  5. 01:49:842 (1,2,3,1,1) - 好诡异的slider 摆好看点吧
  6. 02:28:715 (2) - 加长
Hard

  1. 00:04:208 (7) - 换成单个note, 这样看不清了
  2. 00:24:067 (2) - ctrl+r转过来好点
  3. 00:27:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这六边形没摆好, 把前面滑条放中间 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281366
  4. 01:31:461 (2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281367
  5. 01:32:940 (3) - 放另一边吧... 这样往后不好
  6. 01:33:785 (3) - ^
  7. 02:44:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 一段开始的地方来四方眺容易断啊.. = =换个简单点的引入比较好
  8. 02:44:983 (1) - 这个不用
Taiko

  1. offset不对
that's all

Good luck~
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn
thx for your mod~!
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow

JoJo wrote:

我来了w
先节日快乐~ (捂脸
惊现JOJO囧囧的MOD！
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

  1. 缺失的spinskin spinner-clear.png spinner-spin.png spinner-osu.png
  2. 没用到的SB图片 sb\taikobg2.png
  3. taiko的leadin没设
  4. EpilepsyWarning不用开 SB不是那种
  5. easy的combo colour和其他难度反了个顺序 最好改了
  6. kiai times每次做时候查好是否一致 不是刻意做不同就让他们一样
    - [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:660, ends on 01:36:321 Kiai #2: Starts on 02:44:434, ends on 02:58:089 -
    [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:856, ends on 01:36:321 Kiai #2: Starts on 02:44:444, ends on 02:57:964 -
    [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:429, ends on 01:36:321 Kiai #2: Starts on 02:44:761, ends on 02:58:281 -
    [Taiko] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:429, ends on 01:35:470 Kiai #2: Starts on 02:44:761, ends on 02:58:281
  7. timing section check
    Warning: [Easy] 01:08:660 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Easy] 01:49:320 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Easy] 02:44:434 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Easy] 03:07:073 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Hard] 00:11:497 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Hard] 00:27:552 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Hard] 02:44:444 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Normal] 01:08:429 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Normal] 02:44:761 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Error: [Normal] 00:07:589 timing线在物件之后
    Warning: [Taiko] BPM: 141.999917295872 这个你可以改也可以不改
    Warning: [Taiko] 00:07:589 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 00:27:869 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 01:02:092 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 01:08:429 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Taiko] 01:35:528 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 01:50:264 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 02:36:311 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 02:44:761 kiai线未对齐时间轴
so much about general 这种东西每次传之前先自己查一遍 没有必要在这里给图扣分
这套sliderskin 尤其是sliderfollowcircle怎么这么眼熟

[SB]

00:15:194 - 这里的效果可以出来再早一个蓝线 现在明显慢了
00:55:546 - 黑白效果怎么来的这么快 重音应该在00:55:757 另外之后的黑白也无法理解出现时机 按理说压着白线
01:07:905 - 这个时间也不对
02:26:285 - 目测你需要花时间大改SB时间

[Easy]

00:06:743 (2) - 音效..首先默认clap就不合适 这里是无打击乐的前奏
第一个break拉到00:13:054
00:18:574 (4,5,6) - 这spacing
02:23:644 (1) - 这得NC
easy最重要的是干净 这个遮挡和没开distance snap的程度就不符合

[Normal]

00:25:968 (5) - 危险

[Taiko]

creator words里没写太鼓是谁做的啊 SB里写from ts8zs 但tags里却没写
感觉挺有新意的 但这么多变速会不会被人X我就不知道了
00:46:990 (16) - 这怎么看都该移到00:47:095 (16) -

[Hard]

unsnapped object
Snapping 00:21:954 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:22:377 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:23:644 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:24:067 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:335 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:757 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:26:180 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:26:602 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:36:109 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).

AR可以加1~2
00:21:637 (4,5,6,1) - 这一串实在没法看
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
我是来给我的diff冒个泡的www

Download: GUMI - Nisemono no Uta (raririn) [Taiko].osu
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there

[Easy]
* 0,5x BPM Multiplier can makes confusing for beginners about slider speed
* This diff is doesn't have an Epilepsy Warning, consider to turn on to make consistent on each diff

00:18:574 (4) - New combo for your stanza
00:18:574 (4,5,6) - This part is looks inconsistent on spacing, make sure you check this spacing part
00:32:095 (3) - New combo for your stanza
01:16:039 (5) - ^
01:26:180 (3) - ^
01:29:560 (5) - ^
02:03:363 (1,2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for beginners
02:13:504 (4) - New combo for your stanza
03:03:363 (1) - Same issue as 02:03:363 (1,2)


[Normal]
00:12:659 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning)
00:57:447 (3) - I think remove 2 repeating slider and add note at 00:58:292 is better for rhythm, IMO
02:00:616 (1) - Extend this to 02:02:940, snap at red tick is doesn't make sense, IMO


[Taiko]
* This red timing section should be place at -17 for consistentcy on each diff

00:13:716 (26) - Unsnapped circle
02:25:547 (8) - ^
02:44:561 (19) - ^
03:08:223 (24) - ^


[Insane]
* AR9 is doesn't fit at all, since you have a 142BPM

00:55:123 (6) - This one is unreadable, because you have a 1/8 slider in one stack and it's mess up with approach circle
02:03:363 (1) - ^
02:07:482 (3) - How about snap the end slider at 02:07:799
03:04:630 (5) - This object is touch the HP Bar (just a warning)

Good job~
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]
* 0,5x BPM Multiplier can makes confusing for beginners about slider speed
* This diff is doesn't have an Epilepsy Warning, consider to turn on to make consistent on each diff

00:18:574 (4) - New combo for your stanza
00:18:574 (4,5,6) - This part is looks inconsistent on spacing, make sure you check this spacing part
00:32:095 (3) - New combo for your stanza
01:16:039 (5) - ^
01:26:180 (3) - ^
01:29:560 (5) - ^
02:03:363 (1,2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for beginners
02:13:504 (4) - New combo for your stanza
03:03:363 (1) - Same issue as 02:03:363 (1,2)


[Normal]
00:12:659 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning)
00:57:447 (3) - I think remove 2 repeating slider and add note at 00:58:292 is better for rhythm, IMO
02:00:616 (1) - Extend this to 02:02:940, snap at red tick is doesn't make sense, IMO


[Taiko]
* This red timing section should be place at -17 for consistentcy on each diff

00:13:716 (26) - Unsnapped circle
02:25:547 (8) - ^
02:44:561 (19) - ^
03:08:223 (24) - ^


[Insane]
* AR9 is doesn't fit at all, since you have a 142BPM

00:55:123 (6) - This one is unreadable, because you have a 1/8 slider in one stack and it's mess up with approach circle
02:03:363 (1) - ^
02:07:482 (3) - How about snap the end slider at 02:07:799
03:04:630 (5) - This object is touch the HP Bar (just a warning)

