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ZUN - Hiroari Shoots a Strange Bird ~ Till When (Short Ver.)

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Urlangce

backstep wrote:

from Bakastep's modding queue. >3

General

Why combo color don't same all difficulty ?(If it is unrankable, I'll change it.)

Easy

00:24:775 (7) - I suggest you move tail slider to white line. (Easy diff shouldn't have any blue tick note)(This is a mistake...)

Normal

00:15:098 (4) - spacing.(done)
01:01:937 (7) - 2 grid down.(done)

Hard

*Why you use 1/8 note it's not suitable for your song ? D:
- I suggest you use 1/2 or 1/4 beat.(I am use 1/4 beat in this diff....)
- Other fine.

Lunatic

01:24:001 (14) - 1 grid left.(done.)
01:27:097 (14) - 1 grid right.(done.)

Good luck :D
Thank you very much~ :)
Topic Starter
Urlangce
@Naryuga
Thanks~~
Backstep

Urlangce wrote:

Hard

*Why you use 1/8 note it's not suitable for your song ? D:
- I suggest you use 1/2 or 1/4 beat.(I am use 1/4 beat in this diff....)
:arrow: I'm not sure, but please check again in 1/8 beat mode you will found some note paste with 1/8 rhythm o.o
Topic Starter
Urlangce

backstep wrote:

Urlangce wrote:

Hard

*Why you use 1/8 note it's not suitable for your song ? D:
- I suggest you use 1/2 or 1/4 beat.(I am use 1/4 beat in this diff....)
:arrow: I'm not sure, but please check again in 1/8 beat mode you will found some note paste with 1/8 rhythm o.o
I check it again, and I found somewhere are exactly what you say...Maybe it changed when I change the siler tick rate to 2.
Thank you very much~~~~~
Mystica
here comes my mod.

[General]
slider tick rate 2 無意義

[Easy]
00:01:550 (1) - 拉好看點
00:07:356 (3) - 略微網右上拉點(同理各種 無縫對於easy不好看
01:23:614 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:06:775 (8) - 對于normal不是很好的辦法
00:54:195 (1,3) - 兩個對稱點如果我沒看錯的話
01:08:130 - 加個note好點 break意義不大

[Hard]
不覺得distance拉到1.0~1.2再排版比較好么 現在感覺很擁擠
00:57:291 (1) - 這裡開始降低sv但是note的distance你到底準備是疊一點呢還是擦邊呢決定好一種放 兩個混合不好

[Lunatic]
連打我太弱不評論了

good map
Topic Starter
Urlangce

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[General]
slider tick rate 2 無意義(slider tick rate 2 和1 的区别就是slider上的那些小点多了一倍?这么看来意义的却不大。。)

[Easy]
00:01:550 (1) - 拉好看點(重新拉了一遍。。。没感觉有什么难看的?弯曲角度太大的缘故?已经重拉了)
00:07:356 (3) - 略微網右上拉點(同理各種 無縫對於easy不好看(重复做了几遍,样子都不大理想。。。干脆改成了现在这个样子。。。)
01:23:614 (3) - ^(这个要比上面那个好解决)

[Normal]
00:06:775 (8) - 對于normal不是很好的辦法(已经改成一个slider了)
00:54:195 (1,3) - 兩個對稱點如果我沒看錯的話(现在完全堆成了!)
01:08:130 - 加個note好點 break意義不大(这个还是觉得有要好一点,相当于一个Warning吧。)

[Hard]
不覺得distance拉到1.0~1.2再排版比較好么 現在感覺很擁擠(那就重新排列一下,加大ditance吧。可能是我之前排列的时候没有注意整体。所以造成了比较拥挤的感觉。。。)
00:57:291 (1) - 這裡開始降低sv但是note的distance你到底準備是疊一點呢還是擦邊呢決定好一種放 兩個混合不好(恩!)

