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yuikonnu - Souzou Forest

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hoLysoup
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, September 12, 2012 at 3:52:01 PM

Artist: yuikonnu
Title: Souzou Forest
Source: Nico Nico Douga
Tags: jin vocaloid3 wannyanpuu karenying No_Gu
BPM: 180
Filesize: 17599kb
Play Time: 04:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.7 stars, 416 notes)
  2. KarenGu (5 stars, 592 notes)
  3. Normal (2.29 stars, 184 notes)
Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest
Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<3

KarenGu Collab
00:20:257 - 00:44:090 No_Gu
00:44:424 - 01:05:257 karenying
01:05:590 - 01:27:924 No_Gu
01:28:257 - 01:49:424 karenying
01:49:757 - 02:10:590 No_Gu
02:10:924 - 02:32:257 karenying
02:42:924 - 02:53:507 No_Gu
02:53:590 - 03:15:924 karenying
03:16:257 - END No_Gu
Kotone
1st
soft-hitclap.wav isn't very fit.Try this clap?
Download: soft-hitclap.rar
and soft-hitclap2.wav...can't listen it when I playing,delete it is better IMO

will edit this post when I finish
L_P
本来要map IA的
Topic Starter
hoLysoup

L_P wrote:

本来要map IA的
:> 謝謝星~!

>bakaying! 我把你的clap加到S:C2了 :>
LKs
karenying 让我看看有没有可用的clap音效
于是我找了几个放过来了

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http://puu.sh/mV7N

内含3个音效文件

试做音效diff在 http://puu.sh/mVaT

用法:直接把所有文件放入文件夹即可

音效辨识度都不高 所以不适合放在NormalC1C2使用 希望有用吧
Kotone
going to finsh it this week~sorry for so late T.T
No_Gu
盈盈好能拖什么的我会乱说吗

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (hoLysoup) [KarenGu].osu
Topic Starter
hoLysoup

No_Gu wrote:

盈盈好能拖什么的我会乱说吗
謝啦!
跟我說你們的部分吧 :>
我加到creator's words
No_Gu

00:20:257 - 00:44:090 No_Gu
00:44:424 - 01:05:257 karenying
01:05:590 - 01:27:924 No_Gu
01:28:257 - 01:49:424 karenying
01:49:757 - 02:10:590 No_Gu
02:10:924 - 02:32:257 karenying
02:42:924 - 02:53:507 No_Gu
02:53:590 - 03:15:924 karenying
03:16:257 - END No_Gu
03:58:924 (1) - 顺带这个往左一格弄到中间
Yasora
nyan