Good job~
All Done!thanks for your mod >w<
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
IRC
22:43 <raririn> : 突然发现按照你的签名我好像可以问你要mod._.
22:43 <tutuhaha> : 恩我现在给你呀XD~
22:43 <tutuhaha> : 先说总的
22:43 <tutuhaha> : PreviewTime: 68856
22:43 <raririn> : 感觉star4mod好没节操
22:43 <raririn> : 嗯
22:44 <raririn> : preview time到底是干啥的...
22:44 <tutuhaha> : 然后建议你第一个kiai time 从01:09:278 (1) 开始
22:45 <tutuhaha> : 就是黄线的起始时间
22:45 <raririn> : o.o
22:46 <raririn> : 可是N和H在01:09:278之前就有note了 也没问题吗
22:46 <tutuhaha> : :O跟note没有必然关系吧
22:46 <raririn> : o.o 了解了
22:46 <tutuhaha> : 跟歌曲有关哇
22:47 <tutuhaha> : 02:01:039 (1) - 这边有一条无用绿线
22:47 <raririn> : 第一个音不是在[01:08:856]开始的嘛...
22:48 <tutuhaha> : 02:16:356 (3) - 这边这个绿线是unrank的因为它没在线上，unsnap
22:48 <tutuhaha> : 人声是从那里开始进入高潮阶段
22:48 <tutuhaha> : 而不是看音，我是这么觉得的
22:48 <raririn> : o.o为什么这两个线的时点和我这里不一样...
22:49 <tutuhaha> : 你能知道我说的是哪就行啦╮(￣▽￣")╭
22:49 <tutuhaha> : 02:45:616 (2) - 第二段的kiai time 从这边开始比较好
22:49 <raririn> : 嗯...
22:50 <tutuhaha> : 02:59:137 (X) - 然后结束到这边
22:51 <tutuhaha> : 然后总的说完了，你选择让我先mod哪个难度？
22:51 <raririn> : 随便吧orz
22:51 <tutuhaha> : 因为我第一个mod的难度会很仔细，然后后面越来越懒._.
22:51 <raririn> : .......
22:51 <tutuhaha> : 所以还是你选比较好
22:51 <raririn> : hard-normal-easy ?
22:51 <tutuhaha> : 行
22:52 <tutuhaha> : 00:01:250 (1) - 尾部加whistle
22:52 <tutuhaha> : 00:03:997 (6,7) - 仔细看这俩距离不对，而且7出格了
22:53 <raririn> : o.o
22:53 <tutuhaha> : 00:08:011 (8) - 尾部换成finish
22:55 <tutuhaha> : 00:21:109 (3) - 这个前面如果你想起到重音的效果的话我不建议加normal-whistle
22:55 <tutuhaha> : 最好加个大音量的soft-finish
22:55 <tutuhaha> : 听起来会比现在好很多
22:55 <raririn> : 嗯...
22:56 <tutuhaha> : 00:30:405 (5) - 前面加whistle
22:56 <tutuhaha> : 00:32:835 (3) - 这边加个note符合节奏也好玩点，现在这个因为本身音量太轻节奏不明显会比较坑爹
22:57 <raririn> : 嗯
22:57 <tutuhaha> : 00:35:264 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这一段没whistle么？
22:57 <tutuhaha> : 听起来太安静了还是加点whistle比较好
22:58 <tutuhaha> : 00:50:687 (8) - 这边加个NC
22:58 <raririn> : 加在slider上好还是加在尾部好...
22:58 <tutuhaha> : 头上，唔给你举例子
22:58 <tutuhaha> : 00:35:475 (1) - whistle 头部
22:59 <tutuhaha> : 00:36:321 (4) - ^
22:59 <raririn> : 嗯
22:59 <tutuhaha> : 00:37:166 (1) - ^
22:59 <tutuhaha> : 00:38:011 (4) - ^
23:00 <tutuhaha> : 00:40:546 (1) - 这边头部加一个小音量的finish比较好
23:00 <tutuhaha> : 00:42:236 (1) - 头部也加个finish好了
23:00 <tutuhaha> : 00:48:997 (3) - ^
23:00 <raririn> : 有的时候whistle加了但是没有变是怎么回事呢o.o
23:01 <tutuhaha> : 00:55:123 (6,1) - 个人不喜欢俩靠太近拉开点
23:01 <tutuhaha> : 那就再加一遍=_=+
23:01 <raririn> : o.o 显示whistle但是听不出
23:01 <tutuhaha> : 01:04:208 (6) - +NC
23:02 <tutuhaha> : 哦那就是你音量太小了
23:02 <raririn> : 哦...
23:02 <tutuhaha> : 01:09:278 (2) - 前面那个nc去掉然后nc从这边开始
23:02 <tutuhaha> : 01:21:109 (1) - +NC
23:03 <tutuhaha> : 01:22:799 (8) - NC这边开始，后面那个NC去掉
23:03 <tutuhaha> : 01:24:490 (1) - +NC
23:03 <tutuhaha> : 01:27:870 (6) - ^
23:04 <tutuhaha> : 01:29:560 (5) - NC从这里开始前面那个NC去掉
23:04 <tutuhaha> : 01:31:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你想摆的五角星歪掉了
23:05 <tutuhaha> : 01:35:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆的更圆滑一点？
23:05 <tutuhaha> : 01:56:602 (1) - NC从这边开始后面那个NC去掉
23:06 <tutuhaha> : 02:15:616 (6) - 没覆盖好，0.02x的差距
23:06 <raririn> : o.o?
23:06 <tutuhaha> : O.O？
23:07 <tutuhaha> : 02:16:884 (1) - 开头的那个clap去掉换成finish
23:07 <tutuhaha> : 02:17:729 (2) - ^
23:07 <tutuhaha> : 02:18:574 (3) - 尾部加clap
23:07 <raririn> : <tutuhaha> 02:15:616 (6) - 没覆盖好，0.02x的差距 什么意思0 0
23:08 <tutuhaha> : 就是没覆盖好的意思OAO
23:08 <raririn> : 0 0
23:08 <tutuhaha> : 你不是5和6重叠嘛
23:08 <tutuhaha> : 然后中间插了0.02而不是0.00
23:08 <raririn> : 哦哦懂了
23:08 <tutuhaha> : 0.00就是覆盖好了哇
23:08 <tutuhaha> : =_=
23:09 <tutuhaha> : 02:16:884 (1,2,3) - 这块我说错了，clap全部替换成whistle
23:09 <tutuhaha> : 这么轻的地方加clap太重了
23:09 <raririn> : ...
23:09 <tutuhaha> : 02:22:166 (9) - +NC
23:09 <tutuhaha> : 02:28:715 (8) - +NC
23:10 <tutuhaha> : 02:36:743 (X) -
23:10 <tutuhaha> : 02:37:166 (X) -
23:11 <tutuhaha> : ^再加俩note
23:11 <tutuhaha> : 然后俩note重叠
23:11 <raririn> : 哦..
23:11 <tutuhaha> : 02:36:743 (X) - 然后这边加NC
23:12 <tutuhaha> : 02:48:574 (1,2,3) - 这3个的距离不对
23:12 <tutuhaha> : 至少保证1-2和2-3的距离是一样的
23:12 <tutuhaha> : 02:50:687 (5) - +NC
23:13 <tutuhaha> : 02:59:137 (1) - 这个note没放到正中央，所以后面的那个SB看起来会比较奇怪
23:14 <tutuhaha> : ok hard mod完了=A=
23:14 <raririn> : 0.0
23:14 <raririn> : 谢啦:3
23:15 <tutuhaha> : 不用不用