[Lunatic]
連打我太弱不評論了(......)

good map(Thank you~~~)
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

  1. Missing Skin Files cursortrail.png
  2. Unused Image Files bg (1).jpg bg (2).jpg bg (3).jpg 为啥有三个一模一样的
[Easy]

00:12:388 (4) - 向下一格 这间距变了
01:03:098 (8) - 间距问题 往左点什么的
开头那段大长slider四连打没有问题 但看着很原始 可能有人看着就觉得你偷懒而不觉得你设计了 所以建议不要太直 做点弧形什么的

[Normal]

00:01:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - normal里出现这种间距貌似也行 但还不太建议?
01:03:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这里主要显得你在节奏上没有设计 我猜可能是没有太大概念 所以会显得不够成熟 首先全是1/2 虽然是normal但你也可以稍微迎合下歌曲 另外是noteslidernoteslider的组合 slider和note顺应不同歌曲感觉 所以你下之前得考虑清楚 而不是为了填满而下

[Hard]

00:01:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这种节奏太随意了 真心
00:52:453 (4) - 这里你做了一个二连clap 可以 但位置错了 这个clap应该放到前面的sldier结尾
00:53:227 (2) - ^
01:15:872 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 对于这两个二连clap我的意见反而是第一个改第二个不改

[Lunatic]

00:03:679 (8,9,10,11,12) - 位置太奇怪 角度不要这么大
00:05:227 (2) - 间距
00:37:937 (12,13,14,15) - 颇有09年图的风范 但现在貌似不太让你这么干
00:48:582 (2) - 间距
00:52:066 (7,8) - 还是这种音效问题 后面我就不说了
01:24:001 (14) - 这里设计的还行 但这14离得略近?

GL
Topic Starter
Urlangce

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

  1. Missing Skin Files cursortrail.png(上次某某说是透明的可以不用。然后我就删除了。。。这次加上吧~)
  2. Unused Image Files bg (1).jpg bg (2).jpg bg (3).jpg 为啥有三个一模一样的
(LOL)
[Easy]

00:12:388 (4) - 向下一格 这间距变了(已经检查了)
01:03:098 (8) - 间距问题 往左点什么的(已经修改)
开头那段大长slider四连打没有问题 但看着很原始 可能有人看着就觉得你偷懒而不觉得你设计了 所以建议不要太直 做点弧形什么的
(经你这么一说是有点难看。。我尽力改变吧。)
[Normal]

00:01:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - normal里出现这种间距貌似也行 但还不太建议?(Spacing是0.8.感觉正合适,所以这里没有更改)
01:03:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这里主要显得你在节奏上没有设计 我猜可能是没有太大概念 所以会显得不够成熟 首先全是1/2 虽然是normal但你也可以稍微迎合下歌曲 另外是noteslidernoteslider的组合 slider和note顺应不同歌曲感觉 所以你下之前得考虑清楚 而不是为了填满而下(考虑了下,改成了现在这个样子?)

[Hard]

00:01:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这种节奏太随意了 真心(暂且先改成这个样子。。)
00:52:453 (4) - 这里你做了一个二连clap 可以 但位置错了 这个clap应该放到前面的sldier结尾
00:53:227 (2) - ^(已经改了~~)
01:15:872 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 对于这两个二连clap我的意见反而是第一个改第二个不改(已经改了)

[Lunatic]

00:03:679 (8,9,10,11,12) - 位置太奇怪 角度不要这么大(已经改正)
00:05:227 (2) - 间距(已经改正)
00:37:937 (12,13,14,15) - 颇有09年图的风范 但现在貌似不太让你这么干(。。 -_-! 这么说我做回去了。。。已经改了。。不知道现在的又具备哪年的风范了。。。)
00:48:582 (2) - 间距(已经改正)
00:52:066 (7,8) - 还是这种音效问题 后面我就不说了
01:24:001 (14) - 这里设计的还行 但这14离得略近?(样子和东方妖妖梦里面 妖梦使用Spell Card 样子类似吧。。。可是如果要移动14 照顾spacing的话。样子就走形了。。)

GL
已经全部更改完成!!!
多谢~~~
:)
Melophobia
i didnt get Hard diff, try to full submit
Topic Starter
Urlangce

