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Beren

Joined September 2009

Beren 2012-06-29T05:09:23+00:00

//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

Last edited by Beren 2012-07-02T11:22:12+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

ertyukjh010

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ertyukjh010 2012-06-29T05:32:02+00:00

Derekku wrote:
Well this mapset and storyboard look quite lovely! mod in progress~

[General]
*I suppose that the preview point is fine where it is, but I think that it would make more sense at the first or second chorus instead of the end of the song. Fixed
*Even though BG.jpg is only used for the song select screen, I feel like it doesn't really fit the song. I suggest replacing it with a Meltdown-related image. Indeed may be a little bit is not suitable, but this bg should be able to deepen the impression of the players on this map, so I want to keep

[Easy]
05:02:861 (1) - The approach rate is really slow in this diff, and thus the spinner appears during the last slider. I suggest moving the spinner back to the red tick and shortening it like this: http://puu.sh/Ess6 yap, my mistake & fixed

[Normal]
*OD is a bit too low; please raise it one tick! Hp, Ar, Od+1
01:05:590 (1) - Seems a bit short/quick for a Normal, and it kinda looks awkward showing up during the slider. How about changing it to this: http://puu.sh/Esvo Fixed
02:17:589 (1) - same as above, but with shortening the last slider instead or removing a repeat Fixed
04:30:135 (1) - if you follow the last two spinner suggestions, then do something with this as well, please! (: Fixed
05:02:861 (1) - same comment as Easy Fixed

[Hard]
*Spinners being 1/4 after notes is fine here since the approach rate is much higher than the last two diffs.
03:50:408 (1) - I don't know why, but this note being stacked on the end of the slider just looked strange to me. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/EsEA Yes, I always feel miss this. thank your help for this part ><

[KS's Taiko]
*Nice, but I expected a Taiko-specific storyboard here. Even just something during the long breaks would help! Discuss with taiko's creator that keep on

[Insane]
*7 OD is much too low for an Insane; please raise it one tick!I just want to have a higher accuracy in the standings, and this is the jump map, easy to get on the jump 100hit. Another part of slowing down is also easy to get 100hit, I would like to OD8 make SS players are not happy Another special reason, I really like this song, I hope one day I'll have the ability to get the SS in insane. I have to guess all the SS in this map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/9070 So I decided to use the normal OD.
*Could possibly also raise drain by 1 tick, but that's just a suggestion. Um...I very much hope to change, but the case of Score ceiling → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/355701 If it can rank that call me. I sure change. (I like high score><)
03:49:680 (1) - Haha, it's funny that you did what I just suggested in Hard! HaHa, I see

Overall: Excellent mapset and storyboard! I have to pop your bubble due to the filesize issue, but I will gladly rank this once these changes are made!

Thank you Derekku again.
~~Just tell you when the SB fixed~~
okay, fixed all. call you again when you online

Derekku

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Derekku 2012-06-29T20:15:45+00:00

I think the *only* thing left to fix is BG9 in the storyboard. Beren originally posted a fix, but then changed it. I think that his original fix was missing a fade command for BG9, so now it just disappears before the next background comes up. His latest post edit seems correct though, so just take it, replace the SB in each .osu, and do a standard submission!

After that, we'll be ready for ranking!

ertyukjh010

1,415 posts

Joined December 2009

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ertyukjh010 2012-06-30T06:11:29+00:00

Derekku wrote:
I think the *only* thing left to fix is BG9 in the storyboard. Beren originally posted a fix, but then changed it. I think that his original fix was missing a fade command for BG9, so now it just disappears before the next background comes up. His latest post edit seems correct though, so just take it, replace the SB in each .osu, and do a standard submission!

After that, we'll be ready for ranking!

I'll call beren.

Tell you when it's was fixed.

ertyukjh010

1,415 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

ertyukjh010 2012-07-02T13:51:37+00:00

Beren wrote:
复制的时候空格会自己不见的

//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

真的耶

Derekku

COOL DUDE

7,270 posts

Joined March 2009

Derekku 2012-07-02T18:07:55+00:00

Everything looks good now~

Ranked!