液~~~~insane我应该会比较快做完，希望吧<3~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Request from CLANNAD mod queue

對不起 >___>拖了那麼久 >___>

Easy

00:33:785 (3) - 這個頭跟(1)對齊吧

00:52:377 (5) - nc ? 不喜歡combo到7

02:00:616 (1) - 這個轉盤能不能到 02:03:363 - 再結束 ?

02:19:419 (4) - 跟(3)對齊吧 ~

02:46:461 (2) - 跟(1)對齊

03:09:279 (3) - nc

Normal

CS-1
AR-2

00:04:630 (8) - nc ?

00:52:377 (1) - 這邊其實沒必要變速的

02:18:574 (1,2,3,4) - 這四個滑條距離要相等 自行調整吧

我也覺得Easy跟Normal有很大的差距 .. 建議交給Guest做個Normal取代這個吧 ?



期待TuInsane的完成

Good Map ! 希望你能接受我的爛Mod >.>
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
http://puu.sh/oljw
看这边看这边~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
下载上面的那个东西，然后直接解压到文件夹内，里面有normal和soft的静音滑条文件，和我最新搞出来的一小段tuinsane，加完了这些后记得要full update，然后记得要把easy的音效都改成S.C1或者N.C1

然后你看看tuinsane，那一段我全部都加了音效，你看看如果合适的话就改改你另外3个难度的音效，我还是觉得前面啥音效都听不到的感觉不好

唔还有最后那个防癫痫【...】的那个SB标志，我测了一下发现leadin time 要在2.5秒那个标志才不会影响正常打图，所以先调到2.5秒吧剩下的等被人喷了后再说←v←~
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

ay6859 wrote:

Request from CLANNAD mod queue

對不起 >___>拖了那麼久 >___>

Easy

00:33:785 (3) - 這個頭跟(1)對齊吧

00:52:377 (5) - nc ? 不喜歡combo到7

02:00:616 (1) - 這個轉盤能不能到 02:03:363 - 再結束 ?

02:19:419 (4) - 跟(3)對齊吧 ~

02:46:461 (2) - 跟(1)對齊

03:09:279 (3) - nc

Normal

CS-1
AR-2

00:04:630 (8) - nc ?

00:52:377 (1) - 這邊其實沒必要變速的

02:18:574 (1,2,3,4) - 這四個滑條距離要相等 自行調整吧

我也覺得Easy跟Normal有很大的差距 .. 建議交給Guest做個Normal取代這個吧 ?



期待TuInsane的完成

Good Map ! 希望你能接受我的爛Mod >.>
thx,Normal GD的话……如果你能催一下彩虹……
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
Download: Megpoid GUMI - Nisemono no Uta (raririn) [Ts8aiko].osu

LKs wrote:

[Taiko]

creator words里没写太鼓是谁做的啊 SB里写from ts8zs 但tags里却没写
感觉挺有新意的 但这么多变速会不会被人X我就不知道了
00:46:990 (16) - 这怎么看都该移到00:47:095 (16) -
我做的……话说最后一段突然没了呢= =b raririn你给我出来！
另外感谢mod www
顺便感谢一下对于一个新Taikomapper的鼓励www
这个是后面没删减的版本= =b
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
做完了~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
P.S
自己检查下hard，在后一段有很多很多的slider尾部是没有snap到的！！！！！！！！！！！
上次想和你说来着，结果发现你不在线._.↑

Download: Megpoid GUMI - Nisemono no Uta (raririn) [TuInsane].osu
Shino
1,319 posts
Joined April 2010
Shino
Storyboard suggestion time.
I just checked storyboard code in notepad, not in osu!, so maybe I can do a wrong mod.
If it causes, just ignore it! This is not a mod, but a suggestion.

*I'll consider rechecking this SB in May 6th. Send forum PM me if you want.

[General]
Great. Very long, isn't it?

Standard Diff
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\GUMI - Nisemono no Uta-2.png",320,240
F,0,0,1372,1
M,0,1372,,320,240
F,0,1372,5174,1,0
F,0,5174,5386,0 You don't need this line. Cause of bold line(above), this bg image keeps fade 0.
F,0,5386,5597,0,0.5480001
F,0,5597,7287,0.5480001,1 Did you want " F,0,5386,7287,0,1"?
F,0,7287,9400,1,0

F,0,156865,159400,0,1
F,0,159400,160667,1 Same case of purple suggestion.
F,0,160667,161935,1 ^
F,0,161935,165315,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\bg.jpg",320,240
S,0,87990,88203,1,1.151474
F,0,87991,88203,1,0 Start Offset needs to change.
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240
M,0,110485,,320,240
M,0,120738,,320,240 You don't need this two lines because this object in already on 320,240.
And you don't need these lines. Remove these:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\name.png",320,240
F,0,2006,4753,1
F,0,4753,8133,1
F,0,8133,12358,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\hako.png",320,240
F,0,4964,6865,1
F,0,8133,9823,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\gumi.png",320,240
F,0,9823,12358,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\by.png",320,240
F,0,16583,19118,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\skin.png",320,240
F,0,20385,21652,0,1
F,0,21652,21653,1 Did you want " F,0,20385,21653,0,1"?
F,0,21653,24188,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\sb by.png",320,240
F,0,21653,24188,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l1.png",320,240
F,0,29680,30948,1
F,0,30948,32004,1
F,0,32004,33904,1
F,0,33904,33905,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l2.png",320,240
F,0,36124,38130,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l3.png",320,240
F,0,38764,39398,0,0.58
F,0,39398,39820,0.58,1 Did you want " F,0,38764,39820,0,1"?
F,0,39820,41088,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l4.png",320,240
F,0,43623,46897,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l5.png",320,240
F,0,49538,50806,1
F,0,50806,52073,1
F,0,52073,54080,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l6.png",320,240
F,0,53341,54397,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l7.png",320,240
F,0,56087,60523,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l8.png",320,240
F,0,62847,67495,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l9.png",320,240
F,0,69818,71086,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l 10.png",320,240
F,0,73093,74360,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l11.png",320,240
F,0,76367,77846,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l12.png",320,240
F,0,79747,81226,1
F,0,82071,82705,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l13.png",320,240
F,0,83127,84606,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l14.png",320,240
F,0,86507,88409,1
F,0,88409,88831,1,0.5040001
F,0,88831,89254,0.5040001,0 Did you want " F,0,88409,89254,1,0"?
F,0,89254,89887,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l15.png",320,240
F,0,90310,90521,1
F,0,90521,90627,1
F,0,90627,91261,1
F,0,91261,91366,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l16.png",320,240
F,0,93162,93901,1
F,0,93901,94112,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l17.png",320,240
F,0,123477,128969,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l18.png",320,240
F,0,130870,132138,1
F,0,132138,132877,1
F,0,132877,134884,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l19.png",320,240
F,0,165410,167417,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l 20.png",320,240
F,0,169213,170903,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l21.png",320,240
F,0,172698,174283,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.png",320,240
F,0,175445,178402,1
F,0,178402,180515,1
M,0,178491,,320,240

