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yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

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JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年4月4日 at 20:04:52

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)
Source: Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags: pokie shinki ending yanagi nagi
BPM: 131
Filesize: 4786kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.01 stars, 72 notes)
  2. Insane (4.96 stars, 216 notes)
  3. Pokie's Hard (4.57 stars, 155 notes)
  4. Shinki's Normal (2.55 stars, 80 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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How about to travel across the galaxies?
Let us go tonight shall we?


My 16th map.
褲擼開大雞 初濕就開擼Wtf is this lol...

Shinki's Normal by Shinki.
Pokie's Hard by Pokie.
I really love you my friends, thank you.
Shinki
XD
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ JauiPlaY ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove 'ed' in tags,not need add this.

[Hard]


  1. 00:18:963 (3,4) - Change a 1/1 slider will be better with me.
  2. 00:37:284 (1,2) - ^

[Pokie's Normal]


  1. AR 6 a bit hard for normal diff,try -1.
  2. 00:21:711 (5) - Try move to here 00:21:940.
  3. 00:48:734 (5) - Add new combo.
  4. 01:10:261 (2) - Add new combo to here,Vocal start to here,and Remove 01:10:032 (1).

[Shinki's Easy]


  1. 00:15:528 (2) - Remove this note,a bit hard for start.

That' all ~ Nice mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~
;)
xsrsbsns
~ :)
Pokie
:roll:
LKs
:idea: L.E.D
spboxer3
~

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 有skin需要加入sliderborder
  2. Letterbox不統一
  3. 01:01:101我不懂為什麼這邊的SB load 會變成3.00 其他的地方都是2.00 可以的話修正一下吧

[Shinki's Easy]



  • mapping
  1. 00:29:955 (1,3) - 說實話這個slider並不是很好看 :(
  2. 01:18:505 (3) - 超出視窗的slider tick

[Pokie's Normal]



  • mapping
  1. 00:17:131 (4,1) - 間距和別的地方比起來好像過短了些

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. 多餘的綠線:
    00:59:383 -
mapping
  1. 00:45:299 (1) - Bug 需要加入NC

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議
Garven
Aaah why are you forcing default skin? D:
Edit: Nevermind, had default skin selected from update, I think.

(also letterbox hard)
popner
新手mod :) 好歌

[Easy]

00:15:299 (1,2,3) - 有点难;删掉(2) / 改滑条?
01:13:925 (1,2) - 交换一下(1) (2)?
01:16:673 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这一串我喜欢这样,只要改下圈和滑条的位置就行了。



[Normal]

00:26:291 (3,4,5) - ↓
00:28:123 (1,2,3) - 排成这样
00:29:039 (1,2,3) - ^
00:31:559 (3,4,5,6) - 移到00:31:330
00:33:162 - ^如果这样改的话,这里加一个note
00:34:765 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 移到00:34:994,并在00:34:765加一个note
00:44:383 (1) - 移到00:44:612并在00:44:383加一个note?
00:44:612 (1) - 头部加finish
01:21:482 (2,3) - 不要叠住
01:26:749 (1,2,1,2) - 做成放射状?和前面一样有些单调



[Hard]

00:19:421 (4,5) - 改成一个滑条或者不要stack后面的00:20:108 (6,7)
00:23:085 (2,3) - ^
00:26:291 (1) - nazi - 这样稍微调整一下红点的位置?
00:33:162 (3,4,1) - 这样
01:06:139 (4,5,1) - ^
716 Girl
M4M
Why begin of song not mapped?
  • Easy

00:29:955 (1,3) - i think ugly
00:57:436 (1) - remove nc?
  • Normal

00:15:757 (2,3) - small overlap
00:17:131 (4,1) - ^
00:19:421 (1,2) - ^
00:34:765 (2,3,1,2) - make just straight
00:50:566 (2) - repeat
00:51:711 (2) - ^
0:59:995 - add note
01:03:391 (2) - repeat
01:21:482 (2,3) - overlap
00:48:734 (5) - nc
01:08:429 (1) - remove nc
01:11:635 (1) - ^
01:23:543 (1) - ^
01:28:581 (1) - finish hit sound
  • Hard

