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Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Dino99
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月3日 at 下午 10:35:30

Artist: Nakagawa Shouko
Title: Tsuyogari (TV Size)
Source: Beelzebub
Tags: Ending Devil spboxer3 No_Gu Lan wings Lan_wings ertyukjh010 bossandy
BPM: 198
Filesize: 16103kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Boss Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 515 notes)
  2. ERT's Easy (2.88 stars, 101 notes)
  3. Gu's Normal (4.37 stars, 185 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 357 notes)
  5. Lan's Hard (4.95 stars, 269 notes)
  6. Spinboxer (4.99 stars, 279 notes)
Download: Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size)
Download: Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 8th Ranked Map!!
This song from Beelzebub ^o^

Mapset:
ERT's Easy 100% - ertyukjh010
Gu's Normal 100% - No_Gu
Lan's Hard 100% - Lan wings
Spinboxer 100% - spboxer3
Insane 100%- me
Boss Taiko Oni 100% - bossandy

Thanks Hinacle for nice video!!
Lan wings
No_Gu
o.o

EDIT:777贴orz
Topic Starter
Dino99

No_Gu wrote:

o.o

EDIT:777贴orz
額...恭喜:3 ;)
bossandy
BPM : 198.08 Offset : 1075
我測是這樣XD
不一定對 但是我覺得這樣比較好~XD
Topic Starter
Dino99

bossandy wrote:

BPM : 198.08 Offset : 1075
我測是這樣XD
不一定對 但是我覺得這樣比較好~XD
Thx for timing help >w< :D
spboxer3
No_Gu
done
这BPM DT不起
小三那是啥。H还是I,反正我觉得已经双I了。。

Download: 45657 Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size).rar
Topic Starter
Dino99
謝謝大家的GD:> 額...怎麼3個的圖案都是I...=3=
ertyukjh010
花了2個小時隨便做

我沒加自己ID到TAG,交給Berry整理吧

有空的話就試打給我觀戰:3

12BARRY21 wrote:

謝謝大家的GD:> 額...怎麼3個的圖案都是I...=3=
就是您們這群觸手都這麼觸

只有我這個難度是2.54=3=

===============================================


Download: Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size) (12BARRY21) [ERT's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Dino99
ok~ 全傳好了!! Now move to pending :>

Diff Spread...囧
sirjuyt
:lol:



[Insane]
00:00:458 (1) - 哇 剛上來就1/8
01:02:730 (4) - 我認為和(3)疊一起會比較好看
01:05:306 (1,2,3,4) - 看能不能不要擋住數字太多,第一次打看成slider
01:21:064 (T) - 覺得音量漸增在這裡太早了,從01:23:488就好?
01:22:276 (1,2,3,4,5) - 加clap? (4可能不用加)
01:26:367 (3,4,5) - 多配個finish比較有ending的感覺

[Spinboxer]
00:04:852 (1) - 在00:04:700加一個circle感覺比較好
00:05:458 (1) - ^
00:24:397 (8,9) - 這兩個互換?
00:27:730 (1,2) - 互換NC? 不然很容易打錯
00:35:912 (1) - 頭加whistle?
01:13:033 (x) - 加一個circle?
01:26:973 (4) - 讓Kiai Time在這裡結束吧?

[Lan's Hard]
00:38:033 (1,2,3,4,5) - 改成這樣?
01:14:094 (3,4,1,2,3) - 感覺不順手,試試這樣?
[Gu's Normal]
00:04:245 (3,4) - 往前挪1/2有對到拍
00:10:003 (5,6) - 後挪1/2,(6)去掉
00:39:397 (5) - 從00:39:245開始,結尾不變。感覺人聲比較明顯了
00:45:306 (3,4,5) - 對normal似乎難了點, (3)換Slider,(5)換點?
01:04:094 (1) - 換個方式擺? 這樣看不出來幾次折返了
01:20:609 (5) - 01:20:458開始?
01:25:912 (T) - 提高20%音量? 感覺有點小聲

[ERT's Easy]
00:11:973 (3) - 減一個折返加一個圈?
01:22:579 (2) - 01:22:276開始?