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l22.png",320,240
F,0,175973,177769,1

Taiko Diff
Sprite,Background,Centre,"TaikoBG.png",320,240 Change "320,240" into "319,370" and remove Move line(bolded). This will work also.
S,0,0,,0.624
M,0,211931,,319,370

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\taiko.png",320,240 Change "320,240" into "388,427" and remove Move line(bolded).
S,0,7708,,0.632 Change this into " S,0,7708,211931,0.632" and this will work.
F,0,7708,8553,0,1
M,0,7708,211931,388,427
F,0,8553,211931,1 Remove this line.

ps. Remove .osb file and do a full-submit. I think you don't need that file.
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

tutuhaha wrote:

做完了~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
P.S
自己检查下hard，在后一段有很多很多的slider尾部是没有snap到的！！！！！！！！！！！
上次想和你说来着，结果发现你不在线._.↑
哇谢谢！
这几天考试._.一直都挂着但是不在线
hard明明记得有改过咋回事QAQ 再看看好了
>.>
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

Shino wrote:

Storyboard suggestion time.
I just checked storyboard code in notepad, not in osu!, so maybe I can do a wrong mod.
If it causes, just ignore it! This is not a mod, but a suggestion.

*I'll consider rechecking this SB in May 6th. Send forum PM me if you want.

[General]
Great. Very long, isn't it?

Standard Diff
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\GUMI - Nisemono no Uta-2.png",320,240
F,0,0,1372,1
M,0,1372,,320,240
F,0,1372,5174,1,0
F,0,5174,5386,0 You don't need this line. Cause of bold line(above), this bg image keeps fade 0.
F,0,5386,5597,0,0.5480001
F,0,5597,7287,0.5480001,1 Did you want " F,0,5386,7287,0,1"?
F,0,7287,9400,1,0

F,0,156865,159400,0,1
F,0,159400,160667,1 Same case of purple suggestion.
F,0,160667,161935,1 ^
F,0,161935,165315,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\bg.jpg",320,240
S,0,87990,88203,1,1.151474
F,0,87991,88203,1,0 Start Offset needs to change.
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240
M,0,110485,,320,240
M,0,120738,,320,240 You don't need this two lines because this object in already on 320,240.
And you don't need these lines. Remove these:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\name.png",320,240
F,0,2006,4753,1
F,0,4753,8133,1
F,0,8133,12358,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\hako.png",320,240
F,0,4964,6865,1
F,0,8133,9823,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\gumi.png",320,240
F,0,9823,12358,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\by.png",320,240
F,0,16583,19118,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\skin.png",320,240
F,0,20385,21652,0,1
F,0,21652,21653,1 Did you want " F,0,20385,21653,0,1"?
F,0,21653,24188,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\sb by.png",320,240
F,0,21653,24188,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l1.png",320,240
F,0,29680,30948,1
F,0,30948,32004,1
F,0,32004,33904,1
F,0,33904,33905,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l2.png",320,240
F,0,36124,38130,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l3.png",320,240
F,0,38764,39398,0,0.58
F,0,39398,39820,0.58,1 Did you want " F,0,38764,39820,0,1"?
F,0,39820,41088,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l4.png",320,240
F,0,43623,46897,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l5.png",320,240
F,0,49538,50806,1
F,0,50806,52073,1
F,0,52073,54080,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l6.png",320,240
F,0,53341,54397,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l7.png",320,240
F,0,56087,60523,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l8.png",320,240
F,0,62847,67495,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l9.png",320,240
F,0,69818,71086,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l 10.png",320,240
F,0,73093,74360,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l11.png",320,240
F,0,76367,77846,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l12.png",320,240
F,0,79747,81226,1
F,0,82071,82705,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l13.png",320,240
F,0,83127,84606,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l14.png",320,240
F,0,86507,88409,1
F,0,88409,88831,1,0.5040001
F,0,88831,89254,0.5040001,0 Did you want " F,0,88409,89254,1,0"?
F,0,89254,89887,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l15.png",320,240
F,0,90310,90521,1
F,0,90521,90627,1
F,0,90627,91261,1
F,0,91261,91366,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l16.png",320,240
F,0,93162,93901,1
F,0,93901,94112,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l17.png",320,240
F,0,123477,128969,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l18.png",320,240
F,0,130870,132138,1
F,0,132138,132877,1
F,0,132877,134884,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l19.png",320,240
F,0,165410,167417,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l 20.png",320,240
F,0,169213,170903,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l21.png",320,240
F,0,172698,174283,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.png",320,240
F,0,175445,178402,1
F,0,178402,180515,1
M,0,178491,,320,240

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lrc\l22.png",320,240
F,0,175973,177769,1

Taiko Diff
Sprite,Background,Centre,"TaikoBG.png",320,240 Change "320,240" into "319,370" and remove Move line(bolded). This will work also.
S,0,0,,0.624
M,0,211931,,319,370

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\taiko.png",320,240 Change "320,240" into "388,427" and remove Move line(bolded).
S,0,7708,,0.632 Change this into " S,0,7708,211931,0.632" and this will work.
F,0,7708,8553,0,1
M,0,7708,211931,388,427
F,0,8553,211931,1 Remove this line.

ps. Remove .osb file and do a full-submit. I think you don't need that file.
thanks!
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