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-07-02T18:10:05+00:00

GRATZ

EDIT : YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Kotone 2012-07-02T18:17:17+00:00

omedetou~

jesse7419

405 posts

Joined March 2011

jesse7419 2012-07-02T18:31:15+00:00

喔!!恭喜又Rank一張了!!!!

YOOOOOOOO?

ertyukjh010

1,415 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

ertyukjh010 2012-07-02T18:49:28+00:00

thank everone

Charles445

Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon

2,881 posts

Joined March 2009

Charles445 2012-07-02T19:59:01+00:00

Hey uh, did Beren work on any of the difficulties or only the storyboard? If it's only the storyboard then Beren shouldn't be in the tags.
(btw we can change it online we don't have to derank or anything)

Jenny

2,200 posts

Joined November 2010

Jenny 2012-07-02T19:59:47+00:00

I find the BG too lighty for that song o.o

Charles445

Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon

2,881 posts

Joined March 2009

Charles445 2012-07-02T20:01:15+00:00

Actually I'm not sure, I checked another map and the storyboarder was in the tags.
I'll need to talk with some others...

Valentiino

1,945 posts

Joined June 2011

Valentiino 2012-07-02T20:18:53+00:00

Fine map~
Gz on the rank.

Altough I didn't like the SB that much :/

ertyukjh010

1,415 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

ertyukjh010 2012-07-02T20:58:55+00:00

Charles445 wrote:
Actually I'm not sure, I checked another map and the storyboarder was in the tags.
I'll need to talk with some others...

Yes I see.
May you help me to fix if it's need to add?
thank you

vizzy

671 posts

Joined September 2010

vizzy 2012-07-02T21:44:34+00:00

Congrats~

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2012-07-02T22:00:19+00:00

ert溶解

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-07-02T23:14:20+00:00

終於ranked \:D/

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-07-02T23:56:44+00:00

炉心融解好像是我刚打osu时最先下的歌之一了, banvi的版本, 好怀念0.0

恭喜rank啦

eikkaleyd

624 posts

Joined July 2010

eikkaleyd 2012-07-03T00:01:49+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
炉心融解好像是我刚打osu时最先下的歌之一了, banvi的版本, 好怀念0.0

恭喜rank啦

噗我也是这个歌而且是xxheroxx版本……

Rank恭喜~

-s u i r e n-

237 posts

Joined May 2011

-s u i r e n- 2012-07-03T00:17:41+00:00

omedeto~ ert~高兴~>w</

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-07-03T03:45:22+00:00

ERT恭喜~

miss_master_old

539 posts

Joined April 2011

miss_master_old 2012-07-03T04:34:53+00:00

Meltdown~~

Ulysses

1,911 posts

Joined September 2010

Ulysses 2012-07-03T05:54:01+00:00

哇哇哇~congrats!!!

xiceyx

95 posts

Joined June 2011

xiceyx 2012-07-03T07:50:36+00:00

Beautiful SB! Great work!!

ertyukjh010

1,415 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

ertyukjh010 2012-07-03T07:54:00+00:00

thank everyone

xiceyx

95 posts

Joined June 2011

xiceyx 2012-07-03T11:46:11+00:00

And btw in the hard level it is very clever near the end how you spelled "Melt Down"

Tivv_old

11 posts

Joined November 2011

Tivv_old 2012-07-03T18:42:54+00:00

cool, in hard I saw the MELTDOWN word

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2012-07-04T09:02:42+00:00

Let's use AR9 just for the sake of using it.

Map is pretty good, but AR makes it really bad.

Don't take it bad, it's just a suggestion I'm giving you for your next maps, use high AR only when it really fits!

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2012-07-04T23:13:10+00:00

GRATZ~! Meltdown <3

Perfection

635 posts

Joined January 2013

Perfection 2013-04-26T15:07:45+00:00

Very Nice Map. Good story board <3