00:17:131 (7) - maybe straight?
00:26:291 (1) - looks ugly
00:33:162 (3,1) - overlap
00:53:772 (3) - looks not good
01:04:307 (4,1) - overlap
01:06:139 (4,1) - ^
01:19:765 (5) - delete
Nagae-Iku
[general]
褲擼開大雞 初濕就開擼快自重

[Shinki's Easy]
AR+1
00:15:528 (2) - 删除该note

[Pokie's Normal]
00:17:589 (1) - 間距有些近
01:23:543 (1) - 取消nc
01:25:833 (1) - ^
01:27:665 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:26:291 (1) - slider形状吐槽不能
00:51:940 (5) - ^
01:09:345 (1) - nc

nice map & good luck ;)
yeahyeahyeahhh
Hello ^^

Hard:
00:57:436 (1) - Maybe use Normal hitsound at 20% volume here too?

oh this is perfect lol, this is all.. orz
Tomicorelend
mod req via QQ

[Hard]
SPOILER
感觉最主要的问题就是叠……
00:19:421 (4) -
00:20:795 (1) -
这种,同样是叠但是是1/2和1/4...Hard难度的话就别这样坑人了...把1/4的叠note都挪出去一点点吧
虽然这些1/4的确很好听...

同理
00:23:085 (2) -
00:30:413 (6) -
00:32:131 (5) -
00:37:742 (2) -
00:36:826 (5) -
00:37:742 (2) -
00:52:398 (6) -

而像
00:37:742 (2) -
00:40:833 (5) -
01:02:818 (5) -
01:06:482 (5) -
01:21:139 (4) -
这样的就没关系...

(个人感觉)

00:33:620 (1) - 有点被00:33:162 (3) - 挡住的感觉,不过影响不大
00:54:459 (1,1,1) - 这NC感觉好违和
00:58:352 (1) - 和后边的(1)只差1/8...以1/4作图的话...大丈夫...?

[Pokie's Normal]
SPOILER
看起来是个Hard..

没问题wwww!

[Shinki's Easy]
SPOILER
没问题wwww!

Nice Map~! Star!
DerekMcD
These suggestions are helpful and if you don't like it, don't fix it and move on to a next one.

~Normal~

00:49:879 (8) - Spacing?

~Hard~

00:20:795 (1) - Move to x:93 y:229.
00:26:978 (2,3,4) - Highlight all of them... Move a little bit close to (1)?
00:30:413 (6) - Move to x:267 y:53.
00:33:162 (3) - Move to x:81 y:150.
00:51:253 (5) - Move to x:212 y:14.
00:52:398 (6) - Move to x:415 y:149.
01:18:734 (3) - Move to x:92 y:275.

That's all I can think of.
Good luck.
Pokie
Feedbacks
Those I didn't list are fixed issue :D

SPOILER

popner wrote:

[Normal]

00:26:291 (3,4,5) - ↓
00:28:123 (1,2,3) - 排成这样 不太適合
00:29:039 (1,2,3) - ^
00:31:559 (3,4,5,6) - 移到00:31:330
為何? 這兩種擺放方式節奏都是一樣的, 而且移動的話音效也會亂掉
如果單純是覺得紅線開始的slider不妥的話…我個人是覺得沒有問題

00:33:162 - ^如果这样改的话,这里加一个note
00:34:765 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 移到00:34:994,并在00:34:765加一个note 和00:31:559同理
00:44:383 (1) - 移到00:44:612并在00:44:383加一个note? 這麼密集的節奏聽著舒服嗎…在這一段
00:44:612 (1) - 头部加finish
01:21:482 (2,3) - 不要叠住 不會造成任何讀圖困難, 以及再往上移就超出屏幕了

3er123 wrote:

  • Normal

00:15:757 (2,3) - small overlap ??? I don't see any problem here. They're already stacked
00:17:131 (4,1) - ^ What do you mean?
00:19:421 (1,2) - ^ Already stacked, too
00:34:765 (2,3,1,2) - make just straight huh..? Why just here
00:50:566 (2) - repeat 00:46:902 (2,3,4) - Check these rhythm please
00:51:711 (2) - ^
0:59:995 - add note No
01:03:391 (2) - repeat No
01:21:482 (2,3) - overlap As the previous mod, it's sight reading
01:08:429 (1) - remove nc No
01:11:635 (1) - ^
01:23:543 (1) - ^

palmolive wrote:

[general]
[Pokie's Normal]
01:23:543 (1) - 取消nc 可以給我個原因嗎, 總收到nc mod但完全不給理由…這讓mapper怎麼改 >_<
01:25:833 (1) - ^
01:27:665 (1) - ^

Tomicorelend wrote:

[Pokie's Normal]
看起来是个Hard.. jpy說讓我做個Normal+..嘛確實有點難就是-v-

LKs wrote:

as pre request via a canal

General
:o

Easy

shinki下低难度的hitsounds都下出自己的套路了 不按照节奏下 我有点不太想提 因为违和感不大
然后我发现不写音效就没得写了
试试00:33:162 (1) - NC或者slider3加NC

Pokie's Normal

00:35:681 (1) - 这里我看位置推测的是没有1/2一路打 直到我膝盖中了一箭 err :(
00:42:551 (1) - why no clap 48% 來一發

Thanks all :D

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size) (JauiPlaY) [Pokie's Normal].osu
LKs
as pre request via a canal

General
:o

Easy

shinki下低难度的hitsounds都下出自己的套路了 不按照节奏下 我有点不太想提 因为违和感不大
然后我发现不写音效就没得写了
试试00:33:162 (1) - NC或者slider3加NC

Pokie's Normal

00:35:681 (1) - 这里我看位置推测的是没有1/2一路打 直到我膝盖中了一箭
00:42:551 (1) - why no clap

Hard

:o
Banana
easy
我可以吐槽开头的连打吗- -
00:54:688 (2) - 这段时间用了十分多的两拍空挡,应该是准备在kiai段之前体现欲扬先抑的效果,不过我觉得空档有点多,建议这里改成00:54:230 - 起手的一拍往返滑条,而且在这一点原曲是没有音的,击打效果也不太好。
01:18:505 (2) - 这个开头可以whistle,然后把01:20:337 (2)的whistle改到01:20:795 (3),后面都是三白线whistle,个人感觉这样过渡比较自然。

normal
找不到问题,十分

hard
01:17:131 (4,5,1) - 这个就它和前面的整体效果来看应该再上去两格,前两个都是滑条第二个转弯指向上一个滑条的圈的
01:21:711 (2) - 我不喜欢这个结尾的whistle,而且这个combo开头的finish现在还有声音,建议去掉

就看出来这么多- -撤退了
Frostmourne
Hi ~ JauiPlaY

From my mod queue :D (You don't need to follow all of my mod because it just be a suggestion)

Shinki's Easy
fine


Pokie's Normal
fine


Hard
just mention here
01:19:650 (x) - add note. For better flow and I see you place 3streams in every other point in kiai part , feel weird something like that.


other all , I can't find anything to have solve



Good luck :)
Nymph
General:
SB看起来略不对劲 我建议2个小白线为一个周期震什么的 不要像现在一个半啊 不好看感觉

纵观所有diff 我比较建议变成normal hard和insane 326的diff不是最大号圈 波奇姐又有小jump(可以改下难度设置变hard=3=) 感觉换下名字比较好 大概


Shinki's Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:15:528 (2) - easy难度我强烈建议砍这个note 这不应该是easy的节奏吧
00:46:444 (3) - 节奏略怪 因为vocal是拉长音的 如果是我估计就前面用note后面接长slider 后面同

Hitsound
00:17:131 (1) - 音效略混乱 前面用了3白线的whistle 这里突然又变成2白线了 想好一种一直用下去吧 我觉得24白线whistle就很好 没必要用3