  1. 缺失的spinskin spinner-clear.png spinner-spin.png spinner-osu.png
  2. 没用到的SB图片 sb\taikobg2.png
  3. taiko的leadin没设
  4. EpilepsyWarning不用开 SB不是那种
  5. easy的combo colour和其他难度反了个顺序 最好改了
  6. kiai times每次做时候查好是否一致 不是刻意做不同就让他们一样
    - [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:660, ends on 01:36:321 Kiai #2: Starts on 02:44:434, ends on 02:58:089 -
    [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:856, ends on 01:36:321 Kiai #2: Starts on 02:44:444, ends on 02:57:964 -
    [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:429, ends on 01:36:321 Kiai #2: Starts on 02:44:761, ends on 02:58:281 -
    [Taiko] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:429, ends on 01:35:470 Kiai #2: Starts on 02:44:761, ends on 02:58:281
  7. timing section check
    Warning: [Easy] 01:08:660 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Easy] 01:49:320 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Easy] 02:44:434 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Easy] 03:07:073 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Hard] 00:11:497 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Hard] 00:27:552 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Hard] 02:44:444 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Normal] 01:08:429 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Normal] 02:44:761 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Error: [Normal] 00:07:589 timing线在物件之后
    Warning: [Taiko] BPM: 141.999917295872 这个你可以改也可以不改
    Warning: [Taiko] 00:07:589 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 00:27:869 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 01:02:092 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 01:08:429 kiai线未对齐时间轴
    Warning: [Taiko] 01:35:528 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 01:50:264 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 02:36:311 有多余的timing线
    Warning: [Taiko] 02:44:761 kiai线未对齐时间轴
so much about general 这种东西每次传之前先自己查一遍 没有必要在这里给图扣分
这套sliderskin 尤其是sliderfollowcircle怎么这么眼熟

眼熟就对了 借用了一下你的flower dance………………[SB]

00:15:194 - 这里的效果可以出来再早一个蓝线 现在明显慢了
00:55:546 - 黑白效果怎么来的这么快 重音应该在00:55:757 另外之后的黑白也无法理解出现时机 按理说压着白线
01:07:905 - 这个时间也不对
02:26:285 - 目测你需要花时间大改SB时间

[Easy]

00:06:743 (2) - 音效..首先默认clap就不合适 这里是无打击乐的前奏
第一个break拉到00:13:054
00:18:574 (4,5,6) - 这spacing
02:23:644 (1) - 这得NC
easy最重要的是干净 这个遮挡和没开distance snap的程度就不符合

[Normal]

00:25:968 (5) - 危险

[Taiko]

creator words里没写太鼓是谁做的啊 SB里写from ts8zs 但tags里却没写
感觉挺有新意的 但这么多变速会不会被人X我就不知道了
00:46:990 (16) - 这怎么看都该移到00:47:095 (16) -

[Hard]

unsnapped object
Snapping 00:21:954 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:22:377 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:23:644 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:24:067 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:335 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:757 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:26:180 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:26:602 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:36:109 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).

AR可以加1~2
00:21:637 (4,5,6,1) - 这一串实在没法看
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
剛才誰要太鼓mod <_<

[General]
- try to compress the BG (some of them is as large as 6xxKB)
- [Hard]: end kiai artificially, don't kiai till end
- many unsnapped slider in [normal] and [Hard] o.o

[Taiko]
- S is too soft, us N sample and avoid loudness fluctuation
- remove letterbox during breaks
- HP, OD+1

00:07:166 - use ddkdk since the piano sound is on red tick
00:11:602 - I don't see the point to change the SV, and it cause overlapping of

notes which is hard to read.
00:35:264 - ^
00:48:785 - ^
01:59:349 - ddkdk
02:00:511 - the k between ddd can be slowed down too
02:03:363 - slow down this one too, otherwise it cause difficulty to read the note
02:54:278 - kdkkkkd
02:55:757 - add finish
02:56:602 - ^
03:05:898 - the music sounds like dkddk (and repeating)

- Try to avoid excess SV change
- More finishes and pattern variation can be put in the beginning of the song.
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

wmfchris wrote:

剛才誰要太鼓mod <_<

[General]
- try to compress the BG (some of them is as large as 6xxKB)我吐槽过这个事某qq死活也不改……
- [Hard]: end kiai artificially, don't kiai till end 这首歌的kiaitime怎么设置的很怀疑……我做太鼓的时候因为立了一堆没用的线……
- many unsnapped slider in [normal] and [Hard] o.o raririn！让你乱换offset！

[Taiko]
- S is too soft, us N sample and avoid loudness fluctuation fixed
- remove letterbox during breaks 看不懂……哪里有break啊……
- HP, OD+1fixed

00:07:166 - use ddkdk since the piano sound is on red tick fixed
00:11:602 - I don't see the point don't see the point?什么意思…… to change the SV, and it cause overlapping of notes which is hard to read.
00:35:264 - ^
00:48:785 - ^
01:59:349 - ddkdk fixed
02:00:511 - the k between ddd can be slowed down too 不算一个梗么www
02:03:363 - slow down this one too, otherwise it cause difficulty to read the note 有个线跟着，一般来说有线的都是咚？而且到那里已经算人声了吧？
02:54:278 - kdkkkkd fixed
02:55:757 - add finish fixed
02:56:602 - ^ fixed
03:05:898 - the music sounds like dkddk (and repeating) 我觉得有点像kkkdk

- Try to avoid excess SV change ……
←灵感是月下美人登塔……貌似我这个太鼓新手都能读？果然很多人不喜欢变速梗……
好吧我想出了个新梗……能换掉一个变速梗……其他的换不掉诶= =b
- More finishes and pattern variation （这里看不懂） can be put in the beginning of the song. 扔大咚扔不进去……
万分感谢www话说新的点左边空白跳用户这个真心烦人啊= =b
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

wmfchris wrote:

剛才誰要太鼓mod <_<

[General]
- try to compress the BG (some of them is as large as 6xxKB)
- [Hard]: end kiai artificially, don't kiai till end
- many unsnapped slider in [normal] and [Hard] o.o

[Taiko]
- S is too soft, us N sample and avoid loudness fluctuation
- remove letterbox during breaks
- HP, OD+1

00:07:166 - use ddkdk since the piano sound is on red tick
00:11:602 - I don't see the point to change the SV, and it cause overlapping of

notes which is hard to read.
00:35:264 - ^
00:48:785 - ^
01:59:349 - ddkdk
02:00:511 - the k between ddd can be slowed down too
02:03:363 - slow down this one too, otherwise it cause difficulty to read the note
02:54:278 - kdkkkkd
02:55:757 - add finish
02:56:602 - ^
03:05:898 - the music sounds like dkddk (and repeating)

- Try to avoid excess SV change
- More finishes and pattern variation can be put in the beginning of the song.
谢谢wmf~
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


您好，raririn :)

[General]

E跟N的難度差距有點大....1星與4星半= =...大概之後會被吐糟
然後音量稍小聲，+20%看看
還有，各個難度的kiai都不同，統一它

[Easy]

AR-1~2 對於Easy來說非常高= =OD和HP理想的話也減1
00:54:067 (3) - Easy不要放1/4 Beat。用Slider代替，在00:54:912結束
01:36:321 () - Add note here?
02:16:884 (1) - 取消折返，在02:17:306結束；4個都這樣換掉
02:36:321 () - 放1個1/1的Silder然後折返