Yeah~

好圖 Star :)

No_Gu
o.o/ my mod here

我觉得kiai停在01:26:973或者01:27:124比较好,毕竟我的和SP3的难度都听到这里了

[easy]
00:07:124 (2) - 试试这样的? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/255792 改了的话自己修下间距
344,160,7124,2,0,B|288:88|156:152|196:244,1,240,2|8
00:19:245 (3) - 去掉结尾clap?
00:41:670 (2) - 前面都蛮简单的所以我不推荐1/2
00:55:609 (4) - ^
easy没什么好吐槽的

[normal]
2

[烂翅膀]
00:30:760 (3,4,5) - 打起来不算太舒服

[SP3]
00:28:033 00:29:245感觉这里都不该空拍
我觉得还不如下24.。。反正你这style我是不太喜欢...

[insane]
00:49:548 (1) - 开头来个finish?
01:05:306 (1,2,3,4) - 2起码是啥都没跟。。然后感觉34也不算太明显。。不过是I的话也随便了
01:18:639 (1) - 试试这样的节奏?
我觉得还是AR9好读多了。不过随你

顺带mod改了点
哭了我也要做次I

Download: Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size) (12BARRY21) [Gu's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
Dino99

sirjuyt wrote:

:lol:



[Insane]
00:00:458 (1) - 哇 剛上來就1/8 恩:>
01:02:730 (4) - 我認為和(3)疊一起會比較好看 Sorry no~
01:05:306 (1,2,3,4) - 看能不能不要擋住數字太多,第一次打看成slider fixed
01:21:064 (T) - 覺得音量漸增在這裡太早了,從01:23:488就好? Sorry no~
01:22:276 (1,2,3,4,5) - 加clap? (4可能不用加) Sorry no~
01:26:367 (3,4,5) - 多配個finish比較有ending的感覺 fixed

Yeah~

好圖 Star :)
謝謝MODSTAR!!~~ >w<
spboxer3
No change~ thanks sirjuyt and No_Gu's mod!
spboxer3
OK~你的要求

[general]


  • Settings
  1. kiai還是沒有統一阿... Gu's Normal...
  2. letterbox全部都拿掉吧
  3. tag不用加sp3了 已經有我的ID在裡面sp3就別加了

[ERT's Easy]


  • Settings
  1. 多餘的綠線:
    00:16:821 -
    00:18:033 -
    00:31:973 -
    00:32:579 -
mapping
  1. 00:07:124 (2) - awkward slider 型狀不是很好~可以的話修一下吧
  2. 00:20:458 (5,6) - ^

[Gu's Normal]



  • mapping
  1. 00:07:124 (1,2) - 完全去音打起來太軟了~給人根本沒再打東西的感覺
  2. 00:30:458 (2) - slider轉折的tick設在00:30:761 - 上會比較好些 因為那邊本來照音樂來看 應該放object的
  3. 00:44:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不認同...這種的pattern對於Normal來說太難了
  4. 00:46:518 - 重音 可以下個note 不然這段空太長了 而且你下的節奏在一個小節裡的1,4拍 這樣不是很符合正常的節奏

[Lan's Hard]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:41:064 (4,2) -
mapping
  1. 00:13:488 (2) - ^ 造型感覺偏向於2009年的slider...
  2. 00:14:397 (1) - ^
  3. 00:19:245 (2) - 這種slider實在不是很好看 建議美化些吧
  4. 01:04:705 (1) - 沒在節奏上...

[Insane]



  • mapping
  1. 不說了...趕快去ranked吧...

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議
Lan wings
ertyukjh010

sirjuyt wrote:

[ERT's Easy]
00:11:973 (3) - 減一個折返加一個圈? 4折返很好
01:22:579 (2) - 01:22:276開始? X

No_Gu wrote:

[easy]
00:07:124 (2) - 试试这样的? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/255792 改了的话自己修下间距 很好;我承認這個我畫爛了
344,160,7124,2,0,B|288:88|156:152|196:244,1,240,2|8
00:19:245 (3) - 去掉结尾clap?甚麼時候手殘點了
00:41:670 (2) - 前面都蛮简单的所以我不推荐1/2 額,看著辦吧
00:55:609 (4) - ^
easy没什么好吐槽的

spboxer3 wrote:

[ERT's Easy]

  • Settings
  1. 多餘的綠線: 給力,我都懶的找您竟然幫我全找出來
    00:16:821 -
    00:18:033 -
    00:31:973 -
    00:32:579 -
mapping
  1. 00:07:124 (2) - awkward slider 型狀不是很好~可以的話修一下吧
  2. 00:20:458 (5,6) - ^ 這個「0」形狀我很喜歡=3=
Download: Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size) (12BARRY21) [ERT's Easy].osu
Shiki
Hi~ :>