Normal
  1. 00:40:590 (2,3) - I don't really like pattern like this.. during gameplay (2) is overlap with (3). that's no good to look imo. why not make pattern like this ? also this is seems reflecting with slider (1). don't forget to fix spacing for the next note
    200,224,40924,2,0,B|128:264|32:264,2,160,0|0|0
  2. 01:26:924 (x) - add a note in here? the vocal still running in here. and more good if add a note in last kiai point imo.
  3. 02:02:924 (3) - why suddenly sounded finish sound? in the background music isn't supporting for why finish sound in here orz
  4. 02:11:924 (2) - rr, should in the slider's reverse should add clap instead the whistle. you already do this at 01:06:590 (2) -
  5. 02:20:590 (5) - also, add finish sound in the end for cymbal sounder?
  6. 02:53:590 (1) - in the beginning, I guess more fit finish sound instead the clap since the cymbal sound was sounded in there too
  7. 02:58:924 (1) - ^
  8. 03:04:257 (1) - ^
  9. 03:09:590 (1) - ^
  10. 03:12:257 (1) - ^
  11. 03:31:590 (4) - this slider's head was touched hp bar a bit (here). move it into another place?
  12. 03:42:924 (3) - in slider's beginning more better give whistle sound instead the finish? whistle more following piano sound imo
  13. 03:53:590 (1) - ^
  14. 03:54:924 (2) - add whistle in beginning for consistent hitsounding, you add whistle every downbeat before.
Collab ?
  1. 01:26:757 (5) - add new combo in here? to notice the player this slider speed was changed.
  2. 01:51:257 (1,1,2) - this is like a trap @_@ anyway in here 1/4, that's hard to catch from (1) into (1) (although I know these new combo to notice this). but, I think more easier if put 01:51:507 (1) - in between slider (1) and (2) oh, if you do this, remove new combo in circle (1)
  3. 02:00:090 (1) - I guess, not bad too add finish sound in the reverse since the cymbal sounder was sounded in there altough a bit
  4. 03:36:924 (2) - stack this circle properly?
  5. 03:58:924 (1) - add finish sound in here?
  6. this is hard diff? with 5.00 star ._.;; anyway, no add tag name in here? for knowing who has the part
Insane
  1. 00:41:590 (9) - similar think with 02:02:924 in Normal diff. remove the finish sound in here?
  2. 00:41:924 (1) - I don't know why to add new combo in here. my suggestion is remove this new combo since I think not really needed.
  3. 00:54:924 (1) - just sayin' finish sound should add in the end because cymbal sounder in there. but in same time the clap sound is fit in there too. so, up to you lol
  4. 01:25:590 (1) - add finish in here?? I'm really supporting finish sound in here because the cymbal sounder
  5. 01:27:590 (1) - ^
  6. 01:51:258 (2) - urr, stack this properly?
  7. 02:30:924 (1) - same think as 01:25:590
  8. 02:53:590 (1) - add finish sound.. ng, yeah similar think about this as I mentioned before
  9. 02:58:924 (1) - ^
  10. 03:04:257 (1) - ^ but in the beginning
  11. 03:09:590 (1) - ^
  12. 03:12:257 (1) - ^
  13. 03:13:424 (3) - ^
That's all
Good luck :3
GiNa
[General]
-Tags裡加上"vocaloid"

[Normal]
01:27:674 – 無用的綠線
02:05:257 – ^
02:30:924 (2) – 中間的點移到x:352 y:208,這樣就不會跟02:32:257 (3)疊到
04:06:840 (1) – 我覺得還是做一下淡出的效果比較好,不然一下子全部的spin bonus都超小聲的有點奇怪w
還有,只是說一下,這跟下一個難度的分數差了十倍… :?

[KarenGu]
如果這是hard的話…整體來說,略難(太多三連了imo)
02:05:257 (3,4,5,6,1) – BPM 180其實算挺快的了,Hard裡有這種會不會太狠了
話說原來後面還有這種Orz

[Insane]
04:06:840 (1) – same as Normal
Fine

整體是不錯的圖,不過diff spread的確糟了點
Kotone
http://puu.sh/ygUd
nothing for my part but well,just update hitsounds for my part
Leorda
Hi there~

[Normal]
00:40:924 (3) - I don't like if this slider is bit overlapped by circle....
01:05:590 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them
01:27:674 - Useless timing section
01:52:923 (2) - The tail slider is almost offscreen (just a warning)
02:32:590 - This break space are too long... At least 02:42:924 are mappable. Try map that part, like other diff
03:31:590 (4) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar
03:50:257 (2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts. Like I said, sometimes beginners are slowly to read object


[KarenGu]
00:22:590 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner-osu. May be hidden for players for some cases
00:33:090 (4) - Because you stack at tail slider but snap at red tick, I was expecting that this snap at white tick and I miss..... Maybe add note at 00:32:924?
01:04:590 (1) - The sliderbody is overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It could be hidden for players for some cases
01:14:257 (3) - Almost offscreen then.....
01:26:757 (5) - New combo for 0,5x slider. Without it, player thought that this is a normal speed slider
01:40:590 (7) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar


[Insane]
00:54:757 (6) - Add finish
00:54:924 (1) - Remove finish
02:00:090 (6) - Add finish
02:00:257 (1) - Remove finish
02:29:924 (1) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar
03:43:590 (3) - ^

Good luck~
NatsumeRin
Random Check.