[Normal]

AR-1
02:36:321 () - 同Easy
整體上我覺得很難~比較像EZ's Hard多一點0.0

[Hard]

00:04:630 (1) - 沒重疊好
00:35:264 (7) - 這裡開始NC
00:36:954 (5) - ^
02:02:940 (2) - 1/8.....太難了
02:05:159 (3) - 不要在藍線結束
02:48:997 (3) - 這裡開始的Slider都變短了，您可能做過錯誤的snap，全部都重新調整吧

[TuInsane]

01:07:588 (1) - 連點很明顯在這裡開始....要麼刪掉01:08:116 (4)都挽強可以
01:12:659 (1) - Remove NC
02:36:321 () - 同Easy
02:51:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 其實很不工整
02:52:377 (1) - 與02:50:687 (1)重疊
03:12:236 (1) - 加個折返 :)

That all~
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

ertyukjh010 wrote:



您好，raririn :)

[General]

E跟N的難度差距有點大....1星與4星半= =...大概之後會被吐糟
然後音量稍小聲， 20%看看
還有，各個難度的kiai都不同，統一它

[Easy]

AR-1~2 對於Easy來說非常高= =OD和HP理想的話也減1
00:54:067 (3) - Easy不要放1/4 Beat。用Slider代替，在00:54:912結束
01:36:321 () - Add note here?
02:16:884 (1) - 取消折返，在02:17:306結束；4個都這樣換掉
02:36:321 () - 放1個1/1的Silder然後折返

[Normal]

AR-1
02:36:321 () - 同Easy
整體上我覺得很難~比較像EZ's Hard多一點0.0

[Hard]

00:04:630 (1) - 沒重疊好
00:35:264 (7) - 這裡開始NC
00:36:954 (5) - ^
02:02:940 (2) - 1/8.....太難了
02:05:159 (3) - 不要在藍線結束
02:48:997 (3) - 這裡開始的Slider都變短了，您可能做過錯誤的snap，全部都重新調整吧

[TuInsane]

01:07:588 (1) - 連點很明顯在這裡開始....要麼刪掉01:08:116 (4)都挽強可以
01:12:659 (1) - Remove NC
02:36:321 () - 同Easy
02:51:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 其實很不工整
[attachment=0:0a57c]02.png[/attachment:0a57c]
02:52:377 (1) - 與02:50:687 (1)重疊
03:12:236 (1) - 加個折返 :)

That all~
谢谢ert~
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]

删掉这个
你把最好的版本del掉了 taiko本来的sb很好
结果又改了
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.

[General]
The preview times are inconsistent. if you look at the easy diff, the preview time is set to 68973. set it to 68856 like the other diffs.
remove the letterbox during breaks since you're using a SB.
keep the kiai time consistent, but only your diffs. Tu-chan's diff however can be inconsistent since she made a GD for this song.
i think it's called a pulse but i think it's a bit delayed because it's supposed to match with the drums. basically the loud parts of the song. try to set the pulse where the loud parts start.

[Easy]
set the DS to 0.8 or 1.0 because 0.6 looks clumped up.
00:02:518 (2) - add a clap here since you have it on (5).
00:05:053 (1,2) - same as above but at the end of the sliders. NOTE: if you added the clap on (5) by accident remove it because the claps don't fit with this part. other than that follow the 2 suggestions to keep the consistency.
00:08:433 (3) - add a finish here to match that sound.
00:15:194 (1) - ^
00:38:011 (4) - move this so that (1,2,3,4) form a square.
00:38:856 (1) - if you see during gameplay, this barely looks like a curved slider. move the 2nd point around so that it'd look symmetrical.
00:42:236 (1) - replace the clap for a finish. i think the finish fits with this part as it matches with the vocals.
00:54:067 (3) - not a good idea in an easy diff because beginners won't know when this kick slider will end. try to do something easier than this. i suggest replacing this for a 2/1 slider to that it'd be easier for beginners.
00:54:067 (3,1) - inconsistent spacing. for easy diffs the spacing should be consistent for beginners to follow easily.
01:05:898 (1,2) - try to make a border between these sliders. i think it looks nicer during gameplay.
01:07:588 (2,3) - same as 00:54:067.
01:09:278 (3) - make this a NC because of new lyrics and add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals.
01:12:659 (1) - same reason as above but to match the cymbals. no need to remove the NC.
01:14:349 (2,3,4) - ^
01:50:264 - remove the break because it's unnecessary and the hp bar doesn't decrease that much.
01:54:278 - ^
01:57:659 - ^
01:31:250 (2) - ik that this wave slider can look a lot nicer and smoother. as it stands it looks ugly and it doesn't flow properly.
01:35:687 - extend the break to 01:36:321 because that's where the instrumental starts.
01:49:842 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the cymbals.
02:11:813 (3) - ^
02:16:884 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for beginners because they can't make jumps like this. try to do something easier than this.
02:23:644 (1) - a finish at the beginning to match that sound.
02:45:194 (1) - same as above but at the repeat arrow.
03:05:898 (1) - judging by this pattern, beginners might think that there's 1 repeat instead of 2. make this repeat once like the previous and next sliders.

[Normal]
Why AR7? AR7 at a normal diff is too fast for players to react. anyways try these settings. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.
00:01:250 (1) - this curved slider looks ugly. make it nicer and symmetrical because it looks bad during gameplay.
00:27:025 (7) - i've seen this in so many normal diffs and i don't like it at all. players won't know when this kick slider will end. do something easier for players to do because they might let go in the middle of the slider.
00:29:560 (2) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause.
00:42:236 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the cymbals.
00:56:602 (2) - get rid of a point in the slider because this isn't a proper curved slider.
01:25:757 (2,3) - (2) barely looks like a curved slider, and (3) is placed at a bad spot IMO. so curve (2) properly and move (3) at the other side so that it'd form a blanket between these notes.
01:26:602 (4,5) - yes it's following the DS but the path between would be hard for players due to the overlap on (5). try flipping (4) so that it'd form a blanket between (4,5), or you can do this because the path is easier for players.
01:34:630 (8) - same as 00:27:025, but add notes to follow the piano for this.
02:29:550 - remove this line unless you have a valid reason why it's here.
02:36:311 - ^
02:57:447 (4) - same as 00:27:075.
03:02:518 (7,8,1,2) - these sliders barely look like curved sliders during gameplay, so curve them properly to make it nicer.

[Hard]
00:04:208 (7,1) - this is intentional right because the spacing is inconsistent for this.
00:15:616 (2) - this wave slider can look a lot smoother. it barely shows that it flows properly during gameplay.
00:31:250 (7) - ^
00:43:926 (4) - ^
01:01:250 (4) - ooh make this slider look like (2). this wave slider ruins the flow for this combo.
02:04:842 (3) - same as 00:15:616.
02:46:039 (3) - make this symmetrical. it looks ugly as it stands.
03:02:518 (1) - same as 00:15:616.