Melophobia wrote:

i didnt get Hard diff, try to full submit
I have aready finish full submission~~ :)
Melophobia
ok then

[Easy]
00:52:646 (3) - add finish at the beginning
01:13:162 (2,3) - sorry for nazi mod, but fix spacing please, it looks bad
01:32:517 (4,5) - ^

[Normal]
00:14:710 (3) - delete this note and add note at 00:13:937 (1) - instead?
it fits music a lot imo
00:16:260 (7) - ^ same
00:17:807 (3) - ^
00:19:356 (7) - ^
00:39:872 (3) - this note is overlapped by (1)'s score burst, it'll be confusing for beginner so you should avoid it in Normal (Easy as well)
01:41:033 (2) - use same shape as 01:39:872 (6) - ? it'll look better
01:43:743 (7) - add newcombo for your 2 downbeats pattern

[Hard]
00:06:775 (8,9) - 1/6 kick slider is better here
00:31:743 (6,7) - ^ same
01:18:001 (2,5) - different from your previous pattern and sounds weird. add clap at the end of (2) and remove it from (5)

[Lunatic]
00:02:130 (2,3,4) - this direction is kinda hard to hit. try to make them smoother
00:03:679 (8,9,10) - ^
00:06:775 - add 1/6 kick slider here to follow music better like you did on Hard diff
00:20:130 - stream is too loud to me, try to reduce volume during stream part by 10%
00:31:743 (5,6) - same as Hard
00:37:162 (10) - add newcombo please
00:48:001 (1,2) - spacing is too close
01:15:291 (4) - add clap? just suggestion
01:18:388 (4,5) - different from your previous pattern and sounds weird. add clap at the beginning of (4) and remove it from (5)
Topic Starter
Urlangce

Melophobia wrote:

ok then

[Easy]
00:52:646 (3) - add finish at the beginning(OK)
01:13:162 (2,3) - sorry for nazi mod, but fix spacing please, it looks bad
01:32:517 (4,5) - ^(I have fix all spacing in Easy and Normal now~~)

[Normal]
00:14:710 (3) - delete this note and add note at 00:13:937 (1) - instead?(Yes, it's better now~~)
it fits music a lot imo
00:16:260 (7) - ^ same
00:17:807 (3) - ^
00:19:356 (7) - ^
00:39:872 (3) - this note is overlapped by (1)'s score burst, it'll be confusing for beginner so you should avoid it in Normal (Easy as well)(OK, I'll fix them all~~)
01:41:033 (2) - use same shape as 01:39:872 (6) - ? it'll look better(You're right~)
01:43:743 (7) - add newcombo for your 2 downbeats pattern(OK)

[Hard]
00:06:775 (8,9) - 1/6 kick slider is better here(Woooooo~~It sounds better now!!!)
00:31:743 (6,7) - ^ same
01:18:001 (2,5) - different from your previous pattern and sounds weird. add clap at the end of (2) and remove it from (5)(

LKs wrote:

01:15:872 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 对于这两个二连clap我的意见反而是第一个改第二个不改
, This is why it's differentfrom previous pattern, LKs suggest me do this, and I think it better~~)

[Lunatic]
00:02:130 (2,3,4) - this direction is kinda hard to hit. try to make them smoother(OK,)
00:03:679 (8,9,10) - ^
00:06:775 - add 1/6 kick slider here to follow music better like you did on Hard diff(OK)
00:20:130 - stream is too loud to me, try to reduce volume during stream part by 10%(I think 10% is too quiet, so I change it to 35%.)
00:31:743 (5,6) - same as Hard(OK)
00:37:162 (10) - add newcombo please(OK)
00:48:001 (1,2) - spacing is too close(It's 1.21 and I don't think it's too close.)
01:15:291 (4) - add clap? just suggestion(en, It's sounds better~)
01:18:388 (4,5) - different from your previous pattern and sounds weird. add clap at the beginning of (4) and remove it from (5)(I didn't change it. The reason is like what I said in Hard~~)
Thanks for your modding~~~
:)
Melt
我是新人 所以都只是些建议
帮不上什么忙的话请谅解>.<