[General]
...Obviously you need something between [Normal]/[KarenGu]
offset: +7 (1598)

[Normal]
00:33:257 (5) - maybe 2 circles works beter here? (the end is using a finish sound and more like a "press" feeling)

[KarenGu]
00:33:507 - add a note?
01:51:257 (1,1,2) - a bit more than a hard..?
01:52:590 (2,1,2) - ^
03:15:757 - add a note here?

[Insane]
00:36:257 (1,2,3,4) - would such notes be better? you start your 2 sliders from red line, but it seems not belong there? http://puu.sh/zKhC
00:40:090 (4,6) - a curve slider here seems more enjoyable to me. (like a long line together with 00:38:924 (1) - )
00:41:924 (1) - don't get why new combo
01:43:924 (4,5) - not to stack here? (i feel it's still "moving")
02:00:174 (7) - remove and remove 02:00:257 (1)'s finish, add finish on 02:00:090 (6) and 02:00:257 (1)'s end? (current finish is kinda out of place)
02:11:257 (2) - clap?
02:50:924 (1) - a spinner here seems to be a waste for the rhythms :<
02:58:757 - add a note?
03:04:090 & 03:04:174 - if you take ^, add notes here too.
03:15:757 - add a note?
feels too many 1/2s in the diff (also it's partly because the hitsounds is quite steady...), still a nice one though.

Add something between [Normal]/[KarenGu] and maybe a few more mods before ask me for a bubble (if you want to)
No_Gu

NatsumeRin wrote:

[KarenGu]
00:33:507 - add a note?这里音乐感觉不是三联是一个有点像滑梯的感觉..前面的slider拉到这里好了
01:51:257 (1,1,2) - a bit more than a hard..?算了我不坚持了
01:52:590 (2,1,2) - ^^
03:15:757 - add a note here?K
http://puu.sh/zN5e
Xierra
Konichiwa, soup-san! This one is from our tiny modding queue. Thanks for requesting!
Here's the mod. My modding are mostly suggestions and I'm still a newbie, so you may ignore this.

General
I spot one .osb in your folder. If you don't use storyboards at all, delete it.
Add "Imagination" tag? Maybe that should help people who don't know the romaji name of this song since the English is "Imagination Forest".

Normal
DR 3, AR 3, OD 3? It looks kinda more like Easy to me :3

00:23:590 (1) - Add whistles on start and end.
00:25:590 (2) - Add whistle on the repeat.
00:27:590 (3) - Add whistle.
00:28:257 (1) - Add whistle on the repeat.
00:30:257 (2) - Add whistle.
00:30:924 (3) - Add whistle on slider end
00:32:257 (4) - ^
(Or you can also follow the one on the second verse, but it's up to you.)
00:33:257 (5) - Add finish on slider end.
00:33:924 (1) - Remove clap and add clap only on the slider end.
01:54:590 (4) - Add clap
02:50:924 (1) - Add a spinner to 02:53:257?

Neat! I love how you map this.

Hard
This looks kinda different. You placed a lot of timing points to place the Normal hit in there. But why not do the same on the second verse?
And, well I don't see claps here, so let me help you so you could place it quickly. Read the box below.