[TuInsane]
00:26:602 (4) - I think the repeat might surprise players, so get rod of a repeat and replace it for a circle to make it easier for players.
00:52:377 (1,2) - too easy. replace this for a stream to challenge players.
01:26:180 (1) - make this a proper curved slider like the other 3 sliders. this 1 looks ugly during gameplay.
02:01:673 (1,2,1) - same as 00:52:377, or just replace (1,2) for a stream.
mou Tu-chan~ why is it so good >.<

I guess that's it. overall add more hitsounds and more finishes because this many hitsounds isn't enough. anyways GL :D
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
You're next from the mod queue.

[General]
BPM and offset are good.

[Easy]
I don't see anything.
[Normal]
00:13:504 You could delete that circle and add spinner there and finish it in 00:14:349.
00:21:954 Make that a finisher sound.
00:47:729 Put a slider and finish it in either 00:48:152 or 00:48:363.
00:54:278 Maybe add a spinner or a slider and end it in 00:55:335 since that part kind of stands out.
01:34:630 Those kind of sliders usually goes on Hard or Insane, maybe you should replace it with a spinner or a long slider.
02:00:828 Put a finisher sound in there.
03:10:968 Same as 01:34:630 but finish it in 03:12:236.
Normal is done... althoug... it's kinda more like a Hard one...

[Taiko]
Taiko's good, I don't hear anything wrong.

[Hard]
03:12:659 Finish the Kiai mode there, don't let it unfinished.
I couldn't see anything else...

[TuInsane]
00:40:652 Make that spinner end in 00:42:025
00:54:173 That spinner should finish in a soft sound section and of course with a soft finisher.
01:24:912 You should move that circle so those five circles form a five point star :P...
... I don't see anything else...
___________________

I hope it helped in a manner. My mods aren't that good, but I seriously hope that it helped. Good Luck with getting it ranked. T-T Man, I really need to get good at modding...
Dino99
1,809 posts
Joined May 2011
Dino99
拖了好久>_> 不好意思啦~

[General]
  1. Preview time不一致~ 修正唄
  2. Autolead-in不一致~ 也修正唄:3


[Easy]
  1. 00:54:067 (3,1) - 這樣疊不好看吧>_> 把(1)試著排到這? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301749
  2. 01:35:687 - 這個Break time試著往後移? 好很多的:> (移到01:36:321)
  3. 02:00:616 (1) - 這轉盤應該是在01:59:983就開始了
  4. 02:47:306 (3) - 間距太小了~
  5. 02:50:687 (3) - 間距太大了~
  6. 03:07:588 (2) - 再加個折返?
[Normal]
  1. HP-1?
  2. 01:25:757 (2,3) - 間距>~< Normal還是建議不能有跳的~
  3. 01:34:208 (6,7) - 排這邊吧~ 兩個用重疊好些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301763
  4. 01:36:109 - 一樣~ 把Break time延後
  5. 01:49:842 (1) - Orz這slider略醜了>_>... 改下形狀吧!!~~
  6. 01:53:856 (1) - ^
  7. 02:16:884 (1,2,3,4) - 可以試著轉個20度? 看起來比較不會..那麼直>_<
  8. 02:57:447 (4) - 喂喂這該在Noraml出現嗎>_>?? 額..總之這略坑了._.
  9. 03:12:659 (1) - 放正中間吧~~
[Hard]
  1. AR-1?
  2. 00:04:419 - 加個圈吧~
  3. 01:34:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這樣排? 我覺得好些:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301777
  4. 01:36:637 - 挖勒:O 這Break time怎移到這了>_> 移回來吧~~~~
  5. 01:59:560 (6) - 往上一格好看些~
  6. 02:05:264 (4) - 間距錯了~ 會誤導player的@_@ 應該要排成這裡~
  7. 02:24:490 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 做對稱吧~~ Hard有間距變化沒關西的~~ (把(4)(5)(6)往外移吧~)
  8. 02:55:335 - 這邊有2個圈重疊了>_< 刪掉一個吧~
[TuInsane]
  1. 01:25:335 (5) - 排這裡不好看吧.. 移到[X:200 Y:128]?
That's all
加油吧~ Star~
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn
249
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.

[General]
The preview times are inconsistent. if you look at the easy diff, the preview time is set to 68973. set it to 68856 like the other diffs.
remove the letterbox during breaks since you're using a SB.
keep the kiai time consistent, but only your diffs. Tu-chan's diff however can be inconsistent since she made a GD for this song.
i think it's called a pulse but i think it's a bit delayed because it's supposed to match with the drums. basically the loud parts of the song. try to set the pulse where the loud parts start.

[Easy]
set the DS to 0.8 or 1.0 because 0.6 looks clumped up.
00:02:518 (2) - add a clap here since you have it on (5).
00:05:053 (1,2) - same as above but at the end of the sliders. NOTE: if you added the clap on (5) by accident remove it because the claps don't fit with this part. other than that follow the 2 suggestions to keep the consistency.
00:08:433 (3) - add a finish here to match that sound.
00:15:194 (1) - ^
00:38:011 (4) - move this so that (1,2,3,4) form a square.
00:38:856 (1) - if you see during gameplay, this barely looks like a curved slider. move the 2nd point around so that it'd look symmetrical.
00:42:236 (1) - replace the clap for a finish. i think the finish fits with this part as it matches with the vocals.
00:54:067 (3) - not a good idea in an easy diff because beginners won't know when this kick slider will end. try to do something easier than this. i suggest replacing this for a 2/1 slider to that it'd be easier for beginners.
00:54:067 (3,1) - inconsistent spacing. for easy diffs the spacing should be consistent for beginners to follow easily.
01:05:898 (1,2) - try to make a border between these sliders. i think it looks nicer during gameplay.
01:07:588 (2,3) - same as 00:54:067.
01:09:278 (3) - make this a NC because of new lyrics and add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals.
01:12:659 (1) - same reason as above but to match the cymbals. no need to remove the NC.
01:14:349 (2,3,4) - ^
01:50:264 - remove the break because it's unnecessary and the hp bar doesn't decrease that much.
01:54:278 - ^
01:57:659 - ^
01:31:250 (2) - ik that this wave slider can look a lot nicer and smoother. as it stands it looks ugly and it doesn't flow properly.
01:35:687 - extend the break to 01:36:321 because that's where the instrumental starts.
01:49:842 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the cymbals.
02:11:813 (3) - ^
02:16:884 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for beginners because they can't make jumps like this. try to do something easier than this.
02:23:644 (1) - a finish at the beginning to match that sound.
02:45:194 (1) - same as above but at the repeat arrow.
03:05:898 (1) - judging by this pattern, beginners might think that there's 1 repeat instead of 2. make this repeat once like the previous and next sliders.