General
fine

Easy

听说这个最好还是改一下
.osu文件里 SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
00:12:388(4)删掉finish?
00:26:324(1)建议加根绿线把这个转盘消音
01:15:872(1,3)对齐
01:25:162(1)删掉后一个finish

Normal

00:06:775(4)感觉有点别扭
00:16:259(6)删掉clap
00:19:743(6)clap
00:31:743(6)首尾都可以clap

Hard

00:30:582(3)clap
00:37:162(8)试试这个呢http://puu.sh/yISg
00:44:711(9)删掉这个note
00:49:549(9)http://puu.sh/yITI
01:47:420(2)删掉whistle
01:48:969(2)^
01:50:517(2)^
01:52:066(2,3)^

Lunatic

太难了我可能帮不了什么忙
00:33:872(9)nc
00:46:259(9)^
00:55:743(8)^
00:57:679(2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)每组之间靠近一点或者每两个都叠在一起比较好
01:05:033(5)nc

大概就这样 star~
Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
I really don't like star2.png, i think you should use a real katana, not this, from the BG, think about it please
and this "sliderb" not really good actually....or may be remove that skin? you can add only circle and sliderboard
example:
and
SliderBorder : 0,0,0
(add it osu file after colors)

Easy
00:06:195 (2) - stack with 00:04:259 (3) - (and don't forget about spacing)
00:20:130 (1) - try this:
00:42:195 (1,2,3,4) - try to make "rhombus" there
00:52:646 (3,1) - don't overlap them
01:00:001 (4,5) - ^
00:57:291 - use soft sounds there with 65% volume
01:15:872 (1,3) - stack them better
01:31:356 (1) - finish
01:33:679 - remove whistle there
01:46:066 - ^

Normal
00:06:775 (4) - make it symmetrical
00:16:259 - remove clap
00:19:743 - eh, clap
00:49:937 (3,4,5) - move it like this:
00:57:291 - same as in easy, soft sounds
01:06:195 (6,1) - 1 grid right and 3 up
01:09:679 (1) - new combo, coz of bug
01:28:259 (1) - finish, not whistle
01:29:808 - ^

Hard
00:30:582 - clap
00:34:066 (9) - remove reverse and add slider on 00:34:453 - 00:34:840 aaand 00:35:033 - circle there, will be something like this:
00:39:291 - there must be circle, not start of the slider, fix it please
00:40:840 - ^
00:46:453 - try this:
00:51:679 (2) - same thing with the circle
00:52:453 (4) - stack it with the end of this 00:51:679 (2) - it would be better than overlap
00:53:227 - circle
00:56:130 (8) - don't overlap with circle
00:57:291 - soft sounds
00:58:453 (5,6,7) - oh, no no no, don't do that, it's confusing and can cause problems, and it's actually ugly overlap
01:03:872 (2,5) - there must be another rythm, this one:
01:09:679 - no whistles like in other diffs? oh, would be better if you will use whistles only in the kiai time (in other diffs too)
01:16:453 - circle..
01:18:001 - ..
01:20:904 (8) - add sliders like you use in the beginning
01:45:679 (8) - ^
01:52:259 - ^

Lunatic
00:32:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - sooo flattened D: in other diffs you have more air between objects and too many symmetry, looks little ugly
00:57:291 - soft sounds
01:03:485 - would be better this:
01:19:550 (5,6,7) - spacing
01:20:517 - there must be 1/8 sliders
01:22:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - oh god... 01:23:033 (7) - new combo there 01:23:808 (7) - and there
01:25:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - PFFFFFFF
01:28:065 (15,1) - unrankable, all objects must be visible and readable
01:32:711 (8) - nc
01:35:808 (9) - ^
01:39:098 (9) - ^
01:45:679 - 1/8 sliders there
01:52:066 - ^

Oh, good luck
Topic Starter
Urlangce

Melt wrote:

我是新人 所以都只是些建议
帮不上什么忙的话请谅解>.<

General
fine

Easy

听说这个最好还是改一下
.osu文件里 SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999(改成1了)
00:12:388(4)删掉finish?(已经删除。估计是误操作吧?)
00:26:324(1)建议加根绿线把这个转盘消音(已经改正)
01:15:872(1,3)对齐(对齐了)
01:25:162(1)删掉后一个finish(删掉了)

Normal

00:06:775(4)感觉有点别扭(是觉得弯曲的角度太大了吗?现在还没梗。对这个不过我会想想怎么改的)
00:16:259(6)删掉clap(还真是。。)
00:19:743(6)clap(还真是少一个)
00:31:743(6)首尾都可以clap(的却是这样呢)

Hard

00:30:582(3)clap(已经改正)
00:37:162(8)试试这个呢http://puu.sh/yISg(的确呢!!)
00:44:711(9)删掉这个note(我打着觉得挺合适的。而且此处有一重音。暂且保留吧)
00:49:549(9)http://puu.sh/yITI(收下了~~)
01:47:420(2)删掉whistle(和下边的3个一起改了~)
01:48:969(2)^
01:50:517(2)^
01:52:066(2,3)^

Lunatic

太难了我可能帮不了什么忙
00:33:872(9)nc(已经改正)
00:46:259(9)^
00:55:743(8)^
00:57:679(2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)每组之间靠近一点或者每两个都叠在一起比较好(已经靠近一点点了。觉得再靠进就挤在一起了。)
01:05:033(5)nc(已经改正了~)

大概就这样 star~
多谢啦~~几乎全部改正。
现在OSU抽风几幅图片看不到。稍后补上~~
昨天午觉睡多了晚上才醒 所以没能及时shoot star和kudosu~~现在已经补上了·
Topic Starter
Urlangce

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
I really don't like star2.png, i think you should use a real katana, not this, from the BG, think about it please
and this "sliderb" not really good actually....or may be remove that skin? you can add only circle and sliderboard
example:
and
SliderBorder : 0,0,0
(add it osu file after colors)
(I'll consider the star2.png and the sliderb,delete them or find something replace it. I've tried to use your circle, but it looked very strange. But you give me a nice idea~Thank you~)

Easy
00:06:195 (2) - stack with 00:04:259 (3) - (and don't forget about spacing)(That seems nice~)
00:20:130 (1) - try this:(ok)
00:42:195 (1,2,3,4) - try to make "rhombus" there(good idea~)
00:52:646 (3,1) - don't overlap them(ok)
01:00:001 (4,5) - ^
00:57:291 - use soft sounds there with 65% volume(fine~)
01:15:872 (1,3) - stack them better(fine~)
01:31:356 (1) - finish(fine)
01:33:679 - remove whistle there(fine~)
01:46:066 - ^

Normal
00:06:775 (4) - make it symmetrical(In fact, I'm looking for a better way to replace this slider. If I can't found a better solution, I'll follow what you say~~)
00:16:259 - remove clap(fine~)
00:19:743 - eh, clap(ok)
00:49:937 (3,4,5) - move it like this:(ok!!looks fine~)
00:57:291 - same as in easy, soft sounds(ok)
01:06:195 (6,1) - 1 grid right and 3 up(that's fine~)
01:09:679 (1) - new combo, coz of bug(ok)
01:28:259 (1) - finish, not whistle(ok)
01:29:808 - ^