Hitsoundings
00:33:590 (1) - Add finish on slider start, and a clap on the repeat.
00:34:590 (3) - Add clap
00:35:257 (5,6,7) - Add clap on slider start
00:36:257 (1) - Add clap on the repeat
00:37:257 (3,5) - Add clap
00:38:590 (2) - Add clap on slider start
00:39:924 (5) - Add clap
00:40:590 (2,4) - ^
00:41:424 (5) - Add clap on slider end
00:42:590 (2,4) - Add clap
00:43:590 (1) - Add clap on start and end of slider
00:44:924 (2) - ^
00:46:590 (4) - Add clap on slider start
00:46:924 (1) - Add clap on repeat
00:47:924 (3) - Add clap
00:48:590 (5) - Add clap on start and end of slider.
00:49:590 (1) - As on 00:33:590 (1)
00:50:424 (2) - Add clap on slider end.
00:51:257 (4,7) - Add clap
00:52:590 (2) - As on 00:48:590 (5)
00:53:424 (3) - Add clap
00:53:757 (4,6) - Add clap on every part of slider.
00:57:590 (1) - Add clap on slider end.
00:58:590 (3,5) - Add clap
01:00:257 (4) - Add clap on repeat
01:01:257 (6) - Add clap on start and end of slider.
01:02:090 (7) - Add clap on slider end
01:02:424 (8) - Add clap on repeat
01:02:924 (1) - End the spinner with a finish!
01:05:590 (1) - As on 00:33:590 (1)
01:06:590 (2) - Add clap
01:07:257 (5,7) - Add clap on slider start.
01:08:257 (1,3) - Add clap on repeat
01:10:924 (1) - ^
01:08:257 (2) - Add clap
01:10:590 (4) - Add clap on slider start.
01:11:924 (3) - Add clap
01:12:257 (4) - Add clap on repeat
01:13:257 (6) - Add clap on slider start.
01:13:590 (1,3) - Add clap on repeat
01:14:590 (2,4) - Add clap
01:17:257 (3) - Add clap on slider start.
01:17:924 (5) - Add clap
01:18:590 (8) - Add clap on slider start.
01:18:924 (1) - Add clap on slider end.
01:19:590 (2) - Add clap on repeat
01:20:590 (4) - Add clap on slider start and end
01:21:924 (1) - Add clap on slider start
01:22:257 (2) - Add clap on slider end
01:22:924 (4) - Add clap on repeat
01:23:757 (5) - ^
01:24:590 (2) - Add clap
01:25:257 (4,7) - Add clap on slider start
01:25:590 (5) - Add clap on slider end
Lol that's it! You continue, and don't be lazy :D
02:16:257 (1) - NC here

Just do more hitsounding. The rest is fine, to me at least. :3

Good luck and hope it gets ranked! ;)
PS: I kinda like this song and the PV is so kawaii! Don't let this one fall to the Graveyard, I hope :D
Alltur
All mod is suggestion unless indicated in bold.
My mod is not is not good XP.. but these are my suggestions..

[General]
If not using storyboard, delete .osb file and full submit :D


[Normal]
00:55:590 (1) - Start at 00:55:424? > if applied: suggested rhythm <slider 1: starts at 00:55:424 and ends at 00:56:757, circle 2 at 00:57:007 (blue tick XP..), and same afterwards>
01:27:674 - unused green line.
01:32:257 (5) - curve the slider match with the slider 6?
02:00:924 (1) - same suggestion as 00:55:590
01:45:590 (2) - disable distance snap here and x:116 y:120? it's still prev: 1.04x next:1.03x: it looks better imo.
02:30:924 (2,3) - how about 2 blanket the 3? if not, ignore this.
04:06:840 (1) - Start the spinner at 04:06:757?

[Hard]
01:27:674 - same as normal
02:42:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - if possible, how about making a pentagon shape out of these?
04:06:840 (1) - same as normal

[KarenGu]
00:32:590 (3,4) - perfectly overlap: make a slider at 00:32:924 [ends at 00:33:174] that overlaps with the end of slider 3, and move to 00:33:090 [ends at 00:33:340]
01:51:257 (5) - RNC?

Good luck mapping~
Star~
Quilt
why do you have to remove your insane diff... ;w;
y u c a

Quilt wrote:

why do you have to remove your insane diff... ;w;
see!
reupdate your insane bakaaaaaaaaaaaa :x

edit: i got insane from sorda muhahahaha
S o r d a
:P you should upload insane!
Please revive your Insane diff!
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