[Normal]
Why AR7? AR7 at a normal diff is too fast for players to react. anyways try these settings. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.
00:01:250 (1) - this curved slider looks ugly. make it nicer and symmetrical because it looks bad during gameplay.
00:27:025 (7) - i've seen this in so many normal diffs and i don't like it at all. players won't know when this kick slider will end. do something easier for players to do because they might let go in the middle of the slider.
00:29:560 (2) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause.
00:42:236 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the cymbals.
00:56:602 (2) - get rid of a point in the slider because this isn't a proper curved slider.
01:25:757 (2,3) - (2) barely looks like a curved slider, and (3) is placed at a bad spot IMO. so curve (2) properly and move (3) at the other side so that it'd form a blanket between these notes.
01:26:602 (4,5) - yes it's following the DS but the path between would be hard for players due to the overlap on (5). try flipping (4) so that it'd form a blanket between (4,5), or you can do this because the path is easier for players.
01:34:630 (8) - same as 00:27:025, but add notes to follow the piano for this.
02:29:550 - remove this line unless you have a valid reason why it's here.
02:36:311 - ^
02:57:447 (4) - same as 00:27:075.
03:02:518 (7,8,1,2) - these sliders barely look like curved sliders during gameplay, so curve them properly to make it nicer.

[Hard]
00:04:208 (7,1) - this is intentional right because the spacing is inconsistent for this.
00:15:616 (2) - this wave slider can look a lot smoother. it barely shows that it flows properly during gameplay.
00:31:250 (7) - ^
00:43:926 (4) - ^
01:01:250 (4) - ooh make this slider look like (2). this wave slider ruins the flow for this combo.
02:04:842 (3) - same as 00:15:616.
02:46:039 (3) - make this symmetrical. it looks ugly as it stands.
03:02:518 (1) - same as 00:15:616.

[TuInsane]
00:26:602 (4) - I think the repeat might surprise players, so get rod of a repeat and replace it for a circle to make it easier for players.
00:52:377 (1,2) - too easy. replace this for a stream to challenge players.
01:26:180 (1) - make this a proper curved slider like the other 3 sliders. this 1 looks ugly during gameplay.
02:01:673 (1,2,1) - same as 00:52:377, or just replace (1,2) for a stream.
mou Tu-chan~ why is it so good >.<

I guess that's it. overall add more hitsounds and more finishes because this many hitsounds isn't enough. anyways GL :D
All Done!

425
SPOILER

Crok425 wrote:

You're next from the mod queue.

[General]
BPM and offset are good.

[Easy]
I don't see anything.
[Normal]
00:13:504 You could delete that circle and add spinner there and finish it in 00:14:349.
00:21:954 Make that a finisher sound.
00:47:729 Put a slider and finish it in either 00:48:152 or 00:48:363.
00:54:278 Maybe add a spinner or a slider and end it in 00:55:335 since that part kind of stands out.
01:34:630 Those kind of sliders usually goes on Hard or Insane, maybe you should replace it with a spinner or a long slider.
02:00:828 Put a finisher sound in there.
03:10:968 Same as 01:34:630 but finish it in 03:12:236.
Normal is done... althoug... it's kinda more like a Hard one...

[Taiko]
Taiko's good, I don't hear anything wrong.

[Hard]
03:12:659 Finish the Kiai mode there, don't let it unfinished.
I couldn't see anything else...

[TuInsane]
00:40:652 Make that spinner end in 00:42:025
00:54:173 That spinner should finish in a soft sound section and of course with a soft finisher.
01:24:912 You should move that circle so those five circles form a five point star :P...
... I don't see anything else...
___________________

I hope it helped in a manner. My mods aren't that good, but I seriously hope that it helped. Good Luck with getting it ranked. T-T Man, I really need to get good at modding...
All Done!

barry
SPOILER

12BARRY21 wrote:

拖了好久>_> 不好意思啦~

[General]
  1. Preview time不一致~ 修正唄
  2. Autolead-in不一致~ 也修正唄:3


[Easy]
  1. 00:54:067 (3,1) - 這樣疊不好看吧>_> 把(1)試著排到這? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301749
  2. 01:35:687 - 這個Break time試著往後移? 好很多的:> (移到01:36:321)
  3. 02:00:616 (1) - 這轉盤應該是在01:59:983就開始了
  4. 02:47:306 (3) - 間距太小了~
  5. 02:50:687 (3) - 間距太大了~
  6. 03:07:588 (2) - 再加個折返?
[Normal]
  1. HP-1?
  2. 01:25:757 (2,3) - 間距>~< Normal還是建議不能有跳的~
  3. 01:34:208 (6,7) - 排這邊吧~ 兩個用重疊好些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301763
  4. 01:36:109 - 一樣~ 把Break time延後
  5. 01:49:842 (1) - Orz這slider略醜了>_>... 改下形狀吧!!~~ 实在不会放啦>~<
  6. 01:53:856 (1) - ^ ^
  7. 02:16:884 (1,2,3,4) - 可以試著轉個20度? 看起來比較不會..那麼直>_<
  8. 02:57:447 (4) - 喂喂這該在Noraml出現嗎>_>?? 額..總之這略坑了._.
  9. 03:12:659 (1) - 放正中間吧~~
感觉会影响读图……

[Hard]
  1. AR-1?
  2. 00:04:419 - 加個圈吧~
  3. 01:34:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這樣排? 我覺得好些:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301777
  4. 01:36:637 - 挖勒:O 這Break time怎移到這了>_> 移回來吧~~~~ 最后统一到红线了
  5. 01:59:560 (6) - 往上一格好看些~
  6. 02:05:264 (4) - 間距錯了~ 會誤導player的@_@ 應該要排成這裡~
  7. 02:24:490 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 做對稱吧~~ Hard有間距變化沒關西的~~ (把(4)(5)(6)往外移吧~)
  8. 02:55:335 - 這邊有2個圈重疊了>_< 刪掉一個吧~
[TuInsane]
  1. 01:25:335 (5) - 排這裡不好看吧.. 移到[X:200 Y:128]?
That's all
加油吧~ Star~
谢谢BARRY!

thx~!!!
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Unrankable Staff

If you use bpm rank in songs select page you will find this:
SPOILER

The code of red timing point in [Easy] [Normal] [Hard] [TuInsane] is:
-17,422.535211267606,4,2,1,30,1,0
which means bpm = 60000/422.535211267606 = 141.99999999999987693333333333344
Also it is the correct and unique code of 142 bpm. (All 142bpm song's code is calculated out as 141.99999999999987693333333333344bpm)

The code of red timing point in [Taiko] is:
-17,422.535457362158,4,1,1,70,1,0
which means bpm = 60000/422.535457362158 = 141.99991729587227031685885316504
This is not 142bpm. So you must reset the bpm of [Taiko] to 142.
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