[Insane]
00:04:700 (1) - 这里加个whistle?
01:16:670 (2) - 感觉有点奇怪 换成三个1/2怎么样?
01:18:639 (1,2,1,2) - 这样会造成急促的感觉 为了流畅 建议01:19:094 01:19:700 加note

[Sp3]
00:04:852 (1,1) - 这两个的尾部为什么不用finish而用clap?? 没什么感觉
00:29:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个和前面的slider 很难让人判断时间间隔
除了跳有点点坑爹 其他就没什么了 :>

[Hard]
整体间隔略大 我感觉先要用小一点的grid把不整齐的间隔修补一下
然后我感觉间隔不要用1.5的 太大了 最多1.3就够了
00:37:276 (5,6) - 这里短slider太坑爹了 直接下点吧
00:46:973 (2,3) - ^
我感觉主要问题就在间距 用level 3或者4的grid重排一下
间隔小一点

[Normal]
00:07:124 (1) - 不知道这里为什么声音要减小 不减小听起来更舒服
00:46:821 (6) - 和前面间隔太长了 在00:46:518也加一个note会好一点
没什么其他的问题了 :>

[Easy]
00:16:215 (2) - 加whistle?
01:13:791 (3) - 我感觉中间那个听起来有点奇怪 用soft吧

:) 好棒的mapset~ 祝早rank :>
Topic Starter
Dino99

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ :>

[Insane]
00:04:700 (1) - 这里加个whistle? fixed
01:16:670 (2) - 感觉有点奇怪 换成三个1/2怎么样? 額..不要
01:18:639 (1,2,1,2) - 这样会造成急促的感觉 为了流畅 建议01:19:094 01:19:700 加note 還是原來的好:3 這樣間距太大了... 囧

:) 好棒的mapset~ 祝早rank :>
謝MOD和STAR:>
L_P
又来骗个kudos了
因为图我pass无力而且又是好图,所以全给建议,意即可以忽视

Insnae
00:23:791 (4) - 感觉上是先slider后note,听听音乐也觉得这样比较适合(换了记得加个whistle...
00:36:518 (2,3) - 个人会比较喜欢antijump,因为我不是触手。。
00:51:973 (1) - 头也whistle一下吧
00:54:397 (1) - ^ (因为觉得其实whistle断了一下又在继续有些奇怪
不过觉得whistle在第二拍会比较好

edit: 要去吃饭了,过几天(slap继续

先不要给kudos....不然会被黑的
bossandy
完成了~

對了 我把video從Taiko難度用掉了~


加"bossandy" 到 tags~

Edit :


對了 提醒一下需要改的地方 因為BAT跟我提過 這是他說的話 :

narakucrimson wrote:

  • Offset:
  1. In the section from 00:00:390 to 00:01:327, there is no music, so the offset isn't right at 00:00:390.
    You should move it to 00:01:327, and then add an extra red timing section at 00:02:265 to fix the metronome.
所以請在把原本的Red section移動到00:00:458 然後再00:01:064加一個red section

Download: Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size) (12BARRY21) [Boss Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Dino99

bossandy wrote:

完成了~

對了 我把video從Taiko難度用掉了~


加"bossandy" 到 tags~

Edit :


對了 提醒一下需要改的地方 因為BAT跟我提過 這是他說的話 :

narakucrimson wrote:

  • Offset:
  1. In the section from 00:00:390 to 00:01:327, there is no music, so the offset isn't right at 00:00:390.
    You should move it to 00:01:327, and then add an extra red timing section at 00:02:265 to fix the metronome.
所以請在把原本的Red section移動到00:00:458 然後再00:01:064加一個red section
恩~ 晚些改吧:>

ww謝謝啦!!~~~ :D
Bobo_old
Hi, figured I'd get this done before I get too lazy to mod.

[Insane]

00:03:336 (4) - Delete this note and give (3) another slider repeat.
00:45:912 (2,3,4,5) - Fullscreen square jumps look really ugly to me, try making them smaller and arranging them into a more creative pattern.
00:55:533 (5,1,2,3) - Hard to read.
00:56:367 (2) - I would just stack with (1).
01:04:851 (1,2,3) - Gah, enormous jumps. Make these smaller.
01:08:185 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:17:276 (4) - Stack with (3).