Hard
00:30:582 - clap(ok)
00:34:066 (9) - remove reverse and add slider on 00:34:453 - 00:34:840 aaand 00:35:033 - circle there, will be something like this:(good idea~~)
00:39:291 - there must be circle, not start of the slider, fix it please(fine~)
00:40:840 - ^
00:46:453 - try this:(nice!)
00:51:679 (2) - same thing with the circle(fine)
00:52:453 (4) - stack it with the end of this 00:51:679 (2) - it would be better than overlap(It's a circle here now~~)
00:53:227 - circle
00:56:130 (8) - don't overlap with circle(ok~~)
00:57:291 - soft sounds
00:58:453 (5,6,7) - oh, no no no, don't do that, it's confusing and can cause problems, and it's actually ugly overlap (ok, I'll change it to 2 short sliders~)
01:03:872 (2,5) - there must be another rythm, this one:(ok, I'll consider it~~)
01:09:679 - no whistles like in other diffs? oh, would be better if you will use whistles only in the kiai time (in other diffs too)(I thought so~)
01:16:453 - circle..(I'll change the Hard diff a lot today.make sure it's not dull~~)
01:18:001 - ..
01:20:904 (8) - add sliders like you use in the beginning(ok!)
01:45:679 (8) - ^
01:52:259 - ^

Lunatic
00:32:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - sooo flattened D: in other diffs you have more air between objects and too many symmetry, looks little ugly(I'll make it more air between object and make it not too ugly~)
00:57:291 - soft sounds(I'll fix it~)
01:03:485 - would be better this:(I'll change it~)
01:19:550 (5,6,7) - spacing(ok~)
01:20:517 - there must be 1/8 sliders()
01:22:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - oh god... 01:23:033 (7) - new combo there 01:23:808 (7) - and there
01:25:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - PFFFFFFF (aahhaaa.It's a little long...)
01:28:065 (15,1) - unrankable, all objects must be visible and readable(ok, I'll fix it.)
01:32:711 (8) - nc(OK~~)
01:35:808 (9) - ^
01:39:098 (9) - ^
01:45:679 - 1/8 sliders there(ok)
01:52:066 - ^(Aren't you think if I use 1/8 here will be more difficult? I change it first, If it's so difficult, I 'll change it to slider~)

Oh, good luck
Thank you so much~~You help me a lot!! :)

I'll update it later, because there's a lot works to do in this map~~
Shohei Ohtani


Insane:
00:02:130 (2) - Move this a bit so it doesn't overlap with (1)
00:03:679 (2) - ^
00:34:259 (10) - Add NC? Or just somewhere in this combo
00:43:162 (7) - Stack with (3)
01:28:065 (3) - Move this so it doesn't overlap

Hard:
00:30:969 (4) - NC
00:56:904 (1) - Remove NC
01:18:388 (3) - Stack with (5) ;~~;
01:28:259 (1) - Put this on the y-axis
01:29:808 (1) - ^

Normal:
01:01:937 (3) - Not very moe!~. I just don't like the shape of it D:
01:46:840 (1) - Remove NC

Easy:
01:46:840 (1) - Remove NC

Kawaii~
Topic Starter
Urlangce

CDFA wrote:



Insane:
00:02:130 (2) - Move this a bit so it doesn't overlap with (1)
00:03:679 (2) - ^
00:34:259 (10) - Add NC? Or just somewhere in this combo
00:43:162 (7) - Stack with (3)
01:28:065 (3) - Move this so it doesn't overlap(I accept all~~)

Hard:
00:30:969 (4) - NC
00:56:904 (1) - Remove NC
01:18:388 (3) - Stack with (5) ;~~;
01:28:259 (1) - Put this on the y-axis
01:29:808 (1) - ^(I accept all~~)

Normal:
01:01:937 (3) - Not very moe!~. I just don't like the shape of it D:(I try to change its sharp~~but I don't have a good idea. so I change it to 2 short slider..)
01:46:840 (1) - Remove NC(fixed)

Easy:
01:46:840 (1) - Remove NC(fixed)

Kawaii~
That video is too amazing!
Thank for your mod and your star~~ :)
Sedento
This is pretty cool!!! How do I help you to get this approved?
Topic Starter
Urlangce

Sedento wrote:

This is pretty cool!!! How do I help you to get this approved?

Sorry, I just check my mail box. I have been AFK about 3 month because I'm busy. But I will back and rank these maps soon or later.


I'm so glad you like this map, it's my favorite, too. If you want to help me to rank this map, you can send me your advice or shoot me a star~~


Best Regard & Thanks
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