Pokie's Normal:
Hitsound
没啥好挑的 不过kiai是不是考虑大点声音量?感觉有点静


Hard:
没啥好挑的
DarknessAngel
request from #modreq ~ :)



Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

General

  1. 在最後,噴兩次煙火總覺得不太需要...(逃

Hard



  • 都是建議orz,MOD不多,只是很多廢話而已不用放在心上lol
    橘色的字 : 如果粉紅色的沒改的話就直接無視吧
  1. 00:19:421 (4) & 00:20:795 (1) - 有個1/4的note疊在slider底下,另一個是1/2,對於判斷來說稍嫌煩人了
    我建議把統一把1/2的疊在底下,然後1/4的不要重疊,這樣會比較舒服(我考量到你1/4疊的比較多)
    也不是什麼必須改的東西,只是覺得這樣的重疊不會增加有趣度,卻增加了遊玩上的困難
    這不是relaxing map所樂見的
  2. 00:48:276 (1) - 這滑條的箭頭上加個clap ? 有個滿明顯的聲音在音樂中,而且我覺得加上去比較有變化
  3. 00:50:566 (2) - 同[00:20:795 (1)]
  4. 00:54:459 (1) - ^
  5. 01:04:078 (3) - 你會不會預想到我挑你這個重疊 ? 其實沒有要挑的意思,只是想說明下為什麼這重疊沒關係
    因為那個很明顯可以推斷出什麼時候點擊(因為1/4相對於1/1的閉合速度很容易判斷)
    上面挑出來的則否(1/4和1/2的差異沒有1/4和1/1明顯)。就這樣
  6. 01:10:948 (2) - 同[00:20:795 (1)],改成這樣 ?
  7. 01:19:765 (5,1) - 考慮一下把這移到更遠(相對於[01:19:192 (4)]尾部)的地方 ? 稍微幫助玩家判斷,要不然可能會打快了
  8. 01:23:085 (1) - 箭頭上的clap感覺不是很合適,用whistle替代,然後刪掉尾部的whistle ?
  9. 無疑是個好圖

Pokie's Normal

  1. 00:21:711 (5) - 在尾部加個whistle感覺還不錯(從歌曲的起始點開始聽的話)
  2. 01:00:184 (2,3) - 我覺得這兩個whistle有點古怪,反而是在[01:02:475 (4)]加個soft-whistle比較合適
    可是那裏被normal音效替代而無從用起啊lol
  3. 01:14:841 (1,2) - 同[01:00:184 (2,3)] lol
  4. 01:27:665 (1) - 我都不知道原來normal能用跳
  5. 不愧是神Mapper

Shinki's Easy

  1. whistle怎麼有時(1,3)有時(2,4)的 ? 聽起來不舒服啊lol
  2. 01:06:597 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 就是這裡了orz
  3. 原來shinki老爺也會作圖lol


不好意思我MOD廢話那麼多-.-
可以的話想請你回應一下改了什麼東西lol


超好聽的歌耶
我最近總是mod到好聽的歌,感覺真不錯
圖很好,我想很快就能ranked了吧 ?
S.T.A.R ! ! !

:)
Pokie

DarknessAngel wrote:

Pokie's Normal

  1. 00:21:711 (5) - 在尾部加個whistle感覺還不錯(從歌曲的起始點開始聽的話) 改了
  2. 01:00:184 (2,3) - 我覺得這兩個whistle有點古怪,反而是在[01:02:475 (4)]加個soft-whistle比較合適 也改了, (2)刪 (3)留 以及加在(4)的結尾
    可是那裏被normal音效替代而無從用起啊lol
  3. 01:14:841 (1,2) - 同[01:00:184 (2,3)] lol 同上
  4. 01:27:665 (1) - 我都不知道原來normal能用跳 唔, 其實easy你想跳也是行的, 只要用的不突兀
  5. 不愧是神Mapper 哭瞎了我是普通mapper
謝謝=w=
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