[Spinboxer]

00:12:730 (2,4) - Could you switch these two around so that both jump patterns are going in the

same direction?
01:04:094 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Could you make all these one combo? They look cool like that. n.n

[Normal]

00:46:821 (6) - I promise you this will confuse new players. Promise.
01:05:306 (2) - I'd delete this and give (1) another slider repeat.

Easy and Hard seem fine. Take a star.
Topic Starter
Dino99

Bobo wrote:

Hi, figured I'd get this done before I get too lazy to mod.

[Insane]

00:03:336 (4) - Delete this note and give (3) another slider repeat.
00:45:912 (2,3,4,5) - Fullscreen square jumps look really ugly to me, try making them smaller and arranging them into a more creative pattern. Let me consider..>_< Because I don't know how to make them more creative..
00:55:533 (5,1,2,3) - Hard to read. I think it's okay
00:56:367 (2) - I would just stack with (1).
01:04:851 (1,2,3) - Gah, enormous jumps. Make these smaller. It's okay:>
01:08:185 (1) - Delete new combo. fixed
01:17:276 (4) - Stack with (3).

Easy and Hard seem fine. Take a star.
Thanks for mod and star!!~~
L_P
不要kudos 不要kudos 这个post再给kudos就真的黑残了

L_P wrote:

又来骗个kudos了
因为图我pass无力而且又是好图,所以全给建议,意即可以忽视

Insnae
00:23:791 (4) - 感觉上是先slider后note,听听音乐也觉得这样比较适合(换了记得加个whistle...
00:36:518 (2,3) - 个人会比较喜欢antijump,因为我不是触手。。
00:51:973 (1) - 头也whistle一下吧
00:54:397 (1) - ^ (因为觉得其实whistle断了一下又在继续有些奇怪
不过觉得whistle在第二拍会比较好

edit: 要去吃饭了,过几天(slap继续

先不要给kudos....不然会被黑的
来接下去...
给我的感觉,star rating好像故意为难似的,居然4I了,天地良心可能很难找泡泡
找来的guest sp 还说可能太触做不出善良图但是lan的图就明显比名字难了。。是我太傻太天真了吗
搞大别人肚子了你。。。(窃笑


spboxer
其实感觉上前面那段的clap很大声,而且不是很配,希望能够考虑一下
而且音乐本身的clap是在第二white tick...
00:51:063 (9) - 加点什么吧?
01:17:276 (4) - 打图的感觉是note slider

别黑我,不过觉得hitsound下得有点刻意,太过痕迹了,可能带上耳机听会比较明显吧?

lan's hard
可能因为你是触手的关系,spacing自然而然用的大一点,不过既然是帮忙做GD也应该考虑一下大众化,也就是说。。需要一定程度的remap spacing, 因为真心觉得spacing 不是一般般的大,对hard来说太过了
而且像00:27:427 (1,2,3) - 这种东西不该在hard出现。。
具体来说呢,还是希望累积做GD的经验,因为如果我是图主会有些蛋疼。。毕竟GD不是表现自我的地方,有时候需要迁就一下目前的趋势,做做大众谱等等

对不起把话说这样白。。但是真心希望整个diff. spread能够更理想。。(毕竟4I了叹气


00:24:094 (4,5,6) - 可能用一个repeat slider?
00:41:367 (1) - 弄远一点或者是stack?
00:46:973 (2,3,4,1,2) - 我觉得不是很好玩。。也许换个普通东西吧

gu's normal
改成gu's insane (开玩笑
不能想想办法降星星吗

这首歌的easy老实说我觉得是guest diff里面做的最符合要求的一个。。。
而且挺赞的(默默看一下名字

00:54:397 (2,3) - 这两个是不是忘了finish
Topic Starter
Dino99

L_P wrote:

不要kudos 不要kudos 这个post再给kudos就真的黑残了

L_P wrote:

又来骗个kudos了
因为图我pass无力而且又是好图,所以全给建议,意即可以忽视

Insnae
00:23:791 (4) - 感觉上是先slider后note,听听音乐也觉得这样比较适合(换了记得加个whistle... 打起來不順
00:36:518 (2,3) - 个人会比较喜欢antijump,因为我不是触手。。額..後面有了.... 而且..感覺這邊不太適合:3
00:51:973 (1) - 头也whistle一下吧 fixed
00:54:397 (1) - ^ (因为觉得其实whistle断了一下又在继续有些奇怪 fixed
不过觉得whistle在第二拍会比较好 o.o

edit: 要去吃饭了,过几天(slap继续

先不要给kudos....不然会被黑的
不要那麼緊張嘛>_< 不會啦@_@

来接下去...
给我的感觉,star rating好像故意为难似的,居然4I了,天地良心可能很难找泡泡
找来的guest sp 还说可能太触做不出善良图但是lan的图就明显比名字难了。。是我太傻太天真了吗
搞大别人肚子了你。。。(窃笑 =3= 我哪知道大家那麼鬼觸._.

謝Mod~ 還有..星星\(^O^)/
No_Gu

spboxer3 wrote:

[Gu's Normal]



  • mapping
  1. 00:07:124 (1,2) - 完全去音打起來太軟了~給人根本沒再打東西的感覺20%应该还没静音
  2. 00:30:458 (2) - slider轉折的tick設在00:30:761 - 上會比較好些 因為那邊本來照音樂來看 應該放object的Q.Q不想弄太难
  3. 00:44:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不認同...這種的pattern對於Normal來說太難了真心不难。。有人normal还放1/4
  4. 00:46:518 - 重音 可以下個note 不然這段空太長了 而且你下的節奏在一個小節裡的1,4拍 這樣不是很符合正常的節奏比较习惯跟鼓

Shiki wrote:

[Normal]
00:07:124 (1) - 不知道这里为什么声音要减小 不减小听起来更舒服感觉会吵
00:46:821 (6) - 和前面间隔太长了 在00:46:518也加一个note会好一点不想跟vocal..
没什么其他的问题了 :>

Bobo wrote:

[Normal]
00:46:821 (6) - I promise you this will confuse new players. Promise.It doesn't matter imo
01:05:306 (2) - I'd delete this and give (1) another slider repeat.just i like this

L_P wrote:

给我的感觉,star rating好像故意为难似的,居然4I了,天地良心可能很难找泡泡 恩其实我觉得icon应该不是那么太大的事。。。毕竟实际难度我觉得没有那样,因为BPM高所以显得难而已
找来的guest sp 还说可能太触做不出善良图但是lan的图就明显比名字难了。。是我太傻太天真了吗
搞大别人肚子了你。。。(窃笑 感觉这话有点人身攻击了吧
4I我觉得也没啥问题,ICON又不代表全部
不想弄的本来。。。算了,降了点星,现在应该是H标了

Download: Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size) (12BARRY21) [Gu's Normal].osu
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

前人之述备矣
  1. 2.5秒的lead-in感觉稍微有点长 1.5~2秒最好
ERT's Easy

00:08:336 (1,2,3) - 往右一格
00:44:700 (3) - 往左一点
01:08:942 (2) - 开头不该whistle 结尾来
01:13:791 (3) - node点上的音效违和了
01:20:003 (X) - 这里开始的绿线变音量意义何在?
easy做到这程度基本到极限了

Gu's Normal

问题没有 但这spread我现在不说到时候也有人说 长痛不如短痛

Lan's Hard

00:03:336 (2) - 这个1/2跟其实不太合节奏
00:14:397 (1) - 开头放clap的话结尾也可以放

Spinboxer

00:02:882 (1) - NC
00:17:124 (1) - 吓我一跳
00:17:579 (2,3,1) - 这背景音的三连不跟?
00:28:185 (2) - 这种之前这样1/2现在变1/1 会迷惑人
00:55:003 (1) - NC
01:14:852 (1) - NC

Insane

00:00:458 (1) - clap声音太大了
00:40:761 (3) - 中间不要clap
01:14:245 (1,2) - 01:14:851 (2,3) - 01:15:458 (2,3) - slider和note位置都颠倒 才有紧迫感
kosiga
Hi~ 12BARRY21~ :)

Thank you for the request~ :D

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Letterbox during breaks - remove check ( only Boss Taiko Oni diff is different )
[ERT's Easy]
  1. 00:07:124 (2) - Rotate by -4° (Clockwise , Selection Centre ) because next DS is a bit far (1.18x)
  2. 00:07:276,00:07:427,00:07:579,00:07:730 - maybe unnecessary green line. because the sliderslide is silence, there is not the meaning even if it gradually up.
  3. 00:44:700 (3) - add NC and 00:45:912 (1) - remove NC
  4. 00:55:609 (4) - add NC and 00:56:215 (1) - remove NC and 00:56:821 (3) - add NC is better IMO
  5. 01:13:791 (3) - this slider repeat hitsound is too loud ;x;
  6. 01:17:427 (2) - why only here use DS1.5x ? This is better not to change so Easydiff :(
  7. 01:18:639 (4,1,2) - Why do you not match only here with a vocal? sorry...I think that it is very strange rhythm ;x; Example of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/jooO
  8. 01:20:003,01:20:155,01:20:306 - same as 00:07:276~
  9. 01:27:124 (1) - spinner is too short in Easy diff IMO. I think that remove this like Gu's Normal Diff
[Gu's Normal]
  1. 00:54:851 (2) - spacing too close (0.57x) or Suggestion of the rhythm: change slider start 00:55:003. ( I prefer the rhythm of this :3 ) or slider start 00:55:003 and add note to 00:55:457 ( same as 01:14:397 (2,3) )
  2. 01:04:094 (1) - this kick slider is too difficult in Normal diff ;x;
  3. 01:15:003 (4,5) - add whistle to end of the slider ? ( same as 00:55:609 (4,5) )
  4. 01:26:897 - maybe unnecessary green line.
  5. 01:27:048 - ^
[Lan's Hard]
  1. 00:02:882 (1,2) - Suggestion of rhythm and the NC : http://puu.sh/jop8
  2. 00:12:882 (5) - not jump here ><; i think DS1.5x is better
  3. 00:29:548 (1) - remove NC (I thought that only here was short)
  4. 00:37:730 (7) - spacing too far. DS1.5x is better
  5. 00:42:276 (4) - add NC and 00:43:488 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:43:261 - remove green line. I think that this does not have a meaning :?
  7. 00:43:412 - ^
  8. 00:44:473 - ^
  9. 00:45:912 (9) - add NC ( change slider speed ) and 00:46:821 (1) - remove NC and 00:47:124 (3) - add NC and 00:47:579 (1) - remove NC and 00:48:336 (5) - add NC. my suggestion of the NC :D
  10. 01:14:852 (4,1,2,3) - 01:15:609 (1,2,3) - If you want to unify the NC here and, I think you should not use the star formation
  11. 01:21:670 (1) - remove NC
  12. 01:27:124 (1) - I think that end does not match >:( so change spinner end 01:28:033 or same as Insane diff, this spinner hitsound use soft-hitsound
[Spinboxer]
  1. 00:18:033 (1) - use DS1.2x is better IMO. grid move to x132,y300
  2. 00:24:094 (7) - add NC ?
  3. 00:56:821 (4) - add NC
  4. 01:15:003 (6) - ^ ( same as 00:55:609 (1,2) ? )
[Insane]
  1. 00:34:397 (4,5,6,7) - Suggestion of the flow: http://puu.sh/jozC ( 7 is stack with 00:34:548 (5) )
  2. 01:25:761 (1) - stack with 01:25:155 (3) and remove NC and 01:25:912 (2) - add NC ?
New Beelzebub ED x3~~

Good~ Star☆~ :D

Good luck~ :oops:
Lan wings
spboxer3
Topic Starter
Dino99

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

前人之述备矣 撲....
  1. 2.5秒的lead-in感觉稍微有点长 1.5~2秒最好 改2秒:3


Insane

00:00:458 (1) - clap声音太大了 我覺得還好._. 有別人挑我就改..
00:40:761 (3) - 中间不要clap 這沒什麼差吧.. 之前的就ok了~
01:14:245 (1,2) - 01:14:851 (2,3) - 01:15:458 (2,3) - slider和note位置都颠倒 才有紧迫感
有點不懂.. 不過我覺得這樣就很好了><

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ 12BARRY21~ :)

Thank you for the request~ :D

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Letterbox during breaks - remove check ( only Boss Taiko Oni diff is different ) fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:34:397 (4,5,6,7) - Suggestion of the flow: http://puu.sh/jozC ( 7 is stack with 00:34:548 (5) )
    sorry no :<
  2. 01:25:761 (1) - stack with 01:25:155 (3) and remove NC and 01:25:912 (2) - add NC ? Hmm...okay~ fixed
New Beelzebub ED x3~~ :>

Good~ Star☆~ :D

Good luck~ :oops:
Thanks guys!!~
ertyukjh010

Shiki wrote:

[Easy]
00:16:215 (2) - 加whistle? Done
01:13:791 (3) - 我感觉中间那个听起来有点奇怪 用soft吧 Done

L_P wrote:

这首歌的easy老实说我觉得是guest diff里面做的最符合要求的一个。。。
而且挺赞的(默默看一下名字 =口=

00:54:397 (2,3) - 这两个是不是忘了finish Done

LKs wrote:

ERT's Easy
00:08:336 (1,2,3) - 往右一格 Done?
00:44:700 (3) - 往左一点 Done
01:08:942 (2) - 开头不该whistle 结尾来 Done
01:13:791 (3) - node点上的音效违和了 Done
01:20:003 (X) - 这里开始的绿线变音量意义何在?音效是直接採用Insane,所以不知道:P
easy做到这程度基本到极限了 =w=

kosiga wrote:

[ERT's Easy]
  1. 00:07:124 (2) - Rotate by -4° (Clockwise , Selection Centre ) because next DS is a bit far (1.18x) Done?
  2. 00:07:276,00:07:427,00:07:579,00:07:730 - maybe unnecessary green line. because the sliderslide is silence, there is not the meaning even if it gradually up. I dont'n know because It copy from Insane.
  3. 00:44:700 (3) - add NC and 00:45:912 (1) - remove NC X
  4. 00:55:609 (4) - add NC and 00:56:215 (1) - remove NC and 00:56:821 (3) - add NC is better IMO No, it's wrong
  5. 01:13:791 (3) - this slider repeat hitsound is too loud ;x; Done
  6. 01:17:427 (2) - why only here use DS1.5x ? This is better not to change so Easydiff :( WTF, It's my wrong.
  7. 01:18:639 (4,1,2) - Why do you not match only here with a vocal? sorry...I think that it is very strange rhythm ;x; Example of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/jooO But I like the Pattern.
  8. 01:20:003,01:20:155,01:20:306 - same as 00:07:276~ X
  9. 01:27:124 (1) - spinner is too short in Easy diff IMO. I think that remove this like Gu's Normal Diff I think it's Okay.
Download: Nakagawa Shouko - Tsuyogari (TV Size) (12BARRY21) [ERT's Easy].osu
L_P

No_Gu wrote:

L_P wrote:

搞大别人肚子了你。。。(窃笑 感觉这话有点人身攻击了吧
其实不必这么敏感。。我不是在说你,毕竟我跟12barry都挺熟了他不会在意的
不过指出来了我以后会多多注意我的言行举止,毕竟在华人mapper界混说话含蓄些更好
Lan wings
Beren
你好/

[ERT's Easy]
00:27:124 (X) - 加note
01:18:639 (4) - 不合拍
01:22:276 (2) - 移到01:22:276

[Gu's Normal]
这是hard o.o 节奏实在放太密了
01:04:094 (1) - 结束在01:05:306减少点难度 = =?

[Lan's Hard]
01:27:124 (1) - 结束在01:28:336
00:24:397 (4,5) - 像这样比较顺http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/259215
00:27:427 (1,2) - 违和 你后面同样的地方也不是这样放的
00:37:351 (6) - 删除
00:38:791 (3) - ^

[Spinboxer]
00:04:700 (5) - 加note
00:25:306 (1,2) - 违和
00:35:003 (1) - 加finish?
01:17:276 (4) - 从01:17:427开始加NC

[Insane]
00:07:882 (6) - 从00:07:730开始
01:02:730 (4) - 删除

GL
Thite
hi~ :)


ETR's Easy
00:11:973 (3) - these returns are bit hard for beginner? how about put other way?
00:33:488 (x) - add note here?
00:36:821 (3) - 1grid right looks better?

Gu's Normal
00:54:851 (2) - adjust the spacing?

Lan's Hard
00:01:064 (4) - add new combo?
00:06:821 (3) - 1grid right to adjust the spacing
00:08:033 (3) - add finish this slider's end?
00:09:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - put these notes looks more good?
00:24:245 (3,4,5) - how about put like this?
00:28:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - put these notes looks more good?

Spinboxer
looks good for me~

Insane
00:47:730 (3) - 1grid up to adjust the spacing?
00:55:533 (5,1) - stack these notes exactly

good luck~ :)
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